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Sharlo - Hatsukoi no Ehon

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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年11月5日 at 0:54:14

Artist: Sharlo
Title: Hatsukoi no Ehon
Tags: HoneyWorks GUMI VOCALOID Fycho Kencho
BPM: 190
Filesize: 6124kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5.71 stars, 723 notes)
  2. Fycho's Insane (5.24 stars, 582 notes)
  3. Hard (3.33 stars, 385 notes)
  4. Kencho's Insane (4.57 stars, 489 notes)
  5. Normal (1.94 stars, 229 notes)
Download: Sharlo - Hatsukoi no Ehon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#13 Sharlo - 初恋の絵本
Vocal: Sharlo
Fycho, Kencho
Minakami Yuki
Please redl after 2015.10.25 because of adding hitsounds.
Sharlo said:
Top of Pending LOL
Last edited by Koiyuki , edited 36 times in total.
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
sofa
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
人哥战斗力无敌/

Edit:我操你们要不要这么夏人 好可怕
Last edited by Sharlo , edited 1 time in total.
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
精尽人亡
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
来战个痛
Wing My Way
186 posts
Joined September 2013
Wing My Way
无敌
Tenseki
803 posts
Joined November 2013
Tenseki

Karen wrote:

sofa
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
the sp is real owo
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
temporarily stop my work on this because of pending cup: t/345263
i will restart my work after submitting my entries for the mapping compitition

先搞骗顶杯，搞完来搞这图
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
你们真能射 :o
Supreme
137 posts
Joined April 2014
Supreme
GREAT MAP :O
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
restart working on this now :3
-shuko
32 posts
Joined July 2013
-shuko
噢 不要 我要射了 啊 精尽人亡
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
Kencho's Insane
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: sharlo.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 140207
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Hatsukoi no Ehon
TitleUnicode:初恋の絵本
Artist:Sharlo
ArtistUnicode:Sharlo
Creator:Minakami Yuki
Version:Kencho's Insane
Source:
Tags:HoneyWorks GUMI VOCALOID
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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SliderTickRate:1

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Rumia-
2,513 posts
Joined July 2012
Rumia-
1800th post
M Sauceeeeeeee
ww just a few suggestion for the extra

[extra]
00:40:733 (2) - i feel like better to ctrl g this , since the vocal pitch is contradicting , making it heading the same direction with next slider feels a little inaccurate
00:45:470 (1) - i think its nicer if you do something like this suggestion since this whole section is a stream , skipping a 1/4 beat here feels a little weird
1
01:03:707 - i think the piano starts here o.o
01:15:470 (2) - adjust the degree a little would make it neater i think
2
01:27:944 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest to remove these whistle , since this part the drum kick stands out a lot more because the piano are on lower chords , its starting to get higher pitch at 01:28:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (start whistle from this point ) would make a good rhythm , and remove whistle at 01:28:733 (3,4) -
01:45:312 - i feel like adding a circle here is better , because of the palm mute guitar sound . maybe stack on 01:45:470 (1) - would be nice
01:48:154 (2) - add a drum whistle too ?
02:06:470 (6,8) - i feel like clap suits more here than whistle
02:17:049 - add a circle here ? the vocal here really striking makes the drum stopped at red feels like an important beat is missing or
add a spinner until 02:18:312 - would be a good idea too
02:34:417 (4) - missing a clap ?
02:39:786 (1,6,5) - not sure maybe it is just me but i think these finishes feels a bit off , i think clap suits them better , they are different from 02:42:312 (1) - ,finish on this one is really good
02:46:102 (1) - add a clap as well , i think it sounds better !
02:49:891 (1) - i think this one as 1/2 slider is better to fit with the music ~
02:53:049 (3,1) - swap nc ? i think the vocal here is better to start nc

thats all
tai shen
Sharlo
667 posts
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Sharlo
怎么这么多I
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Rumia- wrote:

1800th post
M Sauceeeeeeee
ww just a few suggestion for the extra

[extra]
00:40:733 (2) - i feel like better to ctrl g this , since the vocal pitch is contradicting , making it heading the same direction with next slider feels a little inaccurate i feel the tone is similar so i make like this
00:45:470 (1) - i think its nicer if you do something like this suggestion since this whole section is a stream , skipping a 1/4 beat here feels a little weird but that's overmapped, no 1/4 here
1
01:03:707 - i think the piano starts here o.o yeah i know, but it's hard to catch too if begins on blue tick
01:15:470 (2) - adjust the degree a little would make it neater i think ok
2
01:27:944 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest to remove these whistle , since this part the drum kick stands out a lot more because the piano are on lower chords , its starting to get higher pitch at 01:28:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (start whistle from this point ) would make a good rhythm , and remove whistle at 01:28:733 (3,4) - ok removed
01:45:312 - i feel like adding a circle here is better , because of the palm mute guitar sound . maybe stack on 01:45:470 (1) - would be nice no, i want to keep it a trick and it's some kind of relax after kiai time and streams
01:48:154 (2) - add a drum whistle too ? nope, make it different hears better
02:06:470 (6,8) - i feel like clap suits more here than whistle but i want to make a feeling of rise and fall
02:17:049 - add a circle here ? the vocal here really striking makes the drum stopped at red feels like an important beat is missing or
add a spinner until 02:18:312 - would be a good idea too hmm i dont like it
02:34:417 (4) - missing a clap ? added
02:39:786 (1,6,5) - not sure maybe it is just me but i think these finishes feels a bit off , i think clap suits them better , they are different from 02:42:312 (1) - ,finish on this one is really good hmm i will make the decision after some mods, i will keep it in mind, thanks
02:46:102 (1) - add a clap as well , i think it sounds better ! ^
02:49:891 (1) - i think this one as 1/2 slider is better to fit with the music ~ keep
02:53:049 (3,1) - swap nc ? i think the vocal here is better to start nc ok

thats all
tai shen
thanks rumia~
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
还摸

[EX]
01:03:707 这里有个1/8音
02:31:574 (7,11) - clap
01:15:786 (1,5) - ^
01:36:943 (3,5,5,5) - ^

[Fycho]
检查AImod
00:18:312 (1,1) - 歪了
00:32:207 (1,2) - ^
01:53:996 01:54:154 note

[峰哥]
00:25:891 (1) - 这个NC好像意义不大
01:38:838 (2) - clap
01:48:312 (3,4) - 掉个位子

[Easy]
02:33:154 (2) - 没叠好
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
连击！
EncoreW
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EncoreW
先占位明天来灌水
Hollow Wings
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Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
这得怀孕几次。。。

我也来抽个奖，孩子是我的（
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
這麼多星
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
灌水

[Extra]

有点想换个难度名也

AR9.3OD8.5这配置其实还挺主流

00:16:259 (2,3,4) - 00:19:417 (6,7,1) - 00:20:681 (4,5,1) - 感觉每个都可以放个clap上去

00:27:154 (3) - 结尾可以消个音这种

00:56:207 (1,2) - 感觉这两个可以用一样的音效，不过第二个要比第一个音量小一点，因为背后的鼓声应该也是这样的，后面几组同样道理

01:04:417 (1,2) - 这两个滑条感觉音量可以比前面那个串小一点，01:15:786 - 另外这条绿线可以把kiai取消了

01:39:154 - 这里感觉可以小小的kiai一下，打完串之后接滑条，接finish，接kiai，感觉真的可以

01:48:628 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个音量一个个加上去怎么样

00:44:838 (1,2,3,4) - 00:45:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:28:417 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:44:364 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - 02:51:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这些地方感觉都可以跟02:46:812 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - 一样用drum-clap，这种鼓点跟屌之力是真的像，严重怀疑这种地方也是跟屌之力一样双面双锥脚鼓双脚轮踩，当然没屌之力用的那么频繁就是了

[Fycho's Insane]

如果主难度用了OD8.5次难度就可以考虑OD7.5或者OD8了，送一送也没啥不好的

音效都没有光看排版这种的话感觉也没啥好讲的了



别的也写不出个屎来怎么办
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[General]
檢查全難度的widescreen support

[Extra]
01:05:996 (2) - blanket好點, 還有覺得放到x188 y192的地方會好打一點..

[Fycho]
音效呢?
檢查AiMod的unsnap
00:50:838 (4) - ctrl+g flow好點
02:32:207 (1) - 這裡的1/3尾有點奇怪 感覺應該是3/4的
02:53:049 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 這段1/3有點看不懂...

[Kencho]
00:15:154 (3) - 錯snap 參考最高diff
01:37:891 (1) - 1/1 reverse?
01:49:260 - duplicate green line
02:09:470 - ^
最尾的1/3也是有點看不懂

[Hard]
00:15:365 (2) - 尾應該是在 00:15:575 -

that's all
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