Lia - Bravely You (TV Size) · forum

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2016-02-29T20:22:09+00:00

Request in-game

-Tochi's Insane

00:00:375 (1) - ctrl+g to make the flow smoother
00:09:775 - no reason to spare this beat, you can hear the piano sound there
00:26:775 (3) - Ctrl+g, firstly, the flow between 00:26:575 (2,3) - would be smoother. Secondly, 00:26:775 (3,4,5,6,1) - will map a triangle track out, it's a stable flow.
00:38:175 (3) - As the highest diffculty, I suggest you ctrl+g this slider
01:07:175 (2) - ctrl+h, then put it to the place before. cuz the pattern of 01:07:175 (2,1) - is obviously ugly.
01:28:175 (6) - NC to stress the finish hitsound?

Good luck :3

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-02-29T20:38:13+00:00

tochi's insane

00:08:175 (1,2) - white rhythm line is more important in here.
if you intend to follow vocal in here, 00:11:375 (5,1) - should be follow vocal, too.

00:16:975 (1) - unnecessary NC which don't follow regular NC cycle.

00:19:975 (1) - missing hitsound

01:13:975 (1) - ^

00:49:575 (7) - recommend to add mute slider-slide hitsound here.
at clam part, it make feel weird with this sounds.

00:50:375 (1,3) - switch NC.

00:53:575 (1) - remove NC.

01:01:175 (1) - add finish plz

01:11:375 (2,3,4,5) - idk why suddenly appear huge jump than previous partten...

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-01T17:33:37+00:00

Frey wrote:
Request in-game

-Tochi's Insane
00:00:375 (1) - ctrl+g to make the flow smoother Fixed!
00:09:775 - no reason to spare this beat, you can hear the piano sound there Not really in my ears xD
00:26:775 (3) - Ctrl+g, firstly, the flow between 00:26:575 (2,3) - would be smoother. Secondly, 00:26:775 (3,4,5,6,1) - will map a triangle track out, it's a stable flow. I prefer it not to be ctrl+g'ed, im not really a fan of the new flow it makes.
00:38:175 (3) - As the highest diffculty, I suggest you ctrl+g this slider Bad flow.
01:07:175 (2) - ctrl+h, then put it to the place before. cuz the pattern of 01:07:175 (2,1) - is obviously ugly. Ugly isn't really the word i would call it, but i like this flow indeed
01:28:175 (6) - NC to stress the finish hitsound? Fixed!

Good luck :3

Thanks!

Lami wrote:
tochi's insane

00:08:175 (1,2) - white rhythm line is more important in here.
if you intend to follow vocal in here, 00:11:375 (5,1) - should be follow vocal, too. But i followed the piano ;;

00:16:975 (1) - unnecessary NC which don't follow regular NC cycle. There's SV changes there.

00:19:975 (1) - missing hitsound Fixed!

01:13:975 (1) - ^ Fixed!

00:49:575 (7) - recommend to add mute slider-slide hitsound here.
at clam part, it make feel weird with this sounds. Imo, the hitsounds here fits better because of the calm rhythm in the background.

00:50:375 (1,3) - switch NC. Harder to read :/

00:53:575 (1) - remove NC. I'm making a 121212 pattern here.

01:01:175 (1) - add finish plz Fixed!

01:11:375 (2,3,4,5) - idk why suddenly appear huge jump than previous partten... Might make it smaller :>

Thanks for the mods!
Here's the update:

update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: bravely you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 60975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6775,22775,35575,48375
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Enon
Version:-Tochi's Insane
Source:Charlotte
Tags:bbj0920 Startrick -Tochi op シャーロット Opening 麻枝准
BeatmapID:753445
BeatmapSetID:338293

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
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Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-03-01T18:17:47+00:00

From #modreqs and m4m~

[-Tochi's Insane]

Overall this diff is already pretty good, so this'll mostly be nitpicking
00:26:775 (3) - This slider would look a lot better if it was parallel to the 1 slider. Maybe something like this?
00:41:575 (6) - I know that the strings are more quiet here, which is why you used a slider rather than circles, but I think keeping a consistent pattern with the circles (like you have 00:28:775 (6,7) - there) is better.
00:47:875 (6,7,8) - This spacing is deceiving, because the 6 to 7 isn't done with the same spacing you've been using. I recommend just placing the 7 equidistant between the 6 and 8.
00:49:016 - The whistle hitsound in this section really hurts my ears. I really think it should be quieter.
00:49:575 (7) - Why a slider? Two circles would fit better here, rhythmically and musically.
00:49:975 (1,2,1,2) - Theres really nothing in the music that implies this back and forth rhythm here, considering you haven't been using it before now.
00:54:375 (3,4,1) - Unlike the previous bit where I complained about the spacing from the slider to the triplet, its fine here, because this section is different musically.
00:53:175 (1,2,1,2) - Why the NC's here?
00:54:375 (3) - I still think the sliders seem a bit haphazardly placed. Still think it should be circles.
00:56:375 (1) - ^
00:57:975 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Once again, I really just don't hear these back and forth movements in the music. I think it'd be fine if you assigned them to a certain sound or fluctuation in the melody, but then you'd need to redesign this jump section a bit. They play fine, all of your map plays fine, its just I think it could be designed better in a few places, like here.
01:01:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Really really repetitive motion here, its really boring to play because you're basically doing the same movement twice in a row.
From 01:20:375 (1) - to 01:25:175 (1) - This bit is pretty boring as well. I like the repetition here for the music's sake, and the design in itself is good. However, its the same movement as 01:07:575 (1) - to 01:13:575 (5) - which makes it pretty lackluster in my opinion. If anything, make one of those two pattern sections clockwise instead of counterclockwise.

Overall the diff is a good TV size. Like I said in the mod, the map itself plays fine but I just think there are some weird design choices.

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-03T18:40:00+00:00

CrypticMech wrote:
From #modreqs and m4m~

[-Tochi's Insane]
Overall this diff is already pretty good, so this'll mostly be nitpicking
00:26:775 (3) - This slider would look a lot better if it was parallel to the 1 slider. Maybe something like this? I don't like that slider shape D:
00:41:575 (6) - I know that the strings are more quiet here, which is why you used a slider rather than circles, but I think keeping a consistent pattern with the circles (like you have 00:28:775 (6,7) - there) is better. Fixed!
00:47:875 (6,7,8) - This spacing is deceiving, because the 6 to 7 isn't done with the same spacing you've been using. I recommend just placing the 7 equidistant between the 6 and 8. It doesn't really fit to make it more "consistent". That's why i did it this way.
00:49:016 - The whistle hitsound in this section really hurts my ears. I really think it should be quieter. Fixed!
00:49:575 (7) - Why a slider? Two circles would fit better here, rhythmically and musically. Not imo.
00:49:975 (1,2,1,2) - Theres really nothing in the music that implies this back and forth rhythm here, considering you haven't been using it before now. The vocal really fits this pattern imo.
00:54:375 (3,4,1) - Unlike the previous bit where I complained about the spacing from the slider to the triplet, its fine here, because this section is different musically. lol, good
00:53:175 (1,2,1,2) - Why the NC's here? Fixed!
00:54:375 (3) - I still think the sliders seem a bit haphazardly placed. Still think it should be circles. But i prefer a slider here.
00:56:375 (1) - ^ Same.
00:57:975 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Once again, I really just don't hear these back and forth movements in the music. I think it'd be fine if you assigned them to a certain sound or fluctuation in the melody, but then you'd need to redesign this jump section a bit. They play fine, all of your map plays fine, its just I think it could be designed better in a few places, like here. Uh, by design do you mean how it's flowing? - I really like these 121212 jumps, because it fits well with the music.
01:01:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Really really repetitive motion here, its really boring to play because you're basically doing the same movement twice in a row. Lol, not really something i will fix, since it's more simple song.
From 01:20:375 (1) - to 01:25:175 (1) - This bit is pretty boring as well. I like the repetition here for the music's sake, and the design in itself is good. However, its the same movement as 01:07:575 (1) - to 01:13:575 (5) - which makes it pretty lackluster in my opinion. If anything, make one of those two pattern sections clockwise instead of counterclockwise. But it fits with the song D:

Overall the diff is a good TV size. Like I said in the mod, the map itself plays fine but I just think there are some weird design choices.

Thanks for the mod!
Enon, can you delete this hitsound from the folder?: soft-hitwhistle10?
Update:

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Welpe

105 posts

Joined November 2015

Welpe 2016-03-04T13:36:50+00:00

[Little Mod]
[-Toichi's Insane]

00:39:375 (2) - move to x:68 y:136 and 00:39:575 (3) - move to x:108 y:244 and we get rid of overlap
Picture
00:45:975 (3) - can do in the middle and trim under the blanket?
Picture

That's all I could find

Good luck!

Hpocks

444 posts

Joined January 2015

Hpocks 2016-03-04T20:50:23+00:00

Modding for -Tochi's Insane

AR 8.8 will be much more playable IMO. It wont break a linear AR pattern either, considering there is none. I highly advise AR 8.8 for the low BPM of the song

00:12:375 - Please make DS more consistant. 1-5 has a higher DS than 6-9
00:18:375 - ^. Now that I think about it though, this might be just intentional. If it isnt though, you should fix.
00:46:775 - What is with the sudden change of hitsounding?
01:01:075 - Easy to misread with the large jump
01:28:175 - Maybe have this a slow slider?

I apologize that I cannot provide much here. The GD is beautiful is appears to be almost perfect here. The hitsounds are well done, the blankets are all dank, the patterns and mapping is just as dank! Good luck on getting this ranked!

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Enon 2016-03-05T08:03:42+00:00

Tochi- wrote:
Enon, can you delete this hitsound from the folder?: soft-hitwhistle10?

Done. Please check new mods!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-03-05T09:18:55+00:00

Why is this still not ranked

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-05T09:37:49+00:00

Welpe wrote:
[Little Mod]
[-Toichi's Insane]
00:39:375 (2) - move to x:68 y:136 and 00:39:575 (3) - move to x:108 y:244 and we get rid of overlap The overlap is intentional, and it's not a big issue to read it since the flow helps.
Picture
00:45:975 (3) - can do in the middle and trim under the blanket? What do you mean? x.x
Picture
That's all I could find
Good luck!

Hpocks wrote:
Modding for -Tochi's Insane

AR 8.8 will be much more playable IMO. It wont break a linear AR pattern either, considering there is none. I highly advise AR 8.8 for the low BPM of the song AR 9 seems all good for me, idk why but AR 8.8 seems pointless.

00:12:375 - Please make DS more consistant. 1-5 has a higher DS than 6-9
00:18:375 - ^. Now that I think about it though, this might be just intentional. If it isnt though, you should fix. Yeah, i did it on purpose since the sounds changes in the stream.
00:46:775 - What is with the sudden change of hitsounding? It fits more with this part, mostly because the "tick" sounds in the background are more noticeable.
01:01:075 - Easy to misread with the large jump It's actually better to keep it spaced imo, because of the big spaced jumps before, then the flow here would be more fluent because of the fast movement.
01:28:175 - Maybe have this a slow slider? Doesn't fit D:

I apologize that I cannot provide much here. The GD is beautiful is appears to be almost perfect here. The hitsounds are well done, the blankets are all dank, the patterns and mapping is just as dank! Good luck on getting this ranked!

Thanks for the mods!!
Update:

code

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: bravely you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 60975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Enon
Version:-Tochi's Insane
Source:Charlotte
Tags:bbj0920 Startrick -Tochi op シャーロット Opening 麻枝准
BeatmapID:753445
BeatmapSetID:338293

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:7.5
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Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Enon 2016-03-05T10:27:31+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Why is this still not ranked

...뭔가 이것도 영어 지적인듯한 기분

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-03-05T10:46:34+00:00

Enon wrote:
...뭔가 이것도 영어 지적인듯한 기분

에? 그냥 빨리 랭되라고 한 말인데요

amusing_zero

amusing_zero 2016-03-05T14:27:09+00:00

Mod for -Tochie's insane:

00:00:375 (1) - i want you to change this slider ... i'm not sure, but smth like this:

00:01:975 (1) - missing hitsounds?
00:05:175 (1) - ^
00:06:775 (1) - strong sound here
00:08:175 (1) - add notes instead of a slider pls
00:09:775 - a note here
00:12:775 - notes here ...

00:21:375 - there's no sound for this note
00:24:275 - you may change here like this

00:28:375 - a note is missing
00:29:975 (3) - I don't like this slider, it seems to be too short, but I'm not sure
00:31:075 - such is possible instead of the slider

00:35:575 (1) - hitsound here
00:37:175 (1) - ^
00:36:975 - remove this?
00:38:175 (3) - stream of 3 notes here
00:44:575 - same?
00:54:675 (8) - too long combo
01:01:475 - do you need this note?
01:08:175 - stream of 3 notes here
01:09:775 (2) - same?
01:13:575 - stream here?

01:16:575 - ^
01:20:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - looks like copy/past

I think I've written too much, if you disagree with me it's ok ... but I really want to improve your map!

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-03-05T22:58:57+00:00

Saw you in #modreq

-Tochi's Insane

00:05:775 (2,3,4,5,6) - increasing volume for hitsounds?

00:08:575 (2) - place note there cause strong beat, at least add variety cause there's not a single reverse arrow being used on a white tick/red tick (despite knowing you're following the piano/violin)

00:19:975 (1) - not a big deal but this slider shape feels out of place, when considering most of your sliders come in pairs

00:22:375 (3,4,5,1) - curve the triple little bit so that it matches the curve for the slider, it also blankets 00:23:375 (2) - nicely

00:25:975 (1,3) - these two don't match, maybe this

00:30:775 (1,2) - going with the theme of "curved slider > angled sliders > curved sliders" I would do something like this?

00:36:375 (3) - I would just copy 00:37:175 (1) - rotate it and replace this one cause this is too out of place

01:01:075 (5,1,2,3) - make it closer to 01:00:775 (4) - cause I miss read it 2 times before I get it right (maybe I'm just bad)

overall I feel like this map flows too well, like for 2/3 of the songs the motion is basically going clock wise, and the chorus you go counter clockwise maybe this was your intention, then you have to force it to be fun by adding a difficulty spike in the pre-chorus and the chorus, if this is your style then it's fine but I would personally reverse the motion maybe every 16 beats or so

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2016-03-06T02:29:46+00:00

-tochi's insane
no issues from me

rank already orz

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-03-06T04:04:39+00:00

This was not on my plans.
God I'm too lazy to type anything. Laziest mod you'll ever read.

[EZreal]

00:48:375 (1,3) - players can clearly see (3)'s approach circle while they're still hitting (1). consider unstacking.
01:03:575 (4,1) - not longer an easy! + 01:04:375 - finish should be there (i mean the hitsound, start the slider on that spot). kinda applies for 01:13:175 (4,1) - and 01:16:375 (4,1) - . don't use 1/2s please ty!

[baby]

00:03:575 (1) - really disagree with this slider being there, especially the whistle on the repeater, why!?
00:25:175 (5) - there's a clap missing
01:21:975 (2) - you can't overlap the sliderbody with itself on a normal lel
01:26:775 - no way you are not making this clickable

dunno, diff looks a bit unpolished, a lot of overlaps u h h

[startrick]

ayyyy! i missed you, where have you beeen!?!?!?!
this diff is very polished, well donje!!!! hp 5 pls

00:16:975 (3,4,5) - everything is so crowded there what about (3) to x216 y360?
01:26:775 (1,2,3,4) - remove those claps from the tail please lol

[nsane]

amazing difficulty, this is a piece of art

00:15:775 (5,6) - mind the inconsistent spacing on (6) and the weird angle it has? looks very weird, especially that spacing l o l.
00:27:775 (2,3) - this spacing might be too high compared to the others, but that's just me lol
01:00:375 (3,4,1) - why are you emphasising (4) that much but ignoring (1) that way? ((
01:07:575 - let me suggest you something please! 01:07:575 (1,2) - should be properly stacked with 01:06:975 (5) - for aesthetics ayy. and for (5,6,7) try this http://puu.sh/nwoZJ/7a0e33ae55.jpg instead. i think it is a bit better, the transition from (6>7>1) is quite ummm weird
01:15:975 (2) - by changing the slidershape, you can get a more intuitive flow from (2,3,4) http://puu.sh/nwp9l/de716a4ad9.jpg

[tchi]

00:15:575 (4,5) - try ctrl+h and add more spacing, it flows 150% better
00:19:975 (1) - ay the hitsounding, Tochi
00:50:375 (1) - ay the nc
01:02:575 (1) - ay the tail, clickable
01:03:975 (5,1) - ay the spacing/angle is too sharp, reducing the spacing will help this flow waaaay better
01:13:975 (1) - ay the hitsound again
01:18:375 (4,1,2) - transition can be improved a lot by rotating 01:18:575 (1) - 90° clockwise
01:25:575 (2,3) - try reducing the amount of finishes, too much noise ugh

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get more mods on that normal pls!

Doyak

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-03-06T04:09:34+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
This was not on my plans.

Do your planned ones first please xD

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-03-06T04:19:49+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Yuii- wrote:
This was not on my plans.
Do your planned ones first please xD

EXACTLY! Someone told me to check Tochi's and amm... Nao #1.
I'm so sorry!

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-06T09:40:46+00:00

amusing_zero wrote:
Mod for -Tochie's insane:

00:00:375 (1) - i want you to change this slider ... i'm not sure, but smth like this: That's clearly overmapping. There's not need for streams at all here.
00:01:975 (1) - missing hitsounds? I don't think so
00:05:175 (1) - ^ ^
00:06:775 (1) - strong sound here Yes, i already mapped it.
00:08:175 (1) - add notes instead of a slider pls Doesn't fit..
00:09:775 - a note here I don't think it fits with the pattern.
00:12:775 - notes here ... I like may better..
00:21:375 - there's no sound for this note There's a piano sound for it.
00:24:275 - you may change here like this That's overmapped..
00:28:375 - a note is missing Same as last part like this.
00:29:975 (3) - I don't like this slider, it seems to be too short, but I'm not sure I think it's okay tbh.
00:31:075 - such is possible instead of the slider ?
00:35:575 (1) - hitsound here There already is.
00:37:175 (1) - ^ ^
00:36:975 - remove this? Nah, there's a sound there.
00:38:175 (3) - stream of 3 notes here Overmapping
00:44:575 - same? Decided to keep it simple.
00:54:675 (8) - too long combo ?
01:01:475 - do you need this note? Yes, it emphasizes with the vocal.
01:08:175 - stream of 3 notes here Overmapping..
01:09:775 (2) - same? ^
01:13:575 - stream here? Sliders fits more.
01:16:575 - ^ Overmapping..
01:20:375 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - looks like copy/past It's not lol.

I think I've written too much, if you disagree with me it's ok ... but I really want to improve your map!

I think you should improve more before modding x.x Otherwise people will disagree with your mods.. try to improve more by mapping maps, and getting mods yourself, and then you could start trying to help people.

N0thingSpecial wrote:
Saw you in #modreq

-Tochi's Insane
00:05:775 (2,3,4,5,6) - increasing volume for hitsounds? I don't want to get over 50% And it sounds bad when i start from something lower.

00:08:575 (2) - place note there cause strong beat, at least add variety cause there's not a single reverse arrow being used on a white tick/red tick (despite knowing you're following the piano/violin) It fits more with a slider to emphasize the violin/piano tbh.

00:19:975 (1) - not a big deal but this slider shape feels out of place, when considering most of your sliders come in pairs I used it later on - But i think i should change it here.

00:22:375 (3,4,5,1) - curve the triple little bit so that it matches the curve for the slider, it also blankets 00:23:375 (2) - nicely I don't like curved triplets when they're not so spaced.

00:25:975 (1,3) - these two don't match, maybe this Fixed, since other mentioned it too.

00:30:775 (1,2) - going with the theme of "curved slider > angled sliders > curved sliders" I would do something like this? The little curve at the end of the long slider is blanketing the next slider which looks better imo.

00:36:375 (3) - I would just copy 00:37:175 (1) - rotate it and replace this one cause this is too out of place I don't think the copy pasta one makes it better :<

01:01:075 (5,1,2,3) - make it closer to 01:00:775 (4) - cause I miss read it 2 times before I get it right (maybe I'm just bad) Moved it a tiny bit closer.

overall I feel like this map flows too well, like for 2/3 of the songs the motion is basically going clock wise, and the chorus you go counter clockwise maybe this was your intention, then you have to force it to be fun by adding a difficulty spike in the pre-chorus and the chorus, if this is your style then it's fine but I would personally reverse the motion maybe every 16 beats or so My third remap lol, so i had to do something about it xd I didn't take any chances.

Yuii- wrote:
[tchi]

00:15:575 (4,5) - try ctrl+h and add more spacing, it flows 150% better Fixed!
00:19:975 (1) - ay the hitsounding, Tochi Fixed!
00:50:375 (1) - ay the nc Fixed!
01:02:575 (1) - ay the tail, clickable I prefer to keep it a slider.
01:03:975 (5,1) - ay the spacing/angle is too sharp, reducing the spacing will help this flow waaaay better Fixed!
01:13:975 (1) - ay the hitsound again Fixed!
01:18:375 (4,1,2) - transition can be improved a lot by rotating 01:18:575 (1) - 90° clockwise The other two sliders would not flow well.
01:25:575 (2,3) - try reducing the amount of finishes, too much noise ugh Fixed!

Thanks for the mods uwu
Update:

code

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AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 60975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Enon
Version:-Tochi's Insane
Source:Charlotte
Tags:bbj0920 Startrick -Tochi op シャーロット Opening 麻枝准
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Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2016-03-06T10:43:27+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
[baby]

00:03:575 (1) - really disagree with this slider being there, especially the whistle on the repeater, why!? - following guitar which is not THAT major
00:25:175 (5) - there's a clap missing
01:21:975 (2) - you can't overlap the sliderbody with itself on a normal lel
01:26:775 - no way you are not making this clickable
dunno, diff looks a bit unpolished, a lot of overlaps u h h

get more mods on that normal pls!

others are fixed

i'm fukd xd

uhh there are like, 5 major overlaps? those shouldn't hurt readability that much imo

http://puu.sh/nwGYk/70a815c457.osu

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2016-03-06T13:45:23+00:00

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Startrick

361 posts

Joined June 2013

Startrick 2016-03-06T13:48:33+00:00

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Last edited by Startrick 2017-12-27T04:26:23+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Enon 2016-03-06T14:08:34+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
This was not on my plans.
God I'm too lazy to type anything. Laziest mod you'll ever read. @_@

[EZreal]

00:48:375 (1,3) - players can clearly see (3)'s approach circle while they're still hitting (1). consider unstacking.
✐ http://puu.sh/nwPzb/0eaf4f6805.jpg I guess its fine?
01:03:575 (4,1) - not longer an easy! + 01:04:375 - finish should be there (i mean the hitsound, start the slider on that spot). kinda applies for 01:13:175 (4,1) - and 01:16:375 (4,1) - . don't use 1/2s please ty! ✔ ok bro
[nsane]

amazing difficulty, this is a piece of art not true /w\

00:15:775 (5,6) - mind the inconsistent spacing on (6) and the weird angle it has? looks very weird, especially that spacing l o l. ✔ Lol Done xD
00:27:775 (2,3) - this spacing might be too high compared to the others, but that's just me lol ✐ well I know that b-but, My heart don't want change it /w\
01:00:375 (3,4,1) - why are you emphasising (4) that much but ignoring (1) that way? (( ✔ changed a bit
01:07:575 - let me suggest you something please! 01:07:575 (1,2) - should be properly stacked with 01:06:975 (5) - for aesthetics ayy. and for (5,6,7) try this http://puu.sh/nwoZJ/7a0e33ae55.jpg instead. i think it is a bit better, the transition from (6>7>1) is quite ummm weird ✔ changed by my way
01:15:975 (2) - by changing the slidershape, you can get a more intuitive flow from (2,3,4) http://puu.sh/nwp9l/de716a4ad9.jpg ✔ i made it same to yours
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get more mods on that normal pls!

thank you for modding!

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Bearizm

1,213 posts

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2016-03-10T13:36:50+00:00

Hello~

Tochi's iNsAnE

00:01:975 (1) - maybe make this 2 circles instead? I feel like it's a lot better with 2 circles because of the piano. Feels wrong to skip it since they're the main rhythm in this part.
00:10:175 - skipped the vocal here. Not a fan of vocal mapping most of the time but I feel like in this kind of song, mapping the vocal would be nice. Or at least land a slider end here.
00:11:975 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream is a bit weird for me. isn't 00:12:375 (6,7,8,9,10) - supposed to be the one that have more distance compared to 2,3,4,5 since the pitch goes higher in the instruments?
00:18:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:24:975 (3) - 00:37:775 (2) - 00:44:175 (2) - switch the whistle sound from the slider end to the start.
00:25:375 (4) - 00:38:175 (3) - 00:44:575 (3) - whistle on start.
00:27:975 (3) - whistle?
00:40:775 (3,4) - whistles.
01:04:175 (1) - a bit counter-intuitive to stack this since this is a strong downbeat, especially with that finish.
01:06:575 (1) - whistle on head?
01:08:175 (2,2,2) - a bit weird that you put a hitsound in the slider end but didn't really make it tappable. Probably just me haha, tho; I'm guilty of this sometimes so yea.
01:13:575 (5,6) - better if u make this part symmetrical. Just rotate it this way.
SPOILER
01:19:975 (6) - better to make this a slider to emphasize the strong vocal.
01:28:175 (6) - x132y320? Sharp angles tends to play well. This flows better and not too linear so I think this is more comfortable to play haha.

Good luck!

Hope this is useful..

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-10T14:28:24+00:00

Bearizm wrote:
Hello~

Tochi's iNsAnE
00:01:975 (1) - maybe make this 2 circles instead? I feel like it's a lot better with 2 circles because of the piano. Feels wrong to skip it since they're the main rhythm in this part. I actually use the slider to follow the piano, and i think it fits more.
00:10:175 - skipped the vocal here. Not a fan of vocal mapping most of the time but I feel like in this kind of song, mapping the vocal would be nice. Or at least land a slider end here. I use the same pattern like this other places too, i intentionally didn't map to the vocals mostly because i mapped to the beat before too which leads to this vocal-skip.
00:11:975 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This stream is a bit weird for me. isn't 00:12:375 (6,7,8,9,10) - supposed to be the one that have more distance compared to 2,3,4,5 since the pitch goes higher in the instruments? Fixed!
00:18:375 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ Fixed!
00:24:975 (3) - 00:37:775 (2) - 00:44:175 (2) - switch the whistle sound from the slider end to the start. Fixed!
00:25:375 (4) - 00:38:175 (3) - 00:44:575 (3) - whistle on start. Fixed!
00:27:975 (3) - whistle? Fixed!
00:40:775 (3,4) - whistles. Fixed!
01:04:175 (1) - a bit counter-intuitive to stack this since this is a strong downbeat, especially with that finish. Fixed!
01:06:575 (1) - whistle on head? Fixed!
01:08:175 (2,2,2) - a bit weird that you put a hitsound in the slider end but didn't really make it tappable. Probably just me haha, tho; I'm guilty of this sometimes so yea. Fixed!
01:13:575 (5,6) - better if u make this part symmetrical. Just rotate it this way. It's intentional >.<
SPOILER
01:19:975 (6) - better to make this a slider to emphasize the strong vocal. I would, but it just makes the flow worse lol
01:28:175 (6) - x132y320? Sharp angles tends to play well. This flows better and not too linear so I think this is more comfortable to play haha. I moved it a bit down.

Good luck! Hope this is useful..

Thanks for the mod!
Update:

code

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 60975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Enon
Version:-Tochi's Insane
Source:Charlotte
Tags:bbj0920 Startrick -Tochi op シャーロット Opening 麻枝准
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Nakano Itsuki

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Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-03-11T17:18:49+00:00

modding tochi's diff on enon's rq

[d]
00:05:175 (1) - you can use a hitsound on the sliderend, whistle/clap/whatever
00:06:375 (5,6) - flow seems weird here, ctrl+g works better
00:08:175 (1,2) - I dont really recommend using a sliderend for the downbeat; I'd suggest something like http://puu.sh/nCRnz/50200b6ada.jpg (and you could possibly do a triple between first circle and the slider in that suggestion.)
00:09:775 add something here, it just throws the player off to not have something here as the music goes on
00:14:575 (1,2) - same issue here as 00:08:175 (1,2) -
00:15:775 (5,6) - extremely sharp turn here imo, i guess you could ctrl+g the slider for smoother movement?
00:27:175 (4,5,6) - suggestion: make this a spaced triple for better play
imo the shape of 00:36:375 (3) - doesnt compliment the shape of 00:35:575 (1) - , not that it's unrankable, but it simply doesnt look good.
00:39:575 (3) - this could be put a bit downwards, right now the angle of movement between 00:38:775 (1,2,3) - is pretty sharp angled
00:56:975 (3,4,5) - this triple can be spaced out imo, right now the short spaced triple kills the momentum of play
01:01:175 (1) - whistle on head
01:25:575 (2) - clap on sliderhead

gl~

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-03-11T17:30:03+00:00

StarrStyx wrote:
modding tochi's diff on enon's rq

10th mod for remapped Tochi's diff
이제 슬슬 BN 다시 불러보시는 게?

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-03-11T21:39:14+00:00

Doyak, just a random question.

Did you apply for the BNG? You have such a great potential, I'd love to see you in the team, Sonnyc is already here!

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-03-11T21:56:55+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
Doyak, just a random question.

Did you apply for the BNG? You have such a great potential, I'd love to see you in the team, Sonnyc is already here!

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-03-11T22:25:20+00:00

Hmmmmmm... I got a 60~

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-03-11T22:39:32+00:00

Oh btw Yuii, my map for your queue just qualified 2 days ago, so can I save it for another map? I'm working on a new mapset so probably on there!

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-03-11T23:51:44+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Oh btw Yuii, my map for your queue just qualified 2 days ago, so can I save it for another map? I'm working on a new mapset so probably on there!

Yes! I'm having a lil' of issues IRL so trying to get slowly back to this game again.

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-12T11:45:14+00:00

StarrStyx wrote:
modding tochi's diff on enon's rq

[d]
00:05:175 (1) - you can use a hitsound on the sliderend, whistle/clap/whatever Fixed!
00:06:375 (5,6) - flow seems weird here, ctrl+g works better I prefer the triangle.
00:08:175 (1,2) - I dont really recommend using a sliderend for the downbeat; I'd suggest something like http://puu.sh/nCRnz/50200b6ada.jpg (and you could possibly do a triple between first circle and the slider in that suggestion.) I don't think it would fit as much as when i map the sliders to the piano's strongest beat.
00:09:775 add something here, it just throws the player off to not have something here as the music goes on It's not really an issue for me tbh, but well i don't think it's necessary.
00:14:575 (1,2) - same issue here as 00:08:175 (1,2) - Same answer
00:15:775 (5,6) - extremely sharp turn here imo, i guess you could ctrl+g the slider for smoother movement? Fixed in another way!
00:27:175 (4,5,6) - suggestion: make this a spaced triple for better play I don't think spaced triplets would fit in this map D:
imo the shape of 00:36:375 (3) - doesnt compliment the shape of 00:35:575 (1) - , not that it's unrankable, but it simply doesnt look good. I guess i should fix this since other people mentioned it too..
00:39:575 (3) - this could be put a bit downwards, right now the angle of movement between 00:38:775 (1,2,3) - is pretty sharp angled I like it better when it's sharp
00:56:975 (3,4,5) - this triple can be spaced out imo, right now the short spaced triple kills the momentum of play Not really as much as if it was stacked, doesn't bother that much tho
01:01:175 (1) - whistle on head Fixed!
01:25:575 (2) - clap on sliderhead Fixed!

gl~

Thanks for the mod, here's the update:

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: bravely you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 60975
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6775,22775,35575,48375
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Enon
Version:-Tochi's Insane
Source:Charlotte
Tags:bbj0920 Startrick -Tochi op シャーロット Opening 麻枝准
BeatmapID:753445
BeatmapSetID:338293

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Enon 2016-03-12T13:10:40+00:00

done

Doyak wrote:
이제 슬슬 BN 다시 불러보시는 게?

유이가* bbj님 난이도에 모딩 좀 더 받아오라고 했었는데

일단 불러보려고요

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-03-13T04:18:30+00:00

General:

can we use same kiai for every diff??

Easy:

00:17:975 (3,1) - avoid overlap pls, don't looks clean at all

Normal:

00:01:775 (3) - remove this circle to bring more emphasis to 00:01:975 (4) - also to maje the diff less dense
00:11:175 (3,4) - to fit better the drums and avoid the confusing mix rhythm with vocals just use a 1/1 slider is a normal diff you don't need to map all
00:13:775 (2,3) - the strong beat is in the tail of 2 so the rhythm feels so weird if you don't bring a click action to it, try this:
00:18:775 (6,7) - a 1/1 slider fit better what we expect at normal, also is better for the current map spread
00:22:575 (5) - remove this circle to low the density of the map, also 00:22:775 (1) - sounds stronger if you do that
00:32:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - okay, this part is too dense compared to other, I also heavily disagree with the overlap 00:32:375 (1,2) - doesn't looks nice and is confused to play, I got some low rank player to test, so lets try this:
00:49:775 (3) - 00:52:975 (3) - 00:56:175 (3) - sounds better if you remove those circles, since you can't follow every vocal in the music, so sounds a bit random
01:02:375 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - again the rhythm is going to dense compared to easy and hard diff, this is more close to hard than easy, lets try:
01:05:575 (3,4) - these kind of overlaps doesn't looks nice, I get your idea, but your spacing usage don't make it looks like is supposed to be
01:06:975 (6,7) - use a slider instead would be more new player friendly
01:15:175 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is overdone compared to the rest of the map, just make the rhythm simple, my suggestion:
01:23:575 (3) - Missing NC
01:26:375 (5) - make this a single circle
01:26:775 (1,2) - use a slider instead, is the end of the map >;

Insane:

01:23:975 (1,1,1) - I dont think you need those NCs, since the spacing between objects is basically the same

Tochi

Looks alot better GJ
AR 8,5 is better, I'd accept 8,8 max, 9 is too much
00:01:975 (1) - Listen to the song melody 2 circles fit the song alot better
00:09:975 (1) - vocals are going in 1/2, so change to 1/2 slider.
00:28:775 (6,7) - listen to the song melody and drums a single slider work better with the melody
00:31:375 (2,3) - rhythm is not that nice o,o, even if you follow vocals or drums, should be something like:
00:37:775 (2,3) - same as above
00:41:575 (6,7) - same as 00:28:775
00:48:375 (1) - from 00:48:375 (1) - to 00:59:375 (2) - hitsounds are super weird, beats are barely audible and finish sound is so strong, could you use Enon's hitsounds for this part?
00:54:675 (8) - 00:57:075 (4) - 00:51:475 (9) - remove this circle, I can't listen nothing prominent that worth being mapped here
01:00:775 (4,5) - rhythm is super weird, just use 2 circles in 01:00:775 (4) - and remove 01:01:075 (5) -
01:05:775 (5) - NC should be here not in 01:06:575 (1) -
01:15:775 (5) - missing NC

다 고치고 형 불러

Enon

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Topic Starter

Enon 2016-03-13T08:23:47+00:00

Natsu wrote:
General:

can we use same kiai for every diff?? ✔ Ok. It would be applied when I update
Easy:

00:17:975 (3,1) - avoid overlap pls, don't looks clean at all ✔ Fixed!
Insane:

01:23:975 (1,1,1) - I dont think you need those NCs, since the spacing between objects is basically the same ✔ :O I also think like that. Fixed!
다 고치고 형 불러 항상 고마워 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-13T10:52:28+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Tochi

Looks alot better GJ Thanks!
AR 8,5 is better, I'd accept 8,8 max, 9 is too much After a couple of complaints, i think i should change it.
00:01:975 (1) - Listen to the song melody 2 circles fit the song alot better Fixed!
00:09:975 (1) - vocals are going in 1/2, so change to 1/2 slider. Fixed!
00:28:775 (6,7) - listen to the song melody and drums a single slider work better with the melody Fixed!
00:31:375 (2,3) - rhythm is not that nice o,o, even if you follow vocals or drums, should be something like: It doesn't support the strongest sound of all the violin, so it doesn't really fit in that case.
00:37:775 (2,3) - same as above Same ^
00:41:575 (6,7) - same as 00:28:775
00:48:375 (1) - from 00:48:375 (1) - to 00:59:375 (2) - hitsounds are super weird, beats are barely audible and finish sound is so strong, could you use Enon's hitsounds for this part? I think the hitnormal fits more for this part, and i don't have a custom hitfinish, so idk why i should change it x.x
00:54:675 (8) - 00:57:075 (4) - 00:51:475 (9) - remove this circle, I can't listen nothing prominent that worth being mapped here There actually is in my ears, if you are still unsure which im not, then try to ask another BN D:
01:00:775 (4,5) - rhythm is super weird, just use 2 circles in 01:00:775 (4) - and remove 01:01:075 (5) - I disagree on this, mostly because of the amount of space there is to make a 1/2 only pattern here, but also because im completely fine with how it is now, but i might have changed if you gave me a nice other way to map this.
01:05:775 (5) - NC should be here not in 01:06:575 (1) - Fixed!
01:15:775 (5) - missing NC Fixed!

Thanks for the mod!
Update:

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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-03-13T11:05:30+00:00

-Tochi wrote:
Natsu wrote:
Tochi

00:31:375 (2,3) - rhythm is not that nice o,o, even if you follow vocals or drums, should be something like: It doesn't support the strongest sound of all the violin, so it doesn't really fit in that case. the stronger hits are in 00:31:975 - and 00:31:575 - both red ticks are really not that prominent compared to the downbeats
00:37:775 (2,3) - same as above Same ^ ^
00:48:375 (1) - from 00:48:375 (1) - to 00:59:375 (2) - hitsounds are super weird, beats are barely audible and finish sound is so strong, could you use Enon's hitsounds for this part? I think the hitnormal fits more for this part, and i don't have a custom hitfinish, so idk why i should change it x.x okay, then reduce the volume of those finish
00:54:675 (8) - 00:57:075 (4) - 00:51:475 (9) - remove this circle, I can't listen nothing prominent that worth being mapped here There actually is in my ears, if you are still unsure which im not, then try to ask another BN D: no I'm sure about this, that's why I pointed out, there are some really tiny sounds that don't worh being mapped at all, also if you mapping like 4 random sounds but ignoring all the others make less sense
01:00:775 (4,5) - rhythm is super weird, just use 2 circles in 01:00:775 (4) - and remove 01:01:075 (5) - I disagree on this, mostly because of the amount of space there is to make a 1/2 only pattern here, but also because im completely fine with how it is now, but i might have changed if you gave me a nice other way to map this. there is a cymbal at 01:00:975 - still is mapping as slider tail without click action, here is another cymbal 01:01:175 (1) - , so basically you are mapping a really weak 1/4 beat 01:01:075 (5) - and sounds so bad, also 01:00:975 - need a click action even you added finish on it .-.

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-03-13T11:14:28+00:00

Natsu wrote:
[*]00:54:675 (8) - 00:57:075 (4) - 00:51:475 (9) - remove this circle, I can't listen nothing prominent that worth being mapped here There actually is in my ears, if you are still unsure which im not, then try to ask another BN D: no I'm sure about this, that's why I pointed out, there are some really tiny sounds that don't worh being mapped at all, also if you mapping like 4 random sounds but ignoring all the others make less sense

I think the problem with this is, that Tochi didn't map 'all' of those triplets but only 'some' of them, and they're pretty weak indeed. There are some more obvious 1/4s there, but he didn't map all of them. So I guess it's better to use 1/2 only here.

-Tochi

Elite Storyboarder

1,444 posts

Joined November 2013

-Tochi 2016-03-13T11:32:35+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Tochi

00:31:375 (2,3) - rhythm is not that nice o,o, even if you follow vocals or drums, should be something like: the stronger hits are in 00:31:975 - and 00:31:575 - both red ticks are really not that prominent compared to the downbeats
00:37:775 (2,3) - same as above ^
00:48:375 (1) - from 00:48:375 (1) - to 00:59:375 (2) - hitsounds are super weird, beats are barely audible and finish sound is so strong, could you use Enon's hitsounds for this part? okay, then reduce the volume of those finish
00:54:675 (8) - 00:57:075 (4) - 00:51:475 (9) - remove this circle, I can't listen nothing prominent that worth being mapped here no I'm sure about this, that's why I pointed out, there are some really tiny sounds that don't worh being mapped at all, also if you mapping like 4 random sounds but ignoring all the others make less sense
01:00:775 (4,5) - rhythm is super weird, just use 2 circles in 01:00:775 (4) - and remove 01:01:075 (5) - there is a cymbal at 01:00:975 - still is mapping as slider tail without click action, here is another cymbal 01:01:175 (1) - , so basically you are mapping a really weak 1/4 beat 01:01:075 (5) - and sounds so bad, also 01:00:975 - need a click action even you added finish on it .-.

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Alright, fixed everything xd
Update again:

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