Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - My Pace de Ikimashou · forum

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2015-08-27T16:31:33+00:00

M4M from your queue

[Easy]

00:09:582 (3) - a slight discrepancy in the DS
00:17:161 (7,1) - hm, blanket?
00:24:740 (1) - not see the point in NC, suggest remove
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to make these patterns in the form of a square
01:20:318 (3) - move on 128;272 for better flow

[Normal]

00:09:582 (2,3) - make them parallel
00:40:529 (3,1) - blanket would be good
00:43:371 (3) - move on 384;252 for stack 00:43:687 (1) -
01:00:740 (2,1) - move 01:01:370 (1) - down a bit for best possible flow

[Hard]

00:38:634 (1,2) - stack
01:20:950 (5,1) - better to avoid such overlap

[Light Insane]

01:12:108 (3,5) - stack
01:23:634 (5,2) - ^

[Insane]

00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move on 260;192 for better blanket

[A's Pace]

00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it's a bit difficult to play
01:15:740 (4) - may be better to abandon the slider? Here it is easy to lose combo

Good luck!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-27T16:32:06+00:00

nadapan wrote:
M4M from your modding queue

[Easy]
00:24:740 - (1,1) - unneccessary NCs?
00:31:055 (3,1) - double blanket better
[Normal]
00:06:897 (4) - how about copy and paste the note after it?
00:28:529 (1,2,3) - how about make a triangle of these 3 notes? It would be more fun to play
00:39:266 (3,1) - blanket better?
01:11:792 (2,3) - ^
01:16:529 (2) - X: 276 Y: 228 used 229 instead of 228, makes ds perfect
[Hard]
00:01:529 (1,2) - Blanket
00:02:161 (3,1,2) - ^
00:04:055 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - Stack
00:09:582 (4,5,6) - blanket
00:30:582 (5,6) - ^ remapped that part a bit
00:43:687 (1,2,3) - ^

This was all I could find. Good luck with ranking ^u^

no reply => fixed
thanks :')

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-27T16:54:33+00:00

FCL wrote:
M4M from your queue

[Easy]
00:09:582 (3) - a slight discrepancy in the DS huh? It's 0.7x +/- 0.05 cause of tiny grid snap
00:17:161 (7,1) - hm, blanket? changed a little bit, but I don't want to make 7/1 completely identical
00:24:740 (1) - not see the point in NC, suggest remove
00:56:318 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to make these patterns in the form of a square I think it's fine this way, don't need to have geometrical patterns all the time, especially with 1/1 distance
01:20:318 (3) - move on 128;272 for better flowtalking about geometry, I made a triangle here

[Normal]
00:09:582 (2,3) - make them parallel
00:40:529 (3,1) - blanket would be good
00:43:371 (3) - move on 384;252 for stack 00:43:687 (1) -
01:00:740 (2,1) - move 01:01:370 (1) - down a bit for best possible flow

[Hard]
00:38:634 (1,2) - stack dunno if you mean with 00:38:950 (2) - => would be weird to play/read
or with 00:40:371 (2) - which hseems rather pointless
01:20:950 (5,1) - better to avoid such overlap It blankets the start of 5 and the overlap is not visible for long, only other option while keeping the ds would be making it straight which would be worse to read and flow badly

[Light Insane]
01:12:108 (3,5) - stack might look better in the editor but if you look how many beats those aare apart it makes no difference while playing and would be completely pointless
01:23:634 (5,2) - ^ done here cuase time distance is lower

[Insane]
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move on 260;192 for better blanket

Good luck!

thanks for the mod
no comment = applied suggestion

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-27T18:34:58+00:00

FCL wrote:
M4M from your queue

[A's Pace]
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it's a bit difficult to play I disagree, it plays just fine, you can play it like a regular stream with this CS.
01:15:740 (4) - may be better to abandon the slider? Here it is easy to lose combo I honestly don't think it is a problem, this slider is just fine..

Good luck!

Thank you eitherway,

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Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-28T15:44:36+00:00

[General]
All clear

[Easy]

00:28:529 (1,3) - Why not stack them?
00:51:266 (5) - NC, the combo goes on for quite a long time

[Normal]

00:04:529 - It feels really weird you skip this beat with the slider. Even though there is no beat, the vocals here are quite strong
00:07:055 - ^^
00:20:950 (1,2) - It would be better if they'd have the same shape (copy paste (1), then ctrl HJ and move to proper place)
00:49:055 (2,3,1) - These sliders all play weird, as they start on a weak beat and end on a strong one

[Hard]

00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing makes this quite awkward
00:16:529 (2,1) - Antijump feels out of place
00:43:371 (1) - This slider feels really out of place and awkward due to the shape. A regular slider plays better

[L. Insane]

00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern is too cluttered, it's really hard to read
01:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The should be all the same shape. So copy paste (1) then Ctrl > and move it etc.
01:27:740 (3) - You're sinecing the whole slider which is unrankable. Both the Slidertick and sliderbody are muted to an inaudible extent making it unrankable

[Insane]
I can't mod it. It seems to random and really unpolished. TBH, This diff needs a lot of work

[A's Pace]
This diff is great
Well done
I love it
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - Are you sure about 1/3?
Same comment for the latest slider

Good luck!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-28T16:26:09+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:

[General]
All clear

[Easy]
00:28:529 (1,3) - Why not stack them? they are 8 beats apart and I fell the part after that flows betetr the way it is
00:51:266 (5) - NC, the combo goes on for quite a long time k
[Normal]
00:04:529 - It feels really weird you skip this beat with the slider. Even though there is no beat, the vocals here are quite strong
00:07:055 - ^^
I think those drawn out sliders make for a decent buildup up to 00:08:950 (2) -
00:20:950 (1,2) - It would be better if they'd have the same shape (copy paste (1), then ctrl HJ and move to proper place) done
00:49:055 (2,3,1) - These sliders all play weird, as they start on a weak beat and end on a strong one remapped a bit
[Hard]
00:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing makes this quite awkward made this 1.0x like the part before
00:16:529 (2,1) - Antijump feels out of place made 1.0x
00:43:371 (1) - This slider feels really out of place and awkward due to the shape. A regular slider plays better changed shape and removed nc
[L. Insane]
00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern is too cluttered, it's really hard to read increased spacing a bit
01:11:476 (1,2,3,4) - The should be all the same shape. So copy paste (1) then Ctrl > and move it etc. changed that part to srtraight sliders, plays better anyways
01:27:740 (3) - You're sinecing the whole slider which is unrankable. Both the Slidertick and sliderbody are muted to an inaudible extent making it unrankable fixed
[Insane]
I can't mod it. It seems to random and really unpolished. TBH, This diff needs a lot of work
fixed the unrankable audio of the last slider here too, will do some more work on that diff soon

[A's Pace]
This diff is great
Well done
I love it
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - Are you sure about 1/3?
Same comment for the latest slider

Good luck!

thanks for the mod

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-28T20:20:34+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:

[A's Pace]
This diff is great
Well done
I love it
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - Are you sure about 1/3?
Same comment for the latest slider

Good luck!

Thanks, and yes I am sure about both of those for now. The 1/3 are going nicely in the in-between "refreshing" state, and I think the slider is just fine.

P.S Your name reminds me something, but I can't recall what and why

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-08-28T21:49:26+00:00

M4M Queue

[General]

Better set Preview Point
Audio Lead-In : Hard , Insane , Light Insane : +471 ms.

[Hard]
- Why make a simple slider with many point ? example 00:23:476 (1,3,1)
1. 00:04:371 (2,1,2) - stack well
2. 00:14:003 (3,4,5) - better make same placement pattern like 00:12:266 (1,2,3) -
  00:14:003 (3) - 480|116
  00:14:318 (5) - 328|144
3. 00:14:634 (1) - make this slide same like 00:13:371 (1) - for better.
4. 00:14:634 (1,2) - same spacing like 00:13:371 (1,2) - maybe move 00:14:950 (2) - 132|168 or better placement like that
5. 00:16:529 (2) - Ctrl+G and move to 304|128 for better
6. 00:17:634 - better add a not here
7. 00:23:476 (1) - move this to 384|96 for consistency blanket like 00:23:950 (2,3,4,1)
8. 00:27:740 (4) - move 1 grid (tiny) right - 172|88 . why? because the spacing on 00:27:740 (4,5) - is changing.
9. 00:32:476 (5) - NC here
10. 01:07:687 (3,4) - change to slider better
11. 01:17:003 (3,1) - sounds weird over here if you make to slider
12. For placement it's okay , but need for improvement , Nice Mapset
[Light Insane]
1. 00:12:108 (1) - spinner stop on 00:13:055 - better
2. 00:23:397 (9) - remove
3. 00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - ups .. very weird.. don't like this.. really
4. 00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why need change spacing this? better make same spacing like 00:30:740 (4,1)
5. 00:31:687 (3,1) - stack
6. 00:35:161 (3) - 336|104 better
7. 00:48:424 (5) - no need 2 repeated I think, better make that into 1 repeat it's okay
8. 00:50:318 (2) - 180|120 better
9. 01:11:476 (1) - really break that flow , better move to 292|296 or better placement like that
10. 01:26:161 (4,1) - better stack
[Insane]
1. 00:06:262 - Unsnapped inherit green , snap to 00:06:266
2. 00:04:371 (3,5) - stack
3. 00:10:845 (1,2,1,2,1) - that spacing.. okay then..
4. 00:21:581 (3) - 432|144 (nazi)
5. 00:31:055 (1) - why not put on 328|276 ?
6. 00:39:108 (4) - 200|80 (nazi)
7. 00:57:582 (3,4) - better keep consistency spacing to 00:56:318 (1,2)
8. 01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream , move to 200|248 better
9. 01:12:582 (8,1) - stack
10. 01:17:003 (4,5) - ups the spacing changing
11. 01:15:266 - 01:21:582 - NC spam , please use 1-1 or 1-2 big tick for New Combo
12. 01:21:108 (1,2,3) - better make same stream like 01:22:371 (5,6,7) - and 01:23:634 (5,6,7) - for consistency

Hope help a bit , Good Luck!

Hendrix89

40 posts

Joined February 2013

Hendrix89 2015-08-28T22:40:48+00:00

Hi there from mod queue,

Easy:

01:00:108 (3) - extend slider by a note

Normal:

00:02:634 (1,2) - These sliders feel really weird and out of sync with the song, consider changing them
00:05:161 (1,2) - ^

Hard:

00:21:424 - add a not at the end of the slider
00:22:055 - ^
00:50:476 - add note
00:51:108 - add note

Light Insane:

00:33:740 (2,3) - stack
00:34:371 (2,3) - ^

Insane:

00:03:108 (1,2) - ctrl G, feels funner
00:24:897 (2,3) - ^
00:25:529 (6,7) - ^
00:39:266 (1,3) - stack under the start of the slider
01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - increase the spacing to 1.6x
01:09:266 (2) - turn this note into a 1/2 note slider

A's Pace:

00:07:213 (5,7) - stack
00:08:476 (6,8) - stack
00:22:924 (2,3) - make the spacing between these 1.05x, it would be very hard with hard rock
00:23:082 (4,5) - ^
00:23:240 (6,7) - ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - is there a reason for the 1/3 stream here? I would delete note 7 and 8 and add a note at 00:38:476
00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - this part seems extremely hard for no reason, why not just make it a stream by adding a note at 00:48:266
01:00:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - really great stream, pretty hard but very fun

Your map is really well done so there wasn't too much I could find. Hopefully it was still helpful.
Good luck, you should have no problems getting it ranked

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-28T23:35:34+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
M4M Queue

[General]
Better set Preview Point huh, there is one at the start of the lead into the chorus
Audio Lead-In : Hard , Insane , Light Insane : +471 ms. 0 seems fine

[Hard]

Why make a simple slider with many point ? example 00:23:476 (1,3,1)
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - stack well this is where autostacking puts it
00:14:003 (3,4,5) - better make same placement pattern like 00:12:266 (1,2,3) - fine the way it is
00:14:003 (3) - 480|116
00:14:318 (5) - 328|144
00:14:634 (1) - make this slide same like 00:13:371 (1) - for better. changed a bit
00:14:634 (1,2) - same spacing like 00:13:371 (1,2) - maybe move 00:14:950 (2) - 132|168 or better placement like that [color=#8040FF? it's all 1.0x[/color]
00:16:529 (2) - Ctrl+G and move to 304|128 for better
00:17:634 - better add a not here I think it plays nicely this way and emphasized this "uhh~" better
00:23:476 (1) - move this to 384|96 for consistency blanket like 00:23:950 (2,3,4,1) ruins thw whole pattern afterwards
00:27:740 (4) - move 1 grid (tiny) right - 172|88 . why? because the spacing on 00:27:740 (4,5) - is changing.
00:32:476 (5) - NC here
01:07:687 (3,4) - change to slider better nah, that's boring and won't change a whole lot, still fits vocals
01:17:003 (3,1) - sounds weird over here if you make to slider remapped that part a bit, cause the red-tick slliders weren't fitting
For placement it's okay , but need for improvement , Nice Mapset
[Light Insane]
00:12:108 (1) - spinner stop on 00:13:055 - better fits well with the backgound "noise" the way it is
00:23:397 (9) - remove it plays way better this way
00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - ups .. very weird.. don't like this.. really what's weirtd about that, 00:26:634 (4,5,1) - makes a triangle which flows into a star at 00:27:266 (1,2,3,4,5) - fits vocals and drums well this way imo
00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why need change spacing this? better make same spacing like 00:30:740 (4,1) changed a bit, spacing in combos is constistent now and it changes from 1.5x -> 1.4x between them
00:31:687 (3,1) - stack
00:35:161 (3) - 336|104 better
00:48:424 (5) - no need 2 repeated I think, better make that into 1 repeat it's okay
00:50:318 (2) - 180|120 better it's fine as it is right now
01:11:476 (1) - really break that flow , better move to 292|296 or better placement like that remapped a bit
01:26:161 (4,1) - better stack
[Insane]
00:04:371 (3,5) - stack this does nothing but breaking blankets and ds
00:10:845 (1,2,1,2,1) - that spacing.. okay then.. emphasizes the strong vocal+drum buildup nicely
00:21:581 (3) - 432|144 (nazi)
00:31:055 (1) - why not put on 328|276 ? flows nicely and looks nice as is
00:39:108 (4) - 200|80 (nazi)
00:57:582 (3,4) - better keep consistency spacing to 00:56:318 (1,2)
01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream , move to 200|248 better changed that part a bit
01:12:582 (8,1) - stack
01:17:003 (4,5) - ups the spacing changing still easily readable and makes the patterns afterwards way better
01:15:266 - 01:21:582 - NC spam , please use 1-1 or 1-2 big tick for New Combo makes it much better to read and still goes with the vocals
01:21:108 (1,2,3) - better make same stream like 01:22:371 (5,6,7) - and 01:23:634 (5,6,7) - for consistency
they don't need to be. first one leads into chorus while second one is the chorus, there should be a difference
Hope help a bit , Good Luck!

no reply = fixed
thanks

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-28T23:52:44+00:00

Hendrix89 wrote:
Hi there from mod queue,

Easy:

01:00:108 (3) - extend slider by a note the next set of vocals iwould start there which would make it weird

Normal:

00:02:634 (1,2) - These sliders feel really weird and out of sync with the song, consider changing them
00:05:161 (1,2) - ^
fit the instrumental just fine

Hard:

00:21:424 - add a not at the end of the slider
00:22:055 - ^
00:50:476 - add note
00:51:108 - add note
there is nothing to justify notes at those places

Light Insane:

00:33:740 (2,3) - stack
00:34:371 (2,3) - ^
sorry, but that doesn't make any sense

Insane:

00:03:108 (1,2) - ctrl G, feels funner
ruins ds + worse flow
00:24:897 (2,3) - ^
00:25:529 (6,7) - ^
the way it is right now fits the vocals way better and flows nicely http://lasse.s-ul.eu/96nMm4HJ
00:39:266 (1,3) - stack under the start of the slider would play worse + much harder to read
01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - increase the spacing to 1.6x that would be a ridiculous diffspike and completely unjustified
01:09:266 (2) - turn this note into a 1/2 note slider wouldn't really fit, also the 2 already continues the "my" from 1, doesn't need to be held any longer

A's Pace:

00:07:213 (5,7) - stack
00:08:476 (6,8) - stack
00:22:924 (2,3) - make the spacing between these 1.05x, it would be very hard with hard rock
00:23:082 (4,5) - ^
00:23:240 (6,7) - ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - is there a reason for the 1/3 stream here? I would delete note 7 and 8 and add a note at 00:38:476
00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - this part seems extremely hard for no reason, why not just make it a stream by adding a note at 00:48:266
01:00:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - really great stream, pretty hard but very fun

Your map is really well done so there wasn't too much I could find. Hopefully it was still helpful.
Good luck, you should have no problems getting it ranked

thanks for your input

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-29T08:18:58+00:00

Hendrix89 wrote:
Hi there from mod queue,

A's Pace:

00:07:213 (5,7) - stack Why?
00:08:476 (6,8) - stack Why?
00:22:924 (2,3) - make the spacing between these 1.05x, it would be very hard with hard rock I am not mapping for Hard Rock, but for the map itself, good players will play it just fine with Hard Rock too.
00:23:082 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:23:240 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:38:318 (6,7,8) - is there a reason for the 1/3 stream here? I would delete note 7 and 8 and add a note at 00:38:476 I just feel that it is right, look at my previous responses.
00:48:108 (5,6,7,8) - this part seems extremely hard for no reason, why not just make it a stream by adding a note at 00:48:266 That's not extremely hard? I am following the music.
01:00:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - really great stream, pretty hard but very fun Thanks.

Good luck, you should have no problems getting it ranked

Erm, thank you for your time

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-30T10:06:31+00:00

Avishay wrote:
P.S Your name reminds me something, but I can't recall what and why

You're making me curious
Perhaps Remember Me (with your deleted diff

)?

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-30T12:51:29+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
Avishay wrote:
P.S Your name reminds me something, but I can't recall what and why
You're making me curious
Perhaps Remember Me (with your deleted diff )?

Holy fuck, I just remembered, I'm soooo sorry for the inconvenience back then, but believe me, my diff was probably complete shit.

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-30T12:53:55+00:00

LOOOOOOL
It's already circled
Still pending after 2 years, still not ranked ;w;

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-30T16:26:57+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:
LOOOOOOL
It's already circled
Still pending after 2 years, still not ranked ;w;

Hah, don't make start talking about Rolling star ;_;

Also, I've modified the 1/3 part (less cancer) and removed some hitsound problems, I might modify the doubles part half way through the map, not sure.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56318
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.15
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:マイペースでいきましょう
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Lasse
Version:A's Pace
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Tags:tv size Yuru Yuri Mikami Shiori Ootsubo Yuka Tsuda Minami Ookubo Rumi Avishay
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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-08-31T10:31:56+00:00

Added the GD changes
also worked a bit on the Insane, especially the first 30 seconds, should be much better now

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-08-31T11:13:51+00:00

Sorry for the frequent posts lol, I've went thorugh all of the hitsounds and changed those that I weren't satisfied with, along with a pattern or two.

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Kbuns

91 posts

Joined July 2014

Kbuns 2015-09-02T01:13:31+00:00

Hi there, m4m from your queue: p/4473426#p4473426

Easy

00:02:634 (1,2) - These slider could do a better job representing the music. Additionally, they don't look very good :'( maybe consider this: http://puu.sh/jWR61/67ae4eb318.jpg
00:07:687 (1) - Consider extending this slider. To end here: 00:08:318 - it makes the rhythm build up in the next section feel much more prominent.
00:17:161 (7,1) - Improve blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRgK/0bbaea5482.jpg
00:19:371 (2) - Move this circle slightly to the left. This makes the pattern slightly more interesting because it's not just a straight line.
00:28:529 (1,2) - Fix blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRkM/0713918857.jpg
00:37:371 (3) - Consider this form: http://puu.sh/jWRpn/aec6f0f40d.jpg
00:58:845 (1) - Curve so that it flows better: http://puu.sh/jWRvG/0180ab4659.jpg
01:00:108 (3,1) - This blanket needs works. Very noticeable.
01:03:897 (4) - Improve this slider's form
01:03:897 (4,1) - Recommend blanketing this.
01:23:161 (3) - Fix slider form. Looks really bad.
01:21:897 (2) - ^
Diff needs some polishing.

Normal

00:04:055 (3,4) - I honestly can't tell what rhythm you're following in the music. Needs revision
00:06:582 (3,4) - ^
00:15:897 (1,2) - Fix blanket (Slider end of (1) and curve of (2)
00:25:371 (6) - Copy 00:24:108 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+shft+r (-15) and reposition for a better blanket.
00:40:529 (3,1) - Blanket http://puu.sh/jWS15/7c824eeefe.jpg
00:52:529 (4) - Remove a slider bone. Looks bad b/c it's uneven.
01:05:161 (3) - Slider looks bad. Consider removing the curve.
01:24:108 (1,2) - Blanket?

Hard

00:01:845 (2,1,2) - Slight overlap. Recommend spacing out (1,2)
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - ^
00:12:266 (1,2,3,1) - Transition feels empty. Consider adding a circle here: 00:13:213 -
00:23:161 (4,1) - This blanket is a lot tighter than the other blankets in the map and it looks out of place because of this.
00:27:266 - Needs clickable object here
00:31:687 (3,1) - I was under the impression that sliders like this were unrankable because they change the speed of the slider with slider bones. I might be wrong, you should double check
00:46:371 (2,3) - Blanket
01:15:266 (1,2,3,4) - This is my only issue in the kiai time. I think that you should space these more. I don't understand why this pattern would have a higher DS outside of kiai time like you did here: 01:00:108 (1,2,3,4) -
01:24:108 (1) - Missed flow
Best diff so far.

Light Insane

00:03:740 (1) - Should not be a slider. Well defined rest on this beat: 00:03:897 -
00:05:161 (1,3) - Disagree with these reverse arrows. Consider removal
00:11:476 (3,4,5,6) - Absolutely space this out. It doesn't make sense for the build-up to have a higher DS (1.5) than the part that should be emphasized. (1.2)
00:17:161 (1) - Really good slider here, gj
00:17:792 (1) - This one, not so much, haha. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/jWSWu/6a3a50ab98.jpg Definitely remove the reverse arrow on this slider though.
00:23:476 (1) - If you can, try to make this slider follow the curve of the stream better.
00:24:740 (1) - Clean up this slider's form
00:28:213 (1) - ^
00:31:687 (3,1) - Nice slider, but you should space out (1) to make it more interesting to play.
00:46:213 (1) - This slider is really out of place. Either give it a proper wave or make it straight. Looks really bad in this pattern.
01:13:371 (5,6) - Make parallel or curve (6)
01:27:740 (3) - Fix blanket
01:27:740 - Other diffs end here - Keep it consistent please.
Pretty good diff.

Lasse

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Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-09-02T11:47:11+00:00

Kbuns wrote:
Hi there, m4m from your queue: p/4473426#p4473426

Easy
00:02:634 (1,2) - These slider could do a better job representing the music. Additionally, they don't look very good :'( maybe consider this: http://puu.sh/jWR61/67ae4eb318.jpg they look just fine
00:07:687 (1) - Consider extending this slider. To end here: 00:08:318 - it makes the rhythm build up in the next section feel much more prominent. fits the vocals better as is
00:17:161 (7,1) - Improve blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRgK/0bbaea5482.jpg 1 blankets the end of 7 as good as possible. TO have both parts blanketed they would have to look the same and then I'd use the same slider 3 times in a row in 2 different combos, no thanks
00:19:371 (2) - Move this circle slightly to the left. This makes the pattern slightly more interesting because it's not just a straight line. straight line looks better and plays fine here
00:28:529 (1,2) - Fix blanket: http://puu.sh/jWRkM/0713918857.jpg huh? http://i.imgur.com/QrkAqhh.jpg it's fine that way
00:37:371 (3) - Consider this form: http://puu.sh/jWRpn/aec6f0f40d.jpg way worse flow as it doesn't lead to the next note and puts your hand in a sligh downwards motion eve nthough the next not is above
00:58:845 (1) - Curve so that it flows better: http://puu.sh/jWRvG/0180ab4659.jpg k
01:00:108 (3,1) - This blanket needs works. Very noticeable. very noticeable = two pixels on a sldier that disappears way before you have to hit the blanketed one? Hard to make it any better without breaking ds or making the slideritself worse
01:03:897 (4) - Improve this slider's form it flows nicely the way it is
01:03:897 (4,1) - Recommend blanketing this. nah
01:23:161 (3) - Fix slider form. Looks really bad. done
01:21:897 (2) - ^done
Diff needs some polishing.

Normal
00:04:055 (3,4) - I honestly can't tell what rhythm you're following in the music. Needs revision
00:06:582 (3,4) - ^
Since so many modders seem to dislike the way it is now (followed some barely audible background noise I changed those parts and remapped the rest accordingly up until the small "break"
00:15:897 (1,2) - Fix blanket (Slider end of (1) and curve of (2) seems fine, distance bat the left edge = distance at right edge, it's just not the same distance for the whole circle
00:25:371 (6) - Copy 00:24:108 (3) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+shft+r (-15) and reposition for a better blanket. blanket is fine
00:40:529 (3,1) - Blanket http://puu.sh/jWS15/7c824eeefe.jpg changed a bit
00:52:529 (4) - Remove a slider bone. Looks bad b/c it's uneven. fixed
01:05:161 (3) - Slider looks bad. Consider removing the curve. looks and flows better this way
01:24:108 (1,2) - Blanket? fixed

Hard
00:01:845 (2,1,2) - Slight overlap. Recommend spacing out (1,2)
00:04:371 (2,1,2) - ^
those are not visible during gameplay and the blankets are better this way

00:12:266 (1,2,3,1) - Transition feels empty. Consider adding a circle here: 00:13:213 - that would mean either extending the prev. slider, which would mess the mapping to vocals up and look bad, or adding circle which would feel really overmapped
00:23:161 (4,1) - This blanket is a lot tighter than the other blankets in the map and it looks out of place because of this. looks fine without messing with the shape or the ds to keep the blanket
00:27:266 - Needs clickable object here changed that part a little
00:31:687 (3,1) - I was under the impression that sliders like this were unrankable because they change the speed of the slider with slider bones. I might be wrong, you should double check the change is like a few percent at max and easily visible. Also I already had two BN modding this diff with excatly the same slider and not one mentioned it, so it should be fine. Also #modhelp seems to agree
00:46:371 (2,3) - Blanket fixed
01:15:266 (1,2,3,4) - This is my only issue in the kiai time. I think that you should space these more. I don't understand why this pattern would have a higher DS outside of kiai time like you did here: 01:00:108 (1,2,3,4) - made ds 1.0x
01:24:108 (1) - Missed flow fixed
Best diff so far.

Light Insane
00:03:740 (1) - Should not be a slider. Well defined rest on this beat: 00:03:897 - ? fits the vocal "yay" perfectly
00:05:161 (1,3) - Disagree with these reverse arrows. Consider removal plays nicely and doesn't feel overmapped or anything
00:11:476 (3,4,5,6) - Absolutely space this out. It doesn't make sense for the build-up to have a higher DS (1.5) than the part that should be emphasized. (1.2) it does. having the spacing lower takes away some of the aiming and puts more focus on the tapping which is exactly what I want here
00:17:161 (1) - Really good slider here, gj
00:17:792 (1) - This one, not so much, haha. Maybe try this? http://puu.sh/jWSWu/6a3a50ab98.jpg Definitely remove the reverse arrow on this slider though.
applied something similar
00:23:476 (1) - If you can, try to make this slider follow the curve of the stream better. flows just fine
00:24:740 (1) - Clean up this slider's form done
00:28:213 (1) - ^ done

00:31:687 (3,1) - Nice slider, but you should space out (1) to make it more interesting to play. plays fine this way
00:46:213 (1) - This slider is really out of place. Either give it a proper wave or make it straight. Looks really bad in this pattern. remapped that part a little
01:13:371 (5,6) - Make parallel or curve (6) done
01:27:740 (3) - Fix blanket done
01:27:740 - Other diffs end here - Keep it consistent please.
Pretty good diff.

SPOILER

well whatever

Kbuns

91 posts

Joined July 2014

Kbuns 2015-09-02T12:13:55+00:00

SPOILER

well whatever

Should have said something in game then. Why would I read the rules of your queue when the request was made in game?
[/quote]

melon boy

278 posts

Joined August 2013

melon boy 2015-09-03T15:14:33+00:00

Hello! M4M from your modding queue!

A's Pace

00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders look pretty bland with the overlaps and such and don't play too well either. I'd suggest curving them a bit more and moving them further apart, kind of like this:
image
Furthermore, I'd suggest completely removing the repeat sliders at 00:17:161 if you have any intention of getting this ranked, since it's severely overmapped. Even if it were to get qualified, QAT would definitely have something to say about it. I'd suggest extending 00:16:845 (4) and placing a normal hit circle at 00:17:318, preferably under (4)'s end. As for the pattern, here's a suggestion, building on the previously mentioned:
image
00:21:897 (4) - The pattern is good enough here, just do the same as before, removing the repeat sliders and extending (4).
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Umm... Okay. This may or may not also be suicide. But if you insist on keeping it, I'll just wish you good luck.
00:37:529 (3,5) - Same here as above. You might be able to get about the same effect with a couple of 1/1 sliders.[
00:39:897 (1) - This hit sound is extremely jarring. Both because it's a snare placed on a downbeat, and also because it's too damn loud compared to in comparison to the music and the rest of the hitsounds. Remove or change it.
00:41:161 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:55:055 (1,3,5,7) - You can keep the doubles, but they are definitely too close to each other. Increase the spacing.
00:57:582 (5,7) - Why not keep the same hit sound as 00:56:318 (1,3) ?
01:01:371 - Get a stronger soft-hitfinish for the chorus.
01:11:161 (1) - I'd suggest that you don't start a downbeat with a slider end.
That's all I'll say. Overall interesting map with nice jump and slider patterns, but it definitely still needs some work on the flow and aesthetics. Good luck.

Insane

00:08:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part feels a bit too linear and doesn't flow well. Try going with something a bit more back and forth.
00:11:950 (4,1) - I'm not a big fan of these tiny overlaps. Either you make a distinct overlap, or you get some space between the two objects.
00:24:108 (5,6) - Watch out for the curves. If your basic small sliders get too curvy they'll look really bad. Like these. Straighten them out, and make sure they have the same curve, since they are right after each other. Same for your other sliders, such as 00:26:003 (1).
00:28:213 (1) - However this one is okay, since it's a special unique slider.
00:34:529 (3,3,3) - Same with these, however I'm not a fan of this pattern, because of the way the sliders overlap. You might want to reposition them.
00:52:529 (3) - Ctrl + G for better flow.
01:01:371 - Same as with A's Pace: A stronger soft-hitfinish would really make this section feel a lot better.
01:10:213 (1,2) - Ctrl + G here as 01:10:529 (3,4) here. It makes the change in instrument a lot more apparent. Additionally, it might be nice to move 01:10:213 (1,2,3,4) down a bit as well for better emphasis.
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing suddenly drops a lot without any change in the music. Consider completely changing the pattern here.
Otherwise a really solid map with nice hit sounds. Good luck.

That is all I'll do. I'm not too good at modding easier difficulties, but if you don't feel like it's enough for you to mod the entirety of my map, then feel free to send me a message, and I might be able to say something about another difficulty or two. Anyhow, Best of luck with the map!

Lasse

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Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-09-03T16:20:54+00:00

Fuccho wrote:
Insane
00:08:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part feels a bit too linear and doesn't flow well. Try going with something a bit more back and forth. remapped it a little, kept the 1.8-1.2 alternating snap cause it fits really nice, should flow much better now
00:11:950 (4,1) - I'm not a big fan of these tiny overlaps. Either you make a distinct overlap, or you get some space between the two objects. increased ds on the sldiers a little to get rid of that
00:24:108 (5,6) - Watch out for the curves. If your basic small sliders get too curvy they'll look really bad. Like these. Straighten them out, and make sure they have the same curve, since they are right after each other. I changed that part anyways cause the flow seemed kinda bad. Also made them less curved while at it

Same for your other sliders, such as 00:26:003 (1). this one is fine
00:28:213 (1) - However this one is okay, since it's a special unique slider.
00:34:529 (3,3,3) - Same with these, however I'm not a fan of this pattern, because of the way the sliders overlap. You might want to reposition them. that's the whole point of the pattern, is is rotating while the slliders are getting more curved. And the only way to see thsoe overlaps would be by playing EZ
00:52:529 (3) - Ctrl + G for better flow. it flows fine? and this way the transition to the next notes is better (and it looks better) CHanged shape a bit though
01:01:371 - Same as with A's Pace: A stronger soft-hitfinish would really make this section feel a lot better.
01:10:213 (1,2) - Ctrl + G here as 01:10:529 (3,4) here. It makes the change in instrument a lot more apparent.
Additionally, it might be nice to move 01:10:213 (1,2,3,4) down a bit as well for better emphasis.
hitsound + nc are fine for that, also that would make the spacing really weird
01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing suddenly drops a lot without any change in the music. Consider completely changing the pattern here.might look into that

Otherwise a really solid map with nice hit sounds. Good luck.
That is all I'll do. I'm not too good at modding easier difficulties, but if you don't feel like it's enough for you to mod the entirety of my map, then feel free to send me a message, and I might be able to say something about another difficulty or two. Anyhow, Best of luck with the map!

thanks

Last edited by Lasse 2015-09-03T17:22:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-03T17:22:03+00:00

Fuccho wrote:
[*]01:12:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Your spacing suddenly drops a lot without any change in the music. Consider completely changing the pattern here.

I reworked the first part so it fits much better and kept 01:14:003 (1) - as is (moved a bit) to serve as a little "break" after this kinda hard new jump sequence, also the lowly spaced 1/2 sliders there fit really well with the drawn out vocals

Tarrasky

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Tarrasky 2015-09-03T17:37:13+00:00

Insane mod ´º`

about NC

00:03:108 (1) - I prefer the newcombo in 00:03:266 (2) - if you listen to music, you notice the sound change is there
00:05:634 (1,2) - /\
00:11:161 (1) - maybe nc is unnecessary
00:30:424 (1) - /\
00:39:266 (1) - /\
00:41:792 (1) - /\ 00:42:740 (1) - /\ 00:45:582 (1) - /\ 00:46:845 (1) - /\ and a lot

00:07:055 (4,5) - why this sliders is so "wub"? you can make normal sliders like 00:02:003 (4,5) - 00:04:529 (4,5) -, I see no reason to be this way
00:13:608 (3) -00:14:871 (3) - 00:18:661 (3) - 00:19:924 (3) - ... ) overmap?
00:23:397 - you can add a circle here, and change this from a 1/2 slider 00:23:476 (1) -, same in 00:23:792 (3) - and change this for 1/2 circle jumps 00:24:108 (5,6) -, seems more playable, it makes more sense with the sound and doesn't miss a sound
00:31:687 (3) - maybe 1/1 slider?
00:52:529 (3) - ctrl + g seems better flow
soft-hitfinish.wav It sounds as weak for finish beat

hope i help ^^

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-03T18:45:37+00:00

Tarrasky wrote:
Insane mod ´º`

about NC
00:03:108 (1) - I prefer the newcombo in 00:03:266 (2) - if you listen to music, you notice the sound change is there
00:05:634 (1,2) - /\
the nc for those pattern is consistent though and it makes the mway betetr to read and play

00:11:161 (1) - maybe nc is unnecessary removed and changed the pattern a bit
00:30:424 (1) - /\ removed
00:39:266 (1) - /\ removed
00:41:792 (1) - /\ removed
00:42:740 (1) - /\removed
00:45:582 (1) - /\ 00:46:845 (1) - /\ and a lot
also did some other nc changes

00:07:055 (4,5) - why this sliders is so "wub"? you can make normal sliders like 00:02:003 (4,5) - 00:04:529 (4,5) -, I see no reason to be this way
I think they're fine here

00:13:608 (3) -00:14:871 (3) - 00:18:661 (3) - 00:19:924 (3) - ... ) overmap? it's not really severe and it would get extremely boring without those cause that musical pattern happen quite a few times, I think it's still intuitive to play.

00:23:397 - you can add a circle here, and change this from a 1/2 slider 00:23:476 (1) -, same in 00:23:792 (3) - and change this for 1/2 circle jumps
00:24:108 (5,6) -, seems more playable, it makes more sense with the sound and doesn't miss a sound
the drumroll ends on 00:23:318 (7) - which seems to get emphasized fine the way it is. I could make 00:23:318 (7) - a kickslider, but then the transition to the jumps would play awful

00:31:687 (3) - maybe 1/1 slider? the repeating slider repeats on a beat of the instrumental and still goes nicely with the vocal, I think it's fine
00:52:529 (3) - ctrl + g seems better flow I changed the part before a little and used ctrl+g on 1 and 2, does the same for the flow of this and kepps the transition to 00:52:845 (1) - better
soft-hitfinish.wav It sounds as weak for finish beat

hope i help ^^ sure

thanks for the mod

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-09-03T20:06:21+00:00

Fuccho wrote:
Hello! M4M from your modding queue!
A's Pace
00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders look pretty bland with the overlaps and such and don't play too well either. I'd suggest curving them a bit more and moving them further apart, kind of like this:
image
They play just fine imo, and I like the way they slightly overlap now, I don't want to have open spacings with them.
Furthermore, I'd suggest completely removing the repeat sliders at 00:17:161 if you have any intention of getting this ranked, since it's severely overmapped. Even if it were to get qualified, QAT would definitely have something to say about it. I'd suggest extending 00:16:845 (4) and placing a normal hit circle at 00:17:318, preferably under (4)'s end. As for the pattern, here's a suggestion, building on the previously mentioned:
image
I'll have to disagree, this is an Extra difficulty, I like to be creative and this pattern resembles the vocals and their strength just like I wanted, I will keep it.
00:21:897 (4) - The pattern is good enough here, just do the same as before, removing the repeat sliders and extending (4). ^
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Umm... Okay. This may or may not also be suicide. But if you insist on keeping it, I'll just wish you good luck.
00:37:529 (3,5) - Same here as above. You might be able to get about the same effect with a couple of 1/1 sliders. I do not wish using 1/1 sliders here.
00:39:897 (1) - This hit sound is extremely jarring. Both because it's a snare placed on a downbeat, and also because it's too damn loud compared to in comparison to the music and the rest of the hitsounds. Remove or change it. I agree, changed to the regular whistle, I might add custom hitsounds soon, in addition to Lasse's.
00:41:161 (1,1,1,1) - ^ V
00:55:055 (1,3,5,7) - You can keep the doubles, but they are definitely too close to each other. Increase the spacing. They are just fine.. The intention was to slow down the pace a bit with the vocals.
00:57:582 (5,7) - Why not keep the same hit sound as 00:56:318 (1,3) ? Because nothing is mandatory with hitsounding.
01:01:371 - Get a stronger soft-hitfinish for the chorus. I need to find something ehm..
01:11:161 (1) - I'd suggest that you don't start a downbeat with a slider end. I agree, changed.
That's all I'll say. Overall interesting map with nice jump and slider patterns, but it definitely still needs some work on the flow and aesthetics. Good luck.

Try to get more into my head, I might be a bit unorthodox but I think I am allowed to, thank you for the mod.

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-09-04T01:49:30+00:00

[A's Pace]

00:03:108 (3,4,5) - You don't find all these kick sliders over the top? I think just 00:02:634 (1,2) - are good enough. Making everything kick-sliders will easily come across as mapping for the same of difficulty. You could cut down on some of the kickslider usage in this intro imo.
00:05:634 (3,4,5) - ^
00:07:371 (6,7) - I really dislike stacks that occur between jump patterns. They break momentum because you force the player to stop all motion before basically doing a vertical screen jump. It's uncomfortable to play. Just use a smaller jump so there is still movement.
00:08:634 (7,8) - ^
00:15:897 (1,2) - These are 3/4 sliders, i hope you're aware <___<
00:20:003 (2,3) - This is so irregular compared to your spacing for 00:18:740 (2,3) - 00:19:371 (6,7) - right after the "Hai"
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You are not Hanzer
01:01:054 (5,6) - I guess, if you want to change DS you should change on a white tick, right now the DS increases after 6 which is a blue tick. Having a DS increase begin on a white tick makes it more straightforward.
01:25:055 (4) - Might as well Ctrl+G this because the flow is pretty damn nice when Ctrl+G'ed. I'll overlook the sheer amount of jumps you're forcing lol.
01:25:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Im surprised there's no DS increase to match the pitch change.

[Insane]

00:06:262 - wouldn't hurt to snap this green line
00:07:687 (1) - This should really be two circles for the drums.
00:25:845 (8,1) - You sould have a jump here for emphasis onto the downbeat (1). 00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You map a jump to every white tick so you should continue that pattern into the next combo.
00:53:792 (1,2) - These sliders just feel really random. The SV doesn't fit the music because there is a pitch increase onto 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - but you use a lower SV and simpler shapes :S.
01:19:213 - There are clear beats on the red ticks too. Suddenly shifting to 1/1 rhythm makes this section feel really empty. if not circles, 1/2 sliders work too.

[Light Insane]

00:07:687 (1) - These should be two circles too, or at least map a larger jump to them for better emphasis. You map the same drum hits to circles later on so its weird to use a slider here.
00:13:371 (1) - Change the combo color to something else. On the Default spinner the blue combo color becomes really difficult to read.
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6,1) - You spam the same star-jump pattern a lot in this diff, Try using other combinations or jump patterns .
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4) - Awkward, same reason as Insane. There are beats on red ticks, even if you don't want to make them clickable and focus on vocals, using 1/2 sliders will benefit this section by not making it feel so empty and different in intensity from the jumps before/after
01:26:476 (5,6) - The song is growing in intensity, why the sliders? if anything you should use the at the beginning and transition to circles as the pitch goes up with intensity.

[Hard]

00:23:476 (1,2,3) - Weird flow here. 1>2 is nice and then you have to make a sharp movement into 3.
00:24:582 (4,1) - ^
00:33:266 (1) - Slider-end is a strong beat though... Make this 3/4 or something so 00:33:582 - can be clicked.
01:01:371 - Why do you randomly have 1.20x SV for like 4 seconds before going back to 1.00 lol

The gap from Hard to Normal is way too large. You use 1.60 base SV on Hard which is extremely high, and then 0.95x on Normal. This results in a huge difficulty spike even though rhythmically theres a decent progression from 1/1's and 1/2 rhythms in Normal to 1/2 rhythms on Hard.

Good luck

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Lasse 2015-09-04T01:58:32+00:00

I'll look at the mod after getting some sleep

So maybe I should remap the normal nearly the same but based on sth like 1.2sv?
I think I've seen quite some maps with similar gaps between normal and hard getting ranked this year , but idk how the SV on those was.

Would you classify the current NH gap more as 'meh' or 'unrankable levels of meh'?
Since your post reads like the 1/1 - 1/2 progression for those is fine but the SV on normal is a bit low

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-09-04T08:58:02+00:00

Imo it's unrankable because SV gap is too large, so base DS will also be a huge spike. You could make another diff in between with 1.25x Base SV and Simple stuff, call it an Advanced maybe. Remapping for SV... you might as well just make another diff really.

For me, i like using 0.7-0.9x for Easy, 0.9-1.1 for Normal, 1.1-1.4 for Hard. 1.5-1.8 for Insane and 1.9+ for Extra's. Different people have different preferences, but right now a 0.65x SV just makes the overall difficulty jump too big.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-09-04T11:15:28+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[A's Pace]

00:03:108 (3,4,5) - You don't find all these kick sliders over the top? I think just 00:02:634 (1,2) - are good enough. Making everything kick-sliders will easily come across as mapping for the same of difficulty. You could cut down on some of the kickslider usage in this intro imo. Not really
00:05:634 (3,4,5) - ^
00:07:371 (6,7) - I really dislike stacks that occur between jump patterns. They break momentum because you force the player to stop all motion before basically doing a vertical screen jump. It's uncomfortable to play. Just use a smaller jump so there is still movement. Changed.
00:08:634 (7,8) - ^
00:15:897 (1,2) - These are 3/4 sliders, i hope you're aware <___< Yes I am..
00:20:003 (2,3) - This is so irregular compared to your spacing for 00:18:740 (2,3) - 00:19:371 (6,7) - right after the "Hai" Changed a bit.
00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You are not Hanzer But it still plays well and I like it.
01:01:054 (5,6) - I guess, if you want to change DS you should change on a white tick, right now the DS increases after 6 which is a blue tick. Having a DS increase begin on a white tick makes it more straightforward. I think that's unnecessary, there's nothing to significant on the white tick compared to the whole stream.
01:25:055 (4) - Might as well Ctrl+G this because the flow is pretty damn nice when Ctrl+G'ed. I'll overlook the sheer amount of jumps you're forcing lol. I LIKE THIS SO MUCH, CHANGED.
01:25:529 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Im surprised there's no DS increase to match the pitch change. Uhm, I think the pattern is a bit underwhelming actually, changed it to use some sliders and it should be nicer now.
Good luck

Thank you monstrata :3

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Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-04T11:43:56+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[Insane]

00:06:262 - wouldn't hurt to snap this green line fixed
00:07:687 (1) - This should really be two circles for the drums. I have the 1/2 slider here for the vocals like the two times this happens before. I know about the drums here, but I think this just fits better for consistency But I put drum hitsounds on the slliderend too
00:25:845 (8,1) - You sould have a jump here for emphasis onto the downbeat (1). 00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You map a jump to every white tick so you should continue that pattern into the next combo. changed position of 8 a bit to make for a 2x jump like before
00:53:792 (1,2) - These sliders just feel really random. The SV doesn't fit the music because there is a pitch increase onto 00:55:055 (1,2,3,4) - but you use a lower SV and simpler shapes :S. Yeah, reduced sv to 1x for first half, now second half is 1.2 and changed the sliders
01:19:213 - There are clear beats on the red ticks too. Suddenly shifting to 1/1 rhythm makes this section feel really empty. if not circles, 1/2 sliders work too. Circles would take away too much emphasis from the vocals imo. Made 1/2 sliders that can be played like singletaps
[Light Insane]

00:07:687 (1) - These should be two circles too, or at least map a larger jump to them for better emphasis. You map the same drum hits to circles later on so its weird to use a slider here. I already explained my reasoning on the Insane and I think it's fine since that slider+ds type pattern appears only 3 time, namely for the shouted vocals in the intro.
00:13:371 (1) - Change the combo color to something else. On the Default spinner the blue combo color becomes really difficult to read. I fit one more nc before it, should be fine now
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6,1) - You spam the same star-jump pattern a lot in this diff, Try using other combinations or jump patterns .
I'll look into that
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4) - Awkward, same reason as Insane. There are beats on red ticks, even if you don't want to make them clickable and focus on vocals, using 1/2 sliders will benefit this section by not making it feel so empty and different in intensity from the jumps before/after changed here too
01:26:476 (5,6) - The song is growing in intensity, why the sliders? if anything you should use the at the beginning and transition to circles as the pitch goes up with intensity made them small jumps instead + nc so the transition from stack to jump is clearer.
As for the stars oraoraora
I remapped some of them
00:19:687 - now a close-far alternating pattern
00:27:266 (1) - zigzag
00:28:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stays the same since it's really satisfying to play and it's not "only" a star
00:32:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - stays too, fits really well here
00:34:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - made back and forth, with increasing ds for 3, emphasizes the "hai" rellay well (still aligned like a star but play completely different)
00:40:529 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - stays with 00:42:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - cause it's nicely consitent with 00:28:529 // 00:32:318
01:08:003 (2,1,2,3,4) - first star since ~30 seconds (not counting 00:58:845 (1,2,3,4) - since one point is missing and it's 1/1) and it fits well here so it stays, also first and only star during kiai
Star count: 7 (Old) -> -3 (removed => 4
that shouldn't be too much for a 1:30 map now

[Hard]

00:23:476 (1,2,3) - Weird flow here. 1>2 is nice and then you have to make a sharp movement into 3. I think it's fine here, as it plays like a small triangle
00:24:582 (4,1) - ^ here too, I think it plays nicely even without that "circular" flow but it just plays a bit more like small tirangular jumps
00:33:266 (1) - Slider-end is a strong beat though... Make this 3/4 or something so 00:33:582 - can be clicked. Didn't really wnant to put a 3/4 slider -> singletap on a hard but if it's fine then I'll do it
01:01:371 - Why do you randomly have 1.20x SV for like 4 seconds before going back to 1.00 lol ugh, ummmm I don't even know anymore, made that part 1x too
The gap from Hard to Normal is way too large. You use 1.60 base SV on Hard which is extremely high, and then 0.95x on Normal. This results in a huge difficulty spike even though rhythmically theres a decent progression from 1/1's and 1/2 rhythms in Normal to 1/2 rhythms on Hard.

Good luck

thanks

A's Pace updated

As for the N-H spread, I'll look into it as I said before

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-04T14:42:11+00:00

I had some ideas anyway that would've been to hard to put on that normal but too easy for the hard, so making another diff inbetween was easier than expected.

Added new "Advanced" difficulty => redownload

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-09-04T15:29:29+00:00

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232,24,68634,2,0,B|218:78|218:78|224:120|224:120|204:184,1,147.000005607605,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,348,68950,6,0,P|68:352|52:232,1,183.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,292,69266,2,0,P|324:253|288:137,1,183.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,69582,6,0,P|128:116|168:228,1,294.00001121521,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
197,213,70055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,356,70213,5,4,1:3:0:0:
316,120,70371,1,4,1:3:0:0:
248,360,70529,1,4,1:3:0:0:
444,208,70687,1,4,1:3:0:0:
197,213,70845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
169,191,70923,1,0,3:0:0:0:
149,162,71002,1,8,3:0:0:0:
140,128,71081,1,0,3:0:0:0:
144,92,71161,2,0,B|73:75|71:91|69:108|-1:95,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,92,71476,6,0,B|439:75|441:91|443:108|513:95,1,147.000005607605,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,312,71792,2,0,P|210:335|138:328,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,68,72108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,188,72266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,64,72424,1,8,1:0:0:0:
197,213,72582,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,104,72740,6,0,B|436:64|436:64|468:188,1,147.000005607605,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,222,73055,2,0,B|487:262|487:262|461:162,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,162,73371,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,364,73529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,73687,1,8,1:0:0:0:
372,224,73845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,376,74003,6,0,P|172:268|304:232,1,220.500008411408,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,224,74318,2,0,B|408:272|408:272|444:200|396:88,1,220.500008411408,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,217,74634,2,0,B|220:265|220:265|184:193|232:81,1,220.500008411408
256,217,74950,2,0,B|323:243|323:243|175:247,1,220.500008411408,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,75266,5,6,1:0:0:0:
176,164,75424,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,328,75582,1,8,1:0:0:0:
28,236,75740,2,0,B|24:76|-52:156|-48:216|100:188|112:100,1,220.500008411408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,76055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,216,76213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,96,76371,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,304,76529,6,0,B|188:320|188:320|112:348,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,76845,1,8,1:0:0:0:
145,335,77003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,360,77161,2,0,P|384:256|420:192,2,147.000005607605,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,77634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,88,77792,5,8,1:0:0:0:
281,122,77950,2,0,P|177:118|113:82,2,147.000005607605,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,190,78424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,13,78582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,236,78740,1,2,0:1:0:0:
72,53,78897,1,2,0:1:0:0:
392,198,79055,6,0,P|350:138|281:122,1,147.000005607605,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,351,79371,2,0,P|303:293|297:222,1,147.000005607605,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,274,79687,2,0,P|139:297|206:270,1,147.000005607605,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,198,80003,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,274,80161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,352,80318,5,10,1:0:0:0:
86,76,80476,1,8,1:0:0:0:
392,198,80634,1,10,3:0:0:0:
72,274,80792,1,8,3:0:0:0:
281,27,80950,5,8,1:0:0:0:
322,28,81028,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,29,81107,1,4,3:0:0:0:
404,30,81186,1,4,3:0:0:0:
444,32,81266,6,0,L|460:112,1,78.4,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,81582,5,2,0:0:0:0:
259,352,81740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,344,81897,2,0,L|448:228,1,98,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,316,82213,5,2,0:0:0:0:
82,360,82371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,352,82529,2,0,L|271:236,1,98,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,82845,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,172,83003,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,20,83161,2,0,P|132:24|84:56,1,98,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,83476,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,324,83634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,172,83792,2,0,P|104:176|56:208,1,98,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,324,84108,6,0,L|360:332,1,183.75,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,248,84424,2,0,L|320:256,1,183.75,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,172,84740,2,0,L|247:178,1,183.75,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,11,85055,2,0,P|235:48|312:116,1,245,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,85529,5,8,3:0:0:0:
308,340,85687,2,0,P|392:332|440:312,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,86003,5,8,3:0:0:0:
204,340,86161,2,0,P|120:332|72:312,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,11,86476,5,8,3:0:0:0:
128,232,86634,2,0,B|83:233|83:233|44:248|8:254,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,11,86950,5,8,3:0:0:0:
384,232,87108,2,0,B|428:233|428:233|468:248|503:254,1,122.5,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,38,87424,6,0,L|256:31,1,196,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
96,64,87740,6,0,B|80:128|112:180|112:180|152:144|148:96,1,196,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

I've decided to redesign some patterns in the beginning because idk, I stopped liking how they look, even though they placed just fine ><

KASUM1

336 posts

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KASUM1 2015-09-05T16:33:35+00:00

Hello~!

small suggestion

[Advanced]

01:05:792 - add a note here , I think sounds better

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-05T16:45:33+00:00

KASUM1 wrote:
Hello~!

small suggestion

[Advanced]

01:05:792 - add a note here , I think sounds better

In general I would agree for this spot, a note would fit and not feel overmapped. But since that whole part
01:03:897 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - etc is mapped to go with the vocals on this diff it feels fiine without the note
also having it like this makes it consistent with other similar parts such as 01:15:740 (4,1) - that are mapped to vocals mainly.

Also it's a bit easier to play this way while it doesn't really feel like something is missing

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2015-09-05T17:35:38+00:00

Insane (5,1 stars, 403 notes) Modding

00:01:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - Could be all placed wider because this feels tight when played.

00:02:318 (5) - Add more curve to this so it matches with 00:02:003 (4) and doesn't end up looking ugly and random.

00:02:634 (1,2,1,2,3) - I would remake this. 00:03:108 (1,2,3) Makes 00:02:634 (1,2) look play out really weird.

00:12:897 (3) - You can either make this longer (to the next red tick) or make this slower. Preference tho.

00:17:161 (1) - shape is unnecessary.

00:17:792 (3) - You can try making the curve at the bottom overlap a circle, so it looks cleaner.

00:25:687 (7,8) - place this somewhere else, ruins 00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6) .

00:29:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing.

00:44:634 (6) - Don't overlap. this spacing is really ugly and you are limiting yourself with available space.

00:50:003 (3,4,5) - You have to space this much further. What you're doing is basically "big jumps, randomly tightly-spaced sliders".

00:57:582 (3) - No need for 2% increase in volume or any at all. This means, you probably have more of these mistakes.

01:01:529 (2) - Don't make this overlap.

01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Needs heavy remapping. Really sloppy jumps. Think of the flow and how the jumps are putting effect on flow.

01:27:740 (3) - Improper slider; the curves at the ends are irregular.

Advanced (3,02 stars, 261 notes) Modding

00:02:634 (1) - If you're not going to put enough curve to this; make this a straight slider.

00:03:740 (4) - Place this somewhere else.

00:07:687 (1,2) - x:200 y:64

00:10:845 (1,2,3) - Space closer.

00:13:687 (2,3,4,5) - Very weird shape (not good). Make them closer however.

00:28:845 (2,3,4) - Make bigger curve.

01:01:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - It's the chorus. you can space these out more.

01:05:476 (2) - Slider doesn't fit the vocals too well.

Lasse

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Lasse 2015-09-05T21:15:55+00:00

Boobs wrote:
Insane (5,1 stars, 403 notes) Modding
00:01:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - Could be all placed wider because this feels tight when played. 1.6x spacing seems fine here. Also starting the map with bigger jumps would feel bad imo. Also this way there is a notable different between the strong "drum jumps" 00:03:108 (1,2,3) - with 2x spacing

00:02:318 (5) - Add more curve to this so it matches with 00:02:003 (4) and doesn't end up looking ugly and random. huh? I stacked+rotated them and they are the same shape, would be strange if not cause they are just copy paste + rotated

00:02:634 (1,2,1,2,3) - I would remake this. 00:03:108 (1,2,3) Makes 00:02:634 (1,2) look play out really weird. 00:02:634 (1,2,1) - is the same angle and 00:03:108 (1,2,3) - is the same angle, and it feels fine to play

00:12:897 (3) - You can either make this longer (to the next red tick) or make this slower. Preference tho. They go well with the vocals the way they are + changin 3 would make for a really weird pattern for no apparent reason

00:17:161 (1) - shape is unnecessary. I think it goes well with the vocals here

00:17:792 (3) - You can try making the curve at the bottom overlap a circle, so it looks cleaner. Improved this shape

00:25:687 (7,8) - place this somewhere else, ruins 00:24:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6) . Yeah, reworkled that and a bit afterwards

00:29:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing. ugh, 5 somehow got autostacked on 00:29:476 (6) - , fixed

00:44:634 (6) - Don't overlap. this spacing is really ugly and you are limiting yourself with available space. Yeah I changed that and alro removed that stupid antijump on 00:43:687 (1) -

00:50:003 (3,4,5) - You have to space this much further. What you're doing is basically "big jumps, randomly tightly-spaced sliders". Increased spacing and made it look better

00:57:582 (3) - No need for 2% increase in volume or any at all. This means, you probably have more of these mistakes. It serves for the buildup until 100% for the Kiai, I really like doing that in such small steps because the hitsounds don't suddenly feel louder

01:01:529 (2) - Don't make this overlap. I liked it but see one line below...

01:00:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Needs heavy remapping. Really sloppy jumps. Think of the flow and how the jumps are putting effect on flow. I have to agree with you on this, some parts from 01:00:740 (1) - to 01:08:950 (1) - have really bad flow. Remapped that section

01:27:740 (3) - Improper slider; the curves at the ends are irregular.worked on that a bit

Advanced (3,02 stars, 261 notes) Modding
00:02:634 (1) - If you're not going to put enough curve to this; make this a straight slider. It looks better with 3 this way, but I changed the position

00:03:740 (4) - Place this somewhere else. hm. I don't really see a reason, it play fine

00:07:687 (1,2) - x:200 y:64 the current placement keeps the placement consistent with 00:06:575 (1,2,3) - . Suddenly not blanketing this would make that part look weird

00:10:845 (1,2,3) - Space closer. Huh? It's 1.2x like the whole map (except some 1/1 or bigger gaps) also these drum beats are really strong, so lower ds would feel weird.

00:13:687 (2,3,4,5) - Very weird shape (not good). Make them closer however. Yeah small crossover back-forth shape is much better with actual fast jumps. I replaced it with are nicer looking (at least here) one, but again no reason to break the 1.2x ds

00:28:845 (2,3,4) - Make bigger curve. Sure, looks better. Made it align better with 00:28:529 (1) -

01:01:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - It's the chorus. you can space these out more. While I agree with that I won't do it because that would make it too hard for this diff. The spacing in this part is way higher for the Hard

01:05:476 (2) - Slider doesn't fit the vocals too well. I tried extending, repeating etc but it just ends up feeling weird, and putting a note on the white tick afterward, but that all seems to play a bit weird. Also the vocal structure ü supporting instrumental is similar to 01:05:161 (1) - so it's fine to play and doesn't really feel weird

I also added another custom normal hitsound and used the normal-hiwthistle instead of the soft one for the kiai on the Insane
=> redownload for this

Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2015-09-06T12:34:03+00:00

Easy
00:11:476 (2) - Should End At 00:11:950

No Kds

Santtu

539 posts

Joined November 2012

Santtu 2015-09-07T17:08:07+00:00

Hello! From your modding queue

[Advanced]
00:04:529 (2) - You can replace this note somewhere right side of (1), so it flows better. Try something like x272, y260 (if you agree, remember to replace 00:04:845 (3) - also)
00:24:424 (5) - replace this note properly, next/prev distant's should be 1,18x-1,22x
00:30:108 (3) - check blanket
00:40:845 (4) - check blanket
00:42:424 (2) - I'd recommend to use circles here, as you did in 00:32:634 (2,3) - . The rhythm somehow tells me that there would be circles

01:05:950 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - NC places here is bit confusing. Maybe remove NC at 01:08:318 (1) - ?
[Insane]
00:20:318 (1,2,3) - These are too close to health bar. Those almost touch it, so I recommend to put them lower or something
00:21:582 (3) - same as before ^
00:29:476 (6) - check stacking with 00:28:529 (1) -
00:32:161 (1) - This note doesn't need Drum Sampleset & Additions. also It would be maybe better take NC of and add it to the 00:32:318 (2) - , because it's stroke's first beat.
01:22:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
[Light Insane]
00:03:108 (1) - Maybe add NC for better readable
00:50:634 (3) - Rotate this -40 to Clockwise (Selection Centre)

Wow This is nice mapset! Good Luck!

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