1. Easy (1.54 stars, 127 notes)
2. Hard (3.11 stars, 262 notes)
3. Insane (4.73 stars, 360 notes)
4. Light Insane (3.73 stars, 307 notes)
5. Normal (2.09 stars, 183 notes)

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!
From my queue.



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~

[General]

- That BG hnnggg. I hope you can rank this map with that BoobsG. will try c:

[Easy]

1. 00:33:980 - Add an object at here. It sounds better for me and didn't make play harder. (i hope) also there's a strong beat at here. don't forget to add the clap too mhhh eh I guess ya ok
2. 00:39:697 - here too nay would like this to be a break, to have atleast ONE in the map. Feels appropriate here. If more people feel like mapping this then I guess I'll be adding a circle
3. 00:35:767 (3) - Add clap on the head and tail it's a whistle actually but ya hitsound was missing

[Normal]

1. 00:12:897 (7) - NC at here. oops
2. 00:17:185 - are you sure going to leave this empty? it feels really weird to play if you do. doing that for the recovery time needed after a spinner. Not entirely sure how much is needed but I'm pretty sure 1/2 is not enough
3. 00:29:156 (2) - Add an object at here. it has a same sound with 00:20:044 (1,2) b-but there is an object here already?;w;
4. 01:31:510 (8) - NC at here too. ya

[Hard]

1. 00:16:828 - 00:17:007 - Really suggesting you to map these.
2. 00:18:972 (7) - add more repeat to cover the strong beat at 00:19:240 .
3. 00:24:689 (8) - ^^^
4. 00:30:407 (7) - ^^^
5. 00:38:893 - adding an object at here wouldn't hurt tho. Really suggesting this.
6. 01:04:710 (8) - and similiar patterns
   
   For all of these: Would like the rythm for my Hard Diff to be (with ONE exception and the repeats from the sliders) to be 1/2 exclusively. I had multiple people test this and not one of them ended up pointing this out as off-putting or weird, so I'd like to keep them without the additional repeat if possible
   

[Light Insane]

1. 00:16:828 - 00:17:007 - Really suggesting you to map these. 1/4 so shortly after a spinner is really annoying so I'd rather only have it for the Insane :c
2. 00:34:337 (1) - Remove clap ya
3. 00:41:126 (4) - Add clap ya
4. 01:24:631 - Should add an object at here. There's a strong beat. eeeh yes I guess

[Insane]

1. 00:07:716 (4,5) - Looks same but has a different play with 00:07:180 (1,2,3) - Would recommend to unstack the (4) I..don't really get it? this was never supposed to play the same ;w;
2. 01:24:631 - Should add an object here too. o ya

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ M4M request in-game.

- General :

1. 01:32:939 (1) - I would use a 20% volume at the end to fit more the decrease volume of the song. will keep that in mind, will apply if more people suggest doing this (not 100% set on this yet tbh)

- Easy :

1. HP2 maybe ?
2. 00:06:108 (4) - Check blanket. small adjustment (I tried ;w;)
3. It's only me ofc but I would be better to restart at 00:17:185 - and reduce a little spinner for 00:15:756 - . hmm. Would like to keep this consistent with the other Diffs for now, might adjust if more people point this out
4. 00:52:561 (2) - Having this little breakflow would be avoided for a smoother flow and keep this more "easy" like this -> http://puu.sh/j7CJu/6bd018a563.jpg. done on purpose. I think having something play a little more rough from time to time is fun and there is NO WAY that this is to hard for a beginner to hit
5. 00:55:420 (2) - Move to 256:159 (nazi). done!
6. 01:22:934 (1) - Why not use a simple curved one and blanket with 01:22:577 (5) - ? It would even improve a little the flow. current version looks neater and imo the improvement in flow is very very very insiginficant/barely noticeable at all

- Normal :

1. 00:19:151 (4,5) - To get http://puu.sh/j7R5V/d650acdbfb.jpg
2. 00:17:185 - You could restart from here, there is enough recovery time for that. wanted to play it safe with the recovery time but if it's fine then yay
3. 00:19:865 - I don't get it why you didn't map this beat, who is really obvious, when you map it just after with 00:22:545 (7) - . That creates an inconsistency across your kiai because you did it again for 00:25:583 - / 00:28:263 (7) - / ect...
4. 00:21:295 - Same issue, you map it for 00:18:436 - but not here, and same for 00:24:153 - / ect. Also you did it correctly for the second part of kiai so do it here too.
5. 00:23:617 (3) - Same...is different from 00:20:759 (3) - but this is the same rhythm...keep consistant this is a Normal diff.
6. 00:27:905 (6,7) - I would just CTRL+J them to have 00:28:620 (1) - following 00:28:263 (7) - correctly.
7. 01:22:041 (6) - By moving it to 151:285, this pattern should play a lot better. eeeh ok

For all the rythm related suggestions: I don't really see why I should have my rythm 100% consistent, it'd just end up being dull and boring. As long as the rythm that is being used is intuitive to follow and fun to play I don't think having it not consistent is something that needs fixing. oh and btw for the one at [*]00:19:865 -I actually skip this like 2 or 3 more times in the kiai

- Hard :

1. 00:20:401 - Forget a clap. ya
2. 00:30:407 - Shound't be a whistle but a clap. ya
3. 00:35:767 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I think a long sequence of circle is maybe too much here and don't fit so well at the music. I would change minimum 00:36:838 (12,13) - for a slider. honestly the Diff is 100% DS'd with no 1/4 at all (with one exception) so I don't think that having ONE pattern being a bit more taxing on the player is a bad thing
4. 01:05:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't get it why just this part is mapped with 1/1 rhythm to create a "break" and not 01:02:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - , because that's the same. because the one that has 1/1 has very very very noticeable drums on with 1/1 rythm to them
5. 01:08:641 - You should use same hitsound as 01:02:924 (1) - for consistency. Same for 01:11:500 - . oh ya

- Light Insane :

1. 00:12:897 (1,2,3,4) - Why not keeping spacng consistent here ? There is no real reason to not doing it. it looks neat and plays well, so I don't really see why not (I could line them up like I did with the other patterns but why bother changing something that is perfectly fine)
2. 00:24:153 (4,1) - Cool pattern, but if you want to keep this jump, do the same for 00:35:409 (6,1) - right since this is the same rhythmic pattern on music. made this a bit more interesting to play
3. 00:32:015 (2,3) - Why spacing is different from 00:20:401 (3,4) - when that's the same rhythm / music pattern ? don't really think that every jump has to be 100% consistent for an Insane. As long as it plays well I'm ok with it, and this does.
4. 00:51:132 (4,5,1) - Pls align them correctly, move 00:51:132 (4) - to 193:155. ya
5. 01:05:782 - For this diff, feel really undermapped, you should at least map with 1/2 rhythm from 01:07:212 - . follwing the drums on the 1/1 here like i did for every other diff
6. 01:08:998 - Forget a clap. o ya
7. 01:25:078 (7,8) - This spacing should be the same as 01:24:721 (4,5) - , and around 2x imo not 2.40x. but muh triangle..;_; eh alright I guess. Though I ended up using 2.1 instead

- Insane :

1. 00:36:660 (4) - Why a whistle here ? oops
2. 00:49:524 - Forget a whistle ? oops again
3. 01:05:782 - Same as Light Insane. yeah same as light insae
4. 01:21:862 (3) - CTRL+G would make this pattern play much better, but mean you should change 01:22:219 (4,5) - too. cool idea, did something more fun with 4 and 5

HabiHolic wrote:

[Easy]

00:39:697 - This section is clearly not sure there is a sound reason for omitting. Please add a note hmm kay
00:48:630 (1) - Patten suggest here. would like to keep the anchor for the high pitched sound in the song for now, will change if pointed out again c:

SPOILER

01:16:859 - clap yus
01:31:510 (1) - The head finish, it recommends replace them with soft. Too strong emphasis rather awkward. hmm I guess. changes across all Diffs
01:35:083 - Green line add please. Cuz Hitsound volume low better imo added a timing section in the middle of the spinner (cuz that's when I felt like the volume would start decreasing) for all diffs

[Normal]

HP +1 kay

00:44:342 (4) - This change patten blanket better imo would rather keep the anchor for the high pitched sound here, I think the turn goes along well with it
01:11:500 (1) - Spiner finish 01:14:358 - here hmmm i like keeping this consistent, though I think ima give this a try since it IS fairly fitting
01:27:043 (3,4) - Please change the slider position. Now I think the flow is too uncomfortable. don't really see why :c pretty straight forward drop-off with not much to it, no sharp angles or anything that would be confusing to catch :c
01:29:366 (3) - Patten suggest again, would rather have this with an anchor :c (oh and I think a straight slider here looks better with the next curved slider too

SPOILER

01:31:510 (1) - Same Easy diff

[Hard]

00:18:972 (7) - You need to add one more reverse.
00:24:689 (8) - Same (^)
00:30:407 (7) - same (^)
00:35:767 (6) - Combo is very long this NC please.
01:04:710 (8) - You need to add one more reverse.
01:07:748 - Note oki
01:10:428 (6) - You need to add one more reverse.
01:16:145 (8) - same (^)
01:31:510 (1) - Same Easy diff

going to shorten this down a bit by saying that I added a reverse for all of these. Was thinking that I could maybe keep the rythm 1/2 only, though I guess that was not a good idea to begin with

[Light Insane]

00:01:820 (2) - Ctrl+G please. if change better flow and play done, but also slightly moved the slider up for an angle that is less sharp
01:31:510 (1) - same Easy diff

[Insane]

01:31:510 (1) - same Easy diff

1. the slider kinda noisy when playing, you can add a mute sliderslide

1. 00:13:969 (5,7) - change to 1/4 slider can better for playing imo
2. 00:32:729 (8) - how about x304 y192
3. 00:39:340 (6) - how about this rhythm
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:929 (1) - stop at 01:13:822 - then add two circle on 01:14:001 - and 01:14:179 - ? more fun if follow this two sound too imo
5. 01:15:430 (7,8,1) - flow kinda weird between this three

1. 00:16:828 - two 1/2 circle? empty
2. 00:21:473 (8) - should have nc here
3. 00:29:692 (6) - how about ctrl+g

1. 00:14:327 (1) - why don't stop this spinner on 00:16:828 -
2. 00:35:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part of circle too long imo

1. 01:10:070 (4) - wrong whistle on sliderslide?
2. 01:11:500 (1) - i think you can stop this spinner on 01:13:643 - , then you can map something on 01:14:358 - , like 00:16:471 -

1. 00:14:327 (1) - some suggestion about spinner too, stop this spinner on 00:17:185 - , remove 00:17:900 (1) - , look better right ?
2. 01:11:500 (1) - ^

Rizia wrote:

hi

[General]

1. the slider kinda noisy when playing, you can add a mute sliderslide oki

[Insane]

1. 00:13:969 (5,7) - change to 1/4 slider can better for playing imo did this and then instantly had someone complain that it felt weird so I'll keep them for now c:
2. 00:32:729 (8) - how about x304 y192 OuO i like it
3. 00:39:340 (6) - how about this rhythm I like the current rythm more, the slider goes along well with the OW in the song I think
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:929 (1) - stop at 01:13:822 - then add two circle on 01:14:001 - and 01:14:179 - ? more fun if follow this two sound too imo done+ re-did these jumps since I couldn't think of where to put them haha
5. 01:15:430 (7,8,1) - flow kinda weird between this three

[Light Insane]

1. 00:16:828 - two 1/2 circle? empty aaah didn't know about the recovery time that was needed
2. 00:21:473 (8) - should have nc here ya
3. 00:29:692 (6) - how about ctrl+g looks fun!

[Hard]

1. 00:14:327 (1) - why don't stop this spinner on 00:16:828 - again, didn't know about what kinda recovery time was needed
2. 00:35:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part of circle too long imo I think having atleast one taxing part during the strongest part of the song isn't bad at all, especially since it is all DS'd

[Normal]

1. 01:10:070 (4) - wrong whistle on sliderslide? ya
2. 01:11:500 (1) - i think you can stop this spinner on 01:13:643 - , then you can map something on 01:14:358 - , like 00:16:471 - literally just chagned this during a previous mod, so I don't really want to change this around with every mod I get :c will keep this for now and wait for future modders

[Easy]

1. 00:14:327 (1) - some suggestion about spinner too, stop this spinner on 00:17:185 - , remove 00:17:900 (1) - , look better right ? it does
2. 01:11:500 (1) - ^ ya this too.

good luck!

1. 00:07:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm plays a bit awkward imo. coz the stronger beat is at 00:07:537 - . Try this http://puu.sh/jaubz/83970d58b9.jpg
2. 00:31:657 (2,3) - these are a bit too close in contrast with the whole pattern. Either move (3) further or make 00:32:551 (7,8,1) - less jumpy.
3. 00:33:265 (2) - around this whole roundness, using red anchors looks ugly imo /w\
4. 00:34:337 (1) - uh would be better if this was more apart from 00:33:980 (4) - . cuz emphasiing thing
5. 00:39:697 (7) - this sounds cooler as 2 circles, cuz the drum beat on the tail w
6. from here 00:40:054 - to around 01:02:924 - you used whistle on the third beat, but they fit a lot better on the red tick where the clicky sound is (like 00:40:948 - ) you sometimes added on boths, but it still sounds much better on just those spots, most of the time.
7. 00:59:708 (4,5) - jumps when the music doesnt call for them is weird. music gets priority over good-looking patterns anyways
8. 01:15:609 (8) - i dont like how you extend this note so far away. Around x400y272 kinda mantain your structure and plays better.
9. 01:24:721 (4,5) - vs 01:25:435 (8,9) - feels a bit weird while playing. i'd move 01:24:542 (2,3,4) - a bit closer, like x353y113 atleast

1. 01:24:542 (2,3,4,5,6) - what about something liks this http://puu.sh/jawzb/eba1b3a05e.jpg just to avoid so much single tapping, after all it's more like a hard with more 1/2 notes.

1. i didnt find such a difference between this diff and your light sane. I'd remove some circles and replace them with sliders instead, and maybe some more 1/1 sliders too. But uh up to you i guess uhuhuhuh.
2. 01:01:316 (4) - just use triple? kickslider is kinda weird on this difficulty i thnik aww
3. 01:22:934 (1,2) - i'd use a 1/1 reverse instead. 01:23:470 (2) - start from nothing practically and sounds pretty bad tbh

1. sv 1.1 or even 1.2 would've been better for spreed purposes u.u Also spacing is like mehh, it'd been better to use the usual normal spacing specially cuz your easy use a really close distance ><. I guess it's just my opinion, dunno.
2. 00:12:897 (1) - i'd make this slider less sharp, like this for ex http://puu.sh/jaxiM/0ddb13a269.jpg . Sharp sliders on low diffs dont work well, usually.
3. weird that you dont map such strong beat like 00:39:876 - is but instead you map stuff like 00:40:590 (2) -

1. 00:14:327 (1) - instead of using this spinner, i'd just map from 00:17:185 - xd sounds a bit weird with the current gap
2. 01:27:222 (3) - uh this note is almost offscreen. Try moving it a bit up cuz qat is scary rightrighterightefgith?

Milan- wrote:

[insane]

1. 00:07:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm plays a bit awkward imo. coz the stronger beat is at 00:07:537 - . Try this http://puu.sh/jaubz/83970d58b9.jpg ya true
2. 00:31:657 (2,3) - these are a bit too close in contrast with the whole pattern. Either move (3) further or make 00:32:551 (7,8,1) - less jumpy. moving them further apart feels better
3. 00:33:265 (2) - around this whole roundness, using red anchors looks ugly imo /w\ eeeeeh k
4. 00:34:337 (1) - uh would be better if this was more apart from 00:33:980 (4) - . cuz emphasiing thing did my best
5. 00:39:697 (7) - this sounds cooler as 2 circles, cuz the drum beat on the tail w oki
6. from here 00:40:054 - to around 01:02:924 - you used whistle on the third beat, but they fit a lot better on the red tick where the clicky sound is (like 00:40:948 - ) you sometimes added on boths, but it still sounds much better on just those spots, most of the time. fixed this across all Diffs except the Easy (not sure if I should just leave all of the white ticks blank my sleepy brain can't figure this out right now LOL) so yea if these should be removed I can just do that
7. 00:59:708 (4,5) - jumps when the music doesnt call for them is weird. music gets priority over good-looking patterns anyways hmm unstacked to get rid of the jump but kept more distance between 5 and the slider cuz the peak in the music actually did kinda call for a jump
8. 01:15:609 (8) - i dont like how you extend this note so far away. Around x400y272 kinda mantain your structure and plays better. did something to the beginning here to hopefully fix the issue (your pattern didn't really keep my symmetry :c)
9. 01:24:721 (4,5) - vs 01:25:435 (8,9) - feels a bit weird while playing. i'd move 01:24:542 (2,3,4) - a bit closer, like x353y113 atleast moved closer but not as close since I kinda thing that this has to be a bit more intense with how strong the music is here

[light sane]

1. 01:24:542 (2,3,4,5,6) - what about something liks this http://puu.sh/jawzb/eba1b3a05e.jpg just to avoid so much single tapping, after all it's more like a hard with more 1/2 notes. instead spaced these out further to make it a bit more intense. Imo there are two very audible triplets in the song and I would like each of those to be clickable

[hard]

1. i didnt find such a difference between this diff and your light sane. I'd remove some circles and replace them with sliders instead, and maybe some more 1/1 sliders too. But uh up to you i guess uhuhuhuh. removed a bunch of notes and nerfed 2 or 3 patterns including the one everyone was complaining about B)
2. 01:01:316 (4) - just use triple? kickslider is kinda weird on this difficulty i thnik aww jumpy kinda pattern here feels more appropriate here since that is how the song feels too :c
3. 01:22:934 (1,2) - i'd use a 1/1 reverse instead. 01:23:470 (2) - start from nothing practically and sounds pretty bad tbh

removed repeat and left as a break since that helped nerfing this a bit

[normal]

1. sv 1.1 or even 1.2 would've been better for spreed purposes u.u Also spacing is like mehh, it'd been better to use the usual normal spacing specially cuz your easy use a really close distance ><. I guess it's just my opinion, dunno.
2. 00:12:897 (1) - i'd make this slider less sharp, like this for ex http://puu.sh/jaxiM/0ddb13a269.jpg . Sharp sliders on low diffs dont work well, usually. ayk
3. weird that you dont map such strong beat like 00:39:876 - is but instead you map stuff like 00:40:590 (2) - hmm yeah I guess

[easy]

1. 00:14:327 (1) - instead of using this spinner, i'd just map from 00:17:185 - xd sounds a bit weird with the current gap hmm would much rather have this consistent with the other Diffs (as in have this as a spinner) + this would just like the whole current spinner as a break? I think that would be weird to ;c
2. 01:27:222 (3) - uh this note is almost offscreen. Try moving it a bit up cuz qat is scary rightrighterightefgith? spooky (changed dis)

yea besides the spreed thing, it's all good for me www can i bub this?

Zyckser wrote:

SPOILER

wew lad

Wafu wrote:

Guys, be serious, do you think only barely covered nipples are appropriate and R12 content? That's like they were visible but mosaic-censored imo. I think it's too much suggestive, should have strong warning or removed BG.

Wafu wrote:

Guys, be serious, do you think only barely covered nipples are appropriate and R12 content? That's like they were visible but mosaic-censored imo. I think it's too much suggestive, should have strong warning or removed BG.

Wafu wrote:

Guys, be serious, do you think only barely covered nipples are appropriate and R12 content? That's like they were visible but mosaic-censored imo. I think it's too much suggestive, should have strong warning or removed BG.

Yuii- wrote:

you did it