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m4m

  • BLACK ANOTHER
  1. 00:03:862 - 这个不跟嘛
  2. 00:27:962 (4,2) - 这个贴看上去有点不舒服,我觉得可以尾stack这两个00:27:962 (4,3) -
  3. 00:29:562 (4,2) - ^
  4. 00:32:062 (3,2) - 没包好
  5. 00:56:062 (3,3) - ^
  6. 01:19:462 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 好棒!
  7. 01:44:262 - 为啥到这突然减速这么多,打起来可能会有点别扭
  8. SL0.7这种stack01:45:862 (1,1) - 有偏移看上去感觉不太整洁,要不要考虑0.2 >:(
  • NeilPerry's ANOTHER
  1. aimod
  2. 00:45:662 (1,2,1,2) - maybe a bit confusion when reading this part
  3. 01:23:462 (1,2,3) - 01:24:662 (1,2,3) - also maybe confusion cuz same ds and they are so near in terms of time
  4. 01:32:562 (3) - maybe should have other design?(different from 01:32:662 (1,2,1,2) - ) like slider or something else cuz 01:32:562 - 's drum is so light


美丽

gl! :)
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Thanks. Fixed all mentioned stuff
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kanor wrote:

[Genal]
清一下AI,gyro的ez meta跟其他的不一样i ok
mp3的码率i ok
柚子的diff没kiai ok
EXHASUT是no submitted?i 现在是another

[Hyper]
00:18:987 (4,1) - 这两个平行一下会不会更好呀 不好 不过用了别的方法
00:22:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - 这里我觉得后面的两个1212重音更强烈一点,ds却比前面的差了挺多,前面这么大后面那么小 ok

Level9 wrote:

  • HYPER

00:21:587 (4,1) - 感觉可以拆开 懒得改了

  • BLACK ANOTHER

01:23:862 (2) - Ctrl+g? 不好哦
01:37:862 - 感觉这个三角形从01:38:062 (3) - 开始比较好 不好哦 更别手



爱抚大师还接m4m吗 接 明天摸
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1526307&m=0
thx

Yugu wrote:

m4m

  • BLACK ANOTHER
  1. 00:03:862 - 这个不跟嘛 暂时不怎么想动这
  2. 00:27:962 (4,2) - 这个贴看上去有点不舒服,我觉得可以尾stack这两个00:27:962 (4,3) - 这个是考虑过 但是鉴于本图风格所以堆叠了
  3. 00:29:562 (4,2) - ^
  4. 00:32:062 (3,2) - 没包好 ok
  5. 00:56:062 (3,3) - ^ ok
  6. 01:19:462 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 好棒!
  7. 01:44:262 - 为啥到这突然减速这么多,打起来可能会有点别扭 自己打着还行,高速我觉得会很怪所以就先这么放了下
  8. SL0.7这种stack01:45:862 (1,1) - 有偏移看上去感觉不太整洁,要不要考虑0.2 >:(测试一下0.5就够了
thanks for mod
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[General]
  1. 三張Another難度都有一條綠線unsnapped: 01:55:862 -
[Beginner]

  • 00:46:662 (1) - 我怎麼覺得這個會死一票人 :?
    01:34:662 (3) - 讓它變成直的好不好,一般的flow也不會這樣放
[Normal]

  • 00:25:862 - 這裡讓他空下來的原因是什麼?? 我不太能理解這裡為什麼空著
    00:29:862 (5) - 我個人覺得你這裡這一整段,只有這個節奏跟得最好,其他都不好;這裡就非常的完美01:45:862 (1) -
    01:58:262 (8) - 尾巴在藍線上plz
[Hyper]

  • 00:10:662 (3,4) - 我覺得這裡還沒必要這樣跳,看你。後面那組00:13:862 (3,4) - 跳的就很不錯
    01:21:262 (4,5) - 這裡1/1頓的有點怪,我覺得很適合1/2折返,一樣看你
[Saika]

  • 00:18:462 (3) - 超級無敵宇宙第一建議疊在下一個滑條頭上,01:52:862 (2) - same
    00:49:462 (4) - 這個不行啊,請照著DS來
    00:51:262 (5,1) - 這個之後找BN的時候我覺得也會是個問題,建議你把它跟前面統一
[Another]

  • 01:38:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:44:662 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我怎麼聽了幾遍沒聽懂這裡的節奏 :?
[柚!]

  • 01:22:262 - ???

m神已死
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[Easy]
00:17:787 (1,2) - 这里挨着了,放开点吧,感觉不是很好看 ok
00:33:787 (1,2,3) - 00:43:387 (1,2,3) - 这两个ds差的有点多,肉眼可见 fix
00:46:587 (1) - 四次折返会不会太难了啊...... 好像是..改了
01:38:987 (4,1) - 没包好 fix
[Gyro's BEGINNER]
00:44:587 (2) - ds失败 FIX
01:10:587 (3,4,1) - 个人觉得不太美观,两个弧度斜度都不同的滑条放一块尬尬的,另外4到1视觉flow有点奇怪 调整了
[Beginner]
00:46:662 (1) - 我怎麼覺得這個會死一票人 :?改了
01:34:662 (3) - 讓它變成直的好不好,一般的flow也不會這樣放
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hi我代替ikanyai来摸图了

[gyro]
  1. 总的来说本身觉得图在原地转圈圈有点恶心,整个图没什么喜欢的概念。毕竟是easy,弄得简单而且好看一点也无妨
  2. ds可能太小了 bpm低建议弄高一点吧


[pata-mon]


[hyper]
  1. 00:15:462 (3,4) - 这里选择不弄1/3有理由吗?
  2. 00:32:062 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里别用manual stack吧 看起来间距不一样
  3. 00:33:862 (1) - 00:35:462 (1) - 这两个部分copypaste比较好吧
  4. 00:52:562 (2) - 建议在红线开始吧 毕竟红线又不是没声音 而且蓝线开始很难预料
  5. 01:12:262 (1,2) - 可能考虑新的pattern?这个看起来有点乱
  6. 01:24:462 (3,4) - 距离会不会太远?图之前没那么远过 而且还是三连(虽然我是觉得好看
  7. 01:48:662 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - stacking弄一下吧
  8. 01:57:862 (1) - 要不和01:29:062 (1,2) - 这个一样分成两个


[saika]
  1. 00:05:062 (1) - 把弯曲的部分往左拐吧 不碰到下一个滑条比较好看
  2. 00:19:462 (1,2,3) - 说真的是有点丑 但是没有更好的办法
  3. 00:40:262 (1,2,3) - 00:41:862 (1,2,3,4) - 这两个旋律不同是什么原因
  4. 00:45:662 (3,4) - 有点乱 让4在3的头stack应该比较能玩
  5. 00:55:462 (4,5) - 这整个部分都滥用3/4导致这个旋律失效 构思有点模糊
  6. 01:42:262 (5,6) - 这个乱放的吧?蓝线啥都没?

    觉得硬用ds混了美观


[another]
  1. 00:02:662 (1,1,2) - 怎么连hyper都概括了1/3但这里没有?
    00:15:462 (3,4) - hyper^
  2. 00:44:062 (2,3) - 距离能再调大?00:42:462 (2,3) - 就和这个一样
  3. 00:47:262 (2,3) - 突然这里之后远跳不见了?

    重音展示不凸显


[rizia]
  1. 00:39:662 (3,4) - 间距太大了吧。。。音乐又没什么特别的
  2. 01:29:862 (1) - 或许让滑条跟着vocal变化拐弯吗?
  3. 01:31:462 (1) - sv是能再小

    kiai跟vocal有点弱,考虑多跟instrumental?


[fanzhen]
  1. 00:28:262 (1,2,3) - vs 00:29:862 (1,2,3) - 虽然pattern大概一样的但是距离我觉得可能差太远了 玩起来感觉不一样
  2. 00:34:662 (4,5) - 弯度不一。。。

    考虑kiai的旋律弄得更乱一点 概括音乐里更多东西


[neilperry]
  • dab non chinese speaker

    ngl not your most structurally sound map.. a lot of parts just dont really work well with the song
  1. 00:01:862 (1) - sliders in this 1st entire section look pretty ugly imo
  2. 00:07:862 (1,2,3) - not really fit as a 1st introduction triplet spaced stream, its too hard as well as considering the fact the intro is slow
  3. 00:22:862 (2,3) - 00:23:662 (2,3) - distance here is way too big and isnt justifiable imo
  4. 00:27:462 (1) - 00:28:262 (1) - these 2 sections have vastly different backing rhythm, would prefer if they were properly differetiated instead of maintaining the same structure (repeated in this whole section inconsistently)
  5. 00:40:262 (1) - diagonal flow in this entire section doesnt play nice, esp considering this is a slow section
  6. 00:51:062 (3) - nc?
  7. 01:03:862 (4) - random out of nowhere slider
  8. 01:19:462 (1,2,3,4) - technically 1/3rds...

    preferably have all the spaced streams 1 NC colourhaxxed than having it like that. i guess i get the wave slider aesthetic, but sometimes it just doesnt work in certain sections of the music. the map is significantly lacklustre compared to the rest of the set imo. if i had any suggestions it'd be for introduction of more pattern variation i guess.. i can't really say much bc this map rn is just unpolished in various ways


加油大佬们
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Emilia wrote:

hi我代替ikanyai来摸图了


[neilperry]
  • dab non chinese speaker

    ngl not your most structurally sound map.. a lot of parts just dont really work well with the song
  1. 00:01:862 (1) - sliders in this 1st entire section look pretty ugly imo nah im ugly mapper
  2. 00:07:862 (1,2,3) - not really fit as a 1st introduction triplet spaced stream, its too hard as well as considering the fact the intro is slow got same conception in same slow parts 00:45:662 (1,2,3,4) - so i wanna be consistence with my spacing
  3. 00:22:862 (2,3) - 00:23:662 (2,3) - distance here is way too big and isnt justifiable imo ya nerfed some
  4. 00:27:462 (1) - 00:28:262 (1) - these 2 sections have vastly different backing rhythm, would prefer if they were properly differetiated instead of maintaining the same structure (repeated in this whole section inconsistently) uhh cant cleary understand your concern. i just followed for doubles on bg sound with structurised rythm
  5. 00:40:262 (1) - diagonal flow in this entire section doesnt play nice, esp considering this is a slow section dont see any troubles with it tbh.
  6. 00:51:062 (3) - nc? wanna keep this cuz spacing really readable. and wanna keep my nc consistence which emphasize parts. so in my opinion nc will confuse in this part
  7. 01:03:862 (4) - random out of nowhere slider ya
  8. 01:19:462 (1,2,3,4) - technically 1/3rds... ya sure

    preferably have all the spaced streams 1 NC colourhaxxed than having it like that. i guess i get the wave slider aesthetic, but sometimes it just doesnt work in certain sections of the music. the map is significantly lacklustre compared to the rest of the set imo. if i had any suggestions it'd be for introduction of more pattern variation i guess.. i can't really say much bc this map rn is just unpolished in various ways dont think that colorhaxing of spaced streams really needed. visually spacing looks readable and after a lot of testplays i see how it easy for sidereading. Ya and thanks for rest opinion, the attitude that I deserve
Thanks!
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wow 是Emilia.

Emilia wrote:

hi我代替ikanyai来摸图了

[gyro]
  1. 总的来说本身觉得图在原地转圈圈有点恶心,整个图没什么喜欢的概念。毕竟是easy,弄得简单而且好看一点也无妨 ehhh
  2. ds可能太小了 bpm低建议弄高一点吧这样就行
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Column: 1|2|3|4
[4K Normal <-这是Easy吧- -]
  1. 00:04:062 (4062|1,4262|3,4462|0,4862|3,5062|2,5062|1) - 可以改成这样 有个挺明显的拖音,00:02:462 (2462|1,2662|2,3262|2,3462|1) - 前面可以改成23 32
  2. 00:09:862 (9862|3) - 可以换成hold 有个挺明显的音
  3. 00:17:262 - 00:17:662 - 这两个音可以跟
  4. 00:24:262 (24262|2,24662|1,25062|2,25462|1) -
  5. 00:33:062 (33062|0,33362|3) - 可以把鼓一起跟了
    或者
  6. 00:37:062 - 00:40:262 - 这一段漏了很多很重的鼓点强行去跟3/4我觉得不好,你可以考虑下改成这样
  7. 00:40:862 - 这后面的鼓点全跟吧,00:45:262 - 这后面的一串加个00:45:462 - 和00:45:662 - 就行了
  8. 00:52:262 (52262|1) - 这个hold有点多余,00:51:462 (51462|3) - 这个hold拉长到结尾就行
  9. 00:53:262 - 这后面的红线我觉得全都能跟,不然就把00:53:462 - 00:54:262 - 这样的24拍搞成double
  10. 01:06:062 - 这个有锣音,可以放个12的double,01:06:262 - 改成34
  11. 01:18:262 (78262|1) - 直接1/4串 不用怕
  12. 01:29:062 (89062|3,89462|0) - 至少这两个应该收在白线上啊 - - 这又不是转谱,白线上也没有note,其实这个警报音从01:25:062 - 就开始了,不过Normal难度就算了,不跟也罢
  13. 01:32:262 (92262|0,92662|3) - 怎么又突然跟人声,继续跟鼓点吧
  14. 01:33:262 -
  15. 01:34:162 - 01:34:462 - 01:34:862 -
  16. 后面的部分参照上面两个抓音,这里相当于是kiai段了,可以抓更多一点。这样24拍就不用double了(看情况,double了难度会再加一点把Hyper做难点就行,反正你抓了double也不会过2星的)01:38:162 - 01:38:862 - 把这两个再抓上增加节奏变化
  17. 01:51:862 (111862|2,111962|3,112062|1,112162|0) - 可以反过来
  18. 01:52:662 - 这里再24clapdouble
  19. 01:55:462 - 参照前面的mod,反过来就可以了1234
  20. 01:57:862 (117862|3,118262|0) - 这两个hold改成12341234的1/4串真的不算很难


[4K Hyper <-摸完才发现是zzh做的,抓音水平退化了这么多了吗]
  1. 00:00:662 (662|0) - 音大概在00:00:562 - 就开始了,还是不抓了吧
  2. 00:11:462 (11462|3,11595|2,11728|1,11862|2) - 这一段仔细听的话00:12:062 - 00:12:162 - 是snap在1/4上的不是1/3,整段的节奏是1/3接1/4再接1/3再接1/4……顺带一提00:06:662 (6662|3,7062|1) - 也是这样的节奏不过你简化了
  3. 00:20:012 (20012|1) - 是不是该snap在1/8上啊,00:20:162 (20162|0) - 反正这个肯定是在蓝线上的
  4. 00:39:762 - 这个可以跟一下吧
  5. 00:51:462 (51462|0) - 可以hold
  6. 01:51:862 (111862|3,111962|2,112062|1,112162|2,112262|3,112262|0) - 改成左右double拍?
  7. 01:53:862 - 1再加个note
  8. 01:58:562 - 4再加个note?


[4K Another <-水个摸]
  1. 00:11:462 - 同Hyper
  2. 00:17:062 - 搞点事
  3. 00:19:462 (19462|1,19462|0) - Hyper都跟了- -
  4. 01:33:062 (93062|0,93062|1,93162|2,93262|1,93262|0,93362|2,93462|0,93462|1) - 不是很懂这个pattern跟了什么音
  5. 01:55:862 (115862|3,116662|3) - hold都放在1吧
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rizia's ?
只摸mania了吧,水一水
1|2|3|4
[4k nm]
  1. 00:33:062 - 不考虑再加1/4吗,这里drum的音还是挺明显的
  2. 00:45:062 (45062|1) - 考虑移到1?
  3. 00:53:062 - = =这里怎么这么多1/1,这里节奏还是挺丰富的吧,也有vocal
  4. 01:05:862 (65862|3,66262|3) - 这两个可以考虑换成LN?因为背景有个wub sound
  5. 01:43:462 (103462|1,103862|2,104262|0) - 这里能考虑换成123,跟一下vocal的音高

wrnm前后画风也太不一样了
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23:34 *ZZHBOY is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1153089 nomico / DOWNFORCE - BRAVE OUT]
23:34 ZZHBOY: 什么时候可以卵壳?
23:39 yf_bmp: 什么时候
23:39 yf_bmp: 总之会rank
23:39 yf_bmp: 缺7k摸
23:39 yf_bmp: 1个
23:40 ZZHBOY: 我摸算吗
23:40 yf_bmp: 算

mod for 7k mania section
/1/-/7/
[7K NM]
  1. 00:19:462 (19462|4) - 移到7 你摆错了吧
  2. 00:22:462 (22462|6) - 移到7 对称
  3. 00:26:662 (26662|1) - 延长到00:27:462 - 咋样啊
  4. 00:30:162 (30162|5,30162|2) - 和后面不一样啊 放成1/4吧 跟00:36:562 (36562|1,36662|6) - 一样
  5. 01:05:062 (65062|6,65262|4,65462|2,65662|0) - 放这个干嘛 继续放1拍滑条不好吗
  6. 01:05:062 (65062|6,65262|4,65462|2,65662|0) - 放到6 跟上一个放一栏怎么样啊 一样的音
  7. 01:45:662 - 在4加个?


[7K HD]
  1. 00:06:662 - 这里两个就够了吧 删掉个?
  2. 00:15:062 - 这里好像是1/3拍的音 高难度也是
  3. 00:17:062 - 这里的音不跟下吗 高难度也是
  4. 00:26:562 - 这里不加个note跟下?
  5. 00:30:262 - 这里不加note吗 高难度也是
  6. 00:38:862 - 加个
  7. 00:46:262 (46262|1) - 好难打 移到7去


[7K MX]
  1. 00:24:262 (24262|1) - 为什么不放到1啊
  2. 00:52:562 - s1b 音下错了吧
  3. 01:58:062 - 前后都3个为什么这里两个 加一个?
    看不懂面条艺术


维多哥能不能速度下音效 下完借我1键复制一下 3q
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