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Tada Aoi - Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)

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MirinH
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Joined January 2013
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MirinH
fixed some mod,sorry but i didnt fix alot so i didnt really want to reply,if you want a reply pm me and ill pm back with a reply
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
I will check it this night or tomorrow We made some changes via IRC mod forgot to edit it ;-;
Last edited by meii18 , edited 1 time in total.
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
call me after byby check the map :)
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
http://puu.sh/jbabe/6f61eb876f.rar

EDIT: http://puu.sh/jbQbD/e42e04185d.rar
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
Hello! I'm back (: Just check the easy diff

* asdf - nazi/suggestion
* asdf - important

Kwan's Easy



  1. Missing video
  2. 00:04:623(1)- ~ 00:10:161(2)- I consider this part 'unnecessary' since on normal,hard and insane this part wasn't mapped so this part can be deleted
  3. 00:14:315(2)- You can make a better slider here or you can adjust a bit the slider like in this picture
  4. 00:17:084(2,3)- Here the flow seems a bit broken to me.After the way 00:17:084(2)-,the cursor goes down while 00:18:007(3)-'s tail is a bit up whoch can broke the flow.For a better flow,you can change like here
  5. 00:19:853- There is the vocal as I can hear here but you ignore it so to follow it you can add a note but with NC because there's the reset of the instruments where's the vocal and you should cancel the NC from 00:20:315(1)-

That's all from me now for IamKwan.Maybe you will call me for recheck (:
IamKwaN
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00:04:623(1)- ~ 00:10:161(2)- I consider this part 'unnecessary' since on normal,hard and insane this part wasn't mapped so this part can be deleted Sorry, no. As long as there are beats, I can map it.
00:14:315(2)- You can make a better slider here or you can adjust a bit the slider adjusted to a symmetric one
00:17:084(2,3)- Here the flow seems a bit broken to me.After the way 00:17:084(2)-,the cursor goes down while 00:18:007(3)-'s tail is a bit up whoch can broke the flow. not a fan of kinked sliders now
00:19:853- There is the vocal as I can hear here but you ignore it so to follow it you can add a note but with NC because there's the reset of the instruments where's the vocal and you should cancel the NC from 00:20:315(1)- alright

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 47776
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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[Metadata]
Title:Yakeochinai Tsubasa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:灼け落ちない翼 (TV Size)
Artist:Tada Aoi
ArtistUnicode:多田葵
Creator:Mackenzie
Version:KwaN's Easy
Source:Charlotte
Tags:麻枝准 シャーロット ANANT-GRADE EYES Bravely You Maeda Jun P.A.WORKS Key IamKwaN
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meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
Rechecked the mapset. Metadata seems fine http://key.soundslabel.com/charlotte_music/

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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 说真的这歌用默认的soft whistle还用60%的音量，感觉有点糙，建议NHI里面的多加点绿线把whistle弄成骏喵diff里面的30%感觉更加合适
  2. NHI kiai的24clap也太吵了，喧宾夺主意味有点强……
Hard
  1. 00:16:965 (5) - 从00:16:849 - 开始改成一个1/4折返？
  2. 00:41:080 (4,1) - blanket?
  3. 01:21:695 (6,1) - ^
Insane
  1. 00:18:580 (4) - ctrl+g?
  2. 00:53:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个打击感很奇怪，三连一个1/2滑条加一个1/2单点更加舒服
  3. 00:55:157 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  4. 01:28:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 说真的这歌用默认的soft whistle还用60%的音量，感觉有点糙，建议NHI里面的多加点绿线把whistle弄成骏喵diff里面的30%感觉更加合适 :arrow: whistle我真的感覺還好啊，算了都說有點吵那就edit音頻吧
  2. NHI kiai的24clap也太吵了，喧宾夺主意味有点强…… :arrow: ^
Hard
  1. 00:16:965 (5) - 从00:16:849 - 开始改成一个1/4折返？ :arrow: 感覺overmap了啊
  2. 00:41:080 (4,1) - blanket?
  3. 01:21:695 (6,1) - ^ :arrow: 這個還是不了
Insane
  1. 00:18:580 (4) - ctrl+g? :arrow: 容易讀成1/4
  2. 00:53:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个打击感很奇怪，三连一个1/2滑条加一个1/2单点更加舒服
  3. 00:55:157 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  4. 01:28:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
no reply = fixed
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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IamKwaN
你別給老娘edit音頻 我打爆你啊
我先前已經說過太吵 不聽也沒辦法
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

IamKwaN wrote:

你別給老娘edit音頻 我打爆你啊
我先前已經說過太吵 不聽也沒辦法
QQ我碰都没碰你的hitsound
我是说我的啊
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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IamKwaN
別edit音頻的volume 不然我的volume要重做
MirinH
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Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH

IamKwaN wrote:

別edit音頻的volume 不然我的volume要重做
？你有用我的hs set
我说hs的音频
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
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IamKwaN

Mackenzie wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

別edit音頻的volume 不然我的volume要重做
？你有用我的hs set
我说hs的音频
好 :D
MirinH
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Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH
edit：.
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
hard那个没overmap啊，你insane不也这么搞的
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
MirinH
ok
all fixed
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
preview time in normal unsnapped
fck preview time in other diff unsnapped, except normal
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Qualified!
pkhg
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Joined May 2010
pkhg
anant-garde eyes
i guess u can fix this on the web or something
is not like it really matters tho

grats !
- N a g i -
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
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Joined July 2013
- N a g i -
great! i love this song <3
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
waaa，你们都飞了，我也得加把劲了
MirinH
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MirinH

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Qualified!
woc thx
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