1. Hard (2,81 stars, 312 notes)
2. Insane (3,78 stars, 362 notes)
3. Normal (1,91 stars, 206 notes)

quadro9087 wrote:

anjayy :v

nnikitin11 wrote:

Okay, lets try.
Hard:
First of all, maybe u will change AR to 7 and CS to 3.5? Map will look better, I guess. Nah too easy, And AR is too low to encourage players to do Hard movements
1. 00:05:860 (2,1) - this jump is bad for Hard I guess. Maybe try smth like this: http://cs627628.vk.me/v627628809/caf2/KyKrMPGQE0A.jpg I guess you don't have the idea how to make it
2. 00:13:360 (2,1) - same as 1. Same as 1, No.
3. 00:18:751 (1,2) - this is a little bit hard too. Try to make the distance not so big. I'll consider it
4. 00:34:219 (2,3) - same as 3.Same as 3, I'll consider it
5. 00:36:094 (1,2) - same as 1. Same as 1, No.
6. Try to make this slider 00:47:813 (2) - similar to this 00:45:001 (1). What's the reason I should do that? o.O
7. 01:07:032 (5) - this slier doesnt look cool. 01:05:157 (5) - this looks better.. Your face doesn't look even cool more xDD
8. 01:22:501 (1,2,3,4) - these circles dont looks good. Maybe you try to make a square? Squares are painful to play, so No. (And it's also break the spacing tho)
9. 01:33:751 (1,2,1,2) - Try to put circles on red ticks between these two sliders. Please, consider thinking about next time by looking for the simmiliar patterns
10. 02:43:126 (1,2,1,2) - I guess, it will look better if u will do like this: http://cs627628.vk.me/v627628809/caf9/KfglmkmoSXw.jpg Try to play that part and tell me how does that feel

1. 01:41:251 - possible way. I just find here boring since no ez
   
2. 01:58:126 (1) - Oh yes I'm kidding btw
3. 00:53:907 - and 02:14:532 - y u no puttin beat

1. 01:07:032 (5) - I'm kidding? You can't stop me
2. 01:08:907 (5) - You can't stop me because you picked wrong modder LOL
3. 01:35:626 (1) - if you supposed to cover with previous slider, it's not perfect yet
4. 01:41:719 (2) - balance it for more sexy plz
5. 02:03:751 (1) - not going to blanket?

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

I bet you'll deny all of my suggestion but here we go

[Normal]

1. 01:41:251 - possible way. I just find here boring since no ez It's better not to put any 1/4 on Normal
   
2. 01:58:126 (1) - Oh yes I'm kidding btw Nah It's easier to do my movement than you did
3. 00:53:907 - and 02:14:532 - y u no puttin beat Done

[Hard]

1. 01:07:032 (5) - I'm kidding? You can't stop me Nah
2. 01:08:907 (5) - You can't stop me because you picked wrong modder LOL LOL
3. 01:35:626 (1) - if you supposed to cover with previous slider, it's not perfect yet I prefer solidity than Symmetry
4. 01:41:719 (2) - balance it for more sexy plz You're not Sexy tho LOL
5. 02:03:751 (1) - not going to blanket? Yep, No

kek

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal

Edit From Xero : Okay that was rude. So I decided to toned it down.

00:03:751 (1,2,3) I'll point this out just once, you should try a perfect triangle here. Like this 00:09:376 (1,2,3) No
00:20:626 (1,2,3) I dont really like the way this pattern looks. I think it could be improved to look better.I think if 00:20:626 (1) would be just straight it would look better, or you could do this.

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You gonna make the 3 offscreen.
00:39:376 (1,2) They are a bit close imo. Maybe you should increase the distance a bit Okay
01:38:204 (2,3) Stack is not perfect This fucking auto-stack...
01:41:251 (1) This one should repeat on the blue tick. Dont worry, blue tick repeats are okay in Normals Nah
02:03:751 (1,2) Those are not parallel.

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:3
02:20:626 (1,2,3) This looks somehow weird and random placed. (3) could be curvy or something different than straight to look it better Maybe you need to check yourself to an Eye-Specialist :3
02:32:579 (2,3) Those are really close to each other. Looks not really nice Well, is that really a problem?
02:35:626 (1,2,3) Same as 02:20:626 (1,2,3) ~:3

Hard

AR 8.1? Shouldnt it be 8? No idea
00:33:282 (4,1) Why is the spacing here not the same as here 00:31:407 (4,1) ? #enjoyrandomspacing
00:40:313 (2,3,1) Im unsure about 1/4 jump in a Hard I'm gonna think about it
00:44:063 (2,3,1) ^ ^ :3
00:51:563 (3,4) ^ ^ :3
01:07:032 (5,5) Those sliders are good in an Insane or Extra, but i wouldnt use them in a Hard, just my opinion though Don't know, it's just running on my imagination xD
01:08:907 (5) NC because of the sv change Kay
01:41:719 (2) Overmapped and doesnt fit, theres no sound or anything on the white tick I have to do it for playablity, and also can you imagin when the 2 is removed on the gameplay?
02:00:938 (2,3) I'll ignore those :3
02:11:251 (1,2,3) The spacing is a bit too high for an Hard Nah i don't think so
02:29:532 (5) NC because sv change Kay

Yep, thats it ^~^

Good Luck! :3

MrSergio wrote:

Alright Xero, here's my mod I promised you long ago xD

[General]

1. Dat BG lol LOL >:D
2. Disable Countdown on all diffs since there is not time for that Kay

[Normal]

1. 01:08:438 (3) - {Pattern} There is no note at 01:09:376 - at all. You should remove the repeat and put the break's start there: http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/pT1jT7wq Nah I think that's fine
2. 01:15:001 (1,1) - {Rule} There is not enough recovery time after the spinner. You currently have 469ms which is less than the 750ms mentioned into [url=this thread]https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019&start=0[/url] I think there's still enough time to catch the 1
3. 01:39:493 (1,1) - {Rule} Same ^ Same
4. 02:04:688 (2) - & 02:23:438 (3) - {Hitosund} These are the only normal whistles in all the mapset, why? xD Check the Hard diff to find out

[Hard]

1. 01:41:251 (1) - {Pattern} You clearly skip the strong note on this slider's tail. You should use only circles for this part imo You shoudl realize why... I do it for playability
2. 02:15:001 (2) - {Aesthetics} NC missing here? Maybe
3. 02:29:532 (5) - {Aesthetics} Same ^ and I should point out that you did it for 01:08:907 (1) - Maybe
4. {General} What's with that 8.1 for the AR xD Use at least AR 8.3 or reduce it to 8, because there is no reason for such a small difference to be there 8.2 will be better

Alright, that's all. I hope you're happy now xD
Good luck~

XeroiZi HD wrote:

"Su... Kirman Saya... Yak"

ayygurl wrote:

ayy,

In the Insane at 02:38:907 wtf did you put a whistle, is this on purpose? And maybe considering it's an 3.78 stars map, you can maybe lower the ar or make the diff. more harder, like adding some streams at the start when there is deez weird bird noises. dis is just my opinion. xd


-ayygurl

Yohanes wrote:

XeroiZi HD wrote:

"Su... Kirman Saya... Yak"

LOL Remix xD

Fort wrote:

dont make me feel retarded pls
http://puu.sh/kAylf/51b85c3668.rar

put dem hitsound

Izect Ztenz wrote:

Hi XeroiZi HD
From I.ZMod STD & Mania

[AiMod]
Where's the Easy? ._.
I don't know LOL

[Hard]00:01:407 (4) - Buat slidernya jadi kyk begini
I will only ruin the pattern if I do that

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00:03:282 (4) - ^ Same

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[Insane]01:05:157 (1) - Buat slidernya jd kyk begini I'll consider it

SPOILER

Good Luck.

XeroiZi HD wrote:

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Ugh...

XeroiZi HD wrote:

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Ugh...

Yohanes wrote:

XeroiZi HD wrote:

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Ugh...

1. 00:03:751 (1,2,3) - How about you make this an equilateral triangle? Personally I think it'll look and play nicer than isosceles because (2) doesn't deserve the extra emphasis, being on a red tick .
2. 00:31:876 (1,2,3) - This triangle also looks a bit lopsided, so I'd change that as well.
3. 01:56:251 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could go for symmetry here? Try moving (3) to 420|308, that pattern looks nicer imo.
4. 01:58:126 (1,2) - You could blanket (2) under (1) for a much nicer looking pattern. Without a blanket, players will notice that (2) is a bit misplaced and will disrupt their experience.
5. 02:23:438 (3) - The whistle on this slider trail is a bit inconsistent, because it makes the slider sound drastically different from most other sliders you have in this kiai. Therefore, I recommend you remove it.
6. 02:28:126 (1,2,3) - Again, you should go for an equilateral triangle here.

1. 00:19:219 (2,3) - Make this a blanket? It seems minor, but it'll make the pattern look much nicer than it is now.
2. 00:45:938 (2,1) - I would increase the spacing here to 1.00. The beat is just as powerful as 00:45:001 (1,2) - so it would make more sense to give this pattern an equal amount of emphasis.
3. 00:47:813 (2,1) - Same as above, this needs more emphasis as well. Make it 1.00 spacing.
4. 01:00:938 (3,4) - You could blanket (3) under the curve of (4), that way, the pattern will look nicer imo.
5. 01:47:344 (2,3) - Here's another potential blanket you can utilize to make the pattern look nicer.
6. 02:06:563 (2,1) - Again, I don't know why these are so close together. Make them 1.0x spacing to give the beat proper emphasis, like you did for 02:05:626 (1,2) - .
7. 02:21:563 (3,4) - I'm sure this blanket could use some improvement, it's a bit weak towards the bottom.
8. 02:30:938 (2,3) - Quite a large portion of (3) is overlapped. This is a lot more than usual, making it kinda inconsistent, so I recommend moving it out a bit. A rule of thumb would be to make sure that the repeat arrow isn't overlapped at all.

1. 00:11:016 (5,2) - You could polish this stack up a bit, it's slightly off. Minor things like this go a long way to making your map look nice.
2. 01:25:313 (2,1) - Increase the spacing here, it's a powerful beat so it deserves more emphasis like 01:24:376 (1,2) -
3. 01:45:938 (3,4) - You could curve the end of (3) a bit more so it blankets over (4). It'll make the pattern look nicer, personally speaking.

Yohanes wrote: