Hello, M4M from my
queue.
Easy- I won't bother listing every single blanket (unless you want me to), but quite a few of them need slightly adjustments. For example 00:07:267 (1) can be improved (Look at the approach circle from 00:06:952 and note how it isn't quite perfect).
- 00:08:106 (2) - Minor: Slightly inconsistent spacing between these.
- 00:37:477 (2) - Put the new combo on this note since this is where the downbeat (long white tick) is.
- 01:00:134 (5,1) - I think you could use a better flow here for an Easy difficulty, especially since everything else thus far has been fairly smooth.
- 01:17:756 (6) - New combo here since this is on a downbeat, is a note with more emphasis on it (Finish), and you begin to change your rhythm here (01:17:756 (6,1,2) are on 2/1).
- 01:24:470 (3) - This should also be a new combo in my opinion.
Normal- Same issue with blankets here too (00:04:644)
- 00:06:428 (5,1) - I think you could use a better flow here than what you currently have, since after the reverse slider, you're asking to go back in the other direction again. Try either moving 00:07:267 (1) - or rotating 00:06:428 (5).
- 00:08:945 (4) - Try to use as little slider points as possible for a smoother looking curve (i.e. remove one of them).
- 00:20:693 (1,2) - I would personally avoid stacks in this difficulty since they can be confusing for beginner players.
- 00:28:665 (4,5) - The physical spacing you have here make it look like a faster timing where it is not. This is beacuse you changed the slider velocity (which I would not recommend on a Normal anyway). If you want to keep this though, you should space these out to how 00:27:407 (1,2,3,4) are spaced, and put a new combo on 00:29:085 (5) to indicate a SV change, but I would recommend getting rid of the SV changes more.
- 00:48:805 (4) - This slider doesn't match the music since there is nothing signficant on the blue tick where the repeat is.
- 01:14:400 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:06:428 (5,1).
- 01:16:917 (4,1) - And here.
- 01:26:148 (3) - This is an unusual looking slider in my opinon. Simplify it so there are only three slider points.
- 01:37:057 (2) - Same issue as above.
Hard- 00:30:763 (1) - Simplify this curve by removing a slider point.
- 00:46:707 (1,2,3,4) - The way you arranged these make it seem like these are all the same timing, however 00:47:547 (4) is actually on 1/1 where the other notes are on 1/2. Place 00:47:547 (4) further away so that the timing is easier to read.
- 01:00:973 (1) - Move the grey slider point to the left so that the slider looks smoother.
- 01:02:651 (1) - Simplify this curve.
- 01:07:686 (5) - New combo here for consistency.
- 01:37:896 (1,2,3) - Inconsistency spacing through these.
- 01:41:253 (6) - This should be a new combo since this is a more significant note.
- 01:44:609 (5) - This too.
Insane- 00:06:218 (7,8,9,10,11) - You can use Create Polygon Circles (Ctrl+Shift+D) to create regular looking shapes and improve patterns such as this star. I would highly recommend playing around and learning this feature.
- 00:27:407 (9) - Simplify this curve.
- 00:35:588 (1) - I don't think this slider should have an increase in slider velocity since I don't feel that the note here is significant enough to retain one.
- 00:37:477 (4) - This should be a new combo since the note on this downbeat is significant.
- 01:28:665 (3) - Straighten out the curve part of this slider so it looks a little smoother
- 01:33:700 (8) - Simplify this curve.
- 01:44:609 (1,3) - And these too.
Good luck.
