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Hola

Sorry for long delay

Just suggestion here

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
[Greget]00:02:768 (2768|2,2768|1) - ini knp double? perasaan ngga ada drum/kick cuman ada clap sama synth?
00:05:511 (5511|0,5511|2) - ini jg. malah suaranya kayak ini 00:06:197 (6197|2,6882|4) -
00:08:254 (8254|2,8254|3) - ini jg dst
01:00:540 - missing?
01:11:511 (71511|4,71682|1) - ini ganti ke LN sama kayak ini 01:13:911 (73911|3) - ?
01:19:397 (79397|0,79568|3,79740|1,79911|4) - ctrl + H? pitch turun
01:42:197 - add note? ada bass kek 01:42:540 (102540|4,102540|3,102882|4,102882|3,103225|4,103225|3) - . kalo kata ane mending part bas ini dijadiin 1/2 LN biar asik dimainin. but terserah cuman suggest :3
04:06:025 (246025|4,246197|3) - swap colomb? karna ini beda pitchnya lho


Cute BG. >,<)/
Well Good luck =w=)b
posted

Han Solo wrote:


Mod level: Light

From the modding plaza o/
Interesting mapping style. Many people would've made this map way more difficult, with trills and whatnot.
Also, you could easily push up the *rating, by charting the unused sounds in the song, perhaps consider adding a diff spread?

General

  1. Timing: Totally rad
  2. Sound: Awesomesauce
  3. SV-changes: Subtle, but nice <3
  4. Metadata: Seems ok
Greget

  1. 00:11:682 (11682|3,11854|0,12025|3,12197|0), etc - Alternate this a bit more keep. i like the current pattern
  2. 00:14:425 (14425|0,14597|4) - ^ ^
  3. 04:27:968 (267968|4) - Uhm, what? Why the 1/8's? it's 1/8. try listen it at 50% playback
  4. 04:51:454 (291454|1) - Very nice! Like these LN's! thank you >.<
Very short mod, since it plays really well! And I'm lazy
idk what are you trying to do but thank you for mod.
about adding spread, i'm not going do that cuz it's 5 min song and i want to keep this map easy like my other map. so, many people can enjoy this
posted

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hola

Sorry for long delay

Just suggestion here

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
[Greget]00:02:768 (2768|2,2768|1) - ini knp double? perasaan ngga ada drum/kick cuman ada clap sama synth? ada drum tapi samar"
00:05:511 (5511|0,5511|2) - ini jg. malah suaranya kayak ini 00:06:197 (6197|2,6882|4) - ^
00:08:254 (8254|2,8254|3) - ini jg dst ^
01:00:540 - missing? fix
01:11:511 (71511|4,71682|1) - ini ganti ke LN sama kayak ini 01:13:911 (73911|3) - ? ada 2 suara piano. ga kaya yg satunya ada 1 suara piano tpi panjang
01:19:397 (79397|0,79568|3,79740|1,79911|4) - ctrl + H? pitch turun ok
01:42:197 - add note? ada bass kek 01:42:540 (102540|4,102540|3,102882|4,102882|3,103225|4,103225|3) - . kalo kata ane mending part bas ini dijadiin 1/2 LN biar asik dimainin. but terserah cuman suggest :3 conside for now
04:06:025 (246025|4,246197|3) - swap colomb? karna ini beda pitchnya lho ok


Cute BG. >,<)/i know what you mean >.<
Well Good luck =w=)b
thank you for mod


posted
Hi~ From my queue
Not much. But I hope it helps

[Greget]

1|2|3|4|5

00:19:740 (19740|1) - ke 3? biar nyaman aja ngehitnya
01:18:197 (78197|1) - ke 1?
01:20:254 (80254|0,80425|1,80597|2) - 2|3|5 berturut-turut
01:57:968 (117968|2,117968|4) - kayak gak ada suaranya? ngemap suara apa ini?
03:04:140 (184140|3,184140|2) - suaranya sama kayak single notes disini - 03:03:797 (183797|2) - dan - 03:04:482 (184482|2) - jadi delete mungkin?
03:48:368 - missing note. keep the consistencies
03:50:425 - ^
03:51:111 - ^
03:53:854 - ^
04:23:340 (263340|2,263425|3) - kayaknya gk nyaman xD. geser selangkah ke kiri


Good Luck :3
posted

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ From my queue
Not much. But I hope it helps

[Greget]

1|2|3|4|5

00:19:740 (19740|1) - ke 3? biar nyaman aja ngehitnya ok. and make some arangement
01:18:197 (78197|1) - ke 1? keep. bayangan dari 01:17:511 (77511|1,77682|3,77854|4) -
01:20:254 (80254|0,80425|1,80597|2) - 2|3|5 berturut-turut ^
01:57:968 (117968|2,117968|4) - kayak gak ada suaranya? ngemap suara apa ini? aku juga ga tau. btw fix
03:04:140 (184140|3,184140|2) - suaranya sama kayak single notes disini - 03:03:797 (183797|2) - dan - 03:04:482 (184482|2) - jadi delete mungkin? disitu ada suara clap kk. jdi keep
03:48:368 - missing note. keep the consistencies ga ada suara piano. itu yg single note suara piano yg dobel suara clap
03:50:425 - ^ ^
03:51:111 - ^ ^
03:53:854 - ^ ^
04:23:340 (263340|2,263425|3) - kayaknya gk nyaman xD. geser selangkah ke kiri oke


Good Luck :3
thanks for mod


posted
hi

right now, tbh i don't like some patterns you are using, makes me cringes so hard. Anyway that is just my opinion on this map.

00:16:997 - 00:21:111 - might wanna add some 1/4 stream (same to other parts have like this) (i can hear some 1/4 streams) (but i know you will ignore this cause you don't want make it harder)

some pattern suggestions

00:26:254 -
00:29:340 - try this

00:31:740 - why not try some alternating patterns

00:37:225 - 00:38:597

00:41:682 - 00:43:054


00:54:025 (54025|0,54068|1,54111|2,54154|4,54197|3,54240|2,54282|1,54325|0,54368|4,54368|2) - ctrl + h for hand balance

02:34:825 (154825|1,154825|4,154825|2) - whis is this 3 notes when 01:50:940 (110940|4,110940|1) - is just 2

02:40:825 (160825|3,160911|2) - ctrl+G
02:43:825 (163825|2,163911|1) - ^

02:46:140 (166140|0) - do this


02:51:625 (171625|2,171711|1) - ctrl + G
03:03:968 (183968|3) - move to 4 (balance)
04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - make it one

im done with this

also don't forget mine
GL~
posted

JamesHappy15 wrote:

hi

right now, tbh i don't like some patterns you are using, makes me cringes so hard. Anyway that is just my opinion on this map.

00:16:997 - 00:21:111 - might wanna add some 1/4 stream (same to other parts have like this) (i can hear some 1/4 streams) (but i know you will ignore this cause you don't want make it harder) yup. cuz this only the beginning. so, i want to make it simple

some pattern suggestions

00:26:254 -
00:29:340 - try this

00:31:740 - why not try some alternating patterns

00:37:225 - 00:38:597

00:41:682 - 00:43:054


00:54:025 (54025|0,54068|1,54111|2,54154|4,54197|3,54240|2,54282|1,54325|0,54368|4,54368|2) - ctrl + h for hand balance

02:34:825 (154825|1,154825|4,154825|2) - whis is this 3 notes when 01:50:940 (110940|4,110940|1) - is just 2 the 3 notes has more louder sound than 2 notes.

02:40:825 (160825|3,160911|2) - ctrl+G
02:43:825 (163825|2,163911|1) - ^

02:46:140 (166140|0) - do this


02:51:625 (171625|2,171711|1) - ctrl + G
03:03:968 (183968|3) - move to 4 (balance)
04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - make it one synth sound. so, it must double like prev. note

im done with this

also don't forget mine
GL~
thanks for mod. i will mod your map later

posted
can't mod..
its 5k lel
posted

dionzz99 wrote:

can't mod..
its 5k lel
-_-
makanya belajar dari skrg
posted

Frim4503 wrote:

makanya belajar dari skrg
iyadeh...
no. nevermind ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
posted

hy mz <(")
greget diff strikes again xD

|1|2|3|4|5|


[Greget]
00:54:025 - http://puu.sh/jGNgB.png
01:04:997 - lebih enak gini menurutku http://puu.sh/jGNkU.png
01:50:940 - btw ini knp ada 2 note :o suggestion: 01:50:254 - http://puu.sh/jGNEc.png
02:12:197 - http://puu.sh/jGNS2.png streamnya enak mz <(")
02:13:568 - coba streamnya kyk gini http://puu.sh/jGNYp.png, terus 02:14:254 - kyknya ini cmn 2 note suggestion: http://puu.sh/jGO0c.png
02:51:968 (171968|4) - LN end di 02:52:311 -
04:01:654 (241654|1,241654|3) - disitu ghost note kyknya, harusnya disini mz 04:01:568 -
04:01:654 (241654|3) - missing note?
04:28:097 (268097|1,268140|0) - ctrl+g
05:10:311 (310311|0) - move ke 5
05:10:482 (310482|4) - ^ klo iya, move ke 1
05:10:482 - ^ klo iya, pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/jGOBE.png

[MOD END]

Goodluck mz :D
Take my star
posted

Adtw_ wrote:


hy mz <(")
greget diff strikes again xD

|1|2|3|4|5|


[Greget]
00:54:025 - http://puu.sh/jGNgB.png
01:04:997 - lebih enak gini menurutku http://puu.sh/jGNkU.png
01:50:940 - btw ini knp ada 2 note :o suggestion: 01:50:254 - http://puu.sh/jGNEc.png yg 2 note karna ada something sound. entah apa namanya
02:12:197 - http://puu.sh/jGNS2.png streamnya enak mz <(")
02:13:568 - coba streamnya kyk gini http://puu.sh/jGNYp.png, terus 02:14:254 - kyknya ini cmn 2 note suggestion: http://puu.sh/jGO0c.png
02:51:968 (171968|4) - LN end di 02:52:311 - itu udh bener. udh confirm sama ExUsagi
04:01:654 (241654|1,241654|3) - disitu ghost note kyknya, harusnya disini mz 04:01:568 -
04:01:654 (241654|3) - missing note? ?? bukannya udh ada note disitu ?
04:28:097 (268097|1,268140|0) - ctrl+g
05:10:311 (310311|0) - move ke 5
05:10:482 (310482|4) - ^ klo iya, move ke 1
05:10:482 - ^ klo iya, pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/jGOBE.png

[MOD END]

Goodluck mz :D
Take my star
thanks for mod.
no reply=aplied

posted


Hi Frim! Mod from Your M4M request!

|1|2|3|4|5|

[General]
BG: No problem
MP3: No problem
Spread: No problem
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: No problem But I just suggest to remove "C" hitsound and just use the Clap sound.
Timing: No problem
Etc: It seems reference the ranked map already No has any problem in Metadata.
Nice job O.O Can's find any problems!

[Greget]
00:18:197 - How about add one like 00:16:825 - Here? oh It seems hitsound. But for consistent XD

00:22:825 (22825|4) - It have to finish in here. 00:23:082 - And I suggest to add one NM note in here. 00:23:082

00:35:511 (35511|4) - How about change to LN? I saw your pattern. It should be LN I guess like 00:31:568 (31568|0) here.

00:38:597 (38597|2) - How about move to 5 for balance? And If you follow this...00:38:940 (38940|4) - Move to 3 for more more good balance XD

00:44:254 (44254|4) - I think If it be a Just NM note. More be good. Because... Yes here's has some LN sound but not good fit with 00:43:740 (43740|0,43911|1,44082|2) - This LN guys. Some players will boring I guess.

01:05:340 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564494

01:41:168 (101168|1,101340|0,101511|1,101682|2,101854|3) - This pattern should start in here I guess. 01:40:997

01:44:940 - Add two notes. Because of pattern. 01:42:197 (102197|4,102197|2) - Seems same sounds with here.

01:51:968 (111968|4) - How about add clap sound in here?

02:09:797 - How about this? 4.5 column is too long same chord and for more fun. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564552

02:39:968 (159968|3) - is sounds finish in 02:40:225 - Here. you can reference first same part 00:21:797 -

03:03:282 (183282|4) - Move to 4 and 03:03:454 (183454|3) - to 5 and 03:03:625 (183625|4) - to 4 For more good balance.

04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - Remove one for your pattern. like 04:10:311 (250311|2) - Here.

04:51:454 - I just want to say. I like this part ><

Seems really good map :)

Good luck XD
posted

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:



Hi Frim! Mod from Your M4M request!

|1|2|3|4|5|

[General]
BG: No problem
MP3: No problem
Spread: No problem
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: No problem But I just suggest to remove "C" hitsound and just use the Clap sound. idk what you mean by "C". cuz i'm only use custom hs and "E" for finish
Timing: No problem
Etc: It seems reference the ranked map already No has any problem in Metadata.
Nice job O.O Can's find any problems!

[Greget]
00:18:197 - How about add one like 00:16:825 - Here? oh It seems hitsound. But for consistent XD keep for now. nothing to foolow xD

00:22:825 (22825|4) - It have to finish in here. 00:23:082 - And I suggest to add one NM note in here. 00:23:082 what sound it is ?

00:35:511 (35511|4) - How about change to LN? I saw your pattern. It should be LN I guess like 00:31:568 (31568|0) here.

00:38:597 (38597|2) - How about move to 5 for balance? And If you follow this...00:38:940 (38940|4) - Move to 3 for more more good balance XD

00:44:254 (44254|4) - I think If it be a Just NM note. More be good. Because... Yes here's has some LN sound but not good fit with 00:43:740 (43740|0,43911|1,44082|2) - This LN guys. Some players will boring I guess.keep for now and i didn't care for guys get boring for this pattern xD

01:05:340 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564494

01:41:168 (101168|1,101340|0,101511|1,101682|2,101854|3) - This pattern should start in here I guess. 01:40:997

01:44:940 - Add two notes. Because of pattern. 01:42:197 (102197|4,102197|2) - Seems same sounds with here.

01:51:968 (111968|4) - How about add clap sound in here?

02:09:797 - How about this? 4.5 column is too long same chord and for more fun. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3564552

02:39:968 (159968|3) - is sounds finish in 02:40:225 - Here. you can reference first same part 00:21:797 -

03:03:282 (183282|4) - Move to 4 and 03:03:454 (183454|3) - to 5 and 03:03:625 (183625|4) - to 4 For more good balance.

04:12:368 (252368|3,252368|2) - Remove one for your pattern. like 04:10:311 (250311|2) - Here.

04:51:454 - I just want to say. I like this part ><

Seems really good map :)

Good luck XD
no reply=fix
thank you for mod :D

posted
00:54:025 (54025|4,54068|3,54111|0,54154|1,54197|4,54240|3,54282|0,54325|1) -

C means here XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565027
posted

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

00:54:025 (54025|4,54068|3,54111|0,54154|1,54197|4,54240|3,54282|0,54325|1) -

C means here XD https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565027
oh..
thank you for mention it
i didn't remember adding that hs -_-

fix


posted
m4m from queue :D
mod this please
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/337871



nice song and map, good luck :D
posted

Taiwan_CDZ wrote:

m4m from queue :D
mod this please ok. will mod later
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/337871

  • 00:13:911 to 00:14:254 follow 1/4 is better keep. i wanna make it simple
    00:18:368 to 00:19:740 same as above ^
    00:20:082 and 00:20:768 add more notes
    00:20:597 or you want to add a note here
    00:30:025 miss note only use single note for whistle
    00:35:511 miss
    00:36:197 remove one or add here 00:32:082 and 00:33:454
    00:38:597 (38597|4) - remove no drum, maybe change to LN
    00:54:711 to 00:55:054 1/4 better keep. idk what you mean
    01:22:140 (82140|3) - remove, the bell is not in 01:22:140
    01:40:997 change http://i.imgur.com/Oe7l794.jpg?1 or http://i.imgur.com/xs9QH8z.jpg?1
    01:42:197 (102197|3,102197|4) - remove one
    01:44:940 (104940|0,104940|4) - remove one
    01:47:082 (107082|2,107082|4) - move one to 01:46:997 or remove one keep. fit the song
    01:50:940 (110940|1) - remove or you need to add here 01:50:597 and 01:51:282 there for cymbal sound if you hear it
    01:58:054 (118054|1,118054|3) - move one to 01:57:968 or remove one keep. fit the song
    02:03:625 (123625|2) - move to 4 is better to play
    02:12:882 (132882|4) - remove cymbal
    02:19:054 http://i.imgur.com/qXhDXv1.jpg?1
    02:20:768 (140768|0) - move to 2
    02:26:940 http://i.imgur.com/3lkcO6u.jpg?1
    02:28:654 http://i.imgur.com/7JhRv3Z.jpg?1
    02:40:482 http://i.imgur.com/iNmgb9o.jpg?1
    02:42:197 (162197|3,162368|2) - change
    03:02:940 http://i.imgur.com/QkOwWIX.jpg?1
    03:47:511 (227511|3,227682|2) - ctrl+J
    04:01:482 remove one keeep
    04:04:311 http://i.imgur.com/JfNLKO2.jpg?1 ^
    04:12:454 (252454|0,252454|1) - remove one ^
    04:12:625 (252625|1,252625|3,252797|3,252797|1) - remove one ^
    04:12:368 http://i.imgur.com/T6zSH5Q.jpg?1 make some change
    04:26:597 http://i.imgur.com/WCfAKgB.jpg?1 keep
    04:35:854 (275854|2,276025|3,276197|4) - move to right 1 column
    04:38:254 (278254|4) - move to 4
    05:07:397 add
    05:07:568 add cus if you dont youll break the rhyme
    05:12:711 add LN


nice song and map, good luck :D
thank you for mod
no reply=fix

posted
Mod Ready ~~ sorry for delay

[GREGETS]
00:03:797 (3797|4) - move ke 4 buat balance?
00:04:825 (4825|3) - ^ ke 3?
00:08:254 (8254|2) - gak di move ke 2 aja ?
00:24:968 - 00:25:054 - add note ? ada suara atau hapus LN nya 00:24:968 (24968|0) -
00:24:882 - add note , bass
00:26:254 - ^
00:29:340 - ^
01:34:311 (94311|2,94482|1) - Ctrl + J?
02:09:368 (129368|4) - ghost note ?
02:44:854 (164854|3) - hapus 02:44:940 - add
02:50:340 - sama ^
03:03:968 (183968|1,184311|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri ?
04:12:368 - add 1 note di 3
05:07:397 (307397|3,307568|2) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri


done~
instrumen nya ok , vocal nya gak suka kwkwk :v
Good Luck~~ :)
posted

ExKagii- wrote:

Mod Ready ~~ sorry for delay

[GREGETS]
00:03:797 (3797|4) - move ke 4 buat balance?
00:04:825 (4825|3) - ^ ke 3?
00:08:254 (8254|2) - gak di move ke 2 aja ?
00:24:968 - 00:25:054 - add note ? ada suara atau hapus LN nya 00:24:968 (24968|0) - keep. karna LN itu suara panjang
00:24:882 - add note , bass keep. karna suara bass cuma pake 1 note
00:26:254 - ^ ^
00:29:340 - ^ ^
01:34:311 (94311|2,94482|1) - Ctrl + J?
02:09:368 (129368|4) - ghost note ? ada suara om. dengerin aja bahik bahik
02:44:854 (164854|3) - hapus 02:44:940 - add
02:50:340 - sama ^
03:03:968 (183968|1,184311|1) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri ?
04:12:368 - add 1 note di 3
05:07:397 (307397|3,307568|2) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri


done~
instrumen nya ok , vocal nya gak suka kwkwk :v
Good Luck~~ :)
ok
thank you for mod

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