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Nomizu Iori - D.O.B.

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Padge14
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 mai 2018 at 17:13:37

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: D.O.B.
Source: Kuusen Madoushi Kouhosei no Kyoukan
Tags: 空戦魔導士候補生の教官 TVアニメ Sky Wizards Academy The Instructor of Aerial Combat Candidates xSiRix
BPM: 162
Filesize: 3283kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2,8 stars, 177 notes)
  2. Insane (3,92 stars, 268 notes)
  3. Normal (1,91 stars, 129 notes)
  4. xSiRix's Extra (5,71 stars, 412 notes)
Download: Nomizu Iori - D.O.B.
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal : Done

Hard : Done

Insane : Done

xSiRix's Extra : Done by Rutayu



Just doing things for no reason ;d
2017-09-10 : Fix some part in "Insane" difficulty.
2018-05-27 : Fix some part in "Insane" difficulty.
Akitoshi
Hello again >w<)/ My bad mod again ayy

[Normal]
  1. 00:21:117 (2) - If possible can you copy the slider shape of 00:21:858 (3) - and rotate?? it seems forced to heading right just to make a flow
  2. 00:30:376 (3) - It should be looking to the right, so it'll get better flow with 00:30:932 (1) - (maybe??)
  3. 00:31:117 (2,3,4) - this spammed 1/2 sliders... yes I don't hate it, but I think you'll need to change this in future since more mods to come
  4. 00:32:228 (1) - rotate to the left
  5. 00:33:339 (3) - why not symmetrical with 00:34:080 (4) - ?
  6. 00:53:524 (1,2) - convert it to slider since it's not 1/1 beat with 00:52:228 (4) - so the newbs can easily miss (I mean they'll get 50s or 100s)
  7. 00:55:191 (5) - I can't get the beat here cx
  8. 01:00:376 (1,2) - IDK if this kind of slider reverse is available for normal, better ask QAT/BNs
  9. 01:15:747 (2) - rotate to the left
  10. 01:21:117 (1) - This one is to the right (I'm suggesting the flow btw)
  11. There's no ending spinner? try start them at 01:27:228 - until 01:30:006 - (Make sure the timing section here has 5% volume)
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:858 (4,5) - it isn't too far? (just a suggestion, remove reverse at 00:41:858 (4) and add note at 00:42:228 that has balanced spacing)
  2. Also try to add spinner at the end..??
  3. I liked this diff btw >w<
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:599 (1,1,2,1,2,3) - Their gap tho, I think it's too boring for now, try map something in the blank, I bet you can this :D
  2. 00:34:636 - I think there's missing beat
  3. 00:35:747 (3) - stacking with 00:35:191 (1) -
  4. 01:00:747 (3,8) - why not move it to somewhere to continuous jumps? ;)
  5. 01:12:043 (6,1) - move them to the left since it's touching with 01:11:673 (4) -
  6. 01:23:524 - missing beat too
  7. 01:26:117 (4) - Suggestion again, try convert this to slider that ends with 01:26:950 -
  8. and yus, spinner pls
Topic Starter
Padge14

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

Hello again >w<)/ My bad mod again ayy

[Normal]
  1. 00:21:117 (2) - If possible can you copy the slider shape of 00:21:858 (3) - and rotate?? it seems forced to heading right just to make a flow yup
  2. 00:30:376 (3) - It should be looking to the right, so it'll get better flow with 00:30:932 (1) - (maybe??) yup
  3. 00:31:117 (2,3,4) - this spammed 1/2 sliders... yes I don't hate it, but I think you'll need to change this in future since more mods to come Lets see what other peoples think
  4. 00:32:228 (1) - rotate to the left yup
  5. 00:33:339 (3) - why not symmetrical with 00:34:080 (4) - ? yup, I wanted to blanket with the note just after but sill better to sym.
  6. 00:53:524 (1,2) - convert it to slider since it's not 1/1 beat with 00:52:228 (4) - so the newbs can easily miss (I mean they'll get 50s or 100s) yup
  7. 00:55:191 (5) - I can't get the beat here cx If you talk about the small 1/4 its just a mistake OOPS 8-)
  8. 01:00:376 (1,2) - IDK if this kind of slider reverse is available for normal, better ask QAT/BNs Will ask
  9. 01:15:747 (2) - rotate to the left yup
  10. 01:21:117 (1) - This one is to the right (I'm suggesting the flow btw) yup
  11. There's no ending spinner? try start them at 01:27:228 - until 01:30:006 - (Make sure the timing section here has 5% volume) yup
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:858 (4,5) - it isn't too far? (just a suggestion, remove reverse at 00:41:858 (4) and add note at 00:42:228 that has balanced spacing)
  2. Also try to add spinner at the end..?? yup, did a double note
  3. I liked this diff btw >w<
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:599 (1,1,2,1,2,3) - Their gap tho, I think it's too boring for now, try map something in the blank, I bet you can this :D well, I'll see it later.
  2. 00:34:636 - I think there's missing beat I know what you mean, but I prefer without :D I'll change it later if someone else think that.
  3. 00:35:747 (3) - stacking with 00:35:191 (1) - I didn't stack it, but I moved it to a better place
  4. 01:00:747 (3,8) - why not move it to somewhere to continuous jumps? ;) yup
  5. 01:12:043 (6,1) - move them to the left since it's touching with 01:11:673 (4) - yup, but i stacked the 01:11:673 (4) - instead
  6. 01:23:524 - missing beat too same ^^
  7. 01:26:117 (4) - Suggestion again, try convert this to slider that ends with 01:26:950 - will think about it
  8. and yus, spinner pls yup
Thanks for your good mod 8-)
Kyle Y
#modding queue

[Insane]
00:05:561 (1) - if you want to place circle 2 there, then use curve slider for flowing
00:10:932 - 00:11:302 - missing, just see if you want to map it
00:10:006 -

00:12:043 (2,3) - ctrl+g, if you reject this, 00:12:043 (2,3) - is poor flow also
00:14:450 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
00:19:636 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g
00:21:673 (7,1) - ctrl+g
00:21:858 -

00:27:043 (5,6) - slider
00:32:784 (3) - why not triple
00:33:710 -

00:35:747 (3) - triple
00:41:117 (1,2) - ctrl+g
00:45:376 (4,1) - flowing
00:52:228 (2) - slider
00:52:598 (3) - 1/2 beat slider and one beat at 00:52:969 -
01:07:413 (4) - ctrl+g
01:10:376 (5) - a little jump here
01:13:339 (5,6,1) - ctrl+g
01:26:117 (4) - 1 beat slider and circle at 01:26:673 -
01:27:228 (1) - start at 01:27:136 -
Kuki


[Hard]
Consider AR=8.2.
00:14:821 (2) - Ctrl+G perhaps.
01:19:636 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing here.

[Insane]
00:26:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.
00:32:784 (3) - Ctrl+G.
00:36:673 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing + emphasis.
00:47:784 (3) - Snap to grid to fix overlap.
00:50:747 (3) - Don't curve this slider so hard.
01:02:969 (2) - Ctrl+G.
01:20:747 (5,6) - Massive jump, tone it down a little here.
01:25:561 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing, perhaps even create a pattern here.
Topic Starter
Padge14

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue

[Insane]
00:05:561 (1) - if you want to place circle 2 there, then use curve slider for flowing Add a small curve
00:10:932 - 00:11:302 - missing, just see if you want to map it Not planing on mapping it, but ill maybe in the future mods
00:10:006 - Didn't do any of your suggestion, but I did change this part

00:12:043 (2,3) - ctrl+g, if you reject this, 00:12:043 (2,3) - is poor flow also ^
00:14:450 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g yup
00:19:636 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g yup
00:21:673 (7,1) - ctrl+g yup
00:21:858 - Prefer my placement

00:27:043 (5,6) - slider Change for a slider & at the same time changed the patern
00:32:784 (3) - why not triple for diversity ? :|
00:33:710 - Still prefer my own

00:35:747 (3) - triple same
00:41:117 (1,2) - ctrl+g yup
00:45:376 (4,1) - flowing ctrl+g it with a minor distance change
00:52:228 (2) - slider Yup
00:52:598 (3) - 1/2 beat slider and one beat at 00:52:969 - Yup
01:07:413 (4) - ctrl+g yup
01:10:376 (5) - a little jump here 01:09:636 (3,4,5) - I moved those 3 and ctrl+g 01:10:747 (1) - to balance the jump
01:13:339 (5,6,1) - ctrl+g k
01:26:117 (4) - 1 beat slider and circle at 01:26:673 - I only add the circle
01:27:228 (1) - start at 01:27:136 - k

Kuki wrote:



[Hard]
Consider AR=8.2. Didn't change that much, but I did it
00:14:821 (2) - Ctrl+G perhaps. Fix
01:19:636 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing here. Fix

[Insane]
00:26:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing. Fix
00:32:784 (3) - Ctrl+G. Fix
00:36:673 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing + emphasis. Fix
00:47:784 (3) - Snap to grid to fix overlap. k
00:50:747 (3) - Don't curve this slider so hard. I reduced the curve
01:02:969 (2) - Ctrl+G. Fix
01:20:747 (5,6) - Massive jump, tone it down a little here. Change the spacing between some notes, same for 00:31:858 (5,6) -
01:25:561 (1,2,3,4) - Fix spacing, perhaps even create a pattern here. Fix, still have the same kind of jump but with differents direction and small other stuff
Thanks for your mods
Loughje
Hello from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!
Insane
00:03:339 - Could edit through here.
00:06:302 - ^
01:02:598 (1,2) - For an Insane with a low BPM I think these would be better as streams and it would also increase your star rating a bit.
01:27:043 (1) - I would delete this circle and just have the spinner start here.
Honestly, a really great map although I think you should make an 'Easy'. Good luck on the rankings and sorry for the short mod but like I said, really good map.
Topic Starter
Padge14

jloughman14 wrote:

Hello from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team!
Insane
00:03:339 - Could edit through here. I'm trying to find something suitable, for the first part its fine but... the second is awfull
00:06:302 - ^
01:02:598 (1,2) - For an Insane with a low BPM I think these would be better as streams and it would also increase your star rating a bit. I will keep it in mind
01:27:043 (1) - I would delete this circle and just have the spinner start here.I realy prefer to have this circle & at the start the spin was not there(added after a mod), so I realy priorityze the circle[/box]
Honestly, a really great map although I think you should make an 'Easy'. Good luck on the rankings and sorry for the short mod but like I said, really good map. Maybe :|
HappyRocket88
Hai! From #modreqs

[General]
  1. Uncheck widerscreen support because you don't have storyboard.
  2. The insane diff has different combo colors from the other diffs.
  3. What about reducing a bit the vol at the beginning. It's a bit noisy.
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:858 (3) Can you make this slider more curvy to make it symmetric with 00:20:376 (1) ?
  2. 01:08:524 (4) Ctrl + J maybe to improve the flow?
  3. 01:00:376 (1,2) Try something else. these kind of slider are a bit odd for beginners.
  4. 00:25:191 (4) ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:969 (3,4) Make a better blanket between these objects.
  2. 00:22:598 (3) This might look better if you would have been more curvy.
That's all I can suggest because evything else is neat and readable. Good job.
Topic Starter
Padge14
Thx for mods ~

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hai! From #modreqs

[General]
  1. Uncheck widerscreen support because you don't have storyboard. Fix and changed it by epilepsy warning
  2. The insane diff has different combo colors from the other diffs. Woops
  3. What about reducing a bit the vol at the beginning. It's a bit noisy.As you wish
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:858 (3) Can you make this slider more curvy to make it symmetric with 00:20:376 (1) ? I want to keep it like this, but I made a small change to do something like you want
  2. 01:08:524 (4) Ctrl + J maybe to improve the flow? why not
  3. 01:00:376 (1,2) Try something else. these kind of slider are a bit odd for beginners. I already wanted to change this, was just waiting for a divination :L. Btw, I changed it, but I still think there is a better option.
  4. 00:25:191 (4) ^ Fix
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:969 (3,4) Make a better blanket between these objects. Fix
  2. 00:22:598 (3) This might look better if you would have been more curvy.Why not 8-)
That's all I can suggest because evything else is neat and readable. Good job.
Epsile
So here's what I think about the mapset:
Insane
00:10:747 (4,5) - The pattern should look more like a left-sided triangle than a line.
00:25:561 (7) - This should curve off to the left side slightly like 00:24:450 (5) - does.
00:29:450 (2) - Should be placed at 280,264 instead of 262,279.
00:32:043 (6) - I would place this a bit higher so that it doesn't look like it's falling off the screen.
00:42:784 (2) - Ctrl + J
00:47:413 (2) - Should be a 1/2 slider, not a 1/4.
00:49:080 (3) - Just so it looks a bit nicer, I would place it on 96,48 instead of 96,56.
01:05:747 (4) - Again, I would place it a bit higher.
01:08:895 (4) - I would place this one at 296,336. It looks better in my opinion.
01:13:154 (4) - Should be placed at 288,224.
01:15:747 (3,4,5) - Place these lower so they don't look off. And if you're gonna do that, place 01:16:117 (6) - lower on the screen as well, but not too much.
01:25:746 (2) - Should be placed at 272,280.
I don't notice any problems with the hitsounds, so that's all goody-goody. Overall, I love the difficulty.
Hard
00:31:487 (3) - Should place this lower from the top.
00:43:710 (4) - ^^
Nothing else I can see that needs fixing.
Normal doesn't really need fixing, at least from what I see. I'm sure other modders have better opinions about this map than I, but I hope that I helped a bit.
Topic Starter
Padge14

Epsile wrote:

So here's what I think about the mapset:
Insane
00:10:747 (4,5) - The pattern should look more like a left-sided triangle than a line. I did change the thing that made you think this, but I didn't use your idia
00:25:561 (7) - This should curve off to the left side slightly like 00:24:450 (5) - does. Still prefer to have this line to cut the stream
00:29:450 (2) - Should be placed at 280,264 instead of 262,279. k
00:32:043 (6) - I would place this a bit higher so that it doesn't look like it's falling off the screen. I say this for all the other time, but they are actualy fine in term of the area, but I did move all of them a bit.
00:42:784 (2) - Ctrl + J Nope, I think its easy enought to be read (If im wrong i'll just change it in the future :( )
00:47:413 (2) - Should be a 1/2 slider, not a 1/4. Actualy no reason to do this 1/2, you can easly ear a double 1/4 clap.
00:49:080 (3) - Just so it looks a bit nicer, I would place it on 96,48 instead of 96,56. k
01:05:747 (4) - Again, I would place it a bit higher.
01:08:895 (4) - I would place this one at 296,336. It looks better in my opinion. Nope, Im fine with those kind of slider, but if I do this it will overlap with another note and I want to keep this continuity
01:13:154 (4) - Should be placed at 288,224. Didn't use your postion and I also move 01:13:710 (1,2) - to keep the same patern
01:15:747 (3,4,5) - Place these lower so they don't look off. And if you're gonna do that, place 01:16:117 (6) - lower on the screen as well, but not too much.
01:25:746 (2) - Should be placed at 272,280. Ok
I don't notice any problems with the hitsounds, so that's all goody-goody. Overall, I love the difficulty.
Hard
00:31:487 (3) - Should place this lower from the top. was not alarming but k
00:43:710 (4) - ^^ same
Nothing else I can see that needs fixing.
Normal doesn't really need fixing, at least from what I see. I'm sure other modders have better opinions about this map than I, but I hope that I helped a bit.
Thx for mod ~
iYiyo
Hi o/ Saw your req on #modreqs. I'm here also to improve my modding skills, so feel free to ignore lol

[Normal]
00:12:228 (2) - move this like this for better flow.
00:40:376 (4,5,1) - Try with a triangle for aesthetics.
01:00:006 (3) - make this a slider
01:25:747 (4) - same as before

[Hard]
01:11:117 (3,4) - maybe unstack them
01:24:080 (1,2) - try something like this

[Insane]
00:02:599 (1) - Maybe make this slider a little bit curved, just like 00:05:561 (1)
00:17:413 (1,2,3) - Maybe try with a triangle for aesthetics
00:25:561 (7,1) - Maybe more distance between them.
00:32:043 (6,1) - ctrl + g, it plays better imo, you would change the pattern just a little
00:37:228 (4,5) - DS
00:42:413 (5) - move to x:432 y:312 for better flow
00:42:969 (3,4) - improve blanket
00:44:821 (3) - ctrl+g plays better imo
Maybe follow this:

then:

Note that 4 is stacked with 2.
01:01:487 (6,7,8) - They kinda random, try with a triangle
01:05:561 (3,4,5) - ^
01:25:561 (1,2,3,4) - Make them have the same distance to each other.

Hope it helped. Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Padge14

iYiyo wrote:

Hi o/ Saw your req on #modreqs. I'm here also to improve my modding skills, so feel free to ignore lol

[Normal]
00:12:228 (2) - move this like this for better flow. I rotate the slider, but not that much
00:40:376 (4,5,1) - Try with a triangle for aesthetics. k
01:00:006 (3) - make this a slider This one could be ok but I want to emphasis on the notes
01:25:747 (4) - same as before Same

[Hard]
01:11:117 (3,4) - maybe unstack them They feel confortable for me
01:24:080 (1,2) - try something like this still prefer to keep and they fit with the slider which follow them

[Insane]
00:02:599 (1) - Maybe make this slider a little bit curved, just like 00:05:561 (1) I think its not realy important
00:17:413 (1,2,3) - Maybe try with a triangle for aesthetics its not a prefect triangle but, it looks fine for me
00:25:561 (7,1) - Maybe more distance between them. Idk, I feel like the song realy break so I dont want to make a jump or anything like that.
00:32:043 (6,1) - ctrl + g, it plays better imo, you would change the pattern just a little 00:32:228 (1) - The start of this curent slider realy need to be on the white otherwise it doesnt follow what im mapping.
00:37:228 (4,5) - DS Idk, I feel like the song realy break so I dont want to make a jump or anything like that.
00:42:413 (5) - move to x:432 y:312 for better flow ok
00:42:969 (3,4) - improve blanket ok
00:44:821 (3) - ctrl+g plays better imo It could be nice, but I dont want to do any high jump in this section
Maybe follow this:

then:

Note that 4 is stacked with 2.
01:01:487 (6,7,8) - They kinda random, try with a triangle 01:01:117 (5,7) - for the blanket & 01:01:673 (7,8) - 01:01:673 (7,8) - are in line
01:05:561 (3,4,5) - ^ I understand why you want to change it, but still think its fine, maybe ill have to change it later
01:25:561 (1,2,3,4) - Make them have the same distance to each other. I want to make emphasis on the difference of the notes. Maybe im wrong, but i'll still keep them like this

Hope it helped. Good luck :)
Thanks for mods~
To much red :S
Crimmi
Alrighty then, this will be a light mod, just a few nitpicks here and there.

General(Metadata, Timing, etc.)



  1. The BG "BACKGROUND" is a bit on the big side for a JPEG, don't you think? It's not really a problem in any case but meh.

Insane


  1. 00:20:747 (3) - Move this to x:192|y:176 for better spacing, like this
  2. 00:36:858 (2) - Maybe move this to x:480|y:208.
  3. 01:05:561 (3,4) - Suggestion.

I couldn't find anything else, bravo~!
Topic Starter
Padge14

Crimmi wrote:

Alrighty then, this will be a light mod, just a few nitpicks here and there.

General(Metadata, Timing, etc.)



  1. The BG "BACKGROUND" is a bit on the big side for a JPEG, don't you think? It's not really a problem in any case but meh. meh

Insane


  1. 00:20:747 (3) - Move this to x:192|y:176 for better spacing, like this Ok
  2. 00:36:858 (2) - Maybe move this to x:480|y:208. Quite better
  3. 01:05:561 (3,4) - Suggestion.Someone already notice me for this part so this time ill change it

I couldn't find anything else, bravo~!
Thx for mods.
Kyle Y
M4M

[Normal]
00:17:413 (1,2) - 00:18:154 (3,4) - better don't use that much circle. change you slider
00:26:302 (1,2,3,4) - try this

00:44:080 (1,2) - avoid using same direction slider
00:53:524 (1) - 1.5 beat slider, and circle 00:54:265 (2) -
01:12:228 - try this,

01:17:043 (4) - blanket
01:22:228 (3,4) - this flowing..
01:27:043 (1) - avoid overlapping, seperate

[Hard]
00:12:969 (1) - better blanket
00:20:006 (5) - try change to 1 beat slider and 00:20:561 - circle here
00:43:710 (4) - Ctrl+g for flowing 4->1 need jump also
00:51:487 (3) - do not use a reverse, just normal one, since it is calm part.

00:55:191 - not suitable SV change here
01:09:636 (2) - Ctrl+g
01:11:302 - del it
01:12:228 (1,2,3) - slider
01:22:228 (3,4) - flowing?
Topic Starter
Padge14

Kyle Y wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
00:17:413 (1,2) - 00:18:154 (3,4) - better don't use that much circle. change you slider ok
00:26:302 (1,2,3,4) - try this At this point its more about personal opinion, but when I looking at this I found something wrong... so

00:44:080 (1,2) - avoid using same direction slider k
00:53:524 (1) - 1.5 beat slider, and circle 00:54:265 (2) - Prefer to keep /me runs
01:12:228 - try this, nope :D

01:17:043 (4) - blanket kkkk
01:22:228 (3,4) - this flowing.. kkk, Just Ctrl+H both of them
01:27:043 (1) - avoid overlapping, seperate Will look at this

[Hard]
00:12:969 (1) - better blanket ok moved by 1 pixel
00:20:006 (5) - try change to 1 beat slider and 00:20:561 - circle here I want to let a blank~
00:43:710 (4) - Ctrl+g for flowing 4->1 need jump also k why not
00:51:487 (3) - do not use a reverse, just normal one, since it is calm part. nope. Ps : Normal have the same slider and you said nothing.

00:55:191 - not suitable SV change here Will look for this Edit: Nope
01:09:636 (2) - Ctrl+g k why not
01:11:302 - del it Ik why you want to do with this, but my double is doing the same thing. Prefer to keep
01:12:228 (1,2,3) - slider Why ?
01:22:228 (3,4) - flowing? kkk
Loughje
Would you be interested in a GD Insane for this?
Topic Starter
Padge14

Loughje wrote:

Would you be interested in a GD Insane for this?
Right now, im not planing to do more for this song
Rutayu

Padge14 wrote:

Loughje wrote:

Would you be interested in a GD Insane for this?
Right now, im not planing to do more for this song
By "not planning to do more" do you mean you're not going to try and go for rank? Thus wasting one of my better GD's? D:
Topic Starter
Padge14

xSiRix wrote:

By "not planning to do more" do you mean you're not going to try and go for rank? Thus wasting one of my better GD's? D:
Not planing right now to get it ranked ;)
Vindikas
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