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Qrabit - Twenty One [Taiko]

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Dino99
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2023年3月17日 at 上午 03:56:39

Artist: Qrabit
Title: Twenty One
Source: Cytus
Tags: 12BARRY21 tasuke912 Chapter X 10 21 The New World Rayark electronic video game rhythm music vgm ost original soundtrack instrumental
BPM: 132
Filesize: 4109kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.29 stars, 316 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.62 stars, 181 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.16 stars, 440 notes)
  4. Oni (3.95 stars, 575 notes)
  5. tasuke's Inner Oni (4.25 stars, 687 notes)
  6. Ura Oni (5.24 stars, 815 notes)
Download: Qrabit - Twenty One
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2015 map revived. hardest 4.73* map lmao.
Do not kill my creativity, i'm not here to map something GENERIC.

Kantan 100% - me
Futsuu 100% - me
Muzukashii 100% - me
Oni 100% - me
tasuke's Inner Oni 100% - tasuke912
Ura Oni 100% - me

BG
Quizmaegi
IRC Mod
SPOILER
15:37 Dino99: Hello~ o/
15:38 Quizmaegi: Hello~ 'w'
15:39 Dino99: Hmm... Could you mod my Taiko Map?? Only 1 diff is fine! ;w;
15:40 Quizmaegi: eh... Can you wait until I finish this map
15:40 Quizmaegi: ?
15:40 Dino99: Sure!
15:40 Quizmaegi: i will mod that map 'w'!!
15:40 Dino99: owo
15:41 Quizmaegi: done 'w'!
15:41 Dino99: :D
15:41 Dino99: Thank you!!
15:41 *Dino99 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One]
15:42 Dino99: 'w'
15:42 Quizmaegi: 'w'
15:43 Quizmaegi: 00:25:014 - kat...? (Inner Oni diff)
15:44 Dino99: Hmm no I wanna keep dk dk :o
15:47 Quizmaegi: 02:10:923 - d...?
15:50 Dino99: K to follow the high sound~ :3
15:50 Quizmaegi: 01:03:309 ~ 01:03:877 - dkkddd...? (Oni Diff)
15:52 Dino99: I know you wanna follow the high sound~ But here I follow the drum more?? :O
15:52 Dino99: so just ignore the high sound <.>
15:53 Quizmaegi: 'w' okay
15:53 Dino99: 00:17:514 (116) - to 00:17:968 - Maybe make it harder add kddkddk here?? (Inner Oni)
15:54 Dino99: I don't know is it good? follow the sound o.O
15:54 Dino99: kddkddk (1/6)
15:57 Quizmaegi: kddkddk is better. i think.
15:57 Dino99: :D
15:57 Dino99: ok I change it
15:57 Dino99: and more pp? xD
15:58 Quizmaegi: 00:21:908 ~ 00:21:983 - change to don..?
15:58 Quizmaegi: or 00:21:983 only
15:59 Quizmaegi: 00:23:764 - d?
16:00 Dino99: Hmm no follow the weird high sound
16:00 Dino99: 00:23:764 - I don't wanna have a d before a K :)
16:00 Dino99: Big K
16:00 Quizmaegi: oh
16:02 Quizmaegi: del 00:32:400 or 00:32:514 ~ 00:32:968 - kddkddk
16:02 Quizmaegi: del 00:32:400 / 00:32:514 ~ 00:32:968 - kddkddk
16:05 Dino99: :O
16:06 Dino99: I changed
16:07 Quizmaegi: 00:48:877 ~ 00:49:332 - kkddk ?
16:07 Quizmaegi: or kk (1/4) dddk (1/6)
16:08 Dino99: ok nice
16:08 Dino99: added
16:10 Quizmaegi: 02:06:605 ~ 02:07:514 - this pattern is... too hard (264 BPM stream)
16:11 Dino99: Yes..
16:11 Dino99: But the song is 1/8 here :/
16:11 Quizmaegi: :/
16:11 Dino99: I wanna keep it as a challenge
16:12 Dino99: for Pro player like you
16:12 Dino99: :O
16:14 Quizmaegi: and I can't catch a pattern needs change & fix... :(
16:14 Dino99: w.w
16:14 Dino99: I'll ask more people!
16:15 Dino99: You can post the IRC Mod in my forum~ owo/
16:16 Dino99: And I give you a kd~
16:22 Dino99: Hmm do you know what I mean? @@ Type"/savelog" then find it in "Chat" and post it in my forum :3
16:22 Quizmaegi: thanks 'w'!
Topic Starter
Dino99

Quizmaegi wrote:

IRC Mod
SPOILER
15:37 Dino99: Hello~ o/
15:38 Quizmaegi: Hello~ 'w'
15:39 Dino99: Hmm... Could you mod my Taiko Map?? Only 1 diff is fine! ;w;
15:40 Quizmaegi: eh... Can you wait until I finish this map
15:40 Quizmaegi: ?
15:40 Dino99: Sure!
15:40 Quizmaegi: i will mod that map 'w'!!
15:40 Dino99: owo
15:41 Quizmaegi: done 'w'!
15:41 Dino99: :D
15:41 Dino99: Thank you!!
15:41 *Dino99 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One]
15:42 Dino99: 'w'
15:42 Quizmaegi: 'w'
15:43 Quizmaegi: 00:25:014 - kat...? (Inner Oni diff)
15:44 Dino99: Hmm no I wanna keep dk dk :o
15:47 Quizmaegi: 02:10:923 - d...?
15:50 Dino99: K to follow the high sound~ :3
15:50 Quizmaegi: 01:03:309 ~ 01:03:877 - dkkddd...? (Oni Diff)
15:52 Dino99: I know you wanna follow the high sound~ But here I follow the drum more?? :O
15:52 Dino99: so just ignore the high sound <.>
15:53 Quizmaegi: 'w' okay
15:53 Dino99: 00:17:514 (116) - to 00:17:968 - Maybe make it harder add kddkddk here?? (Inner Oni)
15:54 Dino99: I don't know is it good? follow the sound o.O
15:54 Dino99: kddkddk (1/6)
15:57 Quizmaegi: kddkddk is better. i think.
15:57 Dino99: :D
15:57 Dino99: ok I change it
15:57 Dino99: and more pp? xD
15:58 Quizmaegi: 00:21:908 ~ 00:21:983 - change to don..?
15:58 Quizmaegi: or 00:21:983 only
15:59 Quizmaegi: 00:23:764 - d?
16:00 Dino99: Hmm no follow the weird high sound
16:00 Dino99: 00:23:764 - I don't wanna have a d before a K :)
16:00 Dino99: Big K
16:00 Quizmaegi: oh
16:02 Quizmaegi: del 00:32:400 or 00:32:514 ~ 00:32:968 - kddkddk
16:02 Quizmaegi: del 00:32:400 / 00:32:514 ~ 00:32:968 - kddkddk
16:05 Dino99: :O
16:06 Dino99: I changed
16:07 Quizmaegi: 00:48:877 ~ 00:49:332 - kkddk ?
16:07 Quizmaegi: or kk (1/4) dddk (1/6)
16:08 Dino99: ok nice
16:08 Dino99: added
16:10 Quizmaegi: 02:06:605 ~ 02:07:514 - this pattern is... too hard (264 BPM stream)
16:11 Dino99: Yes..
16:11 Dino99: But the song is 1/8 here :/
16:11 Quizmaegi: :/
16:11 Dino99: I wanna keep it as a challenge
16:12 Dino99: for Pro player like you
16:12 Dino99: :O
16:14 Quizmaegi: and I can't catch a pattern needs change & fix... :(
16:14 Dino99: w.w
16:14 Dino99: I'll ask more people!
16:15 Dino99: You can post the IRC Mod in my forum~ owo/
16:16 Dino99: And I give you a kd~
16:22 Dino99: Hmm do you know what I mean? @@ Type"/savelog" then find it in "Chat" and post it in my forum :3
16:22 Quizmaegi: thanks 'w'!
Thank you! ^^/
Skeuddy
Hey

Inner Oni
  1. 00:07:893 (37,39) - Swap
  2. 00:14:672 (97,99) - ^
  3. 00:18:764 (127,128) - ^, and 00:19:105 (129,130,131,132,133) - dddk k
  4. 00:19:673 (134,135) - ^, and 00:20:014 (136) - k
  5. 00:28:423 (196,199) - ^, and 00:28:878 (201) - k
  6. 01:06:832 (466,467) - ^, and 01:07:059 (468,470,472) - k, 01:07:741 (473) - d
  7. 01:36:529 (54,56) - ^
  8. 01:37:286 (60,64) - ^
  9. 01:38:195 (68,72) - ^
  10. 00:15:241 (101) - k, and 00:15:809 (105) - d
  11. 00:16:377 (110) - ^
  12. 00:49:332 (346) - ^
  13. 01:59:900 (233) - ^
  14. 02:06:491 (280) - ^
  15. 00:15:468 (102) - d
  16. 00:26:718 (186,187,188) - ^
  17. 01:03:650 (443) - ^
  18. 01:12:514 (500) - ^
  19. 01:33:650 (28,29,36,37,40,41,44,45) - ^
  20. 00:33:650 (229,230,231,232,233) - dddk k, and 00:34:218 (234,235) - Swap, 00:34:559 (237,238) - Swap
  21. 00:38:309 - Some note
Shyguy
IRC
11:25 Dino99: Hello~ o/
11:26 Shyguy: o hey
11:26 Dino99: Could you testplay my Taiko Map?? :)
11:26 Shyguy: sure i don't mind testing it'
11:26 Dino99: thanks!!
11:26 *Dino99 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One]
11:27 Dino99: It's pretty hard~ :O
11:27 Shyguy: 6.31, daaang
11:27 Shyguy: oops i had hd on
11:29 Dino99: haha
11:30 Shyguy: dang ur right, it is pretty hard
11:30 Dino99: nice play!!
11:31 Dino99: haha
11:31 Shyguy: i think the first sv speed-up with the 1/6 caught me off guard lol
11:31 Shyguy: maybe it could be a bit smoother?
11:32 Shyguy: uhh i link what i'm talking about
11:32 Dino99: hmm
11:32 Dino99: But you didn't miss there
11:32 Dino99: :D
11:32 Shyguy: true lol
11:33 Dino99: haha
11:33 Shyguy: my mind couldn't tell if it was 1/4 or 1/6 so i just took a wild guess
11:33 Dino99: wow
11:33 Dino99: nice guess then :3
11:33 Dino99: too slow to read clearly?
11:34 Shyguy: nah, it's a good speed i think
11:34 Shyguy: considering the bpm
11:34 Dino99: ok!
11:35 Dino99: How about the last 1/8?? xD
11:35 Shyguy: lmao i didn't even come close to hitting that
11:35 Shyguy: but i was checking that part out in the editor
11:35 Dino99: haha lol
11:36 Dino99: ok~ that's a surprise for pro player like you
11:36 Dino99: a challenge
11:36 Dino99: :O
11:36 Shyguy: i think it came out as a surprise so i didn't know how to hit it
11:37 Shyguy: also this is an opinion nitpick thing
11:37 Shyguy: 02:09:332 (304) -
11:37 Shyguy: but i think u got this part kinda undermapped
11:37 Dino99: lol
11:38 Dino99: undermapped??
11:38 Dino99: You mean I should add more notes here? :3
11:38 Shyguy: oh yeah, that's what i meant
11:39 Dino99: oh i see
11:39 Shyguy: and also i'd snap
11:39 Shyguy: 02:10:544 (307) -
11:39 Shyguy: to the next 1/3 tick
11:40 Dino99: wow
11:40 Dino99: I'll consider about your suggestion
11:41 Dino99: I just wanna follow the main sound here maybe~
11:41 Shyguy: o alright
11:41 Shyguy: i just didn't really hear a sound at that one finisher and it felt all weird to hit
11:42 Dino99: ;w;
11:42 Shyguy: i mean it was just that one part lol
11:42 Shyguy: i liked the map dood
11:43 Dino99: oh yea, thanks :)
11:43 Dino99: 01:32:968 (22) - How about this part??
11:43 Dino99: haha
11:43 Dino99: Someone said this is a stupid idea
11:43 Dino99: :(
11:44 Shyguy: those really add to the sr lol
11:44 Shyguy: it goes from like
11:44 Shyguy: 6.31 to 6.08 when i delete them
11:45 Dino99: Oops, You found my secret
11:45 Dino99: xD
11:45 Dino99: hmm no
11:45 Dino99: I follow the weird sound here
11:45 Dino99: I think it fit the music :3
11:47 Shyguy: i think they fit too but someone will probably tell you it makes the sr go crazy
11:48 Dino99: Well, I may delete them :(
11:48 *Dino99 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/823014 Camellia - Routing]
11:48 Dino99: Which one is harder? lol
11:49 Dino99: In your opinion
11:49 Shyguy: i think this one is harder imo
11:50 Shyguy: there are stuff like
11:50 Shyguy: 00:39:332 (274) -
11:50 Shyguy: this section that i can't do lol
11:50 Dino99: haha
11:50 Dino99: ok :D
11:51 Dino99: 00:35:923 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256) -
11:51 Dino99: This is harder for me~
11:52 Shyguy: also routing has higher sv so it's a bit easier to read
11:53 Dino99: I wanna you guys take HR ;w;
11:53 Shyguy: lool
11:53 Shyguy: im a hd guy orz
11:53 Dino99: I may increase the SV~ o_O
11:53 Dino99: orz
11:53 Dino99: cool
11:54 Shyguy: anyways, cool map, ty for asking me to check it lol
11:54 Dino99: \owo/
11:54 Dino99: ya~
11:55 Dino99: Maybe you can post our chat log on my map's forum?? and I give you kd as a IRC Mod haha :3
11:55 Shyguy: oh sure
11:55 Shyguy: ty :D
Gemu-
Hi, from my Queue ~

Mod
d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

HP: 8
OD: 2


You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzvbm/7339fb0a1a.jpg

00:35:241 (40) - Remove this note to follow the consistency with 00:16:605 (17,18) -
00:42:514 (51) - Remove this note to follow the consistency with 00:27:514 (28,29) -
00:45:014 (54,55) - Ctrl G, sounds better!
00:46:605 (57) - Move this note here 00:46:150 - And add a k here 00:47:059 - to follow the rhythm and the consistency with 01:00:241 (75,76,77,78,79) -
00:50:241 (63) - Moce this note here 00:49:786 - to follow the consistency with 01:03:423 (81,82,83) -
00:50:695 - Add a k and move this note 00:51:605 (66) - here 00:52:059 - Also remove this note 00:52:514 (67) - to follow the consistency with 01:05:241 (84,85,86,87) -
00:53:877 (68) - Move this note here 00:53:423 - and add a k here 00:54:332 - to follow the consistency with 01:07:514 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94) -

As you can see now you have a good consistency and a good rhythm, important in Taiko.

01:45:241 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
01:52:514 - ^
01:58:423 (52,53) - Change to k to follow the drums with 01:59:332 (54,55,56) -
02:01:605 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
02:08:195 - Add a K, sounds better.

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished.

[ Futsuu]

HP: 7
OD: 3


You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzxs2/583ac05849.jpg

00:13:195 - Add a d and remove this 00:14:559 - and change to a finish here 00:14:786 (17) - To do make a little hard this difficulty.
00:19:786 (26,27) - Remove this to put a break.
00:26:832 (44,45) - ^
00:30:468 (51,52) - Change this to finish to follow the consistency with 00:45:014 (86,87,88) - and you have this in Kantan.
00:33:650 (60) - Move this note here 00:33:877 - and remove this 00:34:332 (61) - to put a break.
00:40:923 (77) - Move this note here 00:41:150 - and remove this 00:41:377 (78,79) - to put a break.
00:52:741 (109) - Remove to put a little break.
01:01:377 - Add a d and remove this 01:01:832 (133) - to follow the consistency with 00:46:605 (90,91,92) -
01:02:286 (133) - Move this here 01:02:059 - and add a d here 01:03:195 - and a k here 01:03:650 - to follow the consistency with 00:47:514 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) -
01:05:923 (145) - Remove this to follow the consistency with 00:51:605 (105,106,107,108,109) -
01:10:014 (156) - Move this note here 01:10:241 - and add a d here 01:10:923 - (
You should get something like this --> ) to follow the consistency with 00:55:695 (116,117,118,119,120) -
01:40:014 - Remove this note, is not necessary.
01:41:377 (201) - Change to k here and here 01:41:831 (203) - to have a nice pattern 01:41:150 (200,201,202,203,204) -
01:50:923 (225) - Remove to put a little break.
01:58:423 (246) - Change to k here and here 01:58:877 (248) - to follow the drums.
01:59:332 (249,250,251) - Change to k k k to follow the drums.

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished.

[ Muzukashii]

HP: 6
OD: 4


You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzzBb/6f56a4ff8a.jpg

00:30:468 (78,79) - Change this to finish because you have this in Kantan and Futsuu.
00:49:105 - Change to k, sounds goood.
01:00:241 - Change to k, is better kkk in this difficulty.
01:03:650 - Change to k and remove this 01:04:105 (199) - to follow the consistency with 00:48:650 (144,145,146,147,148) -
01:09:332 (218) - Move this note here 01:09:559 - and this note 01:10:923 (223) - move to here 01:10:241 - to follow the consistency with 00:53:423 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) -
01:34:105 (37) - Remove this note to follow the previous drums 01:29:332 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) -
01:56:377 (118,119,120) - Change to kkk to follow the rhythm with 01:56:832 (121,122,123,124,125,126) -
02:05:468 (155,156,157) - Change to kkk, sounds better.

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished.

[ Oni]

HP: 5
OD: 5


00:51:377 - Remove this note to put a little break.
00:55:014 (288) - ^
01:01:377 (324) - Move this note here 01:01:491 - to put a little break.
01:04:105 (338) - Remove this note to put a little break.
01:07:741 (360) - Move this note here 01:07:855 - to put a little break.
01:41:832 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491) - Change this to -->
01:55:014 (554) - Remove to put a little break.
01:58:423 - Change to k here, here 01:58:991 - here 01:59:445 (580) - and here 01:59:900 (584,585) - You should get something like this 01:58:423 (573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585) - -->

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished.

[ Inner Oni]

HP: 4
OD: 6


You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzBWL/b876c080b0.jpg

00:09:218 - Remove this note to put a break.
00:45:014 (322,323) - Change this to finish because you have this in Kantan. Futsuu, Muzukashii and Oni.
00:54:900 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
00:56:036 - ^
00:56:377 - Change to k to follow the rhythm, sounds very nice!
01:01:036 - ^
01:01:832 (432,433) - Ctrl G to follow the rhythm.
01:06:605 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
01:07:286 - ^
01:32:968 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - This is not appropiate, I recommend you change all this:

Remove 01:33:025 (23) - , 01:33:252 (25) - , 01:33:480 (27) - , 01:33:707 (29) - , 01:33:934 (31) - , 01:34:161 (33) - , 01:34:389 (35) - , 01:34:616 (37) - , 01:34:843 (39) - , 01:35:070 (41) - , 01:35:298 (43) - , 01:35:525 (45) - , 01:35:752 (47) - , 01:35:980 (49) - and 01:36:207 (51) -

Change to d 01:33:195 (23) - , 01:33:877 (26) - , 01:34:786 (30) - , 01:35:241 (32) - and 01:35:695 (34) -

As you can see you have a better rhythm and pattern.

01:43:498 (107,108,109) - Remove to put a break. Also, after these parts do not hear sounds.
02:06:605 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - Change this to --> sounds better and to have a better stream.
02:08:195 (285) - Change to D, sounds better.
02:12:514 (293) - Change to k, sounds better.

I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
Dino99

Skeuddy wrote:

Hey

Inner Oni
  1. 00:07:893 (37,39) - Swap Hmm no~
  2. 00:14:672 (97,99) - ^ no I prefer now~
  3. 00:18:764 (127,128) - ^, and 00:19:105 (129,130,131,132,133) - dddk k ok fixed!
  4. 00:19:673 (134,135) - ^, and 00:20:014 (136) - k fixed!
  5. 00:28:423 (196,199) - ^, and 00:28:878 (201) - k sorry I prefer now~
  6. 01:06:832 (466,467) - ^, and 01:07:059 (468,470,472) - k, 01:07:741 (473) - d hmm it sounds better now IMO :3
  7. 01:36:529 (54,56) - ^
  8. 01:37:286 (60,64) - ^
  9. 01:38:195 (68,72) - ^ Change some here!
  10. 00:15:241 (101) - k, and 00:15:809 (105) - d no it sounnds better now!
  11. 00:16:377 (110) - ^ ^
  12. 00:49:332 (346) - ^ d fits better for me~
  13. 01:59:900 (233) - ^ hmmm no~
  14. 02:06:491 (280) - ^ ^
  15. 00:15:468 (102) - d k sounds cool!
  16. 00:26:718 (186,187,188) - ^ sorry I prefer now :3
  17. 01:03:650 (443) - ^ ok~
  18. 01:12:514 (500) - ^ k sounds good
  19. 01:33:650 (28,29,36,37,40,41,44,45) - ^ Hmm maybe all k sounds better??...
  20. 00:33:650 (229,230,231,232,233) - dddk k, and 00:34:218 (234,235) - Swap, 00:34:559 (237,238) - Swap
    No It's fine now! owoa
  21. 00:38:309 - Some note ehhhh I don't wanna have a note before the "K"
Thanks a lot!!~ :D
Topic Starter
Dino99

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my Queue ~

Mod
d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

HP: 8
OD: 2
fixed to 3 / 7

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzvbm/7339fb0a1a.jpg fixed!

00:35:241 (40) - Remove this note to follow the consistency with 00:16:605 (17,18) - Hmm yes I know but I wanna make a bit different (harder) than the first part~ so I think I'll keep it!
00:42:514 (51) - Remove this note to follow the consistency with 00:27:514 (28,29) - ^
00:45:014 (54,55) - Ctrl G, sounds better! Hmm no the second note is a higher sound IMO :3
00:46:605 (57) - Move this note here 00:46:150 - And add a k here 00:47:059 - to follow the rhythm and the consistency with 01:00:241 (75,76,77,78,79) - I know! But I wanna make a bit different at two part of the Kiai Time... Hope the consisrency is fine~~ :/
00:50:241 (63) - Moce this note here 00:49:786 - to follow the consistency with 01:03:423 (81,82,83) - ^
00:50:695 - Add a k and move this note 00:51:605 (66) - here 00:52:059 - Also remove this note 00:52:514 (67) - to follow the consistency with 01:05:241 (84,85,86,87) - ^
00:53:877 (68) - Move this note here 00:53:423 - and add a k here 00:54:332 - to follow the consistency with 01:07:514 (88,89,90,91,92,93,94) - ^

As you can see now you have a good consistency and a good rhythm, important in Taiko. Yes, it's important, I'll consider about this for a while! Because I think if it's too consistent.. The map seems too boring!! So I wanna make a bit different although the music sounds the same lol

01:45:241 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. My mistake, fixed!
01:52:514 - ^ ^
01:58:423 (52,53) - Change to k to follow the drums with 01:59:332 (54,55,56) - ehh.. I only wanna make a k in the highest sound here.. so I'll keep here d d d d "k" ...It sounds fine IMO~
02:01:605 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. ok fixed!
02:08:195 - Add a K, sounds better. Nice!

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished. yes fixed!

[ Futsuu]

HP: 7
OD: 3
fixed to 4 / 6

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzxs2/583ac05849.jpg fixed

00:13:195 - Add a d and remove this 00:14:559 - and change to a finish here 00:14:786 (17) - To do make a little hard this difficulty.
Hmm it may be a bit hard, I thinik it's fine now!
00:19:786 (26,27) - Remove this to put a break. I think it sounds good now, maybe need a break or not...? lol
00:26:832 (44,45) - ^ ^
00:30:468 (51,52) - Change this to finish to follow the consistency with 00:45:014 (86,87,88) - and you have this in Kantan. ok fixed!
00:33:650 (60) - Move this note here 00:33:877 - and remove this 00:34:332 (61) - to put a break. No it sounds cool now IMO
00:40:923 (77) - Move this note here 00:41:150 - and remove this 00:41:377 (78,79) - to put a break. ^
00:52:741 (109) - Remove to put a little break. I don't really know if Futsuu need these break or not.. But I wanna keep it now sorry! orz
01:01:377 - Add a d and remove this 01:01:832 (133) - to follow the consistency with 00:46:605 (90,91,92) - I just add a note here lol
01:02:286 (133) - Move this here 01:02:059 - and add a d here 01:03:195 - and a k here 01:03:650 - to follow the consistency with 00:47:514 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) -
01:05:923 (145) - Remove this to follow the consistency with 00:51:605 (105,106,107,108,109) - no~
01:10:014 (156) - Move this note here 01:10:241 - and add a d here 01:10:923 - ( no it sounds cool to me now >.<a
You should get something like this --> ) to follow the consistency with 00:55:695 (116,117,118,119,120) -
01:40:014 - Remove this note, is not necessary. Nice!
01:41:377 (201) - Change to k here and here 01:41:831 (203) - to have a nice pattern 01:41:150 (200,201,202,203,204) - yes it has already k now owo/
01:50:923 (225) - Remove to put a little break. uhh no~
01:58:423 (246) - Change to k here and here 01:58:877 (248) - to follow the drums. Fixed the second!
01:59:332 (249,250,251) - Change to k k k to follow the drums. no only 01:59:786 (258) - have a drum sound! and added~

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished. ok

About the "break" I'll ask more people about it, and the "consistency", Hmm I'm not really care about it~ I think it really makes Futsuu a bit boring too! xD (Same reason as Kantan) So I will keep my style and see if it's ok! \owo/

[ Muzukashii]

HP: 6
OD: 4
No~ 5 / 5 is fine for Muzu! owo

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzzBb/6f56a4ff8a.jpg fixed

00:30:468 (78,79) - Change this to finish because you have this in Kantan and Futsuu. fixed!
00:49:105 - Change to k, sounds goood. dkdd sounds better for me >.<
01:00:241 - Change to k, is better kkk in this difficulty. ehhh I think d fits the music nicely! consider about the low bpm.. I think kkd won't be too hard for a Muzu!!
01:03:650 - Change to k and remove this 01:04:105 (199) - to follow the consistency with 00:48:650 (144,145,146,147,148) -
Like I said in Kantan and Futsuu, I prefer make a bit different instead of making the same rhythm~~ lol
01:09:332 (218) - Move this note here 01:09:559 - and this note 01:10:923 (223) - move to here 01:10:241 - to follow the consistency with 00:53:423 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172) - no it's fine here!
01:34:105 (37) - Remove this note to follow the previous drums 01:29:332 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - hmm make it a bit harder is fine here IMO
01:56:377 (118,119,120) - Change to kkk to follow the rhythm with 01:56:832 (121,122,123,124,125,126) - Hmm low bpm... It's easy! I think ddk and kkd is fine for Muzu if it's a low bpm song (<150)
02:05:468 (155,156,157) - Change to kkk, sounds better. ddk sounds better for me, sorry! orz

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished. yes

[ Oni]

HP: 5
OD: 5
I prefer now ;w;

00:51:377 - Remove this note to put a little break. hmm no~ It's fine without a break~
00:55:014 (288) - ^ ^
01:01:377 (324) - Move this note here 01:01:491 - to put a little break. no~
01:04:105 (338) - Remove this note to put a little break. ok
01:07:741 (360) - Move this note here 01:07:855 - to put a little break. ok
01:41:832 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491) - Change this to -->
I cjanged 01:42:514 (484) - to k and sounds better!
01:55:014 (554) - Remove to put a little break. no it's ok here.
01:58:423 - Change to k here, here 01:58:991 - here 01:59:445 (580) - and here 01:59:900 (584,585) - You should get something like this 01:58:423 (573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585) - -->
No it's sounds better now! I only make the "highest" sounds k~~

End the spinner here 02:12:514 - Because here the song is finished. Sure

[ Inner Oni]

HP: 4
OD: 6
Hmm I think it's appropriate for this Diff~ lol

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support --> http://puu.sh/mzBWL/b876c080b0.jpg Done!

00:09:218 - Remove this note to put a break. sounds good
00:45:014 (322,323) - Change this to finish because you have this in Kantan. Futsuu, Muzukashii and Oni. Hmm no, I wanna make a bit different in this diff, only follow the real finish sound~
00:54:900 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. d is better IMO~
00:56:036 - ^ ^
00:56:377 - Change to k to follow the rhythm, sounds very nice! Hmm d is fine too for me sorry!
01:01:036 - ^ ok
01:01:832 (432,433) - Ctrl G to follow the rhythm. no~
01:06:605 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. changed a bit here!
01:07:286 - ^
01:32:968 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - This is not appropiate, I recommend you change all this: But I actually really like this part >"<.... Hmm I think it fits the music well... so I'll keep it unless it's unqualified! ;w;

Remove 01:33:025 (23) - , 01:33:252 (25) - , 01:33:480 (27) - , 01:33:707 (29) - , 01:33:934 (31) - , 01:34:161 (33) - , 01:34:389 (35) - , 01:34:616 (37) - , 01:34:843 (39) - , 01:35:070 (41) - , 01:35:298 (43) - , 01:35:525 (45) - , 01:35:752 (47) - , 01:35:980 (49) - and 01:36:207 (51) -

Change to d 01:33:195 (23) - , 01:33:877 (26) - , 01:34:786 (30) - , 01:35:241 (32) - and 01:35:695 (34) -

As you can see you have a better rhythm and pattern.

01:43:498 (107,108,109) - Remove to put a break. Also, after these parts do not hear sounds. I hear some sounds lol, hmm I wanna keep it now, if others say this too, I'll change it :3
02:06:605 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - Change this to --> sounds better and to have a better stream. no~ I prefer now!
02:08:195 (285) - Change to D, sounds better. nice!
02:12:514 (293) - Change to k, sounds better. I think d is better~~~

I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

Fix other Diffs later!!

Thank you for the long mod~~ ;) ;)
DeletedUser_6637817
From PM'ing me!

Kantan
00:23:877 (23) - Finisher, because there is a loud bank sound
01:23:877 (3,4) - these sound pretty 'ghosty' consider removing them both or the 2nd one
02:09:332 (64,65) !!! 1/2 is not allowed in Kantan under any circumstance! remove the 2nd note to make it sound good
02:09:332 (64) - Finisher, as its backed by a loud bang

Futsuu
00:23:877 (38) - Again a Finisher because of the loud bang
00:48:423 (102,103,104,105,106) - this sounds pretty off with the 2nd kat there, try doing a ddkdd pattern, sounds better imo
01:43:423 - i think this point just screams for a k Finisher, would fit the kiai that is incoming too!
02:10:582 (288) - remove finisher, its not backed by a loud bang that the others are backed

Muzukashii
01:49:332 (93) - This should be d because its not backed by the kick and has a thump noise instead
01:58:423 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - this doesnt really fit with the music try doing a simple 1/2 ddkkddkk

Oni
00:17:059 (74) - should be k because it has a clap noise behind it
00:24:787 (117) - ^
00:26:037 (124) - a bit too much of a ghost note, delete
01:04:559 (341,342,343,344) - i think a kddk pattern sounds good to emphasize the thump a bit more, but thats your choice really, i feel it plays better too
01:08:195 (363,364,365,366,367) - sounds off, try aligning the claps and thumps with the k's and d's, such as a kkddk pattern
02:07:286 (628,629,630,631,632) !!! 1/8ths are not to ideal to be used under most circumstances! try replacing them with 1/6ths which is an option too

Ura Oni
AKA the Diff i cant really mod But ill try anyways....

00:03:423 (10) - has higher pitch, hence k
00:23:309 (162,163,164) - 1/8ths again, try putting them into 1/6 even if it sounds a bit shoddy
00:37:855 (266,267,268) - same here
01:32:968 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - ^
01:56:377 (212,213,214,215,216) - ^
02:06:605 (288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304) - i wont even ask, but i think you reached the qualifyable limit :o
correct me if 1/8ths on this is rankable!

Sowwy for short mod ;w;
Topic Starter
Dino99

Nepuri wrote:

From PM'ing me!

Kantan
00:23:877 (23) - Finisher, because there is a loud bank sound OK!
01:23:877 (3,4) - these sound pretty 'ghosty' consider removing them both or the 2nd one no I follow the piano sounds :<
02:09:332 (64,65) !!! 1/2 is not allowed in Kantan under any circumstance! remove the 2nd note to make it sound good ok~
02:09:332 (64) - Finisher, as its backed by a loud bang sure~

Futsuu
00:23:877 (38) - Again a Finisher because of the loud bang ok
00:48:423 (102,103,104,105,106) - this sounds pretty off with the 2nd kat there, try doing a ddkdd pattern, sounds better imo It's fine for me~
01:43:423 - i think this point just screams for a k Finisher, would fit the kiai that is incoming too! Not bad~ I'll consider for a while!
02:10:582 (288) - remove finisher, its not backed by a loud bang that the others are backed ok!

Muzukashii
01:49:332 (93) - This should be d because its not backed by the kick and has a thump noise instead Changed by my own way!!
01:58:423 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - this doesnt really fit with the music try doing a simple 1/2 ddkkddkk ehh.. I think it sounds cool! sorry

Oni
00:17:059 (74) - should be k because it has a clap noise behind it sure
00:24:787 (117) - ^ 00:24:332 (116) - changed this to k
00:26:037 (124) - a bit too much of a ghost note, delete no it's the same as before part~ and it sounds cool for me.
01:04:559 (341,342,343,344) - i think a kddk pattern sounds good to emphasize the thump a bit more, but thats your choice really, i feel it plays better too
I prefer dddk~
01:08:195 (363,364,365,366,367) - sounds off, try aligning the claps and thumps with the k's and d's, such as a kkddk pattern I think it's fine! sorry~
02:07:286 (628,629,630,631,632) !!! 1/8ths are not to ideal to be used under most circumstances! try replacing them with 1/6ths which is an option too
Yes too hard lol, ok fixed!

Ura Oni
AKA the Diff i cant really mod But ill try anyways....

00:03:423 (10) - has higher pitch, hence k ok!
00:23:309 (162,163,164) - 1/8ths again, try putting them into 1/6 even if it sounds a bit shoddy no it's Ura Oni!! I like that! \owo/
00:37:855 (266,267,268) - same here ^
01:32:968 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - ^ I really like this part.. is this really that bad?? ;w; hmm..... I'll get more opinions!
01:56:377 (212,213,214,215,216) - ^ It's 1/8 here! Consider the low bpm... I don't think it would be bad ^^
02:06:605 (288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304) - i wont even ask, but i think you reached the qualifyable limit :o
correct me if 1/8ths on this is rankable! Hmm this is what Ura Oni supposed to be? Anyway, it's actually not that hard and fits the music well.. So I'll keep it!~~

Sowwy for short mod ;w;
It's not short~ Thank you! ^w^/
Q____X
Hi frpm PM

Kantan
its good for me

Futsuu
00:34:105 - d?
00:35:923 - ^
02:04:332 (269,270) - invert
Muzukashii
00:23:195 - d
00:23:423 (52) - if you made the previous change, change this to d
00:37:741 - d
00:37:855 (106) - delete
00:38:082 - k
00:41:491 (121) - this part sounds weird for me, move to 00:41:377 -
01:58:650 - d
01:59:105 - k
01:59:559 - d
02:00:014 - k
Oni
00:26:150 (125) - k
01:49:332 (525) - k

Ura Oni
00:24:786 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - invert colors
00:25:468 (175,176,177,178) - ^

Sorry for the short mod :o

Good map :)
Intelli
Hi PM mod request :3

Kantan:
  1. 00:22:059 (19) - I would make it d kdK or ddkkK

  2. 00:30:468 (32) - Change to dkK

  3. 00:36:605 (42) - Same as 00:22:059

  4. 00:52:968 (68) - k

  5. 00:59:105 (76) - d

  6. 01:13:650 (97) - ^

  7. 01:25:468 (6) - Maybe change to k? It's fine if you wanna keep it as d though

  8. 01:43:423 (29) - K

  9. 01:46:832 (33) - ctrl+g with next note

  10. 01:51:150 (40) - Try this (Maybe move 44 around)

  11. 01:54:105 (45) - ctrl+g with next note
Futsuu:
  1. 00:05:695 (5) - d

  2. 00:30:809 (56) - Maybe k to keep consistent with Kantan?

  3. 00:33:423 (63) - Try this

  4. 00:38:423 (77) - K

  5. 00:45:355 (96) - Same as 00:30:809

  6. 00:52:968 (119) - k

  7. 00:54:105 (122) - ctrl+g with next note

  8. 01:01:150 (140) - Try this

  9. 01:07:514 (159) - ctrl+g with next note

  10. 01:08:650 (162) - ^ and make 01:09:332 k

  11. 01:52:105 (243) - ctrl+g with next note
Muzu:
  1. 00:02:059 (1) - This section should be(same rhythms) kk dk kk dk dk dk dk dk

  2. 00:23:877 (54) - K

  3. 00:30:809 (79) - Same as futsuu

  4. 00:38:195 (108) - d K

  5. 00:45:355 (135) - Same as Futsuu

  6. 00:52:968 (160 - k

  7. 00:54:105 (164) - ^

  8. 01:07:514 (212) - ^

  9. 01:08:650 (216) - ^

  10. 01:12:514 (228) - ctrl+g with next note

  11. 01:23:877 (15) - kkkd d k

  12. 01:54:786 (112) - k
Oni:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - This difficulty is a HUGE step up from Muzu, I would work on making it less dense. not much wrong with it other than that lol

  2. 00:30:809 (147) - Same as Futsuu

  3. 00:45:355 (236) - ^

  4. 01:20:241 (400) - d
Ura Oni:
  1. 01:24:559 (8) - d

  2. 01:32:968 (22) - I'm not hearing the 1/8th division here?

  3. 01:56:377 (212) - Use 1/6th divisions here (dddk)

  4. 02:06:605 (288) - Here too? Mostly to nerf this stream though
lol awesome Ura

Nice map, it's got great potential, just be careful with the 1/8ths in Ura Oni, BNs tend to not like them :P

EDIT: Damn Q___X beat me by 3 minutes xp
Topic Starter
Dino99

Q____X wrote:

Hi frpm PM

Kantan
its good for me thanks!

Futsuu
00:34:105 - d? no I follow the drum~
00:35:923 - ^ ^
02:04:332 (269,270) - invert I prefer now~ and it follow the high sound well!


Muzukashii
00:23:195 - d no it better now :3 ...dk sounds better than ddk~
00:23:423 (52) - if you made the previous change, change this to d
00:37:741 - d I think it sounds fine here... sorry! ;w;
00:37:855 (106) - delete ^
00:38:082 - k ^
00:41:491 (121) - this part sounds weird for me, move to 00:41:377 - ehh I wanna follow the high sound, and it sound cool for me~ sorry! x.x
01:58:650 - d Hmm.. I think 2-hit streams is cool here... if I change to 3-hit streams it may be a bit hard?? anyway I wanna keep it~
01:59:105 - k
01:59:559 - d
02:00:014 - k

Oni
00:26:150 (125) - k Hmm I know there is a drum, but I wanna make some different... and dd sounds well too here... so... sorry~~
01:49:332 (525) - k ok fixed!~

Ura Oni
00:24:786 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - invert colors Hmm no~ I wanna first part - kddkddk, second - dkkdkkd, third - kddkddk, fourth - kddkddk owo/
00:25:468 (175,176,177,178) - ^ I wanna make dkkd here!

Sorry for the short mod :o

Good map :)
Thanks a lot!!~ Nevermid the long/short, I'm grateful for every mod! 8-)




IntelliTroodon wrote:

Hi PM mod request :3

Kantan:
  1. 00:22:059 (19) - I would make it d kdK or ddkkK Yes there is a high sound~ But I think D fits more for me... lol
    As a Kantan diff, I think it not taht necessary to follow the drum or high sound! Just follow the "basic" sound~ :3/


  2. 00:30:468 (32) - Change to dkK Hmm I think KKD sounds fine.. well if others say this again~ I'll change!

  3. 00:36:605 (42) - Same as 00:22:059 same

  4. 00:52:968 (68) - k no~

  5. 00:59:105 (76) - d no~

  6. 01:13:650 (97) - ^ K is fine here~~

  7. 01:25:468 (6) - Maybe change to k? It's fine if you wanna keep it as d though d seems more appropriate owo

  8. 01:43:423 (29) - K ok~

  9. 01:46:832 (33) - ctrl+g with next note No dk-kd is nice for me sorry ;w;

  10. 01:51:150 (40) - Try this (Maybe move 44 around) ehh I prefer now~

  11. 01:54:105 (45) - ctrl+g with next note same as before~
Futsuu:
  1. 00:05:695 (5) - d ok!

  2. 00:30:809 (56) - Maybe k to keep consistent with Kantan? No it's ok here~ I wanna make a bit different with Kantan

  3. 00:33:423 (63) - Try this nice! But I think I prefer follow drum here~ orz

  4. 00:38:423 (77) - K no D is better for me lol

  5. 00:45:355 (96) - Same as 00:30:809 sorry~

  6. 00:52:968 (119) - k YES there is a high sound~ but I don't wanna follow it, d fits better for me here...

  7. 00:54:105 (122) - ctrl+g with next note changed to dkk~

  8. 01:01:150 (140) - Try this hmm it sounds nicer now!

  9. 01:07:514 (159) - ctrl+g with next note no~

  10. 01:08:650 (162) - ^ and make 01:09:332 k ya changed to dkk too~

  11. 01:52:105 (243) - ctrl+g with next note no~
Muzu:
  1. 00:02:059 (1) - This section should be(same rhythms) kk dk kk dk dk dk dk dk no they are different!

  2. 00:23:877 (54) - K no~

  3. 00:30:809 (79) - Same as futsuu no~

  4. 00:38:195 (108) - d K no~ q.q

  5. 00:45:355 (135) - Same as Futsuu hmm no

  6. 00:52:968 (160 - k no it's fine here

  7. 00:54:105 (164) - ^ ok nice~

  8. 01:07:514 (212) - ^ no~

  9. 01:08:650 (216) - ^ ok~

  10. 01:12:514 (228) - ctrl+g with next note ok~~

  11. 01:23:877 (15) - kkkd d k cool~

  12. 01:54:786 (112) - k no~
Oni:
  1. 00:00:000 (0) - This difficulty is a HUGE step up from Muzu, I would work on making it less dense. not much wrong with it other than that lol

    ;w; yes maybe it's a bit too hard... I'll ask more ppl about this~

  2. 00:30:809 (147) - Same as Futsuu no~

  3. 00:45:355 (236) - ^ ^

  4. 01:20:241 (400) - d no~ k fits better!
Ura Oni:
  1. 01:24:559 (8) - d no I like k~

  2. 01:32:968 (22) - I'm not hearing the 1/8th division here? Yes maybe not lol... but don't you think it fits the music well? C:

  3. 01:56:377 (212) - Use 1/6th divisions here (dddk) No It's 1/8 sound! If I use 1/6 to replace it.. I think it's weird... Besides,

    consider the low bpm, I think it's fine too keep 1/8 here~


  4. 02:06:605 (288) - Here too? Mostly to nerf this stream though This is a challenge for really pro player, or this diff won't be

    called Ura Oni \owo/


lol awesome Ura Thanks!

Nice map, it's got great potential, just be careful with the 1/8ths in Ura Oni, BNs tend to not like them :P Yes, I'll be careful lol

EDIT: Damn Q___X beat me by 3 minutes xp You two are super efficient!! TwT/
Thanks a lot~~ UPDATED! ....Sorry for my insistence... C:


P.S: After consider for a while... I remapped my Kantan Diff~ xD
I try to make it easier and more consistent!!
EdamaMe411
hi^^

From Chat :)

simple modding sorry :o
if you want more modding, please through my Queue ;)

Ura Oni
00:21:264 (142) - move to 00:21:150 - and this kkd. Please follow main sound at the beginning section ;)

00:22:173 (153) - move to 00:22:286 - ,,,,same above reason :)

00:23:195 (160,161,162,163,164,165) - Don't use 1/8 at first,sooo difficult!! Instead of ,you can use 1/6 from 00:23:195 (160) - dddk is match more!

00:23:764 - you can put note because synthesizer is sounding clearly

00:28:536 (198,199) - swap.....To follow sound pitch

00:29:559 - 00:29:673 - you can add notes because I heard bass sound ;) 00:29:559 (206,207,208) - kdD?

00:35:014 (243,244) - swap!!! please follow kick sound!

00:36:718 (260) - move to 00:36:832 - considering your flow of map ;)

00:37:741 (267,268,269,270) - Instead of 00:37:741 (267) - start 1/6,,,,,Maybe BN are dislike 1/8 :?

00:42:855 (309,310) - swap,,,to follow main sound pitch! :)

00:51:491 - move to 00:50:582 - and 00:51:264 (364) - move to 00:51:491 - considering your flow of map

00:55:695 - add d!^

01:05:809 (465) - move to 01:05:923 - ,you need not more even numbers. you can make something look as beautiful as possible if you finish Uneven number notes :D

01:24:559 (8) - d? considering main sound pitch!

01:32:968 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - hmmm,,,,,,, :? sorry I can't say anything,,,,Maybe your favorite part ,rigth? :D But I think change this part,,, :(

02:04:900 (275) - move to 02:04:786 -


Finish!!

GL! :D
Topic Starter
Dino99

EdamaMe411 wrote:

hi^^

From Chat :)

simple modding sorry :o
if you want more modding, please through my Queue ;)

Ura Oni
00:21:264 (142) - move to 00:21:150 - and this kkd. Please follow main sound at the beginning section ;) ya fixed!


00:22:173 (153) - move to 00:22:286 - ,,,,same above reason :) No It's fine IMO, also nothing at 00:22:286 -

00:23:195 (160,161,162,163,164,165) - Don't use 1/8 at first,sooo difficult!! Instead of ,you can use 1/6 from 00:23:195 (160) - dddk is match more!

meh.. Consider the low 132 bpm... and it's Ura Oni, do you really think it would be too hard? =w=a
The music is definitely 1/8 sounds here, also I think it fits the music well now, sorry~


00:23:764 - you can put note because synthesizer is sounding clearly No, I don't wanna add a note before a big D/K

00:28:536 (198,199) - swap.....To follow sound pitch It's fine now~ I use dkkd all at 2/4 parts (1/3 parts are kkkd for a little different)

00:29:559 - 00:29:673 - you can add notes because I heard bass sound ;) 00:29:559 (206,207,208) - kdD? Hmm no~

00:35:014 (243,244) - swap!!! please follow kick sound! Hmm I follow the high sound instead of the drum here, sorry~

00:36:718 (260) - move to 00:36:832 - considering your flow of map ;) Hmm It sounds cool now

00:37:741 (267,268,269,270) - Instead of 00:37:741 (267) - start 1/6,,,,,Maybe BN are dislike 1/8 :? Yes, They don't like, but if this song here should be 1/8 and as a Ura Oni, I'll keep it. 1/6 replace 1/8 is pretty weird to me.

00:42:855 (309,310) - swap,,,to follow main sound pitch! :) No, I can hear the music is dkddkddkd here~

00:51:491 - move to 00:50:582 - and 00:51:264 (364) - move to 00:51:491 - considering your flow of map What's wrong with me flow now? ;w; I think it's fine now sorry!

00:55:695 - add d!^ No, It break my rhythm here lol

01:05:809 (465) - move to 01:05:923 - ,you need not more even numbers. you can make something look as beautiful as possible if you finish Uneven number notes :D ehh I prefer my rhythm here...

01:24:559 (8) - d? considering main sound pitch! What? I follow the piano so it should be k..

01:32:968 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - hmmm,,,,,,, :? sorry I can't say anything,,,,Maybe your favorite part ,rigth? :D But I think change this part,,, :(

02:04:900 (275) - move to 02:04:786 - No I don't follow the drum here, I wanna make my own rhythm and it sounds cool to me~~ lol


Finish!!

GL! :D
Thank you! :lol:

About this part: 01:32:968 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - I'll try to ask some BNs and MMzz for their opinions, if it sounds really bad, I'll delete it and use just 1/2 here. But you can check a map called "Taiko Time" (Official Taiko no Tatsujin map) which has the same rhythm. and no one complains about it, most impotant of all, it fits the music... I'm serious, not for the Stars Difficulty or what. It just fit the music IMO... is it really worse than only 1/2 here? plz listen caerfully and have a deep consideration before giving me the words "it is weird"...... v.v
wasonz
IRC mod
discussion about Ura oni

blah
23:19 *[I]MMoRTal[S] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One [Ura Oni]]
23:20 Dino99: sure! But wait me 3 mins owo
23:20 Dino99: you can keep modding
23:20 Dino99: thx @@
23:23 Dino99: Back!
23:23 *[I]MMoRTal[S] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One [Ura Oni]]
23:23 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:34:559 - k
23:23 Dino99: fixed
23:23 Dino99: 00:34:559 (239) -
23:24 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:42:741 - k
23:24 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:47:173 - move this to 00:47:286 -
23:25 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's weird to make ox xo in this line
23:25 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i mean white line
23:26 Dino99: 00:42:741 (309) - no :/
23:27 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:50:809 - move -> 00:51:036 - cuz this k is connect with 00:50:695 - dkdkd pattern
23:27 Dino99: 00:47:173 - fixed
23:27 [I]MMoRTal[S]: if you agree with ^
23:28 [I]MMoRTal[S]: remove this note 00:52:627 -
23:28 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:54:445 - remove this too
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:14:786 - remove finish in slider
23:29 Dino99: 00:50:809 (362) - I think it's fine :O
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: wait
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: wrong copy note
23:30 Dino99: What lol
23:30 Dino99: <.>
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: nope
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: my mistake
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: that note is correct
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: sry
23:30 Dino99: :D
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: but dkdkd k
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: D:
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it sound cool
23:31 Dino99: hmm
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: http://puu.sh/mOeDM/ee1c773888.jpg
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: >w<
23:32 Dino99: I prefer kkd ;w;
23:32 Dino99: sorry...
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;w; but
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kdkdk k
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;w;
23:32 Dino99: Maybe I'll remap this part lol I put notes by my own rhythm...
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: nvm it's your map
23:33 Dino99: I'll consider it :D
23:33 [I]MMoRTal[S]: lol
23:33 Dino99: Don't worry, remap a part is a piece of cake
23:33 Dino99: haha
23:34 Dino99: Just maybe, because I think I put notes a bit too randomly here
23:34 Dino99: Sounds not bad tho
23:35 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:36:377 - this 1/6 is incorrect with the beat
23:35 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's 1/4
23:36 Dino99: lol
23:36 [I]MMoRTal[S]: :^)
23:37 Dino99: I wanna use 1/6... any other say this too I'll fix it to 1/4 C:
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:32:968 - i know 1/8 is rankable
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: but
23:38 Dino99: 01:32:968 (23) - Is the part fine to you?? Many people complained here.. sad ;w;
23:38 Dino99: lol
23:38 Dino99: hahaha
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think it's fine to make simple pattern with 1/2 and 1/4
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's fine to me
23:38 Dino99: yaes
23:39 Dino99: I think I'll change them to 1/2 and 1/4
23:39 Dino99: a:3
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 1/8 only make it hard
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: and fake the rating
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: >.>
23:39 Dino99: I wanna be creative here xD
23:39 Dino99: haha
23:39 Dino99: a bit
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: your map is creative enough
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: more will only make hater
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: red vote incoming
23:40 Dino99: =w=
23:40 Dino99: thanks
23:40 Dino99: damn
23:40 Dino99: no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
23:40 Dino99: I wanna green vote
23:40 Dino99: :<
23:40 [I]MMoRTal[S]: red vote yolo like loc- map
23:40 Dino99: ha..
23:40 Dino99: no
23:40 Dino99: His map is super weird
23:40 Dino99: ._.
23:40 [I]MMoRTal[S]: no
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: his map is ez for kddk player
23:41 Dino99: o.o
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: pp map
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:43:423 - mono k please
23:41 Dino99: ehh
23:41 Dino99: kkddk?
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kkkkk
23:41 Dino99: Sounds cool
23:42 Dino99: =w=
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: w0t
23:42 Dino99: ehh
23:42 Dino99: kkkkk
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: cuz it's ez for everyone
23:42 Dino99: ok
23:42 Dino99: fixed
23:42 Dino99: C:
23:42 Dino99: kkkkk
23:42 Dino99: So EZ
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:56:377 - kkddk is cool for this
23:44 Dino99: Hmm I like ddddk
23:44 Dino99: Only k at the highest sound
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: "is cool for this"
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i didn't force you
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kappa
23:45 Dino99: ya I know
23:45 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 02:06:605 - kkddkkd...
23:45 Dino99: owo
23:46 [I]MMoRTal[S]: the k in kddkddk not fit with anything imo
23:46 Dino99: OK
23:46 Dino99: fixed
23:46 Dino99: :D
23:46 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o wait
23:47 Dino99: what's up
23:48 [I]MMoRTal[S]: can you see https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4427655
23:49 [I]MMoRTal[S]: can you see my skin ?
23:49 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think it's fit too. that pattern ^
23:49 Dino99: wow
23:49 Dino99: cool
23:49 Dino99: kddkddkdkddkddkdk
23:50 Dino99: Seems so hard lol
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: yes
23:50 Dino99: I prefer kkddkkddkkddkkddk
23:50 Dino99: :)
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: rechecking
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: w8
23:51 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:24:786 - dddkkkd
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: dkkdkkd
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: the k is delay to cover that koww kowww
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: idk how to say that sound
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: lol
23:53 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:29:559 - you can add d here
23:53 Dino99: 00:24:786 (168) - I think it's fine
23:54 Dino99: 00:29:559 -
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;_;
23:54 Dino99: No :(
23:54 Dino99: I like the break
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: so
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's fine now
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think
23:54 Dino99: ok :3

and new mp3 : http://puu.sh/mOgL9/6d30b833c5.mp3
Topic Starter
Dino99

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

IRC mod
discussion about Ura oni

blah
23:19 *[I]MMoRTal[S] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One [Ura Oni]]
23:20 Dino99: sure! But wait me 3 mins owo
23:20 Dino99: you can keep modding
23:20 Dino99: thx @@
23:23 Dino99: Back!
23:23 *[I]MMoRTal[S] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/751001 Qrabit - Twenty One [Ura Oni]]
23:23 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:34:559 - k
23:23 Dino99: fixed
23:23 Dino99: 00:34:559 (239) -
23:24 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:42:741 - k
23:24 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:47:173 - move this to 00:47:286 -
23:25 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's weird to make ox xo in this line
23:25 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i mean white line
23:26 Dino99: 00:42:741 (309) - no :/
23:27 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:50:809 - move -> 00:51:036 - cuz this k is connect with 00:50:695 - dkdkd pattern
23:27 Dino99: 00:47:173 - fixed
23:27 [I]MMoRTal[S]: if you agree with ^
23:28 [I]MMoRTal[S]: remove this note 00:52:627 -
23:28 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:54:445 - remove this too
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:14:786 - remove finish in slider
23:29 Dino99: 00:50:809 (362) - I think it's fine :O
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: wait
23:29 [I]MMoRTal[S]: wrong copy note
23:30 Dino99: What lol
23:30 Dino99: <.>
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: nope
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: my mistake
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: that note is correct
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: sry
23:30 Dino99: :D
23:30 [I]MMoRTal[S]: but dkdkd k
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: D:
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it sound cool
23:31 Dino99: hmm
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: http://puu.sh/mOeDM/ee1c773888.jpg
23:31 [I]MMoRTal[S]: >w<
23:32 Dino99: I prefer kkd ;w;
23:32 Dino99: sorry...
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;w; but
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kdkdk k
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;w;
23:32 Dino99: Maybe I'll remap this part lol I put notes by my own rhythm...
23:32 [I]MMoRTal[S]: nvm it's your map
23:33 Dino99: I'll consider it :D
23:33 [I]MMoRTal[S]: lol
23:33 Dino99: Don't worry, remap a part is a piece of cake
23:33 Dino99: haha
23:34 Dino99: Just maybe, because I think I put notes a bit too randomly here
23:34 Dino99: Sounds not bad tho
23:35 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:36:377 - this 1/6 is incorrect with the beat
23:35 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's 1/4
23:36 Dino99: lol
23:36 [I]MMoRTal[S]: :^)
23:37 Dino99: I wanna use 1/6... any other say this too I'll fix it to 1/4 C:
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:32:968 - i know 1/8 is rankable
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: but
23:38 Dino99: 01:32:968 (23) - Is the part fine to you?? Many people complained here.. sad ;w;
23:38 Dino99: lol
23:38 Dino99: hahaha
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think it's fine to make simple pattern with 1/2 and 1/4
23:38 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's fine to me
23:38 Dino99: yaes
23:39 Dino99: I think I'll change them to 1/2 and 1/4
23:39 Dino99: a:3
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 1/8 only make it hard
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: and fake the rating
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: >.>
23:39 Dino99: I wanna be creative here xD
23:39 Dino99: haha
23:39 Dino99: a bit
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: your map is creative enough
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: more will only make hater
23:39 [I]MMoRTal[S]: red vote incoming
23:40 Dino99: =w=
23:40 Dino99: thanks
23:40 Dino99: damn
23:40 Dino99: no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
23:40 Dino99: I wanna green vote
23:40 Dino99: :<
23:40 [I]MMoRTal[S]: red vote yolo like loc- map
23:40 Dino99: ha..
23:40 Dino99: no
23:40 Dino99: His map is super weird
23:40 Dino99: ._.
23:40 [I]MMoRTal[S]: no
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: his map is ez for kddk player
23:41 Dino99: o.o
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: pp map
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:43:423 - mono k please
23:41 Dino99: ehh
23:41 Dino99: kkddk?
23:41 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kkkkk
23:41 Dino99: Sounds cool
23:42 Dino99: =w=
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: w0t
23:42 Dino99: ehh
23:42 Dino99: kkkkk
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: cuz it's ez for everyone
23:42 Dino99: ok
23:42 Dino99: fixed
23:42 Dino99: C:
23:42 Dino99: kkkkk
23:42 Dino99: So EZ
23:42 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 01:56:377 - kkddk is cool for this
23:44 Dino99: Hmm I like ddddk
23:44 Dino99: Only k at the highest sound
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: "is cool for this"
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i didn't force you
23:44 [I]MMoRTal[S]: kappa
23:45 Dino99: ya I know
23:45 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 02:06:605 - kkddkkd...
23:45 Dino99: owo
23:46 [I]MMoRTal[S]: the k in kddkddk not fit with anything imo
23:46 Dino99: OK
23:46 Dino99: fixed
23:46 Dino99: :D
23:46 [I]MMoRTal[S]: o wait
23:47 Dino99: what's up
23:48 [I]MMoRTal[S]: can you see https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4427655
23:49 [I]MMoRTal[S]: can you see my skin ?
23:49 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think it's fit too. that pattern ^
23:49 Dino99: wow
23:49 Dino99: cool
23:49 Dino99: kddkddkdkddkddkdk
23:50 Dino99: Seems so hard lol
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: yes
23:50 Dino99: I prefer kkddkkddkkddkkddk
23:50 Dino99: :)
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: rechecking
23:50 [I]MMoRTal[S]: w8
23:51 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:24:786 - dddkkkd
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: dkkdkkd
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: the k is delay to cover that koww kowww
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: idk how to say that sound
23:52 [I]MMoRTal[S]: lol
23:53 [I]MMoRTal[S]: 00:29:559 - you can add d here
23:53 Dino99: 00:24:786 (168) - I think it's fine
23:54 Dino99: 00:29:559 -
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: ;_;
23:54 Dino99: No :(
23:54 Dino99: I like the break
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: so
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: it's fine now
23:54 [I]MMoRTal[S]: i think
23:54 Dino99: ok :3

and new mp3 : http://puu.sh/mOgL9/6d30b833c5.mp3
Much appreciate!!

I'll change the mp3 after MM finished his GD! 8-)
Elfie
Hello, req via pm

Ura Oni

  1. BPM 264 and SV 1.4 work much better imo (don't forget to delete/change sv changes)
    Then 1/8 parts become 1/4. However, it's up to you
  2. Unused image file 21 bg.jpg ?
  3. unsnapped notes :!:
  4. 00:09:332 - 00:14:786 - ;
    01:36:605 - 01:42:059 -
    these kiai parts should be deleted, they're too short and song doesn't suggest emphasising
  5. 00:15:809 (104,108) - d, sounds similar to 00:15:582 - for example
  6. 01:32:968 - 01:36:150 - dd dd (..) kk kk (..) sound a bit like autoconvert. Why didn't you just put d k d k d (..)?
  7. 01:36:945 - k for consistency with 01:36:605 (56,65) - etc
  8. 02:11:676 - Why this slider ends here on some 1/16 beat?
    I recommend putting spinner 02:11:036 - 02:12:400 -

Oni

  1. unsnapped notes :!:

Muzukashii

  1. 00:17:627 - move to 00:17:741 - to emphasise this sound
  2. 00:24:900 - to 00:25:014 - ^
  3. 00:34:105 - to 00:33:991 - ^
  4. 00:41:605 - to 00:41:718 - ^
  5. 00:37:741 - add d following the melody

Futsuu

  1. 01:16:605 - end slider here, it fits better to the song

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

Elfie wrote:

Hello, req via pm

Ura Oni

  1. BPM 264 and SV 1.4 work much better imo (don't forget to delete/change sv changes) It's 132 bpm... All diffs should be the same.
    Then 1/8 parts become 1/4. However, it's up to you 1/8 is fine in this bpm.
  2. Unused image file 21 bg.jpg ? What? I don't see that here.. maybe you didn't reDL first before modding it... lol
  3. unsnapped notes :!:
  4. 00:09:332 - 00:14:786 - ;
    01:36:605 - 01:42:059 -

    All Notes is snapped here... Why you see these Unsapped Notes??? hmm o.O"

    these kiai parts should be deleted, they're too short and song doesn't suggest emphasising If others say that too I'll change.
  5. 00:15:809 (104,108) - d, sounds similar to 00:15:582 - for example no it's better now to me.
  6. 01:32:968 - 01:36:150 - dd dd (..) kk kk (..) sound a bit like autoconvert. Why didn't you just put d k d k d (..)?
    FIXED! Since almost everyone complant that!
  7. 01:36:945 - k for consistency with 01:36:605 (56,65) - etc I wanna make more k as the music goes, so I only use 1 k at first.
  8. 02:11:676 - Why this slider ends here on some 1/16 beat? What? It's on WHITE LINE here.
    I recommend putting spinner 02:11:036 - 02:12:400 - no~ It's good now

Oni

  1. unsnapped notes :!:
All Snapped here.

Muzukashii

  1. 00:17:627 - move to 00:17:741 - to emphasise this sound Fixed
  2. 00:24:900 - to 00:25:014 - ^ ^
  3. 00:34:105 - to 00:33:991 - ^ no
  4. 00:41:605 - to 00:41:718 - ^ fixed
  5. 00:37:741 - add d following the melody Hmm no~

Futsuu

  1. 01:16:605 - end slider here, it fits better to the song fixed

Good luck :)
Thanks!
Elfie
Sorry, this pic of unsnapped notes wasn't up to date cuz i had made screenshot before updates. So:

Ura Oni:



Oni:

  • The thing is notes sit on different places than it's on tickbar
  1. 00:19:223 (129) - 00:19:222 - you can see 1 ms difference (actually this one isn't on pic so there may be some other unsnapped notes not included here)
  2. 00:19:299 (130) - 00:19:298 -
  3. 00:36:193 (252) - 00:36:192 - etc..

Also background in editor looks like this:


I think you have to choose it from library again. I hope it's not just me seeing that issue :O

Sorry for this incoherence! =w=
Rilene
Ok, I got nothing to mod. :o
Nice map you got there. :)
Topic Starter
Dino99

Elfie wrote:

Sorry, this pic of unsnapped notes wasn't up to date cuz i had made screenshot before updates. So:

Ura Oni:



Oni:

  • The thing is notes sit on different places than it's on tickbar
  1. 00:19:223 (129) - 00:19:222 - you can see 1 ms difference (actually this one isn't on pic so there may be some other unsnapped notes not included here)
  2. 00:19:299 (130) - 00:19:298 -
  3. 00:36:193 (252) - 00:36:192 - etc..

Also background in editor looks like this:


I think you have to choose it from library again. I hope it's not just me seeing that issue :O

Sorry for this incoherence! =w=
I checked... You are right lol

But my AIMod doesn't find them.... so weird.. Only 1 difference. How could this happen...? I guess tt's bug... What should I do...? o__o"

hmm and the BG is fine~ Double checked. Thanks for telling that anyway! :o


Rilene wrote:

Ok, I got nothing to mod. :o
Nice map you got there. :)
hmm... well thanks anyway~ :)
tasuke912
Hi, Inner Oni as requested. :D
http://puu.sh/mRCiE/6c852fac0c.zip
Topic Starter
Dino99

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, Inner Oni as requested. :D
http://puu.sh/mRCiE/6c852fac0c.zip
Thank you!!~ ^^ ......All diffs are done! Pending now. :oops:
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