XeroiZi HD wrote:

"Su... Kirman Saya... Yak"

ayygurl wrote:

ayy,

In the Insane at 02:38:907 wtf did you put a whistle, is this on purpose? And maybe considering it's an 3.78 stars map, you can maybe lower the ar or make the diff. more harder, like adding some streams at the start when there is deez weird bird noises. dis is just my opinion. xd


-ayygurl

Yohanes wrote:

XeroiZi HD wrote:

"Su... Kirman Saya... Yak"

LOL Remix xD

Fort wrote:

dont make me feel retarded pls
http://puu.sh/kAylf/51b85c3668.rar

put dem hitsound

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi XeroiZi HD
From I.ZMod STD & Mania

[AiMod]
Where's the Easy? ._.
I don't know LOL

[Hard]00:01:407 (4) - Buat slidernya jadi kyk begini
I will only ruin the pattern if I do that

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00:03:282 (4) - ^ Same

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[Insane]01:05:157 (1) - Buat slidernya jd kyk begini I'll consider it

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Good Luck.

XeroiZi HD wrote:

I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it!

Ugh...

XeroiZi HD wrote:

I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it!

Ugh...

Yohanes wrote:

XeroiZi HD wrote:

I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it! I have to rank it!

Ugh...

1. 00:03:751 (1,2,3) - How about you make this an equilateral triangle? Personally I think it'll look and play nicer than isosceles because (2) doesn't deserve the extra emphasis, being on a red tick .
2. 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - This triangle also looks a bit lopsided, so I'd change that as well.
3. 01:56:251 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could go for symmetry here? Try moving (3) to 420|308, that pattern looks nicer imo.
4. 01:58:126 (1,2) - You could blanket (2) under (1) for a much nicer looking pattern. Without a blanket, players will notice that (2) is a bit misplaced and will disrupt their experience.
5. 02:23:438 (3) - The whistle on this slider trail is a bit inconsistent, because it makes the slider sound drastically different from most other sliders you have in this kiai. Therefore, I recommend you remove it.
6. 02:28:126 (1,2,3) - Again, you should go for an equilateral triangle here.

1. 00:19:219 (2,3) - Make this a blanket? It seems minor, but it'll make the pattern look much nicer than it is now.
2. 00:45:938 (2,1) - I would increase the spacing here to 1.00. The beat is just as powerful as 00:45:001 (1,2) - so it would make more sense to give this pattern an equal amount of emphasis.
3. 00:47:813 (2,1) - Same as above, this needs more emphasis as well. Make it 1.00 spacing.
4. 01:00:938 (3,4) - You could blanket (3) under the curve of (4), that way, the pattern will look nicer imo.
5. 01:47:344 (2,3) - Here's another potential blanket you can utilize to make the pattern look nicer.
6. 02:06:563 (2,1) - Again, I don't know why these are so close together. Make them 1.0x spacing to give the beat proper emphasis, like you did for 02:05:626 (1,2) - .
7. 02:21:563 (3,4) - I'm sure this blanket could use some improvement, it's a bit weak towards the bottom.
8. 02:30:938 (2,3) - Quite a large portion of (3) is overlapped. This is a lot more than usual, making it kinda inconsistent, so I recommend moving it out a bit. A rule of thumb would be to make sure that the repeat arrow isn't overlapped at all.

1. 00:11:016 (5,2) - You could polish this stack up a bit, it's slightly off. Minor things like this go a long way to making your map look nice.
2. 01:25:313 (2,1) - Increase the spacing here, it's a powerful beat so it deserves more emphasis like 01:24:376 (1,2) -
3. 01:45:938 (3,4) - You could curve the end of (3) a bit more so it blankets over (4). It'll make the pattern look nicer, personally speaking.

Yohanes wrote:

AchsanLovers wrote:

eh idup lagi ini map :v
ambil tuh star ane bang :v hope this ranked