Lumael wrote:

Hello! NM Request on queue

General

1. Slider border colour is not fitting the background, I suggest you to put a kind of blue or white

its yellow becos of windows colors is yellow )

Easy

1. I recommend lowering the SV on the entire song, 1.2x is too fast even for 137 BPM, it's OK for a Normal i think its hard to see diffirence betwin 1 and 1.2? but i lowered AP OD
   00:01:101 (1,2) - This kind of pattern is not recommended to an Easy. Flow is a bit awkward, always put the next note/slider facing the tail of the other i cheked last ranked maps and think its okay for now -
   00:03:729 (1,2,1) - ^
   00:11:612 (4,5) - ^
   00:16:868 (2,3) - ^
   00:24:313 (2) - Move to 208|192 to blanket with 00:22:999 (1) - nah i did it like this to look similar as 00:22:561 (4) -
   00:26:503 (1,2) - Again, flow
   00:45:335 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved done
   00:49:715 (1) - This shape can be improved, it's a bit weird curved this way well i dont know that to do - just let it be )
   00:49:715 (1,2) - Flow
   01:03:729 (1,2) - Try a slider blanket, but should be fine this way i did it intentional - also its some kind of blanket anyway )
   01:05:919 (1) - Remove whistle? i copied hs from hard/it sounds weird here ) ok remowed - and on normal too
   01:26:503 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved ok
   
   Seens like the second half of the song is much prettier than the first half lol

Normal

1. 00:06:357 (3,4) - 1/4 is not fitting, I would change for 1/2 there is rhytm on blue ticks - so it like this
   00:08:766 (4,1) - Try a blanket here i dont like this kind of litle blankets
   00:12:050 (2,4) - ^ its blanketed in some way//
   00:13:364 (2,3) - ^
   00:19:496 (4,2) - http://puu.sh/jhKbR/f0e2465a93.jpg did it but in other side ) http://puu.sh/jiwix/e01da6a3df.jpg
   00:22:123 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/jhKjs/562a653949.jpg it was in plan but its hard to place next slider - so i lowered it
   00:28:693 (3,4) - Fail stack i did it intentional// i think its moreclear this way/
   00:47:087 (3,4) - Try a blanket not possible with this DS
   01:25:190 (3,4) - Same as above ^ ^

Hard

1. 00:03:728 (7) - NC? okay
   00:07:232 (7) - ^ no
   00:50:481 (5,3,4) - Fix overlap visible only in redactor/
   01:01:320 (5) - Add whistle on the head
   01:09:423 (4,5) - Make them parallel
   01:15:335 (5) - Add whistle on the head i think it dosnt fit
   01:17:963 (2) - Add whistle i think there is no need of HS
   01:18:839 (4) - ^
   01:27:817 (10) - Fix it making it straight down i did it intentional - liked it )

GL!

Xazariorus wrote:

В изи:
- Спинер 01:05:919-01:08:547 передвинь начало на 01:06:795 заместо него поставь слайдер 01:05:919-01:06:357 и слайдер "туда-обратно" на 01:08:985-01:09:861 укоротил спиннер немного и добавил слайдер перед ним, после не стал - там же цепляются что нужно после спиннера побольше времени оставлять

В нормале:
- 00:09:642 - не хватает точки для ритма - ну там же на лирику, да и не стоит нормал загружать кругами
- Тоже что в изи со спинером 01:06:138-01:08:547 в начале точку в конец на белые вершины слайдер "туда-обратно" не здесь я тоже думаю что всё хорошо и так
- На промежутке 01:12:926-01:13:583 лучше заменить 2 слайдера на один повторяющийся вроде хорошо, но слайдеры на 3 повтора для нормалов стараюсь не ставить, да и переделывать там много придется

В харде:
- 00:21:576 - тут не хватает точки я слышу 2 четких удара
- 00:36:576 - перенеси от предыдущих точек в сторону по мне было бы лучше ну да так путаницы будет поменьше
- 00:49:605 - по моему лучше убрать оставлю
- 00:50:371 - аналогично тоже оставлю

думаю всё, удачи

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

привет~

[General]

• Размер БГ не соответствует нормам для ранка. измени его до 1366х7688 у меня 16 к 9 значит всё норм толку тянуть то ?
• Превью предлагаю переместить сюда 00:37:999 да ну - мне нравится как оно с дестени начинается
• Киаи тайм расположи так: начало здесь 00:38:766 (как и было), далее закончи его здесь 01:06:795. припев повторяется три раза поэтому его вообще хочется закончить здесь 01:20:809. Но это будет слишком длинный киаи так что просто перенеси конец сюда 01:06:795
да я тоже подумал что слишком длинный киай, но сделал так как есть чтобы на спиннере звездочки летели
• В Song Setup во вкладке Design напротив Widescreen Support - убери галочку. Это нужно только для сб. я работаю над добавлением сб
• Название сложностей не соответствуют действительности в игре. Изя - слишком сложная для изи. Норма - вообще стримы странные с исользованием синих тиков. Переименуй лучше дифы. Примерно так: Beginner, Advanced, Challenging
но ведь это ничего не меняет - только вуалирует и делает всё менее понятным - сейчас всё предельно ясно - простая, посложней и самая трудная, да и на нормале только слайдеры на синих тиках - это под музыку и очень просто играется

[Easy]

01:27:817 (1) - конец спиннера убери этот грубый Нормалхит. Сделай софт (как в нормале) чет на изи забыл ) поправил

спейсинг в норме, единственное нк у тебя сбиты. Распишу по нк:
00:07:233 (3) - новое комбо
00:12:488 (5) - нк и тут 00:13:364 (1) - убрать нк
00:15:992 (4) - нк и тут 00:16:430 (1) - убрать нк
00:41:831 (1) - убрать нк и тут 00:42:269 (2) - нк
00:45:335 (1) - убрать нк и тут 00:45:773 (2) - нк
00:49:277 (6) - нк и тут 00:49:715 (1) - убрать нк
00:55:845 (1) - убрать нк и тут 00:56:284 (2) - нк
00:59:350 (5) - убрать нк и тут 00:59:788 (1) - нк
01:03:291 (5) - нк и тут 01:03:729 (1) - убрать нк
01:17:306 (5) - нк и тут 01:17:744 (1) - убрать нк
01:26:065 (3) - нк
^ в изи они расставляются очень просто. Чаще всего на большие белые тики. В твоей песне это так. т.е. когда меняется ритм ( и на сильный бит бывает). Это читается лучше при игре. С нормалом и хардом сделай примерно так же. Если ритм один и тот же то и старайся нк ставить в том же месте.
не стоило тратить на это время, новое комбо я ставлю по лирике в основном , на большие белые тики ставить это скучно и слишком халявно - на мой взгляд так делают только ленивые мапперы. в игре это никак не читается ведь при игре ты не знаешь где большой белый тик, но слышишь песню, слова... новое комбо для индикации джампов тоже комильфо - это не то как нужно использовать новое комбо.
[Normal]

01:06:138 (1) - начало перенеси сюда 01:06:795 сделал, + добавил круг пред спиннером
00:14:021 (3,4) - ctrl+g - лучше играется

с нк то же самое что в изи. сделай такие же.

[Hard]

00:12:817 (2) - здесь сильный бит на белый тик. может переместить серкл сюда 00:12:926? и тут 00:12:707 можно разместить серкл
там круг был.. ну верну пожалуй круг на 00:12:817 (2) , только опять джамп радномный будет), а на 00:12:707 совсем не в ритм песни
00:17:196 (4,5) - не обоснованный джамп. как и тут 00:19:057 (5,6,7) - это тяжело читать потому что с таким же ритмом, до этого момента, джампов не было. лучше избегать таких моментов. Когда ритм меняется и если это позволяет музыка, то можно вставить джампы.
вся история осу это необоснованные джампы ) читается это легко, даже новички проходят с первого раза ( я тестил)
00:38:109 (1) - не нужно выделать здесь объекты новым комбо. и мне не нравится вообще этот слайдер, как-то не в ритм. попробуй так: тут 00:37:999, 00:38:109, 00:38:328, 00:38:547 - поставь серклы
я выделил этот слайдер чтобы подчеркнуть что припев пошел, а круги, ну да там есть хороший ритм, но мне больше нравится слайдер на лирику
01:06:904 (1) - может закончить его здесь 01:08:547? ибо он здесь как-то не к месту. либо замени его объектами
а мне нравится ) нужно же куданить спиннер запихнуть - вот. а продлить до круга, на простых я это сделал, но здесь лучше жмакать круги, чем заканчивать на даунбиты спиннер.

в харде тоже беда с нк, но тут по другому нужно расставить ибо тут есть джампы. Если интересно можешь отписать мне в игре и я тебе быстренько помогу расставить нк.

Удачи ~

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo, here is my mod as requested in my queue:

[Easy]

1. 00:03:729 (1) - Remove new combo, so it plays like 00:05:481 (1,2,3,4,5). i did it on normal - well ok
2. 01:06:795 (1) - Extend the spinner till 01:09:861? Makes more sense to me. there must be enought time after spinner for easy\normals - it not a rule, but people follow it ( ~4 white ticks)
3. 01:22:561 (1) - Remove new combo. Same as above, it will look more consistent. done

[Normal]
Here I will suggest you some new combo changes that I think will make the map more consistent. Feel free to not change it if you don't agree.

1. 00:10:298 (4) - Add new combo.
2. 00:11:174 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:12:050 (2).
3. 00:14:678 (5) - Add new combo.
4. 00:22:123 (5) - Add new combo.
5. 00:40:955 (6) - Add new combo, like you did with 00:44:459 (1).
6. 00:51:466 (5) - Add new combo.
7. 00:54:969 (5) - Add new combo, like you did with 00:58:474 (1).
8. 01:03:729 (3) - Add NC and remove it from 01:05:481 (1). i changed it
9. 01:06:795 (1) - Like Easy diff, extend the spinner till 01:09:861. explaned on easy
10. 01:11:612 (5) - Add new combo.nice catch

[Hard]

1. 00:30:007 (5) - Add new combo. nope
2. 00:48:401 (6,2) - Stack? cant see reason - not visible while playing
3. 00:50:371 (4,5) - I don't think a double is suitable here~ Move 00:50:481 (5) at 00:50:590 and shorten it for one tick. changed to circkes
4. 01:23:875 (4) - Extend it for one tick. Fits the music better.sounds good for me

That's all! I hope it helped and good luck.

Sieg wrote:

привет

офсет + 10 имо лучше добавил

хард:
00:26:503 (5,6) - старайся меньше использовать прямых слайдеров, алсо эти не параллельны перелопатил правя след паттерн
00:28:693 (3,4,5) - такие паттерны лучше размещать прямо по центру, хуже от это стилю не будет, а баланс будет лучше http://puu.sh/krxmi/81a3f56342.jpg ok
00:34:823 (6,1,2) - лучше их не стакать сразу после 00:34:166 (4,5) будут путать с 1\2 в мапе должны быть подковырки, но тут мало кто мажет - апроч циркл сразу это показывает
00:40:845 (3,4,6) - 6 ниже, уберет оверлап http://puu.sh/krxxt/47906e6874.jpg сделал, хотя заметно только в редакторе

в целом вполне, стиль немного стаорват, но все сделано аккуратно я такой да )

нормал
00:18:620 (2,3,4) - как-то не очень паттерн ну смотря как посмотреть - по мне норм (если с пред слайдером глянуть)
00:31:539 (3,5) - лучше без оверлапов ок

изи
00:16:868 (2,3,4,1) - как-то это все не взаимодействует между собой, нужен флоу
в целом изи смотрится как-то деревянно, оч. не хватает флоу
я перелопатил изи (начало)

Если поработать над изи, то можно и что-нибудь выжать из сета, хард понравился

LittlePigRMX wrote:

Hi from queue!

Easy
00:18:630 (4) - Distance done - thanks!
00:22:571 (4) - Consider Straightening this to match like 00:22:133 (3) - ? i made it like this to match next slider

Normal
Approach rate can't go higher than 5 for normal difficulties, so set it to 5 instead. i seen a lot of normals maped with 5.5

rs_fadeaway wrote:

привет, мод по англиский)

[Easy]
seems fine）

[Normal]
maybe CS4.2 not necessary？ i will keep it for now (=
00:28:703 (3,4) - too close its like a hand stack i think its fine
00:34:834 (4,5) - better placed separately

[Hard]
00:01:768 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - overlap 00:03:191 (5) - its not easy to check overlaps ) and its only can be seen in redactor, not visible while playing
00:20:491 (4) - move to x:256 y:132? it breacks symmetry with 00:19:944 (2,4) -
00:21:257 (6,7) - mb too faraway didnt changed
00:28:045 (1,2) - a little crook intentional
00:38:338 sure skip this sound？yes, kiai is vocal based, and this slider kinda change it to vocals i think )
01:06:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream maybe kinda hard? added repeat slider in the end
01:19:725 (6) - y:184
some notes placed seems not symmetry enough i think it flows better like this

btw the fireworks are so cute. i like it) спасибо )
удачи!

Lafayla wrote:

Hello :3~~
NM mod from my queue

Easy>
00:08:995 (1,3) - if you want to pretty things up a bit, you can take advantage of the curve on 00:08:995 (1,3) - to blanket like this
00:40:527 (3) - this blanket can be fixed to look better
00:54:542 (3) - this one too
01:08:556 (3) - this one too
^fixed all
01:26:075 (3) - I would make this a 1/1 slider and then do a 1/1 circle after it like this its same pattern i used in the begining, and i like sound on start of 01:26:513 (4) - slider be clickable so no changes

Normal>
00:13:374 (2,3) - this can be blanketed better im not for blankets in this place - its more for triangles ) so no changes
00:28:703 (3,4) - enable stacking in the editor to make this overlap cleanly done!

Hard>
00:21:257 (5,6,7) - I would stack 6 under 5 to emphasis 7 because the way it currently is, 6 is getting the emphasis when really I think 7 should be getting the emphasis
mb its different point of view bit for me its like both 00:21:476 (6,7) - getting emphasis there and in musics they sound somhow equal to me
01:21:148 (2) - it would probably be better to space this circle similarly to how you spaced 01:22:024 (5,2,5) -
you selected objects that realy to far from each other on time line - i didnt understand your idea sorry

Best of wishes with the mapset ego :3

21:52 ego_17: hello coud you please  test a map and say is diffspread are ok or not ?
21:52 DeRandom Otaku: ok
21:53 ego_17: this one (its kinda old so i need clarification) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/331892
21:56 DeRandom Otaku: rhythm wise. spread from easy to normal is not that good right now
21:57 DeRandom Otaku: i havent checked hard yet
21:57 DeRandom Otaku: but you need to definitely nerf 1/4 rhythms like 00:46:659 (2,3) - this one
21:57 ego_17: on normal?
21:57 DeRandom Otaku: yep on normal
21:58 DeRandom Otaku: its on 00:18:630 (2,3) - as well
21:58 DeRandom Otaku: probably repeats more times
21:58 ego_17: i think i can change this to repeat sliders
21:59 DeRandom Otaku: that will work fine
22:00 DeRandom Otaku: playability wise, you can nerf patterns like 00:40:965 (6,7,8) - this one in normal to a slider+circle
22:01 DeRandom Otaku: in easy you don't have two 1/1 circles in a row while in normal you have 3 1/2 circles repeat many times in the map
22:02 DeRandom Otaku: hard has kind of a gimmicky feeling to it, but spread from normal to hard seems ok
22:03 DeRandom Otaku: in hard, just dont make patterns like 00:51:914 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - this one because they are really tough for a hard
22:04 DeRandom Otaku: both stacks are next to each other, both have 3 circles each but one of the stack is 1/2 while the other one is 1/4
22:04 ego_17: thanks - i was most worried about normal-hard gap ) about 3 circles i added them in kiai most intence part for a little chalenge - thats fine i guess )
22:05 DeRandom Otaku: its ok to me but some BNs might not be too fond of it lol
22:05 DeRandom Otaku: every one has a different opinion so ya
22:07 ego_17: i think i can change this stack - not a big deal ) mb add slider
22:07 DeRandom Otaku: yep that works too

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]

1. Could you turn on epilepsy warning? this map has SB, so you should add it.

i think there is nothing special in SB that needs warning - its not a pulsing nightcore map

[Hard]

1. 00:01:878 (5,1,2,3) - 00:02:862 (4,5,6) - ~ this 4/3 rhythm is hard to read for players, they could read it as 1/1 or 1/2, you can make it as slider, then players can read it easily.
   i think its only hard then you dont know the song, but after you learn it its easy to follow
2. 00:09:870 (3,4) - this part has same problem as above, for seeing this, this rhythm can be easy to read for players.
   i changed this one and a 2 same patterns later
3. 00:14:250 (2,3) - in here, you didn't use big jump like this, but you made jump without any reason, then it is really weird for playing. could you set consistent DS with others?
   i nerfed this jump its not so big right now
4. 00:30:017 (5) - you should add NC in here? You divided NC around 1 downbeats, but only this part doesn't have NC
   its cos i wanted 00:28:703 (1,2,3) - be in one color
5. 00:38:338 - this part has vocal sound, but why you didn't follow this downbeat? this felt weird,
   changed to repeat slider
6. 00:38:775 (1,2,3) - 00:42:279 (4,5,6) - 00:45:783 (2,3,4) - etc...~ you followed ONLY vocal? this rhythm feels just old maps, and this part doesn't give any fun things, you should make it into sliders and follow drum and vocals, and map can be fun./
   this lyrics so strong, i cant imagine clicking smething except this de-de-destiny (= and i think i added enough notes to drums
7. 01:06:914 (1) - this spinner is too uneven, nothing follows this spinner, and makes weird rhythm in here, you should map this part.
   i want at last one spinner per diff and this looong note singer holds fits it
8. 01:11:622 (5,6) - too big DS even if this part doesn't have any emphasis. You should set consistent pattern for better expression,
   now it not so big

[Normal]

1. DS is too big comparing with other normal diffs? It looks little bit hard to play for newbie players....
   its smalest DS when objects dont overlap
2. 00:05:491 (1,2) - Ah, this part has 3/4 beats, but you only this part is expressed with 1/1 and 1/2? It has really bad rhythms, you didn't set consistency with 00:06:367 (3) - 00:01:987 (1,2) - .
   there also 1/2 and 1/1 beats, so i folow 3/4 for first part and 1/2 for second
3. 00:04:615 (5,6) - change it into 1/1 slider or 2 circles, you didn't add 1/2 beats even Hard diff.
   changed to slider
4. 00:22:790 (6) - Unnecessary beat thinking about it is Normal diff, not so necessary in here. deleted
5. 00:28:703 (3,4) - you didn't stacked ever, why you stacked here? It makes really weird pattern? And this part doesn't have emphasis. You should unstack for better moving for consistency.
   its stacked to fit pattern in playfield
6. 00:40:965 (6,7,8) - Do you think this part should be emphasized that you should add 3 clickable beats? I don't think this part has really strong emphasis. Just make slider for better music expressing.
   its middle diff so a little challenge there ) and i seen a lot ranked normals with 4 circles in a row
7. 01:26:951 (2,3) - Don't make 1/4 rhythm in Normal diff, it makes really hard and confusing pattern for newbies. Remember, Easy and Normal diffs are for newbies.
   well changed to 1/2 sliders, for me only lowest diff in set for beginers

GL

Voli wrote:

Hard

1. 00:20:381 (2,4) - if you moved these inwards a bit they wouldnt touch each other, making it visually cleaner moved, now they not touch each other
   
2. 00:33:519 (2) - this one should rather be stacked on 00:33:848 (3) - i think? Like that you'd have a good jump towards the strong finish/vocal sound.
   i prefer summetry pattern there 00:33:256 (1,2,4,5) -
   
3. 00:34:833 (1,2,3) - pls dont put different rhythms together in one stack, that makes it really confusing to read, especially with the blue tick rhythms here. unstacked 00:35:555 (3) -
   
4. 01:04:177 (2,3,4,5,1) - you can make the pattern symmetrical?
   mb its not realy obvious but its a part of this pattern 01:04:351 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - rotated it to make it look better
   
5. 01:08:885 (2) - i think it would look cool if you made 01:08:885 (2) - parallel to 01:09:433 (4) - done!
   
6. 01:09:433 (4,5) - why is the movement change so slight? either make them completely parallel or make it more obvioous like https://voli.s-ul.eu/i3Vb7nKa.png
   made them more like on screenshot, also did it for 01:13:767 (1,2) -
   
7. 01:12:060 (1,8) - move them a bit left so theyre on the y axis perfectly (sorry it triggers me lol) moved from y256 to y255 tell me if it enoungh or not =)
   
8. 01:16:002 (1,3) - you could stack these for visual cleanliness - probably would need to move 01:17:316 (4) - a little more down for spacing ok (now 01:18:366 (3,5) - also stacked
   
9. 01:18:849 (4,5,6) - symmetrical? I mean theyre basically almost symmetrical, why not make them entirely :p looks good - done
   
10. 01:21:148 (2) - why is this one stacked underneath (no movement) but there is movement towards 01:22:024 (5) - ? I think theyre the same sounds and should use similar movements by that logic. I feel you executed it better here: 01:24:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
    i think its because i like how tripple is stacked with next circle 01:20:601 (3,4,1,2) - no changes
    
11. 01:23:885 (4) - the rhythm fits better here if you extend the slider to the red tick
    but there woud be big jump for next circle, better left it like this or i can make it a circle like in the begining
    
12. 01:27:279 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Due to the weird rhythm of the drums there, this feels really off. To portray it accurately, this rhythm would work: https://voli.s-ul.eu/1BI9w5kX.png (1/6, 1/8 (yellow tick), 1/6). This may seem really weird though but may work if you put them in a stack as i've did. I feel you should ask some other bns what they think though..
    i edited this place in Audacity to fit 1/4 ticks - hope its good now
    
13. see if similar things occur in other patterns too please, i don't point the same issue out multiple times

Normal

1. 00:01:768 (2,3) - Why not stack these? It looks way easier to read and visually cleaner
   done (changed pattern a little)
   
2. 00:05:491 (1) - the rhythm of this slider seems weird, the repeats (00:01:987 (1,2) - ) cover all of the sounds but this one goes over the middle sound, maybe just make it a repeat just like the other. same goes for 01:24:323 (1) - and maybe others i didnt notice
   i did it cos there would be to many same repeat sliders - like 3 in a row, so i changed one to long slider and circle. and i like how its visualy better - 00:04:570 (5,1) - and 01:23:402 (5,1) -
   
3. 00:10:308 (3,4,5) - plz make it a perfect triangle (ctrl+up 00:10:746 (5) - 4 times)
   done (didnt get ctrl+up 00:10:746 (5) - 4 times but perfected tiangle for shure)
   
4. 00:12:060 (2,4) - blanket could be visually better: https://voli.s-ul.eu/h1ZZ4BTV.png (make sure to fix the symmetry too then)
   ok i like how sliders flow better with 00:13:110 (1) - now
   
5. 00:31:768 (4) - maybe make this slider move to the left instead of upwards? overlapping it with 00:30:673 (1) - doesn't look very good and might be confusing for normal players as the repeat is covered that way. you might have to move some objects around etc. to make this work

done, but i changed pattern tell me if its ok or not


Easy

1. 00:51:914 (3) - rotate it like this? the angle is less harsh for this difficulty then: https://voli.s-ul.eu/70XALDFn.png ok
   
2. 01:03:739 (1,2) - you can make these curves work together way better by rotating 01:05:053 (2) - by about -15 degrees and moving it like https://voli.s-ul.eu/26UsJcS9.png -- you'll have to do it for the other side too if you apply

rotated them

Alright, feel free to call me back for recheck. I think the map can be ranked but some things could be improved tho. Cute storyboard and cool simple/old style mapping ^^