yeah get this checked out• 00:13:168 (1) - end this on the last blue tick? the sound stops there
• 00:28:597 (1,2,3,4,1) - Your intentions aren't clear here with your stream aesthetics, not sure if you were going for a zig zag a curve or both? would advise cleaning this up
• 00:34:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not a fan of how you use the repeated kickslider / back and forth thing here, you seem to ignore a lot of things in the music. The inaudacity of a note at 00:34:597 - , the strong kick at 00:35:025 - 00:35:368 - , and the special sound at 00:35:454 (7,8) - to name a few. the one you use at 00:41:283 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - feels like it makes more sense because the music follows more of a pattern
• 01:00:483 (2) - nc, to fit with the 1-22 aesthetic at 01:00:825 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and for the strong downbeat
• 01:12:140 (1,2,1,2) - Large gap in spacing at 01:12:311 (2,1) - feels out of place, given that the jumps before and after are of lesser distance and there isnt anything that really stands out about this note. would recommend moving this 01:12:483 (1,2) - closer to this 01:12:140 (1,2) -
• 01:26:540 (1,2) - Not very readable here, reads like a stream because of 01:25:340 (2,3,1) - . maybe use nc's or spacing to show the change in rhythm
• 01:53:293 (1,2,3,4) - 01:54:664 (1,2,1,2) - stay consistent with your nc patterns here? they're pretty close together and the inconsistency is noticable