Squirrel wrote:

hey there! mod from my q -
sorry for the delay, was kinda busy the past week. >-<
feel free to disagree with anything, I'm just making suggestions!

General

1. nice set, but imo the Normal is too hard for the easiest diff because of it's rhythm, note density and some hard to read patterns. of course you could lower difficulty of Normal to make it more beginner-friendly diff, but then the gap between N/H is too high.. so I think this set would really profit from an Easy diff. up to you ofc! (maybe go look for a GD?) i think its okay
2. seems like your osb file duplicated xD delete one, please ok (i have no idea about sb)
3. hmh, I really disliked the copypasted parts in each diff, tbh. I don't mean to be offensive or anything, it's totally fine to copypaste stuff, but the whole Kiai.. meeh. Idk, it just feels so boring to play if it's just the same stuff over and over again. Of course you're free to leave everything as it is, but maybe you can try to alternate one pattern or the other.. just like rotate some sliders, let a pattern move in a different direction, make some straight sliders curved and vice versa.. o: theyre ok

Normal

1. 00:00:637 (1,2) - pretty hard for the beginning of the diff. I know it matches the vocals nicely, but consider removing the reverse and using a 1/1 slider instead. okay changed
2. 00:11:762 (1) - feels out of place, you mapped the 'oh's before, so why ignore them here? i'd suggest a 1/1 reverse slider and a cirlce on 00:12:954 - okay changed
3. 00:34:014 (1,2,3) - looks nice to me, but is probably very confusing for beginner players. can you move (3) so it doesn't overlap with (1)? reworked
4. 00:43:550 (1,2) - consider rotating them and moving them slightly further to the right. atm (1)'s end is very close to previous (3) which might lead players to hit the end. :c suggestion: http://puu.sh/kj1Aa.jpg reworked
5. 00:50:703 (3) - feels off to end the slider on the downbeat. 3 circles on the white ticks would work nice, too, imo. i think its fine
6. 01:04:213 (1) - hmmh, I kinda like this, but I miss the emphasis on "I be-(lieve)". it's ust so strong and should be mapped. consider shortening the slider and adding circles on 01:05:007 - and 01:05:405 - okay changed
   also, this slightly overlaps with 01:06:398 (2) - (it's visible while playing, too), so if you don't change it, please try to avoid the overlap! reworked
7. 01:17:524 (2,3) - too confusing, especially without an Easy diff. :c it looks nice and plays well if players can read this, but beginner players just can't, sadly. >-< please ctrl+g (3) and move it to match DS. and don't forget to adjust 01:18:517 (1) - if you change (3) reworked
8. 01:28:054 (1) - nitpicking here: move the first red anchor to to 235|336 ahh, reworked ds before looking at this, not going to get to use this
   the second to 281|312
   the third to 332|320
   and the end to 373|295
   for symmetry :b
9. 01:50:306 (1,2,3) - mentioned this before, try to avoid the overlap of (1) and (3), please reworked
10. 02:21:100 (2,3) - same as 01:17:524 (2,3) - reworked
11. 02:31:630 (1) - if you changed the other slider, use a copypasta version here? X_X
12. 02:47:524 (1,2,3) - rhythm feels off, because of the gap between (1,2) and the sliderend on the downbeat. how about this instead: i like it how it is
    
    it's very simplified, but still matches the rhythm well, imo
13. 02:53:484 (3) - move this a little further down to avoid the overlap with (1) reworked
14. 02:54:279 (2,3) - not mapping the white tick in-between feels wird, because there's a beat and very very strong vocals. consider adding a circle i think it is ok as it is
15. 03:02:623 (1) - downbeat should be clickable, imo. it's clearly the loudest and most dominant sound, so three circles might be a nice alternative to the reverse slider i think its okay
    the following downbeats aren't clickable, as well. so I'd suggest this rhythm instead - http://puu.sh/kj2R6.jpg
16. 03:27:656 (2,3,1) - can you move (1) slightly further right to avoid overlap with (2) reworked
    also, try to not make 03:29:444 (2,3) - the same distance from (1), that's very confusing for beginners. :c
17. 03:39:974 (1) - similar to the one in the beginning. so many 'oh's unmapped. :c try this maybe - http://puu.sh/kj34a.jpg reworked

Hard
very fun to play diff, nothing much to say!

1. 00:36:398 (3,4) - the beats on the red ticks are pretty loud here, but unmapped. :c To me, this feels a little empty, consider using two short sliders instead or maybe even four circles? okay
2. 00:50:703 (3) - basically same as in Normal. try circles instead, emphasises the downbeat much better! i like this better
3. 02:47:524 (1,2,3) - similar to Normal, too. I miss emphasis on the downbeat here no thanks
4. 02:54:676 - as in Normal, too. add a circle? its fine
5. 03:02:623 (1,1,2,1,2) - also about downbeats.. I'm sure you can come up with something that matches them better? these are fine i believe
6. 03:28:451 (3) - here, too. consider shortening the slider to the blue tick and add a circle at 03:28:848 - no thanks its okay

Insane

1. 00:36:994 - kinda missing a circle here, cause of the vocals. consider adding one! yarr
2. 00:50:703 (3) - same as in N/H >o< eeeee
3. 01:04:213 (1) - how about increasing volume for this circle? in comparison to the prev objects the hitsounds pretty weak (cause of different sampleset).. imo, + ~10-15% would make a little more impact oo yes sure
4. 01:53:286 - missing a circle here, too. ;o; yas
5. 02:07:789 (1) - same about volume as for 01:04:213 (1) - gfgsgsfgsfg
6. 03:26:464 (3) - looks a little confusing, imo. o: in the other diff this works nicely, because you use it more often, but here just this once might throw players off. you could move it to 47|220 so it creates a triangle with 03:25:670 (1,2) - c: but you'd have to move 03:26:663 (4,5) - then, too hehehehehehehehehehe

Believe
looks fine to me except for going to keep them

1. 00:03:021 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this feels so exaggerated. I know there's this sound in the background you're mapping, but overall the song is still more 'calm' and this doesn't match the pace. same for 00:09:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
   both are playable, sure.. but I think you can map this better than with streams. >o< example:
   

and some things I already mentioned in the other diffs. (slider at 00:50:703 - for example)

Anyway, I like the set. Good luck getting it ranked!
And I hope I could help a little. ;o;
//squee

Frey wrote:

The intro, so familiar.. Which song is it?

• Storyboard

1. L2.png、L3.png、L4.png、Chorus 3(2).png (not Chorus3(2).png) are unused, please delete them (maybe there is more, so please make a double check)
2. Also, LOTS OF pictures have unnecessary transparency, which would lead to a pop or dq. I don't want to list them cuz they are so many, here is the fixed version: http://puu.sh/kmITQ/4b59e71585.rar
3. AND do remember to check if there are position changes of those fixed pictures!!! You need to spend some time adjusting them
   
   
   Normal
4. 02:48:319 (2) - unify the ds

Yep, hope it helps

riktoi wrote:

mod from my queue (hey you're that guy who mapped that one dnb song)

[I BELIEVE]

00:09:378 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it wiggle a bit OR follow the curve pattern like with the rest of them i think theyre okay
01:39:974 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ^

00:58:650 (2,3,4,5) - this square(?) is not perfect unless you were going for a diamond shape which is fine oh fixed

- nothing else, great diff

[Insane]

General: the overlaps are a bit rougher in this diff but I think it's still fine

01:44:544 (2) - make this follow the same curve as 01:43:948 (1) - ehh it like it this way

01:50:901 (2) - ctrl + h its fine

-nice work with this one too

[Hard]

01:30:040 (2) - tilt this a bit so it blankets with 01:31:233 (1) - oh good idea

-yeah... nothing more about this one either

[Normal]

great diff once again (modding is hard)

1. 01:20:107 (1,2) - Blanket
2. 02:23:683 (1,2) - Blanket
3. 03:41:762 - Start Spinner Here To Keep The Consistency Between Notes

1. lol 2nd kiai is copied from 1st kiai. I think It's Ok But Maybe Change Something To Make It Fresh

Deppyforce wrote:

[Kuturn]
*Should Change SB At 02:36:398 - Map: Kuturn
01:31:233 - Should Have Break Here. Harder Diff Breaks So Why Easiest Diff No Break?
Thanks for the reminder, i fixed both

NlHIL wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:34:014 - start oh! and Yeahh!! earlier k
03:24:676 - Start Yeah! earlier k

Thanks for the mod

Rohit6 wrote:

[Normal]
01:45:538 (1) - Make this symmetrical sure
01:59:842 (1) - Make this a regular straight slider since the kink is at the end and it looks kinda bad with the kink going to leave it
02:07:789 (1,2) - Since there's a complete stop you should stop cursor movement and probably use NC on the slider going to keep this, dont think nc is good here
02:31:034 (3,4) - Switch the slider and circle because you ended the slider on a stronger beat (white tick) and there should be clickable objects on the strong beats other way is harder to play
02:58:650 (1,2,3) - Make this look better tried to


[Hard]
00:35:603 (1) - Lower volume on Sliderend sure
01:46:134 (2,3) - Since there's a complete stop you should stop cursor movement and probably use NC on the slider going to keep these two
02:07:789 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:00:836 (2) - The problem with these types of sliders are that they are passive sliders,meaning they start on a weak tick and end on a strong one,in this song,the first and the third white tick is the strong one and they should generally have clickable objects start on them ithink theyre okay
00:48:319 (1) - Lower volume on sliderend because there's nothing in the music on the blue tick ok
01:14:345 (3) - Passive slider
01:46:134 (2,3) - Since there's a complete stop you should stop cursor movement and probably use NC on the slider jsut stop movement no nc
02:07:790 (1,2) - ^ keeping this one
02:08:782 (3) - Another passive slider
03:26:067 (2,3) - While using this type of spacing you have to realise that players wont ever play the full slider and just hold the cursor halfway which causes the slider to lose a lot of its effect.Instead what you can do is try and place the circle after the slider so that players can actually play the full slider instead of just leaving it halfway because of slider leniency its okay
Better than the Believe diff

[Believe]
00:35:603 (1) - Decrease the volume on this sliderend because there's nothing in the music on the blue tick ok
00:41:961 (1,2) - Feels like you've blanketed just for making a blanket , and it doesn't make much sense as there is no reason to use low DS here i think its fine
00:58:650 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a perfect square
01:02:623 (1,2) - While using this type of spacing you have to realise that players wont ever play the full slider and just hold the cursor halfway which causes the slider to lose a lot of its effect.Instead what you can do is try and place the circle after the slider so that players can actually play the full slider instead of just leaving it halfway because of slider leniency its ok i like it
01:06:597 (4,5) - ^
01:17:723 (3,4) - ^
01:47:723 (3,4) - ^
01:46:134 (2,3) - Since there's a complete stop you should stop cursor movement and probably use NC on the slider eh going to kee pit
02:07:789 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:25:471 (2,1) - Bad blanket but you can probably ignore this
01:51:895 (1) - Decrease volume on sliderend sure
No other problems,hitsounds are consistent throughout.

I modded this before you updated so you might've done some changes before so watch out for that

Deppyforce wrote:

Hi Mod From My Queue
Sorry For Late Mod ;w;

[Something]
I Like The SB :3
Very Good Map!

[Kuturn]
*Should Change SB At 02:36:398 - Map: Kuturn
01:31:233 - Should Have Break Here. Harder Diff Breaks So Why Easiest Diff No Break?

[Normal]

1. 01:20:107 (1,2) - Blanket
2. 02:23:683 (1,2) - Blanket
3. 03:41:762 - Start Spinner Here To Keep The Consistency Between Notes

[Hard]

1. lol 2nd kiai is copied from 1st kiai. I think It's Ok But Maybe Change Something To Make It Fresh

The Map Is So Good I Can't Mod Much
GL!

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

Lanturn wrote:

Hopefully that covers any problems left in the SB >_<

Doormat wrote:

Kuturn's Easy

01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Is it just me or are the sliders slightly different? The blanket seems a bit off on the (1). Maybe consider using the same slider shape so that the flow here is more circular. fixed, hope the blanket looks nicer now
01:29:643 (1) - Not sure if the missing finish on the spinner is intentional, but maybe put a finish here since the other spinner does have a finish?
Added the finish

Lanturn wrote:

Can you move 00:00:637 (1) - slightly to the left samplefish/Kuey? somehow that ended up as 1.10 instead of 1.20 oops. x140 y192 is good.
I fixed it for you ^^
SB:
02:36:398 - the "Kuey" moves a bit fast here. You should try slowing it down a bit, similar to the speed of the Map: Samplefish/Kuturn above it.
I fixed it but it may seem slow, idk bother me again if neeed to
File missing. Or actually, renamed by the looks of it. I'.png should be removed from the SB as it looks like lonely girl.png is being used in its place.
I fixed the Songfolder now
Hopefully that covers any problems left in the SB >_<

Doormat wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. Sorry for the wait! Caught a cold and forgot about osu! for a while woops I honestly meant to mod this yesterday but then I was sick for most of the day

Well, I must congratulate you. You managed to get this song stuck in my head. Take one two three stars for introducing me to Nishino Kana and the awesome mapset. maybe I'll try mapping one of her songs one day..

PS: sort of a good thing that I put off this mod until now because I can also mod the Easy? lol

PPS: just noticed that the mapset is starred, so this is kind of late... woops. If you want, I can give you an IOU that you can redeem for a free mod.

Difficulties looked at: Kuturn's Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, Believe

• - bolded difficulties are the ones that I modded

General

- This is a very minor, so you can ignore this if you want, but I feel like your preview time should be repositioned by just a little bit, since the "I" from "I believe" is cut off. Maybe move the preview time to 01:05:305 so that it starts at "believe" or move it to 01:05:007 so that the "I" isn't cut off?

Kuturn's Easy

01:15:338 (1,2,3) - Is it just me or are the sliders slightly different? The blanket seems a bit off on the (1). Maybe consider using the same slider shape so that the flow here is more circular.
01:29:643 (1) - Not sure if the missing finish on the spinner is intentional, but maybe put a finish here since the other spinner does have a finish?

Normal

02:17:127 - I feel like there should be a note here, since the vocals seem to match up on the offbeat. Maybe you can put a circle here, or move 01:13:749 (1) and stretch it into a 3/2 slider?
02:17:325 (1) - ^
03:11:365 (1) - ^

Hard

01:31:233 (1) - Move it slightly to the right so it's blanketed by the slider?
02:34:809 (1) - Move it slightly to the left so it's blanketed by the slider?

Insane
- Couldn't find nothing here

Believe
- Same here

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Damn near perfect maps in my opinion, good job! Can't wait for this to get ranked
sorry again for being such a slowpoke ;w;

pishifat wrote:

01:46:928 (4) - relating to the thing on normal, doesnt make sense to click on nothing either

Okoratu wrote:

[sb]
can you resize lb.png and burst.png they currently exceed the maximum dimensions formally allowed by the rc i think
the sb/dots that shoot out behind her in kiai are sometimes http://puu.sh/kAiVf/ffa964147c.jpg overlapping her shirt on that position ingame


[cthulhu's Easy]
watever
01:07:391 (3) - spacing inconsistentcy makes symmetry look bad I fixed the spacing
01:12:160 (1,2) - are these supposed to be symmetric fixed the symmetry
01:16:928 (3,1) - idk how beginner this diff is but p/4217175 desp once dq'd an really easy easy i bubbled for sth like this
i moved the hit circle somewhere else instead of the middle
03:12:954 (1,2,3) - looks like you planned it as symmetric but then decided not to and just rotate 3 for a reason i can't understand
i reworked this part
03:41:564 - every other diff can click this one and it'd make sense to have this clickable tbh added now