yf_bmp wrote:

先听一遍音效

[I]
有些地方让我想起了ZZH

01:17:508 (5) - 漏了音效?嗯
这种style 感觉除了nazi没啥好说.

[H]
01:18:499 - Break拉到白线好
一样..

[N]
Nothing here

需要nazi摸再说吧。可以先不用给KD

moonlightleaf wrote:

M4M : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/739578&m=0

[Normal]

00:30:956 (1,3) - blanket?不用

00:30:390 (3,3) - 直接copy吧,这个没叠好已经是了

00:45:955 (3) - 旋转45°的样子感觉好看一点

00:46:521 (4,2) - 叠好好

00:49:917 (2,1) - ^好

01:44:251 (2,1) - ^好

01:18:499 (1) - ctrl+g+h的样子顺flow吧

01:23:027 (1) - 旋转60°的样子

01:25:291 (1) - ctrl+h 丢(168,192)

02:08:022 (4) - xy都-1好

[Hard]

01:35:195 (5,8) - overlap

01:35:761 (6,7,8) - 旋转13°,然后全选把8对齐5尾部故意的

02:34:907 (6) - (220,240)

03:04:621 (6,4) - 叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗

[Insane]

00:17:938 (3,4,5,6) - 我卡手,

00:31:239 (2) - xy都+1

00:46:379 (4) - 貌似要删

00:52:463 (4) - y+1

00:58:053 (7) - 貌似并没有8分拍

01:07:108 (8) - ^

00:59:397 (5) - 考虑(316,340)消除overlap?

02:09:296 (4) - y-1

02:17:927 (2) - 建议(376,92) 6-7-2有弧度而且消除overlap

02:30:662 (4) - 叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗叠吗

02:30:803 (5) - ^

02:35:331 (8) - (172,272)

02:36:888 (5) - x-1
没改的都是些不用改的，没影响
末尾加不加转盘啊

Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. 弄個歌詞SB啊，圖的好感度馬上升幾倍

[Normal]

1. 02:06:607 (2,3) - blanket一下吧 这么远怎么包
   
   03:04:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不是正三角有點難受，我直接上代碼了，取代一下就好 是正三角
   
   SPOILER

   335,255,184904,5,8,1:2:0:0:
   146,293,185470,1,8,1:2:0:0:
   209,111,186036,1,8,1:0:0:0:
   273,182,186319,1,2,1:0:0:0:
   178,200,186602,1,2,1:0:0:0:

[Hard]

1. 03:06:036 (3,4,5) - 弄成這樣，把5疊到2上會好看點 可以
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:23:032 (5) - 弄彎的話flow會好點 刚开始是弯的，照顾大局就直了
   
   00:33:220 (1) - 弄成這樣的感覺 并不好看
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:03:642 (5,1) - 同樣弄彎 好
   
   02:16:937 (7) - 這個藍線滑條有點違和，而且02:17:078 - 也漏掉了，所以把滑條刪掉02:17:078 - 放個圈就好了 下意识的这样，感觉应该这样

沒影響的我都不說了，Good Luck

Crystal wrote:

Hi

[Insane]
00:52:746 (5) - 这个折返有点危险 被前面的3挡住了 刚好没挡住吧
01:26:989 - 这个音给个circle吧 重音在滑条尾不太舒服 4拍算弱拍
01:53:873 (6) - 形状感觉不太好看 试试这样的 *http://puu.sh/jb003/2e931d9fda.jpg 好
01:55:005 (2) - ^好
02:11:701 (4) - 104|192? 这样的间距我以为和前面相距4分拍 ar这么高不会看错的
02:12:267 - circle好
02:44:387 (8) - 300|40? 现在这个和7的位置看起来有点难看 和前面对应的
03:04:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弄成五角星形状? 本来就是
高SV我好兴奋啊

[Hard]
00:15:674 (2,3) - 这个overlap有点丑 考虑这样的 *http://puu.sh/jb0ig/7817b311db.jpg 好
01:18:074 (6) - *http://puu.sh/jb0ne/86b75f4c3a.jpg insane里那个长白线都有finish 为啥hard直接漏掉了节奏没那样下而已
01:46:232 (2,3) - 和前面说的一样 好
02:03:777 (1,2) - 这间距我以为是4分 把2放远一点好
02:06:041 (1,2) - 为啥这个的间距是1.2 弄成这样的梯形好看一点 *http://puu.sh/jb0ua/02b7bb21e6.jpg
02:07:739 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
03:03:206 (2,3) - 也弄成一个折返滑条吧

[Normal]
00:17:372 (1) - 红锚点不在tick上 意味着滑条不是完全中心对称的 微调一下
00:22:466 (3) - ^ 后面还有一些不说了
02:24:153 (3,4) - 4直接用3复制粘贴的版本就好

高sv真的太爽了
good luck!

Karen wrote:

General
combo2和4颜色有点接近换了下位置

Normal
01:25:291 (1) - 蓝线结束太纠结了，换成这样好吧

SPOILER

Insane
00:52:322 (3,5) - 可能有点危险3消失之后5的箭头才出现的，并没有遮挡箭头

好

Xinely wrote:

as requested.. gonna placeholder for now and check after my exams in next week

• 
  General
  

1. http://puu.sh/kSfih.jpg so change that and move "green lights" in tags

• 
  Normal
  

1. 00:19:636 - hmm imo finish sounds a bit loud here, as the music only a drum i think normal-hitwhistle would be better for this time (if you fix so fix for hard and Insane too)
2. 00:23:598 (5) - a bit nazi but flow would be better when you pointed out the tail to next head https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3844965
3. 00:40:012 (1) - normal finish in here sounds quite loud and bad imo because inconsistency with 00:35:484 (1) - , i would prefer remove the finish
4. 00:45:389 - 00:45:955 - 00:48:219 - 01:38:874 - 01:39:723 - 01:40:289 - these finishes should be removed too imo because the music is very calm when finishes sound so loud. not match for me
5. 00:59:821 (5) - same as 00:23:598 (5) -
6. 01:20:763 (1) - 0,9x is consistency spacing here
7. 02:26:417 (5,1) - swap nc for consistency

• 
  Hard
  

1. 01:26:706 (4) - both head and tail have strong music so i think divide this slider into 2 circles with normal spacing would be great to play

• 
  Insane
  

1. 02:30:945 - i and asked someone agreed if this 1,25x SV is too fast and not suitable to play in this relax song.. i really suggest to use 1,1x instead in case for consistency with Hard's SV too but our real problem is doesnt match with song
2. 00:39:163 (5) - nazi but 1,49x spacing here looks inconsistency both from spacing calculate or design don't mind the small gap
3. 00:46:945 - 00:47:794 - will kill your pattern but i have to say if they are overmapped because no sound
4. 00:58:053 (7) - 01:07:108 (8) - 01:52:388 (7) - 02:01:443 (8) - 02:37:666 (8) - 02:46:722 (9) - those 1/8 are overmapped and dont play well for this song, MUST be removed
5. 01:15:527 (8) - this music is weak so for me it doesnt fit with jump circle like this. i would suggest to remove and make 01:15:244 (7) - becomes slider repeat
6. 01:25:291 (1) - sad to say but 01:25:432 - has no sound so overmapped (just map like 01:26:140 (3) - for my suggestion ) there is a guitar
7. 03:02:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are kinda hard imo for relax music like this.. hope at least you can reduce the jumps

call me back after fixing those red lines

Karen wrote:

Normal里02:28:681 (3) - 删了body上的whistle？而且，Tick rate 1吧

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