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AnimalC - Lullaby For You (K.K. Lullaby)

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Zerss
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ChokeNoise



Easy

● Please change to 1/1 or 1/2 . 1/4 not allowed.
●00:09:669 (4,5) - Avoid Overlapping.
●00:16:775 (3,4) - ^
●00:22:301 (3,4) - Good blanket but dont overlap.
●00:41:248 (4,5) - Overlap.
●00:48:354 (3) - Maybe move to X238 Y145
●01:06:511 (5,6) - Overlap :c
●01:13:617 (3,4) - ^
●01:19:143 (3,4) - ^

●01:38:090 (3,4) - Overlap :cc

Dreams

●00:36:511 (2,3) - Maybe a perfect Stack?
●00:49:143 (2,3) - ^
●00:50:722 (1,2) - ^
●01:30:196 (3,4) - ^
●01:33:354 (3,4) - ^
●01:50:722 (1,2) - ^

Very nice Map!

GL with Ranking that Map :3
Topic Starter
Zerss

ClickNoise wrote:




Easy

● Please change to 1/1 or 1/2 . 1/4 not allowed. There's no reason why it's not allowed, 'cuz if you map on white ticks with 1/4, it's the same with 1/1 ^^
●00:09:669 (4,5) - Avoid Overlapping.
●00:16:775 (3,4) - ^
●00:22:301 (3,4) - Good blanket but dont overlap.
●00:41:248 (4,5) - Overlap. Do you want to do a jump on an Easy diff? x)
●00:48:354 (3) - Maybe move to X238 Y145 Done
●01:06:511 (5,6) - Overlap :c
●01:13:617 (3,4) - ^
●01:19:143 (3,4) - ^

●01:38:090 (3,4) - Overlap :cc
About overlapping, there's two overlapping style, the shitty thing overlapping with no reason, and great and neats overlapping, obiviously, they talk about the shitty one xD For an example the "good blanket" at 00:22:301 (3,4) - is called a sliderbow, and it's totally accepted on Easy diffs, it's a cool kind of overlapping :)


Very nice Map!

GL with Ranking that Map :3

Thanks a lot :D
Thanks for your mod c:
Hullahopp
I don't.. even..
Mod declined...
Aihuro
Hey!~ NM request from my queue. Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! ◕‿◕✿
Well, here goes nothing.

General:
  1. Please unable countdown, because it is unnecessary.
  2. Also unable letterbox during breaks.
  3. I suggest you use other combo colours. That fits the BG.
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 113,184,255
    Combo2 : 0,64,64
    Combo3 : 64,128,128
    Combo4 : 196,255,255
    This is only my imo. You don't have to use this!
  4. There is one DS problem in Easy. Here

Easy:
  1. 00:57:038 (1,1) - The re-action time is way too short for an Easy diff. Please shorten the spinner/ or delete some notes.
  2. Whoa. . very nice diff!~


Dreams:
  1. 01:39:669 (5,1) - This looks nazi! Please stack them or try to avoid the overlap.
  2. The only problem I have with this diff is that you use alot of circles. But this is only imo. I suggest you use more sliders and jumps. To make it more fun to play. I also suggest you make a harder diff. Since you can or you also can request a GD. Also, here: 00:57:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is no hitsounds. I think you should add some, because there are some sounds there. Ask an expert to help you with your hitsounding. It is also an example that there are too many circles and can be replaced by sliders. Note: This is all imo. You may ignore them as you wish.
  3. Anyways, this diff is also very good!~ 030

Well, my mod ends here.
Hope it was helpful! And good luck with your map!~ :)
Topic Starter
Zerss

Mau-nyan wrote:

Hey!~ NM request from my queue. Mau's NM and M4M Modding Queue! ◕‿◕✿
Well, here goes nothing.

General:
  1. Please unable countdown, because it is unnecessary. Done
  2. Also unable letterbox during breaks. Done
  3. I suggest you use other combo colours. That fits the BG.
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 113,184,255
    Combo2 : 0,64,64
    Combo3 : 64,128,128
    Combo4 : 196,255,255
    This is only my imo. You don't have to use this! Done!
  4. There is one DS problem in Easy. Here I don't find this "DS" problem, even, in the time that the AI says, there's no circles/sliders/spinners, maybe you've added a note?

Easy:
  1. 00:57:038 (1,1) - The re-action time is way too short for an Easy diff. Please shorten the spinner/ or delete some notes. Done :)
  2. Whoa. . very nice diff!~ Whoa, thanks! :p


Dreams:
  1. Also, here: 00:57:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is no hitsounds. I think you should add some, because there are some sounds there. Ask an expert to help you with your hitsounding. It is also an example that there are too many circles and can be replaced by sliders. Note: This is all imo. You may ignore them as you wish. These whistle hitsounds follow the melody, and here there's no melody, for now, I won't touch anything of these.

Well, my mod ends here.
Hope it was helpful! And good luck with your map!~ :)
Thanks for your mod! :)
Hullahopp
Dreams:
  1. 01:39:669 (5,1) - This looks nazi! Please stack them or try to avoid the overlap. Doesn't matter, overlap is hard to be noticed cause 5 disappears befor 1 even appers. I keep this
  2. The only problem I have with this diff is that you use alot of circles. But this is only imo. I suggest you use more sliders and jumps. To make it more fun to play. I also suggest you make a harder diff. Since you can or you also can request a GD. Also, here: 00:57:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - There is no hitsounds. I think you should add some, because there are some sounds there. Ask an expert to help you with your hitsounding. It is also an example that there are too many circles and can be replaced by sliders. Note: This is all imo. You may ignore them as you wish. Sliders would make this diff even easier, and jumps? This is the chillest song you can found in osu, don't tell me I should make this hardcore, lol
  3. Anyways, this diff is also very good!~ 030
Thanks?
[Nii-san]
Hi From #modreqs noob mod :P


Easy:
00:11:248 (5) - Maybre straighten
01:33:354 (5) - Maybe that? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3396141


Dreams:
00:52:301 (5) - maybe that? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3396117
01:18:354 (4) - Move this to: X:280 Y:132
00:39:275 (4) - Maybe move this to: X:252 Y:132

It's all XD
Topic Starter
Zerss

NISSAN001 wrote:

Hi From #modreqs Short noob mod :P


Easy:
00:11:248 (5) - Maybre straighten Nope, it's making an overlap with (4), and if it'll be straight, the overlap will be ugly
01:33:354 (5) - Maybe that? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3396141 Done

It's all
Hullahopp

NISSAN001 wrote:

Dreams:
00:52:301 (5) - maybe that? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3396117 Nah, I don't like it
01:18:354 (4) - Move this to: X:280 Y:132 That would ruin the pattern
00:39:275 (4) - Maybe move this to: X:252 Y:132 I kinda like that idea, thanks!
Thanks!
Zaphkael
We had a lil' chat
Sadly I didn't ruin your diff Robert

IRC mod
15:28 inspectorscout: yo
15:28 inspectorscout: your map is the next one I'll mod
15:28 Z e r s s: :D
15:30 inspectorscout: ill tell you when I do, irc might be easier
15:31 Z e r s s: Okay :D
15:46 inspectorscout: ok, ready?
15:47 Z e r s s: yup, ready :)
15:47 inspectorscout: ok
15:47 *inspectorscout is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/734831 AnimalC - Lullaby For You (K.K. Lullaby) [Easy]]
15:47 inspectorscout: first, make it 1/2, 1/4 is not needed/used
15:49 inspectorscout: some of the combo colours are a bit similar, there are maps dq'ed for that, so consider changing that :P
15:50 Z e r s s: yup, I'll do it :)
15:50 inspectorscout: everything else seems fine, not that you can do much wrong with this map xD
15:50 inspectorscout: song*
15:50 Z e r s s: xD
15:50 *inspectorscout is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/734830 AnimalC - Lullaby For You (K.K. Lullaby) [Dreams]]
15:51 Z e r s s: Róbert made this map, do the mod here, I'm gonna send him everything when he'll be back
15:51 inspectorscout: ok
15:51 inspectorscout: the dreams one?
15:51 Z e r s s: yup
15:51 inspectorscout: ok let's ruin it
15:51 inspectorscout: jk
15:52 Z e r s s: xD
15:52 inspectorscout: 00:06:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this seems like a lot of notes without sliders for a normal, make some slider, 1 or 2 are enough
15:53 inspectorscout: 00:26:248 (2,3) - this blanket can be improved
15:53 inspectorscout: also, Robert, plz look at AImod, you have some DS problems to fix xD
15:54 inspectorscout: 00:57:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - read first thing I said.
15:55 inspectorscout: btw, the DS problems might be intentional, but they are FORBIDDEN in a normal.
15:56 Z e r s s: Due to the music, I guess he more wanted to do an Hard, I'll check that with him, but if there's jump, I guess it is
15:56 inspectorscout: well, if he wanted a hard he should've overmapped
15:56 Z e r s s: There's actually no way to do a normal diff which has >1,5 stars
15:57 inspectorscout: in a map with this star rating, forget that this 01:38:880 (3,4) - will ever get ranked
15:57 inspectorscout: everything else seems fine I guess
15:58 Z e r s s: updated
15:58 inspectorscout: ok
15:58 inspectorscout: good luck I'd say :D
15:58 Z e r s s: you can post for your kudo' ^^
15:58 inspectorscout: ok
15:59 inspectorscout: not that I said much xD
15:59 Z e r s s: Yeah, only two diff, etc. I can understand xD
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