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Title:Everything will freeze
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Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
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Creator:sjoy
Version:hoshi's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:BOUKUN Izayoi Sakuya chenwu [Minakami Yuki] hoshisorakiseki Emingk Onijam
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buny
Freezing difficulty is perfect
Topic Starter
sjoy

buny wrote:

Freezing difficulty is perfect
thanks :)
Leeham
Holy damn this mapset is good :3
liaoxingyao
卧槽
Kunino Sagiri
new favorite mapper :D
Overwrite
SlimSladey
Can anyone even do this?
rarzzz
Really love this map :P
Will hope that this will get ranked soon, and keep making these kinds of maps, Pretty hard but still fun :)
I wish you good luck with new maps and this one ;)
Bedrock
I have always wanted this map to be ranked. I hope it will be ranked. Good luck :)
Topic Starter
sjoy
thanks you for supporting ~
Athrun
Please.. awesome song and beatmap. Someone rank pls <3
Kaguya Hourain
Good stuff, would love to see this ranked. Have a couple of stars!
Kagu-chan
I think the normal diff is too hard for beginners - some very short sliders (and fast) and very short spinners. Hope this will made better.
Topic Starter
sjoy

Kagu-chan wrote:

I think the normal diff is too hard for beginners - some very short sliders (and fast) and very short spinners. Hope this will made better.
yeah
it has been remade ~
Churcheell
Rank this ffs.

Have my stars.

lol
TwistedDuck
Mod req:

easy
14:05 TwistedDuck: Heyho
14:05 *TwistedDuck is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/384884 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Everything will freeze]
14:05 TwistedDuck: i do easy/normal
14:06 sjoy: mod?
14:07 TwistedDuck: yes
14:07 TwistedDuck: are you fine with a chat mod?
14:08 sjoy: ok
14:11 TwistedDuck: 00:44:230 (1) - Could be moved, feels weird
14:13 sjoy: which diff
14:13 TwistedDuck: easy
14:14 TwistedDuck: 02:39:730 (4) - off screen
14:14 TwistedDuck: it might go offscreen for people playing with small windows
14:15 sjoy: not off screen you can test it in the game
14:15 TwistedDuck: if you have a smaller res on
14:15 TwistedDuck: did you test it with the smallest res on?
14:15 sjoy: yeah..
14:15 sjoy: ok changed it
14:16 TwistedDuck: 03:12:355 (4) - Could be moved to http://puu.sh/d22a4/4190abc0f6.png or somewhere along 3s flow, feels weird
14:17 TwistedDuck: nice mep
14:18 sjoy: ok changed it~ thanks

Normal
14:18 TwistedDuck: i seriously love your blanketing
14:19 TwistedDuck: it's soo good on normals
14:21 TwistedDuck: Modding Normals~
14:21 TwistedDuck: Idk about you, 00:00:230 (1) - clicker was hard for me to hit a bit low placed, i can see why but you could move it in the way of the next notes or a little higher
14:22 TwistedDuck: i kept getting 100s, maybe that's just me
14:22 sjoy: ok remove this note
14:24 TwistedDuck: i think if you move 00:08:230 (1,2,3) - these a bit towards 4 it would be smoother
14:24 TwistedDuck: for a normal DT, it feels like a hard
14:26 sjoy: ok
14:26 TwistedDuck: This one, could be removed 00:25:230 (4) - or 5 00:25:480 (5) - could be made into a repeater slider
14:27 TwistedDuck: so that it's more consistent with the previous note 1,2,3
14:29 sjoy: changed it
14:29 TwistedDuck: 01:15:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - i love the trajectory you give these, these would've been amazing for a hard or a slow insane for normals i think newer players might find that abit difficult
14:30 TwistedDuck: 01:27:230 (3) - could be removed and instead of 4 01:27:480 (4) - repeating, you could blanket 2 sliders in there
14:30 TwistedDuck: think that would be a better fit for normals imo
14:31 TwistedDuck: This feels off to hit 01:27:105 (3,4) -
14:31 sjoy: ok
14:31 TwistedDuck: 01:47:980 (6) - no need for normal
14:32 TwistedDuck: repeat the same pattern, here 01:46:230 (1,3) -
14:32 TwistedDuck: Or you can change this into notes to better fit the pattern, 01:48:730 (2) -
14:33 TwistedDuck: that plays like a hard imo
14:33 sjoy: ok
14:34 TwistedDuck: Remove this 02:35:980 (6) - or you could move this earlier fit with 5
14:34 TwistedDuck: this would makes the user feel awkward cause he doesn't expect this so late and the spinner right after
14:35 TwistedDuck: 02:41:980 (4) - could be moved a bit towards 3
14:35 TwistedDuck: or u could try with 2 notes there
14:35 TwistedDuck: yeah, try removing 4 and see
14:36 sjoy: removed it
14:36 TwistedDuck: Just that, i didn't see how it felt removing it
14:36 TwistedDuck: so try it out if you can
14:36 TwistedDuck: you might have to move the next 2 notes from 3
14:37 TwistedDuck: 02:48:730 (3,2,3,4) - this is borderline hard but i love this, don't remove it xD
14:37 TwistedDuck: your flow makes it look normal
14:37 TwistedDuck: Awesome! nice map
Topic Starter
sjoy

TwistedDuck wrote:

Mod req:

easy
14:05 TwistedDuck: Heyho
14:05 *TwistedDuck is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/384884 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Everything will freeze]
14:05 TwistedDuck: i do easy/normal
14:06 sjoy: mod?
14:07 TwistedDuck: yes
14:07 TwistedDuck: are you fine with a chat mod?
14:08 sjoy: ok
14:11 TwistedDuck: 00:44:230 (1) - Could be moved, feels weird
14:13 sjoy: which diff
14:13 TwistedDuck: easy
14:14 TwistedDuck: 02:39:730 (4) - off screen
14:14 TwistedDuck: it might go offscreen for people playing with small windows
14:15 sjoy: not off screen you can test it in the game
14:15 TwistedDuck: if you have a smaller res on
14:15 TwistedDuck: did you test it with the smallest res on?
14:15 sjoy: yeah..
14:15 sjoy: ok changed it
14:16 TwistedDuck: 03:12:355 (4) - Could be moved to http://puu.sh/d22a4/4190abc0f6.png or somewhere along 3s flow, feels weird
14:17 TwistedDuck: nice mep
14:18 sjoy: ok changed it~ thanks

Normal
14:18 TwistedDuck: i seriously love your blanketing
14:19 TwistedDuck: it's soo good on normals
14:21 TwistedDuck: Modding Normals~
14:21 TwistedDuck: Idk about you, 00:00:230 (1) - clicker was hard for me to hit a bit low placed, i can see why but you could move it in the way of the next notes or a little higher
14:22 TwistedDuck: i kept getting 100s, maybe that's just me
14:22 sjoy: ok remove this note
14:24 TwistedDuck: i think if you move 00:08:230 (1,2,3) - these a bit towards 4 it would be smoother
14:24 TwistedDuck: for a normal DT, it feels like a hard
14:26 sjoy: ok
14:26 TwistedDuck: This one, could be removed 00:25:230 (4) - or 5 00:25:480 (5) - could be made into a repeater slider
14:27 TwistedDuck: so that it's more consistent with the previous note 1,2,3
14:29 sjoy: changed it
14:29 TwistedDuck: 01:15:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - i love the trajectory you give these, these would've been amazing for a hard or a slow insane for normals i think newer players might find that abit difficult
14:30 TwistedDuck: 01:27:230 (3) - could be removed and instead of 4 01:27:480 (4) - repeating, you could blanket 2 sliders in there
14:30 TwistedDuck: think that would be a better fit for normals imo
14:31 TwistedDuck: This feels off to hit 01:27:105 (3,4) -
14:31 sjoy: ok
14:31 TwistedDuck: 01:47:980 (6) - no need for normal
14:32 TwistedDuck: repeat the same pattern, here 01:46:230 (1,3) -
14:32 TwistedDuck: Or you can change this into notes to better fit the pattern, 01:48:730 (2) -
14:33 TwistedDuck: that plays like a hard imo
14:33 sjoy: ok
14:34 TwistedDuck: Remove this 02:35:980 (6) - or you could move this earlier fit with 5
14:34 TwistedDuck: this would makes the user feel awkward cause he doesn't expect this so late and the spinner right after
14:35 TwistedDuck: 02:41:980 (4) - could be moved a bit towards 3
14:35 TwistedDuck: or u could try with 2 notes there
14:35 TwistedDuck: yeah, try removing 4 and see
14:36 sjoy: removed it
14:36 TwistedDuck: Just that, i didn't see how it felt removing it
14:36 TwistedDuck: so try it out if you can
14:36 TwistedDuck: you might have to move the next 2 notes from 3
14:37 TwistedDuck: 02:48:730 (3,2,3,4) - this is borderline hard but i love this, don't remove it xD
14:37 TwistedDuck: your flow makes it look normal
14:37 TwistedDuck: Awesome! nice map
thanks :3
Kaguya Hourain
Gooooo~
Ephix
get it ranked damnit, awesome map !
Woddles
neeeeed modsss

orz
Snepif
Made a liveplay of the Freezing diff :D
EmingK

Snepif wrote:

Made a liveplay of the Freezing diff :D
true love xD
Topic Starter
sjoy
bumped
Mafumafu
from the help forum
xD
Sakaue Nachi
mod for hitsound ...

[Freezing]
00:05:730 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 敢不敢弄圆点
00:06:730 (3,4) - 小细节,4弄下稍微一点
00:08:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - 弧度不好
00:24:230 (1,2,3,4) - 弄正方形啊
00:45:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里用和00:44:855 (6,7) - 这里一样的梗做对应
01:07:480 (2) - 这个也微弯和后面照应
01:57:230 (1,2) - 用一样弧度吧
03:03:230 (1,2) - blanket可以
03:04:730 (3,4) - 对称啊

[Extra]
00:54:980 (5,1) - blanket好点
02:19:230 (1) - 感觉可以减速
02:32:480 (2,3) - 建议不要粘一起,然后两组一个nc,02:32:980 (6,7) - 这组再弄下点

[Yuki's Lunatic]
02:17:105 (6,6) - 这两个建议删了,本来三连得地方放1/2有点怪,空拍感觉不错

其他看不出什么问题
4anke
The empty map can get 224 fav.I think that's the best map of osu!XD
liangv587
[hoshi's Normal]
00:08:230 (1,2,3) - 既然是normal,这种就不应该存在,时间轴间距就应该尽量统一,这种3/2的距离对于新手玩家是分别不出来的,而且音乐这么嘈杂更是抓不住轨,就应该尽量简单,改成3/2滑条折返
00:15:730 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 连续单点太多了,考虑减少一些
00:17:980 (1) - 重音放滑条尾
00:26:605 (2,3) - 反正前后打起来奇怪
00:27:230 (4) - 丑
00:30:605 (4,5) - 前后打起来奇怪
00:33:230 - 这里略奇怪,00:33:355 - 这里放个圈就好
00:33:730 (1) - 强行重音放滑条尾
01:21:980 (3,1) - 打起来奇怪,为什么不01:22:230 - 开始滑条
01:23:980 (5,1) - 同上,后面也多得很,建议都改了
01:56:230 (5,7) - 避免overlap
02:57:980 (6,1) - 避免overlap
就这样吧,其他都没问题,这个normal应该remap,节奏有些混乱,滑条有些丑,空间分布有些不合理
LigerZero


1st Favorite in new beatmap :D and RIP my record in Yuki's Lunatic and extra :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Misure
m4m
这种图摸不动的啦...强行摸一波

[General]

Aimod,虽然感觉好像也无所谓
[Freezing]

00:01:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这串连打怎么不是等距的
00:06:730 (3,4) - 感觉有点近了
00:08:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这串是开DS拉的吧...感觉不圆滑
00:09:980 (7,8,9,10) - ctrl+J的方向 和00:09:480 (2,3,4,5) -反着好点吧
00:10:980 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这个形状感觉好别扭...这样?
00:11:605 (4,5) - 感觉flow不好,5放在00:10:980 (4) - 上方的位置看看?
00:11:980 (6,7,8,1) - 听上去感觉应该远离
00:17:980 (7,8,9,10,1) - 用和前面那串相等的距离
00:18:230 (1,3) - 彼此可以包一下
00:20:980 (6,7,8) - (232,320) 总之感觉下方的位置好些
00:25:980 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面那串一样的形状
00:27:980 (4,1) - 分别ctrl+G
00:29:980 (4,1) - 近了
00:33:042 (2,3,4,5,1) - 不考虑包一下么
00:35:105 (7,1) - 我觉得这两个的位置应该反过来,感觉flow是那样的
00:36:355 (2) - (340,320)
00:43:730 (9,10,11) - 这好难...10和11交互位置吧...
00:47:855 (6,8) - 一个向上一个向下
00:48:980 (5) - ctrl+G
00:54:230 (1,4,5) - 互相包?
00:57:230 (1,2) - 好像近了
00:59:980 (1,2,3) - ctrl+H的方向
01:00:980 (2,1) - 干脆(144,304)贴上一部分...
01:07:730 (3,4) - 分别ctrl+G?感觉三个条子彼此反响比较好吧...
01:28:230 (1,2,1,2) - 要不全部NC?
02:29:605 (3) - 改成短滑条?因为感觉音乐有个上扬的感觉
02:32:730 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 听起来我感觉这几个是一组的,后面那两对是一组的
02:48:730 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉有点逆flow...
[Extra]

00:25:542 (2,3,4,5) - 感觉可以变个形状,接后面的flow
00:30:855 (3) - ctrl+G 00:31:105 (4) - (400,360)
01:28:605 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我还是觉得这个形状好别扭...
01:32:230 (1) - 放到01:31:230 (1,2,3,4) - 里?感觉中间不放很空啊 5出的还比较晚
01:47:980 (4,1) - 感觉近了
01:53:730 - 这种?
01:56:730 (6,4) -
01:57:980 (5,1) - 还是感觉近了...
02:48:230 (1,4,5) - 间距?
[Yuki's Lunatic]

00:08:230 (1,2) - 我怎么感觉这里1/4就够了 毕竟刚开头...
00:24:230 (1,2) - ^
00:42:230 (1,1) - 好大一个M啊!Mb!
[EmingK's Hard]

00:36:605 (3) - ctrl+G
01:21:980 (5) - ctrl+G 这个方向反的没必要吧
01:27:230 (5) - 弯一下?
02:06:730 - 不加个note和前面统一节奏?
03:00:730 (2,3) - 分别ctrl+G 接前面1的flow
[hoshi's Normal]

00:03:230 (1,2) - 不彼此包?
00:05:480 (3,2) - 同方向感觉不好
00:09:230 -
00:15:980 (6,1,2) - 为什么就突然变距了
00:17:980 (1) - 删掉 在00:18:230 - 加个note 00:17:980 - 这点的音我觉得没必要跟
00:22:230 - 主要是考虑到00:22:730 - 和00:22:980 - 的音是衔接的 所以
00:26:605 (2,3) - 这种放Normal里太难了吧...前面还有后面的几个压红线的我觉得也是难了 其实老老实实压白线感觉也挺好的
00:50:230 (1,2) - 没包好
......

说实话我感觉这Normal得remap 一堆压红线还有滑条尾压长白线,(主要是后者)感觉很不舒服 跟的轨有点乱,还有一些排列也是很糟...
[Easy]

01:44:230 (1,2) - 完全可以包

这个Easy 互相包的地方比较少,导致图整体感觉比较散,说实话我感觉这diff也得re...



就这样了,水平有限望见谅
祝好运! :)
Wing My Way
贴吧M4M

General

  1. AudioLeadIn增加1500使玩家在游戏开始有足够的反应时间
  2. Yuki's Lunatic\Extra\Freezing难度的02:04:230 - 绿线与02:02:230 - 的绿线重复,请删除

Freezing

  1. OD9及以上
    00:10:980 (4) - ctrl+g
    00:20:605 (4,5) - 这个节奏不太好,建议00:20:605 (4) - 改成单点
    00:43:730 (9) - NC?
    00:54:230 (1,4,5) - blanket
    01:40:855 (4,5,6) - 叠上吧
    01:54:105 (6) - 感觉这个角度并不好
    02:05:980 (7,8,9,10) - 这里用0.2DS,然而02:07:730 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里用0.4DS,节奏变化并不大,感觉没有意义。
    02:20:230 (1,2,3,4) - 其实我觉得这里不妨使用大间距连打,这种滑条真的不爽

Extra

  1. OD8及以上
    00:15:605 - and 00:16:105 - 漏音
    00:19:605 - ^真的很不爽
    00:22:605 - ^不想加note改成滑条好不好?我要受不了了
    00:53:292 (2) - overmap
    01:49:292 (2) - ^
    01:50:105 - 漏音
    01:54:105 - ^

Yuki's Lunatic


  • fuel 才4.6star
    密度有点高,建议增大AR?
    也没什么好摸的了
不摸了就这样吧888
good luck! :)
Topic Starter
sjoy

Wing My Way wrote:

贴吧M4M

General

  1. AudioLeadIn增加1500使玩家在游戏开始有足够的反应时间
  2. Yuki's Lunatic\Extra\Freezing难度的02:04:230 - 绿线与02:02:230 - 的绿线重复,请删除

Freezing

  1. OD9及以上
    00:10:980 (4) - ctrl+g 好
    00:20:605 (4,5) - 这个节奏不太好,建议00:20:605 (4) - 改成单点 好
    00:43:730 (9) - NC? 好
    00:54:230 (1,4,5) - blanket 好
    01:40:855 (4,5,6) - 叠上吧 好
    01:54:105 (6) - 感觉这个角度并不好 改了
    02:05:980 (7,8,9,10) - 这里用0.2DS,然而02:07:730 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这里用0.4DS,节奏变化并不大,感觉没有意义。这里串音不同
    02:20:230 (1,2,3,4) - 其实我觉得这里不妨使用大间距连打,这种滑条真的不爽 这里思考一下

Extra

  1. OD8及以上
    00:15:605 - and 00:16:105 - 漏音
    00:19:605 - ^真的很不爽
    00:22:605 - ^不想加note改成滑条好不好?我要受不了了
    00:53:292 (2) - overmap
    01:49:292 (2) - ^
    01:50:105 - 漏音
    01:54:105 - ^ 漏音已改

Yuki's Lunatic


  • fuel 才4.6star
    密度有点高,建议增大AR?
    也没什么好摸的了
不摸了就这样吧888
good luck! :)
感谢
Kayano
irc'd with mapper, changed some patterns

rip my little poor diff and old 200 favs

Bubbled!
Karen
Fixed some snapping issues and some patterns in Easy and Hard.
The first try


IRC
2015-07-25 17:36 Karen: 123
2015-07-25 17:37 Karen: 02:15:230 - 这后面改成1/3吧
2015-07-25 17:37 sjoy: 321
2015-07-25 17:37 Karen: 你听听
2015-07-25 17:38 sjoy: 哇有点多
2015-07-25 17:38 sjoy: 好像不对前面是4分拍
2015-07-25 17:38 sjoy: 就这里是3分么
2015-07-25 17:39 Karen: 哪里
2015-07-25 17:39 sjoy: 00:13:230 这里也有个
2015-07-25 17:39 sjoy: 是不一样的吧
2015-07-25 17:39 Karen: 这是4分
2015-07-25 17:40 Karen: 我听了一个小时
2015-07-25 17:40 Karen: 最后觉得这里是1/3
2015-07-25 17:40 sjoy: 有这一处么
2015-07-25 17:40 sjoy: 就
2015-07-25 17:40 Karen: 然后我看rank版也是
2015-07-25 17:40 Karen: 对
2015-07-25 17:40 Karen: 其他都应该是对的
2015-07-25 17:40 Karen: 万一我漏了 那就认栽
2015-07-25 17:41 sjoy: 这么说的话单点2分拍也是错的了?
2015-07-25 17:41 sjoy: 这里只能用3分?
2015-07-25 17:42 Karen: 用个折返带过好了
2015-07-25 17:43 Karen: 00:09:730 (5,1) - 还有这个stack改掉
2015-07-25 17:43 Karen: easy
2015-07-25 17:44 sjoy: 我又听了一遍
2015-07-25 17:44 sjoy: 感觉第一拍是没有3分的
2015-07-25 17:44 sjoy: 这一节只有后三拍是有的
2015-07-25 17:44 sjoy: 你觉得呢
2015-07-25 17:44 sjoy: 第一届是2分拍
2015-07-25 17:44 sjoy: 节
2015-07-25 17:44 Karen: 02:15:230 (1) - 这个滑条没有
2015-07-25 17:45 Karen: 02:15:480 - 这里开始
2015-07-25 17:49 Karen: 人呢
2015-07-25 17:49 sjoy: 卡掉了阿
2015-07-25 17:50 sjoy: 我刚才说就第一节不是3分拍
2015-07-25 17:50 Karen: 02:15:480 - 对啊 从这里开始是1/3
2015-07-25 17:50 Karen: 前面没有
2015-07-25 17:51 sjoy: 知道了
2015-07-25 17:51 Karen: 00:09:730 (5,1) - 03:03:730 (6,1) - easy里去掉这两个stack
2015-07-25 17:54 sjoy: 好
2015-07-25 17:57 Karen: 01:19:730 (7,8) - hard里把这个改正常点。。。
2015-07-25 17:58 sjoy: 改了 和 56 差不多
Kotori-Chan
love it :33333


(´・ω・`)
Chaoslitz
恭喜AJOY起飛

Nakano Itsuki

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Histoire
wo finally! congrats~ >w</
MirinH

Chaoslitz wrote:

恭喜AJOY起飛

rarzzz
Eyy you got it ranked, nice job man, really love this song and map set :P
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