jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
我记得当年看动画城一般都是CCTV1和7台，应该加到tags里面

[Normal]
01:11:425 (2,3) - 角度有点别扭，01:11:885 (3) - 往上一点
后面是不是直接复制然后竖着翻了一下。。。话说这个难度我觉得再放点1/2会好一些，现在有点太简单了 ---低难度就这样了,虽然是复制,但是有小改动233

[Hard]
01:25:001 (6,1) - 注意间距，这里再好好摆一下
这里的1/4滑条我觉得稍微斜着摆的话比直着更好打一些，比如01:02:680 (4,5,1) - 这样摆：---fix ,其实还行,我FL打了几十次了,

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:07:453 (5,6) - 间距再大一点
00:11:365 (6) - 这个为什么不摆菱形
00:53:936 (6) - NC
01:18:788 (3,4) - 做的对称一些
01:19:709 (5) - NC
01:39:038 (3,4,5) - 这里打起来有点别扭，之前之后的间距最好一致 ---稍微改了下位置,间距不等
01:42:720 (2) - NC这里把 01:42:490 (1) - NC去掉
02:01:590 (1) - 去掉NC


之后叫我 ---等587那边吧

Minakami Yuki wrote:

哎lfj先我一步，那就交给你了 :3

jonathanlfj wrote:

[lingv587]
00:43:811 (5,1) - 我觉得这里这种节奏会好一些：加了个短滑条

SPOILER

01:46:402 (1) - clap似乎没什么必要
01:49:394 (2,3,4) - 这里直着打有点别扭，试试这样：好

SPOILER

02:04:121 (2) - 放到 x:176 y:84 试试好

之后叫我

1. Just for sake of quality, you should use the best available resolutions of storyboard elements. I am talking about backgrounds. I found some of them in better resolution, so replacing them is quite inteligent - You have 30MB which you can use, so don't limit your storyboard to just 640x480. Actually it is replacement only for 1, 18, 19 and 3, but it should be enough - if you can find others, go ahead. You may get the files here.
2. All transparent object must have only a little amount of transparency around it. Please cut all lyrics files so they fit exactly how they should. Some of images are just 2/3 transparency.
3. Well, I admit the song is very old, so some informations are unobtainable now - OST was not even released, so it is hard to obtain actual mp3. If you could, try to provide metadata and if possible, get a little better quality of mp3. But yeah, if you don't find it, we will have to accept it like it is, because we need to consider the age and how not-known it is.
4. Storyboard is still rendering background, thus doubling your SB load. Please add this to .osb file under //Storyboard Layer 0 (but it should adapt if you put it on bottom of file:
   

   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",320,240

1. 00:33:686 - SV Change is not in any accordance to song's intensity.

Wafu wrote:

Random pop

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

Reason for popping

1. Insufficient spread quality - Difference between Hard and Normal is too big. While Normal is using constant 1/1 spam with some additional 1/2 sliders, which are really rare, and occasionally 1/2 circles. That is probably how some light Normal should look, but if we consider that Hard is constant spam of 1/2 with occasional 1/1 and 1/4, Normal cannot logically use only technic that is occasional for Hard. You need some increment in difficulty, but not from constant spam of 1/1 to constant spam of 1/2. Hard is providing 4x as much score as Normal, which is basic sign of "something went wrong with the spread". Please make sure to fix the spread before this moves forward.---mark,will fix after---ok

General

1. Just for sake of quality, you should use the best available resolutions of storyboard elements. I am talking about backgrounds. I found some of them in better resolution, so replacing them is quite inteligent - You have 30MB which you can use, so don't limit your storyboard to just 640x480. Actually it is replacement only for 1, 18, 19 and 3, but it should be enough - if you can find others, go ahead. You may get the files here.---change(use Widescreen SB) ->853x480, and change other pic,redl plz
2. All transparent object must have only a little amount of transparency around it. Please cut all lyrics files so they fit exactly how they should. Some of images are just 2/3 transparency.---fix,
3. Well, I admit the song is very old, so some informations are unobtainable now - OST was not even released, so it is hard to obtain actual mp3. If you could, try to provide metadata and if possible, get a little better quality of mp3. But yeah, if you don't find it, we will have to accept it like it is, because we need to consider the age and how not-known it is.---before mapping, i found many mp3,but this is what i found the best , as u said,this song is very old, metadata i ask some mapper to find, haven't found more,
4. Storyboard is still rendering background, thus doubling your SB load. Please add this to .osb file under //Storyboard Layer 0 (but it should adapt if you put it on bottom of file:--fix
   

   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"bg.jpg",320,240

liangv587's Insane

1. 00:33:686 - SV Change is not in any accordance to song's intensity.

Only pointing out important stuff now. I will mod all diffs in detail once the spread is fixed - it does not make sense to give advices, when base of difficulties needs change.
Be aware I am not popping bubble to delay your qualification, but to improve quality of the map. I am pretty sure this would get disqualified. Popping bubble is moving the map forward as well and if you can fix stuff sufficiently enough, I will continue modding this and if I really feel it is ready, I may give it a rebubble and we can move it forward.---yep，let we do better~

If you have any questions, send me PM on forums or in-game, I'll be glad to help you out.

Karen wrote:

Give your bubble back~

yf_bmp wrote:

00:17:578 (5,6,7,1,2) - 是不是要简化下节奏 太多1/2了 ---67换成了单点
01:12:805 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - ^ ^

然后真的没大问题了

moonlightleaf wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期四,2015年11月19日 at 16:14:26

Artist: Li Meng Di
Title: Kuai Dian Gao Su Ni
Source: 动画城
Tags: Animation City CCTV Cartoon liangv587 Dong Hua Cheng
BPM: 130.37
Filesize: 5220kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (2.79 stars, 304 notes)
2. Insane (3.55 stars, 346 notes)
3. liangv587's Insane (3.82 stars, 443 notes)
4. Normal (1.83 stars, 199 notes)

Download: Li Meng Di - Kuai Dian Gao Su Ni
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