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liangv587

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

中文artist和title写一下
动画城拼音加tag里(虽然我觉得没人搜。。 In的GDer的ID放tag里

[liangv587]
00:11:480 - 没音没问题的
00:12:515 (4,5) - 我觉得这边适合跳一下没问题的
01:19:249 (6,7,1) - 这个感觉没什么必要。。
01:26:152 (3,4,5,6) - 间距不太一样
02:03:891 (1,2) - 1/4跳那么大这里跳的这么小好像不太好 没问题的
谢摸~
Adol Christin
二妹我来啦。

liangv587

  1. 似乎你的diff还没更新,更新的时候记得把meta跟其他难度统一了。
  2. 00:29:314 (2,4) - 我在想这种音用1/8的滑条会不会更有趣xD。。。要用的话后面几个类似的地方都用上吧。不用的话,把滑条尾静音掉吧
  3. 00:36:677 - 00:37:138 - 只是建议:这里的泡泡音拿两个物件去跟一跟如何?
  4. 01:34:666 (2,3,4) - 这三个的flow感觉略卡。。如果4的方向不是顺着2-3这样走的话感觉会好很多。

Hard

  1. 00:01:470 (3) - 如果是我的话这里会用1/1滑条吧,以区分主旋律这里跟前面两个音的不同。前奏里后面类似的地方也一样。(只是随口说说)
  2. 00:03:311 - 长滑条从这个点开始拉如何?原曲在这中间并没有鼓点- -
  3. 00:15:277 - 00:26:322 - 不知你有没有感觉到:这一段全是1/2的节奏。。。但后面又没有这么用了。。是不是考虑改动下节奏。
  4. 01:11:885 (4) - 掰弯它,弧度跟前面那个保持一致就好了
  5. 01:29:834 (3) - 感觉并不是太好看。要么跟前面那个圈弄在一条直线上,要么方向跟01:27:993 (3) - 保持一致。(推荐前者)
  6. 02:02:970 (4,5,6,7) - 建议4拆成俩单点,567合成一根折返。跟前面联系起来的话,感觉这样更合曲。

Normal

  1. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 6和7合成一根滑条吧,这样难度低一点。毕竟你没有Easy。
  2. 00:46:112 (2,3) - 不是太中看。改成这样吧,以现有的AR不会有什么问题。
  3. 01:41:340 (2,3) - 跟上面类似的

我觉得你Insane稍微找点mod改改,拿去rank完全没问题的。。。

嗯先这样吧。祝你好运~
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Adol Christin wrote:

二妹我来啦。

liangv587

  1. 似乎你的diff还没更新,更新的时候记得把meta跟其他难度统一了。
  2. 00:29:314 (2,4) - 我在想这种音用1/8的滑条会不会更有趣xD。。。要用的话后面几个类似的地方都用上吧。不用的话,把滑条尾静音掉吧
  3. 00:36:677 - 00:37:138 - 只是建议:这里的泡泡音拿两个物件去跟一跟如何?
  4. 01:34:666 (2,3,4) - 这三个的flow感觉略卡。。如果4的方向不是顺着2-3这样走的话感觉会好很多。

Hard

  1. 00:01:470 (3) - 如果是我的话这里会用1/1滑条吧,以区分主旋律这里跟前面两个音的不同。前奏里后面类似的地方也一样。(只是随口说说)---有叮叮音,不改
  2. 00:03:311 - 长滑条从这个点开始拉如何?原曲在这中间并没有鼓点- -
  3. 00:15:277 - 00:26:322 - 不知你有没有感觉到:这一段全是1/2的节奏。。。但后面又没有这么用了。。是不是考虑改动下节奏。---懒改,没什么影响
  4. 01:11:885 (4) - 掰弯它,弧度跟前面那个保持一致就好了 ---不改,改了没法叠后面的圈了
  5. 01:29:834 (3) - 感觉并不是太好看。要么跟前面那个圈弄在一条直线上,要么方向跟01:27:993 (3) - 保持一致。(推荐前者)---影响不大,不改
  6. 02:02:970 (4,5,6,7) - 建议4拆成俩单点,567合成一根折返。跟前面联系起来的话,感觉这样更合曲。

Normal

  1. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 6和7合成一根滑条吧,这样难度低一点。毕竟你没有Easy。 ---不改,最开始就是这样的,我打了好几次FL 都被坑了,3单点反而简单
  2. 00:46:112 (2,3) - 不是太中看。改成这样吧,以现有的AR不会有什么问题。
  3. 01:41:340 (2,3) - 跟上面类似的

我觉得你Insane稍微找点mod改改,拿去rank完全没问题的。。。---是这样吗= = 我的insane很坑的,不是很想,

嗯先这样吧。祝你好运~
感谢mod :)
Kencho
From 極限水摸集團
[General]
  1. Tag有點問題,統一下
[Normal]
  1. HP5太恐怖了,改成HP3

  2. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 三個連續單點有點太難,考慮67改成滑條?

    02:03:891 (1) - 如果是兩條大白線一NC,按理來說這個不用NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:311 (4,5) - 4那個滑條應該拉到00:04:001 - ,然後00:04:231 - 放一個圓圈就好

    00:51:635 (5,6) - hard難度不建議放短滑條,改成折返會比較好

    01:02:680 (4,5) - 01:46:862 (5,6) - 02:01:590 (4,5) - ^其實改成像02:03:431 (6,1) - 一樣的就好了
[Insane]
  1. 這藍線怎麼全部都提前1/4了

    00:11:595 (6,1) - 換一下NC

    01:05:902 (4) - 音樂來說01:05:902的音量40%不夠低,改成20%吧
美麗,射顆星
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Kencho wrote:

From 極限水摸集團
[General]
  1. Tag有點問題,統一下 ---587的还没给我,他的tag没改
[Normal]
  1. HP5太恐怖了,改成HP3 ---我的鼠标有问题的,可能拉的时候自己滑过去了,嘛,反正我之前是4,莫名成5了?,那就该3吧

  2. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 三個連續單點有點太難,考慮67改成滑條?---不改啊 理由同 Adol Christin


    02:03:891 (1) - 如果是兩條大白線一NC,按理來說這個不用NC ---不改
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:311 (4,5) - 4那個滑條應該拉到00:04:001 - ,然後00:04:231 - 放一個圓圈就好 ---好吧这边被说了好几次了,就是不知道怎么放比较妥,fixed

    00:51:635 (5,6) - hard難度不建議放短滑條,改成折返會比較好 ---不改,这里本来是要放4连+滑条的,太难了就短链,个人并不喜欢4折返滑条

    01:02:680 (4,5) - 01:46:862 (5,6) - 02:01:590 (4,5) - ^其實改成像02:03:431 (6,1) - 一樣的就好了 ---^ 最后那个是不想放3连改的,因为我HL每次跪在那个3连
[Insane]
  1. 這藍線怎麼全部都提前1/4了

    00:11:595 (6,1) - 換一下NC

    01:05:902 (4) - 音樂來說01:05:902的音量40%不夠低,改成20%吧
美麗,射顆星 ---感谢 :)
感谢mod :)

Insane 是587的, @587
Rilene
Insane
01:01:530 (1,2,3,4) - Well, the square isn't perfect, or did you intend to do this?
01:16:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do this into a perfect hexagon.
01:42:490 (4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do a perfect square, or at least perfect rectangle.
01:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect star.
01:56:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - You're almost there, to a perfect star.

Well, this is the only problem I found, good luck on ranking this. :)
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sirade wrote:

Insane
01:01:530 (1,2,3,4) - Well, the square isn't perfect, or did you intend to do this? ---v
01:16:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do this into a perfect hexagon.---v
01:42:490 (4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do a perfect square, or at least perfect rectangle.---v
01:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect star.---v
01:56:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - You're almost there, to a perfect star.---v

Well, this is the only problem I found, good luck on ranking this. :)
although i don't use ctrl+shift+d to do that , but u say , i fix it :)

thank you for modding :)
CookieBite
Hi! from my queue!

[Insane]
00:03:426 - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:001结束

沒什麼要說,pattern做得不錯

[liangv587's Insane]
00:03:311 (3) - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:231结束
00:28:163 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪,我觉得这样比较好
01:05:902 (4) - 这滑条建议移去01:06:017,01:06:822结束
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪

没捉到大错处,star +1

good luck with your map.
DNR
dude is that the Kool-Aid man

Overall:
mp3 randomly just stops. Put a little fade, or find a better mp3 (Because even the quality of this mp3 sounds not super great. It sounds like. . . I don't know. Chinese music does this a lot to where it sounds like it's been filtered through a 90's VHS tape and would be the background music for some obscure video game or something)

ling:
I really don't understand a LOT of the jumps in this map. This is a very soft song but I'm flying around the map sometimes. General statement, make your own fixes as seen fit.
00:02:390 (1) - This pattern is a little bit off. Adjust it so it's equal and symmetrical.
00:07:913 (1) - cramped sliders like this are no good :(
00:47:953 (6) - it was almost a star but then this.
00:49:334 (4) - overlap sliders like this are usually frowned upon.
00:50:829 (3,4) - the next note should be in the direction of the previous slider.
01:51:234 (2,4) - These sliders should be the same shape.

The jumps are too much for me to be happy with the map, regardless of the shortness of my mod :(

Insane:
00:03:311 (3) - whistle sound is bugged
01:37:428 (4) - would prefer the red point to be in the middle

Lower diffs are fine

China has some odd music
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

small_hins wrote:

Hi! from my queue!

[Insane]
00:03:426 - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:001结束 ---不改

沒什麼要說,pattern做得不錯

[liangv587's Insane]
00:03:311 (3) - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:231结束
00:28:163 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪,我觉得这样比较好
01:05:902 (4) - 这滑条建议移去01:06:017,01:06:822结束
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪

没捉到大错处,star +1

good luck with your map.

Reditum wrote:

dude is that the Kool-Aid man

Overall:
mp3 randomly just stops. Put a little fade, or find a better mp3 (Because even the quality of this mp3 sounds not super great. It sounds like. . . I don't know. Chinese music does this a lot to where it sounds like it's been filtered through a 90's VHS tape and would be the background music for some obscure video game or something) ---mp3 is no problem ,

ling:
I really don't understand a LOT of the jumps in this map. This is a very soft song but I'm flying around the map sometimes. General statement, make your own fixes as seen fit. ---random jump lol
00:02:390 (1) - This pattern is a little bit off. Adjust it so it's equal and symmetrical. ---v
00:07:913 (1) - cramped sliders like this are no good :(---keep
00:47:953 (6) - it was almost a star but then this.---keep
00:49:334 (4) - overlap sliders like this are usually frowned upon.---np,keep
00:50:829 (3,4) - the next note should be in the direction of the previous slider.---v
01:51:234 (2,4) - These sliders should be the same shape.---np,keep

The jumps are too much for me to be happy with the map, regardless of the shortness of my mod :(---jump is ,lol ,no change

Insane:
00:03:311 (3) - whistle sound is bugged
01:37:428 (4) - would prefer the red point to be in the middle

Lower diffs are fine

China has some odd music :)
thanks mod :)
TtmnZk
m4m.有点晚了就随便水点

[Insane]
00:04:461 (2,5) - blanket

00:16:197 (3) - 建议ctrl+g

00:56:467 (2,3) - 不知是包还是不包

00:58:999 (5,6,7,1) - 这里是5连

01:39:499 (5,6,7,8,1) - 中间那个7感觉凸出来了一点,试试100x316y
其他难度也摸不出啥来了,射个星
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

TT Mouse wrote:

m4m.有点晚了就随便水点

[Insane]
00:04:461 (2,5) - blanket

00:16:197 (3) - 建议ctrl+g

00:56:467 (2,3) - 不知是包还是不包 --不包

00:58:999 (5,6,7,1) - 这里是5连

01:39:499 (5,6,7,8,1) - 中间那个7感觉凸出来了一点,试试100x316y
其他难度也摸不出啥来了,射个星
其他fix

感谢mod :)
Karen
M4M

General

  1. 587的diff里少了個tag

Normal

  1. 00:02:851 (3,4) - 作為最低難度,還是簡單一點比較好,這兩個換成滑條
  2. 00:14:817 (6,7) - ^
  3. 01:16:257 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:51:865 (6) - 刪了這note,這一段連續1/2太多了,要給player休息的時間
  5. 01:47:092 (6) - ^,而且這clap也有點莫名

Hard

  1. 00:49:794 (4,5) - 跟前面DS錯了

Insane

  1. 01:55:377 (2) - 這個圈應該跟前面那個滑條靠近,而不是後面那個。。因為後面那個是重要,要用跳強調
  2. 02:04:121 (2) - 試試440,180 左右,flow好
  3. 00:03:311 - 這後面那堆綠線刪掉。。滑條上又沒加音效。順便把整個diff沒用的綠線都去掉把,你肯定複製587的diff沒刪

liangv587's Insane

  1. 00:53:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這東西難打的一比,3放下面做個銳角好不

改完戳我
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Karen wrote:

M4M

General

  1. 587的diff里少了個tag

Normal

  1. 00:02:851 (3,4) - 作為最低難度,還是簡單一點比較好,這兩個換成滑條
  2. 00:14:817 (6,7) - ^
  3. 01:16:257 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:51:865 (6) - 刪了這note,這一段連續1/2太多了,要給player休息的時間
  5. 01:47:092 (6) - ^,而且這clap也有點莫名

Hard

  1. 00:49:794 (4,5) - 跟前面DS錯了

Insane

  1. 01:55:377 (2) - 這個圈應該跟前面那個滑條靠近,而不是後面那個。。因為後面那個是重要,要用跳強調
  2. 02:04:121 (2) - 試試440,180 左右,flow好
  3. 00:03:311 - 這後面那堆綠線刪掉。。滑條上又沒加音效。順便把整個diff沒用的綠線都去掉把,你肯定複製587的diff沒刪

liangv587's Insane

  1. 00:53:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這東西難打的一比,3放下面做個銳角好不---587书不改

改完戳我
no reply = fix

感谢mod :)
Karen
Bubbled!

jonathanlfj
[General]
我记得当年看动画城一般都是CCTV1和7台,应该加到tags里面

[Normal]
01:11:425 (2,3) - 角度有点别扭,01:11:885 (3) - 往上一点
后面是不是直接复制然后竖着翻了一下。。。话说这个难度我觉得再放点1/2会好一些,现在有点太简单了

[Hard]
01:25:001 (6,1) - 注意间距,这里再好好摆一下
这里的1/4滑条我觉得稍微斜着摆的话比直着更好打一些,比如01:02:680 (4,5,1) - 这样摆:

[Insane]
00:07:453 (5,6) - 间距再大一点
00:11:365 (6) - 这个为什么不摆菱形
00:53:936 (6) - NC
01:18:788 (3,4) - 做的对称一些
01:19:709 (5) - NC
01:39:038 (3,4,5) - 这里打起来有点别扭,之前之后的间距最好一致
01:42:720 (2) - NC这里把 01:42:490 (1) - NC去掉
02:01:590 (1) - 去掉NC

[lingv587]
00:43:811 (5,1) - 我觉得这里这种节奏会好一些:
01:46:402 (1) - clap
01:49:394 (2,3,4) - 这里直着打有点别扭,试试这样:
02:04:121 (2) - 放到 x:176 y:84 试试

之后叫我
Koiyuki
哎lfj先我一步,那就交给你了 :3
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
我记得当年看动画城一般都是CCTV1和7台,应该加到tags里面

[Normal]
01:11:425 (2,3) - 角度有点别扭,01:11:885 (3) - 往上一点
后面是不是直接复制然后竖着翻了一下。。。话说这个难度我觉得再放点1/2会好一些,现在有点太简单了 ---低难度就这样了,虽然是复制,但是有小改动233

[Hard]
01:25:001 (6,1) - 注意间距,这里再好好摆一下
这里的1/4滑条我觉得稍微斜着摆的话比直着更好打一些,比如01:02:680 (4,5,1) - 这样摆:---fix ,其实还行,我FL打了几十次了,

[Insane]
00:07:453 (5,6) - 间距再大一点
00:11:365 (6) - 这个为什么不摆菱形
00:53:936 (6) - NC
01:18:788 (3,4) - 做的对称一些
01:19:709 (5) - NC
01:39:038 (3,4,5) - 这里打起来有点别扭,之前之后的间距最好一致 ---稍微改了下位置,间距不等
01:42:720 (2) - NC这里把 01:42:490 (1) - NC去掉
02:01:590 (1) - 去掉NC


之后叫我 ---等587那边吧
no rerly = fix

感谢mod :)

PS: 顺带我改了下 g2.pngg3.png ,给""和""加了""

Minakami Yuki wrote:

哎lfj先我一步,那就交给你了 :3
好吧~不过还是非常感谢accept req :)
liangv587

jonathanlfj wrote:

[lingv587]
00:43:811 (5,1) - 我觉得这里这种节奏会好一些:加了个短滑条
01:46:402 (1) - clap似乎没什么必要
01:49:394 (2,3,4) - 这里直着打有点别扭,试试这样:
02:04:121 (2) - 放到 x:176 y:84 试试

之后叫我
thx for modding
Topic Starter
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