DerXello wrote:

Hey, some little modding
Im never modded, so i dont go into detail, i just look for big mistakes

General

I would cling TV Size, like this -> (TV Size).
I would remove the "anime" from the source. Maybe add "Shimoneta" or "Shimoneta to Iu Gainen ga Sonzai Shinai Taikutsu na Sekai" as tag.
4 Warnings in AiMod (in Easy), fix them.
I would suggest not using the beginning as a preview point, maybe 01:05:473. (or at least put it at 00:01:500 )

Easy

Move beats from -> to
00:02:692 -> 00:02:890
00:03:089 -> 00:03:288
00:05:870 -> 00:06:069
00:06:268 -> 00:06:466
00:08:254 -> 00:08:056
00:09:844 -> 00:09:645
00:11:433 -> 00:11:036
01:28:122 -> 01:28:321 + extend to 01:29:711 or shorten to 01:28:917, as you like.

Played it 3 times after that changes with 100% every time, guess there arent any big mistakes, but imo the map can still be changed a bit so it feels better playing.
The same thing have to be changed in Normal und Hard, the start and the end are offbeat.

SPOILER

LeaveDoubt wrote:

I'm loving this map, really helping me improve with my streams <3

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

MOD

GENERAL

1. Try to increase the stars of the HARD difficulty. NORMAL usually have 2 stars and HARD are between 3-4.
   This will also help those who play this song at Mania, Taiko and Ctb have more difficulty, or make a difficulty for Mania, Taiko and Ctb.

LeaveDoubt wrote:

Great update, so much fun <#

Xazariorus wrote:

Не знаю почему, но показалось что в изи: в начале нормально, а потом как-то не в ритм...

В нормале: в начале нормально потом ритм сбился, потом снова нормально и так почти всю карту...

Изи и нормал проверял с ускорением и с хардроком, так как слишком медленно для меня.

В харде понравилось все только мне показались некоторые моменты что можно было бы заменить или исправить:
1) 00:44:367-00:45:559 - сдвинуть начало спинера на 00:44:764 а перед ним на слог "ла" поставить что либо чтоб промежутка не было
2) 01:05:427 - 01:07:811 - в этом промежутке 2 повтора мне кажется лучше сделать 3 слайдера на три слога "эс", "оу", "эс" или три точки, тут уж что лучше автору, то и ставь
3) 01:11:784 - 01:14:168 - тоже самое
В 2 и 3 можно и так оставить, но тогда 01:05:427-01:06:221 и 01:11:784-01:12:579 не менять, а со вторым повтором эс оу эс что либо сделать...

всё удачки

• It is on track map, congratulations.
  Although there are still things to change as:

1. Mark the DROP of the song, that is, the chorus of the song so that when you look in the song libraries Osu can hear the song and distinguish.
2. You should try to make a Taiko difficulty or mania. If U want I can make those difficulties for your map
3. If you can get better quality video would be great, and if you can another background, although you have now is fine but I think there are better

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

Mod

• It is on track map, congratulations.
  Although there are still things to change as:

1. Mark the DROP of the song, that is, the chorus of the song so that when you look in the song libraries Osu can hear the song and distinguish.
2. You should try to make a Taiko difficulty or mania. If U want I can make those difficulties for your map
3. If you can get better quality video would be great, and if you can another background, although you have now is fine but I think there are better

wajinshu wrote:

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

Mod

• It is on track map, congratulations.
  Although there are still things to change as:

1. Mark the DROP of the song, that is, the chorus of the song so that when you look in the song libraries Osu can hear the song and distinguish.
2. You should try to make a Taiko difficulty or mania. If U want I can make those difficulties for your map
3. If you can get better quality video would be great, and if you can another background, although you have now is fine but I think there are better

1.Now will do.
2.If you agree to make these difficulties I will be very grateful to you.^^
3.Video I will try to find a good quality. But if you do not find what it'll take.

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

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Well, what can obtain video shortly in good quality I think.
Then in about 3 days at most I will have difficulty Mania completed, and if the time reaches me I make two difficulties in Mania

Alexia-Chan wrote:

hi c:

Easy

00:23:307 (2) - This slider doesn't end on anything. The vocals finish on the blue tick and there is a drum beat on the white tick following that.

00:25:493 (3,4) - This slight overlap doesn't look very nice, move the slider up a bit, something like this: http://puu.sh/joTYA/0464f3c06b.jpg

00:28:075 (1) - Slider doesn't start on anything and hitsounds are way too loud.
(you should really re-do this section 00:28:075 (1,2,3) - )

00:32:447 (2) - This slider should be a tick shorter.

00:34:433 (4) - Slider doesn't start on anything.

00:39:996 (1,2,3) - This section feels awkward to play.

01:07:016 (2,3) - Feels awkward to play.

01:21:717 (1,2) - The overlapping here looks terrible.

Normal

00:02:646 (2) - This slider doesn't start on anything. I think a slider starting on the red tick that reverses and ends on the big white tick would be better. Like this: http://puu.sh/joUvs/9802434501.jpg

00:05:824 (2) - ^

00:07:414 (4) - Doesn't start on anything, should start on the red tick where the reverse is currently at.

00:26:089 (6,7) - Space these out, beginners will find this hard to read.

00:26:487 (1) - Should start on the red tick if you are trying to put emphasis on the guitar.

00:36:619 (3) - Remove this circle.

00:50:725 (2) - Space out more. (Use distance snap)

01:15:758 (3) - Doesn't end on anything.

01:18:142 (1,2,3) - Awkward to play.

Hard

00:02:645 (2) - Doesn't start or end on anything.

00:05:823 (2) - ^

00:21:121 (3) - Doesn't start on anything.

00:39:996 (13) - Nc.

00:51:519 (1) - Should start on the red tick tho the left.

01:21:122 (11,12) - Fix blanket.

01:25:492 (2) - Doesn't start on anything.

01:26:287 (4) - ^

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue

[Easy]
SV too high, change to 0.8 or 0.9
Sorry that, 1/4 is not allow in Easy
00:01:850 (1) - 00:05:029 (3) - change to 1/2 reverse or 1 beat slider
00:03:241 (2) - ended 00:04:631 -
00:06:419 (5) - ^
00:08:009 (1) - seldom do slider reverse 2 times
00:10:989 (1) - unrankable spinner, Easy diff need 4 beats (about 1500ms), and not suitable to use spinner here
00:14:566 - suggested rhythm




From the above example, you find that all of them are:
1) spaced at least 1 beat (mainly 1 beat, but still okay for 1 or 2 spaced 1/2)
2) nc every 8 beats
3) only a few slider start at red tick

you should not overlap slider too much, at least clear to read.

In fact Easy is easy to map, if you map about 2 to 3 times, you will know.
I just stop modding Easy here

[Normal]
00:02:844 (2) - 1/4 sound at 00:03:142 - is not preferred to map.
00:03:241 - add sth to click here
00:06:023 (2) - 1/4 sound at 00:06:321 - is not preferred to map.
00:08:605 - add sth to click here
00:10:791 - 1 beat slider here
00:10:990 (1) - start at 00:11:387 - ,ended 00:13:374 - (recovery time problem also, 2 beats for Normal)


Sorry I have no mood to mod anymore.
I just stop here.

deni979 wrote:

Когда скачиваю Beatmap с video и ставлю в osu, то эта бедолага мне говорит, что файл биты, не хочешь устанавливать. (

wajinshu wrote:

deni979 wrote:

Когда скачиваю Beatmap с video и ставлю в osu, то эта бедолага мне говорит, что файл биты, не хочешь устанавливать. (

Хмм, спасибо что сказал попытаемся это устранить. Что бы проигрывалось видео. А вы без видео скачивали? Тогда был поврежден файл или нет?

deni979 wrote:

Сначала скачал только с видео, мне выдало ошибку. Потом скачал без видео, поиграл, кстати мне понравилось, успехов в этом), и решил, что возможно сейчас можно скачать, проверить, вдруг битые файлы были закачаны по ссылке без видео, но так ничего и не изменилось. То есть файл с видео повреждён. Чтобы точно убедиться пару раз перекачал.

wajinshu wrote:

deni979 wrote:

Сначала скачал только с видео, мне выдало ошибку. Потом скачал без видео, поиграл, кстати мне понравилось, успехов в этом), и решил, что возможно сейчас можно скачать, проверить, вдруг битые файлы были закачаны по ссылке без видео, но так ничего и не изменилось. То есть файл с видео повреждён. Чтобы точно убедиться пару раз перекачал.

Я только что вставила новое видео, вы пробовали его еще раз скачать? Если видео все еще повреждено то буду искать новое.

1. According to AiMod, title conflicts with the other diffs, I think because of the (!) at the end of SOX.
2. 00:02:843 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:05:029 (3). It will look more consistent.
3. 00:11:387 - Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 00:13:374?
4. 00:23:307 (2) - Fix blanket.
   Like this:

   
5. 00:37:215 (2) - Extend till 00:39:599.
6. 00:45:161 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:56:685 (4) - Blanket thing again.
8. 01:24:897 (6) - Add new combo. (The music stops for a second.)
9. 01:28:274 (8) - Remove backward arrow and cut the slider till 01:28:870.

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Add new combo.
2. 01:02:447 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 01:04:235 (1).
3. 01:05:427 (4) - Add new combo.
4. 01:10:990 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:11:785 (2).
5. 01:14:169 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:14:566 (2).
6. 01:26:487 (6) - Move it to 01:27:600 and add new combo. Also, move 01:28:076 (8) to 01:28:274 and add one more circle at 01:28:870. Then move the spinner right after. This will make it fit the song better.

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Cut the slider till 00:08:009~ add new combo and remove it from 00:08:605 (1). Rhythm.
2. 00:11:586 (1) - Cut the spinner till 00:12:976~ 00:13:572 (1) - Move spinner to 00:13:374 and extend it till 00:14:168. Isn't it a lot better that way?
3. 00:16:354 (8) - Add new combo.
4. 00:35:426 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:36:221 (2).
5. 00:51:122 (1) - Extend spinner till 00:52:711. Makes more sense to me.
6. 00:58:274 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:59:466 (4) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:59:863 (1).
8. 01:03:440 (2) - Add new combo.
9. 01:10:394 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:15:956 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:17:347 (5).
11. 01:27:082 (5) - Extend slider till 01:27:480~ move 01:27:479 (1) at 01:27:678 and cut it till 01:28:076.

1. 00:12:977 (2) - Maybe extend the slider till 00:13:374 or add a circle and move the spinner right after? Fits the music better IMO.
2. 01:17:745 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:18:540 (6), like you did with 01:11:388 (7,8,9,10,1).
3. 01:28:871 (1) - Add a circle here and move the spinner right after?

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo! Here is my mod, as requested in my queue:

[Easy]

1. According to AiMod, title conflicts with the other diffs, I think because of the (!) at the end of SOX.
2. 00:02:843 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:05:029 (3). It will look more consistent.✔️
3. 00:11:387 - Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 00:13:374?✔️
4. 00:23:307 (2) - Fix blanket. ✔️
   Like this:

   
5. 00:37:215 (2) - Extend till 00:39:599. ✘
6. 00:45:161 (1) - Remove new combo.✔️
7. 00:56:685 (4) - Blanket thing again. ✔️
8. 01:24:897 (6) - Add new combo. (The music stops for a second.) ✔️
9. 01:28:274 (8) - Remove backward arrow and cut the slider till 01:28:870.✔️

[Normal]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Add new combo. ✔️
2. 01:02:447 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 01:04:235 (1). ✔️
3. 01:05:427 (4) - Add new combo. ✔️
4. 01:10:990 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:11:785 (2). ✔️
5. 01:14:169 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:14:566 (2). ✔️
6. 01:26:487 (6) - Move it to 01:27:600 and add new combo. Also, move 01:28:076 (8) to 01:28:274 and add one more circle at 01:28:870. Then move the spinner right after. This will make it fit the song better.✔️

[Hard]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Cut the slider till 00:08:009~ add new combo and remove it from 00:08:605 (1). Rhythm. ✔️
2. 00:11:586 (1) - Cut the spinner till 00:12:976~ 00:13:572 (1) - Move spinner to 00:13:374 and extend it till 00:14:168. Isn't it a lot better that way?✔️
3. 00:16:354 (8) - Add new combo. ✔️
4. 00:35:426 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:36:221 (2). ✔️
5. 00:51:122 (1) - Extend spinner till 00:52:711. Makes more sense to me.
6. 00:58:274 (1) - Remove new combo. ✔️
7. 00:59:466 (4) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:59:863 (1). ✔️
8. 01:03:440 (2) - Add new combo. ✔️
9. 01:10:394 (1) - Remove new combo. ✔️
10. 01:15:956 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:17:347 (5). ✔️
11. 01:27:082 (5) - Extend slider till 01:27:480~ move 01:27:479 (1) at 01:27:678 and cut it till 01:28:076.✔️

[Hkz's Insane]

1. 00:12:977 (2) - Maybe extend the slider till 00:13:374 or add a circle and move the spinner right after? Fits the music better IMO.
2. 01:17:745 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:18:540 (6), like you did with 01:11:388 (7,8,9,10,1).
3. 01:28:871 (1) - Add a circle here and move the spinner right after?

All these new combo changes I'm suggesting you, is because combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. Keep that in mind in your future beatmaps.
That's all! I hope it helped and good luck!

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo! Here is my mod, as requested in my queue:

[Easy]

1. According to AiMod, title conflicts with the other diffs, I think because of the (!) at the end of SOX.
2. 00:02:843 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:05:029 (3). It will look more consistent.
3. 00:11:387 - Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 00:13:374?
4. 00:23:307 (2) - Fix blanket.
   Like this:

   
5. 00:37:215 (2) - Extend till 00:39:599.
6. 00:45:161 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:56:685 (4) - Blanket thing again.
8. 01:24:897 (6) - Add new combo. (The music stops for a second.)
9. 01:28:274 (8) - Remove backward arrow and cut the slider till 01:28:870.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Add new combo.
2. 01:02:447 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 01:04:235 (1).
3. 01:05:427 (4) - Add new combo.
4. 01:10:990 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:11:785 (2).
5. 01:14:169 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:14:566 (2).
6. 01:26:487 (6) - Move it to 01:27:600 and add new combo. Also, move 01:28:076 (8) to 01:28:274 and add one more circle at 01:28:870. Then move the spinner right after. This will make it fit the song better.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Cut the slider till 00:08:009~ add new combo and remove it from 00:08:605 (1). Rhythm.
2. 00:11:586 (1) - Cut the spinner till 00:12:976~ 00:13:572 (1) - Move spinner to 00:13:374 and extend it till 00:14:168. Isn't it a lot better that way?
3. 00:16:354 (8) - Add new combo.
4. 00:35:426 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:36:221 (2).
5. 00:51:122 (1) - Extend spinner till 00:52:711. Makes more sense to me.
6. 00:58:274 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:59:466 (4) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:59:863 (1).
8. 01:03:440 (2) - Add new combo.
9. 01:10:394 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:15:956 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:17:347 (5).
11. 01:27:082 (5) - Extend slider till 01:27:480~ move 01:27:479 (1) at 01:27:678 and cut it till 01:28:076.

[Hkz's Insane]

1. 00:12:977 (2) - Maybe extend the slider till 00:13:374 or add a circle and move the spinner right after? Fits the music better IMO. I added a circle after the slider, done
2. 01:17:745 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:18:540 (6), like you did with 01:11:388 (7,8,9,10,1). Done
3. 01:28:871 (1) - Add a circle here and move the spinner right after? Done

All these new combo changes I'm suggesting you, is because combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. Keep that in mind in your future beatmaps.
That's all! I hope it helped and good luck!