Hi! NM Request from my queue!
General
- I recommend you deleting the two files ending with .OSB in your map's folder, since they're not necessary when you don't have a SB and just exceed the map size (even though only 1KB lol)
- The spread to Normal for Hard it's really big, i recommend you add a Advanced diff or make Hard a bit easier. It's up to you.
- The kiai of all diffs is starting at the wrong place, it should start at 00:54:717.
Easy
- 00:03:481 (1) - This isn't safe for rank, since for easy and normal diffs, you need to have at least 3 white tick of spacing between the end of the spinner and the notes. I recommend do something like that
- 00:04:829 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid this kind of overlap it isn't a big deal, i know, but it's just... ugly, i think you can make a curve slider and make a blanket, something like that ofc that you'll have to adjust the next notes.
- 00:06:852 (6,7) - It's a better idea
- 00:22:695 (5,6,7,8) - You can improve this part by making a better slider for a better blanket, try something like that. When apply this, put the (8) at the same place of (6) and adjust the next notes.
- 00:26:402 (2,3) - Like i said before, try to avoid this kind of overlap, instead of making a ugly overlap with the sliders and notes, you can simply make a beautiful blanket, look adjust the next notes.
- 00:30:447 (1,2,3) - Again another ugly overlap something like that maybe?
- 00:37:189 (2,3,4) - Newbie players can confuse a bit with this patterns, due to the innapropriate overlaps, i recommend remapping with the tips that i listed before.
- 00:45:953 (6,1) - Improve this blanket by moving the (1) for x:296 y:312.
- 00:46:964 (1,2) - If you applied the blanket suggestion above ^ , try making something like that later.
- 00:54:717 (1) - Like i said before, this isn't safe for rank, try giving 3 white ticks of spacing between the spinner and the notes.
- 01:02:807 (6) - This slider is a bit ugly compared with the rest of the map, try to make more... uhm... normal, i think... try make 2/1 slider with a reverse example if you don't know how/what is 2/1.
Well... This diff still needs a lot of improvements, the rhythm is okay, but the patterns needs more polishing, i recommend looking on another easy diffs ranked and take some ideas of good patterns for good flow.
Normal
- 00:04:829 (3,4,5) - Avoid doing those kinds of things, since it's just ruins the flow of the map. I recommend you doing something more smoother, mainly because this is a Normal diff.
- 00:13:846 (9) - XD (If you don't know how to make this, just click at the start of the break, hold the left button and drag to the place that you want to extend).
- 00:21:009 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:352 y:264 and (4) to x:347 y:138, so you can make a perfect stack with (1).
- 00:22:358 (5) - Remove the clap.
- 00:31:459 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern will really confuse average/newbie players and it's a bit ugly, try to remap this part with suggestions that i've already listed above.
- 00:46:964 (1,2) - Improve blanket here.
- 00:54:717 (1) - Like i said on Easy before, i recommend you let 2 ticks of recovery time for Normal diffs.
Well, this is all for Normal, like i said on Easy, the rhythm is ok (but i still think that you have to make the rhythm a bit harder in some parts) but the patterns still needs improving, i recommend you go through of your map and look for more patterns that can be made better and fix then. Good luck with that xD
Hard
- 00:04:661 (1) - This slider is starting on a red tick, and ending on a down beat, this is really bad, because it make a poor rhythm choice, i recommend you adding two notes instead.
- 00:08:481 (2) - This slider is too fast for this part and doesn't represent nothing on the song, change for something better like that
- 00:08:369 (1) - Remove NC here and add NC here 00:08:874 (3).
- 00:13:846 (4) - Extend the break here, like i said on Normal. (Do that for Easy too lol)
- 00:58:762 (1,1,1,1) - Why the NC's here? It doesn't have SV changes, and no motives for spamming NC like that.
- 01:10:897 (1) - Add a NC here and here 01:12:245 (1) and remove here 01:11:740 (4)
- 00:54:549 (1) - Remove this slider and add a note at the end of the slider instead.
Well, i have to say that Hard diff has more issues on rhythm and patterns that Normal and Easy, delete some notes that you think that are overmapped (doesn't fit with the music at all) and try to give your best to improve your mapset in relation of what i said. Best of luck!