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Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

ArcherLove wrote:

Marirose wrote:

STALK
go go qualify this great song o/
\o/ thanks :D
Lolifoxie
Hi, From queue

! I've modded MX diff, but all suggestions are topical for each diff (if it has notes at those timings, ofc). !

Inside
00:29:708 - snare hit here, i think
00:38:542 - same ^
00:44:432 (44432|4) - replace kick to snare
00:44:800 - crash cymbal here
00:54:369 - delete snare hit from here
01:06:148 - same ^
01:17:928 - ^
01:29:339 - ^
01:29:523 (89523|4,89615|3) - replace kick to snare
01:39:276 - ^
01:49:582 - delete snare hit
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Zenobian wrote:

Hi, From queue

! I've modded MX diff, but all suggestions are topical for each diff (if it has notes at those timings, ofc). !

Inside
00:29:708 - snare hit here, i think
00:38:542 - same ^
00:44:432 (44432|4) - replace kick to snare
00:44:800 - crash cymbal here
00:54:369 - delete snare hit from here
01:06:148 - same ^
01:17:928 - ^
01:29:339 - ^
01:29:523 (89523|4,89615|3) - replace kick to snare
01:39:276 - ^
01:49:582 - delete snare hit
thanks, apply all mod :D
Bruce
他们还没来check啊..那么我来吧 挖起来之后叫我一下就可以了 random mod
1 2 3 4
[NM]
OD和HP选择一个变成7

00:30:076 (30076|3,30076|4) - 个人感觉这个形状不是很好 打起来不舒服 推荐把空格移到别的地方

00:41:303 - 漏了一个长条 仔细再听听吧

00:49:769 (49769|5) - 这个形状也不太好看 你可以把这个移到5 或者 00:50:321 (50321|4) - 移到6但是这个会破坏你后面的pattern

01:06:148 (66148|5,67253|6,67253|4) - 这个形状不推荐在Normal出现 平衡一下左右手比较好

01:09:093 (69093|5,70198|6,70198|4) - 同上

01:24:553 (84553|5,84921|6,84921|4) - 你好象很喜欢用这个啊 不推荐在Normal用 Hard以上倒是可以的

01:30:443 (90443|1) - 打起来实际手感不佳 移到3或者 01:31:179 (91179|3) - 移到2 更为妥当

01:45:717 (105717|1) - 仔细再听一下吧 这个长条实际没有这么长

01:47:189 (107189|5) - ^

[HD]
00:31:548 (31548|4) - 卡手键位 推荐移到2

00:38:358 (38358|2,38358|4) - 和前面的 00:37:254 (37254|5,37438|5) - 是一样的 所以也需要有一个在相同键位

00:54:277 (54277|1,54369|2) - 不太建议用这种楼梯型的 唔如果实在很想要这么做的话我推荐这两个键位Ctrl+J

01:17:375 - ~ 01:17:928 - 这里更加不适合做楼梯了 打乱成散键吧

这个Diff挺好的

[MX]
00:23:083 (23083|3) - 这边要做面阵你干脆就把这个延长到 00:23:451 - Note移到7 还不卡手 这样放比较坑人

00:33:021 - 这段开始之后我有个疑问..嗯 你有抓钢琴吗?有的话我建议你排列和Note再仔细看看 我感觉不到你有在抓的迹象 倒是bass我看出来了

01:00:811 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3702152

整体其实kiai给我的感觉就是思路不太清晰 让我觉得只是强行做难的感觉 别的没有什么 Good Luck
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
終於來了:w:太感動了
等下禮拜就能上傳了 :D
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Bruce wrote:

他们还没来check啊..那么我来吧 挖起来之后叫我一下就可以了 random mod
1 2 3 4
[NM]
OD和HP选择一个变成7

00:30:076 (30076|3,30076|4) - 个人感觉这个形状不是很好 打起来不舒服 推荐把空格移到别的地方 改了 不知道可行嗎 挖起來後再問你 :D

00:41:303 - 漏了一个长条 仔细再听听吧 00:39:647 這邊也漏了 怕太難 刪了

00:49:769 (49769|5) - 这个形状也不太好看 你可以把这个移到5 或者 00:50:321 (50321|4) - 移到6但是这个会破坏你后面的pattern 乾脆做個梯子吧

01:06:148 (66148|5,67253|6,67253|4) - 这个形状不推荐在Normal出现 平衡一下左右手比较好 改了

01:09:093 (69093|5,70198|6,70198|4) - 同上

01:24:553 (84553|5,84921|6,84921|4) - 你好象很喜欢用这个啊 不推荐在Normal用 Hard以上倒是可以的 把LN改note

01:30:443 (90443|1) - 打起来实际手感不佳 移到3或者 01:31:179 (91179|3) - 移到2 更为妥当 改了

01:45:717 (105717|1) - 仔细再听一下吧 这个长条实际没有这么长 ??其實不能3個LN連在一起嗎?

01:47:189 (107189|5) - ^

[HD]
00:31:548 (31548|4) - 卡手键位 推荐移到2

00:38:358 (38358|2,38358|4) - 和前面的 00:37:254 (37254|5,37438|5) - 是一样的 所以也需要有一个在相同键位 我想要有分段的感覺

00:54:277 (54277|1,54369|2) - 不太建议用这种楼梯型的 唔如果实在很想要这么做的话我推荐这两个键位Ctrl+J 好吧

01:17:375 - ~ 01:17:928 - 这里更加不适合做楼梯了 打乱成散键吧 同上 remap

这个Diff挺好的

[MX]
00:23:083 (23083|3) - 这边要做面阵你干脆就把这个延长到 00:23:451 - Note移到7 还不卡手 这样放比较坑人 okey

00:33:021 - 这段开始之后我有个疑问..嗯 你有抓钢琴吗?有的话我建议你排列和Note再仔细看看 我感觉不到你有在抓的迹象 倒是bass我看出来了 恩我沒抓鋼琴的

01:00:811 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3702152 okey

整体其实kiai给我的感觉就是思路不太清晰 让我觉得只是强行做难的感觉 别的没有什么 Good Luck
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: mimimemeMIMI - Mr. Darling (Taiwan_CDZ)
No. of mods in my map: 1 - NM


Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod but please reason them out with sense. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to remove or ctrl function moves on certain note/s, be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: It should be exactly 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768. Must fix!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• proceed to NM mod.

Column:
_ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[NM]
SPOILER
Change HP / OD to 7 while change the HD to HP=7 and OD = 8
this is because you made MX OD/HP = 8


01:29:155 (89155|2) - move to 6 to have hand balance and won't be too awkward for the left hand.

01:30:075 - add note to 7 snare sound.

Got nothing more to check, Great NM difficulty! I feel it is almost perfect and ready to go~

Although I wonder what are with those red points? you could just leave the 1st red point handle those. I am not sure if it is fine like that, you might want to ask BNs and QATs just to be sure~

[Overall]
Good song choice! I liked the way you mapped the NM and the song, so I will give you a STAR! Good luck and thank you for the contract! ^o^)b
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
all apply and thanks for your star www

i would ask someone about those red points :D

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Got nothing more to check, Great NM difficulty! I feel it is almost perfect and ready to go~
Marirose rip :( sad
Hestia-
Hihi Taiwan_CDZ

[General]
You should map full version instead: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26067966 :o

There is a video for this song too: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t5jPgM_VKZo
add the video *w*
here I got video for you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/x83in6w4i1pzkrx/video.wmv?dl=0
I think this works

[NM]
00:24:371 (24371|4) - Remove !
00:25:475 (25475|6) - Remove !
00:26:395 (26395|3) - Remove
00:26:763 (26763|1) - Remove
00:27:867 (27867|0) - Remove
00:28:236 (28236|4) - Remove
00:33:389 (33389|6) - Remove
00:33:757 (33757|5) - Remove
00:34:125 (34125|2) - Remove
00:34:677 (34677|2) - Remove !
00:35:229 (35229|3) - Remove
00:35:598 (35598|2) - Remove
00:36:150 (36150|2) - Remove ?
00:36:702 (36702|1) - Remove
00:37:070 (37070|2) - Remove

[HD]
00:53:633 - This should be mapped more aggressively
00:53:633 (53633|1,53817|3,53909|1,54001|4,54093|2,54185|5,54277|3) - Remove
Add

or maybe not 16th notes lol but this sounds like more should be here

[MX]
00:53:633 - Add 16th notes? :D

lol
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Hestia- wrote:

Hihi Taiwan_CDZ

[General]
You should map full version instead: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26067966 :o

There is a video for this song too: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t5jPgM_VKZo
add the video *w*
here I got video for you: https://www.dropbox.com/s/x83in6w4i1pzkrx/video.wmv?dl=0
I think this works

thanks for the video ><
[NM]
00:24:371 (24371|4) - Remove ! i follow the bass in this part, so no change
00:25:475 (25475|6) - Remove !
00:26:395 (26395|3) - Remove
00:26:763 (26763|1) - Remove
00:27:867 (27867|0) - Remove
00:28:236 (28236|4) - Remove
00:33:389 (33389|6) - Remove
00:33:757 (33757|5) - Remove
00:34:125 (34125|2) - Remove
00:34:677 (34677|2) - Remove !
00:35:229 (35229|3) - Remove
00:35:598 (35598|2) - Remove
00:36:150 (36150|2) - Remove ?
00:36:702 (36702|1) - Remove
00:37:070 (37070|2) - Remove

[HD]
00:53:633 - This should be mapped more aggressively unrankable pattern so no change
00:53:633 (53633|1,53817|3,53909|1,54001|4,54093|2,54185|5,54277|3) - Remove
Add

or maybe not 16th notes lol but this sounds like more should be here

[MX]
00:53:633 - Add 16th notes? :D unrankable pattern so no change

lol
thanks mod and video, i'll add soon :D
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
sorry hestia i would not add the video cus it's too large :?
no change
NlHIL
7K=|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[NM]
00:42:223 - add to 6
00:53:817 - 00:54:001 - 00:54:185 - add to 6,4,2. It become 1.99 stars
[HD]
00:16:089 (16089|0) - change to 2 LNs by 00:16:273 - ?
00:17:929 (17929|3) - change to a short LN?
01:44:245 (104245|6) - end at 01:44:613 - ?
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

NlHIL wrote:

7K=|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
[NM]
00:42:223 - add to 6 no
00:53:817 - 00:54:001 - 00:54:185 - add to 6,4,2. It become 1.99 stars no it's for HD
[HD]
00:16:089 (16089|0) - change to 2 LNs by 00:16:273 - ? no
00:17:929 (17929|3) - change to a short LN? no
01:44:245 (104245|6) - end at 01:44:613 - ? sure
thanks modding :D
Kruzon
hi i come for kudosu
1-7 let's go



HD
00:09:279 (9279|2) - move to 4, better flow
00:10:567 (10567|4) - should be part of this flow 00:09:095 (9095|6,9831|6) - , therefore move to 7
00:10:751 (10751|3) - move to 5, column consistency

00:13:144 (13144|6,13144|3) - the sound existing here are very weak. You can still add 2 notes but not as counterpart of 00:12:776 (12776|3,12776|0) -
I suggest you allocated them as dual notes instead, by moving 00:13:144 (13144|3) - to 6
00:14:616 (14616|6,14616|3) - same case as above, but this time, you moved them to column 1 and 2 respectively for mirroring purpose

00:14:248 (14248|5,14248|2) - shift them 1 time to the right, counterpart of 00:12:776 (12776|3,12776|0) -

00:21:058 (21058|6,21058|3,21058|0) - no crash sound presence here, unlike 00:19:586 (19586|4,19586|1,19586|0) - and 00:18:113 (18113|6,18113|4,18113|1) - I suggest reduce note density/ delete 1 note

00:22:714 (22714|6,22714|4) - quite heavy impact can be heard, perhaps add note on 2

00:22:714 (22714|4,22898|3,23083|2,23267|1) - not fun to execute, suggestion:
00:23:267 (23267|1) - move to 5
00:23:451 (23451|2) - move to 4
00:23:635 (23635|3) - move to 6
00:24:003 (24003|2) - move to 2,

00:30:076 (30076|6,30076|4,30076|2) - these 3 notes but 00:30:444 (30444|0,30444|1,30812|5,30812|4) - overwhelmingly louder with 2 notes
i suggest keep it with 2 notes for current stream

00:35:229 (35229|3,35229|5) - invalid emphasis, delete 1 note, if you were to emphasis vocal you would add note on 00:35:045 (35045|1) - as well but i don't think that's the case

00:38:910 (38910|4,38910|0,38910|2) - keep it consistent with 2 notes

00:41:855 (41855|4,41855|2,41855|1) -00:42:223 (42223|6,42223|5,42223|2) - oh for the 2nd cour of this stream, it's ok to use 3 notes you can keep them

00:48:112 (48112|1,48112|0,48480|3,48849|5) - the formation totally break here ee, suggestions:
00:48:112 (48112|6,48112|0) - ctrl + h
00:48:112 (48112|1) - move to 5
00:47:744 (47744|0) - move to 7
00:47:744 (47744|6) - move to 2

00:57:130 (57130|6) - move to 3 or 5 lol
00:57:314 (57314|2) - move to 7, pattern consistency for 00:54:369 (54369|0,54369|1) - , refer her vocal

01:05:780 (65780|6,65872|5,65964|4,66056|3,66148|2) - i don't think stairs fit well with current rhythm, i suggest: http://puu.sh/kDUMX/45485924a8.png

01:24:553 (84553|3) - move to 6
01:24:737 (84737|5,84921|4) - shift them 1 time to the left

- mod ends -


good luck with your map c:
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Kruzon wrote:

hi i come for kudosu
1-7 let's go



HD
00:09:279 (9279|2) - move to 4, better flow
00:10:567 (10567|4) - should be part of this flow 00:09:095 (9095|6,9831|6) - , therefore move to 7pattern change
00:10:751 (10751|3) - move to 5, column consistency

00:13:144 (13144|6,13144|3) - the sound existing here are very weak. You can still add 2 notes but not as counterpart of 00:12:776 (12776|3,12776|0) -
I suggest you allocated them as dual notes instead, by moving 00:13:144 (13144|3) - to 6
remap that part
00:14:616 (14616|6,14616|3) - same case as above, but this time, you moved them to column 1 and 2 respectively for mirroring purpose

00:14:248 (14248|5,14248|2) - shift them 1 time to the right, counterpart of 00:12:776 (12776|3,12776|0) -


(19586|4,19586|1,19586|0) - and 00:18:113 (18113|6,18113|4,18113|1) - I suggest reduce note density/ delete 1 note

00:22:714 (22714|6,22714|4) - quite heavy impact can be heard, perhaps add note on 2

00:22:714 (22714|4,22898|3,23083|2,23267|1) - not fun to execute, suggestion:
00:23:267 (23267|1) - move to 5
00:23:451 (23451|2) - move to 4
00:23:635 (23635|3) - move to 6
00:24:003 (24003|2) - move to 2,
nice suggestion

00:30:076 (30076|6,30076|4,30076|2) - these 3 notes but 00:30:444 (30444|0,30444|1,30812|5,30812|4) - overwhelmingly louder with 2 notes
i suggest keep it with 2 notes for current stream
sure

00:35:229 (35229|3,35229|5) - invalid emphasis, delete 1 note, if you were to emphasis vocal you would add note on 00:35:045 (35045|1) - as well but i don't think that's the caseremove

00:38:910 (38910|4,38910|0,38910|2) - keep it consistent with 2 notes

00:41:855 (41855|4,41855|2,41855|1) -00:42:223 (42223|6,42223|5,42223|2) - oh for the 2nd cour of this stream, it's ok to use 3 notes you can keep themkeep

00:48:112 (48112|1,48112|0,48480|3,48849|5) - the formation totally break here ee, suggestions:
00:48:112 (48112|6,48112|0) - ctrl + h
00:48:112 (48112|1) - move to 5
00:47:744 (47744|0) - move to 7
00:47:744 (47744|6) - move to 2


00:57:130 (57130|6) - move to 3 or 5 lolmove to 5
00:57:314 (57314|2) - move to 7, pattern consistency for 00:54:369 (54369|0,54369|1) - , refer her vocal

01:05:780 (65780|6,65872|5,65964|4,66056|3,66148|2) - i don't think stairs fit well with current rhythm, i suggest: http://puu.sh/kDUMX/45485924a8.png

01:24:553 (84553|3) - move to 6
01:24:737 (84737|5,84921|4) - shift them 1 time to the left

- mod ends -


good luck with your map c:
what a helpful mod, thanks :D
Bruce
Recheck.

[MX]
00:45:536 - 你这边要么把00:44:800 (44800|5) - 延长到 00:45:904 -
要么把00:45:536 (45536|3) - 延长到 00:46:272 -

00:46:640 - 同上

00:47:744 - 同上

00:48:849 - 都同上

00:52:161 - 到这里为止都同上

00:52:345 (52345|2,52529|3,52713|4,52897|3,53081|2,53265|4,53449|3) - 这个我看不懂 给我说明一下吧_(:з」∠)_

其实Kiai的大部分短条我都看不懂_(:з」∠)_ 如果只是为了做难我建议你remap这一段 不是的话解释一下让我了解一下_(:з」∠)_

没有了 广泛的问题比较多 细节没有几个_(:з」∠)_ 改完再让我看一下就能泡了
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Bruce wrote:

Recheck.

[MX]
00:45:536 - 你这边要么把00:44:800 (44800|5) - 延长到 00:45:904 -
要么把00:45:536 (45536|3) - 延长到 00:46:272 -

00:46:640 - 同上

00:47:744 - 同上

00:48:849 - 都同上

00:52:161 - 到这里为止都同上

00:52:345 (52345|2,52529|3,52713|4,52897|3,53081|2,53265|4,53449|3) - 这个我看不懂 给我说明一下吧_(:з」∠)_

其实Kiai的大部分短条我都看不懂_(:з」∠)_ 如果只是为了做难我建议你remap这一段 不是的话解释一下让我了解一下_(:з」∠)_

没有了 广泛的问题比较多 细节没有几个_(:з」∠)_ 改完再让我看一下就能泡了
都改了,至於kiai的部分,其實短麵條都是鼓音喔,拿個比較明顯的給你>01:03:020 (63020|3) -
thanks :D
ArcherLove
*gasp*
bubble incoming bubble incoming bubble incoming *pant* *pant*
Arzenvald
gotta do quick glance & quick mod for this one as requested :3a

[General]
generally there's some small stuff that quiet bugging me :
01:17:928 (77928|6) - 00:54:369 (54369|6) -
it looks like you using same pattern like before..
why don't you try to make a different pattern, but with same structure & note destiny in these 2 different spot? or make a totally different structured pattern?
(idk but i don't really feels content with repetitive pattern in different stanza)

also i feel odd with the red time being placed in 00:00:445 - , while the downbeat 'might be' at 00:00:629 -, the downbeat will continues at 00:24:187 (24187|0) - & this spot shouldn't need any red line placed.. any thought? (similar like my old hekireki lel)

[MX]
00:17:561 (17561|0,17745|3) - http://puu.sh/kPS6y.jpg make 1/2 shield would make more sense

[HD]
00:17:561 (17561|0,17745|2) - same idea like above, make 1/2 shield would make more sense
01:16:455 (76455|4,76455|0,76455|6,76639|2,76823|0,76823|5,77007|3,77191|1,77191|4,77375|3,77467|1,77559|4,77651|2,77744|5,77836|3,77928|1) - i won't make same pattern like previous stanza if i was you, ctrl + H will works

01:35:412 (95412|3) - 01:35:780 (95780|5) - 01:35:780 (95780|5) -

those timing tho

[NM]
clean i guess

:3a solid map, interesting
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

ExUsagi wrote:

gotta do quick glance & quick mod for this one as requested :3a

[General]
generally there's some small stuff that quiet bugging me :
01:17:928 (77928|6) - 00:54:369 (54369|6) -
it looks like you using same pattern like before..
why don't you try to make a different pattern, but with same structure & note destiny in these 2 different spot? or make a totally different structured pattern? okey i would make some change
(idk but i don't really feels content with repetitive pattern in different stanza)

also i feel odd with the red time being placed in 00:00:445 - , while the downbeat 'might be' at 00:00:629 -, the downbeat will continues at 00:24:187 (24187|0) - & this spot shouldn't need any red line placed.. any thought? (similar like my old hekireki lel)
no if follow 00:00:629 - the whole pattern until 00:21:058 would not correct
[MX]
00:17:561 (17561|0,17745|3) - http://puu.sh/kPS6y.jpg make 1/2 shield would make more sense no follow the flute

[HD]
00:17:561 (17561|0,17745|2) - same idea like above, make 1/2 shield would make more sense same as above
01:16:455 (76455|4,76455|0,76455|6,76639|2,76823|0,76823|5,77007|3,77191|1,77191|4,77375|3,77467|1,77559|4,77651|2,77744|5,77836|3,77928|1) - i won't make same pattern like previous stanza if i was you, ctrl + H will works oh really great idea

01:35:412 (95412|3) - 01:35:780 (95780|5) - 01:35:780 (95780|5) -

those timing tho

[NM]
clean i guess

:3a solid map, interesting
oh thanks your great mod :D
Bruce
OK,bubbled
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Bruce wrote:

OK,bubbled
thanks :D
Ayachi-
迷宮センチメンタル是Album不能當source吧
沒錯的話應該移到Tags
Bruce
Seems already fix tags and other things now rebubble.
ArcherLove
ArcherLove
nm

00:03:389 (3389|5,4862|2) - Ctrl J? pitch

hd

00:04:862 (4862|1) - i think move to 3 better
00:09:279 (9279|2) - move to 4 better
00:23:635 (23635|0,23819|0) - I think this different sound? 00:23:635 (23635|0) - move to 2?
00:27:499 - not adding at 1 for guitar?
00:27:683 - not adding at 7 for guitar?
00:30:076 - i think add at 5 for cymbal?
00:36:150 (36150|4,36334|1,36518|3) - http://puu.sh/mZF0k/eeb8da36a2.jpg
00:38:910 - add to 3 for cymbal?

for SV I remake more flawless ones.. http://puu.sh/mZFwe/d24fbaeda7.txt take a look
mx

01:48:662 - not add to 2?
+ http://puu.sh/mYURs/264e635500.txt
http://puu.sh/mYURs/264e635500.txt
http://puu.sh/mYURs/264e635500.txt
http://puu.sh/mYURs/264e635500.txt
http://puu.sh/mYURs/264e635500.txt

this sv too~ http://puu.sh/mZFWj/956cc0de14.txt take a look~ (if you think too fast, change 1.5 to 1.4/1.3/1.2 as you wish)

hitsounding t/131540

good luck
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
thanks all fixed

update
Arzenvald
need some rebubble? this song gives me chill... mrrr

also don't use that hitsound copier, its broken.. do it manually and consistently thorough all diffs..
but if you still insist, use [AyanoTatemaya]'s hitsound copier here t/334600

small recheck anyway

[HD]
00:16:089 (16089|0,16457|6,16641|6) - & 01:43:693 (103693|5,103693|0) - http://puu.sh/n08Ye.png OR http://puu.sh/n09KH.png

[MX]
00:16:089 (16089|1,16089|5,16273|4,16273|2) - & 01:43:693 (103693|1,103693|5) - http://puu.sh/n09IY.png OR http://puu.sh/n09HS.jpg

that bg.. its very sloopy and asdfg... http://puu.sh/n09Np.rar replace your bg with this, complete the hitsound, and call me back
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
really thanks!! ageemaniz~

all fix :D
HSing swiftly now
Arzenvald
wow ok nice hitsound, hitsound re-check
[MX]
00:21:058 (21058|6) - add LR_CymbalRDW
00:24:187 (24187|6) - ^

00:53:817 (53817|4,53909|3,54001|1) - change to Snare hit hard
00:54:001 (54001|6) - remove the kick here
00:55:105 (55105|5) - 00:54:369 (54369|4) - 00:55:842 (55842|2) - missing clicks, re-check again
01:14:983 (74983|0) - CymbalRDW
01:17:375 (77375|5,77467|4,77559|3) - change to snare hit hard
01:17:928 (77928|6) - click
01:29:339 (89339|2) - missing snare?
01:29:523 (89523|4,89615|3) - missing kick?
01:37:252 (97252|1,97252|5) - holy flying furball, never use double snare, its too loud ww, remove hitsound at 01:37:252 (97252|4,97252|5,97252|6) -
01:48:662 (108662|5) - CymbalRDW

[HD]
00:21:058 (21058|3) - add CymbalRDW
00:24:187 (24187|6) - ^

00:49:217 (49217|2) - missing cymbalFSU?
00:53:817 (53817|3,53909|1,54001|4) - change to snare
00:54:369 (54369|6,55105|0,55842|6) - missing clicks again
01:14:983 (74983|4) - CymbalRDW again
01:17:375 (77375|3,77467|5,77559|2) - change to snare again
01:29:339 (89339|3) - 01:29:523 (89523|4,89615|3) - missing snare and kick again, the problem repeats in same time stamp because you use hitsound copier www

01:37:252 (97252|0,97252|2) - AAAAAAAA too loud ;w; remove the hitsound again
01:48:662 (108662|6) - cymbalRDW

[NM]
00:21:058 (21058|2) - CymbalRDW
00:24:187 (24187|6) - ^ ww refer to HD instead, ghbbbhy (cat trying to say hi lol)

good job overall, i can't find anything else
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti
done~update
Arzenvald
pssst you still missing some hitsound, better to crosscheck between all diffs by yourself to make them consistent each other

00:49:217 (49217|2) - CymbalRDW
00:50:321 (50321|6) - Snare
00:53:817 (53817|4,53909|3,54001|1) - turn the volume down, 40 is too loud
01:17:375 (77375|5,77467|4,77559|3) - ^
01:29:523 (89523|4,89615|3) - still missing kick
and you can reject these small suggestion,i got so many o2jam pattern inspiration from this chart, some additional symmetrical pattern will spice up the diffs imo @.@

[MX]
01:01:731 (61731|2) - to 1, and add LN in 3rd column at 01:01:547 -
00:19:586 (19586|4,19586|0) - http://puu.sh/n1eMl.png
01:47:189 (107189|0,107189|4) - ^

[HD]
00:20:506 (20506|6,20690|5,20874|4,21058|3) - 4567 and add 1 more note in 4th column at 00:21:058 -
01:48:110 (108110|6,108294|5,108478|4,108662|6,108662|3) - ^

[NM]
01:28:971 (88971|6) - to1,
01:29:155 (89155|4,89339|2) - add in 01:29:247 - make stairs, 765, and don't forget to remove the storyboard sample at 01:29:247 -
there's 2 additional notes at 01:51:054 - and 01:51:239 - in harder diffs.. add in normal as well..
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

ajeemaniz wrote:

pssst you still missing some hitsound, better to crosscheck between all diffs by yourself to make them consistent each other

00:49:217 (49217|2) - CymbalRDW no
00:50:321 (50321|6) - Snare
00:53:817 (53817|4,53909|3,54001|1) - turn the volume down, 40 is too loud
01:17:375 (77375|5,77467|4,77559|3) - ^
01:29:523 (89523|4,89615|3) - still missing kick
and you can reject these small suggestion,i got so many o2jam pattern inspiration from this chart, some additional symmetrical pattern will spice up the diffs imo @.@

[MX]
01:01:731 (61731|2) - to 1, and add LN in 3rd column at 01:01:547 -
00:19:586 (19586|4,19586|0) - http://puu.sh/n1eMl.png
01:47:189 (107189|0,107189|4) - ^

[HD]
00:20:506 (20506|6,20690|5,20874|4,21058|3) - 4567 and add 1 more note in 4th column at 00:21:058 -
01:48:110 (108110|6,108294|5,108478|4,108662|6,108662|3) - ^

[NM]
01:28:971 (88971|6) - to1,
01:29:155 (89155|4,89339|2) - add in 01:29:247 - make stairs, 765, and don't forget to remove the storyboard sample at 01:29:247 -
there's 2 additional notes at 01:51:054 - and 01:51:239 - in harder diffs.. add in normal as well..

thanks all fix
ArcherLove
((actually it's not broken))

grumd made a good ones
but sometime there is some that's not compatible like my hyori ittai maps lol

also go go rank
Arzenvald
oh okay.. that empty cymbal is kinda bugging me though, but either way it works as well
receive my pm? poke me asap if you applied my last suggestion
Davin Fortune
Wait for my mod done. i'm modding it!

Note : I also place my mod at this post


Hello!
YEAH I CAN MOD CAUSE THE BUBBLE IS POOPED XD

Column : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9

NM
00:12:040 – this should be 2 as consistent with the in instrument at 00:12:224 –

00:13:144 –this should be in 2 note as consistent with 00:13:696 – (Cause it’s cymbal sound)

00:14:616 -^

00:16:457 –make it 2 as consistent with 00:12:224 –

00:19:033 – make it 2 since its cymbal sound

00:20:506 -^

00:22:714 -00:23:083 -00:23:451 –these are drum sound and should be in 2 note

00:24:371 (24371|2,24555|1,24739|0,25107|4,25475|6) –I don’t like these patterns, what about this?(green place at 00:24:555 - ) http://puu.sh/n78Sn/c7b0c67fa6.jpg
Note : For the jack, you can change the column but still make it nice :D, but don’t crash with other note that I make them in different column cause it has other meaning of instrument

00:26:027 – between two notes consider  http://puu.sh/n78Zg/04123da12d.jpg

00:27:315 (27315|4,27499|3,27683|2,28052|5,28420|4) –I don’t like this too, consider in 00:27:499 - http://puu.sh/n79iU/217ee4caa7.jpg

00:29:340 –there’s cymbal sound here and it should be in column 2(this is a must since it has to follow the flow) and column 6 I guess

00:30:812 –add a note here since there’s cymbal sound here

00:31:364 -^ cause there’s drum sound here

00:33:205 (33205|1,33573|2,33941|3,34309|4) –please apply my jack suggestion at ^
Note : I skip the jack part :D

00:38:174 –add 2 note here since there’s cymbal sound

00:43:512 –add 2 note for the drum sound

00:45:168 (45168|3,45536|4) –delete them since no instrument sound there and don’t over cause this is NM

00:47:560 –add 2 note here for the drum sound

00:51:793 –no sound? Should add 2?(cymbal sound!)

Actually I skip many( I don’t too focus  )

01:04:676 –ghost? If not better just 1 note

01:05:780 (65780|6,65964|4,66148|2,66148|6,66148|0) –I feel these hitsounds is buggy

01:12:038 (72038|2,72038|0) –are you sure with this hs? Sound weird though

01:14:983 (74983|0,75719|2) –sounds weird :v

01:28:971 (88971|1,88971|0,89155|6,89247|5,89339|4,89523|0,89615|1,89707|6,89707|2) –weird :v, 01:28:971 (88971|0,88971|1) –this can’t be

01:30:443 –cymbal?

Okay please fix other part that has same problem with the thing I say >A<

Overall : 70% nice in NM
Modding done~
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

Davin Fortune wrote:

Wait for my mod done. i'm modding it!

Note : I also place my mod at this post


Hello!
YEAH I CAN MOD CAUSE THE BUBBLE IS POOPED XD

Column : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9

NM
00:12:040 – this should be 2 as consistent with the in instrument at 00:12:224 –

00:13:144 –this should be in 2 note as consistent with 00:13:696 – (Cause it’s cymbal sound)

00:14:616 -^

00:16:457 –make it 2 as consistent with 00:12:224 –

00:19:033 – make it 2 since its cymbal sound

00:20:506 -^

00:22:714 -00:23:083 -00:23:451 –these are drum sound and should be in 2 note

00:24:371 (24371|2,24555|1,24739|0,25107|4,25475|6) –I don’t like these patterns, what about this?(green place at 00:24:555 - ) http://puu.sh/n78Sn/c7b0c67fa6.jpg
Note : For the jack, you can change the column but still make it nice :D, but don’t crash with other note that I make them in different column cause it has other meaning of instrument

00:26:027 – between two notes consider  http://puu.sh/n78Zg/04123da12d.jpg

00:27:315 (27315|4,27499|3,27683|2,28052|5,28420|4) –I don’t like this too, consider in 00:27:499 - http://puu.sh/n79iU/217ee4caa7.jpg

00:29:340 –there’s cymbal sound here and it should be in column 2(this is a must since it has to follow the flow) and column 6 I guess

00:30:812 –add a note here since there’s cymbal sound here

00:31:364 -^ cause there’s drum sound here

00:33:205 (33205|1,33573|2,33941|3,34309|4) –please apply my jack suggestion at ^
Note : I skip the jack part :D

00:38:174 –add 2 note here since there’s cymbal sound

00:43:512 –add 2 note for the drum sound

00:45:168 (45168|3,45536|4) –delete them since no instrument sound there and don’t over cause this is NM

00:47:560 –add 2 note here for the drum sound

00:51:793 –no sound? Should add 2?(cymbal sound!)

Actually I skip many( I don’t too focus  )

01:04:676 –ghost? If not better just 1 note

01:05:780 (65780|6,65964|4,66148|2,66148|6,66148|0) –I feel these hitsounds is buggy

01:12:038 (72038|2,72038|0) –are you sure with this hs? Sound weird though

01:14:983 (74983|0,75719|2) –sounds weird :v

01:28:971 (88971|1,88971|0,89155|6,89247|5,89339|4,89523|0,89615|1,89707|6,89707|2) –weird :v, 01:28:971 (88971|0,88971|1) –this can’t be

01:30:443 –cymbal?

Okay please fix other part that has same problem with the thing I say >A<

Overall : 70% nice in NM
Modding done~
thanks for your mod :D but, no change

reason: all the note you said in first part is piano, and due to the difficulty i would not add notes
second part the jack: that pattern is for easy diff
third part hitsound: ctrl+shift +I (SAMPLE LIST) check it!! ;) you will find the real hitsound
Arzenvald
woops woops, since there's no change, lets move this map forward..

hitsound fixed, ln inconsistency fixed, general stuff & pattern checked as well..
everything should be fine now

i can draw again _w_
Davin Fortune

DJ Profetti wrote:

Davin Fortune wrote:

Wait for my mod done. i'm modding it!

Note : I also place my mod at this post


Hello!
YEAH I CAN MOD CAUSE THE BUBBLE IS POOPED XD

Column : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9

NM
00:12:040 – this should be 2 as consistent with the in instrument at 00:12:224 –

00:13:144 –this should be in 2 note as consistent with 00:13:696 – (Cause it’s cymbal sound)

00:14:616 -^

00:16:457 –make it 2 as consistent with 00:12:224 –

00:19:033 – make it 2 since its cymbal sound

00:20:506 -^

00:22:714 -00:23:083 -00:23:451 –these are drum sound and should be in 2 note

00:24:371 (24371|2,24555|1,24739|0,25107|4,25475|6) –I don’t like these patterns, what about this?(green place at 00:24:555 - ) http://puu.sh/n78Sn/c7b0c67fa6.jpg
Note : For the jack, you can change the column but still make it nice :D, but don’t crash with other note that I make them in different column cause it has other meaning of instrument

00:26:027 – between two notes consider  http://puu.sh/n78Zg/04123da12d.jpg

00:27:315 (27315|4,27499|3,27683|2,28052|5,28420|4) –I don’t like this too, consider in 00:27:499 - http://puu.sh/n79iU/217ee4caa7.jpg

00:29:340 –there’s cymbal sound here and it should be in column 2(this is a must since it has to follow the flow) and column 6 I guess

00:30:812 –add a note here since there’s cymbal sound here

00:31:364 -^ cause there’s drum sound here

00:33:205 (33205|1,33573|2,33941|3,34309|4) –please apply my jack suggestion at ^
Note : I skip the jack part :D

00:38:174 –add 2 note here since there’s cymbal sound

00:43:512 –add 2 note for the drum sound

00:45:168 (45168|3,45536|4) –delete them since no instrument sound there and don’t over cause this is NM

00:47:560 –add 2 note here for the drum sound

00:51:793 –no sound? Should add 2?(cymbal sound!)

Actually I skip many( I don’t too focus  )

01:04:676 –ghost? If not better just 1 note

01:05:780 (65780|6,65964|4,66148|2,66148|6,66148|0) –I feel these hitsounds is buggy

01:12:038 (72038|2,72038|0) –are you sure with this hs? Sound weird though

01:14:983 (74983|0,75719|2) –sounds weird :v

01:28:971 (88971|1,88971|0,89155|6,89247|5,89339|4,89523|0,89615|1,89707|6,89707|2) –weird :v, 01:28:971 (88971|0,88971|1) –this can’t be

01:30:443 –cymbal?

Okay please fix other part that has same problem with the thing I say >A<

Overall : 70% nice in NM
Modding done~
thanks for your mod :D but, no change

reason: all the note you said in first part is piano, and due to the difficulty i would not add notes
second part the jack: that pattern is for easy diff
third part hitsound: ctrl+shift +I (SAMPLE LIST) check it!! ;) you will find the real hitsound
Okay GOODLUCK FOR RANK THEN!!
shoot a star ;)
Topic Starter
DJ Profetti

ajeemaniz wrote:

woops woops, since there's no change, lets move this map forward..

hitsound fixed, ln inconsistency fixed, general stuff & pattern checked as well..
everything should be fine now

i can draw again _w_
thanks~ :D
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