1. Expert (5.86 stars, 799 notes)
2. Hard (2.95 stars, 560 notes)
3. Insane (4.26 stars, 659 notes)
4. Normal (2.07 stars, 264 notes)

1. 03:47:638 (2) - This reverse slider doesn't really follow anything. Remove it.
2. 03:52:166 (2) - ^
3. 00:24:996 (2) - NC
4. 01:05:751 (4) - NC
5. Check your overall NC. :3

1. 00:31:223 (5,6) - Move this over to the right, so that it doesn't get overlapped.
2. 00:43:958 (4,1) - I find this transition from vocals to drums to be a bit weird.
3. 00:55:562 (4) - The rhythm sounds weird here. Remove (4) and place a note on the blue tick.
4. 03:38:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try reverse sliders instead.
5. From 00:00:091 (1) - to 00:08:581 (6) - you could lower the volume down to about 30%. Also, consider removing the finishes.
6. 00:13:109 (7,8,9) - Try a reverse slider here instead.

_vanity wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. o/
[Normal]

1. 03:47:638 (2) - This reverse slider doesn't really follow anything. Remove it. yes
2. 03:52:166 (2) - ^ yes
3. 00:24:996 (2) - NC keep. 2 long white line add NC all.
4. 01:05:751 (4) - NC ^
5. Check your overall NC. :3 ^

[Hard]

1. 00:31:223 (5,6) - Move this over to the right, so that it doesn't get overlapped.
2. 00:43:958 (4,1) - I find this transition from vocals to drums to be a bit weird. I know your feel. but, this drum too strong. i want keep this.
3. 00:55:562 (4) - The rhythm sounds weird here. Remove (4) and place a note on the blue tick.
4. 03:38:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try reverse sliders instead. keep mind.
5. From 00:00:091 (1) - to 00:08:581 (6) - you could lower the volume down to about 30%. Also, consider removing the finishes.　done volume change all diff. finish is keep. i like it.
6. 00:13:109 (7,8,9) - Try a reverse slider here instead. keep.

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Good song. Good luck.

1. 00:18:770 (3,4,5) - Very small aesthetic inconsistency here. As you can see, 4 and 5 are not the same distance from 3. The only reason I mention it is because it's quite noticeable.
2. 00:21:883 (6) - Similar thing here with 4,5,6
3. 00:23:581 (5) - Here as well. Since you use a lot of triangle patterns, it's nice to go around and try to get the perfectly spaced.
4. 01:06:600 (4,5,6) - I would move 6 a bit lower to be more in line with a triangle sort of shape.
5. 01:11:977 - Very strong drum beat on this note, should be represented with a hitsound.
6. 01:38:581 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - NC pattern is sort of confusing here. If you want to NC every 1/3 beat pattern, then add a NC on 01:39:430 (4) -
7. 01:47:496 (4,5,6,8) - Similar thing to what I mentioned earlier on. Would be nice to have uniform spacing here.
8. 02:09:147 - I don't see a reason to delay this break. Nothing special about this timing point. May apply in other difficulties.
9. 02:59:807 (1,2) - Spacing is really awkward here since the two objects are really close to each other.
10. Lastly I would highly recommend bumping the AR to at least 9.3. It makes a lot of sense considering how drum intense this song is, and since it's quite a fast BPM. It would also work really nicely with the low CS.

1. At the start, I don't see any reasoning for all the random SV changes. You haven't done it in your expert difficulty, so it creates a sort of inconsistency. Not to mention, it doesn't play out nicely.

DahplA wrote:

[Expert]

1. 00:18:770 (3,4,5) - Very small aesthetic inconsistency here. As you can see, 4 and 5 are not the same distance from 3. The only reason I mention it is because it's quite noticeable. done
2. 00:21:883 (6) - Similar thing here with 4,5,6 nice, fixed.
3. 00:23:581 (5) - Here as well. Since you use a lot of triangle patterns, it's nice to go around and try to get the perfectly spaced. instead, fix (2,3,5) perfect triangle.
4. 01:06:600 (4,5,6) - I would move 6 a bit lower to be more in line with a triangle sort of shape. fix perfect triangle.
5. 01:11:977 - Very strong drum beat on this note, should be represented with a hitsound. done.
6. 01:38:581 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - NC pattern is sort of confusing here. If you want to NC every 1/3 beat pattern, then add a NC on 01:39:430 (4) - fixed, yeah seems nice.
7. 01:47:496 (4,5,6,8) - Similar thing to what I mentioned earlier on. Would be nice to have uniform spacing here. fixed.
8. 02:09:147 - I don't see a reason to delay this break. Nothing special about this timing point. May apply in other difficulties. instead add spinner all diff.
9. 02:59:807 (1,2) - Spacing is really awkward here since the two objects are really close to each other. x1.70→x.2.00 move.
10. Lastly I would highly recommend bumping the AR to at least 9.3. It makes a lot of sense considering how drum intense this song is, and since it's quite a fast BPM. It would also work really nicely with the low CS. okay. trying AR9.3

[Insane]

1. At the start, I don't see any reasoning for all the random SV changes. You haven't done it in your expert difficulty, so it creates a sort of inconsistency. Not to mention, it doesn't play out nicely. I believe the pros and cons this thing. now, keep it.

The rest of it is fine. Nice spacings, I like it. Good luck.

Scebtile wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

First off, I only modded the Insane diff because the expert diff is still too high for my modding skills. So let's begin!

Insane

General

The normal-hitsounds that start at 00:18:204 (1) is really low for a loud rock song like this.. When I test played it, I kinda got confused at some parts because I couldn't follow the hitsounds because of how low they were. So I suggest you increase the volume of the hitsounds to 85% at least. volume is fine imo.

Hitsounds

These are the parts where I think a clap should be added:

Open

00:23:581 (4)
00:24:430 (7) (Only at the start of the slider)
00:34:053 (1) (Only at the start of the slider)
02:47:072 (10) (Only at the start of the slider)
02:51:600 (10) (Only at the start of the slider)
02:56:128 (8) (Only at the start of the slider) All hitsound added to all diff.

Technical

00:02:072 (1) - I'm gonna have to agree with the person who pointed this out. There really is no reason for the random SV change for all of the sliders like this. Plus this is a 4 star so it might be confusing to some players. I have reason. I took cymbal sound. so, i can slow SV and fit. also, good playable pattern.

00:14:524 (2) - Move to x:72, y:336 so it would be in the middle of the sliders. (Looks better and more appealing this way) done

01:25:562 (7) - This slider doesn't really fit the flow that the your map has. Maybe do it like this instead? done

02:27:260 (5) - NC

02:29:241 (1) - Remove NC

02:36:317 (5) - NC

02:46:506 (6) - ^

02:51:034 (6) - ^

02:55:562 (5) - ^ some NC fixed.

And that's about it!

The rest is perfect for me. Really solid map. Good luck!

TequilaWolf wrote:

mod

Expert-

I testplayed this a few times and when watching my own replays I realise I was hitting too early starting from 01:21:600 to 01:39:713. I feel offset there is around -7ms or so (which doesn't make sense since the whole map is supposed to be timed perfectly), but I'm not a timing expert. I can feel bit weird timing. I'll get more nicely.

00:09:147 (1,2) - since music changes here maybe you wanna increase spacing from 00:09:147 (1,2) - to 00:09:572 (3,4) - instead of using DS It's not big change, so, i think keep fine.
00:21:317 (4) - maybe move 3 grids up y48 for better blanket, also 00:22:024 (7) - instead fix slider.
00:30:657 - note maybe, there is a sound have sound, but, i want empty here.
00:50:751 (2) - would ctrl+g, and also ctrl+g 00:51:034 (1) - done
00:54:430 (1,2,3) - hmm..you can consider http://puu.sh/mnwIV/8d818988b5.jpg I think it fits better sorry, i want keep rhythm
01:05:326 - note i don't need here imo.
02:23:864 (1) - maybe make it 1/4 slider nice idea, consider it.
02:27:260 (4) - would ctrl+g, too small spacing not too small imo.
03:04:902 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - found 1/3 stream here hard to read. maaaybe just use 1/4 slider and circle in center of playfield i want keep 1/3 and i'll find more good pattern.

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1. 00:13:675 (1) - Not a fan of this spinner, basically I think you could just remove it and map sth there, because it's just a shame to leave those 4 white ticks because of that recovery time.
2. 00:28:251 - Feels weird when there's no clap here despite the same instrument landed on both 00:28:109 and 00:28:251 .
3. 00:38:581 (5,6) - I would change these kicksliders into sth else, I can see that you're following the instrument but it feels weird when the first one has hitsound on the head and the other one on the tail.
4. 03:23:864 (1,2) - Angle of the flow here looks funny for some reason.

1. 00:17:638 (7) - Somehow I feel like this could have been a 1/2 slider or something.
2. 00:36:317 (1) - Suddenly 2 kicks out of nowhere might confuse the players tho, since most kicksliders earlier did have only 1 kick. (Well I guess you already put NC there but it's still kinda hard to detect tho, maybe because it's a coincidence that this kickslider landed on the downbeat)
3. 01:21:034 (1) - I would ctrl+g this since it's kinda hard to grasp the rhythm after the break when it's a small jump.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ We meet again.

[Normal]

1. 00:13:675 (1) - Not a fan of this spinner, basically I think you could just remove it and map sth there, because it's just a shame to leave those 4 white ticks because of that recovery time. i want calm part this. either way not fan start part.
2. 00:28:251 - Feels weird when there's no clap here despite the same instrument landed on both 00:28:109 and 00:28:251 . Nah, It's working.
3. 00:38:581 (5,6) - I would change these kicksliders into sth else, I can see that you're following the instrument but it feels weird when the first one has hitsound on the head and the other one on the tail. Normal diff, i don't make kickslider.
4. 03:23:864 (1,2) - Angle of the flow here looks funny for some reason. I want many patterns. it's fine imo.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:638 (7) - Somehow I feel like this could have been a 1/2 slider or something. okay.
2. 00:36:317 (1) - Suddenly 2 kicks out of nowhere might confuse the players tho, since most kicksliders earlier did have only 1 kick. (Well I guess you already put NC there but it's still kinda hard to detect tho, maybe because it's a coincidence that this kickslider landed on the downbeat) i want keep this. consider it.
3. 01:21:034 (1) - I would ctrl+g this since it's kinda hard to grasp the rhythm after the break when it's a small jump. okay.

Didn't mod Insane because I failed it lol, sry for that. Good map as usual.
Good luck~