Hi! from my queue! Here's the mod. \(ºuº
l = Important / unrankable stuffs: you must/should fix it!
l = Suggestions / personal opinions: You should / can fix it!
l = Suggestions / personal opinions: You should / can fix it!
[ General]Sooo, in general stuffs we have few things:
[]- We have an inconsistency on combo colors with Lanturn's Easy. Consider using the same combo colors in the mapset. I don't know if this is really unrankable but it would be cool if all the diffs had the same combo colors.
- Also, Lanturn's Easy presents a different kiai time. I know GD'ers can set his own kiai time, but wouldn't it make more sense if the kiai ended here 01:42:225 ?
- Consider to add some numbers in audio lead-in option in all the diffs. This is mostly because the diff starts so early and beginners players can miss the first notes.
- It's not a really big issue, but you can increase the kbps to 192. Does this change something in the mapset? *me runs*
- Shouldn't the title be ココロのちず as long this is original version? This is suppperted by this website.
- Add Map of the Heart to tags as long as this is the literal meaning of the song.
- Shouldn't the artist be BOYSTYLE rather than "Boystyle"? I found out the band's name is with capitals letters.
- Add OP5 to tags because this is the fifth opening which has the episodes from 207 to 263. Supported by this.
- Add Mizue to tags because he/she was the author.
- Add Kazunori Watanabe to tags because he/she was the compositor.
- Add Ryou Yonemitsu because he/she was the arranger when the song releases.
- Add Imperial Records because it was labeled from this discography.
[ Lanturn's Easy] Pretty nice diff
[]- Are these green points really necessary between this spinner 00:01:770 - 00:02:225 - 00:02:679 .I don't know if I have a bad ear but I didn't listen anything different by removing them.
- 00:06:770 (3) This slider plays good. But I think it would fit better if it had emphasized the change of vocals which means here 00:07:452 . In this way the slider flows better and it makes better emphasis on an important beat as it is.
- 00:10:407 (3) Same with this slider, I think it would sound better if if ended here on this red tick 00:11:088.
- 00:19:043 (3) The current slider flows well, but I dislike setting downbeats on white ticks. As long as this is an Easy difficulty, it would make more sense if you replace that slider by two single notes that plays fine here.
- 00:28:588 (3,4) In this section, the rhythm would play better if you were placed the slider in the big white tick 00:28:588 . the main reason of doing that is that, despite knowing you're following drums/vocals in the song, the main beat here are the changes of the vocals and it's not well emphasized. So, because of that, I highly suggest to do Ctrl + G en those two objects to keep a better rhythm. Like this.
- 00:51:770 (4,1) This pattern flows and plays good, but I would say it flowed better if you keep what's this slider's end 00:50:407 (3) ends to place this circle 00:51:770 (4). what about this?
- 01:01:770 (3,1) Same stuff here, just a minor suggestion. what about this?
- 01:12:225 (3) Just a minor suggestion, but you can make this slider shape more like a "S" like this.
- 01:23:134 (3) The flow with this slider doesn't play bad, but it would make more sense if it followed this slider's end to don't force the cursor to go to up to follow the next slider, despite knowing the flow suggest that the next slider will be at the bottom. I suggest you to follow an intuitive flow on this section. For example.
[ Normal] o-o Perfect Normal! OMG! I didn't find anything wrong with it! ;w; Just some few suggestions:
[]- 00:26:770 (1,2) The blanket here can be improved.
- 01:01:316 (1) Remove NC here to have consistency with the previous NC combing.
- 01:06:770 (1,2,3,4) The rhythm here doesn't play bad, but it would sound better if you tried some 1/2 sliders to follow the drums/vocals as long as they're the main beats here. What about this?
- 01:36:543 Don't you think a circle would fit here as long as you set finish on the sliders?
[ Insane]
- Consider reducing the OD as long as this diff is not that hard.
- 00:08:475 (8,1) This stream is off on DS by 0.02. ;w; It would be cool if you keep the same DS among all the stream part, including the slider.
- 00:09:498 (3,4) Just a minor suggestion, but this blanket can be improved a bit to make a neater pattern.
- 00:30:293 (9,1) Same suggestion of the second point. It would be visually better if you keep the same DS among this stream too.
- 01:09:270 (1) Remove NC here. Is really necessary that NC?
- 01:13:929 (10) Shouldn't this circle be at the same x axis as this circle 01:13:702 (8) ? Just keeping on mind the last stream notes should flow as curvy as the beginning. It would mean setting that circle here 276|289
- 01:30:179 (6) This should be stacked at this slider's end 01:29:498 (4) as well as you do in the previous jumps.
- 01:38:588 (4) I think the 1/8 slider isn't really necessary here. You map all the song with 1/4 and I think it sounds a bit overmapped. It would make more sense if you kept the same 1/4 with two repetitions as well as you do with this slider 01:39:043 (6).