Bakari wrote:

think of it. just for a minute.

[General]

1. Add TLI to the tags, that's the shortened name of the artist. Do people even use that name? Well, I'll add it next update
2. You have'nt set a preview point yet. Probably pick one 01:08:960 - here.
3. No kiai times? I am sure that the song could only benefit, if you used the part from 01:08:960 till 01:20:388 as the kiai. Probably you could also add two or three kiais in the final part of the song. It would match the music well.

[Normal]

1. Try Approach Rate 4? Feels like a better match for the rhythm and slider velocity you have picked.
2. 00:29:317 (1,3) - since Normal is the easiest difficulty here, I would recommend avoiding this kind of stacks.
   Note: 00:45:031 (3,1) - same would apply to similar patterns. Nah, they are do-able by newcomers: I always like to tease new players with not super-easy difficulties
3. 00:48:603 (1) - minor - if you move it to the left a bit, it will form a perfect triangle. looks pretty, doesn't it?
4. 01:00:031 (1,2,3) - 01:01:460 (1) - these are the patterns that only appear once and can stress beginners in one way or another. Why not use a 1/2 slider instead of the stacked triplet? And why not divide 01:01:460 (1) - into a circle and a 1/1 slider with a reverse? Same as the first suggestion about the stacks: I know they are not consistent and randomly appears throughout the diff, but it's a bit of variety added to the map
5. 01:54:674 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I would rather map the part with Akon's vocals since they are much stronger and more connected to the title/core idea of the song. I suppose it's a personal choice, I actually feel the opposite since Akon's part is all
   
   I feel like a few stacks were confusing, as well as that your comboing felt sort of incosistent, just compare 02:06:103 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - these two combos, for example. It is a solid difficulty that could look just a bit neater.

[BD's Hard]

1. 00:16:460 - 00:19:317 - not really sure about having these beats mapped with reverses. They feel strong enough to have the beginning of a slider on them. You can try more 1/2 sliders or circles example.
   I personaklly recommend circles as they would contrast with the previous rhythm and work well with the beats.
2. 00:21:460 - since the vocals play somewhere around this part, the 00:21:103 (2) and 00:21:817 (3) - sliders feel quite off.
3. 00:56:638 (2) - can we mute the sliderslide, please? It really feels forced here.
4. 00:59:496 (8,9) - you had such an amazing flow, keep things dynamic and unstack these two?
5. 01:44:674 (5,6,7) - the switch from vocals to background instruments here felt a bit artificial. How about centering the rhythm around vocals here? example
6. 01:54:317 (5,6) - that can be pretty hard to get right, especially if we consider that this difficulty is meant to be a bridge between Normal and Insane. Try to use two 1/4 sliders instead?
   
   It felt so good

[Collab]
Collab does not really indicate the actual difficulty level. Why not name it Collab Insane or come up with a custom difficulty name instead?

1. 00:21:817 (5) - is a very weak beat, why not map (4) with a 1/2 slider instead? Or just remove (5) and arrange objects? Either way both drums and the vocals will receive more emphasis.
2. 00:22:174 (1,2,3) - (3) feels like a part of this jumpy pattern, giving it some jump would match the vocals and feel pretty nice to play. rough example
3. 00:42:531 (4,5) - 01:41:103 (3,4) - usually 1/4s use much lower spacing, so these two can get pretty confusing.
   Note: 01:58:246 (3,1) - slider to slider gaps like this are easier to read and are certainly okay though.
4. 02:31:103 (3,4) - try higher spacing, so that the vocals mapped with the circle get some more emphasis?
5. 02:38:424 (6,7) - the jump feels way too big and counter-intuitive. Trry lowering the spacing for better readability? Mmm, waiting for other opinions, it worked fine until now
   Note: 02:38:960 (1,2) - same here. Plus, the next beat on 02:39:674 (1) - doesn't get any spacing emphasis when compared with the previous patterns. ^
   
   That was pretty cool.

Just a few things here and there, I enjoyed the set.

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Best of luck!