Wakeshima Kanon - Foul Play ni Kurari [OsuMania] · forum

AJIekceu

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AJIekceu 2015-07-25T05:07:49+00:00

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[Dark's NM]
00:09:308 (9308|2,9492|1,9676|0,9860|1,10044|2,10228|3,10412|0) - преобразовать, может? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437846
00:35:344 - может, добавить ноту или ЛН в первую колонку? Как по мне, явно не хватает чего-то
00:37:552 (37552|2) - почему здесь нота? Звук сильнее не стал, ~~ухади~~ удали

[HD]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437756 Ты уверен, что вот это вот все нужно? Играбельно и все такое, но музыке нисколько не соответствует. Под музыку выходит вот так вот https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437763 . Впрочем, я поехавший на полном соответствии музыке, так что сам решай
00:23:756 - ноту не потерял? в 3 колонке
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437773 Вот как-то аналогично первому случаю. Я слышу только такое - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437768.
00:49:700 (49700|0,49792|2,49884|0,49976|2,50068|1,50160|3,50252|1,50344|2) - здесь у меня идей вообще нет, кроме как ЛНов напихать
01:02:215 - мне кажется, не хватает ноты, сильный звук
01:04:056 - либо 2, либо 3
01:05:528 - в 0

Такой вот минимод. Надеюсь, хоть чем-то да помогу

Лови кудоску и удачи

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-07-25T13:04:04+00:00

AJIekceu wrote:
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Тыц
[HD]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437756 Ты уверен, что вот это вот все нужно? Играбельно и все такое, но музыке нисколько не соответствует. Под музыку выходит вот так вот https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437763 . Впрочем, я поехавший на полном соответствии музыке, так что сам решай ох, сложный момент, но исправил
00:23:756 - ноту не потерял? в 3 колонке ой, потерялась нота
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437773 Вот как-то аналогично первому случаю. Я слышу только такое - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437768. по своему чутка сделал
00:49:700 (49700|0,49792|2,49884|0,49976|2,50068|1,50160|3,50252|1,50344|2) - здесь у меня идей вообще нет, кроме как ЛНов напихать не не не, тут все в порядке
01:02:215 - мне кажется, не хватает ноты, сильный звук хсы сбили с толку?
01:04:056 - либо 2, либо 3 ниет
01:05:528 - в 0 ниет

Такой вот минимод. Надеюсь, хоть чем-то да помогу

Лови кудоску и удачи

Спасибо за звездочку и полезный мод <3

DarkSider2442

220 posts

Joined October 2011

DarkSider2442 2015-07-25T13:08:27+00:00

AJIekceu wrote:
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[Dark's NM]
00:09:308 (9308|2,9492|1,9676|0,9860|1,10044|2,10228|3,10412|0) - преобразовать, может? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3437846 Хорошая идея, переделал
00:35:344 - может, добавить ноту или ЛН в первую колонку? Как по мне, явно не хватает чего-то Добавил ноту
00:37:552 (37552|2) - почему здесь нота? Звук сильнее не стал, ~~ухади~~ удали Тут барабан или что-то типа того. Послушай внимательней, например тут 00:35:712 (35712|3,35712|2,36816|1,36816|0) - по две ноты как раз по этому звуку

Такой вот минимод. Надеюсь, хоть чем-то да помогу

Лови кудоску и удачи

Спасибо!

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-07-25T13:15:25+00:00

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-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-07-26T20:17:26+00:00

O!m mod

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|0|1|2|3|

General

Check Widescreen support on HD

Dark's NM

00:08:388 (8388|2) - I think that you should move to |3| because 00:07:651 (7651|3,7836|2) - and 00:08:020 (8020|0,8204|1) - have the same sound and you have a high pitch at 00:08:388 -
00:37:552 - why double note here? there is no reason
00:41:970 (41970|3) - move to |0| and 00:42:154 (42154|0) - move to |2|
00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - following your previous patterns you should press Ctrl+G, stairs are ok with 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - but 00:43:626 (43626|3) - is not good with stairs
00:48:964 - high pitch, what about to add a note at |0|
00:50:436 - omg 4 notes at NM? I recommend you to delete one, 00:49:700 (49700|1) - this slider is ok but what are you follwing with 00:49:332 (49332|3) - voice? to avoid 4 notes you should delete 00:49:332 (49332|3) - furthermore a little break is Ok here, (like HD imo) or you can add a note at 00:49:332 - to follow voice
01:00:927 - you miss a note here?
01:02:215 - 4 notes again...
00:11:148 (11148|3) - remove clap, clap should be at 00:10:964 (10964|2) -

HD

00:19:707 - why you didn't add a note here? same sound as 00:19:247 (19247|1,19339|2,19431|3) -
01:13:718 - you miss a note here
01:23:381 (83381|1) - delete this because 4 notes looks messy and to keep consistency with next pattern 01:24:853 - 01:26:326 - 01:27:062 - ... if you delete don't forget to add clap at 01:23:381 (83381|0) -
I think that finish is better than clap at 00:02:130 (2130|2) -
00:02:866 (2866|0) - same as above

Best of Luck Shana-nyan :3 ~~

DarkSider2442

220 posts

Joined October 2011

DarkSider2442 2015-07-26T23:39:35+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
O!m mod

About

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Dark's NM

00:08:388 (8388|2) - I think that you should move to |3| because 00:07:651 (7651|3,7836|2) - and 00:08:020 (8020|0,8204|1) - have the same sound and you have a high pitch at 00:08:388 -
00:37:552 - why double note here? there is no reason
00:41:970 (41970|3) - move to |0| and 00:42:154 (42154|0) - move to |2|
00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - following your previous patterns you should press Ctrl+G, stairs are ok with 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - but 00:43:626 (43626|3) - is not good with stairs I did a little differently
00:48:964 - high pitch, what about to add a note at |0|
00:50:436 - omg 4 notes at NM? I recommend you to delete one, 00:49:700 (49700|1) - this slider is ok but what are you follwing with 00:49:332 (49332|3) - voice? to avoid 4 notes you should delete 00:49:332 (49332|3) - furthermore a little break is Ok here, (like HD imo) or you can add a note at 00:49:332 - to follow voice Here quiet long sound, but I decided to remove it 00:49:332 (49332|3) -
01:00:927 - you miss a note here? Fixed
01:02:215 - 4 notes again...
00:11:148 (11148|3) - remove clap, clap should be at 00:10:964 (10964|2) - Fixed

Best of Luck Shana-nyan :3 ~~

Thanks!

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Deep Sea

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Topic Starter

Deep Sea 2015-07-27T07:27:28+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
O!m mod

About

|0|1|2|3|

General

Check Widescreen support on HD

Dark's NM

00:08:388 (8388|2) - I think that you should move to |3| because 00:07:651 (7651|3,7836|2) - and 00:08:020 (8020|0,8204|1) - have the same sound and you have a high pitch at 00:08:388 -
00:37:552 - why double note here? there is no reason
00:41:970 (41970|3) - move to |0| and 00:42:154 (42154|0) - move to |2|
00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - following your previous patterns you should press Ctrl+G, stairs are ok with 00:43:810 (43810|2,43995|1,44179|0) - but 00:43:626 (43626|3) - is not good with stairs
00:48:964 - high pitch, what about to add a note at |0|
00:50:436 - omg 4 notes at NM? I recommend you to delete one, 00:49:700 (49700|1) - this slider is ok but what are you follwing with 00:49:332 (49332|3) - voice? to avoid 4 notes you should delete 00:49:332 (49332|3) - furthermore a little break is Ok here, (like HD imo) or you can add a note at 00:49:332 - to follow voice
01:00:927 - you miss a note here?
01:02:215 - 4 notes again...
00:11:148 (11148|3) - remove clap, clap should be at 00:10:964 (10964|2) -

HD

00:19:707 - why you didn't add a note here? same sound as 00:19:247 (19247|1,19339|2,19431|3) -
01:13:718 - you miss a note here
01:23:381 (83381|1) - delete this because 4 notes looks messy and to keep consistency with next pattern 01:24:853 - 01:26:326 - 01:27:062 - ... if you delete don't forget to add clap at 01:23:381 (83381|0) -
I think that finish is better than clap at 00:02:130 (2130|2) -
00:02:866 (2866|0) - same as above

Best of Luck Shana-nyan :3 ~~

Thanks :3
All fixed

Akasha-

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2013

Akasha- 2015-07-29T12:18:43+00:00

stuff

2015-07-29 18:00 Kuo Kyoka: hi, do you want to irc now?
2015-07-29 18:01 [Shana Lesus]: Hi Kuo
2015-07-29 18:01 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: i don't really sure about the metadata
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: Artist should be: Wakeshima Kanon
2015-07-29 18:02 [Shana Lesus]: http://www.amazon.com/Kanon-Wakeshima-Kurari-Meikyuu-10003-44853/dp/B008S667XC hm
2015-07-29 18:03 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2015-07-29 18:03 [Shana Lesus]: i change artist
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: amazon didn't official
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: let me tries
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: i know Kuo
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: sorry
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: don't worry ;w;
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: http://kanonwakeshima.wikia.com/wiki/Kanon_Wakeshima_Wiki
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: mmmm
2015-07-29 18:06 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/309960 lastest ranked
2015-07-29 18:07 Kuo Kyoka: i have no idea
2015-07-29 18:07 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:07 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:07 Kuo Kyoka: http://whv-amusic.com/wakeshimakanon/
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: maybe just change back to wakeshima kanon
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: i will ask QAT later
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/737815 Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [Dark's NM]]
2015-07-29 18:09 [Shana Lesus]: i set Wakeshima Kanon
2015-07-29 18:10 [Shana Lesus]: it is right
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: are you allowed to fix Dark's diff?
2015-07-29 18:10 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:762 (1762|3,2498|1,3234|1) - remove those
2015-07-29 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: it's not strong cymbol sound as 00:02:130 (2130|2,2130|3,2866|3,2866|2) - 
2015-07-29 18:11 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2015-07-29 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:04:707 (4707|2,4891|1,5075|3,5259|0) - change back to normal notes
2015-07-29 18:12 Kuo Kyoka: it's not fit with long note
2015-07-29 18:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:10:412 - remove this note on here, have a little break is much comfortable
2015-07-29 18:12 [Shana Lesus]: changed
2015-07-29 18:13 [Shana Lesus]: no >< sorry
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:032 - http://puu.sh/jhiuB/e1f6454a0e.jpgsuggestion
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:952 - have a long note on here for the sound as 00:24:584 (24584|3) -  too
2015-07-29 18:15 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:16 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:035 - you could add a note on 1, i do the bpm change on here so it's more accuracy to add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:16 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:16 Kuo Kyoka: for the slow changes from bpm, i suggest to add sv change to minus that slow
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: hmmm
2015-07-29 18:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:30:842 - here is 1.05
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: 00:31:295 - 00:40:129 -
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: ?
2015-07-29 18:18 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:035 - and here is 1,42
2015-07-29 18:18 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: yay
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: fine
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: thanks Kuo <3
2015-07-29 18:19 Kuo Kyoka: np ~ <3
2015-07-29 18:19 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:853 (54853|1) - i guess just remove this one, so hard to play on here
2015-07-29 18:21 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:301 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457650
2015-07-29 18:21 [Shana Lesus]: rearranged
2015-07-29 18:21 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:22 Kuo Kyoka: 01:00:007 - if he follow the sound like as 00:59:271 - so better to have a note on 4 01:00:007 - here too
2015-07-29 18:24 [Shana Lesus]: 00:58:903 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457660
2015-07-29 18:25 Kuo Kyoka: you remove the note?
2015-07-29 18:26 [Shana Lesus]: you mean that you want to add notes?
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: yah
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: if you remove
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: you must remove from here 00:57:062 - 
2015-07-29 18:28 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457669 better
2015-07-29 18:28 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:688 - sound not strong enough for two notes
2015-07-29 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:05:160 - 01:05:896 - 
2015-07-29 18:30 [Shana Lesus]: What do you think about it ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457675
2015-07-29 18:31 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2015-07-29 18:31 Kuo Kyoka: 00:59:271 - maybe just keep the original for the GD-er and add a note on 4 http://puu.sh/jhjl5/a5f90df71c.jpg
2015-07-29 18:31 Kuo Kyoka: 01:13:995 (73995|2,74731|2,75467|1) - same reason as begin
2015-07-29 18:32 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:700 - add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:32 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:884 (79884|1,80620|3,81356|1) - remove
2015-07-29 18:33 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:33 Kuo Kyoka: 01:23:933 (83933|3) - this long note is weird
2015-07-29 18:34 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/jhjtJ/9712830c35.png
2015-07-29 18:35 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:35 [Shana Lesus]: nice
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:29:271 (89271|1) - remove this, follow the 01:29:087 (89087|2) - is enough
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:903 (88903|0) - move to 2 for pattern
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: that's it
2015-07-29 18:36 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:36 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:36 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/737816 Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [HD]]
2015-07-29 18:37 [Shana Lesus]: ready :3
2015-07-29 18:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:148 (1148|1) - support to be on 00:01:087 - 
2015-07-29 18:39 Kuo Kyoka: 1/6
2015-07-29 18:40 [Shana Lesus]: i hate this moment xD
2015-07-29 18:41 [Shana Lesus]: also
2015-07-29 18:41 [Shana Lesus]: 00:30:842 - i set all sv
2015-07-29 18:41 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: 00:04:707 (4707|2,4891|0,5075|3,5259|1) - same reason on normal
2015-07-29 18:45 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457717
2015-07-29 18:45 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:45 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:651 - 00:23:020 - add note?
2015-07-29 18:46 [Shana Lesus]: no :3
2015-07-29 18:46 Kuo Kyoka: why, it's for voice, more comfortable sound for them
2015-07-29 18:48 Kuo Kyoka:  00:31:035 - add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:49 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:39:117 (39117|3,39209|2,39301|1,39393|3,39393|0,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|2,39822|1,39883|0,39945|1,40006|2,40068|1) - i think it's wrong snaps
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: umm
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: change to long notes?
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/jhkpR/d571dcb638.png
2015-07-29 18:55 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457758
2015-07-29 18:56 [Shana Lesus]: and i delete this note
2015-07-29 18:56 Kuo Kyoka:  4 notes sound overchord
2015-07-29 18:56 Kuo Kyoka: maybe remove one note
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: 00:39:025 - i say
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: i delete note :3
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: sorry ;w;
2015-07-29 18:58 Kuo Kyoka: lol you didn't send the time
2015-07-29 18:58 Kuo Kyoka: sorry
2015-07-29 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:17:123 (77123|2,77307|3) - maybe remove this one
2015-07-29 19:01 [Shana Lesus]: no ><
2015-07-29 19:01 Kuo Kyoka: cuz hitsound on here is weird
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: that's it
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: change hitsound volume to 45% everydiffs
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: and upload
2015-07-29 19:04 [Shana Lesus]: updated
2015-07-29 19:04 [Shana Lesus]: thank you <3
2015-07-29 19:05 Kuo Kyoka: np ~ <3
2015-07-29 19:10 Kuo Kyoka: how about end kiai time on here: 01:13:995 - 
2015-07-29 19:13 [Shana Lesus]: fixed and updated
2015-07-29 19:17 Kuo Kyoka: okay

Deep Sea

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Topic Starter

Deep Sea 2015-07-29T12:20:10+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

stuff

2015-07-29 18:00 Kuo Kyoka: hi, do you want to irc now?
2015-07-29 18:01 [Shana Lesus]: Hi Kuo
2015-07-29 18:01 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: i don't really sure about the metadata
2015-07-29 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: Artist should be: Wakeshima Kanon
2015-07-29 18:02 [Shana Lesus]: http://www.amazon.com/Kanon-Wakeshima-Kurari-Meikyuu-10003-44853/dp/B008S667XC hm
2015-07-29 18:03 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2015-07-29 18:03 [Shana Lesus]: i change artist
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: amazon didn't official
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: let me tries
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: i know Kuo
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: sorry
2015-07-29 18:04 Kuo Kyoka: don't worry ;w;
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: http://kanonwakeshima.wikia.com/wiki/Kanon_Wakeshima_Wiki
2015-07-29 18:04 [Shana Lesus]: mmmm
2015-07-29 18:06 Kuo Kyoka: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/309960 lastest ranked
2015-07-29 18:07 Kuo Kyoka: i have no idea
2015-07-29 18:07 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:07 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:07 Kuo Kyoka: http://whv-amusic.com/wakeshimakanon/
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: maybe just change back to wakeshima kanon
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: i will ask QAT later
2015-07-29 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/737815 Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [Dark's NM]]
2015-07-29 18:09 [Shana Lesus]: i set Wakeshima Kanon
2015-07-29 18:10 [Shana Lesus]: it is right
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: are you allowed to fix Dark's diff?
2015-07-29 18:10 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:762 (1762|3,2498|1,3234|1) - remove those
2015-07-29 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: it's not strong cymbol sound as 00:02:130 (2130|2,2130|3,2866|3,2866|2) - 
2015-07-29 18:11 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2015-07-29 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:04:707 (4707|2,4891|1,5075|3,5259|0) - change back to normal notes
2015-07-29 18:12 Kuo Kyoka: it's not fit with long note
2015-07-29 18:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:10:412 - remove this note on here, have a little break is much comfortable
2015-07-29 18:12 [Shana Lesus]: changed
2015-07-29 18:13 [Shana Lesus]: no >< sorry
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:032 - http://puu.sh/jhiuB/e1f6454a0e.jpgsuggestion
2015-07-29 18:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:952 - have a long note on here for the sound as 00:24:584 (24584|3) -  too
2015-07-29 18:15 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:16 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:035 - you could add a note on 1, i do the bpm change on here so it's more accuracy to add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:16 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:16 Kuo Kyoka: for the slow changes from bpm, i suggest to add sv change to minus that slow
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: hmmm
2015-07-29 18:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:30:842 - here is 1.05
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: 00:31:295 - 00:40:129 -
2015-07-29 18:17 [Shana Lesus]: ?
2015-07-29 18:18 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:035 - and here is 1,42
2015-07-29 18:18 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: yay
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: fine
2015-07-29 18:19 [Shana Lesus]: thanks Kuo <3
2015-07-29 18:19 Kuo Kyoka: np ~ <3
2015-07-29 18:19 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:853 (54853|1) - i guess just remove this one, so hard to play on here
2015-07-29 18:21 [Shana Lesus]: 00:54:301 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457650
2015-07-29 18:21 [Shana Lesus]: rearranged
2015-07-29 18:21 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:22 Kuo Kyoka: 01:00:007 - if he follow the sound like as 00:59:271 - so better to have a note on 4 01:00:007 - here too
2015-07-29 18:24 [Shana Lesus]: 00:58:903 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457660
2015-07-29 18:25 Kuo Kyoka: you remove the note?
2015-07-29 18:26 [Shana Lesus]: you mean that you want to add notes?
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: yah
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: if you remove
2015-07-29 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: you must remove from here 00:57:062 - 
2015-07-29 18:28 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457669 better
2015-07-29 18:28 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:03:688 - sound not strong enough for two notes
2015-07-29 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:05:160 - 01:05:896 - 
2015-07-29 18:30 [Shana Lesus]: What do you think about it ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457675
2015-07-29 18:31 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2015-07-29 18:31 Kuo Kyoka: 00:59:271 - maybe just keep the original for the GD-er and add a note on 4 http://puu.sh/jhjl5/a5f90df71c.jpg
2015-07-29 18:31 Kuo Kyoka: 01:13:995 (73995|2,74731|2,75467|1) - same reason as begin
2015-07-29 18:32 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2015-07-29 18:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:700 - add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:32 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:884 (79884|1,80620|3,81356|1) - remove
2015-07-29 18:33 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:33 Kuo Kyoka: 01:23:933 (83933|3) - this long note is weird
2015-07-29 18:34 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/jhjtJ/9712830c35.png
2015-07-29 18:35 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:35 [Shana Lesus]: nice
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:29:271 (89271|1) - remove this, follow the 01:29:087 (89087|2) - is enough
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: 01:28:903 (88903|0) - move to 2 for pattern
2015-07-29 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: that's it
2015-07-29 18:36 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2015-07-29 18:36 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 18:36 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/737816 Kanon Wakeshima - Foul Play ni Kurari [HD]]
2015-07-29 18:37 [Shana Lesus]: ready :3
2015-07-29 18:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:01:148 (1148|1) - support to be on 00:01:087 - 
2015-07-29 18:39 Kuo Kyoka: 1/6
2015-07-29 18:40 [Shana Lesus]: i hate this moment xD
2015-07-29 18:41 [Shana Lesus]: also
2015-07-29 18:41 [Shana Lesus]: 00:30:842 - i set all sv
2015-07-29 18:41 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: 00:04:707 (4707|2,4891|0,5075|3,5259|1) - same reason on normal
2015-07-29 18:45 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457717
2015-07-29 18:45 Kuo Kyoka: okie
2015-07-29 18:45 Kuo Kyoka: 00:22:651 - 00:23:020 - add note?
2015-07-29 18:46 [Shana Lesus]: no :3
2015-07-29 18:46 Kuo Kyoka: why, it's for voice, more comfortable sound for them
2015-07-29 18:48 Kuo Kyoka:  00:31:035 - add a note on here
2015-07-29 18:49 [Shana Lesus]: added
2015-07-29 18:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:39:117 (39117|3,39209|2,39301|1,39393|3,39393|0,39454|2,39515|1,39577|0,39638|2,39699|3,39761|2,39822|1,39883|0,39945|1,40006|2,40068|1) - i think it's wrong snaps
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: umm
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: change to long notes?
2015-07-29 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/jhkpR/d571dcb638.png
2015-07-29 18:55 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3457758
2015-07-29 18:56 [Shana Lesus]: and i delete this note
2015-07-29 18:56 Kuo Kyoka:  4 notes sound overchord
2015-07-29 18:56 Kuo Kyoka: maybe remove one note
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: 00:39:025 - i say
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: i delete note :3
2015-07-29 18:57 [Shana Lesus]: sorry ;w;
2015-07-29 18:58 Kuo Kyoka: lol you didn't send the time
2015-07-29 18:58 Kuo Kyoka: sorry
2015-07-29 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:17:123 (77123|2,77307|3) - maybe remove this one
2015-07-29 19:01 [Shana Lesus]: no ><
2015-07-29 19:01 Kuo Kyoka: cuz hitsound on here is weird
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: that's it
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: change hitsound volume to 45% everydiffs
2015-07-29 19:02 Kuo Kyoka: and upload
2015-07-29 19:04 [Shana Lesus]: updated
2015-07-29 19:04 [Shana Lesus]: thank you <3
2015-07-29 19:05 Kuo Kyoka: np ~ <3
2015-07-29 19:10 Kuo Kyoka: how about end kiai time on here: 01:13:995 - 
2015-07-29 19:13 [Shana Lesus]: fixed and updated
2015-07-29 19:17 Kuo Kyoka: okay

Thanks for check Kuo :3

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Akasha- 2015-07-29T12:21:12+00:00

Wakeshima Kanon - Foul Play ni Kurari [OsuMania]

[Generals]

BPMs: Good
Offset: Good
Snapping Conflicts: Good
AiMod: Good
Preview Time: Good
Hitsound: Good
Folder's Problems: Good
Timing: Great
Tags: Sound Good
Metadata: Fine
Kiai: Great
BG: Good
Video: Fine

Since all things are fixed w/ lets go for bubble, no problems appears

Bubbled

Congratulation on the bubble, Shana Lesus and Darksider2442 <3 ~ Great map with good song ~ Good luck on Qualification

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-07-29T12:45:23+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Wakeshima Kanon - Foul Play ni Kurari [OsuMania]

[Generals]
BPMs: Good
Offset: Good
Snapping Conflicts: Good
AiMod: Good
Preview Time: Good
Hitsound: Good
Folder's Problems: Good
Timing: Great
Tags: Sound Good
Metadata: Fine
Kiai: Great
BG: Good
Video: Fine
Since all things are fixed w/ lets go for bubble, no problems appears

Bubbled

Congratulation on the bubble, Shana Lesus and Darksider2442 <3 ~ Great map with good song ~ Good luck on Qualification

Thanks

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-07-29T14:19:44+00:00

seems everything okay,ready to qualify

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Akasha- 2015-08-01T03:51:23+00:00

^ does i have to rebubble?
don't replace the bubble by star icon, lol

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-08-01T07:43:20+00:00

wait

Marirose

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Marirose 2015-08-08T08:37:51+00:00

lets go

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-08-08T20:13:01+00:00

Marirose wrote:
lets go

Thanks

meii18

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meii18 2015-08-08T20:17:49+00:00

Congratulations Shana! o3o

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-08-08T20:24:43+00:00

ByBy13 wrote:
Congratulations Shana! o3o

Thanks ByBy o3o

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Akasha- 2015-08-09T07:01:26+00:00

congrats Shana owo

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Kyousuke- 2015-08-10T14:28:13+00:00

wow grats shana!

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Nomination Assessment Team 2015-08-14T17:48:53+00:00

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

Timing

There doesn't seem to be any BPM Changes within this song, so therefore there should not be any present within this mapset. The current BPM Changes result in an inconsistent offset.

Uninherited timing points at 00:30:842- and 00:31:035- should be removed, and the timing point at 00:31:295- should be shifted to the blue tick at 00:31:302. (00:31:026 - the note here may seem early, but this is because it fades in - this is where the vocal sample starts, so it is correct.)

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###C

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Deep Sea 2015-08-14T17:57:55+00:00

Quality Assurance Team wrote:
Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

General

Timing

There doesn't seem to be any BPM Changes within this song, so therefore there should not be any present within this mapset. The current BPM Changes result in an inconsistent offset.
Uninherited timing points at 00:30:842- and 00:31:035- should be removed, and the timing point at 00:31:295- should be shifted to the blue tick at 00:31:302. (00:31:026 - the note here may seem early, but this is because it fades in - this is where the vocal sample starts, so it is correct.)

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###C

This BPM point 00:31:302 - and this 00:40:129 - not removed, they must be here