Heya~ Responding to your request in-game.
Eh, your NC’s are very inconsistent and can use more work imo. I mean, in some places you placed a NC on the white tick (like it actually should be imo) and in other places you didn’t. NC’s should usually be placed where the beat is the strongest. (You’re probably going to tell me that ranting on about NC’ing is stupid, but the wrong NC’ing can affect a map badly imo)
Then, I only like pointed out two jumps at the beginning of the song, cuz I felt it would be useless to point out every single one if you’re not going to fix any in any case, but I really feel, especially at the beginning where the music is calm, that you shouldn’t go all out with jumps since they don’t support the music that well at all.
I don’t know, Avishay. In my eyes, this can still be improved. This kind of map is not really my style, so I guess it’s mostly just my own opinion though.
Beginning:
- The preview point isn’t snapped. Snap it to 00:59:443 –
- 00:09:343 –Clear beat here. Even if you’re following that ping sound, it still won’t hurt to map that beat imo.
- 00:23:293 (5) –I would add NC here and remove NC here: 00:23:593 (1) – The strong beat is on: 00:23:293 (5) –
- 00:24:493 (1) –Don’t you think this jump might be too much? Since the music is calm.
- 00:28:543 –A note here would fit nicely.
- 00:43:693 (3) –NC here? There’s a strong beat there.
- 00:43:693 (3) –Dang, this is a big jump, lol. I suggest you try easing down on a jump like that. The music is still calm.
- 00:54:793 (4,5) –Since the (5) has to be clicked faster than the previous circles, can’t you maybe move them a bit closer together to make that clearer?
- 01:02:893 (3) –Imo, the NC should rather be on the large white tick, since that’s where the beat is strong.
- 01:05:293 (2) -^,etc.
- 01:12:193 (4,6) –Ugly overlap. Try to avoid them touching.
- 01:14:893 (5) –NC here and remove NC here: 01:15:193 (1) –
- 01:16:543 (1) –I wouldn’t place a NC here.
- 01:53:293 (1) –You didn’t place a slow slider like this anywhere else in the previous part of the kiai so it may cause confusion. I suggest you return the SV to normal there.
- 02:12:493 (3) –NC?
- 02:14:893 (3) -^
- 02:17:293 (2) -^
- 02:19:693 (5) –NC here and remove NC here: 02:20:293 (1) –
- 02:48:193 (1) –I don’t understand why there’s a single NC here >.<
- 03:18:493 (3) –NC
- 03:19:093 (5) –NC here and remove NC here: 03:19:243 (1) –
- 03:58:093 (1) –Same as 01:53:293 (1) –
Eh, your NC’s are very inconsistent and can use more work imo. I mean, in some places you placed a NC on the white tick (like it actually should be imo) and in other places you didn’t. NC’s should usually be placed where the beat is the strongest. (You’re probably going to tell me that ranting on about NC’ing is stupid, but the wrong NC’ing can affect a map badly imo)
Then, I only like pointed out two jumps at the beginning of the song, cuz I felt it would be useless to point out every single one if you’re not going to fix any in any case, but I really feel, especially at the beginning where the music is calm, that you shouldn’t go all out with jumps since they don’t support the music that well at all.
I don’t know, Avishay. In my eyes, this can still be improved. This kind of map is not really my style, so I guess it’s mostly just my own opinion though.