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Winnie

1,333 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie October 2, 2015 at 3:29:47 PM UTC

Map by far is really really good, Once I'm back I'll see what I can do. Idk if there is anything left tbh

KASUM1

256 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 October 2, 2015 at 6:37:07 PM UTC

HilloW!

[Insane]
00:13:131 (5,1) - don't let these overlap
00:16:540 (3,5) - maybe stack with the trail ?

01:18:585 (5) - breaks the flow http://puu.sh/kw4gg/3f61c5c500.PNG

Umi

2,492 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi October 2, 2015 at 6:42:33 PM UTC

KASUM1 wrote:
HilloW!

[Insane]
00:13:131 (5,1) - don't let these overlap we can't notice it in-game so that's okay
00:16:540 (3,5) - maybe stack with the trail ? Fixed
01:18:585 (5) - breaks the flow http://puu.sh/kw4gg/3f61c5c500.PNG it's intentionnal here

thx for your mod

Winnie

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Joined November 2013

Winnie October 3, 2015 at 6:54:48 AM UTC

Based on further analysis of this map, I can't really find anything that will suffice as "Major Problem" so instead have some stars to push this map forward
*Maybe widescreen support can be turned off*

Umi

2,492 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi October 3, 2015 at 1:40:54 PM UTC

yup I'll turn it off

and thx for stars =w=b

Lanturn

3,902 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn October 3, 2015 at 4:49:08 PM UTC

HappyRocket88 wrote:
[Lanturn's Easy] Pretty nice diff
Are these green points really necessary between this spinner 00:01:770 - 00:02:225 - 00:02:679 .I don't know if I have a bad ear but I didn't listen anything different by removing them. Volume affects spinners. So they have a purpose.
00:06:770 (3) This slider plays good. But I think it would fit better if it had emphasized the change of vocals which means here 00:07:452 . In this way the slider flows better and it makes better emphasis on an important beat as it is. old me was a rhythm mapper I guess. the vocals would be the best spot to end this for sure.
00:10:407 (3) Same with this slider, I think it would sound better if if ended here on this red tick 00:11:088. ^
00:19:043 (3) The current slider flows well, but I dislike setting downbeats on white ticks. As long as this is an Easy difficulty, it would make more sense if you replace that slider by two single notes that plays fine here. as much as I believe downbeats should be emphasized like you're saying, the awkwardness of hitting (3) and (4) as circles would make it a bit hard to play. I'm going to keep this as is.
00:28:588 (3,4) In this section, the rhythm would play better if you were placed the slider in the big white tick 00:28:588 . the main reason of doing that is that, despite knowing you're following drums/vocals in the song, the main beat here are the changes of the vocals and it's not well emphasized. So, because of that, I highly suggest to do Ctrl + G en those two objects to keep a better rhythm. Like this. It doesn't really matter since when I made this map, it was drum focused. I'd agree with you and personally change it, but it's way too late to do that (and I'd rather keep this map more to its original self than rework minor issues). The rhythm plays just fine elsewise.
00:51:770 (4,1) This pattern flows and plays good, but I would say it flowed better if you keep what's this slider's end 00:50:407 (3) ends to place this circle 00:51:770 (4). what about this? Makes it a bit awkward for the upcoming notes. Just gonna leave it as is. Lazy.
01:01:770 (3,1) Same stuff here, just a minor suggestion. what about this? Nah. I'd rather keep the slider end of (1) focused on where the next note will be.
01:12:225 (3) Just a minor suggestion, but you can make this slider shape more like a "S" like this. I'll try to fix it I guess.
01:23:134 (3) The flow with this slider doesn't play bad, but it would make more sense if it followed this slider's end to don't force the cursor to go to up to follow the next slider, despite knowing the flow suggest that the next slider will be at the bottom. I suggest you to follow an intuitive flow on this section. For example. Nah. It really isn't as big of an issue as you make it seem. Flow isn't as important in Easy and trying to adjust every note for it, is definitely not worth it.

All in all, most of the suggestions were valid, but I literally made this map 2 to 3 years ago. Most of the suggested changes would be better, but I'd rather keep it's old looks and rhythm. Thanks for the mod o/

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ココロのちず
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Guy

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Joined March 2009

Guy October 9, 2015 at 12:46:09 PM UTC

finished :3
http://puu.sh/kDXmB/be8549e2a4.zip

Umi

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Topic Starter

Umi October 9, 2015 at 9:12:21 PM UTC

nice 👌 updated~

alacat

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alacat October 10, 2015 at 7:01:06 AM UTC

wow Guy san

Enimate

14 posts

Joined November 2012

Enimate October 12, 2015 at 7:54:39 AM UTC

Hey there, as requested

Red = Would change
Purple = Opinion

Normal

00:34:949 (2,3,4) - Maybe unstack? It's not hard to read but other similar parts have spacing like: 00:41:313 (1,2,3)
00:45:404 (2) - This note is pretty high, goes off the grid a little, which is fine but you might want to move it down slightly and adjust the other notes from there
00:45:858 (3,4,5) - Same deal as first point
00:59:495 (1,2,3) - Again the same as the first point

Overall its all fine in here, i think you should just keep certain parts consistent, so either change the ones i mentioned or change the others that are different.

Insane
00:12:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the spacing should be more even
00:28:585 (1) - Slider isn't really leading anywhere, not a huge deal though
00:30:858 (2) - I would unstack this one personally,
00:48:585 (1) - Slider isn't leading anywhere
01:03:585 (2) - Note is pretty low but again it's really just me being nitpicky
01:06:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again even spacing would be better i think
01:09:722 (2,3) - These notes should have some spacing to match the timing

That's all i can really find, sorry if it's not too helpful
(Also should i be modding the Guest Difficulties?)

Umi

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Topic Starter

Umi October 12, 2015 at 3:53:02 PM UTC

Enimate wrote:
Hey there, as requested

Red = Would change
Purple = Opinion

Normal

00:34:949 (2,3,4) - Maybe unstack? It's not hard to read but other similar parts have spacing like: 00:41:313 (1,2,3) *consistence isn't a must in a map u don't have to always do the same thing
00:45:404 (2) - This note is pretty high, goes off the grid a little, which is fine but you might want to move it down slightly and adjust the other notes from there *that's okay for me
00:45:858 (3,4,5) - Same deal as first point *same as before
00:59:495 (1,2,3) - Again the same as the first point *^

Overall its all fine in here, i think you should just keep certain parts consistent, so either change the ones i mentioned or change the others that are different.

Insane

00:12:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the spacing should be more even *yup increased the spacing a bit
00:28:585 (1) - Slider isn't really leading anywhere, not a huge deal though *play good imo
00:30:858 (2) - I would unstack this one personally, *part of my style
00:48:585 (1) - Slider isn't leading anywhere *flow is important but sometimes you can break it
01:03:585 (2) - Note is pretty low but again it's really just me being nitpicky *I don't really get what u mean here
01:06:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again even spacing would be better i think *fixed
01:09:722 (2,3) - These notes should have some spacing to match the timing *it's called anti-jump
That's all i can really find, sorry if it's not too helpful
(Also should i be modding the Guest Difficulties?) If u wanna make a full mod yeah u're supposed to mod every diff, but it's okay :3

thx for your mod ~

Come[Back]Home

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Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home October 20, 2015 at 6:41:41 PM UTC

Guy's Insane

00:07:676 (3) This overmap somehow doesnt fit, since theres nothing in the song for 1/4. Its better without it
00:35:858 (1) I think you should let this slider end here 00:36:199 it fits more with the vocals, and put a circle on the free white tick afterwards ( 00:42:222 (4) here youve mapped to the vocals too)
00:57:676 This beat should be clickable since its kinda strong
01:01:540 Its an Insane, so why are you ignoring the guitar here? would be nice if its clickable
01:02:563 Add a circle?
01:12:904 (2) A single circle there would fit better instead of the slider. Its cooler to play without the overmap there
01:24:495 (1,1) Those Ncs arent really necessary
01:27:449 (10) Same as 01:12:904 (2)

Insane

00:28:585 (1) Let this one end here 00:28:926 so it fits more with the vocals
00:51:085 I think (2) should start here since the guitar is stronger there, it fits more with the song
01:39:040 (6) I think a stream here would fit more like you did before.

alacat's Hard

01:15:404 (3,1) I dont like those tiny overlaps, i really think that they look ugly imo. If they would overlap a bit more it could look awesome

Ill skip Normal and Easy since they mostly are always good, especially by an experienced mapper. If you still want me to mod them, just pm me! :3

Cool Mapset, and good Luck ^~^

Umi

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Umi October 20, 2015 at 11:23:15 PM UTC

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Insane

00:28:585 (1) Let this one end here 00:28:926 so it fits more with the vocals okay
00:51:085 I think (2) should start here since the guitar is stronger there, it fits more with the song yup true fixed
01:39:040 (6) I think a stream here would fit more like you did before. I wanted a different pattern here

Cool Mapset, and good Luck ^~^

Thx for mod

Lexis

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Joined March 2014

Lexis October 21, 2015 at 2:19:15 PM UTC

Lantun's Easy

00:55:858 (1) - Why not that ?

Normal

01:31:540 (7) - Reverse ?

Alacat's Hard

00:24:495 (5,1) - Erase the slider 5 and make 3 circles

Umi

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