This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 01, 2015 at 10:57:23 AM

Artist: Dizzee Rascal & Armand Van Helden
Title: Bonkers
Tags: crazy
BPM: 126
Filesize: 4323kb
Play Time: 02:56
Difficulties Available:

1. Bonkers (3.91 stars, 843 notes)
2. Futsuu (2.08 stars, 340 notes)
3. Kantan (1.28 stars, 234 notes)
4. Muzukashii (2.88 stars, 611 notes)

Download: Dizzee Rascal & Armand Van Helden - Bonkers
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My first beatmap. If you want to make a standard maps, just ask me.

Hey there, mod requested through in-game chat

[ General]

Looks all good to me

[ Kantan]

1. Put the HP a bit higher, map is not that long
2. 00:16:448 (17) - Could use a finisher to emphasize the start of the vocals
3. 00:20:258 (22,23,24) - Can be k k k to avoid monotony (same goes for futsuu)
4. 00:24:067 (27,28) - These 2 could be k to adapt to the pitch
5. 00:25:972 (30) - Pitch goes rather up here, try using k
6. 01:51:686 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165) - In this part you should alternate dkdkdkdk or remove the in-between notes. I mostly suggest the first to avoid monotony (besides they sound like k)
7. 02:03:115 (174) - Finisher to emphasize vocal starting?
8. 02:05:020 (176) - Pitch goes rather up here, try k
9. 02:10:734 (182) - ^

All the suggestions that are about changing note colour (k to d or viceversa) , if accepted in Kantan, should be applied in all difficulties to maintain consistency. Same goes for Finisher using related suggestion


[ Futsuu]

1. 00:05:020 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Highly suggest alternating d k d k d k, I think I don't need to give reasons for this
2. I see you're being a bit inconsistent when it comes to the vocal parts, in which you randomly alternate between following pitch and not, this might be confusing for players. Try reworking the parts which have vocals in it. I already gave you some suggestions in Kantan but here we have too many notes to simply point all of them out. *this excludes kiai times*
3. 01:18:353 (152,153) - These 1/2s are good ideas, apply them before the first kiai too to keep consistency

[ Muzukashii]

1. About patterning, I'd keep it to the simple "ddk" "kkd" "ddd" and "kkk" in a Muzukashii
2. 00:05:020 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - I'd reconsider reworking this part (removing some notes etc), it is inconsistent with "Bonkers" difficulty
3. 01:28:353 (300,301,302,303,304) - a 5 pattern is not usually a good idea in a muzu
4. 01:32:639 - not mapped? why?
5. 01:36:448 - ^
6. 02:10:258 (448,449,450,451,452) - what I said earlier
7. 02:12:162 (458,459,460,461,462) - ^

[ Bonkers]

1. 00:02:083 (3,6,9,12,17,22,27) - Why are these 1/6? They sound definetely 1/4
2. 00:58:353 (277) - Don't be afraid to put finisher here, it is permitted
3. 01:31:369 (444) - Try using a k here (dkdk)
4. 02:18:274 (673,674,675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690) - I suggest doing a stream here rather than 1/6 doublets
5. 02:25:972 - You missed a mappable sound here I think

That's pretty much it, not bad at all for being your first map. Keep improving, you show promise ╭( ･ㅂ･)و

Raiden wrote:

Hey there, mod requested through in-game chat

[ General]

Looks all good to me

[ Kantan]

1. Put the HP a bit higher, map is not that long Changed into HP 6
2. 00:16:448 (17) - Could use a finisher to emphasize the start of the vocals ok
3. 00:20:258 (22,23,24) - Can be k k k to avoid monotony (same goes for futsuu) ok
4. 00:24:067 (27,28) - These 2 could be k to adapt to the pitch That suggestion fits better
5. 00:25:972 (30) - Pitch goes rather up here, try using k I think thats for consistency?
6. 01:51:686 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165) - In this part you should alternate dkdkdkdk or remove the in-between notes. I mostly suggest the first to avoid monotony (besides they sound like k) change to dkdkdkdk
7. 02:03:115 (174) - Finisher to emphasize vocal starting? ok
8. 02:05:020 (176) - Pitch goes rather up here, try k ok
9. 02:10:734 (182) - ^ok

All the suggestions that are about changing note colour (k to d or viceversa) , if accepted in Kantan, should be applied in all difficulties to maintain consistency. Same goes for Finisher using related suggestion ok I'll try


[ Futsuu]

1. 00:05:020 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Highly suggest alternating d k d k d k, I think I don't need to give reasons for this kdkdkdkd, based on the muzu
2. I see you're being a bit inconsistent when it comes to the vocal parts, in which you randomly alternate between following pitch and not, this might be confusing for players. Try reworking the parts which have vocals in it. I already gave you some suggestions in Kantan but here we have too many notes to simply point all of them out. *this excludes kiai times*
3. 01:18:353 (152,153) - These 1/2s are good ideas, apply them before the first kiai too to keep consistency I'm not sure about how.

[ Muzukashii]

1. About patterning, I'd keep it to the simple "ddk" "kkd" "ddd" and "kkk" in a Muzukashii
2. 00:05:020 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - I'd reconsider reworking this part (removing some notes etc), it is inconsistent with "Bonkers" difficulty chnaged
3. 01:28:353 (300,301,302,303,304) - a 5 pattern is not usually a good idea in a muzu removed 301
4. 01:32:639 - not mapped? why? added d
5. 01:36:448 - ^ due to vocal? added d
6. 02:10:258 (448,449,450,451,452) - what I said earlier I think it follows the vocal, but well it's muzu (changed)
7. 02:12:162 (458,459,460,461,462) - ^ same as previous

[ Bonkers]

1. 00:02:083 (3,6,9,12,17,22,27) - Why are these 1/6? They sound definetely 1/4 I think 1/6 fits better
2. 00:58:353 (277) - Don't be afraid to put finisher here, it is permitted Well, that's a guideline (puts a finisher)
3. 01:31:369 (444) - Try using a k here (dkdk) I put kkdk instead
4. 02:18:274 (673,674,675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690) - I suggest doing a stream here rather than 1/6 doubletschanged but that k finisher though which is somewhat...
5. 02:25:972 - You missed a mappable sound here I think add d

Thanks for modding.

My bad, turns out, I don't like the song :v Here though, I modded your kantan at least, and....there was a lot to do

Kantan

00:04:067 (4) - Should probably be k to avoid monotony

00:07:877 (8) - Same thing as ^

00:12:162 (12) - Same concept, just make it d (lmao)

00:16:448 (17,18,19,20,21) - Too monotonous, try d k d d k (I get that Kantan is supposed to be easy, but it's not supposed to be boring)

00:20:734 (23) - This might sound better as a d, your opinion though, after all, it's Kantan

00:23:115 (26) - Making this a k will follow the song better

00:28:829 (34) - Make this a k for reasons mentioned before

00:48:829 (67) - K K K K K K K is WAAAAAY too repetitive at this length, make this a D

00:52:639 (71) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

00:56:448 (75) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

00:58:353 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - Probably should be D D K K D K D

01:06:924 (90) - This should be a k, mono color is still repetitive

01:14:543 (100) - Honestly, a k here just sounds nicer, not sure why

01:38:353 (137,138,139) - k d k seems to flow better

01:49:782 (156,157) - k k has a nicer flow

01:59:782 (170) - Making this a d makes it less repetitive and it goes alright with the song

02:09:782 (181) - For the same reason I think this should be a k

02:13:591 (185) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

02:16:448 (188) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

02:20:258 (194) - This is just an opinion, the slider is fine, but making it repeat like that does nothing to the slider in the map itself. Personally I'd have fun making some stupid shape or something just to see if people notice LOL

02:23:115 (195,196,197,198,199) - k d k d k flows really well with this

02:27:877 (201) - k for consistency assuming you did the other stuff

02:35:496 (210) - k follows the pattern better

02:42:162 (221) - k sounds less repetitive and fits with the flow

02:48:829 (230) - k for consistency with what you were doing before I came along and fucked up your entire Kantan :v

BrambleClaw wrote:

My bad, turns out, I don't like the song :v Here though, I modded your kantan at least, and....there was a lot to do

Kantan

00:04:067 (4) - Should probably be k to avoid monotony changed to avoid boredom

00:07:877 (8) - Same thing as ^ same here

00:12:162 (12) - Same concept, just make it d (lmao) changed

00:16:448 (17,18,19,20,21) - Too monotonous, try d k d d k (I get that Kantan is supposed to be easy, but it's not supposed to be boring) okay

00:20:734 (23) - This might sound better as a d, your opinion though, after all, it's Kantan I'll think about it

00:23:115 (26) - Making this a k will follow the song better okay, that fits better

00:28:829 (34) - Make this a k for reasons mentioned before changed

00:48:829 (67) - K K K K K K K is WAAAAAY too repetitive at this length, make this a D too monotonous, changed

00:52:639 (71) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ same as 67

00:56:448 (75) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ same as 67

00:58:353 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - Probably should be D D K K D K D changed

01:06:924 (90) - This should be a k, mono color is still repetitive k fits better, changed

01:14:543 (100) - Honestly, a k here just sounds nicer, not sure why changed

01:38:353 (137,138,139) - k d k seems to flow better changed

01:49:782 (156,157) - k k has a nicer flow I don't know about here

01:59:782 (170) - Making this a d makes it less repetitive and it goes alright with the song changed

02:09:782 (181) - For the same reason I think this should be a k changed

02:13:591 (185) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ changed the 184 instead

02:16:448 (188) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ changed the 187 instead

02:20:258 (194) - This is just an opinion, the slider is fine, but making it repeat like that does nothing to the slider in the map itself. Personally I'd have fun making some stupid shape or something just to see if people notice LOL Art of sliders lol

02:23:115 (195,196,197,198,199) - k d k d k flows really well with this d d d k d

02:27:877 (201) - k for consistency assuming you did the other stuff I did that to 202 instead

02:35:496 (210) - k follows the pattern better Not sure about it

02:42:162 (221) - k sounds less repetitive and fits with the flow changed

02:48:829 (230) - k for consistency with what you were doing before I came along and fucked up your entire Kantan :v changed the 231 instead

minor change: 204 d > k. My bad, I think that the song is not your taste sorry.

Great

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