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Gakuen Seikatsu Bu - Friend Shitai

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Topic Starter
Karen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年8月9日 at 17:37:22

Artist: Gakuen Seikatsu Bu
Title: Friend Shitai
Source: がっこうぐらし!
Tags: DreaM117er m1223961117 Gakkou Gurashi! opening TV size Fycho
BPM: 148
Filesize: 17727kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Hard (2.93 stars, 221 notes)
  2. Easy (1.41 stars, 94 notes)
  3. Fycho's Insane (4.09 stars, 319 notes)
  4. Insane (3.83 stars, 320 notes)
  5. Normal (1.88 stars, 143 notes)
Download: Gakuen Seikatsu Bu - Friend Shitai
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moonlightleaf
氺摸:

[Easy]

00:06:445 (4) - 感觉也和前面一样弯滑条? 不该也没事

00:13:742 (2) - 和后面1不平行

00:16:986 (4,5) - blanket

00:56:715 (3,2) - stack

01:16:986 (3) - 太高?

[Nromal]

00:15:972 (3) - 改2单点?

00:21:040 (7,2) - 消除overlap会更好些

00:43:337 (4,5) - 试试对换的节奏

[Insane]

00:21:040 (1,1) - stack

00:29:553 (5) - 试试(399,133)

00:39:486 (6,7,1) - 有点误导,建议stack

00:47:188 (5,1) - 5NC,1remove NC

01:07:256 (1) - xy都-1

01:18:202 (5) - y+1

01:18:405 (6) - (224,259)之类

01:20:026 (6) - xy都+1

01:21:344 (4,5) - ^

01:24:486 (4) - ^
Topic Starter
Karen

moonlightleaf wrote:

氺摸:

[Easy]

00:06:445 (4) - 感觉也和前面一样弯滑条? 不该也没事 这4个滑条是一组,一个弯一个直一个弯一个直

00:13:742 (2) - 和后面1不平行

00:16:986 (4,5) - blanket

00:56:715 (3,2) - stack

01:16:986 (3) - 太高? 不出界就行了

[Nromal]

00:15:972 (3) - 改2单点? 太难了吧

00:21:040 (7,2) - 消除overlap会更好些

00:43:337 (4,5) - 试试对换的节奏 不想漏00:44:351 - 这个

[Insane]

00:21:040 (1,1) - stack

00:29:553 (5) - 试试(399,133) 这跳太小了 我宁愿overlap

00:39:486 (6,7,1) - 有点误导,建议stack 哪里误导嘛。。

00:47:188 (5,1) - 5NC,1remove NC 我知道你想跟歌词NC然而我只想跟大白线<_<

01:07:256 (1) - xy都-1

01:18:202 (5) - y+1

01:18:405 (6) - (224,259)之类

01:20:026 (6) - xy都+1

01:21:344 (4,5) - ^

01:24:486 (4) - ^ 这些都是bug造成的误差,,改起来好麻烦,能改的就改了不能改的就懒得改了
thx
yf_bmp
[I]
00:00:770 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 其实我感觉这里节奏不是很好..断层太严重.特别是每个(3)后面,有一定的延长音,用滑条可能会好点.然后我试着脑补了个节奏: http://puu.sh/j8e6Q/84e72b2620.jpg
00:04:215 - 这种地方不加?
00:14:351 (4) - 感觉畸形
00:20:026 (1) - ^
00:21:040 (1,1) - 8成是没叠好
00:25:094 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 脱轨的flow 建议改梗
00:57:729 - 同理。而且这里比刚才更激烈,音乐里本身就有大量1/4了

[H]
DQ

[N]
漏finish,建议跟曲,不用怕吵,加了更好. 详见E的mod

[E]
00:13:742 (2) - 头+折返Finish
00:15:364 (1) - 尾finish
00:18:607 (1) - 头尾finish
00:21:851 (1) - 头finish
00:27:526 (3) - ^
01:07:256 (2) - 折返finish
01:20:229 (2) - ^
01:21:851 (1) - 尾finish
01:26:513 (3) - 最后真响,建议降音量

m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/328579
DreaM117er
兩天內...
倒計時有關掉嗎??


117's Hard
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Gakuen Seikatsu Bu - fu . re . n . do . shi . ta . i.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62290
Countdown: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:fu . re . n . do . shi . ta . i
TitleUnicode:ふ・れ・ん・ど・し・た・い
Artist:Gakuen Seikatsu Bu
ArtistUnicode:学園生活部
Creator:Karen
Version:117's Hard
Source:がっこうぐらし!
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
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Topic Starter
Karen

yf_bmp wrote:

[I]
00:00:770 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 其实我感觉这里节奏不是很好..断层太严重.特别是每个(3)后面,有一定的延长音,用滑条可能会好点.然后我试着脑补了个节奏: http://puu.sh/j8e6Q/84e72b2620.jpg 换成了四连+1/2滑条
00:04:215 - 这种地方不加? 这里有跟vocal的感觉,如果再有人觉得奇怪我再改吧
00:14:351 (4) - 感觉畸形
00:20:026 (1) - ^
00:21:040 (1,1) - 8成是没叠好
00:25:094 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 脱轨的flow 建议改梗
00:57:729 - 同理。而且这里比刚才更激烈,音乐里本身就有大量1/4了 这也暂时放着,其实是不知道该怎么放

[H]
DQ

[N]
漏finish,建议跟曲,不用怕吵,加了更好. 详见E的mod

[E]
00:13:742 (2) - 头+折返Finish
00:15:364 (1) - 尾finish
00:18:607 (1) - 头尾finish
00:21:851 (1) - 头finish
00:27:526 (3) - ^
01:07:256 (2) - 折返finish
01:20:229 (2) - ^
01:21:851 (1) - 尾finish
01:26:513 (3) - 最后真响,建议降音量

m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/328579
没写的都改了
TtmnZk
yo!

[General]
title我看到一个qua的太古图是“Friend Shitai”
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/333853,串里面OnosakiHito如下说道


[Insane]
01:12:729 (3) - 建议ctrl+G,打起来顺手


[Hard]
00:14:857 这里跟挤挨着的00:15:263 (7,1) - 一样有音,所以建议换成1/4滑条 try this
00:23:472 (4) - 总感觉那红点是多余的,为了整体美观,还是直接弧形把orz

00:40:094 (2,3) - 对于hard有点远,不如放到x222y106试试

[Normal]
00:20:026 (4,5,6,7) - 稍微修一下会好点
[Easy]
01:18:607 (1,2) - blanket





还有就是normal-hitclap怎么响到一半一边声道没声音了..
over~
DreaM117er

TT Mouse wrote:

yo!

[Hard]
00:14:857 这里跟挤挨着的00:15:263 (7,1) - 一样有音,所以建议换成1/4滑条 >Hard我基本上是不會放這樣的,我知道那裡有聲音,一方面為了人哥的spread,我不會改這邊 try this
00:23:472 (4) - 总感觉那红点是多余的,为了整体美观,还是直接弧形把orz

00:40:094 (2,3) - 对于hard有点远,不如放到x222y106试试
>其他都改了

还有就是normal-hitclap怎么响到一半一边声道没声音了..
over~
謝謝摸圖 :)
zyoi
RenRenRenRenRenRenRen
Boom~

[Insane]
00:29:959 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3424329
00:31:175 (3) - x317 y182
00:31:378 (4,5,1) - x168 y87
00:31:580 (1,2) - 建議換成slider,note
00:35:229 (2) - del clap 00:35:837 (6) - 尾clap
00:36:851 (2) - 00:37:459 (6) - ^
00:38:472 (2) - 00:39:283 (5) - ^
00:56:310 (3,4) - 可以做個小跳
01:12:121 (1) - 拐彎
01:12:729 (3) - ctrl+G然後放到x36 y229的位置?
01:13:540 (1) - 拐彎

副歌的部分,第四小節的clap前一條紅線再加個clap感覺挺不錯(

[117]
00:08:472 - kiai改到00:08:878 -
這個Hard好棒w

[Normal]
00:35:229 (1,2) - 同Insane
00:36:851 (4,5) - ^
00:38:878 (2,3) - ^

加油加油~
Kencho
From qq群
[General]
  1. nice

[Easy]
  1. 這四維怎麼和NM一模一樣的

  2. 01:10:499 (3) - 改成向上flow,不過可能有點出界

    其他的不錯,nice diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:986 (5,6,7) - 這個放的有點毀梗,試試這樣?

    00:39:080 (3,4) - 這有點難讀,把4弄彎吧

    排版看起來亂亂的...

[117's Hard]
  1. HP5

    其他沒什麼好說的 nice diff

[Insane]
  1. 00:17:999 (6) - 弄彎

    00:53:472 (3) - 拉到00:53:776 - 結束,然後00:53:878 - 加個加速滑條到00:54:080 -

    01:19:013 (2,3) - 明顯沒對好啊,看著難受,把3選擇10度放回原位,然後6再重新疊一疊

    01:27:526 (4) - 放到x408 y218,這樣01:27:121 (2,3,4) - 三個才剛好對成直線
沒摸出什麼,感覺是神圖,快撞爆王長喜
Topic Starter
Karen
@TT Mouse
all fixed metadata等太鼓的状况,现在先观望

Enjoy wrote:

RenRenRenRenRenRenRen
Boom~

[Insane]
00:29:959 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3424329 全都是这种滑条所以我故意用了别的
00:31:175 (3) - x317 y182 没什么区别啊
00:31:378 (4,5,1) - x168 y87 ^
00:31:580 (1,2) - 建議換成slider,note 没什么区别的。。节奏多样点好
00:35:229 (2) - del clap 00:35:837 (6) - 尾clap
00:36:851 (2) - 00:37:459 (6) - ^
00:38:472 (2) - 00:39:283 (5) - ^
00:56:310 (3,4) - 可以做個小跳
01:12:121 (1) - 拐彎 跟01:12:729 (3) - 一组,两个一起直
01:12:729 (3) - ctrl+G然後放到x36 y229的位置? ctrl+g了,位置我自己放了个
01:13:540 (1) - 拐彎 我是直的;_;

副歌的部分,第四小節的clap前一條紅線再加個clap感覺挺不錯( 再思考一下

[117]
00:08:472 - kiai改到00:08:878 -
這個Hard好棒w

[Normal]
00:35:229 (1,2) - 同Insane
00:36:851 (4,5) - ^
00:38:878 (2,3) - ^

加油加油~
thx

Kencho wrote:

From qq群
[General]
  1. nice

[Easy]
  1. 這四維怎麼和NM一模一樣的

  2. 01:10:499 (3) - 改成向上flow,不過可能有點出界 没有出界

    其他的不錯,nice diff

[Normal]
  1. 00:16:986 (5,6,7) - 這個放的有點毀梗,試試這樣? 这个梗挺好的啊,我挺喜欢用。。

    00:39:080 (3,4) - 這有點難讀,把4弄彎吧

    排版看起來亂亂的...


[Insane]
  1. 00:17:999 (6) - 弄彎

    00:53:472 (3) - 拉到00:53:776 - 結束,然後00:53:878 - 加個加速滑條到00:54:080 - 我觉得这个连音是连贯的感觉,中间停下来有些不妥

    01:19:013 (2,3) - 明顯沒對好啊,看著難受,把3選擇10度放回原位,然後6再重新疊一疊 对好是什么。。。我这里没有故意做什么东西啊。。

    01:27:526 (4) - 放到x408 y218,這樣01:27:121 (2,3,4) - 三個才剛好對成直線
沒摸出什麼,感覺是神圖,快撞爆王長喜
thx
DreaM117er

Enjoy wrote:

RenRenRenRenRenRenRen
Boom~

[117]
00:08:472 - kiai改到00:08:878 - >OK
這個Hard好棒w

加油加油~

Kencho wrote:

From qq群
[117's Hard]
  1. HP5 >好

    其他沒什麼好說的 nice diff

沒摸出什麼,感覺是神圖,快撞爆王長喜
謝謝你們 :)

更新
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312,48,24283,2,0,P|348:120|320:200,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,300,25094,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,276,25297,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,308,25499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,308,25702,2,0,L|10:147,1,150
92,72,26310,2,0,L|97:146,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,26715,2,0,P|188:272|268:252,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,185,27324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,185,27526,2,0,L|197:345,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,334,28337,6,0,P|229:329|296:328,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,339,28742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,339,28945,2,0,P|431:346|480:284,1,150
476,200,29553,2,0,P|470:160|468:108,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,36,29959,2,0,P|408:32|312:20,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,30769,2,0,P|252:136|348:124,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,284,31580,6,0,L|332:280,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,356,32188,2,0,P|240:348|128:344,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,356,32797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,356,32999,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,356,33202,6,0,B|52:304|52:304|64:260|64:260|56:208,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,52,34013,6,0,P|67:14|52:121,1,225.000008583069,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,136,35026,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,80,35229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,35432,2,0,L|288:176,2,33.7499989700318
352,64,35837,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,92,36040,2,0,P|446:52|448:12,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,148,36445,6,0,P|371:181|380:214,1,67.4999979400635,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,280,36851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,196,37053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,214,37256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,300,37459,2,0,L|364:356,2,33.7499989700318,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,276,37864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,276,38067,6,0,P|224:268|188:268,1,67.4999979400635,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,316,38472,2,0,L|60:324,2,67.4999979400635
205,267,39080,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,184,39283,2,0,P|164:136|164:104,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,28,39688,6,0,L|240:20,1,67.4999979400635,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,68,40094,2,0,L|24:62,1,67.4999979400635,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,108,40499,2,0,L|292:100,1,67.4999979400635,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,40905,2,0,L|104:178,1,67.4999979400635,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,267,41310,6,0,L|273:259,1,67.4999979400635,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,41715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,220,41918,2,0,L|408:164,2,33.7499989700318,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,268,42324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,268,42526,2,0,P|500:220|501:180,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,116,42932,6,0,L|464:32,2,67.4999979400635,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,182,43540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,140,43742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,52,43945,2,0,L|408:44,2,33.7499989700318,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,84,44351,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,84,44452,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,84,44553,6,0,L|184:76,1,67.4999979400635,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,128,44959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,88,45161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,164,45364,2,0,P|16:208|16:252,1,67.4999979400635,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,340,45769,2,0,P|90:306|96:273,1,67.4999979400635,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,46175,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,213,46378,1,2,0:1:0:0:
183,288,46580,1,2,0:1:0:0:
160,180,46783,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,52,47188,2,0,L|372:132,2,67.4999979400635
460,44,47797,6,0,L|453:163,1,112.500004291535,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,240,48405,1,2,0:1:0:0:
432,316,48607,2,0,P|392:332|308:324,1,112.500004291535,2|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
248,296,49215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,49418,1,2,0:1:0:0:
168,324,49824,2,0,L|160:252,1,56.2500021457673,0|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
80,252,50229,2,0,L|96:388,1,112.500004291535,2|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
160,208,51040,6,0,P|132:176|48:168,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,252,51648,1,2,0:1:0:0:
156,292,51851,2,0,L|224:288,1,56.2500021457673,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,252,52256,2,0,L|356:256,1,56.2500021457673,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,52661,2,0,P|468:280|492:200,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,140,53269,1,2,0:1:0:0:
479,139,53472,2,0,P|425:127|369:126,1,112.500004291535,2|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
212,184,54283,6,0,L|220:252,1,56.2500021457673,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,308,54688,2,0,L|260:376,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
375,181,55499,6,0,L|369:126,1,56.2500021457673,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,60,55905,2,0,L|328:-8,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,196,56715,2,0,P|155:193|90:183,1,112.500004291535,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,148,57324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,232,57526,6,0,L|12:280,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,339,57830,2,0,L|64:336,1,33.7499989700318
108,186,58337,6,0,L|112:234,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,293,58641,2,0,L|163:289,1,33.7499989700318
212,144,59148,6,0,L|216:192,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,251,59452,2,0,L|267:247,1,33.7499989700318
316,104,59959,6,0,L|320:152,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,211,60263,2,0,L|371:207,1,33.7499989700318
184,308,60972,6,0,L|96:316,2,67.4999979400635
267,295,61580,2,0,P|322:302|370:304,1,101.249996910095
412,300,61986,6,0,L|404:208,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,62391,6,0,L|388:48,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,188,62999,2,0,P|268:200|156:205,1,150
80,188,63607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,120,63810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,205,64013,2,0,P|164:244|148:304,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,352,64418,2,0,P|68:315|65:277,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,368,64824,2,0,L|320:356,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,65432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,340,65634,6,0,L|492:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,176,66040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,216,66242,2,0,P|336:224|284:136,1,150
296,68,66851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,108,67053,6,0,L|432:112,2,37.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,157,67459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,100,67661,1,8,3:0:0:0:
100,148,67864,1,4,0:0:0:0:
100,148,68269,1,8,3:0:0:0:
136,232,68472,2,0,P|144:288|144:324,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,352,68776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,68878,6,0,P|186:351|232:344,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,320,69283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,344,69486,2,0,P|458:331|485:264,1,150
464,176,70094,2,0,P|427:182|389:184,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,160,70499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
227,208,70702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,70905,2,0,P|126:138|89:135,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,172,71310,2,0,P|16:228|20:340,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,364,71918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,72121,6,0,P|133:248|137:204,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,336,72729,2,0,P|271:325|363:323,1,150
444,352,73337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,280,73540,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,128,73945,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,128,74047,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,128,74148,2,0,P|411:87|419:43,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,112,74553,5,0,1:0:0:0:
340,214,74756,1,0,1:1:0:0:
408,128,74959,1,0,1:1:0:0:
212,28,75364,6,0,L|221:120,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,24,75972,2,0,L|136:180,1,150
128,264,76580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,212,76783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,173,76986,2,0,P|172:166|209:163,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,238,77391,2,0,L|264:232,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,336,77797,2,0,P|264:324|356:328,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,348,78405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,284,78607,6,0,P|486:236|484:196,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,79013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,120,79215,2,0,L|296:108,1,150
224,124,79824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,64,80026,6,0,L|148:4,2,37.5,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,168,80432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,124,80634,1,8,3:0:0:0:
68,84,80837,1,4,0:0:0:0:
68,84,81242,1,8,3:0:0:0:
16,160,81445,2,0,P|8:212|12:252,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,81749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,280,81851,6,0,L|100:272,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,82256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
175,307,82459,2,0,P|248:305|296:250,1,150
205,149,83067,2,0,L|212:224,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,325,83472,2,0,L|296:251,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,188,83878,2,0,L|386:262,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,176,84283,2,0,P|444:124|344:104,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,148,84891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,104,85094,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,104,85499,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,144,85702,2,0,P|40:144|0:76,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,28,86310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,28,86513,6,0,P|176:112|176:200,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
148,304,87121,1,2,0:1:0:0:
52,216,87324,1,2,0:1:0:0:
177,177,87526,1,4,0:0:0:0:
liangv587
感觉把默认的softwhistle替换掉太致命了,少了一个清脆的声音

Easy
ar-1 od-1
00:00:770 (1,2) - 头部加上drumset就行了,不需要多余的音效
00:21:445 (4) - 可以删了,没什么卵用
00:34:013 (4) - 尾巴用normalfinish
01:16:580 (2) - 大圈在4:3会挡住分数板

Normal
00:00:770 (1,3) - 加上drumset就行了,不需要多余的音效
00:34:013 (6) - 尾巴用normalfinish
00:38:878 (2) - 大圈在4:3会挡住分数板

117's Hardl
00:34:013 (1) - 尾巴用normalfinish

Insane
00:34:013 (1) - 尾巴用normalfinish
还是有些右上角跟分数板重了,比如01:09:283 (2) -

好的,水完就跑,真特么赤急
Topic Starter
Karen

liangv587 wrote:

感觉把默认的softwhistle替换掉太致命了,少了一个清脆的声音 好有道理

Easy
ar-1 od-1
00:00:770 (1,2) - 头部加上drumset就行了,不需要多余的音效
00:21:445 (4) - 可以删了,没什么卵用 不是有个声音吗,挺有用的啊
00:34:013 (4) - 尾巴用normalfinish
01:16:580 (2) - 大圈在4:3会挡住分数板

Normal
00:00:770 (1,3) - 加上drumset就行了,不需要多余的音效
00:34:013 (6) - 尾巴用normalfinish
00:38:878 (2) - 大圈在4:3会挡住分数板

117's Hardl
00:34:013 (1) - 尾巴用normalfinish

Insane
00:34:013 (1) - 尾巴用normalfinish
还是有些右上角跟分数板重了,比如01:09:283 (2) -

好的,水完就跑,真特么赤急
水的好

@m酱 记得redl
DreaM117er

liangv587 wrote:

感觉把默认的softwhistle替换掉太致命了,少了一个清脆的声音

117's Hardl
00:34:013 (1) - 尾巴用normalfinish

好的,水完就跑,真特么赤急
Ren哥哥幫我改>_<
謝謝摸 :)
Ipas
Hello! | Some small suggestions from me..

[General]
  1. Add the romanised source and the English name of the source to the tags
[Easy]
  1. 00:36:851 (2) - Ctrl+H the current placement? It looks like using some polarity between 00:35:229 (1,2) - may improve the visual treatments
  2. 00:39:688 - I feel like the drum whistle sound that used to emphasize this section isn't very match up with the song . Try to use default whistle from additional hitsound instead of using this drum whistle
  3. 01:22:256 - Maybe, use circle or slider head to emphasis this cymbal sound instead of using slider end? Circle and slider head commonly used to do, so I suggest you to make up some changes with the rhythm, maybe Ctrl+G these two objects 01:21:851 (1,2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:634 (5,6,7) - I know that you want to more emphasis the clap sound with those circles, but using 3 objects on 1/2 rhythm at the Normal diff might be a little bit hard for beginners imo . How about changing these two 00:20:634 (5,6) - into 1/2 slider that starts from 00:20:634 - ?
  2. 00:28:337 (1) - The slider direction slightly made a little bad flow here . It's too dense to play it well . How about making this slider just like this? It should make the flow plays smoothly tho
  3. 00:39:080 (3) - If its possible, could you do something similar like what I've mentioned above?
  4. 00:39:688 - Same as Easy, use the default additional whistle sound here
  5. 00:39:688 (4) - NC here? The beat on this slider head become a transition to an intense beat at the next section, so the NC plays to show the players that the beat has been increased for its sound
  6. 00:44:148 (5,6,1) - Apply the mods above to these rhythm too?
  7. 01:09:283 - Add finish
  8. 01:20:229 (4) - Apply the mod above to this one too?
  9. 01:27:121 (5,6,7) - With the same reason as above, you could turn those circles into 1/2 repeat slider
[117's Hard]
  1. 01:01:580 (2) - More curve this slider? It may slightly improve the transition to 01:01:986 (1) -
  2. 01:07:053 (1) - 01:20:229 - Feel the way better to map this downbeat . The cymbal sound should be better emphasized throughout the song, especially when it appears at the downbeat imo
  3. 01:09:283 (2) - Add a finish?
  4. 01:22:256 (2) - ^
  5. 01:26:513 (1) - Move this slider to 156|60 and keep 01:26:310 (4) - stacked to it . It may helps the transition over the objects and making some better visual treatments imo
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Let they plays as 5 note stream rhythm for each of their pattern . Looks like that blue tick sound couldn't be clearly ignored
  2. 00:08:472 (1) - Let this slider plays as a straight slider is a bit less fun . Try to add some additional anchor points to it . Maybe you could add it on 00:08:574 - because that is the loudest part of "A" from "Hai!"
  3. 00:39:688 (1) - Same with Easy and Normal, let it has default additional whistle sound
  4. 00:57:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as above
  5. 01:01:986 (1) - Same as above, you might want to add some anchor points here
  6. 01:09:283 (2) - Add finish
  7. 01:22:256 (2) - ^
  8. 01:27:526 (4) - Move it to 204|104 . It may creates more funny jump rhythm than the current one
[]
Nice map!
Good Luck~
Gaia

[General]
Uncheck letterbox in Hard

[Easy]
00:12:121 (1) - 往下灣好像flow更好
00:16:175 (2,3,4) - 為了flow建議這樣 http://puu.sh/jbG4H/d40d4d6cc1.jpg
00:36:851 (2) - ctrl+h plssss 流得超好
00:44:148 (6) - 要不要一直線?
00:52:661 (3) - Ctrl+j 很好喔喔喔
01:08:878 (1) - 建議這節奏因為 01:09:283 - 有crash
01:21:851 (1,2) - ^ 就timeline上換位址就好啦

[Normal]
00:15:364 (1,2,3) - 簡單的diff嘛 flow 最好用簡單一點的 http://puu.sh/jbGB4/fd73dc7ad1.jpg
00:28:337 (1,2) - wa sugoi
00:34:013 (6) - wa 一模一樣 www http://puu.sh/jbGH3/984f0ce11e.jpg
01:09:283 - finish (其實如果節奏跟 01:21:851 (1,2) - 一樣那更好
01:13:540 (4) - normal 嘛 改成1/1 + circle?

[117]
NC有長有短 感覺怪怪// 像 01:02:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我建議 00:10:499 (6) - 00:16:986 (5) - 01:04:013 (5) - 01:16:986 (5) - 01:23:472 (5) - 上個NC
00:33:202 (1) - 這段你都每兩節NC一次 這就去掉ㄅ
00:53:472 (7) - 如何? http://puu.sh/jbH2H/102169761b.jpg
01:09:283 (2) - finish
01:14:553 (1) - NC好像沒必要

水拉

[insane]
00:06:851 (4) - 要不要用個1/1滑條 把長歌聲map到
00:14:351 (4) - tbh 這stack有點討厭 ;^;
00:15:769 (2) - finish
00:21:040 (1) - speed up 感覺不錯 但用sliderart好像會有一堆sliderbreak orz
00:21:851 (1) - finish
00:38:472 (2) - kickslider 好像有點overmapped... 覺得一個圈就夠了
00:41:715 - normal clap?
00:53:472 (3) - wrong snap 應該是1/6
00:57:324 - 突然不跟vocal啦?
01:07:864 (3) - 這stack ;w; (also finish
01:09:283 (2) - finish
01:20:837 (3) - ^
01:22:256 (2) - ^
01:27:121 (2,3,4) - cool !

moe renchon ~
Topic Starter
Karen

Ipas wrote:

Hello! | Some small suggestions from me..

[General]
  1. Add the romanised source and the English name of the source to the tags
[Easy]
  1. 00:36:851 (2) - Ctrl+H the current placement? It looks like using some polarity between 00:35:229 (1,2) - may improve the visual treatments
  2. 00:39:688 - I feel like the drum whistle sound that used to emphasize this section isn't very match up with the song . Try to use default whistle from additional hitsound instead of using this drum whistle changed to drum-hitnormal instead
  3. 01:22:256 - Maybe, use circle or slider head to emphasis this cymbal sound instead of using slider end? Circle and slider head commonly used to do, so I suggest you to make up some changes with the rhythm, maybe Ctrl+G these two objects 01:21:851 (1,2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:634 (5,6,7) - I know that you want to more emphasis the clap sound with those circles, but using 3 objects on 1/2 rhythm at the Normal diff might be a little bit hard for beginners imo . How about changing these two 00:20:634 (5,6) - into 1/2 slider that starts from 00:20:634 - ?
  2. 00:28:337 (1) - The slider direction slightly made a little bad flow here . It's too dense to play it well . How about making this slider just like this? It should make the flow plays smoothly tho
  3. 00:39:080 (3) - If its possible, could you do something similar like what I've mentioned above?
  4. 00:39:688 - Same as Easy, use the default additional whistle sound here
  5. 00:39:688 (4) - NC here? The beat on this slider head become a transition to an intense beat at the next section, so the NC plays to show the players that the beat has been increased for its sound
  6. 00:44:148 (5,6,1) - Apply the mods above to these rhythm too?
  7. 01:09:283 - Add finish
  8. 01:20:229 (4) - Apply the mod above to this one too?
  9. 01:27:121 (5,6,7) - With the same reason as above, you could turn those circles into 1/2 repeat slider
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:013 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Let they plays as 5 note stream rhythm for each of their pattern . Looks like that blue tick sound couldn't be clearly ignored hmm i can understand what you mean here, but i want to follow the vocal here because there are already some stream at the beginning and i don't like to make too many streams in maps. You're right here but it's not my taste, if more moddees complain on this i'll consider your idea again
  2. 00:08:472 (1) - Let this slider plays as a straight slider is a bit less fun . Try to add some additional anchor points to it . Maybe you could add it on 00:08:574 - because that is the loudest part of "A" from "Hai!"
  3. 00:39:688 (1) - Same with Easy and Normal, let it has default additional whistle sound
  4. 00:57:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as above same as above
  5. 01:01:986 (1) - Same as above, you might want to add some anchor points here this is not that straight ;_;
  6. 01:09:283 (2) - Add finish
  7. 01:22:256 (2) - ^
  8. 01:27:526 (4) - Move it to 204|104 . It may creates more funny jump rhythm than the current one changed on my own way.
[]
Nice map!
Good Luck~
no reply = fixed
thanks

Gaia wrote:


[General]
Uncheck letterbox in Hard

[Easy]
00:12:121 (1) - 往下灣好像flow更好
00:16:175 (2,3,4) - 為了flow建議這樣 http://puu.sh/jbG4H/d40d4d6cc1.jpg
00:36:851 (2) - ctrl+h plssss 流得超好
00:44:148 (6) - 要不要一直線?
00:52:661 (3) - Ctrl+j 很好喔喔喔
01:08:878 (1) - 建議這節奏因為 01:09:283 - 有crash
01:21:851 (1,2) - ^ 就timeline上換位址就好啦 01:22:256 - 这里我有用滑条头放重音啊

[Normal]
00:15:364 (1,2,3) - 簡單的diff嘛 flow 最好用簡單一點的 http://puu.sh/jbGB4/fd73dc7ad1.jpg
00:28:337 (1,2) - wa sugoi
00:34:013 (6) - wa 一模一樣 www http://puu.sh/jbGH3/984f0ce11e.jpg www
01:09:283 - finish (其實如果節奏跟 01:21:851 (1,2) - 一樣那更好
01:13:540 (4) - normal 嘛 改成1/1 + circle?

[insane]
00:06:851 (4) - 要不要用個1/1滑條 把長歌聲map到 hmm我喜欢全部一样的梗,最后一个出现滑条好像有些突然
00:14:351 (4) - tbh 這stack有點討厭 ;^; 我好喜欢这个;_;
00:15:769 (2) - finish
00:21:040 (1) - speed up 感覺不錯 但用sliderart好像會有一堆sliderbreak orz 其实虽然这是加速的但是按照1.0速度来玩也不会断,因为开头弯弯扭扭的已经相当于减速
00:21:851 (1) - finish
00:38:472 (2) - kickslider 好像有點overmapped... 覺得一個圈就夠了
00:41:715 - normal clap?
00:53:472 (3) - wrong snap 應該是1/6
00:57:324 - 突然不跟vocal啦?
01:07:864 (3) - 這stack ;w; (also finish
01:09:283 (2) - finish
01:20:837 (3) - ^
01:22:256 (2) - ^
01:27:121 (2,3,4) - cool !

moe renchon ~
no reply=fix
谢谢 :D
MirinH
hmm
DreaM117er

Ipas wrote:

Hello! | Some small suggestions from me..

[117's Hard]
  1. 01:01:580 (2) - More curve this slider? It may slightly improve the transition to 01:01:986 (1) -
  2. 01:07:053 (1) - 01:20:229 - Feel the way better to map this downbeat . The cymbal sound should be better emphasized throughout the song, especially when it appears at the downbeat imo >No, I don't want to let this diff over 3.0 stars.
  3. 01:09:283 (2) - Add a finish?
  4. 01:22:256 (2) - ^
  5. 01:26:513 (1) - Move this slider to 156|60 and keep 01:26:310 (4) - stacked to it . It may helps the transition over the objects and making some better visual treatments imo >I tried. I know what you say, but I don't want to let these 01:25:499 (2,4) - stack
Nice map!
Good Luck~

Gaia wrote:


[General]
Uncheck letterbox in Hard >Ren哥哥這不是我要改的啊 :o

[117]
NC有長有短 感覺怪怪// 像 01:02:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我建議 00:10:499 (6) - 00:16:986 (5) - 01:04:013 (5) - 01:16:986 (5) - 01:23:472 (5) - 上個NC
00:33:202 (1) - 這段你都每兩節NC一次 這就去掉ㄅ
00:53:472 (7) - 如何? http://puu.sh/jbH2H/102169761b.jpg
01:09:283 (2) - finish
01:14:553 (1) - NC好像沒必要

水拉

moe renchon ~
No reply = Fix
Thanks your mod :)

Gaia的全改了 :)

更新
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160,208,51040,6,0,P|132:176|48:168,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,252,51648,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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424,288,52661,2,0,P|468:280|492:200,1,112.500004291535,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,140,53269,1,2,0:1:0:0:
483,139,53472,2,0,L|348:128,1,112.500004291535,2|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
216,184,54283,6,0,L|224:252,1,56.2500021457673,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,312,54688,2,0,L|260:380,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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321,64,55905,2,0,L|329:-4,2,56.2500021457673,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,56715,2,0,P|151:181|86:171,1,112.500004291535,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,144,57324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,232,57526,6,0,L|12:280,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,339,57830,2,0,L|64:336,1,33.7499989700318
108,186,58337,6,0,L|112:234,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,293,58641,2,0,L|163:289,1,33.7499989700318
212,144,59148,6,0,L|216:192,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,251,59452,2,0,L|267:247,1,33.7499989700318
316,104,59959,6,0,L|320:152,1,33.7499989700318,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,211,60263,2,0,L|371:207,1,33.7499989700318
184,308,60972,6,0,L|96:316,2,67.4999979400635
267,295,61580,2,0,P|320:308|372:308,1,101.249996910095
412,300,61986,6,0,L|404:208,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,62391,6,0,L|388:48,2,75,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,188,62999,2,0,P|268:200|156:205,1,150
80,188,63607,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,120,63810,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,205,64013,6,0,P|164:244|148:304,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,352,64418,2,0,P|68:315|65:277,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,320,65432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,340,65634,6,0,L|492:256,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,176,66040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,216,66242,2,0,P|336:224|284:136,1,150
296,68,66851,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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282,157,67459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,100,67661,1,8,3:0:0:0:
100,148,67864,1,4,0:0:0:0:
100,148,68269,1,8,3:0:0:0:
136,232,68472,2,0,P|144:288|144:324,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,352,68776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,68878,6,0,P|186:351|232:344,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,320,69283,1,12,0:0:0:0:
388,344,69486,2,0,P|458:331|485:264,1,150
464,176,70094,2,0,P|427:182|389:184,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,160,70499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
227,208,70702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,70905,2,0,P|126:138|89:135,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,172,71310,2,0,P|16:228|20:340,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,364,71918,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,72121,6,0,P|133:248|137:204,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,336,72729,2,0,P|271:325|363:323,1,150
444,352,73337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,280,73540,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,128,73945,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,128,74047,1,0,1:0:0:0:
408,128,74148,2,0,P|411:87|419:43,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,112,74553,5,0,1:0:0:0:
340,214,74756,1,0,1:1:0:0:
408,128,74959,1,0,1:1:0:0:
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52,212,76783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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338,238,77391,2,0,L|264:232,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,336,77797,2,0,P|264:324|356:328,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,348,78405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,284,78607,6,0,P|486:236|484:196,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,79013,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,120,79215,2,0,L|296:108,1,150
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100,168,80432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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68,84,80837,1,4,0:0:0:0:
68,84,81242,1,8,3:0:0:0:
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Ujimatsu Chiya
[General]
  1. add Gakkou Gurashi! , Ending in tag // sorry Opening
  2. u can use video.
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:472 (1) - If you use acceleration, Folded portion should be on the side tail than the head. Easy to understand better than now.
  2. 00:14:351 (4) - u can make better blanket here.
  3. 00:23:472 (1,2) - this DS should be longer than 00:23:878 (2,3) - this. emphasizes the downbeat like here 00:23:067 (5) -
  4. 00:52:256 (4) - looks no problem but kinda close HPbar and Score. re-place more safe
  5. 01:02:391 (1) - stack feel werid try how about this? I think you can more emphasize 01:02:391 - here and better to read
[Hard]
  1. 01:22:256 (2) - why you add Finish here? that make loud only. pls make same like here 01:06:040 (2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:472 (1,1) - 1/1 stack is hard to read new player. don't 1/1 stack in Normal better.
  2. 01:01:986 (1,1) - same above
  3. 00:19:621 (3,4,5,6) - 4 stack slider is make bad play I think. how about this rhythem?
[Easy]
  1. nothing to me owo~
GL~
KantoKun
i'm to late to ask for GD ;_;
Topic Starter
Karen

KantoKun wrote:

i'm to late to ask for GD ;_;
;_;
EncoreW
[Fycho's Insane]

人格逼我来水我不得不来

testplay

OD再高点把?2nd insane也是OD7也

00:21:040 (5) - 00:21:445 (6) - NC把?这vocal听上去像是戛然而止的那种,感觉用一下NC会比较好一点,如果00:21:040 (5) - 这里用了NC,那么00:21:445 (6) - 这里不用感觉总是有点不合适

00:25:702 (3) - 这个后半段的blanket似乎不是特别严谨,00:50:634 (4,1) - 这个blanket似乎也不是特别严谨

00:28:945 (4) - 这个的滑条头跟00:29:553 (5) - 的头尾的间距都一样应该会更好看一点,00:29:553 (5) - 头(193,276)尾(180,365)

00:30:769 (5) - 这个滑条的后半段和00:31:378 (6) - 00:31:580 (1) - 的头的间距也用一样的会好一点?感觉刻意把00:31:580 (1) - 往下摆一点

00:43:337 (3,7) - 这两个叠起来更加干净一点?

01:14:553 (1,2,3) - 这三个的音量似乎是能逐个变大的把?另外additions softfinish?

我口胡完了人格你能把枪放下了么?
Crystal
as your request

[General]
Add 'Fycho' 'Gakkou Gurashi!'into tags.

[Fycho's Insane]
OD 7.5?
00:26:310 (4,5) - 间距用0.9x? 和其他地方的统一
00:59:553 (5,1) - 相对前面的几串这个有点近了?
水都水不出来
MirinH
k

General

  1. soft-clap2有一點點delay
  2. 飛球的diff有widescreen

Normal

  1. 00:34:013 (6) - 女主帽子中間是凸起來的,我建議你把貓兒拉出來,這樣根本不像
  2. 01:17:594 (6,7) - 這什麼玩意,一點都不好看,還不如滑條

117's Hard

  1. 00:15:769 (2) - 這麼明顯的finish
  2. 00:20:026 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡建議用脆一點的音效,現在比較悶,後面同理
    這排列怎麼這麼像我

Insane

  1. 00:13:742 (1,2,3) - 不覺得有點overmap嗎,而且我覺得這種比較強而脆的音就應該用circle jump來體現,短滑條。。。
  2. 00:17:999 (6) - 怎麼你學習了唱戲
  3. 00:19:215 (3) - finish
  4. 00:32:188 (2) - 尾去whistle
  5. 00:41:715 (2) - 怎麼白線起三連,這裡我覺得三連完全是在紅線(而且你前面都是紅線
  6. 00:53:472 (3) - 這裡感覺就是音只放了一半,建議用兩個折返表現,然後音要map完
  7. 00:56:310 (3) - clap?
  8. 01:14:553 (5,6) - 這理跟我上面說的關於短滑條的差不多
  9. 01:25:094 (1) - finish
  10. 01:25:702 (3) - ^
    這什麼iNsAnE,一點也不送分

Fycho's Insane

  1. 00:18:607 (1,2) - 兩個頭都finish
  2. 01:25:094 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:26:918 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺間距比較小了啊,特別是23的間距,這裡是結尾所以我覺得你可以再送一點放大一點間距
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