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Stefanie Sun - Lv Guang

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liangv587
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月31日 at 7:14:33

Artist: Stefanie Sun
Title: Lv Guang
Tags: green lights yan zi 绿光 孙燕姿 moonlightleaf
BPM: 106.01
Filesize: 6233kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.88 stars, 377 notes)
  2. Insane (3.99 stars, 495 notes)
  3. Normal (1.92 stars, 197 notes)


Download: Stefanie Sun - Lv Guang
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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孙燕姿 - 绿光
storyboard by moonlightleaf
TtmnZk
first,竟然没人抢沙发
Heterozygous_old
看上去insane做得有点苗头了
我就说两个地方
一个是00:57:994这边的1/8有点唐突,去掉或者前后也加点照应的1/8可能会好点
再一个是01:09:172开始的rap部分推荐用简单硬朗一点的摆法,比如几何跳、对称流之类用在这部分都不错
美丽
听见这歌就想起来天国的香蕉timing教程(
乃做好了我大概会正经摸一下_(:з」∠)_
Narcissu
滑條圖就算順手也沒有pp .-.

BG中槍,這鏡頭為什麼不能再下面一點我想看腿哇
F D Flourite
随便水水

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有点奇怪,一开始你居然是跟vocal的
  2. 00:38:738 (4) - 对于我来说这个note多余了,就和01:33:214 (5,6) - 一样
  3. 00:58:689 (2) - 前后距离是否需要斟酌一下?
  4. 01:00:104 (8) - 前后跳点不对啊
  5. 01:25:291 (1,2) - 滑条头的那个重音觉得还是要用长滑条才有感觉
  6. 01:54:439 (8) - 跳点错了,音乐应该是后面跳啊


挺赞的~
cmn_891127
[Insane]
01:06:330 (5,6) - 我觉得这个距离是都点误导的
01:29:535 (6) - 这个有点破坏安静的感觉,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414122
02:01:372 (7,8,1) - 这种三连,我觉得音量都有点大
03:03:206 (4,5) - 我觉得还是合并成一个长条比较好

[Hard]
00:30:107 (4,1) - 我不太喜欢这种组合的弧度,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414130
01:44:251 (2,3,4) - slider速度慢慢增加?要不最后一个就太突兀了
02:26:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 其实我觉得这几个都是先note后slider比较好
Kuki
M4M 8-)

[Normal (Mostly Distance Snap fixes)]

00:23:598 (5) - X=477 Y=148
00:24:164 (1) - X=426 Y=355
00:28:126 (3) - X=272 Y=124
00:32:371 (2) - X=353 Y=74
00:33:220 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:35:484 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:37:748 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:36:333 (2) - X=377 Y=181
00:38:597 (2) - X=165 Y=23
00:43:125 (2) - X=125 Y=131
00:46:521 (4) - X=297 Y=258
I have no other problems with this difficulty, try to just fix all DS to 0.8 if you want to make the set perfect, otherwise do not worry about doing it :D

[Hard]
00:46:521 (6) - Why not place at X=471 Y=179?
01:54:722 (1) - Perhaps place at X=294 Y=334 to make a small triangle.
02:48:773 (7) - Perhaps place around X=180 Y=344 to make a triangle here.
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=2422 Y=148 to make Distance Snap perfect.

[Insane]
00:57:982 (6) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:01:372 (7,8) - ^
02:05:475 (4,5,1) - Fix triangle with (5) Sliderend, (1) and (4).
02:31:228 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:37:595 (7,8) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:46:650 (8,9) - ^
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=254 Y=192 perhaps? It's not very emphasised to do a cross screen jump, and if you want to keep it symmetrical I strongly suggest placing it here instead.

[Good luck with rank! 8-)]
Topic Starter
liangv587

F D Flourite wrote:

随便水水

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有点奇怪,一开始你居然是跟vocal的
  2. 00:38:738 (4) - 对于我来说这个note多余了,就和01:33:214 (5,6) - 一样
  3. 00:58:689 (2) - 前后距离是否需要斟酌一下?
  4. 01:00:104 (8) - 前后跳点不对啊
  5. 01:25:291 (1,2) - 滑条头的那个重音觉得还是要用长滑条才有感觉
  6. 01:54:439 (8) - 跳点错了,音乐应该是后面跳啊

其他的没什么必要改了
挺赞的~
谢摸

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Insane]
01:06:330 (5,6) - 我觉得这个距离是都点误导的没问题的
01:29:535 (6) - 这个有点破坏安静的感觉,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414122并不喜欢长白线结尾FBF00]并不喜欢长白线结尾[/color]
02:01:372 (7,8,1) - 这种三连,我觉得音量都有点大改了第二连r=#00BF00]改了第二连[/color]
03:03:206 (4,5) - 我觉得还是合并成一个长条比较好我还是坚持r=#008000]我还是坚持[/color]

[Hard]
00:30:107 (4,1) - 我不太喜欢这种组合的弧度,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3414130旋转了下
01:44:251 (2,3,4) - slider速度慢慢增加?要不最后一个就太突兀了加了0.9
02:26:417 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 其实我觉得这几个都是先note后slider比较好
谢摸

Kuki wrote:

M4M 8-)

[Normal (Mostly Distance Snap fixes)]

00:23:598 (5) - X=477 Y=148
00:24:164 (1) - X=426 Y=355
00:28:126 (3) - X=272 Y=124
00:32:371 (2) - X=353 Y=74
00:33:220 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:35:484 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:37:748 (1) - X=314 Y=263
00:36:333 (2) - X=377 Y=181
00:38:597 (2) - X=165 Y=23
00:43:125 (2) - X=125 Y=131
00:46:521 (4) - X=297 Y=258
I have no other problems with this difficulty, try to just fix all DS to 0.8 if you want to make the set perfect, otherwise do not worry about doing it :D
don't mind the micro distance
[Hard]
00:46:521 (6) - Why not place at X=471 Y=179?
01:54:722 (1) - Perhaps place at X=294 Y=334 to make a small triangle.ok
02:48:773 (7) - Perhaps place around X=180 Y=344 to make a triangle here.
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=2422 Y=148 to make Distance Snap perfect.ok

[Insane]
00:57:982 (6) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:01:372 (7,8) - ^
02:05:475 (4,5,1) - Fix triangle with (5) Sliderend, (1) and (4).
02:31:228 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:37:595 (7,8) - Mapped to nothing and starts on a blue tick. Remove or change to one note on the blue tick.
02:46:650 (8,9) - ^
03:06:319 (4) - Move to X=254 Y=192 perhaps? It's not very emphasised to do a cross screen jump, and if you want to keep it symmetrical I strongly suggest placing it here instead.no, it's good now

[Good luck with rank! 8-)]
thanks for modding
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