Equim wrote:
From M4M ^^
[Salad]
Generally, some distance are too wide for Salad.
00:19:282 (5,1,2) - reduce the distance? ok
00:24:682 (1,2) - reduce the distance, maybe move 00:24:682 (1) - to x:196. moved a bit
00:25:482 - add a note here at x:396 and move 00:25:282 (3) - to x:284 to make it flow better. ok
00:25:882 (1) - x:322 moved a bit
00:26:682 (2,3,4,5) - x:152 moved a bit
00:27:482 (1) - x:196 nope because it will be anti-flow movement with that
00:28:682 (4,5) - x:48 moved a bit
00:36:082 (4,5,6) - x:316 moved a bit
00:38:082 (3) - x:56 moved a bit
00:39:682 (3,5) - x:376 moved a bit
00:41:482 (3) - x:164 moved a bit
00:47:682 (4) - x:300 moved a bit
00:48:282 (1,2) - x:128 moved a bit
I moved most of notes a bit or make them just flow better :^)
[Platter]
Generally, mind the combo. New combo every 15combo.
00:06:682 (5) - NC
00:08:282 (1) - x:112
00:09:882 (5) - NC
00:19:682 (5) - NC
00:20:882 (8) - x:192
00:24:682 (1) - x:288 moved a bit
00:27:482 (1) - x:80
00:28:882 (3) - x:328
00:30:082 (5) - x:188, and NC
00:31:482 (7,8,9) - x:112 nope I want keep this long hyper
00:34:682 (2) - x:216
00:35:882 (4) - x:140 moved a bit
00:36:482 (5) - NC
00:36:882 (7) - divide this slider into two circles. and put 00:37:082 - to x:144 to make a HDash here, because the drum beat is at here. I know that it fits but it would be hard and I prefer to keep this pattern
00:38:682 (1) - change to a 1/2 slider and move it to 00:38:882 - sorry no change
00:40:682 (5) - NC
00:48:082 (3) - NC
Rest done as you said
Thanks a lot!