EdamaMe411 wrote:

hi^^

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simple modding sorry
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Ura Oni

00:21:264 (142) - move to 00:21:150 - and this kkd. Please follow main sound at the beginning section ya fixed!


00:22:173 (153) - move to 00:22:286 - ,,,,same above reason No It's fine IMO, also nothing at 00:22:286 -

00:23:195 (160,161,162,163,164,165) - Don't use 1/8 at first,sooo difficult!! Instead of ,you can use 1/6 from 00:23:195 (160) - dddk is match more!

meh.. Consider the low 132 bpm... and it's Ura Oni, do you really think it would be too hard? =w=a
The music is definitely 1/8 sounds here, also I think it fits the music well now, sorry~

00:23:764 - you can put note because synthesizer is sounding clearly No, I don't wanna add a note before a big D/K

00:28:536 (198,199) - swap.....To follow sound pitch It's fine now~ I use dkkd all at 2/4 parts (1/3 parts are kkkd for a little different)

00:29:559 - 00:29:673 - you can add notes because I heard bass sound 00:29:559 (206,207,208) - kdD? Hmm no~

00:35:014 (243,244) - swap!!! please follow kick sound! Hmm I follow the high sound instead of the drum here, sorry~

00:36:718 (260) - move to 00:36:832 - considering your flow of map Hmm It sounds cool now

00:37:741 (267,268,269,270) - Instead of 00:37:741 (267) - start 1/6,,,,,Maybe BN are dislike 1/8 Yes, They don't like, but if this song here should be 1/8 and as a Ura Oni, I'll keep it. 1/6 replace 1/8 is pretty weird to me.

00:42:855 (309,310) - swap,,,to follow main sound pitch! No, I can hear the music is dkddkddkd here~

00:51:491 - move to 00:50:582 - and 00:51:264 (364) - move to 00:51:491 - considering your flow of map What's wrong with me flow now? ;w; I think it's fine now sorry!

00:55:695 - add d!^ No, It break my rhythm here lol

01:05:809 (465) - move to 01:05:923 - ,you need not more even numbers. you can make something look as beautiful as possible　if you finish Uneven number notes ehh I prefer my rhythm here...

01:24:559 (8) - d? considering main sound pitch! What? I follow the piano so it should be k..

01:32:968 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - hmmm,,,,,,, sorry I can't say anything,,,,Maybe your favorite part ,rigth? But I think change this part,,,

02:04:900 (275) - move to 02:04:786 - No I don't follow the drum here, I wanna make my own rhythm and it sounds cool to me~~ lol

Finish!!

GL!

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

IRC mod
discussion about Ura oni

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23:19 *[I]MMoRTal[S] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One [Ura Oni]]
23:20 Dino99: sure! But wait me 3 mins owo
23:20 Dino99: you can keep modding
23:20 Dino99: thx @@
23:23 Dino99: Back!
23:23 *[I]MMoRTal[S] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One [Ura Oni]]
23:23 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:34:559 - k
23:23 Dino99: fixed
23:23 Dino99: 00:34:559 (239) -
23:24 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:42:741 - k
23:24 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:47:173 - move this to 00:47:286 - 
23:25 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's weird to make ox xo in this line
23:25 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i mean white line 
23:26 Dino99: 00:42:741 (309) - no :/
23:27 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:50:809 - move -> 00:51:036 - cuz this k is connect with 00:50:695 - dkdkd pattern 
23:27 Dino99: 00:47:173 - fixed
23:27 [I]MMoRTal[S]: if you agree with ^
23:28 [I]MMoRTal[S]: remove this note 00:52:627 - 
23:28 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:54:445 - remove this too
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:14:786 - remove finish in slider
23:29 Dino99: 00:50:809 (362) - I think it's fine :O
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: wait
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: wrong copy note
23:30 Dino99: What lol
23:30 Dino99: <.>
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: nope
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: my mistake 
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: that note is correct
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: sry
23:30 Dino99: :D
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: but dkdkd k
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: D:
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it sound cool
23:31 Dino99: hmm
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: http://puu.sh/mOeDM/ee1c773888.jpg
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: >w<
23:32 Dino99: I prefer kkd ;w;
23:32 Dino99: sorry...
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;w; but
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kdkdk k
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;w;
23:32 Dino99: Maybe I'll remap this part lol I put notes by my own rhythm...
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: nvm it's your map
23:33 Dino99: I'll consider it :D
23:33 [I]MMoRTal[S]: lol
23:33 Dino99: Don't worry, remap a part is a piece of cake
23:33 Dino99: haha
23:34 Dino99: Just maybe, because I think I put notes a bit too randomly here
23:34 Dino99: Sounds not bad tho
23:35 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:36:377 - this 1/6 is incorrect with the beat
23:35 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's 1/4
23:36 Dino99: lol
23:36 [I]MMoRTal[S]: :^)
23:37 Dino99: I wanna use 1/6... any other say this too I'll fix it to 1/4 C:
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:32:968 - i know 1/8 is rankable 
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: but
23:38 Dino99: 01:32:968 (23) - Is the part fine to you?? Many people complained here.. sad ;w;
23:38 Dino99: lol
23:38 Dino99: hahaha
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think it's fine to make simple pattern with 1/2 and 1/4
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's fine to me
23:38 Dino99: yaes
23:39 Dino99: I think I'll change them to 1/2 and 1/4
23:39 Dino99: a:3
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 1/8 only make it hard
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: and fake the rating
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: >.>
23:39 Dino99: I wanna be creative here xD
23:39 Dino99: haha
23:39 Dino99: a bit
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: your map is creative enough
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: more will only make hater
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: red vote incoming
23:40 Dino99: =w=
23:40 Dino99: thanks
23:40 Dino99: damn
23:40 Dino99: no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
23:40 Dino99: I wanna green vote
23:40 Dino99: :<
23:40 [I]MMoRTal[S]: red vote yolo like loc- map
23:40 Dino99: ha..
23:40 Dino99: no
23:40 Dino99: His map is super weird
23:40 Dino99: ._.
23:40 [I]MMoRTal[S]: no
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: his map is ez for kddk player
23:41 Dino99: o.o
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: pp map
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:43:423 - mono k please
23:41 Dino99: ehh
23:41 Dino99: kkddk?
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kkkkk
23:41 Dino99: Sounds cool
23:42 Dino99: =w=
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: w0t
23:42 Dino99: ehh
23:42 Dino99: kkkkk
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: cuz it's ez for everyone
23:42 Dino99: ok
23:42 Dino99: fixed
23:42 Dino99: C:
23:42 Dino99: kkkkk
23:42 Dino99: So EZ
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:56:377 - kkddk is cool for this
23:44 Dino99: Hmm I like ddddk
23:44 Dino99: Only k at the highest sound
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: "is cool for this"
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i didn't force you
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kappa
23:45 Dino99: ya I know
23:45 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 02:06:605 - kkddkkd...
23:45 Dino99: owo
23:46 [I]MMoRTal[S]: the k in kddkddk not fit with anything imo
23:46 Dino99: OK
23:46 Dino99: fixed
23:46 Dino99: :D
23:46 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o wait
23:47 Dino99: what's up
23:48 [I]MMoRTal[S]: can you see https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4427655
23:49 [I]MMoRTal[S]: can you see my skin ?
23:49 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think it's fit too. that pattern ^
23:49 Dino99: wow
23:49 Dino99: cool
23:49 Dino99: kddkddkdkddkddkdk
23:50 Dino99: Seems so hard lol
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: yes
23:50 Dino99: I prefer kkddkkddkkddkkddk
23:50 Dino99: :)
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: rechecking
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: w8
23:51 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:24:786 - dddkkkd
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: dkkdkkd
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: the k is delay to cover that koww kowww
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: idk how to say that sound
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: lol
23:53 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:29:559 - you can add d here
23:53 Dino99: 00:24:786 (168) - I think it's fine
23:54 Dino99: 00:29:559 -
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;_;
23:54 Dino99: No :(
23:54 Dino99: I like the break
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: so
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's fine now 
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think
23:54 Dino99: ok :3

and new mp3 : http://puu.sh/mOgL9/6d30b833c5.mp3

Elfie wrote:

Hello, req via pm

Ura Oni

1. BPM 264 and SV 1.4 work much better imo (don't forget to delete/change sv changes) It's 132 bpm... All diffs should be the same.
   Then 1/8 parts become 1/4. However, it's up to you 1/8 is fine in this bpm.
2. Unused image file 21 bg.jpg ? What? I don't see that here.. maybe you didn't reDL first before modding it... lol
3. unsnapped notes
   
4. 00:09:332 - 00:14:786 - ;
   01:36:605 - 01:42:059 -
   
   All Notes is snapped here... Why you see these Unsapped Notes??? hmm o.O"
   
   these kiai parts should be deleted, they're too short and song doesn't suggest emphasising If others say that too I'll change.
5. 00:15:809 (104,108) - d, sounds similar to 00:15:582 - for example no it's better now to me.
6. 01:32:968 - 01:36:150 - dd dd (..) kk kk (..) sound a bit like autoconvert. Why didn't you just put d k d k d (..)?
   FIXED! Since almost everyone complant that!
7. 01:36:945 - k for consistency with 01:36:605 (56,65) - etc I wanna make more k as the music goes, so I only use 1 k at first.
8. 02:11:676 - Why this slider ends here on some 1/16 beat? What? It's on WHITE LINE here.
   I recommend putting spinner 02:11:036 - 02:12:400 - no~ It's good now

Oni

1. unsnapped notes
   

All Snapped here.

Muzukashii

1. 00:17:627 - move to 00:17:741 - to emphasise this sound Fixed
2. 00:24:900 - to 00:25:014 - ^ ^
3. 00:34:105 - to 00:33:991 - ^ no
4. 00:41:605 - to 00:41:718 - ^ fixed
5. 00:37:741 - add d following the melody Hmm no~

Futsuu

1. 01:16:605 - end slider here, it fits better to the song fixed

Good luck

Elfie wrote:

Sorry, this pic of unsnapped notes wasn't up to date cuz i had made screenshot before updates. So:

Ura Oni:



Oni:

• The thing is notes sit on different places than it's on tickbar

1. 00:19:223 (129) - 00:19:222 - you can see 1 ms difference (actually this one isn't on pic so there may be some other unsnapped notes not included here)
2. 00:19:299 (130) - 00:19:298 -
3. 00:36:193 (252) - 00:36:192 - etc..

Also background in editor looks like this:

pic

I think you have to choose it from library again. I hope it's not just me seeing that issue :O

Sorry for this incoherence! =w=

Rilene wrote:

Ok, I got nothing to mod.
Nice map you got there.

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, Inner Oni as requested.
http://puu.sh/mRCiE/6c852fac0c.zip

bananannian wrote:

Question: why have 80% as max volume, and not the full 100%? Just curious. Hmm It may be a bit too loud lol
I changed to 90%~, 80% seems a bit too low after testing!

Ura Oni

I feel like SV changes are a bit overused here, but hey it's fun to look at. I hope they make it through qualified

00:08:465 - I think the SV here should be different from that at 00:09:374. I tried out both high (x1.35) --> low (x1.2) and low (x1.2) --> high (x1.35) and I liked both better than it is now. OK changed!
00:16:647 - overlap, looks pretty ugly too. Maybe have the line at 00:16:987 instead? Dunno, personally speaking the SV change from x1.5 to x1.0 is a bit too much for my taste. Nice idea!
00:30:510 and 00:30:851 - add SV for these two notes for speed up effect? x1.2 and x1.3 maybe Cool!
00:45:737 - overlap again :V fixed!
01:43:919 - overlap again :VVV fixed!
02:08:692 - slowdown is not necessary in my opinion (I think speed up is better actually), except for the last note at 02:12:556, for which x1.0 is fine
Hmm I'll consider here for a while lol

Notes are fine. Most of the stuff below are at the beginning.

00:05:662 - no note here? How about adding a k and 00:05:737 (24) change to d, for consistency with 00:02:101 (1)? Nice catch!
00:16:306 (108) - d to match drums I think k is fine too
00:22:215 (153) - I think deleting this note works well, rhythm-wise, would be some variation from before; it also isn't well represented in the music, the wubs is actually somewhere around 00:22:272 OK!
00:28:237 (196) - and how about delete this one? I like the rhythm, just an idea. hmm no~ follow the small drum sound
00:35:056 (242,243,244) - not dkd? sounds cool~
00:42:101 - I think dkkdkkdk fits the melodic line better than dkddkddk, although if it was me mapping I would ignore the snare sound at 00:42:556 completely and use dkkkdkkk lol ehhh I prefer now lol sorry!
01:14:828 (510) - is this meant to have finish? looks kinda weird and not very supported by the music hmm I think it's fine :3
01:30:283 - how about adding a note here so that the density doubles every time from 2/1 to 1/1 to 1/2 to 1/4? Awesome!
02:00:283 (228) - add finish, music supports it and bpm allows it imo Hmm no~ I don't wanna use big note here owo
02:06:647 - I think this stream is the only thing preventing top players from DT-ing this LOL haha, yes xD
02:11:192 - spinner works better imo. Doesn't really matter. Both are fine to me!

Oni

00:09:374 - personal preference: I like to have d's at 00:09:601, 00:10:056, 00:11:419 and 00:11:874, to link up the notes for smoother play
No I prefer now~ It plays actually cool IMO
00:15:624 (66) - how about d? nice~
00:20:056 (88) - k to match 00:19:714 (87) cool!
00:27:329 (127) - k to match 00:26:988 (126) fixed
00:38:351 (186) - k for no reason, just sounds a better imo Yes it's k now lol
00:42:101 - this is the same pattern as Ura Oni, some variation would be nice changed to dkkkdkkkd
02:00:283 (163) - like Ura, can be K No~
02:05:169 - I feel like a d here for a quadruplet could be a thing, make the rhythm a bit more interesting hmm I like the short break here @@ But your idea is definitely not bad~
02:08:237 (209) - really heavy sound in the music, K should really be there My mistake lol
02:09:374 (211) - ^ same thing but D Hmm no~ I wanna only emphasize the last 3 sounds here~

Muzukashii

00:54:828 - I think this is a somewhat more matching rhythm to the music: Not bad but I prefer now owo

01:29:374 (4) - D? It's D for the higher difficulties too and a big emphasis here would serve to mark the beginning of a new section Sure!
01:40:510 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - eh I'd prefer to reverse colour for all of these fixed lol

Nice muzu! Quite a bit of tricky offbeat rhythms but bpm is low so players should be able to handle it. Thanks!

Futsuu

00:08:351 - tbh just start the spinner here for easier reading ok~
02:01:419 and 02:01:874 - how about add d to make a dddk? it's kiai, should be fine The rhythn is fine now!

Kantan

Should I even bother lol owo

There you go! Good luck and have fun with ranking! :3

To tasuke: I changed some parts' Volume, maybe you can have a check and conisider about my idea~

bananannian wrote:

SPOILER

Question: why have 80% as max volume, and not the full 100%? Just curious.

[tasuke's Inner Oni]Man I can't get used to whistle instead of clap for k ._.
00:13:919 - how about dkddk or dkdkk instead of dkkkd? dkkkd sounds better imo
00:42:101 - I think d here plays a bit better (and would also be a nice symmetrical structure lol) keep for now
00:52:669 - no note here? Either d or k would play well, and it's kiai so a long stream isn't unnatural already comparatively long. patterns that longer than this seem bit overdone imo.
01:03:010 - I prefer this: hmm, thanks for suggestion :3

to vary it a bit from 00:48:465
01:05:965 - how about kkdkddk instead of kkddkdk? Unless you want to match the high-pitched bell like thing at 01:06:419, but then I think kkddkkd works better, and d would be onbeat too no change, I wanna focus to consistency with 00:51:427 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42) -
01:43:919 (1) - no finish? yea.
01:57:442 (40,41,42) - personally I like k dk MUCH more than d kd, since it matches the melody's pitch. I understand if pitch mapping's not your style though it's my mapping style, I don't want to follow the pitch directly too much, and I prefer symmetry pattern.[/box][/color]

Thanks. :3

http://puu.sh/mVq3X/0c13628e43.zip

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from request~

Your preview point should be snapped. Snapped!

Add "X" and "10" to the tags, since it is the chapter number that this song appears in Cytus. Done! Also added "21" lol


Kantan

00:08:473 (5) - Change to a spinner or slider, as done in the Futsuu/Muzukashii. At least put a finisher on it since you've put a slider with a finisher in the Muzukashii. I'd recommend changing it to a slider tho. Changed to Slider!

00:30:468 (32,33,34) - Change to D D K. This is inconsistent with the Futsuu and other difficulties, and it also sounds better imo by matching the pitch of the melody and contrasting with the previous hit. Sure!

00:35:291 (40,41) - Ctrl + G. Although this is a Kantan, it wouldn't be a bad idea to match to the kick in the instrumentals and create a variety of 1/1 rhythms rather than have three d d k in a row. Also, unlike 00:33:927 (38), it isn't matched to a very strong ok~

00:42:109 (51,52,53) - Ctrl + G. For similar reasons as above. It could have some variety with the previous 1/1 rhythm, but more importantly, you can grasp a strong contrast between 00:42:564 (52,53), since there is almost no strong sound at 00:43:018 (53), which should be contrasted with the previous hit imo. Having 00:42:109 (51) as k is to create a fresh 1/1 rhythm that hasn't been used before, but matches the pitch of the instrumental melody (this part is more optional tho). Changed to k k d here lol

01:11:200 (92,93,94,95) - I'd personally Ctrl + G this, since the pitch is higher on the first two than the last two. Doesn't really matter tho. Hmm I think they sound almost the same~ So I decided to keep it now! sorry o3o

01:14:836 (1) - Nothing wrong with this, but I'd like to know your reasoning behind ending the spinner at 01:18:473. Cuz idk where dafuq I'd end this spinner :/ well changed the end to 01:18:245 - Follow the sound~ :3

01:25:518 (6) - It's possible to change this to a k. I think the difficulty will still be fine. I wanna keep d here, becasue it actually sounds lower here? (although the high sound lol)

01:50:291 (39) - I'd personally change this to d; it doesn't sound as great because of the ks matched to the kick surrounding it. Nice idea~~~

02:00:291 (55) - Perhaps you should extend this slider to 02:01:427 to catch all of the extended instrumentals. cool~


Futsuu

There is nothing really wrong with this whole difficulty, but I felt you could've done more to match the melody than just the beat in some areas. Especially from 00:31:200 to the first kiai (as an example), there are very little places where the hits are matched to anything other than the beats of the song. Of course, you can do whatever you want to and keep this, but I don't think it'd hurt to stray away from always matching a k to the beats and instead, matching to some more melodic instrumentals. An example that sounded nice and didn't match the beat were places like second kiai (sounds great btw), if you want an idea of a good balance and usage of the two types of styles. REMEMBER, THIS IS NOT A MANDATORY SUGGESTION.

I understand what you mean~ but I think in Kantan & Futsuu Diffs, I prefer follow the basic rhythm instead of vocal or some obvious sounds~ Will consider all your suggestions!! But I don't really wanna follow the sounds sorry!! o__o"

00:02:109 (1) - Change to d. It sounds fine, but you've paired the next 1.75/1 rhythms without any colour variation, so you should keep that consistent here too. ya, I think so too~ fixed

00:08:473 (1) - Change to a slider with a finisher for consistency with the Muzukashii, or vice versa. Done!

00:45:745 - Almost the whole kiai has a difficulty gap that is too small between the Muzukashii, while it's too large between the Kantan. Please make changes accordingly; make the Futsuu note density a bit easier, or make the Muzukashii and Oni harder to curve better with the Futsuu and Ura Oni. However, please do note you must change it in some way. You are right, I try to reduce some notes here... Hope it would be fine now~ lol

01:11:200 (170,171,172,173) - I'd personally make this match to the Kantan in colours. A possible solution is slightly reducing the 1/2 amount in the Futsuu, then adding a bit more hits such as 1/4 rhythms in the Muzukashii/Oni. Applied!

01:23:927 (180,181,182) - I think I'd switch the colours of these hits. First of all, the pitch is going up at 01:25:064 (181,182). Second, I think 01:23:927 (180) can be changed as well to match the twinkling instrumentals in the background. Sounds Nice!

01:54:155 (248,249) - Ctrl + G would match the pitch of the melody better imo. Yes :3

02:01:655 (269,270) - ^ To match the instrumental kick with the k sound, since you aren't specifically matching to the melody here I think. Hmm only k at 02:01:655 (266) -

02:02:564 (271,272) - ^ Only k at 02:02:564 (268) - It sounds cool IMO, all k is a bit weird to me :3

02:07:336 (285) - Perhaps you could change this to d for finisher emphasis, but this isn't necessary. This is a nice idea~ Although it's a high sound here.. fixed!

02:09:382 (291) - ^ For consistency with the higher difficulties. Here I follow the sound, doesn't like Kantan, I think if I add a finish on it looks a bit strange... so I may decide to keep it~ (Only emphasize the last 3 sounds, hope it's ok...) :3


Muzukashii

00:14:155 (18) - Change to d for consistency with the Futsuu, or vice versa. Same at 00:14:609 (20), and the previous hits on the red tick too, probably. Changed some here~~

00:34:609 (92) - Change to k for the pitch contrast at the next hit. Nice!

00:38:245 (106,107) - I personally think that switching the colours would sound awesome. Then applied :3

01:20:973 (9,10) - You can change this to k k to contrast the pitch change at 01:22:109 (11). Sounds good!

01:48:245 - Add a hit here for a better difficulty curve with the Futsuu. Added a k here~

01:50:518 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - Add a hit somewhere in here, idk where, but somewhere for a better difficulty curve
Hmm I think it fits the music pretty well now, so I don't wanna add another extra hit here IMO~ sorry... lol

01:58:473 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114) - Uhhh... there's nothing wrong with this, but I kinda thought it could be made into a better rhythm that's much simpler and flows better imo -_-' https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4465099 OK changed by my own way~ lol


Oni

00:18:473 (76) - Nothing wrong with this, but as an Oni, I think you should try to make a varying 1/4 rhythm whenever possible. Change to d to match the low drum sound? You may also want to change 00:18:927 (78) to k to match the kick. Same at 00:25:746 (115). Ya I know, but I wanna make all as k in first part, second part (after 00:31:200 (140) - ) I change some to d, I think it's a good idea, As the music goes, I make some difference~ :3

00:20:973 (88) - Change to k? I feel like the instrumental sound could be matched here. NIce!

00:21:655 (92) - Change to d? I'm pretty sure you're matching to the instrumental melody here. It definitely is high pitched, but I think it could be changed for 1/4 variety but more importantly a contrast with the previous two hits that match a different sound, kinda like how you did it at 00:36:201 (167). As I said.. I wanna keep the first part all "kkk" lol... Hope it could be a good idea, becasue if I make two parts all "kkd"... I think it won't be a good idea~~ orz

00:27:223 - Add a hit here for a better match to the instrumental melody rhythm and flow. You may also want to change the next hit if you do this. Added!

00:35:519 (162,163,164) - You can create a variety in the colours here. It doesn't seem to me this matches anything specific and it kind of sounds out of place. Changing the first hit to k could work. Sounds great~

00:40:974 (195,196,197,198,199) - I didn't like this triplet at the start here very much, mostly because the pair after is matched to the loud melody. To solve this, I think you should make a rhythm similar to this for a better focus on the melody: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4497590 It may be a bit too crowded/hard here... I think it sounds fine to me... ignore 00:41:314 - sound isn't a bad idea IMO~ o.o"

00:45:745 - I found it kinda weird how the SV slows down here. Change? But if I slow down at 00:45:745 (223) - ... looks more weird? xD
So I think it's actually not really bad now... after all, SV change always looks not that good right?.... haha >.>a

00:47:336 - The kiai is slightly easy, so how about adding a hit here? Same at 01:01:882. ehh I think it sounds better now, emphasize the low heavy sound well~ owo... also I think it won't be easy becasue Muzu is pretty easy here too~ The Kiai sounds empty, blame on the music xD

00:49:609 - ^ Alternatively, you could add a hit at 00:50:064, or even both. Same at 01:04:155 / 01:04:609. No~ sorry

00:51:200 (245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - This portion is too similar to the Ura Oni. Make it slightly easier? Well, deleted 00:52:450 -

00:57:564 (1) - Doesn't really matter, but I prefer not to have these spinners here. I like these Spinners owo

01:10:405 (50) - I'd delete this hit for a slightly better curve with the Ura Oni. Deleted this one! 01:10:859 -

01:14:836 (9) - The slider length is inconsistent with the Futsuu and Muzukashii. Changed the end to 01:17:336 - , sounds nice now!

01:20:064 (18,19) - Ctrl + G? This'll match the pitch of the melody better imo, and the low background instrumentals. Sure~

01:23:700 (28) - Delete and fill with hits? You didn't have a slider here in any of the other difficulties? Hmm I wanna make a bit different with other Diffs here :3 and it fits the music~ so I think it is fine!

01:25:518 (1) - Keep this consistent with at least the Muzukashii. Why not~

01:58:018 (143) - Change to k to match the kick sound? Doneeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

02:03:245 (171) - ^ For the high melody pitch? OK~


Ura Oni

The rhythm overmap is real lel Overmapped? lol

00:03:927 (12) - Change to d? This sounds similar to the low sound at 00:02:109 (1). No~ It sounds higher to me, also I wanna make some difference here, so I won't change it~ sorry <.>

00:23:927 (164) - You didn't have a finisher here in the Oni, and instead had a hit at 00:23:814 after removing the finisher. Perhaps change to match? I'd recommend removing the hit and adding a finisher in the Oni rather than adding hits here. Same at 00:38:473 (270). I think it plays pretty well, and I only wanna add finish on it as a Ura Oni, becasue the sound doesn't really need a finish actually. But as a Ura Oni, some unobvious sound could be a finish~ Hmm do you understand what I mean?? lol ...Anyway, I think it fits the music here~ also make different with 00:36:655 (256) -

00:21:427 (144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - I personally think the rhythm at 00:35:973 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) sounded better, js. I wanna make a bit different with the second part~ hope it is a good idea to you! As you can see, the second part is harder!

00:28:700 (197) - Change to k, since the whirring sound is present here imo. Same at 00:43:245 (311). ok fixed!

00:30:518 (206,207) - Add finishers on these hits like you did in the other difficulties? Same at 00:45:064 (324,325). Hmm as a Ura Oni, I only wanna emphasize the last/highest sound here, so I only add finish on it... I think it's not a bad idea? >.<

00:49:041 (346) - You can change this to d since the pitch is lower than the surrounding hits here. Ctrl + G 01:03:586 (446,447) for the same reason maybe. Sure~~~

00:54:950 (387) - Move this hit to 00:55:064. I don't think it sounds too good if you put a hit by itself right on the blue tick after the big white tick. Agreed~

01:14:836 (508) - This slider is inconsistent with the finisher and length compared to the other difficulties. Yes becasue it's Ura Oni \owo/
Well, I think it's fine. each Diff may have their own slider length but all sounds fine? I'll keep it~ sorry!

01:29:836 - You had a hit here in the Oni, so you should add it here too. No, I get a god idea here! 2/1 -> 1/1 -> 1/2 -> 1/4 beats~ hope you like it... o///o" ...haha gradually add more hits as the music goes~

01:30:745 - ^ Same as ^

01:43:018 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - Sorry to ruin your fun, but I strongly recommend making this easier. All I see is an effort to make the SR go up imo :/ This stream is already wayy too difficult compared to the Oni, and there's no need to make this forcibly difficult. I'd just do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4497904
Hopefully you'll take this into consideration. Yes, you are right lol... it's really a bit overmapped here~ I try to reduced few notes, hope it sounds better now! The 1/8 actually fits the terrible sounds well IMO.. Also the flow is nice, hope you can accept it.. orz If next BN complant this too I'll change~~

01:44:609 (114,115,116,117) - This 1/4 rhythm is a bit plain. Perhaps change the colours a bit? OK changed to kkdd!

01:48:927 - I think there should be a hit here for the melody. Hmm I wanna follow the basic rhythm here, I know my rhythm is a bit subjective, but at least it sounds good to me! :3

01:56:882 (197) - Change to k? Just a personal opinion. No~ it sounds lower. d fits the music better to me.

Sorry the mod for the Ura isn't that good. Nooooo~ all diffs get modded nicely! ^w^

Well, that's it Good luck on rank~

newyams99 wrote:

SPOILER

tasuke's Inner Oni

00:16:541 (28) - k に変更？次のサークルの音がかなり強いので、ここをkに変えるとそれと良く協調できると思います。 ドラムの音はかなり下がっているので、無理に次のノートと差別化する必要は無いかな～と思います。

00:27:677 - ここに d を追加できます。一応 Inner Oni 譜面なのでできるだけ難しくするべきだと思います。それと Ura Oni 譜面との SR の差がものすごくでっかいので、その差も縮めたら良いかも(別に構わんが）。SRについては問題ないです、ここにdを置くと5-pletがddkkd２回連続になってしまって個人的に好きじゃないので、ここはキープします。

00:28:359 - ^

00:37:223 - ここに k を追加？00:22:677 (37) - と似たようなパターンが作れます。いいね、変更！

00:47:677 (12) - このサークルでのインストの音がそんなに強くないと思います。d に変更する方が良いと思います。01:02:223 (12) - も同じく。 ここのddkkは後にあるkkddとの相性を良くするためです。特徴的なパターンを組み込むことで他のパートと差別化を図っているので、ここはキープしたいと思います。

00:54:382 (8,9) - Ctrl + G？00:54:382 (8) を k に変えたら、メロディーの音取ができるし、kick 音の音取もできると思います。01:08:927 (8,9) - も同じく。

01:05:177 - ここにサークルを追加できます。no changeで;

01:29:382 (1) - Finisher を追加？シンバルに似たようなユニークな音がしてるので。確かにそういう音は鳴っているけど、大音符はこのパートの曲調に対して少し重すぎるかな、という印象を受けたので普通のノートで。

01:58:245 (44,45,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - これをもっとプレイしやすいように変えたらどうかな？僕からすると、kの配置がめちゃくちゃです。ここでは、01:58:473 (1,2,3,4,5) のメロディーの繰り返しに聞こえるので、01:58:473 (1,2,3,4,5) のパターンを決めて、それを繰り返すとプレイしやすい、綺麗なリズムが出来上がると思います。 う～ん、個人的に全く同じ配置を繰り返すのは単調で好きではないのと、一応(ddkd+dkkd)x2でパターンを組んでるし、Innerなので多少難しくても大丈夫だと思います。

02:05:859 - ここにサークルを追加できます。次に1/6の難所を控えているので、なるべく軽めに抑えておきたいです。

ナイス サンクス！

Modありがとう！
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I will post my feedback here at next weekend!

Eiuh wrote:

i get nothing but 100's in the chorus tf https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4565573
think this needs an offset check

1. OD6.6 is barely fine. but this diff has some complicated rhythms, so some players might want lower OD. It's your decision whether or not to keep.
   
2. Some HS seems overdone or unnecessary gimmick imo.
   eg.) 00:57:564 (401) - Overlap. Isn't this hard to read?
   
   
3. 01:43:473 (110,111,112,113,114) - I think overmapped, too. K works good enough, huh?
4. 01:56:427 (196,197,198,199,200) - I'm not sure why dkddk. it's bit overdone and it might break natural flow. should be simple imo, for example ddkkk
5. 02:06:655 (271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - lol. too hard for hitting relatively than other parts. should be easier? I'd suggest using 1/6, putting 1/6 on 1/8 sounds is allowed in taiko mode.

tasuke912 wrote:

Just my thoughts

[ Inner Oni]

1. OD6.6 is barely fine. but this diff has some complicated rhythms, so some players might want lower OD. It's your decision whether or not to keep.
   Let me consider for a while~~ >.>"
   
2. Some HS seems overdone or unnecessary gimmick imo. What is HS? lol
   eg.) 00:57:564 (401) - Overlap. Isn't this hard to read? OK removed the SV change!
   
   
3. 01:43:473 (110,111,112,113,114) - I think overmapped, too. K works good enough, huh? Right!
4. 01:56:427 (196,197,198,199,200) - I'm not sure why dkddk. it's bit overdone and it might break natural flow. should be simple imo, for example ddkkk
   Changed to ddddk :3
5. 02:06:655 (271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - lol. too hard for hitting relatively than other parts. should be easier? I'd suggest using 1/6, putting 1/6 on 1/8 sounds is allowed in taiko mode. About this 1/8, I really wanna keep it, it is not really hard to click~ even I can do it haha! xD ....Bpm 132 x 2 = 264, I think it would be fine and fun! at least it's kkddkkddkkddkkddk haha (easy stream) \owo/

overall okay. has some overmapped patterns, but ptobably it's not unrankable. I know precedent overmap ranked map lol. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/198600

Dino99 wrote:

ehhh maybe because of "OD 6.6"?