Hey Bober and Kiri :3/
Here for the NM request you asked for.
I remember being asked for mostly pattern fixes so that's what i will mostly base this mod for
General
Salad has more notes than Platter. You need less notes in salad or else it's not rankable.
In Kiri's cup the Short kiai's are really unnecessary and provides a lot of warnings. Best to get rid of them Kiri ;w;.
Some tags conflict in AiMod.
Just a suggestion but some combo colours might be nice instead of the default ones.
Hope this helped
Best of luck Bober >W<
Here for the NM request you asked for.
I remember being asked for mostly pattern fixes so that's what i will mostly base this mod for
General
Salad has more notes than Platter. You need less notes in salad or else it's not rankable.
In Kiri's cup the Short kiai's are really unnecessary and provides a lot of warnings. Best to get rid of them Kiri ;w;.
Some tags conflict in AiMod.
Just a suggestion but some combo colours might be nice instead of the default ones.
Kiri's Cup
00:04:482 (1) - In 25% playback rate this is off time. Try listen close and fix please.
00:10:482 (2) - There is not a guitar noise on the start or one part on the 2nd reverse bit of this reversing slider as you have followed the guitar mostly. So suggest changing to this instead.
00:16:882 (2) - ^
00:22:482 (3) - After this note there is a large break which feels left out. I would do what Bober did in his diffs and add a spinner here to fill up the gap. Or at least just insert a break
00:26:682 (2) - I would change this section to something like this so it gives more emphasis on the next note and also reduces the constant notes as it can lead to overmapping sometimes for a cup.
00:38:282 (3) - Should really be a note here so best to have this section like this
00:39:082 (1) - NC here to not stack
00:39:282 (6) - You can remove this note as it's not very powerful and another reason for not overmapping
00:40:282 (5) - NC here and remove at 00:40:682 (1) -
00:42:682 (5) - NC
00:45:082 - add note in here
00:49:082 (1) - NC
00:10:482 (2) - There is not a guitar noise on the start or one part on the 2nd reverse bit of this reversing slider as you have followed the guitar mostly. So suggest changing to this instead.
00:16:882 (2) - ^
00:22:482 (3) - After this note there is a large break which feels left out. I would do what Bober did in his diffs and add a spinner here to fill up the gap. Or at least just insert a break
00:26:682 (2) - I would change this section to something like this so it gives more emphasis on the next note and also reduces the constant notes as it can lead to overmapping sometimes for a cup.
00:38:282 (3) - Should really be a note here so best to have this section like this
00:39:082 (1) - NC here to not stack
00:39:282 (6) - You can remove this note as it's not very powerful and another reason for not overmapping
00:40:282 (5) - NC here and remove at 00:40:682 (1) -
00:42:682 (5) - NC
00:45:082 - add note in here
00:49:082 (1) - NC
Salad
Big thing about this diff is the SV (Slider velocity) which is at 1.8 which is really high for this diff. If you used 1.5 and resnapped all note then you would see how big the improvements would be.
00:04:882 (2) - This note should be on 00:04:915 - which is a 1/12 snap because if you listen in 25% playback rate, it's off time. (won't mention again in platter and rain so try to snap all note to this time on each diff)
00:12:482 (4) - Like i said in general i think this diff has too many notes as platter has a lot less. Removing notes like this here would be wise to do. I would go through and check for notes that have not much sound like this (or none at all) and remove them.
00:13:082 (1) - just another example for above ^
00:17:382 (5) - I would only expect these notes to go into the platter. So i would remove all these blue tick notes to reduce notes.
00:22:682 (1) - The end of the slider does not really give a good blast into the chorus. I would reduce the slider and add a circle note or something to your liking at where the end of the spinner is right now. A bit like this maybe ?
00:27:082 (4,5) - This has got kind of a slide noise to the music so i would remove (4, 5) and make a slider instead
00:35:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a great way to reduce notes is to replace circle notes with slider notes instead. Just a thought
00:39:882 (4) - same as 00:27:082 (4,5) -
00:47:282 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah more sliders i think instead ;w;
00:04:882 (2) - This note should be on 00:04:915 - which is a 1/12 snap because if you listen in 25% playback rate, it's off time. (won't mention again in platter and rain so try to snap all note to this time on each diff)
00:12:482 (4) - Like i said in general i think this diff has too many notes as platter has a lot less. Removing notes like this here would be wise to do. I would go through and check for notes that have not much sound like this (or none at all) and remove them.
00:13:082 (1) - just another example for above ^
00:17:382 (5) - I would only expect these notes to go into the platter. So i would remove all these blue tick notes to reduce notes.
00:22:682 (1) - The end of the slider does not really give a good blast into the chorus. I would reduce the slider and add a circle note or something to your liking at where the end of the spinner is right now. A bit like this maybe ?
00:27:082 (4,5) - This has got kind of a slide noise to the music so i would remove (4, 5) and make a slider instead
00:35:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a great way to reduce notes is to replace circle notes with slider notes instead. Just a thought
00:39:882 (4) - same as 00:27:082 (4,5) -
00:47:282 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah more sliders i think instead ;w;
Platter
00:22:682 (1) - Same spinner reason as in salad
00:24:882 (2) - Add a note here as it feels a bit of an empty start to the chorus
00:28:282 (2,3,4,1,2) - hmmm i don't mind the first 3 reverse sliders but when it gets to the new combo at (1) it feel a bit repetitive then with the reverse slider. Perhaps other ideas would be better ?
00:47:882 (1,2,3,4) - The notes here sound a bit too far ahead and need to be dragged back in order for the sliders to fit with the music more. Try this perhaps ?
Apart from that i loved this Platter!
00:24:882 (2) - Add a note here as it feels a bit of an empty start to the chorus
00:28:282 (2,3,4,1,2) - hmmm i don't mind the first 3 reverse sliders but when it gets to the new combo at (1) it feel a bit repetitive then with the reverse slider. Perhaps other ideas would be better ?
00:47:882 (1,2,3,4) - The notes here sound a bit too far ahead and need to be dragged back in order for the sliders to fit with the music more. Try this perhaps ?
Apart from that i loved this Platter
!Rain
00:24:282 (1) - This is not a very good drop ;w;. I would half this slider and add more notes just after it for more of a kick. (or leave as it is and at least add some notes after it)
00:35:482 (1) - NC no stacking
00:36:682 (11,12,13) - This jump is mostly what you would see in a overdose. I would try something else here
00:39:282 (3,4,5) - These jumps are mostly in overdose too (some before this too) maybe an idea is to have it gradually increase the space or decrease the space over the next few notes ? 2 hypers to hypers seems oaky to me but 3 hypers at the same time to one another seems a bit like overdose.
00:35:482 (1) - NC no stacking
00:36:682 (11,12,13) - This jump is mostly what you would see in a overdose. I would try something else here
00:39:282 (3,4,5) - These jumps are mostly in overdose too (some before this too) maybe an idea is to have it gradually increase the space or decrease the space over the next few notes ? 2 hypers to hypers seems oaky to me but 3 hypers at the same time to one another seems a bit like overdose.
Hope this helped
Best of luck Bober >W<
Examples:
Map is really good.
Nie czepiam się jumpów w kiai time, bo tu muszą być trudniejsze.
