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Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-12-26T19:17:00+00:00

Colors: Red = Very recommended
RED = unbreakable

Easy

00:07:136 (1,2,3) - That is a very bad part to follow the voice
00:41:210 (1,3) - These sliders are very intense for a part like this
01:23:803 (2) - This slider starts at the wrong time, the right time is in 01:24:173 -

Normal

00:15:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Wow, that is so intense for one normal
00:21:210 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:26:210 (1) - This slider should begin in 00:26:396 -
00:30:099 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Intense
00:41:951 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:45:655 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lol
01:23:988 (3) - Begin in 01:24:173 -

sorry for this small mod

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2015-12-26T22:33:02+00:00

Marianna wrote:
Colors: Red = Very recommended
RED = unbreakable

Easy

00:07:136 (1,2,3) - That is a very bad part to follow the voice I reduced the slider a little so it fit better now imo
00:41:210 (1,3) - These sliders are very intense for a part like this intense? why o:
01:23:803 (2) - This slider starts at the wrong time, the right time is in 01:24:173 - You're right it starts wrong, but now I did 2 slider instead lol

Normal

00:15:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Wow, that is so intense for one normal my life is intense lol I'll leave this but if some other people still complain i might change it.
00:21:210 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:26:210 (1) - This slider should begin in 00:26:396 - Sorry but I think that following guitar in this part is the best way so no change
00:30:099 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Intense
00:41:951 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:45:655 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lol lel, fixed i guess
01:23:988 (3) - Begin in 01:24:173 - same as in easy

sorry for this small mod Don´t worry!

Thanks for the mod!

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-27T02:39:00+00:00

[Insane]

00:01:211 (1,2) - 1/2 Slider + circle

[Hard]

Fine~

[Normal]

01:02:507 - Add circle
01:03:988 - ^
01:08:433 - ^
01:09:914 - ^
01:19:173 - ^

[Easy]

Fine~

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2015-12-27T03:34:40+00:00

Dono027 wrote:
[Insane]

00:01:211 (1,2) - 1/2 Slider + circle I want to keep the 1/1 slider so it doesn't feel like a fast start

[Hard]

Fine~

[Normal]

01:02:507 - Add circle
01:03:988 - ^
01:08:433 - ^
01:09:914 - ^
01:19:173 - ^ Sorry but I don't want to add that much single notes since it's a normal diff.

[Easy]

Fine~

Thanks for modding but since it was a bit short and I didn't change anything I shouldn't give you a kds

Thanks anyway!

Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2015-12-28T08:34:56+00:00

w/e thing

[Easy]
00:44:173 (1) - this isn't even since the last anchor is below the first anchor ._.

[Normal]
00:05:655 (1,1) - This overlaps so yeah
00:16:396 (2,3,4) - This is pretty clumped up imo, try to make it similar to 00:22:321 (2,3,4) - where there's enough room to make things like, actually look nice
00:24:729 (1,2) - Having 2 a slightly rotated version of one kinda looks a bit bad imo, I think it would just be better if you ctrl j'd it
00:27:136 (3,5) - Overlap kinda shows so eh
01:20:840 (3,6) - Slight overlap but w/e
00:33:803 (3) - kinda don't get why the head of this doesn't have a finish since it's like that in the music but w/e
01:13:803 (1) - Don't understand why there's no deviation in spacing here even though this is a powerful note, so ._.
01:16:395 (4,5,1) - Don't really understand why 4 has the larger spacing when 1 is stronger than it but yeah
01:25:470 (6) - You could have this w/ bigger spacing since it's the last, and a powerful note

[Insane]
00:22:507 (3,4) - This antijump doesn't make sense
00:33:433 (6) - Finish?
00:47:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like the spacing here is a bit overdone since it's like, basically higher than some of the parts in the kiai time, the most energetic part of the song lol

i'm done here since I like modded four diffs instead of 3 lol

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2015-12-28T13:36:38+00:00

Battle wrote:
w/e thing

[Easy]
00:44:173 (1) - this isn't even since the last anchor is below the first anchor ._. fixed I think

[Normal]
00:05:655 (1,1) - This overlaps so yeah fixed
00:16:396 (2,3,4) - This is pretty clumped up imo, try to make it similar to 00:22:321 (2,3,4) - where there's enough room to make things like, actually look nice Changed a little so it has more space inbetween.
00:24:729 (1,2) - Having 2 a slightly rotated version of one kinda looks a bit bad imo, I think it would just be better if you ctrl j'd it fixed i think
00:27:136 (3,5) - Overlap kinda shows so eh I don't find an issue this overlap
01:20:840 (3,6) - Slight overlap but w/e same ^
00:33:803 (3) - kinda don't get why the head of this doesn't have a finish since it's like that in the music but w/e I don't feel like adding a finish would fit that good, mainly because there some others part where there's definitely a finish with the music like 00:35:099 (6) - & 00:36:581 (3) - so yeah maybe if I get another mod pointing this i can change it
Checking again, I think you're modding Hard diff here so yeah, I assumed you forgot to write it xD
01:13:803 (1) - Don't understand why there's no deviation in spacing here even though this is a powerful note, so ._. Changed
01:16:395 (4,5,1) - Don't really understand why 4 has the larger spacing when 1 is stronger than it but yeah fixed
01:25:470 (6) - You could have this w/ bigger spacing since it's the last, and a powerful note ok why not

[Insane]
00:22:507 (3,4) - This antijump doesn't make sense I don't think it hasn't any sense, since it goes with the clap/bass so yeah no change here
00:33:433 (6) - Finish? I don't here the music have a finish here, it's more like a clap
00:47:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like the spacing here is a bit overdone since it's like, basically higher than some of the parts in the kiai time, the most energetic part of the song lol These jumps are bigger than what it's in the kiai, but it is also a strong part so I think they fit good, I don't think it's thaaaat overdone, I just find them good to play.

i'm done here since I like modded four diffs instead of 3 lol

Thanks for the mod!

Kagetsu

796 posts

Joined March 2015

Kagetsu 2016-01-04T08:30:06+00:00

random mod cuz why not xd

[Bijuu]

00:04:173 (1) - quizas remover esto y convertirlo en un slider 1/1, iria mejor con la voz
00:11:396 (1,2) - spacing en 1x entre estas dos notas quizas? xd
00:15:840 (1) - quizas stackear esto con 00:15:099 (4) - ?
00:18:062 (4) - yo moveria esta nota un poco mas abajo, para que tuviera el mismo spacing con 00:17:322 (1) -
00:20:284 (1) - stackear con 00:19:729 (3) - quizas?
00:21:025 (4) - moveria esto un poco mas a la izq
00:21:766 (1) - no me gusta mucho la forma de este slider... es como muy redondo en comparacion a los que habias hecho antes
00:25:470 - añadir una nota aqui quizas xd
00:26:210 (1) - esto es raro... se escucha que la guitarra parte en 00:26:210 (1) - pero la voz en realidad comienza en 00:26:210 (1) - por lo que seria bueno empezar el slider desde ese punto y ademas poner el new combo ahi xd
00:27:784 (8) - esta nota la escucho overmapeada... quizas deberias borrarla
00:29:914 (4) - stack con 00:29:358 (1) - ?
00:32:136 (4) - esta nota tienes que spacearla mas o stackearla
00:44:358 (2) - stack con 00:43:988 (5) - quizas? en realidad dejare de decir de los stacks... porque es una opinion personal y cada uno tiene su estilo xd
00:47:507 (3) - moveria esto para que tenga el mismo spacing con 00:46:210 (3,4) -
00:54:173 (4,3) - se overlapean un poco
01:07:691 (4) - stackeala o spacing
01:13:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - este stream se ve super desordenado D:
01:16:673 (8) - overmap?
01:19:544 (6) - spacing
01:20:840 (5) - lo mismo que el slider del principio... lo siento muy redondo xD

Buena suerte!

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-01-04T23:27:47+00:00

Yo

Kagetsu wrote:
random mod cuz why not xd omg thanks <3

[Bijuu]
00:04:173 (1) - quizas remover esto y convertirlo en un slider 1/1, iria mejor con la voz Le quité el reverse y cambié un poco el pattern, ahora quedó mejor
00:11:396 (1,2) - spacing en 1x entre estas dos notas quizas? xd Encuentro que está bien así, como que va aumentando la distancia de a poco.
00:15:840 (1) - quizas stackear esto con 00:15:099 (4) - ?
00:18:062 (4) - yo moveria esta nota un poco mas abajo, para que tuviera el mismo spacing con 00:17:322 (1) - Oki
00:20:284 (1) - stackear con 00:19:729 (3) - quizas?
00:21:025 (4) - moveria esto un poco mas a la izq no estaría mal
00:21:766 (1) - no me gusta mucho la forma de este slider... es como muy redondo en comparacion a los que habias hecho antes Ahí quedó mejor imo
00:25:470 - añadir una nota aqui quizas xd Aquí estoy siguiendo la batería por lo que sería raro agregar una nota ahí xd así que nop
00:26:210 (1) - esto es raro... se escucha que la guitarra parte en 00:26:210 (1) - pero la voz en realidad comienza en 00:26:210 (1) - por lo que seria bueno empezar el slider desde ese punto y ademas poner el new combo ahi xd Si xD es rara esa parte porque la guitarra parte antes, pero siento que es mejor partir desde 00:26:210 - que desde donde tú dices, no sé, siento que queda mejor seguir la guitarra ahí en vez de las vocales.
00:27:784 (8) - esta nota la escucho overmapeada... quizas deberias borrarla Básicamente le agregué ese triple para darle énfasis a las vocales, así como creo haber agregado otro por ahí también en otras diffs, de momento la voy a dejar así, pero si me molestan mucho lo sacaré xd
00:29:914 (4) - stack con 00:29:358 (1) - ?
00:32:136 (4) - esta nota tienes que spacearla mas o stackearla No encuentro un motivo tan fuerte para cambiarlo, a mí me gustan ese tipo de stack con un poco más de espacio :c
00:44:358 (2) - stack con 00:43:988 (5) - quizas? en realidad dejare de decir de los stacks... porque es una opinion personal y cada uno tiene su estilo xd Jaja tienes razón, todos esos stacks los puse a consciencia porque me gustan xD así que no creo que los cambie
00:47:507 (3) - moveria esto para que tenga el mismo spacing con 00:46:210 (3,4) - Al cambiarlo, le cambié el pattern a los jumps, así que eso xd ahora me gusta más como quedó
00:54:173 (4,3) - se overlapean un poco La verdad me da flojera cambiar cosas ahí, además de que no queda mal así que no hay cambio xd (igual cambié un poco la parte que venía después o:)
01:07:691 (4) - stackeala o spacing
01:13:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - este stream se ve super desordenado D: D: es un desorden hecho a propósito xd a mí me gusta como queda
01:16:673 (8) - overmap? Lo mismo que dije antes
01:19:544 (6) - spacing fixed
01:20:840 (5) - lo mismo que el slider del principio... lo siento muy redondo xD Este lo encuentro bien, ya que como que construye el camino a la siguiente nota
Buena suerte! Gracias

Gracias por el random mod

AIR315

645 posts

Joined May 2011

AIR315 2016-01-05T08:26:29+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qHk1-e3pMDQ

Maybe you can put a video like this?

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-01-05T10:57:27+00:00

AIR315 wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qHk1-e3pMDQ

Maybe you can put a video like this?

Some months ago I received a mod where it included a video so yeah, now I added it (I thought it was too heavy but meh, it's ok lol)

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-01-10T16:12:43+00:00

We've made a quick mod on insane difficulty + I've did a testplay on the whole map
Here's the log:

06:38 iYiyo: Hi byby o/ can I request you a quick mod or a testplay?
06:39 ByBy13: a testplay is fine
06:40 iYiyo: yey :D
06:40 *iYiyo is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/750648 YAMAZARU - Kaze]
06:51 iYiyo: jeje
06:51 ByBy13: uwu
06:52 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/763571 YAMAZARU - Kaze [Insane]]
06:53 ByBy13: 00:25:099 (1,2)- the guitars are stronger here but you've used less spacing which is like an antijump
06:53 ByBy13: so why not use a jump here giving an emphasis for these stronger guitars>
06:53 ByBy13: ?
06:53 iYiyo: yeah I should keep consistency there
06:56 ByBy13: 00:49:729 (5,6,7,1)- maybe a little jump would be good here since it looks a bit confusing to play and also the instruments are intensifyng here as I can see
06:58 iYiyo: well i was trying to decrease de spacing for every note, maybe i should change it
07:01 ByBy13: 00:52:877 (5)- this circle is placed randomly and also it doesn't look really clean here because it's overlapping with 00:52:321 (3)- and that overlap looks really unpleasant.You have to place the note somewhere but not randomly to avoid the unpleasant overlap
07:03 iYiyo: now that you say it, yeah
07:03 iYiyo: i'm gonna change there
07:04 ByBy13: okay
07:05 iYiyo: thanks! c:
07:05 ByBy13: np c:
07:07 ByBy13: 00:55:099(4,5)- maybe a jump here? this antijump seems a bit unpleasant to play and also there's the vocal's intensify so that intensify needs some emphasis
07:09 iYiyo: ooh seems a good idea
07:12 ByBy13: regarding the pattern from 00:53:803 (4,5)- , the vocals yeah are intensifyng but they're not really stronger to use a big jump for these sliders.I'd suggest to use the spacing like [https://gyazo.com/6bf4675e25aa19372cb88bf0e2767a2b here].It's still a jump but not one really big and let's say overdone
07:13 iYiyo: yeah i can reduce them a little
07:13 ByBy13: okay c:
07:13 iYiyo: a question, how do you add this url link on chat?
07:15 ByBy13: ctrl+v
07:18 ByBy13: 01:03:062 (5,6)- I think you can increase the spacing here a bit since the vocals are intensifying and not fading up
07:18 ByBy13: *fading out
07:22 ByBy13: this diff needs a lot of improving perhaps  a completely remapping.You have to revise all your jumps and antijumps
07:23 iYiyo: remapping? :s
07:23 ByBy13: perhaps
07:25 iYiyo: oh :c i didn't knew it was that bad
07:25 ByBy13: well it looks to be bad
07:25 ByBy13: but improving this diff and the other diffs it will looks more better

It still needs much improvement if you want to get it ranked.
Good luck!

LostRedX

24 posts

Joined November 2014

LostRedX 2016-01-10T20:28:11+00:00

Mods

01:02:877 (4,5) - Maybe switch the two circles to avoid it feeling awkward.

Good Map, I'll be playing this when it gets ranked.

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-01-11T18:30:47+00:00

LostRedX wrote:
Mods

01:02:877 (4,5) - Maybe switch the two circles to avoid it feeling awkward.

Good Map, I'll be playing this when it gets ranked.

I assumed you're talking about Bijuu diff lol No change because switching those would change the flow, and that would be awkward to play imo.
Thanks for the kind words!

Silent Spica

74 posts

Joined May 2014

Silent Spica 2016-01-11T20:17:01+00:00

useless chatlog mod (Bijuu)

16:05 Silent Spica: 01:07:877 (1,2,3,4,5) -
16:05 Silent Spica: esto se ve algo raro
16:05 Silent Spica: por qué no intetas crear una estrella uniforme?
16:05 Silent Spica: intentas
16:07 iYiyo: lo veo altiro
16:07 iYiyo: xd
16:07 Silent Spica: 00:11:396 (1,2,3,4,5) -
16:08 Silent Spica: esto no fluye muy bien, ya que el ritmo sigue siendo igual
16:08 Silent Spica: quizás intentaste enfatizar algo
16:09 Silent Spica: por ejemplo, podrías seguir movimiento direccional de estos patrones
16:09 Silent Spica: el movimiento*
16:09 Silent Spica: 00:10:655 (2,3,4,5,6) -
16:09 Silent Spica: en vez de interrumpir el salto con un slider en la dirección contraria
16:09 *Silent Spica is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/750648 YAMAZARU - Kaze [Bijuu]]
16:10 Silent Spica: esta diff por cierto
16:12 Silent Spica: mira
16:13 Silent Spica: 00:11:396 (1) - prueba rotando este slider 65* y ponlo en posición x120 y176
16:14 iYiyo: mmm
16:14 Silent Spica: retulizas la posición
16:14 Silent Spica: 00:11:210 (6) -
16:15 Silent Spica: si te fijas, fluye un poco mejor
16:15 Silent Spica: reutilizas
16:16 Silent Spica: 00:40:284 (3,4,5) -
16:16 Silent Spica: si te fijas aquí
16:16 iYiyo: porque la insane me dijeron que hasta tenía que remappear :/
16:17 Silent Spica: te das cuenta que la cola del slider su dirección es hacia abajo?
16:17 Silent Spica: pero, adelante
16:17 iYiyo: sip
16:18 Silent Spica: cambias de forma abrupta la dirección
16:18 Silent Spica: considerando que el slider suponía que el siguiente hit
16:18 Silent Spica: podría seguir su misma dirección
16:19 Silent Spica: haces al jugar ejecutar un movmiento circular
16:19 Silent Spica: para luego ir en dirección contraria
16:19 Silent Spica: jugador*
16:19 Silent Spica: no se ve muy bien, quizás podrías considerar cambiar ese slider
16:19 Silent Spica: o la misma dirección de los siguientes patrones
16:19 Silent Spica: ya que da la impresión de que es algo random
16:20 iYiyo: podría trata de arreglar un poco la parte que viene
16:20 iYiyo: pero a mí me gusta ese slider, siento que le pega bien a las vocales ahí
16:21 Silent Spica: no puedo diferenciar mucho del kaiai al resto del mapa
16:21 Silent Spica: ya que los saltos en la mayor parte del tiempo son complejos
16:21 Silent Spica: donde en realidad se logra nota una diferencia es aquí
16:22 Silent Spica: 01:10:840 (1) -
16:22 Silent Spica: de aquí hacie adelante
16:22 Silent Spica: no sé si será intencional
16:22 iYiyo: sip
16:23 iYiyo: a partir de esa parte la canción tiene como más energía
16:23 iYiyo: así que por eso lo puse un poquito más "difícil" a partir de ahí
16:23 Silent Spica: 01:07:877 (1,2,3,4,5) -
16:24 Silent Spica: aquí podrías intentar crear una estrella uniforme
16:24 Silent Spica: ya que pareciera que intentaste hacer una estrella random
16:28 Silent Spica: 00:50:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
16:28 Silent Spica: estos patroens fluyen muy bien
16:28 Silent Spica: patrones
16:29 Silent Spica: 00:58:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
16:29 Silent Spica: este patrón
16:30 iYiyo: así que está bien
16:30 Silent Spica: ese patrón
16:30 Silent Spica: deberías moverle a x171 y271
16:30 Silent Spica: no entiendo por qué está en esa posición
16:30 Silent Spica: siendo que es un patrón que utiliza simetría
16:31 iYiyo: a la derecha dices tú?
16:31 Silent Spica: yep
16:31 Silent Spica: intenta llegar a ese eje
16:31 Silent Spica: que te indiqué
16:32 Silent Spica: de hecho
16:32 Silent Spica: te sale más fácil hacerlo así
16:32 Silent Spica: toma el patrón y ponlo en la posición de
16:32 Silent Spica: 01:01:395 (4) -
16:33 iYiyo: jaja verdad
16:33 iYiyo: sale de una
16:34 Silent Spica: deberías considerar cambiar este stream
16:34 Silent Spica: no fluye muy bien o mejor dicho, podría hacerlo mejor
16:34 Silent Spica: 01:13:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
16:35 Silent Spica: entiendo lo que intentaste hacer, pero déjame mostrar una pequeña idea
16:53 Silent Spica: el tema es que comprimas los primeros 4 hits del stream y luego alargas la cola en 0,6
16:53 iYiyo: pero qué querías hacer?
16:53 Silent Spica: así sigue la misma dirección del salto
16:54 iYiyo: creo que te cacho
16:54 iYiyo: la cola que sea curvada?
16:54 Silent Spica: podría ser recta
16:54 Silent Spica: de izquierda a derecha
16:55 iYiyo: 01:13:247 (4,5,6) -
16:55 Silent Spica: puta, deja cachar si hay algún mapa con el patrón
16:55 iYiyo: estos 3 comprimidos
16:55 Silent Spica: proque no puedo hacerlo
16:55 iYiyo: y el resto más separado sería la idea?
16:55 Silent Spica: síp
16:55 Silent Spica: obviamente no overlapeados
16:55 Silent Spica: el resto tendrías que rotarlos un poco
16:55 Silent Spica: rotarlo
16:56 Silent Spica: y pones el final del stream aquí
16:56 Silent Spica: 01:14:173 (3) -
16:56 iYiyo: a qué te refieres con overlapeados?
16:56 Silent Spica: así salta al 4
16:56 Silent Spica: no entre sí me refiero, sino que se vean
16:56 Silent Spica: o sino quedarían mal
16:57 Silent Spica: pero no sé si cachas la idea
16:57 iYiyo: aa dale
16:57 iYiyo: dale dale
16:57 iYiyo: si si cahco
16:57 Silent Spica: quedaría ahí el final del stream
16:57 Silent Spica: y si tefijas
16:57 Silent Spica: 01:14:173 (3) -
16:57 Silent Spica: sigue el patrón siguiente
16:57 iYiyo: pero de donde tendría que empezar?
16:58 Silent Spica: 'un poco más arriba de donde comienza
16:58 Silent Spica: actualmente
16:58 Silent Spica: tu stream
16:58 Silent Spica: para que cuando termine, llegue en el 3 del siguiente patrón
16:58 Silent Spica: en esa posición
16:59 iYiyo: no logro ver cómo va a llegar al 3
16:59 iYiyo: osea como que quedaría muy cerca
17:00 Silent Spica: me refiero
17:00 Silent Spica: para que llegue a esa posición
17:00 Silent Spica: comprimes los 3 primeros y el 2do lo alargas, debería quedar bien
17:00 Silent Spica: el tema es que cambias de dirección
17:01 Silent Spica: el stream se movería de izquierda a derecha
17:01 Silent Spica: y llegaría a esa posición, para luego completa el siguiente patrón
17:02 iYiyo: ya
17:02 iYiyo: más rato cuando empiece a editar haré algo y si te pillo te lo mandaré
17:02 Silent Spica: dale
17:02 iYiyo: para ver si era eso a lo que te referías
17:02 iYiyo: vale

micchi_chi

764 posts

Joined July 2013

micchi_chi 2016-01-12T10:50:45+00:00

Hey, from my modding Q
It's kinda late, thank you for waiting~

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]

Shouldn't this be (TV Size) ? Yes I know the rules said thing like you shouldn't add (TV Size) or (cut ver.) or anything else to the title but people still do it even nowadays (and it actually got ranked) so I don't really sure what happened to that rule xD
Combo color (3), use dark blue instead of purple.

[Easy]

00:07:136 (1,2) - This kinda cause polarity problem and it might be pretty hard to hit perfectly. So it should be better if you just remove (2) and add reverse to (1). It still covering the same background sound so it also very fit.
00:08:618 (2) - I'm not sure why but this seems not fit :/ I can't really find a way to make it more comfortable but maybe this'll works better (?) http://puu.sh/msOzc/020fa011ab.jpg I'm not really sure about (2) but I think you really better make (3) like that since there's a drum sound here 00:09:729 that pretty worth being mapped.
00:18:988 (3) - Try to do it like this http://puu.sh/msOFr/b80f0892cc.jpg it should fit better because here 00:18:988 is a lonely-suddenly-stop sound so it would be better to use circle there. Then, if you use reverse slider (currently) that lonely-suddenly-stop sound would be mixed with the dynamic-grouping sound here 00:19:359 and so on. Using single slider should be better to cover those sound (actually should be better if you end (4) here 00:20:099 but I'm not sure you want 1/2 distance on Easy). Furthermore, making (4) ends on red tick make a better polarity for the next note. Triple advantage~!
00:35:284 (1) - This and this 00:36:025 (2) - have the same sound but you make the rhythm different... It should be better if you just make them consistent (yes variation is good, but sometimes, consistent rhythm is better) either make all of them a 1/2 reverse slider or all of them a 1/1 slider. Personally I suggest to just use 1/1 slider since this is Easy.
00:35:099 00:36:581 BTW, a big ignored cymbal sound there .-. I think you better map that sound instead of the vocal here... To do that maybe you should change your rhythm tho...
00:38:247 (1) - Yeah, it feels late if you start the slider here (especially with cymbal hitsound at the head)... Damn, Easy is indeed troublesome -,-
00:41:210 (1,3) - Is the wiggle really necessary? xD it's alright if you keep tho, they're cute -w-
00:53:062 (1,2) - Satisfying as hell *^* Good job on blanketing them
00:58:247 (1,2,3) - Should be better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/msP4e/daecf009f1.jpg since the repeating sound actually starts here 00:58:618 so it feels more fitting that way. If you want to keep it ending with circle, just remove the last slider's reverse and add a circle.
01:04:914 (1) - Like this http://puu.sh/msP9N/1d3edcac56.jpg ? the current looks kinda... inappropriate (?) .-.
01:18:988 (4) - Maybe make this look like 01:18:247 (3) - but rotated 90° to make these 01:16:766 (1,2,3,4) - a complete square like pattern.
01:22:692 (1,2) - Ehh, blanket this xD
01:23:803 (2,3) - Like this should fit better http://puu.sh/msPiK/858424a3f7.jpg so slider (2) tail not fall on big white tick and the big white tick could be more emphasized with starting a slider. Furthermore, long slider (3) should cover the long vocal "ru" (from "shinjiteru") better.
Your sliders blankets are so satisfying *^*

[Normal]

00:05:285 (3) - Instead of placing this here where there's no sound at all (the only significant sound currently is vocal so you better obey it) better to place it here 00:05:470
00:08:803 (3) - better use 1/2 reverse slider here since the vocal at red tick is pretty big. Or following background sound? fine if so
00:18:988 (1,1) - This could be kinda confusing :/
00:23:803 (2,3) - This kinda messy and piling on each other. Would be tricky to hit. Loose them up a bit http://puu.sh/msPyV/acc9c6eb75.jpg (still bad x-x)
00:24:729 (1,2) - Oh, why the overlap x-x point (2) some other way so it won't overlap with (1). Even if this is on purpose, I don't recommend this since this would be tricky for beginner.
00:28:433 (5) - I don't usually comment on slider shape but this one should be better if it's a normal curve, try to make the curve higher http://puu.sh/msPER/86da305125.jpg Why? Well you see, I won't be able to explain this perfectly, but the vocal sound here indicate a "floating", "flying" sound that looks like a bridge (I'm weird, yeah) so it should fit better with a normal curve. Let the flow broken (it's actually not that broken xD)
00:45:470 Pretty big vocal sound here :/ add a note ?
00:49:914 ^ but a background sound this time, still big.
01:12:136 (1) - Maybe make the other end a curve to so it could mini-blanket 01:13:433 (2) -
01:20:840 (3) - Move this to the right a bit, look messy if you place it too to the left http://puu.sh/msPQ6/428295ec24.jpg

[Hard]

00:01:766 (2,3) - Adjust them a bit so (3) could like "blanket" (1) http://puu.sh/msPTI/71a467a68b.jpg
00:13:248 Start mapping here for Hard (and I hope you do so too for the harder diffs) to make a better leading to here 00:14:359 (1) -
00:19:544 Maybe add a note here to support the guitar sound
00:25:099 (1,2) - I like it better if they just stacked for these case...
00:44:173 (1) - Wave it to the other side for better flow from (8), and fix the shape a bit; try this technique http://puu.sh/msQ2h/00a47b6d50.jpg
Okay that's all

Overall nice map ^^
I'll end this here since I don't have much time currently x-x
Good luck~

iYiyo

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Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-01-12T16:39:11+00:00

hanyuu

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hey, from my modding Q
It's kinda late, thank you for waiting~ Don't worry!

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
Shouldn't this be (TV Size) ? Yes I know the rules said thing like you shouldn't add (TV Size) or (cut ver.) or anything else to the title but people still do it even nowadays (and it actually got ranked) so I don't really sure what happened to that rule xD Well I asked iamkwan and he said there's no TV size :s anyway I can recheck it
Combo color (3), use dark blue instead of purple. changed the color into something more "blue"

[Easy]
00:07:136 (1,2) - This kinda cause polarity problem and it might be pretty hard to hit perfectly. So it should be better if you just remove (2) and add reverse to (1). It still covering the same background sound so it also very fit. well i don't play easy that much but yeah beginners may have problem with polarity there, changed
00:08:618 (2) - I'm not sure why but this seems not fit :/ I can't really find a way to make it more comfortable but maybe this'll works better (?) http://puu.sh/msOzc/020fa011ab.jpg I'm not really sure about (2) but I think you really better make (3) like that since there's a drum sound here 00:09:729 that pretty worth being mapped. Umm I since it's an easy diff, it's not that necessary to cover all "notes" in the music, however I think that the "curve" in the slider (2) makes some emphasis with the drum u're saying in 00:09:729 -
00:18:988 (3) - Try to do it like this http://puu.sh/msOFr/b80f0892cc.jpg it should fit better because here 00:18:988 is a lonely-suddenly-stop sound so it would be better to use circle there. Then, if you use reverse slider (currently) that lonely-suddenly-stop sound would be mixed with the dynamic-grouping sound here 00:19:359 and so on. Using single slider should be better to cover those sound (actually should be better if you end (4) here 00:20:099 but I'm not sure you want 1/2 distance on Easy). Furthermore, making (4) ends on red tick make a better polarity for the next note. Triple advantage~! Followed your idea but did something a little bit different, I think it works good too ~
00:35:284 (1) - This and this 00:36:025 (2) - have the same sound but you make the rhythm different... It should be better if you just make them consistent (yes variation is good, but sometimes, consistent rhythm is better) either make all of them a 1/2 reverse slider or all of them a 1/1 slider. Personally I suggest to just use 1/1 slider since this is Easy. Umm I think you might be right, but I like how this follow music, as you say it gives more variaton so no change here
00:35:099 00:36:581 BTW, a big ignored cymbal sound there .-. I think you better map that sound instead of the vocal here... To do that maybe you should change your rhythm tho... Yeah i know there goes something but since it's an easy diff they tend to follow vocals more imo however if more mods say this should be changed, i will
00:38:247 (1) - Yeah, it feels late if you start the slider here (especially with cymbal hitsound at the head)... Damn, Easy is indeed troublesome -,- yeah x.x that's why I decided to follow vocals as I explained before
00:41:210 (1,3) - Is the wiggle really necessary? xD it's alright if you keep tho, they're cute -w- haha no it's not but i'll keep them, they're not difficult at all imo
00:53:062 (1,2) - Satisfying as hell *^* Good job on blanketing them Yey thanks!
00:58:247 (1,2,3) - Should be better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/msP4e/daecf009f1.jpg since the repeating sound actually starts here 00:58:618 so it feels more fitting that way. If you want to keep it ending with circle, just remove the last slider's reverse and add a circle. fixed
01:04:914 (1) - Like this http://puu.sh/msP9N/1d3edcac56.jpg ? the current looks kinda... inappropriate (?) .-. nice suggestion, changed
01:18:988 (4) - Maybe make this look like 01:18:247 (3) - but rotated 90° to make these 01:16:766 (1,2,3,4) - a complete square like pattern. I dont wan't to lose 01:18:988 (4,1) - this pattern but rotated 01:18:247 (3) - for symmetry
01:22:692 (1,2) - Ehh, blanket this xD fixed
01:23:803 (2,3) - Like this should fit better http://puu.sh/msPiK/858424a3f7.jpg so slider (2) tail not fall on big white tick and the big white tick could be more emphasized with starting a slider. Furthermore, long slider (3) should cover the long vocal "ru" (from "shinjiteru") better. Umm I tried but I think starting (3) at 01:24:173 - is not a good idea, it doesn't fit good imo, however I extended (2) so it's better now.
Your sliders blankets are so satisfying *^* thanks!

[Normal]
00:05:285 (3) - Instead of placing this here where there's no sound at all (the only significant sound currently is vocal so you better obey it) better to place it here 00:05:470 fixed
00:08:803 (3) - better use 1/2 reverse slider here since the vocal at red tick is pretty big. Or following background sound? fine if so I feel like i'm doing it too fast if i add a reverse instead so no change here
00:18:988 (1,1) - This could be kinda confusing :/ yes and no, i can change it into a curved slider but meh i really want to keep it since it's not thaaat confusing
00:23:803 (2,3) - This kinda messy and piling on each other. Would be tricky to hit. Loose them up a bit http://puu.sh/msPyV/acc9c6eb75.jpg (still bad x-x) it's a little bit messy but it has not a bad gameplay imo
00:24:729 (1,2) - Oh, why the overlap x-x point (2) some other way so it won't overlap with (1). Even if this is on purpose, I don't recommend this since this would be tricky for beginner. meh i don't want to change the overlap :c maybe I don't understand "beginner's mind" but if I get more mods poiting it I'll change it for sure
00:28:433 (5) - I don't usually comment on slider shape but this one should be better if it's a normal curve, try to make the curve higher http://puu.sh/msPER/86da305125.jpg Why? Well you see, I won't be able to explain this perfectly, but the vocal sound here indicate a "floating", "flying" sound that looks like a bridge (I'm weird, yeah) so it should fit better with a normal curve. Let the flow broken (it's actually not that broken xD) Yeah I think I understand you when you say bridge xD changed
00:45:470 Pretty big vocal sound here :/ add a note ? well yeah I added a note now but it feels a little bit crowded, anyways i changed it xd
00:49:914 ^ but a background sound this time, still big. ^
01:12:136 (1) - Maybe make the other end a curve to so it could mini-blanket 01:13:433 (2) - sorry but I dont know how i can make this blanket 2 D:
01:20:840 (3) - Move this to the right a bit, look messy if you place it too to the left http://puu.sh/msPQ6/428295ec24.jpg fixed

[Hard]
00:01:766 (2,3) - Adjust them a bit so (3) could like "blanket" (1) http://puu.sh/msPTI/71a467a68b.jpg changed
00:13:248 Start mapping here for Hard (and I hope you do so too for the harder diffs) to make a better leading to here 00:14:359 (1) - good idea
00:19:544 Maybe add a note here to support the guitar sound I don't want to crowd this part with too many single notes
00:25:099 (1,2) - I like it better if they just stacked for these case... I like this kind of stack, and it also fits good so no change
00:44:173 (1) - Wave it to the other side for better flow from (8), and fix the shape a bit; try this technique http://puu.sh/msQ2h/00a47b6d50.jpg I tried but I prefer keeping the actual flow from (1) to (2).
Okay that's all

Overall nice map ^^ Thanks!
I'll end this here since I don't have much time currently x-x
Good luck~

Thanks for the time & the mod!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2016-01-26T05:02:17+00:00

BIGJHEH:
00:26:210 (1) - It would be better to just have these as 2 notes. The accents of the melodic line have the accent on white ticks.
00:32:136 (4) - why is this reduced spacing if it is an impact point? Apply to all similar patterns.

It's mostly fine. I just wish there was a lot more consistency with your spacing, when jumps are only used to emphasize impact points, instead of just used whenever.

Insane:
fine

Hard:
00:10:285 - I believe for all diffs that you map, they have to have the same breaks. It shouldn't be too hard to map something here (or just have a spinner, lol). Apply this for all other diffs

Normal:
00:38:988 (2) - Raise this so it's parallel with (1)

The note density of this is REALLY dense. Which I guess you did to fix the star rating spread, but it can get REALLY heavy sometimes. In especially streamy parts, consider removing a note or two to make it not feel really crowded.

Easy:
00:57:877 (3) - clap owo

Sorry for the short mod. It's a good map otherwise, not much to say, at least things that I care enough to say, lol

Kudosu stars to make up for my short mod lol

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2016-01-26T21:40:05+00:00

Reditum wrote:

BIGJHEH: lol xd
00:26:210 (1) - It would be better to just have these as 2 notes. The accents of the melodic line have the accent on white ticks. Yeah but right there i'm following guitar and think is good imo
00:32:136 (4) - why is this reduced spacing if it is an impact point? Apply to all similar patterns. Because i like how it is stacked there. I know it's a strong beat but I want to keep that playstyle. Sorry if I sounded rude

It's mostly fine. I just wish there was a lot more consistency with your spacing, when jumps are only used to emphasize impact points, instead of just used whenever.

Insane:
fine

Hard:
00:10:285 - I believe for all diffs that you map, they have to have the same breaks. It shouldn't be too hard to map something here (or just have a spinner, lol). Apply this for all other diffs okay

Normal:
00:38:988 (2) - Raise this so it's parallel with (1) fixed

The note density of this is REALLY dense. Which I guess you did to fix the star rating spread, but it can get REALLY heavy sometimes. In especially streamy parts, consider removing a note or two to make it not feel really crowded. Now I think it's less dense, removed a few notes and did some 2 notes into sliders.

Easy:
00:57:877 (3) - clap owo sure

Sorry for the short mod. It's a good map otherwise, not much to say, at least things that I care enough to say, lol

Kudosu stars to make up for my short mod lol

Thanks for the mod and the stars

killerline10168

5 posts

Joined July 2013

killerline10168 2017-01-23T19:43:08+00:00

Hazu's Hard
Awesome map IMO. One thing that semi bugged me was randomly somewhere after the beginning, drum sounds come in from nowhere and then from there they just pop up kinda randomly. It feels a little weird IMO. Like, first one comes, then 2 seconds later there's two more, then another set comes later so on. Like there's a spacing between them, do you get me?

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-01-26T23:53:21+00:00

Just realized that I didn't apply KwaN's metadata correctly lol. Gonna double check though.

After 2 years of submitting this map, I think it's time to take it seriously and try to rank it.

Until this date 40sp were from mods and 11sp from kds stars, so 40sp should be substracted from the sp count.

@Updated.

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2017-01-27T18:21:59+00:00

would you like to add my Insane??
check out my version. >> http://osu.ppy.sh/s/358223

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-01-27T19:03:29+00:00

sure! Just send me the diff copied into the current set.

KantoKun

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Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2017-02-05T21:21:01+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
sure! Just send me the diff copied into the current set.

OKAY

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-02-06T03:42:04+00:00

All diffs are up now. Need to add hitsounds on easy & bijuu though. (Maybe i'm gonna copy one of yours o:)

@Hazu: Están listos tus hs? Dijiste que faltaban los whistles creo D:

@Kanto: I see you use S:C3 but you didn't give me any 3 samepleset D: intended?

@Mugihas: Hi

After that I'm gonna polish Bijuu a bit more and then mods will be coming I guess.

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-06T21:56:23+00:00

killerline10168 wrote:
Hazu's Hard
Awesome map IMO. One thing that semi bugged me was randomly somewhere after the beginning, drum sounds come in from nowhere and then from there they just pop up kinda randomly. It feels a little weird IMO. Like, first one comes, then 2 seconds later there's two more, then another set comes later so on. Like there's a spacing between them, do you get me?

Sorry, I don't understand what you mean x.x

iYiyo wrote:
@Hazu: Están listos tus hs? Dijiste que faltaban los whistles creo D:

Ay, ahora mismo estoy sin internet y tengo muchas cosas que entregar, yo cacho que mañana te paso mi diff con los hs.

Edit:

Poi

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Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2017-02-11T11:01:08+00:00

hayo

*why every greenline have 50% volume ? xd

ez

- 00:14:359 (1,2) - nazi blanket kinda off, try mayb 334/169 on 00:15:840 (2) - ?
- 00:19:729 (4,1) - are you sure using 1/2 snaps on easy? i prefer to do something something rhythm like http://puu.sh/tYe98/c115f30a77.jpg
- 00:48:618 (2,3) - i guess this should be stacked, right? xd
- 01:07:507 (4) - 01:12:692 (2) - there is also crash finish sound !!!
- 01:10:840 (1,1) - 01:21:210 (2) - 01:24:173 (3) - tbh whistles on heads feels better than finishes tho uwu

nm

- ahh why no od 4 and hp 4 ? fits better with spread dude!!
- same thing about finishes and whistles as in easy
- 01:10:840 (1) - ? don't really get the idea with spinning this part lol, especially when easy even don't have it

hazu

- try using higher od, like 6 or smth, 5 looks really small tho
- nice diff c:

insane c

- 00:11:025 - why no mapping this beat, good vocal beat, so why not?
- 00:40:285 (4,5) - don't you think that the spacing might be too big comparing to other objects?
^ 00:43:248 (4,5) - this feels more acceptable cuz less ds and it flows pretty well.
- ok 00:46:766 (5) - why finish here and why 00:46:951 (6) - clap here LOL, remove them please ;w;
- 01:01:396 (4) - not very powerful, so reducing spacing will be cool imo.

kanto

* 00:01:211 (1) - volume conflict, please fix it!!
- you should also change ur OD to 7,5 or 8, cuz already collab insane have od 7
- 01:21:025 (5,1) - i've noticed this while playing and the spacing feels kinda edgy tho, 476/64 should fix this :3
- pretty

bijuu meme

- 01:12:877 (4,6) - perhaps using NC on 4 or 6 for reading and also to avoid 10 number combo w
- hitsounds suggestion applies also here
- otherwise cool diff

and that's all. sorry for shit mod ><

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2017-02-11T18:30:52+00:00

m4m from your q, sorry for shitmod this map is fine as it is

[easy]

00:48:618 (2) - maybe rotate this slider a bit for a smoother angle coming off of 00:47:136 (1) -
01:00:099 (2) - i think think this slider end should be clickable considering how much the music emphasises this sound
01:13:803 (1) - maybe make the anchor on this slider line up with the snare sound?
01:29:359 - lol you have a two greenlines here, one is 1ms before, remove one to fix the hitsound not being at 5%

[normal]

od3.5/hp3.5 for linear spear between ez/nm/hd
this ds is a bit meh imo because there are sometimes overlaps on the circle shadows in default skin like here 00:15:840 (4,5) -
00:21:210 (3) - maybe make anchored slider for a fake blanket on 00:20:285 (1) - ?
01:10:840 (1) - this feels kinda strange just being in the middle of the chorus, especially when the extended vocal doesnt even start until the red tick here 01:12:136 -
01:29:359 - same as easy

[hard]

00:23:248 (1,2) - fix parallel
00:39:359 (4,1) - not sure about this increase in spacing, i don't really think the vocals warrant it that much, i would reduce it to 1.7 or something
00:40:840 (4,1) - same (and same for the rest of this section)

cool

[insane numba 1]

uh idk about the whistles xd, personal preference i guess
00:32:322 (1) - unintentional finish i think, theres no cymbal here and you dont double cymbal anywhere else in this part
00:48:988 (2) - missing cymbal i think, theres one in the music and its the only one you miss in this part
01:16:025 (5) - move this up a bit for a cleaner star shape
01:17:692 (3,1) - nazi blanket

[insane numba 2]

00:31:581 (4) - this spacing is insanely high for what the music is, especially when the more intense vocals here 00:31:210 (2,3) - have way less than this
01:17:322 (2,3) - this triple is inconsistent with the rest of the 2nd kiai, maybe remove for consistency since it could be seen as a bit random

cool

gl!

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,085 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2017-02-11T21:52:50+00:00

from your mod queue
my map again: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/531385
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love that song
Normal
01:10:840 (1) - it's quite weird when you decide to skip this part in normal while you map this part in easy
01:19:729 (1) - you can rotate it anti-clockwise and put it around 132|44 for a better flow

Hard
00:15:470 (4,5) - As 00:15:470 (4) - and 00:15:655 (5) - is drum beat, so i think separate them would be better to emphasize that difference

Kanto
00:18:988 - the incrasing tune is here, so i think it's better to change the rhythm a little bit to make nc set at here
00:40:099 (3,4) - you can use the same rhythm you used at 00:43:062 (3,4) - to follow the vocal better
00:46:025 (3,4,5) - ^( 00:43:062 (3,4,5) - )

Bijuu
00:11:766 (1) - that overmap is a little weird imo, i think you dont need to keep the 1-2 structure, just remove that would be better

good luck!

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-02-25T17:36:38+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
hayo

*why every greenline have 50% volume ? xd gonna fix it soon xd

ez

- 00:14:359 (1,2) - nazi blanket kinda off, try mayb 334/169 on 00:15:840 (2) - ?
- 00:19:729 (4,1) - are you sure using 1/2 snaps on easy? i prefer to do something something rhythm like http://puu.sh/tYe98/c115f30a77.jpg Sometimes music really support this kind of 1/2 so yeah.. don't feel like changing it
- 00:48:618 (2,3) - i guess this should be stacked, right? xd
- 01:07:507 (4) - 01:12:692 (2) - there is also crash finish sound !!!
- 01:10:840 (1,1) - 01:21:210 (2) - 01:24:173 (3) - tbh whistles on heads feels better than finishes tho uwu

nm

- ahh why no od 4 and hp 4 ? fits better with spread dude!!
- same thing about finishes and whistles as in easy
- 01:10:840 (1) - ? don't really get the idea with spinning this part lol, especially when easy even don't have it x.x old mapping xd gonna delete spin

bijuu meme

- 01:12:877 (4,6) - perhaps using NC on 4 or 6 for reading and also to avoid 10 number combo w
- hitsounds suggestion applies also here
- otherwise cool diff

and that's all. sorry for shit mod >< applied almost everything so no shit mod

Log Off Now wrote:
m4m from your q, sorry for shitmod this map is fine as it is

[easy]

00:48:618 (2) - maybe rotate this slider a bit for a smoother angle coming off of 00:47:136 (1) -
01:00:099 (2) - i think think this slider end should be clickable considering how much the music emphasises this sound Since it's an easy diff i don't really want to add that much circles. Kinda agree that it should be clickable but better for higher diffs
01:13:803 (1) - maybe make the anchor on this slider line up with the snare sound? could work better, but wanna keep this shape since it's from my old mapping :d
01:29:359 - lol you have a two greenlines here, one is 1ms before, remove one to fix the hitsound not being at 5% wtf im dumb xd

[normal]

od3.5/hp3.5 for linear spear between ez/nm/hd ended by doing what kalibe mentioned
this ds is a bit meh imo because there are sometimes overlaps on the circle shadows in default skin like here 00:15:840 (4,5) -
00:21:210 (3) - maybe make anchored slider for a fake blanket on 00:20:285 (1) - ?
01:10:840 (1) - this feels kinda strange just being in the middle of the chorus, especially when the extended vocal doesnt even start until the red tick here 01:12:136 -
01:29:359 - same as easy

gl!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
from your mod queue
my map again: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/531385
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love that song <3<3<3
Normal
01:10:840 (1) - it's quite weird when you decide to skip this part in normal while you map this part in easy
01:19:729 (1) - you can rotate it anti-clockwise and put it around 132|44 for a better flow prefer my current shape

Bijuu
00:11:766 (1) - that overmap is a little weird imo, i think you dont need to keep the 1-2 structure, just remove that would be better

good luck!

no comment/reply = fixed

Thanks for mods!!

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2017-02-26T01:54:55+00:00

http://puu.sh/ujSnh/49034d54cf.jpg
creo que ya habia hecho eso antes

[Easy]

00:08:618 (2) - tiene mas sentido si le quitas la reversa y pones 2 circulos a 1/1 porque hay sonidos en los ticks blancos que te saltas con el slider xd
00:14:359 (1) - podrias hacer lo mismo que aca 00:20:285 (1,2) - funciona mejor xd
00:25:099 (3,4) - puede que no rompa el ds pero el spacing visual lo hace medio confuso. al menos yo en dificultades bajas me gusta seguir un "camino" claro donde se note bien la distancia entre las notas no se si me explico bien xd
00:27:877 (3) - hay varias cosas que te saltas con este slider. podrias usar un 3/2 con una reversa asi al menos no te saltas la voz en 00:28:433 -
00:29:358 (1) - ^ casi lo mismo. el bpm es bajo asi que te puedes permitir hacer la diff un poco mas densa para no saltarte tantas cosas. eso aplicaria a todas las demas partes que son muy 2/1
00:58:988 (1,2) - podria ser 2 sliders 1/1 y un circulo asi harias clickeable los ticks que tienen vocals y el cymbal del downbeat
01:01:951 (1,2) - otra parte donde la densidad es muy baja, asi casi no sigue nada de la cancion xd lo peor es que el kiai esta lleno de eso

[Normal]

ponle cs3 para poder hacerlo hddthr
01:24:544 (4) - no se bien que esta siguiendo esto y la forma me triggerea xd
no hay nada que este muy mal aunque podrias hacer mas cosas como esta 01:16:766 (1,2) - que tus ritmos estan casi todos en los ticks blancos y como sigues la bateria se hace muy monotono xd

[Hazu's Hard]

od6 pls
me molesta que uses esos hitsounds que suenan como kicks al principio siendo que la cancion no tiene kicks. podrias usar los soft whistles default
01:00:470 (1,2,3,4) - e
esta bien supongo, no me gusto que usaras tanto spacing si xd

[Collab Insane]

idk if its intentional or not but all these drum whistles are triggering me so hard
00:39:729 (2) - would be cool to have something clickable here cuz downbeat
01:04:173 (3,4) - theres nothing worth clicking on 01:04:544 (4) - so u better ctrl g this rhythm to make vocals clickable
01:10:840 (1,2,3) - me triggerea que te hayas saltado todas esas vocals
01:21:210 (1) - ^
al mugi le dio paja terminar la diff y la terminaste tu cierto xd. al menos desde aca 01:07:877 (1) - se que lo mapeaste tu no se bien si lo de antes era tuyo igual xd

[Kanto's Insane]

00:14:914 (2,3,4) - proritizing redticks over whiteticks is good when the music supports it which is not the case. i suggest to ctrl g this rhythm 00:14:914 (2,3) - and make this snare clickable 00:15:655 (5) - that follows the song better than the current rhythm. you did this like everywhere so better fix the others too
most rhythms on this difficulty are triggering me specially the random triples on kiai. you can look at the other diffs for rhythm references or i can point out everything if u want

me da paja modear la otra diff gl

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-26T02:30:03+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
hayo

hazu

- try using higher od, like 6 or smth, 5 looks really small tho ok
- nice diff c: Thanks~

and that's all. sorry for shit mod ><

Log Off Now wrote:
m4m from your q, sorry for shitmod this map is fine as it is

[hard]

00:23:248 (1,2) - fix parallel Fixed.
00:39:359 (4,1) - not sure about this increase in spacing, i don't really think the vocals warrant it that much, i would reduce it to 1.7 or something I like to have more spacing to emphasize NC.
00:40:840 (4,1) - same (and same for the rest of this section) Same.

cool Thanks~

gl!

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
from your mod queue
my map again: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/531385
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love that song
Hard
00:15:470 (4,5) - As 00:15:470 (4) - and 00:15:655 (5) - is drum beat, so i think separate them would be better to emphasize that difference I don't think there are any problems with this.

good luck!

pkhg wrote:
http://puu.sh/ujSnh/49034d54cf.jpg
creo que ya habia hecho eso antes

[Hazu's Hard]
od6 pls no
me molesta que uses esos hitsounds que suenan como kicks al principio siendo que la cancion no tiene kicks. podrias usar los soft whistles default quizá lo haga después, que paja cambiarlos
01:00:470 (1,2,3,4) - e xd
esta bien supongo, no me gusto que usaras tanto spacing si xd es que me iba a quedar con poco sr y me da paja buscar mas formas de subir el sr xd no me gusta tener muchos circulos seguidos en hard
me da paja modear la otra diff gl

Thanks~

Poi

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pkhg

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pkhg 2017-02-26T09:20:47+00:00

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Hazu-

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Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-26T14:10:06+00:00

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osu file format v14

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-02-27T17:48:45+00:00

pkhg wrote:
http://puu.sh/ujSnh/49034d54cf.jpg
creo que ya habia hecho eso antes

[Easy]
00:08:618 (2) - tiene mas sentido si le quitas la reversa y pones 2 circulos a 1/1 porque hay sonidos en los ticks blancos que te saltas con el slider xd quizás, pero no quiero llenar de círculos, la diff en general es demasiado fácil xd parece beginner la wea
00:14:359 (1) - podrias hacer lo mismo que aca 00:20:285 (1,2) - funciona mejor xd no caché, te referí al ritmo? son lo mismo :d
00:25:099 (3,4) - puede que no rompa el ds pero el spacing visual lo hace medio confuso. al menos yo en dificultades bajas me gusta seguir un "camino" claro donde se note bien la distancia entre las notas no se si me explico bien xd
00:27:877 (3) - hay varias cosas que te saltas con este slider. podrias usar un 3/2 con una reversa asi al menos no te saltas la voz en 00:28:433 -
00:29:358 (1) - ^ casi lo mismo. el bpm es bajo asi que te puedes permitir hacer la diff un poco mas densa para no saltarte tantas cosas. eso aplicaria a todas las demas partes que son muy 2/1 dejaría de ser la diff que es enrealidad xd
00:58:988 (1,2) - podria ser 2 sliders 1/1 y un circulo asi harias clickeable los ticks que tienen vocals y el cymbal del downbeat
01:01:951 (1,2) - otra parte donde la densidad es muy baja, asi casi no sigue nada de la cancion xd lo peor es que el kiai esta lleno de eso deja mis sliders para noobs
[Normal]
ponle cs3 para poder hacerlo hddthr kkkkk
01:24:544 (4) - no se bien que esta siguiendo esto y la forma me triggerea xd le puse mucha carne al mapa, entonces le di un toque de tomate al final, para que después no me digan que no hay vegetales
no hay nada que este muy mal aunque podrias hacer mas cosas como esta 01:16:766 (1,2) - que tus ritmos estan casi todos en los ticks blancos y como sigues la bateria se hace muy monotono xd
[Collab Insane]
idk if its intentional or not but all these drum whistles are triggering me so hard
00:39:729 (2) - would be cool to have something clickable here cuz downbeat
01:04:173 (3,4) - theres nothing worth clicking on 01:04:544 (4) - so u better ctrl g this rhythm to make vocals clickable
01:10:840 (1,2,3) - me triggerea que te hayas saltado todas esas vocals
01:21:210 (1) - ^
al mugi le dio paja terminar la diff y la terminaste tu cierto xd. al menos desde aca 01:07:877 (1) - se que lo mapeaste tu no se bien si lo de antes era tuyo igual xd
esto creo que lo hace mugi, le preguntaré después xd

me da paja modear la otra diff gl devuelveme mis kds

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-02-27T18:31:16+00:00

fixed almost all in pkhg, log off now and kalibe's mods thank you!

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-03-06T17:38:00+00:00

Applied most of things on kanto's diff. Can't reply properly cause i'm in a hurry right now :d

Thanks 4 the mods!

Atsuro

1,290 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2017-03-21T18:49:14+00:00

Hi

Biyu

00:11:952 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Podrias hacer que el espaciado de estos varie mas dependiendo de su distancia entre ellos en el timeline, asi como esta siento que no tiene suficientes como que indicadores de como va el ritmo.
00:33:433 (5) - Podrias mappear ese slider end, ya le estas dando enfasis con el finish, se siente debil tenerlo ahi como slider end.
00:52:877 (7) - Moveria este mas como por acá https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622508 por motivos de enfasis en el espaciado.

Kanto

00:14:914 (2,3) - Doing a ctrl+g for the rhythm here would emphasize the important beats better, the slider starts on a weaker beat than the one in which it ends.
00:20:840 (2,3) - Same thing
00:46:025 (3,4,5) - In similar parts you used the slider heads to map the vocal notes (other ones being: 00:43:248 (4,5) - and 00:40:285 (4,5) - ), i suggest you do the same here since it represents the song better. (Basically ctrl+g 00:46:025 (3,4,5) - this rhythm)

collab

Those drum whistles sound weird tbh, a bit intrusive
00:10:655 (2) - Clap on slider end instead of whistle?
00:31:951 (4) - I'd remove the finish from this one, only the second one is emphazised with a cymbal by the song.
01:10:840 (1,2,3,4) - These felt underwhelming, it's an intense part of the song and you chose a really simple pattern. I suggest using something more demanding rhytmically or adding some spacing a
01:13:062 (3) - Change the last two repeats from claps to whistles to make it easier to differentiate the change from slider to stream better when playing, to give more emphazis to that change in rhythm and it also sounds better imo (at least it helps me)
01:21:766 (2,3,4) - Following the vocals here would be more fitting, try using an inverse rhythm (first the sliders and then the circles).

Hardzu

00:16:396 (2,3) - Invierte este ritmo para hacer clickeables las notas mas importantes, el slider 3 empieza en una nota mas debil que en la que termina.
00:21:025 (3) - Same
00:23:803 (2) - No veo por qué te saltas una nota que mappeabas antes constantemente, no hay nada distinto a lo de antes. No es nada que deberias cambiar pero creo que seria mejor mantener la consistencia
01:25:470 - Porque le bajas el volumen al hitsound aqui? El finish deberia tener el mismo volumen imo.

Bye

iYiyo

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

iYiyo 2017-03-21T23:58:02+00:00

Atsuro wrote:
Hi bye

Biyu
00:11:952 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Podrias hacer que el espaciado de estos varie mas dependiendo de su distancia entre ellos en el timeline, asi como esta siento que no tiene suficientes como que indicadores de como va el ritmo. Me gusta esa variación en el ritmo pero conservando el mismo DS. Con los NC encuentro que es suficiente para poder leerlos bien.
00:33:433 (5) - Podrias mappear ese slider end, ya le estas dando enfasis con el finish, se siente debil tenerlo ahi como slider end.
00:52:877 (7) - Moveria este mas como por acá https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7622508 por motivos de enfasis en el espaciado.

Kanto
00:14:914 (2,3) - Doing a ctrl+g for the rhythm here would emphasize the important beats better, the slider starts on a weaker beat than the one in which it ends.
00:20:840 (2,3) - Same thing
00:46:025 (3,4,5) - In similar parts you used the slider heads to map the vocal notes (other ones being: 00:43:248 (4,5) - and 00:40:285 (4,5) - ), i suggest you do the same here since it represents the song better. (Basically ctrl+g 00:46:025 (3,4,5) - this rhythm)
I'm supposed to fix the diff instead of kanto, and I think these rhythm issues aren't a real problem.. I think it's his style and it's overall consistent

collab
01:10:840 (1,2,3,4) - These felt underwhelming, it's an intense part of the song and you chose a really simple pattern. I suggest using something more demanding rhytmically or adding some spacing a
01:13:062 (3) - Change the last two repeats from claps to whistles to make it easier to differentiate the change from slider to stream better when playing, to give more emphazis to that change in rhythm and it also sounds better imo (at least it helps me)
01:21:766 (2,3,4) - Following the vocals here would be more fitting, try using an inverse rhythm (first the sliders and then the circles).
fixed my part
Bye hi

no reply=fixed
tyty!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-03-22T21:51:42+00:00

Hardzu todo arreglado xd

osu file format v14

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-03-28T05:47:11+00:00

Bijuu

00:06:396 (2) - I would position this further down, stacking the tail with with 00:05:470 (5) - maybe, to make this perfectly clear its a 1/1 gap.
00:44:173 (1,2,3,4) - The jumps here felt unnecessarily large compared to the other jumps you used. Make these smaller? They're as big as 00:47:136 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ..
01:00:470 (1,2,3) - Could be more even. Copy 01:00:470 (1,3) - , then scale it down by 0.5x to find the perfect midpoint.

Generally, the flows and angles you pick in the kiai could be more consistent throughout a combo, instead of shifting after a pattern. Please address these or at least consider them. If you agree, try applying the idea to other areas of the kiai too.
01:03:433 (1,2,3,4,5) - For example, you switch from counterclockwise to clockwise between 3>4>5

makes more sense in terms of flow

01:07:136 (5,6,7,1) - You set up the flow to be going counterclockwise with 01:06:025 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - then abruptly shift to clockwise with 01:07:877 (1,2) - but then you immediately reset the flow again with 01:08:618 (3,4,5,1,2) - .
01:10:099 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You set up a counterclockwise movement with 01:10:099 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - but then you decide to shift to clockwise movement with 01:11:210 (3,4) - after the jump sequence begins. For example, try 01:11:210 (3,4) - Ctrl+G and 01:11:580 (5,7) - Ctrl+G and 01:12:136 (8,1) - Ctrl+G. This follows flow a lot better and imo the angles help make the pattern much more comfortable to land.
01:14:914 (6,1,2) - Same idea here, you establish a counterclockwise flow, then shift to clockwise.
01:22:322 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - You use wide rotational angles here but then shift to really sharp up/down angles with 01:23:618 (5,6,1) - which feel not that good imo.

Basically, the ones I mentioned above are ones I feel should really be fixed or at least addressed.

Kanto's Insane

00:08:248 (1,2) - Would be nice if you could map that downbeat too ;c. You map 00:08:988 (2,3) - to circles, so its weird not being able to click the vocals before it.
00:29:729 (2,3) - Should be a 1/2 slider imo. The click on 3 sounds really overmapped since theres no instrument or vocal on it.

Clean map~

Collab Insane

00:01:766 (2,3) - Unstack cuz the vocal should be emphasized or at least require movement to land ;c.
00:47:507 (2) - Sounds better if you use a 1/2 slider then a circle to make the vocal + drum on 00:47:877 - clickable

Hazu's Hard

00:41:951 (3) - 1/2 slider into a circle sounds better imo. Make 00:42:322 - clickable, it sets up 00:42:507 (1,2,3,4) - a lot better.

Nice.

Normal

00:04:729 (2,3) - I think Ctrl+G'ing this rhythm is more player friendly for the intro. Right now you're forcing a 1/2 clicking rhythm with 00:05:470 (3,4) - which i think you should avoid at least in the intro where the rhythm isn't as dense.
00:07:136 (1,2,3,4) - Not a good rhythm choice here either. It's really unclear what layer you follow right now.
00:07:136 (1) - Recommend adding a repeat to this slider.
00:08:618 - And then adding another slider here, either 1/1 or 3/2 depending on your preference.

~

Honestly though, You could easily just replace your 1/2 sliders in the intro with circles and they'd actually be better imo. I think the intro is quite dense in rhythm right now, and you don't have to make it as dense as the rest of the map. Sliders like 00:09:359 (3,4) - are following the drums anyways, and mapping the red tick isn't necessary to follow the drums.

Yea, main complaint is just rhythm choice in the intro.

Easy

00:25:099 (3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing gets a bit messed up here, make them consistent thanks.

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The set as a whole looks good. Some concerns on the highest diff and Normal that I'd like to see addressed. Just poke me in game if you have questions~

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