Li Meng Di - Kuai Dian Gao Su Ni

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EncoreW
[General]

这tags居然是空的,Animation City CCTV这种应该能加进去凑数的把?

[Insane]

00:04:461 (2,5) - 这里看上去有点挤,我觉得还是五边形会更加整洁一点

00:07:338 - 这里应该是漏音了

00:21:720 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个看上去形状有点不规则的样子,和前面那个很规则的正方形反差有一点大,试试看等腰梯形?

01:17:638 (8) - 对准,和 01:16:717 (4,6) - 间距相同

02:02:050 (1,2,3) - 前后间距不一样

[Hard]

感觉一个NC包含的note有点太多了,到处都是10个12个

00:49:794 (4) - 这个是不是忘了ctrl+G了?前后间距一个0.99一个1.46也

00:51:635 (9,10) - 这两个试试看相同方向的?否则这flow看上去有点顺过头了好像也不是太好

01:02:680 (7,8,1) - 同上

[Normal]

最低难度直接就AR6OD5了?不到两星的难度没必要这样把,还是建议AR5OD4

别的没有了,水一发
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

T-Mac wrote:

[General]

这tags居然是空的,Animation City CCTV这种应该能加进去凑数的把?---v

[Insane]

00:04:461 (2,5) - 这里看上去有点挤,我觉得还是五边形会更加整洁一点 ---不改

00:07:338 - 这里应该是漏音了 ---不改

00:21:720 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个看上去形状有点不规则的样子,和前面那个很规则的正方形反差有一点大,试试看等腰梯形? ---好

01:17:638 (8) - 对准,和 01:16:717 (4,6) - 间距相同 ---v

02:02:050 (1,2,3) - 前后间距不一样 ---v

[Hard]

感觉一个NC包含的note有点太多了,到处都是10个12个 --- 改了1长白1NC

00:49:794 (4) - 这个是不是忘了ctrl+G了?前后间距一个0.99一个1.46也---不改,本来就是这么打算的,算小跳

00:51:635 (9,10) - 这两个试试看相同方向的?否则这flow看上去有点顺过头了好像也不是太好 ---不改

01:02:680 (7,8,1) - 同上 ---v

[Normal]

最低难度直接就AR6OD5了?不到两星的难度没必要这样把,还是建议AR5OD4 ---v

别的没有了,水一发
感谢mod :)
IamKwaN
Hi, as requested.
Unicode Title: 快点告诉你
Romanised Title: Kuai Dian Gao Su Ni
Unicode Artist: 李梦迪
Romanised Artist: Li Meng Di
Source: 动画城
Tags: "CARTOON CITY", etc.
References:
http://puu.sh/jeLoR/059adca6e3.png from http://www.cctv.com/life/cartooncity/katonggequ.html
Can't find more official references and I guess it's already enough.
Good luck with your map!
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, as requested.
Unicode Title: 快点告诉你
Romanised Title: Kuai Dian Gao Su Ni
Unicode Artist: 李梦迪
Romanised Artist: Li Meng Di
Source: 动画城
Tags: "CARTOON CITY", etc. add Cartoon to Tag
References:
http://puu.sh/jeLoR/059adca6e3.png from http://www.cctv.com/life/cartooncity/katonggequ.html
Can't find more official references and I guess it's already enough.
Good luck with your map!
, thank you for checking :)
No_Gu
M4M from my queue

中文artist和title写一下
动画城拼音加tag里(虽然我觉得没人搜。。 In的GDer的ID放tag里
怎么觉得这个MP3谜一般的梦幻。。
02:00:209 - 我觉得这kiai多余
00:46:687 - 这句应该是 我“用”你送的蜡笔 SB打的不对

[Normal]
00:03:311 (5) - 结尾放个soft-whistle好像就行了
00:06:763 (4,5,1) - 保险点还是拿上来
00:30:004 (1,2,3,4) - 有余力的话修一下
00:46:572 (3) - 这个也是 往上点
00:50:254 (3,4,5,1,2) - 预期后面这样不如把长slider岔开放clap节奏更流畅 而且不会让后面那部分太难
00:57:158 (3,4) - 间距
02:02:050 (1) - 这段音乐挺激荡的怎么就。。

[Hard]
00:03:771 (5) - 这个也是。。感觉你是在抓那个怪异的声音但是不太配
00:49:794 (4) - 这完全没必要吧。。
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 有些overlap有点挤 修一修试试
01:35:357 (3,4,1) - 间距
01:42:720 (3,1) - overlap 而且感觉这附近flow怪怪的
02:03:891 (1,2) - 跳可以大一点

[liangv587]
00:11:480 - 没音
00:12:515 (4,5) - 我觉得这边适合跳一下
01:19:249 (6,7,1) - 这个感觉没什么必要。。
01:26:152 (3,4,5,6) - 间距不太一样
02:03:891 (1,2) - 1/4跳那么大这里跳的这么小好像不太好
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

中文artist和title写一下
动画城拼音加tag里(虽然我觉得没人搜。。 In的GDer的ID放tag里 ---v
怎么觉得这个MP3谜一般的梦幻。。---毕竟童年233
02:00:209 - 我觉得这kiai多余---v
00:46:687 - 这句应该是 我“用”你送的蜡笔 SB打的不对---v

[Normal]
00:03:311 (5) - 结尾放个soft-whistle好像就行了 ---v
00:06:763 (4,5,1) - 保险点还是拿上来---v
00:30:004 (1,2,3,4) - 有余力的话修一下 --感觉要做对称 好麻烦,弄了下不太好搞,影响不大,不修
00:46:572 (3) - 这个也是 往上点---v
00:50:254 (3,4,5,1,2) - 预期后面这样不如把长slider岔开放clap节奏更流畅 而且不会让后面那部分太难---v
00:57:158 (3,4) - 间距---v
02:02:050 (1) - 这段音乐挺激荡的怎么就。。---好吧,换了滑条+note组

[Hard]
00:03:771 (5) - 这个也是。。感觉你是在抓那个怪异的声音但是不太配 ---不改,没想法
00:49:794 (4) - 这完全没必要吧。。 --换了2notes
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 有些overlap有点挤 修一修试试---v
01:35:357 (3,4,1) - 间距---v
01:42:720 (3,1) - overlap 而且感觉这附近flow怪怪的 ---旋转了前面2短链,叠了,flow还好吧= =
02:03:891 (1,2) - 跳可以大一点---改了1.5x

[liangv587]
00:11:480 - 没音
00:12:515 (4,5) - 我觉得这边适合跳一下
01:19:249 (6,7,1) - 这个感觉没什么必要。。
01:26:152 (3,4,5,6) - 间距不太一样
02:03:891 (1,2) - 1/4跳那么大这里跳的这么小好像不太好
感谢mod~ :)
@liangv87
liangv587

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

中文artist和title写一下
动画城拼音加tag里(虽然我觉得没人搜。。 In的GDer的ID放tag里

[liangv587]
00:11:480 - 没音没问题的
00:12:515 (4,5) - 我觉得这边适合跳一下没问题的
01:19:249 (6,7,1) - 这个感觉没什么必要。。
01:26:152 (3,4,5,6) - 间距不太一样
02:03:891 (1,2) - 1/4跳那么大这里跳的这么小好像不太好 没问题的
谢摸~
Adol Christin
二妹我来啦。

liangv587

  1. 似乎你的diff还没更新,更新的时候记得把meta跟其他难度统一了。
  2. 00:29:314 (2,4) - 我在想这种音用1/8的滑条会不会更有趣xD。。。要用的话后面几个类似的地方都用上吧。不用的话,把滑条尾静音掉吧
  3. 00:36:677 - 00:37:138 - 只是建议:这里的泡泡音拿两个物件去跟一跟如何?
  4. 01:34:666 (2,3,4) - 这三个的flow感觉略卡。。如果4的方向不是顺着2-3这样走的话感觉会好很多。

Hard

  1. 00:01:470 (3) - 如果是我的话这里会用1/1滑条吧,以区分主旋律这里跟前面两个音的不同。前奏里后面类似的地方也一样。(只是随口说说)
  2. 00:03:311 - 长滑条从这个点开始拉如何?原曲在这中间并没有鼓点- -
  3. 00:15:277 - 00:26:322 - 不知你有没有感觉到:这一段全是1/2的节奏。。。但后面又没有这么用了。。是不是考虑改动下节奏。
  4. 01:11:885 (4) - 掰弯它,弧度跟前面那个保持一致就好了
  5. 01:29:834 (3) - 感觉并不是太好看。要么跟前面那个圈弄在一条直线上,要么方向跟01:27:993 (3) - 保持一致。(推荐前者)
  6. 02:02:970 (4,5,6,7) - 建议4拆成俩单点,567合成一根折返。跟前面联系起来的话,感觉这样更合曲。

Normal

  1. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 6和7合成一根滑条吧,这样难度低一点。毕竟你没有Easy。
  2. 00:46:112 (2,3) - 不是太中看。改成这样吧,以现有的AR不会有什么问题。
  3. 01:41:340 (2,3) - 跟上面类似的

我觉得你Insane稍微找点mod改改,拿去rank完全没问题的。。。

嗯先这样吧。祝你好运~
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Adol Christin wrote:

二妹我来啦。

liangv587

  1. 似乎你的diff还没更新,更新的时候记得把meta跟其他难度统一了。
  2. 00:29:314 (2,4) - 我在想这种音用1/8的滑条会不会更有趣xD。。。要用的话后面几个类似的地方都用上吧。不用的话,把滑条尾静音掉吧
  3. 00:36:677 - 00:37:138 - 只是建议:这里的泡泡音拿两个物件去跟一跟如何?
  4. 01:34:666 (2,3,4) - 这三个的flow感觉略卡。。如果4的方向不是顺着2-3这样走的话感觉会好很多。

Hard

  1. 00:01:470 (3) - 如果是我的话这里会用1/1滑条吧,以区分主旋律这里跟前面两个音的不同。前奏里后面类似的地方也一样。(只是随口说说)---有叮叮音,不改
  2. 00:03:311 - 长滑条从这个点开始拉如何?原曲在这中间并没有鼓点- -
  3. 00:15:277 - 00:26:322 - 不知你有没有感觉到:这一段全是1/2的节奏。。。但后面又没有这么用了。。是不是考虑改动下节奏。---懒改,没什么影响
  4. 01:11:885 (4) - 掰弯它,弧度跟前面那个保持一致就好了 ---不改,改了没法叠后面的圈了
  5. 01:29:834 (3) - 感觉并不是太好看。要么跟前面那个圈弄在一条直线上,要么方向跟01:27:993 (3) - 保持一致。(推荐前者)---影响不大,不改
  6. 02:02:970 (4,5,6,7) - 建议4拆成俩单点,567合成一根折返。跟前面联系起来的话,感觉这样更合曲。

Normal

  1. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 6和7合成一根滑条吧,这样难度低一点。毕竟你没有Easy。 ---不改,最开始就是这样的,我打了好几次FL 都被坑了,3单点反而简单
  2. 00:46:112 (2,3) - 不是太中看。改成这样吧,以现有的AR不会有什么问题。
  3. 01:41:340 (2,3) - 跟上面类似的

我觉得你Insane稍微找点mod改改,拿去rank完全没问题的。。。---是这样吗= = 我的insane很坑的,不是很想,

嗯先这样吧。祝你好运~
感谢mod :)
Kencho
From 極限水摸集團
[General]
  1. Tag有點問題,統一下
[Normal]
  1. HP5太恐怖了,改成HP3

  2. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 三個連續單點有點太難,考慮67改成滑條?

    02:03:891 (1) - 如果是兩條大白線一NC,按理來說這個不用NC
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:311 (4,5) - 4那個滑條應該拉到00:04:001 - ,然後00:04:231 - 放一個圓圈就好

    00:51:635 (5,6) - hard難度不建議放短滑條,改成折返會比較好

    01:02:680 (4,5) - 01:46:862 (5,6) - 02:01:590 (4,5) - ^其實改成像02:03:431 (6,1) - 一樣的就好了
[Insane]
  1. 這藍線怎麼全部都提前1/4了

    00:11:595 (6,1) - 換一下NC

    01:05:902 (4) - 音樂來說01:05:902的音量40%不夠低,改成20%吧
美麗,射顆星
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Kencho wrote:

From 極限水摸集團
[General]
  1. Tag有點問題,統一下 ---587的还没给我,他的tag没改
[Normal]
  1. HP5太恐怖了,改成HP3 ---我的鼠标有问题的,可能拉的时候自己滑过去了,嘛,反正我之前是4,莫名成5了?,那就该3吧

  2. 00:14:817 (6,7,1) - 三個連續單點有點太難,考慮67改成滑條?---不改啊 理由同 Adol Christin


    02:03:891 (1) - 如果是兩條大白線一NC,按理來說這個不用NC ---不改
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:311 (4,5) - 4那個滑條應該拉到00:04:001 - ,然後00:04:231 - 放一個圓圈就好 ---好吧这边被说了好几次了,就是不知道怎么放比较妥,fixed

    00:51:635 (5,6) - hard難度不建議放短滑條,改成折返會比較好 ---不改,这里本来是要放4连+滑条的,太难了就短链,个人并不喜欢4折返滑条

    01:02:680 (4,5) - 01:46:862 (5,6) - 02:01:590 (4,5) - ^其實改成像02:03:431 (6,1) - 一樣的就好了 ---^ 最后那个是不想放3连改的,因为我HL每次跪在那个3连
[Insane]
  1. 這藍線怎麼全部都提前1/4了

    00:11:595 (6,1) - 換一下NC

    01:05:902 (4) - 音樂來說01:05:902的音量40%不夠低,改成20%吧
美麗,射顆星 ---感谢 :)
感谢mod :)

Insane 是587的, @587
Rilene
Insane
01:01:530 (1,2,3,4) - Well, the square isn't perfect, or did you intend to do this?
01:16:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do this into a perfect hexagon.
01:42:490 (4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do a perfect square, or at least perfect rectangle.
01:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect star.
01:56:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - You're almost there, to a perfect star.

Well, this is the only problem I found, good luck on ranking this. :)
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sirade wrote:

Insane
01:01:530 (1,2,3,4) - Well, the square isn't perfect, or did you intend to do this? ---v
01:16:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do this into a perfect hexagon.---v
01:42:490 (4,5,6,7,8) - Might be better to do a perfect square, or at least perfect rectangle.---v
01:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect star.---v
01:56:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - You're almost there, to a perfect star.---v

Well, this is the only problem I found, good luck on ranking this. :)
although i don't use ctrl+shift+d to do that , but u say , i fix it :)

thank you for modding :)
CookieBite
Hi! from my queue!

[Insane]
00:03:426 - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:001结束

沒什麼要說,pattern做得不錯

[liangv587's Insane]
00:03:311 (3) - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:231结束
00:28:163 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪,我觉得这样比较好
01:05:902 (4) - 这滑条建议移去01:06:017,01:06:822结束
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪

没捉到大错处,star +1

good luck with your map.
DNR
dude is that the Kool-Aid man

Overall:
mp3 randomly just stops. Put a little fade, or find a better mp3 (Because even the quality of this mp3 sounds not super great. It sounds like. . . I don't know. Chinese music does this a lot to where it sounds like it's been filtered through a 90's VHS tape and would be the background music for some obscure video game or something)

ling:
I really don't understand a LOT of the jumps in this map. This is a very soft song but I'm flying around the map sometimes. General statement, make your own fixes as seen fit.
00:02:390 (1) - This pattern is a little bit off. Adjust it so it's equal and symmetrical.
00:07:913 (1) - cramped sliders like this are no good :(
00:47:953 (6) - it was almost a star but then this.
00:49:334 (4) - overlap sliders like this are usually frowned upon.
00:50:829 (3,4) - the next note should be in the direction of the previous slider.
01:51:234 (2,4) - These sliders should be the same shape.

The jumps are too much for me to be happy with the map, regardless of the shortness of my mod :(

Insane:
00:03:311 (3) - whistle sound is bugged
01:37:428 (4) - would prefer the red point to be in the middle

Lower diffs are fine

China has some odd music
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

small_hins wrote:

Hi! from my queue!

[Insane]
00:03:426 - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:001结束 ---不改

沒什麼要說,pattern做得不錯

[liangv587's Insane]
00:03:311 (3) - 这滑条建议移去00:03:426,00:04:231结束
00:28:163 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪,我觉得这样比较好
01:05:902 (4) - 这滑条建议移去01:06:017,01:06:822结束
01:23:391 (1,2,3,4) - 这里总觉得有点怪

没捉到大错处,star +1

good luck with your map.

Reditum wrote:

dude is that the Kool-Aid man

Overall:
mp3 randomly just stops. Put a little fade, or find a better mp3 (Because even the quality of this mp3 sounds not super great. It sounds like. . . I don't know. Chinese music does this a lot to where it sounds like it's been filtered through a 90's VHS tape and would be the background music for some obscure video game or something) ---mp3 is no problem ,

ling:
I really don't understand a LOT of the jumps in this map. This is a very soft song but I'm flying around the map sometimes. General statement, make your own fixes as seen fit. ---random jump lol
00:02:390 (1) - This pattern is a little bit off. Adjust it so it's equal and symmetrical. ---v
00:07:913 (1) - cramped sliders like this are no good :(---keep
00:47:953 (6) - it was almost a star but then this.---keep
00:49:334 (4) - overlap sliders like this are usually frowned upon.---np,keep
00:50:829 (3,4) - the next note should be in the direction of the previous slider.---v
01:51:234 (2,4) - These sliders should be the same shape.---np,keep

The jumps are too much for me to be happy with the map, regardless of the shortness of my mod :(---jump is ,lol ,no change

Insane:
00:03:311 (3) - whistle sound is bugged
01:37:428 (4) - would prefer the red point to be in the middle

Lower diffs are fine

China has some odd music :)
thanks mod :)
TtmnZk
m4m.有点晚了就随便水点

[Insane]
00:04:461 (2,5) - blanket

00:16:197 (3) - 建议ctrl+g

00:56:467 (2,3) - 不知是包还是不包

00:58:999 (5,6,7,1) - 这里是5连

01:39:499 (5,6,7,8,1) - 中间那个7感觉凸出来了一点,试试100x316y
其他难度也摸不出啥来了,射个星
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

TT Mouse wrote:

m4m.有点晚了就随便水点

[Insane]
00:04:461 (2,5) - blanket

00:16:197 (3) - 建议ctrl+g

00:56:467 (2,3) - 不知是包还是不包 --不包

00:58:999 (5,6,7,1) - 这里是5连

01:39:499 (5,6,7,8,1) - 中间那个7感觉凸出来了一点,试试100x316y
其他难度也摸不出啥来了,射个星
其他fix

感谢mod :)
Karen
M4M

General

  1. 587的diff里少了個tag

Normal

  1. 00:02:851 (3,4) - 作為最低難度,還是簡單一點比較好,這兩個換成滑條
  2. 00:14:817 (6,7) - ^
  3. 01:16:257 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:51:865 (6) - 刪了這note,這一段連續1/2太多了,要給player休息的時間
  5. 01:47:092 (6) - ^,而且這clap也有點莫名

Hard

  1. 00:49:794 (4,5) - 跟前面DS錯了

Insane

  1. 01:55:377 (2) - 這個圈應該跟前面那個滑條靠近,而不是後面那個。。因為後面那個是重要,要用跳強調
  2. 02:04:121 (2) - 試試440,180 左右,flow好
  3. 00:03:311 - 這後面那堆綠線刪掉。。滑條上又沒加音效。順便把整個diff沒用的綠線都去掉把,你肯定複製587的diff沒刪

liangv587's Insane

  1. 00:53:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這東西難打的一比,3放下面做個銳角好不

改完戳我
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moonlightleaf

Karen wrote:

M4M

General

  1. 587的diff里少了個tag

Normal

  1. 00:02:851 (3,4) - 作為最低難度,還是簡單一點比較好,這兩個換成滑條
  2. 00:14:817 (6,7) - ^
  3. 01:16:257 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:51:865 (6) - 刪了這note,這一段連續1/2太多了,要給player休息的時間
  5. 01:47:092 (6) - ^,而且這clap也有點莫名

Hard

  1. 00:49:794 (4,5) - 跟前面DS錯了

Insane

  1. 01:55:377 (2) - 這個圈應該跟前面那個滑條靠近,而不是後面那個。。因為後面那個是重要,要用跳強調
  2. 02:04:121 (2) - 試試440,180 左右,flow好
  3. 00:03:311 - 這後面那堆綠線刪掉。。滑條上又沒加音效。順便把整個diff沒用的綠線都去掉把,你肯定複製587的diff沒刪

liangv587's Insane

  1. 00:53:936 (1,2,3,4) - 這東西難打的一比,3放下面做個銳角好不---587书不改

改完戳我
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