1. AR8.5 is really enough, the jumps are not intense at all with such mild BPM.
2. 00:07:295 (3) - Finish?
3. 00:14:536 (1) - Probably you want to stack this on (4)'s tail?
4. 00:14:743 (2) - This circle does not play very comfortably compared to other similar patterns as it stacks right at the object before. I would suggest you placing it at 00:14:122 (5) - and CTRL+G both 00:14:950 (3,6) - to achieve a nicer flow.
5. 00:20:743 (7) - Clap with 45% volume?
6. 00:21:157 - Missing a whistle?
7. 00:57:570 - Finish? It also sounds good with a finish at 00:59:226 - and 01:10:812 - , each of these needs some emphasis.
8. 01:09:157 (3,3) - ^ , may remove the whistles if you find them too loud. Same applies on 01:12:467 (1,4) - .
9. 01:24:881 (3) - CTRL+G for a larger spacing between 01:24:881 (3,4) - , as the snare at 01:25:295 - is stronger than the bass at 01:24:881 - .
10. 01:26:536 - Clap with 45% volume?

1. 00:53:019 (2,3,4,5) - These do not look good, move 00:53:846 (5) - until the distance between 00:53:433 (3,5) - looks the same as that between 00:53:019 (2,4) - ? I also CTRL+G 00:53:846 (5) - , because it actually plays a lot better, up to you of course! Suggestion here
2. 00:54:674 (3,5) - Use either curve or straight slider please, they are the stand-alone pair of kinked sliders I have found through the difficulty lol
3. 01:00:260 (5,6) - The flow is kinda broken imo, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4539211
4. 01:06:260 (2,3,4,5) - I guess I have mentioned these above.

1. 00:32:743 (1) - The NC is not necessary, because the object is still within the calm part.
2. 00:41:226 (2,5) - Stack them perfectly with the slider head.
3. 01:09:157 - Feel really unnatural skipping both 01:09:363 - and 01:10:191 - although I know you are trying to follow the vocal. Please reconsider adjusting the rhythm, here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/n8SFM/227e32be75.jpg Same for this stanza 01:12:467 - . At least make both stanzas consistent.

IamKwaN wrote:

Hitsound suggestions in Insane could be applied on all the difficulties.
[Insane]

1. AR8.5 is really enough, the jumps are not intense at all with such mild BPM. changed
2. 00:07:295 (3) - Finish? added one, but with 25% volume, sounds good
3. 00:14:536 (1) - Probably you want to stack this on (4)'s tail? was supposed to stack it idk wat happened
4. 00:14:743 (2) - This circle does not play very comfortably compared to other similar patterns as it stacks right at the object before. I would suggest you placing it at 00:14:122 (5) - and CTRL+G both 00:14:950 (3,6) - to achieve a nicer flow. okay, changed it up
5. 00:20:743 (7) - Clap with 45% volume? cool, applied to other diffs too, tho I went with 30% instead
6. 00:21:157 - Missing a whistle? i put whistles on the objects that you click for vocals
7. 00:57:570 - Finish? It also sounds good with a finish at 00:59:226 - and 01:10:812 - , each of these needs some emphasis. sounds much better now
8. 01:09:157 (3,3) - ^ , may remove the whistles if you find them too loud. Same applies on 01:12:467 (1,4) - . i think they are fine imo edit: i decided to remove them
9. 01:24:881 (3) - CTRL+G for a larger spacing between 01:24:881 (3,4) - , as the snare at 01:25:295 - is stronger than the bass at 01:24:881 - . ooh, cool did this
10. 01:26:536 - Clap with 45% volume? did this

[Hard]

1. 00:53:019 (2,3,4,5) - These do not look good, move 00:53:846 (5) - until the distance between 00:53:433 (3,5) - looks the same as that between 00:53:019 (2,4) - ? I also CTRL+G 00:53:846 (5) - , because it actually plays a lot better, up to you of course! kept same pattern but gave it more space, it SHOULD be better now imo.Suggestion here
2. 00:54:674 (3,5) - Use either curve or straight slider please, they are the stand-alone pair of kinked sliders I have found through the difficulty lol idk what I was thinking here tbh haha, changed
3. 01:00:260 (5,6) - The flow is kinda broken imo, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4539211 oo, I like this suggestion
4. 01:06:260 (2,3,4,5) - I guess I have mentioned these above. did the same as i did with previous

[Advanced]

1. 00:32:743 (1) - The NC is not necessary, because the object is still within the calm part. ok
2. 00:41:226 (2,5) - Stack them perfectly with the slider head. i swear the editor is screwing me over cause i stacked these x.x
3. 01:09:157 - Feel really unnatural skipping both 01:09:363 - and 01:10:191 - although I know you are trying to follow the vocal. Please reconsider adjusting the rhythm, here is my suggestion: http://puu.sh/n8SFM/227e32be75.jpg Same for this stanza 01:12:467 - . At least make both stanzas consistent. I made the first part the same as the last part, should be fine now~

More finishes in the kiai would be cool. i found other places to add some finishes, should be goodI have told Rizia to rebubble the set after you have applied stuff above, so please call me back after everything is ready.

IamKwaN wrote:

01:10:812 - Missing finish in Normal. removedADDED
01:09:157 (3,3) - I mean adding finishes on these in all difficulties, sorry that I didn't write properly. And you didn't remove the whistles in Easy. the claps are enough imo, removed the whistle on easy
01:20:950 (2) - really nazi, move this a bit so it stacks well with previous slider tail in Insane. fixed

I guess that's all. O_O

IamKwaN wrote:

I am also NOT a BN.

IamKwaN wrote:

I am going to direct them to Okoratu q.q

Hiki5 wrote:

Nice Beatmap i really like this map