Hi! Mod from Potato's queue!
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I like this song, the vocals are really nice. Chart mapped well, although am I right or SC used HEAVILY copy-paste and ctrl+H?
Good luck!
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MX
00:10:772 (10772|0) - highly suggest to delete, this jack is quite hard especially after trill pattern. It's ok in SC but in MX... meh
00:13:219 - try to repattern it like this to be more consequent to the later part at 00:22:772 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398124 (not a mistake but it's to remain consistent in patterning)
00:20:877 (20877|3) - same as 00:10:772
00:27:193 - those hitsounds don't fit. Drum with vocal? Better replace it with something soft and graceful (and they don't exist in SC)
Another thing: I can't really get what are the notes mapped to. Partially to the melody in the background, and later to the vocals. I would suggest to map to the vocals here, because they're more audible and easier to map. If you decide to map the melody though, try to ignore vocals as much as possible!
00:37:298 - side note: you're quite using onehanded trills quite a lot, mainly [13][24][13] and [14][23]14]. While it's ok, on MX I would rather see more [12][34] trills because they're easier.
00:49:298 (49298|2) - cosmetic change - move to 4
00:56:088 (56088|1) - move to 3, better flow (overuse of column 2)
00:57:035 - there should be a note, I would rearrange that like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398203 (the trill change is optional)
01:07:061 - rearrange like 02:14:561 (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398267)
01:17:719 (77719|3) - same as 00:10:772
01:27:825 (87825|0) - ^
01:34:140 - same as 00:27:193
01:44:088 (104088|2) - rearrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398236 to be consistent with 00:37:140
02:03:588 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange it to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398259
02:10:772 (130772|1,130930|2,131088|0) - move to 4, 2 and 3 respectively (better flow)
02:14:561 (134561|2) - delete (no 3-chords earlier)
02:18:982 (138982|0,138982|3,138982|2,139061|1,139140|2,139219|3,139298|0,139298|2,139377|1,139456|2,139535|3,139614|0,139614|2,139614|1) - paste those notes in the place of 01:12:035 (72035|0,72035|2,72035|3,72193|1,72272|2,72351|0,72351|3,72430|1,72509|2,72588|3,72667|0,72667|1) - (or rearrange them in the same manner, just pointing that those two fragments differ while they shouldn't)
02:29:719 (149719|3) - same as 00:10:772. In addition I would change this to [12][34] trill.
02:30:035 - this pattern is one big copy-paste :/ Please map this fragment once again from scratch, this is a more serious issue. In addition in this point 02:32:246 - there is some piano accent, maybe make something out of it? (remember this is MX and not SC)
02:34:140 - and here a trill potential.
02:40:772 - same as 00:27:193 if it comes to hitsounds. By the way you now mapped it fully to vocal. (later drum part doesn't count because it has drum enhacement)
02:55:614 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398300
03:00:509 - 03:00:746 - add 3 and 2 respectively to make it similar to previous choruses
03:16:456 (196456|3) - same as 00:10:772
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
Also in the end there are looooots of onehanded trills, maybe really rearrange some to [12][34] (this is MX not SC)
00:13:219 - try to repattern it like this to be more consequent to the later part at 00:22:772 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398124 (not a mistake but it's to remain consistent in patterning)
00:20:877 (20877|3) - same as 00:10:772
00:27:193 - those hitsounds don't fit. Drum with vocal? Better replace it with something soft and graceful (and they don't exist in SC)
Another thing: I can't really get what are the notes mapped to. Partially to the melody in the background, and later to the vocals. I would suggest to map to the vocals here, because they're more audible and easier to map. If you decide to map the melody though, try to ignore vocals as much as possible!
00:37:298 - side note: you're quite using onehanded trills quite a lot, mainly [13][24][13] and [14][23]14]. While it's ok, on MX I would rather see more [12][34] trills because they're easier.
00:49:298 (49298|2) - cosmetic change - move to 4
00:56:088 (56088|1) - move to 3, better flow (overuse of column 2)
00:57:035 - there should be a note, I would rearrange that like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398203 (the trill change is optional)
01:07:061 - rearrange like 02:14:561 (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398267)
01:17:719 (77719|3) - same as 00:10:772
01:27:825 (87825|0) - ^
01:34:140 - same as 00:27:193
01:44:088 (104088|2) - rearrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398236 to be consistent with 00:37:140
02:03:588 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange it to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398259
02:10:772 (130772|1,130930|2,131088|0) - move to 4, 2 and 3 respectively (better flow)
02:14:561 (134561|2) - delete (no 3-chords earlier)
02:18:982 (138982|0,138982|3,138982|2,139061|1,139140|2,139219|3,139298|0,139298|2,139377|1,139456|2,139535|3,139614|0,139614|2,139614|1) - paste those notes in the place of 01:12:035 (72035|0,72035|2,72035|3,72193|1,72272|2,72351|0,72351|3,72430|1,72509|2,72588|3,72667|0,72667|1) - (or rearrange them in the same manner, just pointing that those two fragments differ while they shouldn't)
02:29:719 (149719|3) - same as 00:10:772. In addition I would change this to [12][34] trill.
02:30:035 - this pattern is one big copy-paste :/ Please map this fragment once again from scratch, this is a more serious issue. In addition in this point 02:32:246 - there is some piano accent, maybe make something out of it? (remember this is MX and not SC)
02:34:140 - and here a trill potential.
02:40:772 - same as 00:27:193 if it comes to hitsounds. By the way you now mapped it fully to vocal. (later drum part doesn't count because it has drum enhacement)
02:55:614 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398300
03:00:509 - 03:00:746 - add 3 and 2 respectively to make it similar to previous choruses
03:16:456 (196456|3) - same as 00:10:772
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
Also in the end there are looooots of onehanded trills, maybe really rearrange some to [12][34] (this is MX not SC)
Crono's SC
00:41:088 - add 2,3,2 (good reason for 3-chords)
00:42:351 - add 12 to make 3-chord
00:52:456 - I don't know but I don't think this full-stream really follows the music. But well... let it be.
00:57:035 - add 12. Or rearrange this to make [13][24][13].
01:11:404 - add 3,2,3 (reason for 3-chords)
01:48:035 - same as 00:41:088
01:49:298 - same as 00:42:351, dunno, copy-paste?
01:59:404 (119404|2) - ok this is SC I know, but I don't know if this jack really fits. You don't accent those beats with 3-chords and in previous chord there wasn't any 3-chords here (I know there's no drum entry but still). I would remove it. (plus it plays gay)
02:03:982 - same as 00:57:035
02:18:351 - same as 01:11:404
02:19:772 - there are some sounds which allow for some harder patterns, possible some jacks/trills may be inserted here. For example insert 1 here and 1 on the blue line, move the next note to 2. Study this whole fragment and decide if you want to include it! (second part too)
02:22:298 - and this fragment begs for 2-2 jack!
02:46:140 - here just a thought: it's possible to place single notes on 1/2.
02:55:772 - add 14
03:05:719 - you didn't make that a full continuous stream before. Maybe do it like it was on previous choruses?
00:42:351 - add 12 to make 3-chord
00:52:456 - I don't know but I don't think this full-stream really follows the music. But well... let it be.
00:57:035 - add 12. Or rearrange this to make [13][24][13].
01:11:404 - add 3,2,3 (reason for 3-chords)
01:48:035 - same as 00:41:088
01:49:298 - same as 00:42:351, dunno, copy-paste?
01:59:404 (119404|2) - ok this is SC I know, but I don't know if this jack really fits. You don't accent those beats with 3-chords and in previous chord there wasn't any 3-chords here (I know there's no drum entry but still). I would remove it. (plus it plays gay)
02:03:982 - same as 00:57:035
02:18:351 - same as 01:11:404
02:19:772 - there are some sounds which allow for some harder patterns, possible some jacks/trills may be inserted here. For example insert 1 here and 1 on the blue line, move the next note to 2. Study this whole fragment and decide if you want to include it! (second part too)
02:22:298 - and this fragment begs for 2-2 jack!
02:46:140 - here just a thought: it's possible to place single notes on 1/2.
02:55:772 - add 14
03:05:719 - you didn't make that a full continuous stream before. Maybe do it like it was on previous choruses?
I like this song, the vocals are really nice. Chart mapped well, although am I right or SC used HEAVILY copy-paste and ctrl+H?
Good luck!