1. KERO (5.26 stars, 802 notes)
2. Normal (1.36 stars, 11 notes)

SB by me

The Mykonian wrote:

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from 00:05:645 (1) to 00:11:139 (8) - I recommend going for a slider followed with 2 circles for a 1/4 stream, with the slider always being NC The playability on this is ech, unless I miscomprehended, in which case you can show me what you meant
00:12:622 (5,6,7) - I'd just repeat the slider once and remove the 2 circles ./
00:17:505 (3,4,5) - eh. I'd do this http://puu.sh/jKA1f/9caab7b30c.jpg ./
00:20:209 (4) - I'd remove ./
00:20:296 (5,6,7) - same as 00:12:622 (5,6,7) ./
00:25:877 (3) - I'd make it 1 tick shorter ./
00:26:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd remove the (2) and stack the (4,5) (now (3,4)) ./
00:29:366 (1,2,3) - I'd make all of them 1 tick shorter ./
from 00:33:552 (1) to 00:38:348 (8) - same pattern as earlier with the stream, I wouldn't make it go faster and faster, to I'd get an average spacing and get it through The playability on this is ech, unless I miscomprehended, in which case you can show me what you meant
00:38:436 (1,2,3,4) - I'd make 2 repeating sliders that repeat 4 times each (to emphasize the white tick again) Considering this. The kicksliders work well, though they are hard to react to fast (though that might just be my skill)
from 00:39:133 (1) to 00:43:232 (8) - the as both streams, even the repeating sliders should take that pattern I think The playability on this is ech, unless I miscomprehended, in which case you can show me what you meant
00:43:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - eh I'd put them in some pattern, cause right now they look a bit set-as-I-can I feel See how that looks.
00:44:715 (1) - I'd make 1 tick shorter ./
00:46:110 (1) - ^ ./
00:47:505 (1) - ^ ./
00:48:203 (4) - ^ ./
00:48:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd remove 1 note out of 2 to make it a basic 1/2 rythm, and maybe add a note at the very end to link with the slider Considering
00:50:296 (1) - I'd make 1 tick shorter ./
00:51:691 (1,2) - ^ for both ./
00:53:784 (4) - it should follow the same rythm as 00:53:087 (1,2) - ./
00:57:273 (1) - 1 tick shorter? ./
00:59:366 (4) - the same repeat slider as 00:12:622 (5,6,7) ./
01:00:761 (1,1) - I'd repeat the first slider once and remove the second slider for a circle in the blank ./
01:02:854 (1) - 1 tick shorter ./
01:04:250 (1) - ^ ./
I'd add a circle to be at 01:07:040 (9) (x: 384 y: 208 seem good) but I can understand why you didn't put any ./
01:24:482 (4) - 1 tick shorter./
01:36:343 (1,2,3) - 1 tick shorter each./
01:40:529 (1) - ^./
01:41:924 (1) - ^./
01:46:110 (1) - ^./
01:46:808 (4) - replace with a circle. feels better overall I think./
01:47:505 (1) - 1 tick shorter./
01:51:691 (1) - ^./
01:52:738 (5,6) - I'd make some kind of back-and-forth pattern here, like place the (6) back in the direction of the (4) slider, but not under it, to have a constant spacing, but some kind of pattern-like feel to it./
01:53:087 (1) - 1 tick shorter./
01:54:482 (1) - ^./
01:55:180 (4) - ^./
01:57:273 (1) - ^./
02:00:064 (1) - ^./
02:01:459 (1,2) - I'd make a 4circle stream here./
I'd add a NC circle in the very center to be 02:02:854 (6)./
02:19:598 (1) - 1 tick shorter./
02:20:994 (1) - ^./
02:21:691 (5) - ^./
02:25:180 (1) - ^./
02:27:273 (4) - ^./
02:29:366 (1) - ^./
02:30:761 (1) - ^./
02:32:157 (1) - ^./
02:32:854 (5) - ^./
02:34:947 (1) - ^./
02:36:343 (1) - ^./
02:42:622 (1,2) - I'd make something like this http://puu.sh/jKBq0/d334f073ca.jpg./
02:44:017 (1,2) - ^./
02:49:598 (1,2) - ^./
02:52:389 (1,2,3,4) - I'd put the (1) down, then the (2,3) up and the (4) down (possibly in a forced-stack mode if you see what I mean)./
02:53:087 (1) - could stay up to 03:01:459./