Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - My Pace de Ikimashou

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Topic Starter
Lasse

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

Hey, I'm here for M4M~
Took me a while since my mood is bad~


General

● I'm gonna point out the combo colours, like everyone else does. added the ones from iedesu
● The slider forms in Easy are reaally strange. I don't even want to write them all down.

Easy

● 00:15:897 (5,7) - Slightly overlapping. fixed
● 00:17:161 (7,1) - Proper blanket please~ ^
● 00:28:529 (1,2) - Try to improve that blanket too. ^
● 00:31:055 (1,2) - You could use copy and paste for symmetry. ^
● 00:50:634 (4,6) - How about stacking (6) on (4)? done
● 00:53:792 (1) - ^ If you stack 6, you've gotta move this slider according to the DS. ^
● 01:00:108 (3,1) - Proper Blanket please. ^
● 01:07:687 (1,2) - ^^

Normal

● 00:10:213 (3,1) - These are slightly overlapping. fixed
● 00:39:266 (3,1) - Improve blanket please. ^
● 01:05:161 (3) - This slider looks so squeezed~ changed a little, but completely straight it would look worse
● 01:07:055 (4,1) - Improve blanket. done
● 01:08:318 (3,1) - I don't like that overlap. think it's fine
● 01:18:423 (3,1) - ^ ^


Hard

- Improve blanket please.
● 00:25:371 (3,4) - ^ done
● 00:26:318 (3,4) - ^ ^
● 00:26:634 (4,1) - ^ ^
● 00:30:108 (3,1) - I don't really like overlaps, but please, at least improve it. ^
● 00:40:371 (2,4) - Improve blanket. ^
● 00:41:476 (3,4) - ^ ^
● 00:41:792 (4,5) - ^ ^
● 00:48:740 (1,2) - ^ ^
● 00:49:845 (5,1) - ^ ^
● 00:55:371 (2,3) - ^ ^
● 01:09:897 (4,1) - Stack these properly please. ^
● 01:20:161 (4,2) - Why are these closer to each other, than these - 01:20:476 (2,4) - ? perfectly distance snapped, but I changed the alignment a little

Insane

● Since this is an insane, you're basically allowed to do every pattern as you please, but please recheck the blankets and try to avoid opverlapping.
● 00:20:476 (2,3,4) - The only thing I wanna say is, that I really dislike these patterns. I like them
● Yes, that's all for Insane~ ".-.

I didn't mod the hardest difficulty, 'cuz "you" requested the M4M mod~

Good luck with ranking your Beatmap! c:
Topic Starter
Lasse
Reworked a pattern and some hitsounds on the insane, should feel better now.

Also lowered HP drain a little sicne it felt very harsh if you missed before the slower 1/2 singletap - slider sections.
Raised OD a little
Topic Starter
Lasse
Since the gap between Hard -> Insane was so big I decided to add a Light Insane, re-dl pls :)
Mikkuri
from your queue~

[Light's Insane]
  1. 00:04:845 (5) - check your ai mod everytime you upload a map
  2. 00:21:897 (4,1,2) - the distance is too close. strongly recommend to fix like this or move further away
  3. 00:23:476 (1) - you should multiplier to 1.0x here not here 00:23:634
  4. 00:24:424 (5) - spacing too close
  5. 00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why 0.5x
  6. 00:46:213 (1) - stack with 00:44:950 (1) -
  7. 00:47:950 (4) - stack this with (3)
  8. 00:54:740 (5) - remove nc
  9. 01:00:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what a random spacing lol
  10. 01:26:950 (6,1) - too close

[A's Pace]recommend to change a diff name to [A's Extra]
  1. 00:11:476 (5) - add nc
  2. 00:17:318 (6,1) - swap nc
  3. 00:22:213 (5) - add nc
  4. 00:27:266 (5) - add nc
  5. 00:49:055 (5) - remove nc
  6. 00:56:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - how about this?
  7. 01:00:108 (7) - add nc
  8. 01:00:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - remove (2) and fixed nc. it'll be better
  9. 01:02:318 (6,7) - too close
  10. 01:10:213 (3,4,5,6) - like this?
  11. 01:14:003 (5) - add nc
  12. 01:15:582 (3) - move to x:164 y:328 is better
  13. 01:20:318 (6) - add nc
  14. 01:26:003 (3,5,7) - add nc


honestly do you know where or how to place a hitsound lol
fine more quality modder to improve your mapset, good luck!
Topic Starter
Lasse

Mikkuri wrote:

from your queue~

[Light's Insane]
  1. 00:04:845 (5) - check your ai mod everytime you upload a map fixed
  2. 00:21:897 (4,1,2) - the distance is too close. strongly recommend to fix like this or move further away
    fixed
  3. 00:23:476 (1) - you should multiplier to 1.0x here not here 00:23:634 fixed
  4. 00:24:424 (5) - spacing too close it's 1.3x like the notes before in the same combo ??
  5. 00:31:055 (1,2,3) - why 0.5x changed
  6. 00:46:213 (1) - stack with 00:44:950 (1) - done
  7. 00:47:950 (4) - stack this with (3) done
  8. 00:54:740 (5) - remove nc done
  9. 01:00:108 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - what a random spacing lol changed
  10. 01:26:950 (6,1) - too close
changed


honestly do you know where or how to place a hitsound lol
fine more quality modder to improve your mapset, good luck!
I was tired and copied them from the Insane, I looked through it agai nand changed lots of hitsounding
Mikkuri

Lasse wrote:

Mikkuri wrote:

00:24:424 (5) - spacing too close it's 1.3x like the notes before in the same combo ?? sorry my mistake!
I mean here
00:21:898 (4,1,2) -
no kds this post
Topic Starter
Lasse
You may embed only 2 quotes within each other.
It's 3:40 here, so I'll check it tomorrow, thanks for clarifying :)
Avishay
Applied everything except the thing on 00:56:318 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -, as for the hitsounds, I know I can improve them a lot, I initially copied them from Lasse's diff but I got lazy and didn't modify them completely lol, I'll get it done tomorrow.

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Morbon
Hello, M4M here

[A's Pace]
  1. 00:49:055 (1) - remove NC?
  2. 01:11:003 (1) - ^, add here 01:11:161 (3)
  3. 00:07:687 (1) - you have only normal whistle here, but 00:08:950 (1,2) - here you have 2 normal hits, while music is the same. is it ok?
  4. 00:23:792 (2) - you have soft whistle here, you can add more of them, for example 00:24:424 (4) - here or 00:24:424 (4) - here
  5. 00:28:845 (3) - and here you don't have any hitsounds at all, while in part later (00:38:634 - 00:47:481 ) you have nice whistles
  6. 00:32:318 (1,2,3,1) - and i expected more hitsounds here
  7. 00:50:003 (1) - stack with 00:48:897 (4) and 00:50:318 (2) - make blanket with (1) ?
  8. 00:53:476 (8,9,10) - stack with 00:53:003 (4) ?
  9. 01:01:371 (1) - could be closer to the stream
  10. 01:27:740 (1) - very confusing, i broke combo here
    Very nice and challenging diff

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:11:634 (1) - can't see the point of NC
  2. 00:28:529 (2) - NC ?
  3. 00:39:266 (1) - remove, add 00:39:897 (3) - here ?
  4. 00:40:529 (1) - ^
  5. 01:08:318 (1) - ^
  6. 00:01:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this DS is a bit low, just a suggestion
  7. 00:08:318 (3,4) - better blanket?
  8. 00:19:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really a nice star, you can fix it by using "create polygon circles" option
  9. 00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think it's too close to the prev. slider
  10. 00:24:108 (4,5) - blanket?
  11. 00:25:372 (4,5) - and here i think it can be better
  12. 00:31:687 (3) - this form could be better
  13. 00:32:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close to the prev. slider
  14. 00:35:476 (5,1) - don't really like this forms
  15. 00:36:108 (1,2,3,4) - how about keeping same DS between 1-3 2-4 ?
  16. 00:40:529 (3,4,5,6) - they are too close i think, looking a bit ugly
  17. 00:43:371 (1) - stack end with 00:42:582 (2) ?
  18. 00:44:950 (1,2,3,4) - could be better diamond
  19. 00:51:740 (3,4) - could be better blanket i think
  20. 01:05:476 (3,4) - move this a bit lower
  21. 01:07:687 (1,2) - how about this form?
  22. 01:08:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close
  23. 01:08:950 (1,2,3,4) - same DS issue, but i think it's not bad here
  24. 01:12:740 (1,2,3,4) - ugh, could be better arc
  25. 01:17:476 (1) - stack with 01:16:213 (2) ? and move 01:18:108 (4) too
  26. 01:27:582 (2) - stack with the end of slider?

Good luck with map!
Akitoshi
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:11:792 (2) - 311|266 for balanced spacing between 00:11:634 (1,3) -
  2. 00:34:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the star pattern.
  3. 01:01:134 (6,7,8,1) - Stream spacing not balanced
  4. 01:27:582 (2) - Stack it properly in the tail of 01:27:740 (3) -
  5. 01:10:845 (1,2,3,4) - Remember that this is light insane, I don't hate it, but it's too much imo
  6. 00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Use DS for better stream pattern
  7. 00:48:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^


[A's Pace]
  1. dunno if I can mod it right
  2. 00:27:897 (5) - Fix this blanket with 00:28:213 (1) -
  3. 00:36:424 (1,1) - This one really needs NC?
  4. 00:41:161 (1) - heading upwards to better flow
  5. 01:02:634 (1,2) - maybe better with same slider shape (ofc the other one is rotated)
  6. 01:21:266 (1) - remove NC
  7. 01:27:424 (1) - Convert it to circles (pretty awkward)
enclosure
M4M from queue

Light Insane
00:19:055 (3) - Is dangerously low to being off the play field. Considering this isn't a problem in play mode, this isn't a major issue.
00:22:371 (1,2) - Spacing looks weird with 0.5x, almost as if the stream begins directly after the slider. 1.0x~ feels more natural.
00:35:792 (1) - This looks ugly imo.
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making this stream more even. The arc of it looks odd, but it plays fine.
01:01:213 (7) - The spacing of this within the stream isn't consistent with the others. 1-6 sit at 0.4x, while this is 0.35x and 0.22x. (8)->(1) is also 0.47x
01:12:424 (4) - The end of this slider has a really loud pop. Maybe it's possessed? Or maybe it's intended, I have no idea. It just comes out of nowhere.
As for any spacing issues, I didn't notice any beyond streams.

NC changes -completely subjective-
00:06:266 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:476 (3) - Remove NC
00:35:792 (1) - Remove NC


A's Pace
00:12:897 (3) - Leaving this to follow the previous rhythm leaves the time until 00:13:371 (1) - to feel a bit empty. Perhaps extending to 00:13:213 will help?
00:17:161 (5) - Maybe it's because I'm terrible at this or i just can't read fast enough but these feel like they come out of nowhere. Might just be me. (same comment for all rhythms like this throughout the song)
00:22:845 (1,8) and 00:22:845 (1,8) - streams just aren't reasonable. The first one is passable, but I think getting into 00:22:845 (1,8) - the spacing is just too high.
00:38:318 (6) - The use of 1/6 here doesn't fit the song. (6) is began almost on an empty beat, vocally. (End of the previous Yay! ;) )
00:43:371 (1) - ctrl+G? It may feel more natural for some. I can't play the jumps before it correctly to notice the difference, but it looks better.

NC changes -completely subjective-
Harder to spot any in this difficulty, as most NC's are used to show SV changes.
00:48:582 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to 00:48:739 (3)
01:11:003 (1) - Remove NC and Add NC to 01:11:161 (3) - This also helps with reading the stacked notes.
01:16:055 (5) - Add NC
01:17:634 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:740 (1) - Remove NC
Topic Starter
Lasse

Morbon wrote:

Hello, M4M here


[Light Insane]
  1. 00:11:634 (1) - can't see the point of NC removed
  2. 00:28:529 (2) - NC ? sure
  3. 00:39:266 (1) - remove, add 00:39:897 (3) - here ? sure
  4. 00:40:529 (1) - ^ sure
  5. 01:08:318 (1) - ^ sure
  6. 00:01:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this DS is a bit low, just a suggestion increased a bit
  7. 00:08:318 (3,4) - better blanket?done
  8. 00:19:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - not really a nice star, you can fix it by using "create polygon circles" option fixed
  9. 00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think it's too close to the prev. slider ds is fine
  10. 00:24:108 (4,5) - blanket? fixed
  11. 00:25:372 (4,5) - and here i think it can be better ^
  12. 00:31:687 (3) - this form could be better ^
  13. 00:32:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close to the prev. slider it's just an nc anti-jump
  14. 00:35:476 (5,1) - don't really like this forms they are fine
  15. 00:36:108 (1,2,3,4) - how about keeping same DS between 1-3 2-4 ? k
  16. 00:40:529 (3,4,5,6) - they are too close i think, looking a bit ugly fixed
  17. 00:43:371 (1) - stack end with 00:42:582 (2) ? ^
  18. 00:44:950 (1,2,3,4) - could be better diamond ^
  19. 00:51:740 (3,4) - could be better blanket i think ^
  20. 01:05:476 (3,4) - move this a bit lower ^
  21. 01:07:687 (1,2) - how about this form? nah
  22. 01:08:318 (1,2,3,4) - too close fixed
  23. 01:08:950 (1,2,3,4) - same DS issue, but i think it's not bad here chanegd a little bit
  24. 01:12:740 (1,2,3,4) - ugh, could be better arc fine as it is
  25. 01:17:476 (1) - stack with 01:16:213 (2) ? and move 01:18:108 (4) too nah, they are pretty far apart in time anyways
  26. 01:27:582 (2) - stack with the end of slider?sure

Good luck with map!
Topic Starter
Lasse

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

[Light Insane]
  1. 00:11:792 (2) - 311|266 for balanced spacing between 00:11:634 (1,3) - spacing is fine
  2. 00:34:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fix the star pattern. fixed
  3. 01:01:134 (6,7,8,1) - Stream spacing not balanced ^
  4. 01:27:582 (2) - Stack it properly in the tail of 01:27:740 (3) - ^
  5. 01:10:845 (1,2,3,4) - Remember that this is light insane, I don't hate it, but it's too much imo it might be a light insane, but it's still 4.4* and a lowly spaced 190bpm 4x kicksldier pattern should be fine
  6. 00:22:845 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Use DS for better stream pattern color=#BF4000]spacing is fine[/color]
  7. 00:48:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
Topic Starter
Lasse

enclosure wrote:

M4M from queue

Light Insane
00:19:055 (3) - Is dangerously low to being off the play field. Considering this isn't a problem in play mode, this isn't a major issue. I still got some space left to move it down, should be fine
00:22:371 (1,2) - Spacing looks weird with 0.5x, almost as if the stream begins directly after the slider. 1.0x~ feels more natural. made it a bit higher
00:35:792 (1) - This looks ugly imo. already changed
00:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making this stream more even. The arc of it looks odd, but it plays fine. changed
01:01:213 (7) - The spacing of this within the stream isn't consistent with the others. 1-6 sit at 0.4x, while this is 0.35x and 0.22x. (8)->(1) is also 0.47x fixed
01:12:424 (4) - The end of this slider has a really loud pop. Maybe it's possessed? Or maybe it's intended, I have no idea. It just comes out of nowhere. fixed
As for any spacing issues, I didn't notice any beyond streams.
Avishay
I will note here that I won't comment to NC and hitsounds changes, hitsounds because I've just redid them (using your suggestions fixed whatever needed), and NC because it seems kinda pointless to say yes / no, I did read everything tho..

Morbon wrote:

Hello, M4M here

[A's Pace]
  1. 00:49:055 (1) - remove NC?
  2. 01:11:003 (1) - ^, add here 01:11:161 (3)
  3. 00:07:687 (1) - you have only normal whistle here, but 00:08:950 (1,2) - here you have 2 normal hits, while music is the same. is it ok?
  4. 00:23:792 (2) - you have soft whistle here, you can add more of them, for example 00:24:424 (4) - here or 00:24:424 (4) - here
  5. 00:28:845 (3) - and here you don't have any hitsounds at all, while in part later (00:38:634 - 00:47:481 ) you have nice whistles
  6. 00:32:318 (1,2,3,1) - and i expected more hitsounds here
  7. 00:50:003 (1) - stack with 00:48:897 (4) and 00:50:318 (2) - make blanket with (1) ? Would look better indeed.
  8. 00:53:476 (8,9,10) - stack with 00:53:003 (4) ? They are stacked with 4 already?
  9. 01:01:371 (1) - could be closer to the stream I've decided to lower the spacing between the stream and the slider, high stream DS is enough.
  10. 01:27:740 (1) - very confusing, i broke combo here I like it as it is, I might change it soon.
    Very nice and challenging diff


Good luck with map!

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

[A's Pace]
  1. dunno if I can mod it right
  2. 00:27:897 (5) - Fix this blanket with 00:28:213 (1) - It's just fine?..
  3. 00:36:424 (1,1) - This one really needs NC?
  4. 00:41:161 (1) - heading upwards to better flow The current pattern flows great as well without being direct to the other slider.
  5. 01:02:634 (1,2) - maybe better with same slider shape (ofc the other one is rotated) Nothing wong neither with your suggestion, nor my pattern, and I prefer mine a bit more, so..
  6. 01:21:266 (1) - remove NC
  7. 01:27:424 (1) - Convert it to circles (pretty awkward) Nah, 2x slider is the best emphasizition I can give.

enclosure wrote:

M4M from queue

A's Pace
00:12:897 (3) - Leaving this to follow the previous rhythm leaves the time until 00:13:371 (1) - to feel a bit empty. Perhaps extending to 00:13:213 will help? I am following the vocals here, and extending the slider will create odd feeling, the current pattern is fine imo.
00:17:161 (5) - Maybe it's because I'm terrible at this or i just can't read fast enough but these feel like they come out of nowhere. Might just be me. (same comment for all rhythms like this throughout the song) It's fine.
00:22:845 (1,8) and 00:22:845 (1,8) - streams just aren't reasonable. The first one is passable, but I think getting into 00:22:845 (1,8) - the spacing is just too high. You are supposed to play this as a stream as a whole, not just doubles, if you do that it will play really nicely, and how come you mentioned this but not the slider before kiai time?
00:38:318 (6) - The use of 1/6 here doesn't fit the song. (6) is began almost on an empty beat, vocally. (End of the previous Yay! ;) )Not really following vocals here, but I feel like the 1/3 plays here really good, fits the random-ish background sounds.
00:43:371 (1) - ctrl+G? It may feel more natural for some. I can't play the jumps before it correctly to notice the difference, but it looks better. Current pattern plays better and flows better, also looks a bit better in my opinion, so I'll leave it as it is.

NC changes -completely subjective-
Harder to spot any in this difficulty, as most NC's are used to show SV changes.
00:48:582 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to 00:48:739 (3)
01:11:003 (1) - Remove NC and Add NC to 01:11:161 (3) - This also helps with reading the stacked notes.
01:16:055 (5) - Add NC
01:17:634 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:740 (1) - Remove NC
Thank you for your time!

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CptBlackBird
hi, mod as requested

[Light Insane]

00:16:529 (3,4,5) - these don't really play good, anything else would be better than just a straight line

00:22:371 (1,2) - blanket this

00:33:266 (1) - this shape isn't really necessary since it just makes the slider ugly in my opinion

00:58:529 (1) - I would use a double here

01:16:529 (4,5) - blanket


[Insane]

uh boy this diff

00:03:740 (4) - this slider looks ugly

00:06:266 (4) - ^

00:32:318 (2,3,4,5) - I would add finish or clap

00:46:213 (1,2) - blanket

00:58:529 (1,2) - bigger spacing

01:09:582 (1,3) - stack

01:23:161 (3,4) - blanket


[A's Pace]

I can say only one thing about this diff

The difficulty spread between the Insane and this diff is huge, the spacing is a lot bigger, the sv is a lot bigger, everything is a lot bigger
Topic Starter
Lasse

CptBlackBird wrote:

hi, mod as requested

[Light Insane]

00:16:529 (3,4,5) - these don't really play good, anything else would be better than just a straight line changed shape

00:22:371 (1,2) - blanket this nah, but I changed the shape

00:33:266 (1) - this shape isn't really necessary since it just makes the slider ugly in my opinion changed shape

00:58:529 (1) - I would use a double here nah

01:16:529 (4,5) - blanket fixed


[Insane]

uh boy this diff

00:03:740 (4) - this slider looks ugly changed

00:06:266 (4) - ^ changed

00:32:318 (2,3,4,5) - I would add finish or clap done

00:46:213 (1,2) - blanket changed shape

00:58:529 (1,2) - bigger spacing spaced the same as the ones afterwards, would feel weird

01:09:582 (1,3) - stack k

01:23:161 (3,4) - blanket fixed
the sv is a lot bigger
huh, it's 1.6 vs 1.96 while we are both using mostly 1.00~1.25~1,50 as multiplier

I already added Light Insane so I could make the Insane way harder (it was ~4.8 before adding a Light Insane), so spread should be fine...
Firis Mistlud
M4M

Insane
  • Found nothing, really


A's pace
  1. No custom color? :?
  2. 00:00:740 (1,2) - It's kinda overmapped, I would use only 1 slider or spinner on this one
  3. 00:07:687 (1,2) - I know you wanna emphasize the note at 00:07:687 (1) - but since 00:07:845 (2) - have no clap on it, i'd think you should put those jumps closer
  4. 00:07:687 (1) - Finish
  5. 00:08:950 (1,2) - same as 00:07:687 (1,2) -
  6. 00:08:950 (1) - Finish
  7. 00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - 2.0x spacing on 00:15:897 (1,2) - then suddenly 0.5x spacing on 00:16:213 (2,3) - then 1.0x on 00:16:213 (2,3,4) - ???? really? even you like it at least put 00:15:897 (1,2) - closer since it's hard to reach

  8. 00:17:161 (5,6) - Remove, no 1/8 notes where heard on this one
  9. 00:22:213 (1,2) - ^
  10. 00:22:529 (3,1,2) - since 00:22:845 (1,2) - has 0.5x (or 1.0x if you fix the stream as mentioned at the next mod) , i'd prefer to put the tail on 00:22:529 (3) - closer to 00:22:845 (1) - so it flows better
  11. 00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of stream technique will not work anymore as this kind of speed changes is confusing
  12. 00:29:792 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing pattern, replace 00:30:266 (6,7,8) - with zig zag pattern like 00:29:792 (3,4,5) -
  13. 00:37:529 (3) - same as 00:00:740 (1,2) -
  14. 00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - *sigh* It's confusing since most of the diff is 1/4, besides, i couldn't hear any sounds right there, remove.
  15. 00:51:740 (2,1) - There's nothing to emphasize, why put that far away?
  16. 00:58:845 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing
  17. 01:14:003 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  18. 01:17:003 (3) - Blanket? 01:16:845 (2) - Is already stacked so it's hard to read 01:17:003 (3) -
  19. 01:24:108 (1,2,3) - It's hard to reach, put closer

    In conclusion, It just hard to read and it has some kind of confusing, also, try to reduce amount of slider speed change as possible
Avishay

KuranteMelodii wrote:

M4M

Insane
  • Found nothing, really


A's pace
  1. No custom color? :?Oh, added.
  2. 00:00:740 (1,2) - It's kinda overmapped, I would use only 1 slider or spinner on this one Doesn't really matter imo.
  3. 00:07:687 (1,2) - I know you wanna emphasize the note at 00:07:687 (1) - but since 00:07:845 (2) - have no clap on it, i'd think you should put those jumps closer Just because I didn't put a clap doesn't mean I can't emphasize the note, it is not a regular note, I've even added a whistle.
  4. 00:07:687 (1) - Finish V
  5. 00:08:950 (1,2) - same as 00:07:687 (1,2) - Same.
  6. 00:08:950 (1) - Finish V
  7. 00:15:897 (1,2,3,4) - 2.0x spacing on 00:15:897 (1,2) - then suddenly 0.5x spacing on 00:16:213 (2,3) - then 1.0x on 00:16:213 (2,3,4) - ???? really? even you like it at least put 00:15:897 (1,2) - closer since it's hard to reach This is an Extra difficulty, the jumps are according to the "HEY" in the vocals, also this pattern is be visually appealing.

  8. 00:17:161 (5,6) - Remove, no 1/8 notes where heard on this one Emphasizes the vocals.
  9. 00:22:213 (1,2) - ^ Same
  10. 00:22:529 (3,1,2) - since 00:22:845 (1,2) - has 0.5x (or 1.0x if you fix the stream as mentioned at the next mod) , i'd prefer to put the tail on 00:22:529 (3) - closer to 00:22:845 (1) - so it flows better That's a weird statement and I don't think it is necessary.
  11. 00:22:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of stream technique will not work anymore as this kind of speed changes is confusing Egh come on, what do you want me to say to you? Get good?
  12. 00:29:792 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing pattern, replace 00:30:266 (6,7,8) - with zig zag pattern like 00:29:792 (3,4,5) - No, why would I prefer it?
  13. 00:37:529 (3) - same as 00:00:740 (1,2) - Same
  14. 00:38:161 (5,6,7,8) - *sigh* It's confusing since most of the diff is 1/4, besides, i couldn't hear any sounds right there, remove. I never had 1/4 at such spacings, and I think it goes just fine.
  15. 00:51:740 (2,1) - There's nothing to emphasize, why put that far away? You are right, changed.
  16. 00:58:845 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing What's there to fix?
  17. 01:14:003 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ?
  18. 01:17:003 (3) - Blanket? 01:16:845 (2) - Is already stacked so it's hard to read 01:17:003 (3) - No..
  19. 01:24:108 (1,2,3) - It's hard to reach, put closer I don't want them to overlap, it is just fine.

    In conclusion, It just hard to read and it has some kind of confusing, also, try to reduce amount of slider speed change as possible
It is an Extra difficulty, you didn't try to even understand any of my thoughts, I am much more free to do than I am in an Insane / Hard or whatever, some parts are hard to read / aim, because that's how they're supposed to be, but if you play them right, they play well and award you nicely.

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256,92,60266,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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149,290,68318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,216,68476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,24,68634,2,0,B|218:78|218:78|224:120|224:120|204:184,1,147.000005607605,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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388,356,70213,5,4,1:3:0:0:
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197,213,71003,1,8,3:0:0:0:
197,213,71082,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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392,188,71634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,312,71792,2,0,P|210:335|138:328,1,147.000005607605,8|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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332,64,72424,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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461,162,73371,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,364,73529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,73687,1,8,1:0:0:0:
372,224,73845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,376,74003,6,0,P|172:268|304:232,1,220.500008411408,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,217,74950,2,0,B|323:243|323:243|175:247,1,220.500008411408,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,75266,5,6,1:0:0:0:
176,164,75424,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,328,75582,1,8,1:0:0:0:
28,236,75740,2,0,B|24:76|-52:156|-48:216|100:188|112:100,1,220.500008411408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,304,76529,6,0,B|188:320|188:320|112:348,1,147.000005607605,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,76845,1,8,1:0:0:0:
145,335,77003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,360,77161,2,0,P|384:256|420:192,2,147.000005607605,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,240,77634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,88,77792,5,8,1:0:0:0:
281,122,77950,2,0,P|177:118|113:82,2,147.000005607605,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,190,78424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,13,78582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,236,78740,1,2,0:1:0:0:
72,53,78897,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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144,324,83634,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Mortem
hi

Easy:
• 00:01:529 (1) - This note is useless in Easy difficulty. Players may have problem to click on that in time, since there isn't strong beat for it.
• 00:17:161 (7,1) - Blanket seems to be off.
• 00:18:424 (1,3) - It's just a minor thing, but I guess if you copy the second mentioned slider and replace the first one, it would look neat + flow would be better.
• 00:22:529 (3,4) - Except these two circles put here a slider. Since Easy players would have problems with it.
• 00:23:476 (1,2) - Same scenario as in 00:18:424 (1,3) - . Believe or not, these two sliders even though they are much alike, they are not the same.
• 00:28:213 (3) - Move it at x:268 y:84 for better flow.
• 00:29:792 (1,1) - Remove new combos due to inconsistency.
• 00:33:897 (2,4) - I'm not actually fan of this slider design. It's just my thing, but I highly suggest to improve the design of these sliders.
• 00:52:529 (6,1) - Blanket seems to be little bit off.
• 00:55:055 (1) - Remove NC. Due to inconsistency.

Normal:
• 00:01:687 (1,2,3) - Again as in Easy difficulty. It's not because it's hard to play, no. It's because it doesn't follow anything, even vocals. If I were you, I would a spinner here.
• 00:07:687 (6) - New combo please //inconsistency.
• 00:17:792 (4) - Remove reverse arrow and put a note on a downbeat. It's more suitable.
• 00:21:582 (2,1) - You could stack the beginning of the slider (2) with the circle.
• 00:39:266 (3,1) - Blanket could be improved.
• 00:40:529 (3,1) - ^
• 01:04:529 (2,3) - ^
• 01:08:318 (3) - Remove one reverse arrow. Suits way more better and players will have time to click on 01:08:950 (1) - .
• 01:11:792 (2,3) - This blanket seems to be little bit off.
• 01:18:423 (3) - Same as 01:08:318 (3) - .
• 01:23:792 (4,1) - Blanket could be improved.
• 01:24:108 (1,2) - ^

Hard:
• 00:41:161 (1,2) - Keep the distance snap same.

Other diffs seems fine to me.
Good Luck!
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