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Hi~!
From my queue :p

Here's my mod, A bit long :o
|1|2|3|4|
[MX]
about the whole map
let's make 00:53:719 an example. why is this 3 notes when it's beat is weaker than 00:54:035 ? a bit confusing imo
00:05:719 - missing note?
01:43:614 (103614|1) - move to 1, hand balance

[HD]
about the whole map
let's make 00:06:035 an example. why is this 1 note only when it's beat is weaker than 00:06:351? confusing too imo xD
01:59:404 - add note, it's a cymbal sound after all
00:52:456 - ^
02:51:509 - ^

[NM]
01:59:404 (119404|1) - move to 4, to emphasize cymbal sound
00:52:456 (52456|1) - ^
02:51:509 (171509|1) - move to 1, ^

[EZ]
00:05:719 - add note. it's a cymbal sound
00:10:772 - ^
00:15:825 - ^
00:20:877 - ^
00:52:456 - ^ and it's the start of the chorus. Should put another note to emphasize it
01:59:404 - ^
02:51:509 - ^
01:02:561 - add note, cymbal sound
01:12:667 - ^
01:22:772 - ^
02:08:246 - ^
02:08:561 - ^
02:08:877 - ^
02:19:614 - ^
03:01:298 - ^


good luck with your map! :D
posted

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi~!
From my queue :p

Here's my mod, A bit long :o
|1|2|3|4|
[MX]
about the whole map
let's make 00:53:719 an example. why is this 3 notes when it's beat is weaker than 00:54:035 ? a bit confusing imo okay ill use 2 notes for 00:53:719 is that ok? :D
00:05:719 - missing note? ok
01:43:614 (103614|1) - move to 1, hand balance ok

[HD]
about the whole map
let's make 00:06:035 an example. why is this 1 note only when it's beat is weaker than 00:06:351? confusing too imo xD okay ill use 2 notes for 00:06:351 is that ok? :D
01:59:404 - add note, it's a cymbal sound after all ok
00:52:456 - ^ ok
02:51:509 - ^ ok

[NM]
01:59:404 (119404|1) - move to 4, to emphasize cymbal sound ok
00:52:456 (52456|1) - ^ ok
02:51:509 (171509|1) - move to 1, ^ ok

[EZ]
00:05:719 - add note. it's a cymbal sound
00:10:772 - ^
00:15:825 - ^
00:20:877 - ^
00:52:456 - ^ and it's the start of the chorus. Should put another note to emphasize it
01:59:404 - ^
02:51:509 - ^
01:02:561 - add note, cymbal sound
01:12:667 - ^
01:22:772 - ^
02:08:246 - ^
02:08:561 - ^
02:08:877 - ^
02:19:614 - ^
03:01:298 - ^
All accepted :D


good luck with your map! :D
Thanks For Mods :)
posted
Hitsound Update ._.
posted
I will come back and mod this later, I was also thinking about doing a SHD Guest diff, (even if it's not used for rank) because this song just has so much unused potential for some fun streams and more variation by making better use of LNs among other things.

with a long song like this it is good to have a bit more variation with your patterns, it does get quite repetitive except for the short bursts in the MX diff.
posted

Crono wrote:

I will come back and mod this later, I was also thinking about doing a SHD Guest diff, (even if it's not used for rank) because this song just has so much unused potential for some fun streams and more variation by making better use of LNs among other things.

with a long song like this it is good to have a bit more variation with your patterns, it does get quite repetitive except for the short bursts in the MX diff.
you can make SHD guest diff, and ill try to rank it if not overmapped and passable xD
posted
LETS GO !!!

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hmmm EZ :v but icon >>>>

so, my suggest : kurangin yg ber 2 note seems like 00:06:035 (6035|0,6035|3) - 00:06:667 (6667|0,6667|3) - 00:07:298 (7298|3,7298|0) - etc itu cukup single note aja untuk diff easy ^^ dan lanjutin sampe seterus nya kecuali untuk cymbal :3
00:51:825 (51825|1,51982|2,52140|3,52298|0) - delete, change to LN,,and LN start in 00:51:667 -
00:52:456 (52456|1,52456|3) - sama seperti my suggest tdi ^^ i hope you understand ><
00:56:719 (56719|2) - delete
00:57:825 (57825|0,58140|2) - geser ke kanan 1x
00:58:456 (58456|3) - move 1
x.x 00:58:930 (58930|2,59246|0) - delete
00:58:456 (58456|3,58772|1) - ctrl + H
00:59:088 (59088|3) - move 2
00:59:404 (59404|2) - move 4
00:59:877 (59877|1) - delete ( usaha in jgn ikutin vocal )
01:02:561 (62561|0,62561|2) - enough 1 note ^^
01:03:982 (63982|1,64298|0) - delete :v
01:04:930 (64930|2) - ^
wtf bnyk masih -_-" kasian yg disini capek ngetik :v dah gini aja biar jelas...kurangin note yg ngikutin vocal, dan penggunaan 2 note (kecuali cymbal)

dah untuk diff ini lnjutin yaa xD cmn di kurangin beberapa note biar icon EZ ny muncul seperti >>>
no jack plis >< 00:01:298 (1298|1,1456|1) -
00:25:614 (25614|0,25614|1) - nih LN panjangin sampe 00:25:930 -
00:36:825 (36825|0,36904|1,36982|2) - hohohoh diff normal usahain jgan pake stream 1/4, jika bisa di bikin pattern yg cocok >w<so my suggest : 00:36:825 - >>> http://puu.sh/iVXgu/269b1b02e6.jpg
00:57:193 (57193|3,57272|2,57351|1,57430|0) - dat -_- change >>> http://puu.sh/iVXlH/88652b6b96.jpg
01:00:982 - add note in col 1
01:32:561 (92561|3,92561|2) - panjangin sampe >> 01:32:877 -
01:43:772 (103772|0,103851|1,103930|2) - x.x change LN plis (seperti pattern yg w kasih tau sebelum nya)
02:04:140 (124140|3,124219|2,124298|1,124377|0) - change LN >> http://puu.sh/iVXzw/4acda5ed6a.jpg
02:14:088 (134088|3,134167|2,134246|1,134325|0,134404|3,134482|2) - ini jga change LN -_- wtf
02:34:456 (154456|0,154535|1,154614|2,154693|3) - ^
02:39:509 (159509|3,159509|2) - panjang LN sampe 02:39:825 -
02:52:140 (172140|2,172772|1) - delete
02:53:404 (173404|0) - delete, terus ctrl + H
02:53:719 - add note di col 4
02:54:351 (174351|0) - delete
02:54:667 - add note col 1
02:54:982 (174982|0) - delete
02:55:298 - add note col 1 (pleasee bedain dengan suara drum yg clap ma kick untuk 2 note nya ><)
02:55:930 (175930|3,176009|2,176088|1,176167|0) - change LN in col 1
03:00:825 (180825|0,180904|1,180982|2,181061|3,181140|0,181219|1) - wtf :v gak perlu w bilang lagi yee musti ngapaen tentang itu :v
03:06:035 (186035|3,186114|2,186193|1,186272|0) - ^ (ini diff normal uyyy :v)
03:31:298 (211298|0,211377|1,211456|2,211535|3) - change jadi 2 LN in col 1 dan 4
00:14:640 (14640|3,14719|2,14798|1,14877|0,14956|1,15035|2,15114|1,15193|0,15272|1,15351|2,15430|1,15509|0,15588|1,15667|2,15746|3) - stream ny :v wkokwokw mending di jadiin gini deh biar cocok ma instrument nya >> http://puu.sh/iVYca/9fc41a0480.jpg
00:37:140 (37140|1) - move 1 (avoid jack 00:36:982 (36982|1) - )
00:54:351 - add note col 4
00:54:509 (54509|2) - move col 2
01:44:088 (104088|2) - move col 4
01:49:140 (109140|3) - move col 3
02:51:509 (171509|3) - delete (cukup 2 note aja)
02:53:088 - add note col 1
03:14:246 (194246|1) - move col 3
03:14:404 (194404|0) - move col 2
03:19:298 (199298|2) - ^
03:19:456 (199456|3) - move col 3
03:19:930 (199930|1) - ^
03:20:088 (200088|0) - move col 2
wtf :v yg pattern kek gini 03:24:035 (204035|2,204035|3,204351|0,204351|2,204509|3,204667|1,204667|0,204982|1,204982|3) - untuk note ini 03:24:509 (204509|3) - hindarin jack nya dengan yg 03:24:035 (204035|3) - (only pattern yg sama kek gitu)


dah itu aja deh x.x
CAPEK T.T

hmmm about IA....oke here my stars ~
posted

Draftnell wrote:

LETS GO !!!

|1|2|3|4|


hmmm EZ :v but icon >>>>

so, my suggest : kurangin yg ber 2 note seems like 00:06:035 (6035|0,6035|3) - 00:06:667 (6667|0,6667|3) - 00:07:298 (7298|3,7298|0) - etc itu cukup single note aja untuk diff easy ^^ dan lanjutin sampe seterus nya kecuali untuk cymbal :3
00:51:825 (51825|1,51982|2,52140|3,52298|0) - delete, change to LN,,and LN start in 00:51:667 -
00:52:456 (52456|1,52456|3) - sama seperti my suggest tdi ^^ i hope you understand ><
00:56:719 (56719|2) - delete
00:57:825 (57825|0,58140|2) - geser ke kanan 1x
00:58:456 (58456|3) - move 1
x.x 00:58:930 (58930|2,59246|0) - delete
00:58:456 (58456|3,58772|1) - ctrl + H
00:59:088 (59088|3) - move 2
00:59:404 (59404|2) - move 4
00:59:877 (59877|1) - delete ( usaha in jgn ikutin vocal )
01:02:561 (62561|0,62561|2) - enough 1 note ^^
01:03:982 (63982|1,64298|0) - delete :v
01:04:930 (64930|2) - ^
wtf bnyk masih -_-" kasian yg disini capek ngetik :v dah gini aja biar jelas...kurangin note yg ngikutin vocal, dan penggunaan 2 note (kecuali cymbal)

dah untuk diff ini lnjutin yaa xD cmn di kurangin beberapa note biar icon EZ ny muncul seperti >>>
Udah mz di accept smua, "E" nya udah muncul skrg :'v
no jack plis >< 00:01:298 (1298|1,1456|1) -
00:25:614 (25614|0,25614|1) - nih LN panjangin sampe 00:25:930 -
00:36:825 (36825|0,36904|1,36982|2) - hohohoh diff normal usahain jgan pake stream 1/4, jika bisa di bikin pattern yg cocok >w<so my suggest : 00:36:825 - >>> http://puu.sh/iVXgu/269b1b02e6.jpg
00:57:193 (57193|3,57272|2,57351|1,57430|0) - dat -_- change >>> http://puu.sh/iVXlH/88652b6b96.jpg
01:00:982 - add note in col 1
01:32:561 (92561|3,92561|2) - panjangin sampe >> 01:32:877 -
01:43:772 (103772|0,103851|1,103930|2) - x.x change LN plis (seperti pattern yg w kasih tau sebelum nya)
02:04:140 (124140|3,124219|2,124298|1,124377|0) - change LN >> http://puu.sh/iVXzw/4acda5ed6a.jpg
02:14:088 (134088|3,134167|2,134246|1,134325|0,134404|3,134482|2) - ini jga change LN -_- wtf
02:34:456 (154456|0,154535|1,154614|2,154693|3) - ^
02:39:509 (159509|3,159509|2) - panjang LN sampe 02:39:825 -
02:52:140 (172140|2,172772|1) - delete
02:53:404 (173404|0) - delete, terus ctrl + H
02:53:719 - add note di col 4
02:54:351 (174351|0) - delete
02:54:667 - add note col 1
02:54:982 (174982|0) - delete
02:55:298 - add note col 1 (pleasee bedain dengan suara drum yg clap ma kick untuk 2 note nya ><)
02:55:930 (175930|3,176009|2,176088|1,176167|0) - change LN in col 1
03:00:825 (180825|0,180904|1,180982|2,181061|3,181140|0,181219|1) - wtf :v gak perlu w bilang lagi yee musti ngapaen tentang itu :v
03:06:035 (186035|3,186114|2,186193|1,186272|0) - ^ (ini diff normal uyyy :v)
03:31:298 (211298|0,211377|1,211456|2,211535|3) - change jadi 2 LN in col 1 dan 4
00:14:640 (14640|3,14719|2,14798|1,14877|0,14956|1,15035|2,15114|1,15193|0,15272|1,15351|2,15430|1,15509|0,15588|1,15667|2,15746|3) - stream ny :v wkokwokw mending di jadiin gini deh biar cocok ma instrument nya >> http://puu.sh/iVYca/9fc41a0480.jpg
00:37:140 (37140|1) - move 1 (avoid jack 00:36:982 (36982|1) - )
00:54:351 - add note col 4
00:54:509 (54509|2) - move col 2
01:44:088 (104088|2) - move col 4
01:49:140 (109140|3) - move col 3
02:51:509 (171509|3) - delete (cukup 2 note aja)
02:53:088 - add note col 1
03:14:246 (194246|1) - move col 3
03:14:404 (194404|0) - move col 2
03:19:298 (199298|2) - ^
03:19:456 (199456|3) - move col 3
03:19:930 (199930|1) - ^
03:20:088 (200088|0) - move col 2
wtf :v yg pattern kek gini 03:24:035 (204035|2,204035|3,204351|0,204351|2,204509|3,204667|1,204667|0,204982|1,204982|3) - untuk note ini 03:24:509 (204509|3) - hindarin jack nya dengan yg 03:24:035 (204035|3) - (only pattern yg sama kek gitu)


dah itu aja deh x.x
CAPEK T.T

hmmm about IA....oke here my stars ~
Okelah smuanya ane accept, tpi ada repattern dikit ._.
Thanks modnya sma starnya juga :D
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Hi, from our queue
Key Notation |1|2|3|4|
---EZ---
00:03:982 - missing drum?
00:56:877 (56877|2) - set snap div to 1/4 then press K, I guess more clearly sound. Lets call this K case
01:06:982 (66982|2) - remove, too low sound
02:03:825 (123825|1) - K case
02:13:930 (133930|2) - remove, too low sound
02:55:614 (175614|1) - K case
---NM---
00:04:298 - misssing slider? if so end at 00:04:456
00:04:456 (4456|0) - move to 3 if you add slider because mod above
00:37:298 (37298|1) - move to 3, avoid this note and slider's end at same key that 2 snaps apart
01:06:982 (66982|3,66982|1) - remove, too low sound
01:35:219 (95219|2) - K then J, missplaced I guess
00:28:272 (28272|3) - J then K, ^
~~~~~~
Sorry I only mod these diffs
I hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF
posted

try24get wrote:

Hi, from our queue
Key Notation |1|2|3|4|
---EZ---
00:03:982 - missing drum? Ok
00:56:877 (56877|2) - set snap div to 1/4 then press K, I guess more clearly sound. Lets call this K case im following drum btw
01:06:982 (66982|2) - remove, too low sound nope
02:03:825 (123825|1) - K case nope
02:13:930 (133930|2) - remove, too low sound nope
02:55:614 (175614|1) - K case nope
---NM---
00:04:298 - misssing slider? if so end at 00:04:456 lol. i forgot sometimes
00:04:456 (4456|0) - move to 3 if you add slider because mod above Ok
00:37:298 (37298|1) - move to 3, avoid this note and slider's end at same key that 2 snaps apart Ok
01:06:982 (66982|3,66982|1) - remove, too low sound changed to 1 note
01:35:219 (95219|2) - K then J, missplaced I guess im following vocal
00:28:272 (28272|3) - J then K, ^ im following vocal
~~~~~~
Sorry I only mod these diffs
I hope this mod can help and your map get ranked
GLHF
Thanks for mod ^^/
And star :D
posted
posted

Crono wrote:

Here's my GD

http://puu.sh/iYLMQ/9b2607f0fe.osz

Cryolien's replay



ShikiNoHollow's replay

your diff is fun xD
Thanks for GD ;)
i'll update it ASAP

i dont know why i got this error message ._.
posted
Updated!!
posted
hii
modding as req via PM in game~

l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

00:46:772 - change with LN ... ada kick drum
00:56:877 - ^
01:50:009 (110009|1) - in harus nya mulai dari sini 01:49:930 -
01:53:719 (113719|0) - change with LN
02:03:825 (123825|1) - ^
02:08:246 (128246|3,128246|1) - del 1 and change with LN
02:18:351 (138351|3,138351|2,138667|0,138667|1,138982|2) - sama in sama 02:08:246 (128246|1,128561|2) -
02:55:614 (175614|1) - change with LN
03:00:035 (180035|1,180351|0) - sama in dengan 02:18:351 (138351|2,138667|1,138982|2) -
03:10:140 (190140|2,190140|3,190456|0,190456|1) - sama dengan di atas
00:06:351 (6351|2) - geser ke kiri
00:06:982 (6982|1) - geser ke kanan
00:25:614 (25614|1,25614|0) - LN akhir nya sampe 00:25:851 -
00:43:298 - add
01:32:561 (92561|1,92561|0) - ini juga sama LN nya di garis biru akhirnya
01:50:246 - add
01:56:719 - ^
02:03:982 - add
02:08:640 (128640|1) - delete
02:08:561 (128561|0) - suggets ganti sama LN
02:28:140 (148140|1,148140|0) - LN berenti di blue line
02:29:719 - add
02:55:693 (175693|2) - del
02:55:614 (175614|3) - ganti sama LN


udah mungkin segitu aja
Goodluck~
posted

[Baim] wrote:

hii
modding as req via PM in game~

l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

00:46:772 - change with LN ... ada kick drum
00:56:877 - ^
01:50:009 (110009|1) - in harus nya mulai dari sini 01:49:930 -
01:53:719 (113719|0) - change with LN
02:03:825 (123825|1) - ^
02:08:246 (128246|3,128246|1) - del 1 and change with LN
02:18:351 (138351|3,138351|2,138667|0,138667|1,138982|2) - sama in sama 02:08:246 (128246|1,128561|2) -
02:55:614 (175614|1) - change with LN
03:00:035 (180035|1,180351|0) - sama in dengan 02:18:351 (138351|2,138667|1,138982|2) -
03:10:140 (190140|2,190140|3,190456|0,190456|1) - sama dengan di atas
00:06:351 (6351|2) - geser ke kiri
00:06:982 (6982|1) - geser ke kanan
00:25:614 (25614|1,25614|0) - LN akhir nya sampe 00:25:851 -
00:43:298 - add
01:32:561 (92561|1,92561|0) - ini juga sama LN nya di garis biru akhirnya
01:50:246 - add
01:56:719 - ^
02:03:982 - add
02:08:640 (128640|1) - delete
02:08:561 (128561|0) - suggets ganti sama LN
02:28:140 (148140|1,148140|0) - LN berenti di blue line
02:29:719 - add
02:55:693 (175693|2) - del
02:55:614 (175614|3) - ganti sama LN


udah mungkin segitu aja
Goodluck~
Fix All
Woo~ makasih modnya :)
membantu sekali >,<
posted
02:32:561 - move to 02:32:482
02:32:877 - ^ 02:32:719
02:33:035 - ^ 02:32:956

03:00:746 - add a note
posted

NlHIL wrote:

02:32:561 - move to 02:32:482
02:32:877 - ^ 02:32:719
02:33:035 - ^ 02:32:956

03:00:746 - add a note
Fix All
Thanks~ :)
posted
Hi! Mod from Potato's queue!

1|2|3|4

00:10:772 (10772|0) - highly suggest to delete, this jack is quite hard especially after trill pattern. It's ok in SC but in MX... meh
00:13:219 - try to repattern it like this to be more consequent to the later part at 00:22:772 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398124 (not a mistake but it's to remain consistent in patterning)
00:20:877 (20877|3) - same as 00:10:772
00:27:193 - those hitsounds don't fit. Drum with vocal? Better replace it with something soft and graceful :P (and they don't exist in SC)
Another thing: I can't really get what are the notes mapped to. Partially to the melody in the background, and later to the vocals. I would suggest to map to the vocals here, because they're more audible and easier to map. If you decide to map the melody though, try to ignore vocals as much as possible!
00:37:298 - side note: you're quite using onehanded trills quite a lot, mainly [13][24][13] and [14][23]14]. While it's ok, on MX I would rather see more [12][34] trills because they're easier.
00:49:298 (49298|2) - cosmetic change - move to 4
00:56:088 (56088|1) - move to 3, better flow (overuse of column 2)
00:57:035 - there should be a note, I would rearrange that like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398203 (the trill change is optional)
01:07:061 - rearrange like 02:14:561 (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398267&#41;
01:17:719 (77719|3) - same as 00:10:772
01:27:825 (87825|0) - ^
01:34:140 - same as 00:27:193
01:44:088 (104088|2) - rearrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398236 to be consistent with 00:37:140
02:03:588 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange it to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398259
02:10:772 (130772|1,130930|2,131088|0) - move to 4, 2 and 3 respectively (better flow)
02:14:561 (134561|2) - delete (no 3-chords earlier)
02:18:982 (138982|0,138982|3,138982|2,139061|1,139140|2,139219|3,139298|0,139298|2,139377|1,139456|2,139535|3,139614|0,139614|2,139614|1) - paste those notes in the place of 01:12:035 (72035|0,72035|2,72035|3,72193|1,72272|2,72351|0,72351|3,72430|1,72509|2,72588|3,72667|0,72667|1) - (or rearrange them in the same manner, just pointing that those two fragments differ while they shouldn't)
02:29:719 (149719|3) - same as 00:10:772. In addition I would change this to [12][34] trill.
02:30:035 - this pattern is one big copy-paste :/ Please map this fragment once again from scratch, this is a more serious issue. In addition in this point 02:32:246 - there is some piano accent, maybe make something out of it? (remember this is MX and not SC)
02:34:140 - and here a trill potential.
02:40:772 - same as 00:27:193 if it comes to hitsounds. By the way you now mapped it fully to vocal. (later drum part doesn't count because it has drum enhacement)
02:55:614 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398300
03:00:509 - 03:00:746 - add 3 and 2 respectively to make it similar to previous choruses
03:16:456 (196456|3) - same as 00:10:772
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
Also in the end there are looooots of onehanded trills, maybe really rearrange some to [12][34] (this is MX not SC)
00:41:088 - add 2,3,2 (good reason for 3-chords)
00:42:351 - add 12 to make 3-chord
00:52:456 - I don't know but I don't think this full-stream really follows the music. But well... let it be.
00:57:035 - add 12. Or rearrange this to make [13][24][13].
01:11:404 - add 3,2,3 (reason for 3-chords)
01:48:035 - same as 00:41:088
01:49:298 - same as 00:42:351, dunno, copy-paste? :D
01:59:404 (119404|2) - ok this is SC I know, but I don't know if this jack really fits. You don't accent those beats with 3-chords and in previous chord there wasn't any 3-chords here (I know there's no drum entry but still). I would remove it. (plus it plays gay)
02:03:982 - same as 00:57:035
02:18:351 - same as 01:11:404
02:19:772 - there are some sounds which allow for some harder patterns, possible some jacks/trills may be inserted here. For example insert 1 here and 1 on the blue line, move the next note to 2. Study this whole fragment and decide if you want to include it! (second part too)
02:22:298 - and this fragment begs for 2-2 jack!
02:46:140 - here just a thought: it's possible to place single notes on 1/2.
02:55:772 - add 14
03:05:719 - you didn't make that a full continuous stream before. Maybe do it like it was on previous choruses?


I like this song, the vocals are really nice. Chart mapped well, although am I right or SC used HEAVILY copy-paste and ctrl+H? :D
Good luck!
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TheZiemniax wrote:

Hi! Mod from Potato's queue!

1|2|3|4

00:10:772 (10772|0) - highly suggest to delete, this jack is quite hard especially after trill pattern. It's ok in SC but in MX... meh
00:13:219 - try to repattern it like this to be more consequent to the later part at 00:22:772 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398124 (not a mistake but it's to remain consistent in patterning)
00:20:877 (20877|3) - same as 00:10:772
00:27:193 - those hitsounds don't fit. Drum with vocal? Better replace it with something soft and graceful :P (and they don't exist in SC) Yeah they are, they're added in stepmania style lol
Another thing: I can't really get what are the notes mapped to. Partially to the melody in the background, and later to the vocals. I would suggest to map to the vocals here, because they're more audible and easier to map. If you decide to map the melody though, try to ignore vocals as much as possible!
00:37:298 - side note: you're quite using onehanded trills quite a lot, mainly [13][24][13] and [14][23]14]. While it's ok, on MX I would rather see more [12][34] trills because they're easier.
00:49:298 (49298|2) - cosmetic change - move to 4
00:56:088 (56088|1) - move to 3, better flow (overuse of column 2)
00:57:035 - there should be a note, I would rearrange that like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398203 (the trill change is optional)
01:07:061 - rearrange like 02:14:561 (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398267&#41;
01:17:719 (77719|3) - same as 00:10:772
01:27:825 (87825|0) - ^
01:34:140 - same as 00:27:193
01:44:088 (104088|2) - rearrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398236 to be consistent with 00:37:140
02:03:588 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange it to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398259
02:10:772 (130772|1,130930|2,131088|0) - move to 4, 2 and 3 respectively (better flow)
02:14:561 (134561|2) - delete (no 3-chords earlier)
02:18:982 (138982|0,138982|3,138982|2,139061|1,139140|2,139219|3,139298|0,139298|2,139377|1,139456|2,139535|3,139614|0,139614|2,139614|1) - paste those notes in the place of 01:12:035 (72035|0,72035|2,72035|3,72193|1,72272|2,72351|0,72351|3,72430|1,72509|2,72588|3,72667|0,72667|1) - (or rearrange them in the same manner, just pointing that those two fragments differ while they shouldn't)
02:29:719 (149719|3) - same as 00:10:772. In addition I would change this to [12][34] trill.
02:30:035 - this pattern is one big copy-paste :/ Please map this fragment once again from scratch, this is a more serious issue. In addition in this point 02:32:246 - there is some piano accent, maybe make something out of it? (remember this is MX and not SC)
02:34:140 - and here a trill potential.
02:40:772 - same as 00:27:193 if it comes to hitsounds. By the way you now mapped it fully to vocal. (later drum part doesn't count because it has drum enhacement)
02:55:614 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398300
03:00:509 - 03:00:746 - add 3 and 2 respectively to make it similar to previous choruses
03:16:456 (196456|3) - same as 00:10:772
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^
Also in the end there are looooots of onehanded trills, maybe really rearrange some to [12][34] (this is MX not SC)
00:41:088 - add 2,3,2 (good reason for 3-chords) No, then I'd have to start turning this into an SHD to keep it consistent
00:42:351 - add 12 to make 3-chord ^
00:52:456 - I don't know but I don't think this full-stream really follows the music. But well... let it be. It is an FC and it does actually fit well into it if you count the background sounds going on. It's not a full-stream, it has some brief breaks
00:57:035 - add 12. Or rearrange this to make [13][24][13]. 23 14, Adding to the space would add ghost notes.
01:11:404 - add 3,2,3 (reason for 3-chords) fixed
01:48:035 - same as 00:41:088 No it's intended
01:49:298 - same as 00:42:351, dunno, copy-paste? :D^
01:59:404 (119404|2) - ok this is SC I know, but I don't know if this jack really fits. You don't accent those beats with 3-chords and in previous chord there wasn't any 3-chords here (I know there's no drum entry but still). I would remove it. (plus it plays gay) No, it's the start of kiai
02:03:982 - same as 00:57:035 no
02:18:351 - same as 01:11:404 no
02:19:772 - there are some sounds which allow for some harder patterns, possible some jacks/trills may be inserted here. For example insert 1 here and 1 on the blue line, move the next note to 2. Study this whole fragment and decide if you want to include it! (second part too) maybe for an SHD, however I don't want to overwhelm players cause of the LNs. Most struggle to mix them with normal notes.
02:22:298 - and this fragment begs for 2-2 jack! lol can't argue here, however it will be single notes ending with a 2note chord for crash. Although I may change it back later depending on how many mods find an issue with it.
02:46:140 - here just a thought: it's possible to place single notes on 1/2. meh, this is a relax section
02:55:772 - add 14 This seems really unnecessary
03:05:719 - you didn't make that a full continuous stream before. Maybe do it like it was on previous choruses? Listen carefully it's different here


I like this song, the vocals are really nice. Chart mapped well, although am I right or SC used HEAVILY copy-paste and ctrl+H? :DHow else do you do repeat patterns for a repeating chorus :P. There is no ctrl+H btw
Good luck!
Thx for for modding ;)

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TheZiemniax wrote:

Hi! Mod from Potato's queue!

1|2|3|4

00:10:772 (10772|0) - highly suggest to delete, this jack is quite hard especially after trill pattern. It's ok in SC but in MX... meh Ok
00:13:219 - try to repattern it like this to be more consequent to the later part at 00:22:772 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398124 (not a mistake but it's to remain consistent in patterning) ok
00:20:877 (20877|3) - same as 00:10:772 ok
00:27:193 - those hitsounds don't fit. Drum with vocal? Better replace it with something soft and graceful :P (and they don't exist in SC)
Another thing: I can't really get what are the notes mapped to. Partially to the melody in the background, and later to the vocals. I would suggest to map to the vocals here, because they're more audible and easier to map. If you decide to map the melody though, try to ignore vocals as much as possible! okay, i'll follow the vocal on this part
00:37:298 - side note: you're quite using onehanded trills quite a lot, mainly [13][24][13] and [14][23]14]. While it's ok, on MX I would rather see more [12][34] trills because they're easier. okay i'll try to reduce onehanded trill :)
00:49:298 (49298|2) - cosmetic change - move to 4 ok
00:56:088 (56088|1) - move to 3, better flow (overuse of column 2) ok
00:57:035 - there should be a note, I would rearrange that like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398203 (the trill change is optional) accepted, and repattern some note
01:07:061 - rearrange like 02:14:561 (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398267&#41; Okay 8-)
01:17:719 (77719|3) - same as 00:10:772 ok
01:27:825 (87825|0) - ^ ok
01:34:140 - same as 00:27:193 okay, vocal
01:44:088 (104088|2) - rearrange like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398236 to be consistent with 00:37:140 okay, nice pattern :)
02:03:588 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange it to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398259 ok
02:10:772 (130772|1,130930|2,131088|0) - move to 4, 2 and 3 respectively (better flow) ok
02:14:561 (134561|2) - delete (no 3-chords earlier) my mistake lol xD
02:18:982 (138982|0,138982|3,138982|2,139061|1,139140|2,139219|3,139298|0,139298|2,139377|1,139456|2,139535|3,139614|0,139614|2,139614|1) - paste those notes in the place of 01:12:035 (72035|0,72035|2,72035|3,72193|1,72272|2,72351|0,72351|3,72430|1,72509|2,72588|3,72667|0,72667|1) - (or rearrange them in the same manner, just pointing that those two fragments differ while they shouldn't) okay, i'll rearrange the first
02:29:719 (149719|3) - same as 00:10:772. In addition I would change this to [12][34] trill. okay, deleted, but i think no for [12][34] trill
02:30:035 - this pattern is one big copy-paste :/ Please map this fragment once again from scratch, this is a more serious issue. In addition in this point lol i confuse to make this stream pattern xD
02:32:246 - there is some piano accent, maybe make something out of it? (remember this is MX and not SC) im following the string
02:34:140 - and here a trill potential. where? :/ is that here? 02:34:456 -
02:40:772 - same as 00:27:193 if it comes to hitsounds. By the way you now mapped it fully to vocal. (later drum part doesn't count because it has drum enhacement) okay i'll follow the drum
02:55:614 - if you applied 00:57:035 then rearrange like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3398300 okay :)
03:00:509 - 03:00:746 - add 3 and 2 respectively to make it similar to previous choruses nope
03:16:456 (196456|3) - same as 00:10:772 okay
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^ okay
03:21:509 (201509|0) - ^ okay
Also in the end there are looooots of onehanded trills, maybe really rearrange some to [12][34] (this is MX not SC) Okay ._.
Thanks for the mods~ :)
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from my queue

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  • [General]
    Romanised Title : mafumafu feat. IA :arrow:Mafumafu feat. IA

    [MX]
    00:01:930 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413219 . LN = bass guitar sound ?

    02:23:088 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413240

    02:28:298 - add 1. cymbal sound

    02:34:772 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3413244

    02:39:272 (159272|1,159430|2) - delete and 02:39:193 - 02:39:351 - add 3. you not follow 02:38:640 - 02:38:798 - 02:38:956 - 02:39:114 -

    03:00:746 - add 2

    [HD]
    01:01:772 (61772|1) - delete and 01:01:851 (61851|2) - move to 2. like 02:08:561 -

    02:08:561 (128561|0,128640|1) - ctrl+H


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