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BOYSTYLE - Kokoro no Chizu

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Umi
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Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

Lumael wrote:

Hello!

[General]
  1. Remove "5" from Tags since it's too random and everything can be 5, maybe you want to add "opening_5" deleted "5"
  2. Add some Lead In time on each diff because the song starts too sudden it start with a spinner so it's okay imo
  3. Preview Point and Timing Point conflict with Laturn's Easy fixed
  4. Folder: OK


[Insane]
  1. 00:25:861 - Remove this unused green line fixed
  2. 00:19:498 (1,4) - I don't like how this pattern feels, it's like blanketing the void. You may want to curve 00:19:498 (1) - a bit to make the pattern prettier okay
  3. 00:27:679 (4) - Either move it slightly up or down, increase the overlap, or removing it at all, but this way just no xD moved up x)
  4. 00:28:134 (5,6,1) - I don't understand why the jump 00:28:361 (6,1) - Is smaller than 00:28:134 (5,6) - , where on the second one, there's nothing to be emphasized fixed this one
  5. 00:40:861 (6,7,8,1) - This is hard to read, you may want to unstack them nop play good this way (insane after all)
  6. 00:45:861 (4,5,6) - Same case here, why the jump 00:46:088 (5,6) - is such smaller than 00:45:861 (4,5) - ? why not ? '-'
  7. 00:50:407 (1,2) - I know you like this pattern (stalked a bit your maps xD) but, imo, it's not flowing good here. It will help if you curve 00:50:861 (2) - accordingly with the tail of 00:50:407 (1) - changed a bit
  8. 00:57:679 (6) - Add NC for consistency, you added every 4/1 beat added
  9. 01:01:770 (2,4) - Semi stack is kinda weird, stack it? stacked
  10. 01:03:134 (1,2,3) - The jump 01:03:134 (1,2) - Should be smaller than 01:03:588 (2,3) - , just like you did here
  11. 01:04:498 (4,1) - okay
  12. 01:17:225 (5,3) - Is this overlap on purpose? y
  13. 01:21:998 (3,6) - ^ y
  14. 01:33:134 (3,4,5) - Same jump thing. 01:33:361 (4,5) - This should be bigger, having constant DS kinda break the emotion here, also, the jump 01:33:588 (5,6) - is higher, why? It should be smaller. feel good this way to me
  15. 01:34:498 (2,3) - Change this for a slider, 1/2 nop prefer having note for those claps
  16. 01:45:634 (2) - NC? Just minor thing, you can ignore, but I think it will make it better because both are strong nop


[Normal]
  1. 00:19:498 - 00:25:861 - Remove unused green lines deleted


I hope this was helpful, don't forget to vote on my Poll!
thx for mod ;) (I voted)
Battle
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined February 2014
Battle
Can't really do much in terms of modding because your maps are so great so I'll just give SP
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
oh thx for Stars 👍
Lanturn
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Joined March 2012
Lanturn
@Lumael
Fixed all but the last two as they're fine.

Also shortened the spinner at the start so QATs won't go crazy about the gap after the spinner. I hope I didn't unchange any fixed, I don't remember if I updated before I edited this. :D

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Kokoro no Chizu.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 69611
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kokoro no Chizu (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ココロのちず (TV Size)
Artist:Boystyle
ArtistUnicode:Boystyle
Creator:Umi
Version:Lanturn's Easy
Source:One Piece
Tags:ワンピース opening alacat Lanturn
BeatmapID:749389
BeatmapSetID:338738

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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HappyRocket88
4,319 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Hi! from my queue! Here's the mod. \(ºuº
l :!: = Important / unrankable stuffs: you must/should fix it!
l :?: = Suggestions / personal opinions: You should / can fix it!
[ General]Sooo, in general stuffs we have few things:
  1. We have an inconsistency on combo colors with Lanturn's Easy. Consider using the same combo colors in the mapset. I don't know if this is really unrankable but it would be cool if all the diffs had the same combo colors. :!:
  2. Also, Lanturn's Easy presents a different kiai time. I know GD'ers can set his own kiai time, but wouldn't it make more sense if the kiai ended here 01:42:225 ? :?:
  3. Consider to add some numbers in audio lead-in option in all the diffs. This is mostly because the diff starts so early and beginners players can miss the first notes. :?:
  4. It's not a really big issue, but you can increase the kbps to 192. Does this change something in the mapset? *me runs*

I found out some info in tags that I'd like to discuss. I must clarify I found out the info on these pages OnePiecewikia, animelyrics, gamesoundtracks and animekaillou:
  1. Shouldn't the title be ココロのちず as long this is original version? This is suppperted by this website.
  2. Add Map of the Heart to tags as long as this is the literal meaning of the song.
  3. Shouldn't the artist be BOYSTYLE rather than "Boystyle"? I found out the band's name is with capitals letters.
  4. Add OP5 to tags because this is the fifth opening which has the episodes from 207 to 263. Supported by this.
  5. Add Mizue to tags because he/she was the author.
  6. Add Kazunori Watanabe to tags because he/she was the compositor.
  7. Add Ryou Yonemitsu because he/she was the arranger when the song releases.
  8. Add Imperial Records because it was labeled from this discography.
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[Lanturn's Easy] Pretty nice diff
  1. Are these green points really necessary between this spinner 00:01:770 - 00:02:225 - 00:02:679 .I don't know if I have a bad ear but I didn't listen anything different by removing them. :?:
  2. 00:06:770 (3) This slider plays good. But I think it would fit better if it had emphasized the change of vocals which means here 00:07:452 . In this way the slider flows better and it makes better emphasis on an important beat as it is. :?:
  3. 00:10:407 (3) Same with this slider, I think it would sound better if if ended here on this red tick 00:11:088. :?:
  4. 00:19:043 (3) The current slider flows well, but I dislike setting downbeats on white ticks. As long as this is an Easy difficulty, it would make more sense if you replace that slider by two single notes that plays fine here.
  5. 00:28:588 (3,4) In this section, the rhythm would play better if you were placed the slider in the big white tick 00:28:588 . the main reason of doing that is that, despite knowing you're following drums/vocals in the song, the main beat here are the changes of the vocals and it's not well emphasized. So, because of that, I highly suggest to do Ctrl + G en those two objects to keep a better rhythm. Like this. :?:
  6. 00:51:770 (4,1) This pattern flows and plays good, but I would say it flowed better if you keep what's this slider's end 00:50:407 (3) ends to place this circle 00:51:770 (4). what about this?
  7. 01:01:770 (3,1) Same stuff here, just a minor suggestion. what about this?
  8. 01:12:225 (3) Just a minor suggestion, but you can make this slider shape more like a "S" like this.
  9. 01:23:134 (3) The flow with this slider doesn't play bad, but it would make more sense if it followed this slider's end to don't force the cursor to go to up to follow the next slider, despite knowing the flow suggest that the next slider will be at the bottom. I suggest you to follow an intuitive flow on this section. For example. :?:
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[Normal] o-o Perfect Normal! OMG! I didn't find anything wrong with it! ;w; Just some few suggestions:
  1. 00:26:770 (1,2) The blanket here can be improved.
  2. 01:01:316 (1) Remove NC here to have consistency with the previous NC combing.
  3. 01:06:770 (1,2,3,4) The rhythm here doesn't play bad, but it would sound better if you tried some 1/2 sliders to follow the drums/vocals as long as they're the main beats here. What about this? :?:
  4. 01:36:543 Don't you think a circle would fit here as long as you set finish on the sliders?
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[Insane]
  1. Consider reducing the OD as long as this diff is not that hard.
  2. 00:08:475 (8,1) This stream is off on DS by 0.02. ;w; It would be cool if you keep the same DS among all the stream part, including the slider.
  3. 00:09:498 (3,4) Just a minor suggestion, but this blanket can be improved a bit to make a neater pattern.
  4. 00:30:293 (9,1) Same suggestion of the second point. It would be visually better if you keep the same DS among this stream too.
  5. 01:09:270 (1) Remove NC here. Is really necessary that NC? :?:
  6. 01:13:929 (10) Shouldn't this circle be at the same x axis as this circle 01:13:702 (8) ? Just keeping on mind the last stream notes should flow as curvy as the beginning. It would mean setting that circle here 276|289
  7. 01:30:179 (6) This should be stacked at this slider's end 01:29:498 (4) as well as you do in the previous jumps.
  8. 01:38:588 (4) I think the 1/8 slider isn't really necessary here. You map all the song with 1/4 and I think it sounds a bit overmapped. It would make more sense if you kept the same 1/4 with two repetitions as well as you do with this slider 01:39:043 (6).
That's all! Sorry for the late! Here my star! \(ºuº
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hi! from my queue! Here's the mod. \(ºuº
l :!: = Important / unrankable stuffs: you must/should fix it!
l :?: = Suggestions / personal opinions: You should / can fix it!
[ General]Sooo, in general stuffs we have few things:
  1. We have an inconsistency on combo colors with Lanturn's Easy. Consider using the same combo colors in the mapset. I don't know if this is really unrankable but it would be cool if all the diffs had the same combo colors. :!:Fixed
  2. Also, Lanturn's Easy presents a different kiai time. I know GD'ers can set his own kiai time, but wouldn't it make more sense if the kiai ended here 01:42:225 ? :?:I'll let lanturn decided
  3. Consider to add some numbers in audio lead-in option in all the diffs. This is mostly because the diff starts so early and beginners players can miss the first notes. :?:added
  4. It's not a really big issue, but you can increase the kbps to 192. Does this change something in the mapset? *me runs* okay

I found out some info in tags that I'd like to discuss. I must clarify I found out the info on these pages OnePiecewikia, animelyrics, gamesoundtracks and animekaillou:
  1. Shouldn't the title be ココロのちず as long this is original version? This is suppperted by this I'll ask someone to check medata later website.
  2. Add Map of the Heart to tags as long as this is the literal meaning of the song. not needed imo
  3. Shouldn't the artist be BOYSTYLE rather than "Boystyle"? I found out the band's name is with capitals letters. fixed
  4. Add OP5 to tags because this is the fifth opening which has the episodes from 207 to 263. Supported by this.
  5. Add Mizue to tags because he/she was the author. Not needed
  6. Add Kazunori Watanabe to tags because he/she was the compositor^.
  7. Add Ryou Yonemitsu because he/she was the arranger when the song releases.^
  8. Add Imperial Records because it was labeled from this discography.^
[]

[Normal] o-o Perfect Normal! OMG! I didn't find anything wrong with it! ;w; Just some few suggestions:
  1. 00:26:770 (1,2) The blanket here can be improved. fixed
  2. 01:01:316 (1) Remove NC here to have consistency with the previous NC combing.deleted
  3. 01:06:770 (1,2,3,4) The rhythm here doesn't play bad, but it would sound better if you tried some 1/2 sliders to follow the drums/vocals as long as they're the main beats here. What about this? :?:changed rythm
  4. 01:36:543 Don't you think a circle would fit here as long as you set finish on the sliders? why not
[]
[Insane]
  1. Consider reducing the OD as long as this diff is not that hard. fixed
  2. 00:08:475 (8,1) This stream is off on DS by 0.02. ;w; It would be cool if you keep the same DS among all the stream part, including the slider. nazi but fixed
  3. 00:09:498 (3,4) Just a minor suggestion, but this blanket can be improved a bit to make a neater pattern. ^
  4. 00:30:293 (9,1) Same suggestion of the second point. It would be visually better if you keep the same DS among this stream too. ^
  5. 01:09:270 (1) Remove NC here. Is really necessary that NC? :?:yeah necessary to notice anti-jump
  6. 01:13:929 (10) Shouldn't this circle be at the same x axis as this circle 01:13:702 (8) ? Just keeping on mind the last stream notes should flow as curvy as the beginning. It would mean setting that circle here 276|289 kay
  7. 01:30:179 (6) This should be stacked at this slider's end 01:29:498 (4) as well as you do in the previous jumps. nop prefer the current way
  8. 01:38:588 (4) I think the 1/8 slider isn't really necessary here. You map all the song with 1/4 and I think it sounds a bit overmapped. It would make more sense if you kept the same 1/4 with two repetitions as well as you do with this slider 01:39:043 (6). it's not 1/8 but 1/6 and i used 1/6 as well before
That's all! Sorry for the late! Here my star! \(ºuº
thx for mod =w=b
HappyRocket88
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HappyRocket88
Just rechecking. ;w;

Insane
  1. There's a duplicated green line at 01:42:222 :!:


Good luck!
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi
fixed, thx a lot for stars 👍
alacat
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alacat
I'm sorry too late :(

I guess the preview time is unsnapped :!:

http://puu.sh/ktF0e/37f0c8d308.zip
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi
Thx alanyan, updated and fixed the preview time~

Let's go !
Winnie
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Joined November 2013
Winnie
Map by far is really really good, Once I'm back I'll see what I can do. Idk if there is anything left tbh :(
KASUM1
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Joined December 2013
KASUM1
HilloW!

[Insane]
00:13:131 (5,1) - don't let these overlap
00:16:540 (3,5) - maybe stack with the trail ? :o
01:18:585 (5) - breaks the flow http://puu.sh/kw4gg/3f61c5c500.PNG
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi

KASUM1 wrote:

HilloW!

[Insane]
00:13:131 (5,1) - don't let these overlap we can't notice it in-game so that's okay
00:16:540 (3,5) - maybe stack with the trail ? :oFixed
01:18:585 (5) - breaks the flow http://puu.sh/kw4gg/3f61c5c500.PNG it's intentionnal here :P
thx for your mod ;)
Winnie
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Winnie
Based on further analysis of this map, I can't really find anything that will suffice as "Major Problem" so instead have some stars to push this map forward
*Maybe widescreen support can be turned off* 8-)
Umi
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Umi
yup I'll turn it off :) and thx for stars =w=b
Lanturn
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Lanturn

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[Lanturn's Easy] Pretty nice diff
  1. Are these green points really necessary between this spinner 00:01:770 - 00:02:225 - 00:02:679 .I don't know if I have a bad ear but I didn't listen anything different by removing them. :?:Volume affects spinners. So they have a purpose.
  2. 00:06:770 (3) This slider plays good. But I think it would fit better if it had emphasized the change of vocals which means here 00:07:452 . In this way the slider flows better and it makes better emphasis on an important beat as it is. :?:old me was a rhythm mapper I guess. the vocals would be the best spot to end this for sure.
  3. 00:10:407 (3) Same with this slider, I think it would sound better if if ended here on this red tick 00:11:088. :?:^
  4. 00:19:043 (3) The current slider flows well, but I dislike setting downbeats on white ticks. As long as this is an Easy difficulty, it would make more sense if you replace that slider by two single notes that plays fine here. as much as I believe downbeats should be emphasized like you're saying, the awkwardness of hitting (3) and (4) as circles would make it a bit hard to play. I'm going to keep this as is.
  5. 00:28:588 (3,4) In this section, the rhythm would play better if you were placed the slider in the big white tick 00:28:588 . the main reason of doing that is that, despite knowing you're following drums/vocals in the song, the main beat here are the changes of the vocals and it's not well emphasized. So, because of that, I highly suggest to do Ctrl + G en those two objects to keep a better rhythm. Like this. :?:It doesn't really matter since when I made this map, it was drum focused. I'd agree with you and personally change it, but it's way too late to do that (and I'd rather keep this map more to its original self than rework minor issues). The rhythm plays just fine elsewise.
  6. 00:51:770 (4,1) This pattern flows and plays good, but I would say it flowed better if you keep what's this slider's end 00:50:407 (3) ends to place this circle 00:51:770 (4). what about this? Makes it a bit awkward for the upcoming notes. Just gonna leave it as is. Lazy.
  7. 01:01:770 (3,1) Same stuff here, just a minor suggestion. what about this? Nah. I'd rather keep the slider end of (1) focused on where the next note will be.
  8. 01:12:225 (3) Just a minor suggestion, but you can make this slider shape more like a "S" like this. I'll try to fix it I guess.
  9. 01:23:134 (3) The flow with this slider doesn't play bad, but it would make more sense if it followed this slider's end to don't force the cursor to go to up to follow the next slider, despite knowing the flow suggest that the next slider will be at the bottom. I suggest you to follow an intuitive flow on this section. For example. :?:Nah. It really isn't as big of an issue as you make it seem. Flow isn't as important in Easy and trying to adjust every note for it, is definitely not worth it.
All in all, most of the suggestions were valid, but I literally made this map 2 to 3 years ago. Most of the suggested changes would be better, but I'd rather keep it's old looks and rhythm. Thanks for the mod o/

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Guy
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Guy
finished :3
http://puu.sh/kDXmB/be8549e2a4.zip
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi
nice 👌 updated~
alacat
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wow Guy san :)
Enimate
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Joined November 2012
Enimate
Hey there, as requested

Red = Would change
Purple = Opinion

  • Normal

  1. 00:34:949 (2,3,4) - Maybe unstack? It's not hard to read but other similar parts have spacing like: 00:41:313 (1,2,3)
  2. 00:45:404 (2) - This note is pretty high, goes off the grid a little, which is fine but you might want to move it down slightly and adjust the other notes from there
  3. 00:45:858 (3,4,5) - Same deal as first point
  4. 00:59:495 (1,2,3) - Again the same as the first point

    Overall its all fine in here, i think you should just keep certain parts consistent, so either change the ones i mentioned or change the others that are different.

    Insane

  5. 00:12:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the spacing should be more even
  6. 00:28:585 (1) - Slider isn't really leading anywhere, not a huge deal though
  7. 00:30:858 (2) - I would unstack this one personally,
  8. 00:48:585 (1) - Slider isn't leading anywhere
  9. 01:03:585 (2) - Note is pretty low but again it's really just me being nitpicky
  10. 01:06:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again even spacing would be better i think
  11. 01:09:722 (2,3) - These notes should have some spacing to match the timing
That's all i can really find, sorry if it's not too helpful
(Also should i be modding the Guest Difficulties?)
Umi
2,478 posts
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Topic Starter
Umi

Enimate wrote:

Hey there, as requested

Red = Would change
Purple = Opinion

  • Normal

  1. 00:34:949 (2,3,4) - Maybe unstack? It's not hard to read but other similar parts have spacing like: 00:41:313 (1,2,3) *consistence isn't a must in a map u don't have to always do the same thing
  2. 00:45:404 (2) - This note is pretty high, goes off the grid a little, which is fine but you might want to move it down slightly and adjust the other notes from there *that's okay for me
  3. 00:45:858 (3,4,5) - Same deal as first point *same as before
  4. 00:59:495 (1,2,3) - Again the same as the first point *^

    Overall its all fine in here, i think you should just keep certain parts consistent, so either change the ones i mentioned or change the others that are different.

    Insane

  5. 00:12:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the spacing should be more even *yup increased the spacing a bit
  6. 00:28:585 (1) - Slider isn't really leading anywhere, not a huge deal though *play good imo
  7. 00:30:858 (2) - I would unstack this one personally, *part of my style
  8. 00:48:585 (1) - Slider isn't leading anywhere *flow is important but sometimes you can break it
  9. 01:03:585 (2) - Note is pretty low but again it's really just me being nitpicky *I don't really get what u mean here
  10. 01:06:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again even spacing would be better i think *fixed
  11. 01:09:722 (2,3) - These notes should have some spacing to match the timing *it's called anti-jump
That's all i can really find, sorry if it's not too helpful
(Also should i be modding the Guest Difficulties?) If u wanna make a full mod yeah u're supposed to mod every diff, but it's okay :3
thx for your mod ~
Come[Back]Home
1,765 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Guy's Insane

00:07:676 (3) This overmap somehow doesnt fit, since theres nothing in the song for 1/4. Its better without it
00:35:858 (1) I think you should let this slider end here 00:36:199 it fits more with the vocals, and put a circle on the free white tick afterwards ( 00:42:222 (4) here youve mapped to the vocals too)
00:57:676 This beat should be clickable since its kinda strong
01:01:540 Its an Insane, so why are you ignoring the guitar here? would be nice if its clickable
01:02:563 Add a circle?
01:12:904 (2) A single circle there would fit better instead of the slider. Its cooler to play without the overmap there
01:24:495 (1,1) Those Ncs arent really necessary
01:27:449 (10) Same as 01:12:904 (2)

Insane

00:28:585 (1) Let this one end here 00:28:926 so it fits more with the vocals
00:51:085 I think (2) should start here since the guitar is stronger there, it fits more with the song
01:39:040 (6) I think a stream here would fit more like you did before.

alacat's Hard

01:15:404 (3,1) I dont like those tiny overlaps, i really think that they look ugly imo. If they would overlap a bit more it could look awesome

Ill skip Normal and Easy since they mostly are always good, especially by an experienced mapper. If you still want me to mod them, just pm me! :3

Cool Mapset, and good Luck ^~^
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Insane

00:28:585 (1) Let this one end here 00:28:926 so it fits more with the vocals okay
00:51:085 I think (2) should start here since the guitar is stronger there, it fits more with the song yup true fixed
01:39:040 (6) I think a stream here would fit more like you did before. I wanted a different pattern here

Cool Mapset, and good Luck ^~^
Thx for mod ;)
Lexis
524 posts
Joined March 2014
Lexis
Lantun's Easy


00:55:858 (1) - Why not that ?

Normal


01:31:540 (7) - Reverse ?

Alacat's Hard


00:24:495 (5,1) - Erase the slider 5 and make 3 circles
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

Dono027 wrote:

Normal


01:31:540 (7) - Reverse ? yup not bad, fixed
thx for mod ~
-Sh1n1-
3,376 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
owww, I really love this song :'( One piece ♥, take some stars and rank it please u.u
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
oh big thx =w=b and yeah dw rank should be almost there ;)
Guy
osu! Alumni
2,048 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
changed some point
Thank you for modding :)

http://puu.sh/kUGNj/88ec08eecf.zip
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,871 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
checked two mods, I didn't change my diff because the current pattern is better to me. Thanks~
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
updated ~
meii18
3,571 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
The mod will come tomorrow.Stay tuned
Hello!

[Lanturn's Easy]
  1. Audio preview time conflicts with other difficulties.The preview point must be on 01:09:608- to avoid the audio preview time conflicts with other difficulties
  2. 01:35:858(1)- On 01:36:313- there seems to be a noticeable beat which you leaving it empty adding just a note on 01:35:858-.Would be good if you will have a 1/1 slider here instead having only a note to ignore the beat from 01:36:313-.Having a 1/1 slider here,the beat would not feel empty as before
  3. 01:39:495(1)- Same as above ^.There's a noticeable beat on 01:39:949- and leaving it empty doesn't seems to be a good idea so a 1/1 slider here would be nice to follow that beat as well


[Normal]
  1. 00:23:813- Here's a noticeable beat which is ignored and left empty.A note would be good to emphasize this noticeable beat.It would be like 00:20:176(2)- where there's another noticeable beat but which is emphasize and not ignored


[alacat's Hard]
  1. 00:39:040(3,1)- The vocal from 00:39:495(1)- is going to be stronger but seems you used an antijump which doesn't emphasize the stronger vocal from 00:39:495-Increasing the spacing a bit between these sliders I mean making a jump would make more sense to that stronger vocal


[Insane]
  1. 01:09:154(2)- Honestly saying,I don't hear any beat on this tick if you listen the music carefully and also with 25% and 50% speed.It means that this note seems to be overmapped so I suggest to delete this note to avoid overmapping here and since there's no any beat on this tick


[Guy's Insane]
  1. 00:16:767(4,5,6)- If you listen the song carefully,you will see that you overmapped the doublets using triplets here.To have only doublets here to avoid overmapping the doublets you have to delete the note from 00:16:881-
  2. 01:26:767(8)- Did you forgot to add the NC here?If yes,you have to add the NC because there's the reset of the vocals and because you added NCs on every one downbeat as I can see


That must be all! Pretty nice mapset!
Call me back!
Last edited by meii18 , edited 1 time in total.
HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
xD ByBy did the placeholder I was going to do. xDDDD

Will come back after Umi fix Byby's mod. _:3_<_
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

ByBy13 wrote:

The mod will come tomorrow.Stay tuned
Hello!

[Normal]
  1. 00:23:813- Here's a noticeable beat which is ignored and left empty.A note would be good to emphasize this noticeable beat.It would be like 00:20:176(2)- where there's another noticeable beat but which is emphasize and not ignored Added a note


[Insane]
  1. 01:09:154(2)- Honestly saying,I don't hear any beat on this tick if you listen the music carefully and also with 25% and 50% speed.It means that this note seems to be overmapped so I suggest to delete this note to avoid overmapping here and since there's no any beat on this tick Fixed


That must be all! Pretty nice mapset!
Call me back!
thx for mod Byby =w=b
alacat
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alacat
fixed that part, Thanks ~ http://puu.sh/kX2nN/fddf7f64d9.zip
Lanturn
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3,902 posts
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Lanturn
@Dono
It would make more sense to have it at 00:56:767 - actually, but I prefer the long slider.

@ByBy

Fixed preview point.
As for the gaps. I wanted a bit of emphasis on the finishes I put there I guess. I'd like to keep them as is if possible.

osu file format v14

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HOpefully everything is ok now >_<
Guy
osu! Alumni
2,048 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
All fixed! Thank you for modding :)
http://puu.sh/kXMPR/1c06fa364a.zip
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
Updated ~
meii18
3,571 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
Okay,I think this should be the last thing: There's a break on Lanturn's Easy which it was mapped on other diffs and not on Easy diff.This break can be mapped on Easy diff which could balance the spread a little bit.It's up to the GDer if he/she wants or no just saying.
Also another thing on alacat's Hard: 00:07:676- there's a noticeable beat which you leave it empty instead emphasizing it.A note would be good to emphasize that beat instead leaving it empty.
On tags,guy should be Guy with 'G' in caps just saying

Call me back once again!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,871 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
I can't hear any sounds on here 00:07:676- . So i don't want to add it to here ~
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,902 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
The little break shouldn't be a problem for the Easiest diff. It actually fits nicely as well. I can map it if needed, but I personally think it should be fine as is.
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