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Topic Starter
Dilant
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lily Bread
EAZY的开头可能太难了点,感觉交叉使用往复滑条和长滑条或许会好一点。
独角戏超好听,我超喜欢的!支持一下

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SB上有错字....
什么-甚麼 或 什麼
只能-衹能
只是-衹是

另外,AR7OD7好难呃..OD稍稍低一点打起来可能会舒服点
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2015.8.8

好像EASY的滑条尾最好是不要藏东西
稍微分开一点可能不错(改起来可能会好麻烦...

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Topic Starter
Dilant

Lily Bread wrote:

EAZY的开头可能太难了点,感觉交叉使用往复滑条和长滑条或许会好一点。
独角戏超好听,我超喜欢的!支持一下
Check it later
Fixed~ 使用了长滑条来代替。
其实当时放那个梗完全是因为懒……
Topic Starter
Dilant

Lily Bread wrote:

SB上有错字....
什么-甚麼 或 什麼
只能-衹能
只是-衹是
由于字体不支持“麼”和“衹”这两个字,无奈使用了简体字进行替换……:( 在此向大家致歉。
fixed 使用了新版本字体进行替换。


另外,AR7OD7好难呃..OD稍稍低一点打起来可能会舒服点
fixed OD已降至6。
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2015.8.8

好像EASY的滑条尾最好是不要藏东西
稍微分开一点可能不错(改起来可能会好麻烦...
fixed 不烦啊=_=
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Thanks for mod.
另外你是学C++的?那个注释行看得我……
Cuppacker
The overall feel on the map is nice and and really shines in the normal difficulty. Here are my criticisms
  1. The rapid time changes in the easy diff might be disorienting to new players and some notes while not off beat, feel that way.
  2. Are you going to add the finish hitsound onto the ending note? 1.58.204
Other than that, i feel that map is pretty good and you should hard the way it is.
Feel free not to follow my tips, after all this is your map.
Are you willing to do a mod for mod?
Topic Starter
Dilant

Cuppacker wrote:

The overall feel on the map is nice and and really shines in the normal difficulty. Here are my criticisms
  1. The rapid time changes in the easy diff might be disorienting to new players and some notes while not off beat, feel that way. hmm, keep
  2. Are you going to add the finish hitsound onto the ending note? 1.58.204 yes, and added
Other than that, i feel that map is pretty good and you should hard the way it is.
Feel free not to follow my tips, after all this is your map.
Are you willing to do a mod for mod?
Yes, but I am not a experienced mapper and this is my first map.
I'll try my best to help you :)
Thanks for mod.
TheMefisto
Hi! From modding queue.

General

Check AiMod

Easy

00:30:264 (3,4) - More round blanket?
00:32:358 (5) - This green line looks unnecessary
00:34:452 (1,2) - More round blanket
00:38:639 (3,4) - ^
Unnecessary green line at 00:44:921
00:53:296 (3) - Unnecessary green line
01:03:067 (6,7) - More round blanket
01:10:046 (3) - Unnecessary green line
01:28:891 (4) - ^
01:30:985 (1,2) - Don't know about this sliders. Looks weird
01:47:037 (7) - NC
01:47:735 (1) - Delete NC
Unnecessary green line at 01:45:641

Normal

CS=3 or CS=3.5, because it's Normal diff
01:03:067 (3,4) - Fix blanket
01:07:604 (3,4) - More round blanket
01:33:078 (1) - NC

Hard

00:11:420 (1) - NC (?)
00:15:607 (6) - NC
00:17:701 (1) - Delete NC
00:19:795 (4) - NC

That's all. Good luck with map! :)
Topic Starter
Dilant

TheMefisto wrote:

Hi! From modding queue.

General

Check AiMod Checked and keep.

Easy

00:30:264 (3,4) - More round blanket?
00:32:358 (5) - This green line looks unnecessary
00:34:452 (1,2) - More round blanket
00:38:639 (3,4) - ^
Unnecessary green line at 00:44:921
00:53:296 (3) - Unnecessary green line
01:03:067 (6,7) - More round blanket
01:10:046 (3) - Unnecessary green line
01:28:891 (4) - ^
01:30:985 (1,2) - Don't know about this sliders. Looks weird
01:47:037 (7) - NC
01:47:735 (1) - Delete NC
Unnecessary green line at 01:45:641
All fixed.

Normal

CS=3 or CS=3.5, because it's Normal diff Changed to 3.5 .
01:03:067 (3,4) - Fix blanket
01:07:604 (3,4) - More round blanket
01:33:078 (1) - NC
All fixed.

Hard

00:11:420 (1) - NC (?)
00:15:607 (6) - NC
00:17:701 (1) - Delete NC
00:19:795 (4) - NC
All fixed.

That's all. Good luck with map! :)
Thanks! Excellent mod.
Kuki


[Normal]
SV is painfully slow so it's hard to make the beginning look good. I assume this is the same in the easy difficulty. Try 1.50 SV just so you can do something with the sliders instead of having them all straight and boring.
00:13:513 (1,2,3) - Make these even
00:44:921 - Completely unused inheriting point that does nothing.
00:51:202 (5,1) - Not a very nice overlap and the flow isn't very nice here. Try to fix.
01:24:005 (3,4) - Fix blanket and make (4) look nicer.

[Hard]
Uhh, so SV is the same as normal? If you changed normal sv to 1.5 I suggest 1.8 here. If you didn't change normal make hard difficulty's SV 1.2 or 1.5.
00:23:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these look stream-esque.
00:28:170 (5,1) - Fix the overlap/blanket here.
00:53:994 (3,4) - Massive jump here with zero emphasis in the song, fix.
Topic Starter
Dilant

Kuki wrote:



[Normal]
SV is painfully slow so it's hard to make the beginning look good. I assume this is the same in the easy difficulty. Try 1.50 SV just so you can do something with the sliders instead of having them all straight and boring. I'll try.
00:13:513 (1,2,3) - Make these even
00:44:921 - Completely unused inheriting point that does nothing. Removed.
00:51:202 (5,1) - Not a very nice overlap and the flow isn't very nice here. Try to fix. Fixed.
01:24:005 (3,4) - Fix blanket and make (4) look nicer. Fixed.

[Hard]
Uhh, so SV is the same as normal? If you changed normal sv to 1.5 I suggest 1.8 here. If you didn't change normal make hard difficulty's SV 1.2 or 1.5.
I'll change SV to 1.2 and remap this difficulty.
00:23:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these look stream-esque.
00:28:170 (5,1) - Fix the overlap/blanket here.
00:53:994 (3,4) - Massive jump here with zero emphasis in the song, fix.
Thanks! :) (not updated yet) updated
Yoges
I can't do a mod on this. The timing seems completely off.
The correct timing to me would be
BPM: 172 (waltz)
Offset: 26,080
Topic Starter
Dilant

Yoges wrote:

I can't do a mod on this. The timing seems completely off.
The correct timing to me would be
BPM: 172 (waltz)
Offset: 26,080
Thanks for your attention.
I re-checked the timing and I'm sure that my timing is right.
Sorry, I'll keep the original timing.
XiaofengTiger
好棒好棒的图!
其实我是在找mod queue的时候看到你的req,发现是中文歌……此外我也想学mod
这个图好棒

一个个人看法(其实自己也不知道对不对)
01:13:536 (8) - 01:47:037 (5) - 这两个位置应不应该放在后面一个Combo呢因为作为下一句的开头
Topic Starter
Dilant

XiaofengTiger wrote:

好棒好棒的图!

我好心把以下文字改回黑色的了=_=
其实我是在找mod queue的时候看到你的req,发现是中文歌……此外我也想学mod
这个图好棒

一个个人看法(其实自己也不知道对不对)
01:13:536 (8) - 01:47:037 (5) - 这两个位置应不应该放在后面一个Combo呢因为作为下一句的开头
01:13:536 (8) - 个人感觉01:14:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 组成一组会比较好
01:47:037 (5) - Fixed 这个可以有

顺便我去赶紧检查下其他diff有没有类似问题……
Thanks.
Not updated yet - 等下个mod一并上传吧……实则为懒 Updated.
Lily Bread
既然你remap过了..好像我又可以重新骗个kd了
有空的话帮忙看看我的孤独天堂吧^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/348089

[General]
00:26:076 - 利用开关kiai来制造喷泉好像是不被推荐的..

[Easy]
总体:似乎在easy里变速不太好吧..我也不太清楚..
AImod:把aimod里的勾勾起来就可以看到很多DS error..不赘述了
(懒得再截了,借用一下以前的mod里的图)
00:31:660 (4,5) - easy里不能有重叠
01:35:172 (7,8) - ctrl+h,再调整一下,避免击打后的300盖住后面的点

[Normal]
和easy一样有很多DS error
00:53:994 (2,3) - 明显的DS error,而且粘到一起了
01:05:859 (1,2) - 碰到了,开着DS稍微拉一下比较好
01:48:782 (2,4) - unrankable issue:折返箭头一定不能遮挡,也不能被之前的击打后300之类的东西遮挡。移开来

[Hard]
00:15:607 (1,2) - 可以稍微拉开一点,碰一起了不好看
00:32:358 - 这里和Easy Normal一模一样,有些音被滑条盖过去了..E和N没问题,不过H里感觉还是把长滑条拆开比较好吧,像这样
00:55:390 (6) - ^
01:17:724 (3,1) - 折返箭头遮挡,移开
01:29:240 - 01:29:938 - 既然是hard就没必要跟死一条轨,背景鼓点也是可以跟的,不然这里都空着感觉怪怪的。其它类似的地方我就不重复了
01:49:829 (5) - ctrl+j后调整一下flow更好
01:56:110 (1,1) - 黏太紧惹...至少把转盘在红线结束吧

这学校真可怕
Topic Starter
Dilant

Lily Bread wrote:

既然你remap过了..好像我又可以重新骗个kd了 这骗kd法我给满分
有空的话帮忙看看我的孤独天堂吧^^ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/348089 目测没空……详见文末吐槽区

[General]
00:26:076 - 利用开关kiai来制造喷泉好像是不被推荐的.. 这个嘛……再议

[Easy]
总体:似乎在easy里变速不太好吧..我也不太清楚..
AImod:把aimod里的勾勾起来就可以看到很多DS error..不赘述了
(懒得再截了,借用一下以前的mod里的图)
00:31:660 (4,5) - easy里不能有重叠
01:35:172 (7,8) - ctrl+h,再调整一下,避免击打后的300盖住后面的点

[Normal]
和easy一样有很多DS error
00:53:994 (2,3) - 明显的DS error,而且粘到一起了
01:05:859 (1,2) - 碰到了,开着DS稍微拉一下比较好
01:48:782 (2,4) - unrankable issue:折返箭头一定不能遮挡,也不能被之前的击打后300之类的东西遮挡。移开来

[Hard]
00:15:607 (1,2) - 可以稍微拉开一点,碰一起了不好看
00:32:358 - 这里和Easy Normal一模一样,有些音被滑条盖过去了..E和N没问题,不过H里感觉还是把长滑条拆开比较好吧,像这样
00:55:390 (6) - ^
01:17:724 (3,1) - 折返箭头遮挡,移开
01:29:240 - 01:29:938 - 既然是hard就没必要跟死一条轨,背景鼓点也是可以跟的,不然这里都空着感觉怪怪的。其它类似的地方我就不重复了
01:49:829 (5) - ctrl+j后调整一下flow更好
01:56:110 (1,1) - 黏太紧惹...至少把转盘在红线结束吧

慢慢大改……
DS以为是绝对间距固定(实际上是相对间距固定)然后嘛…… :cry:
Thanks.
Not updated - 十一假期改完了再传…… (Remapping...) Updated.
9.30 - 总算从学校放出来了……

对学校制度表示强烈吐槽
别的学校都是中秋+国庆11天连放……
我们居然是中秋放两天……(精确而言是9.26 11:30 - 9.28 9:30)
然后抓紧时间再上三天课……(时间真的是挤出来的啊)
然后才放7天十一假期……
放完之后据说还要找个周末补上两天课用来考试……
住宿制学校两周放一天半……(真·时间压榨机)
不许带手机……
学风就是这么好起来的……
RVMathew
Hi there. 5 months ago you posted in my modding queue t/336458/start=105 with a NM request. Here I am 5 months later with a mod.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say. 我不会动普通话和我会说一点点普通话。 所以I will just type the mod in English.

Easy

1) 00:21:889 (2,3,1) - While stacking notes underneath may look nice, it is generally a good idea to avoid doing that, because new players may have difficulty reading that.

2) 01:03:067 (4,5) - Again try and avoid stacking notes. Make use of the whole playfield.

3) 01:56:459 (1) Maybe add a spinner that ends at 01:58:204? This is purely optional.

Normal
1) While the rhythm is good, I have a problem with your use of blankets and some patterns; in my opinion, they work against you because it limits you on what you can make. Moreover you tend to put the notes in a small area, which makes the map empty at parts while one spot is crowded. I would spread out the notes more on the playfield, as it helps with readability.

Oh and use at least a larger distance snap such as 1.3x if you keep the same slider velocity, or use a larger slider velocity with the same distance snap of 1x.

Example of patterns I do not like:
00:17:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The stacking does make it a little bit hard to read, but you overlap some notes which makes this area feel cramped.
01:43:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - Quite cramped.

Example of a pattern I like: 01:30:287 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Looks really good.

2) 00:53:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - This will be quite hard for newer players to read; most maps nowadays do not have back and forth jumps like you have in a normal difficulty.

Lily's Hard
1) I am curious as to why it is AR 7.1
This difficulty looks really nice.

Hard
1) 00:11:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can align this a little better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324323

2) 00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - When making patterns, use ctrl+shift+d as a guide for making the patterns; they look a lot better that way.

3) You should make your combo's starting on every large white tick. Right now they are inconsistent.

The patterns are very good.

Final thoughts

The first 2 difficulties need touching up on; I think that because of the slow slider velocity, the notes are bunched up together as a result of distance snap, and that ruins the good rhythm by making it hard to read. I liked both of the hard difficulties, although your hard needs some small touch ups.

Good luck and I am sorry for replying 5 months later.
Vovan
[Easy]

00:21:889 (2,3,1) - Don't stack

00:34:452 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make better blankets blease ^^

00:58:879 (3,1,2,3,4) - Blankets :c

[Normal]

00:17:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sliders confuse me, change them please.

00:36:545 (3,4) - Blanket :c

00:53:994 (2,3) - Stacking like this can confuse the player, not really good in Normal diff.

01:01:671 (1,2,3) - The spacing aren't the same

01:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - /!\ OVERLAPS

01:43:896 (2,3,4) - Blanket

[Lily's Hard]

00:40:384 (6,7) - Make an easier jump

[Hard]

00:23:285 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I've a problem with this.
You stacked here 00:23:285 (3,4,5) - With a 1/4 Spacing,
but 00:23:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you stack just after this with a 1/3 space. Change this.

01:00:624 (8,9,1) - Stack 8 & 9 on the slider 1

That's all for me !
Good luck for your map !
Lily Bread
fix ar to 7.0. also, changed diff name.

code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: dujiaoxi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 82609
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Du Jiao Xi
TitleUnicode:獨角戲
Artist:Valen Hsu
ArtistUnicode:許茹芸
Creator:Dilant
Version:Lily Bread's Hard
Source:
Tags:如果云知道 独角戏 獨腳戲 独脚戏 Du Jue Xi 许茹芸 许宏琇 許宏琇 琇琇 Xu Ru Yun Lily Bread
BeatmapID:815161
BeatmapSetID:332639

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"dujiaoxi.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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118291,-66.6666666666667,3,2,1,25,0,0


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Combo1 : 197,214,41
Combo2 : 38,72,153
Combo3 : 63,192,91
Combo4 : 189,77,164

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Topic Starter
Dilant
RVMathew‘s Mod

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. 5 months ago you posted in my modding queue t/336458/start=105 with a NM request. Here I am 5 months later with a mod.

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say. 我不会动普通话和我会说一点点普通话。 所以I will just type the mod in English. 书得像我动普通话一样。所以I will just reply in English. 不对我更不动English啊

Easy

1) 00:21:889 (2,3,1) - While stacking notes underneath may look nice, it is generally a good idea to avoid doing that, because new players may have difficulty reading that. Fixed.

2) 01:03:067 (4,5) - Again try and avoid stacking notes. Make use of the whole playfield. Fixed.

3) 01:56:459 (1) Maybe add a spinner that ends at 01:58:204? This is purely optional. I don't like spinners OwO

Normal Reorganized.
1) While the rhythm is good, I have a problem with your use of blankets and some patterns; in my opinion, they work against you because it limits you on what you can make. Moreover you tend to put the notes in a small area, which makes the map empty at parts while one spot is crowded. I would spread out the notes more on the playfield, as it helps with readability.

Oh and use at least a larger distance snap such as 1.3x if you keep the same slider velocity, or use a larger slider velocity with the same distance snap of 1x.

Example of patterns I do not like:
00:17:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The stacking does make it a little bit hard to read, but you overlap some notes which makes this area feel cramped.
01:43:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - Quite cramped.

Example of a pattern I like: 01:30:287 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Looks really good.

2) 00:53:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - This will be quite hard for newer players to read; most maps nowadays do not have back and forth jumps like you have in a normal difficulty.

Lily's Hard
1) I am curious as to why it is AR 7.1 Wwwwwhat? I haven't done that... Fixed.
This difficulty looks really nice.

Hard
1) 00:11:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can align this a little better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324323 Fixed.

2) 00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - When making patterns, use ctrl+shift+d as a guide for making the patterns; they look a lot better that way. Fixed.

3) You should make your combo's starting on every large white tick. Right now they are inconsistent. Fixed.

The patterns are very good.

Final thoughts

The first 2 difficulties need touching up on; I think that because of the slow slider velocity, the notes are bunched up together as a result of distance snap, and that ruins the good rhythm by making it hard to read. I liked both of the hard difficulties, although your hard needs some small touch ups.

Good luck and I am sorry for replying 5 months later. Never mind~

Dono027's Mod

Dono027 wrote:

[Easy]

00:21:889 (2,3,1) - Don't stack Fixed.

00:34:452 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make better blankets please ^^ Fixed.

00:58:879 (3,1,2,3,4) - Blankets :c Fixed.

[Normal] Reorganized.

00:17:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The sliders confuse me, change them please.

00:36:545 (3,4) - Blanket :c

00:53:994 (2,3) - Stacking like this can confuse the player, not really good in Normal diff.

01:01:671 (1,2,3) - The spacing aren't the same

01:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - /!\ OVERLAPS Sorry, I don't know what you mean...

01:43:896 (2,3,4) - Blanket

[Lily's Hard]

00:40:384 (6,7) - Make an easier jump I think it's OK...

[Hard]

00:23:285 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I've a problem with this.
You stacked here 00:23:285 (3,4,5) with a 1/4 Spacing,
but 00:23:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you stack just after this with a 1/3 space. Change this. Used a slider to replace 00:23:285 (3,4,5) .

01:00:624 (8,9,1) - Stack 8 & 9 on the slider 1 Hmm... Keep.

That's all for me !
Good luck for your map !

据说box嵌套会发生一些奇妙的bug……于是乎不加box了(反正也不长)

Lily Bread wrote:

fix ar to 7.0. also, changed diff name.

code
osu file format v14

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Title:Du Jiao Xi
TitleUnicode:獨角戲
Artist:Valen Hsu
ArtistUnicode:許茹芸
Creator:Dilant
Version:Lily Bread's Hard
Source:
Tags:如果云知道 独角戏 獨腳戲 独脚戏 Du Jue Xi 许茹芸 许宏琇 許宏琇 琇琇 Xu Ru Yun Lily Bread
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Got it!
终于从学校解放出来了……期末考试得胜回归。
当我刚post出来发现又一个reply的时候我的内心是崩溃的
Thanks to all.
Updated except normal. Will update normal with the next mod. All updated.
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