Monstrata wrote:

hihi~

KiAi
00:11:667 (5,6,1,2,3) - This arrangement looks a bit inconsistent with stacking enabled. Are you sure you want this spacing? I guess he wants to make there a shape.

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03:34:167 (4) - NC, and NC more often, like 03:37:917 (4) - etc... Your section is the only section where you NC very infrequently and it's causing it to be inconsistent with other members of the collab.

Cellina
01:12:709 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - Blankets can be improved here.

Enon
02:39:167 (4,1) - 02:41:042 (4,1) - Having a jump or something here would be nice. Right now you don't map any emphasis at all which makes it a bit weird transitioning to Leaf's part afterwards since they map jumps and sutff.

Leaf/Curi
03:02:500 (4,1) - Beginning the kiai on a stack instead of a jump feels kinda weak. Do a jump instead for more momentum?

Reol
03:16:667 (3,4) - Clicking on 4 is really weird since it's not supported in the music. Feels like an overmap. Use a slider instead? It's really low though I can hear* something at there. I think it's fine :O

Moa
03:56:251 (1,2,3) - Sounds overmapped imo. Use sliders instead cuz imo clicking here isn't well supported by vocals unlike the previous section.
04:42:501 (4,5) - How about making a triangle here? Creates a nicer flow going into the slider

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Leaf
04:57:084 (3,4) - Imo, don't use jumps here when you're also switching to 1/3 rhythm. The added slider-end makes it harder to snap to the head of slider 4 without accidentally breaking too.

Yuii- wrote:

Get a Tier 1 BN, Enon. I will qualify it after you get them!

Enon wrote:

Yuii- wrote:

Get a Tier 1 BN, Enon. I will qualify it after you get them!

I got a BN though, I think it needs one more BN.... it...is....for...approved....

1. 00:42:501 (3,1) - The sliders are too close, 1,77 spacing like you did with 00:42:917 (1,2) - would be better for the visuals
2. 00:54:584 (1) - move this to x:52 y:160, so the pattern looks better
3. 00:57:709 (4) - a 1/4 slider would sounds better with the hold vocal sound, also is a bit weird that you ignored the beat at 00:57:917 - (if you do then pls add a hitsound o 00:57:917 -)
4. 01:12:501 (4,5) - a slider would fit the music better, since you guys are following mostly vocals, that's why 5 sounds outplace atm
5. 02:18:542 (4,1) - the overlap looks so ugly and let's be honest guys this map is so clean stuff like this doesn't fit the map IMO
6. 02:47:501 (3,1) - same, the overlap looks ugly
7. 03:32:501 (7,1) - this is touching the HP bar, just move the pattern a bit down, overlapping the game elments in a super clean map like this one is a no for me.
8. 03:40:209 (2,4) - stack them? for a better design
9. 03:42:084 (6) - it's posible to avoid overlapping the accuracy meter? you just need to move it a bit up
10. 04:38:751 (4,1) - man this overlap looks really bad and doesn't fit the overall style of the map, can you do something else there?
11. 04:56:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the spacing between the 1/6s and 1/4s looks the same, can you make them different, either by reducing the spacing a 1/6s (which I prefer( or adding more spacing to the 1/4s-
12. 05:02:084 (3,6) - stack them so the pattern looks cleaner? also almost the full mapset use stacking..
13. 05:03:751 (3,1) - 05:10:626 (4,1) - same as above

Natsu wrote:

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1. 00:42:501 (3,1) - The sliders are too close, 1,77 spacing like you did with 00:42:917 (1,2) - would be better for the visuals ok
2. 00:54:584 (1) - move this to x:52 y:160, so the pattern looks better i was suck.............
3. 02:47:501 (3,1) - same, the overlap looks ugly fixed
4. 03:32:501 (7,1) - this is touching the HP bar, just move the pattern a bit down, overlapping the game elments in a super clean map like this one is a no for me. i tried to fix it.
5. 03:40:209 (2,4) - stack them? for a better design i guess he would keep it and it seems fine for me
6. 03:42:084 (6) - it's posible to avoid overlapping the accuracy meter? you just need to move it a bit up i guess he wanted to make a blanket. you can see the tail of that slider and 03:40:417 (3) -
7. 04:38:751 (4,1) - man this overlap looks really bad and doesn't fit the overall style of the map, can you do something else there? tried to fix it.
8. 04:56:251 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the spacing between the 1/6s and 1/4s looks the same, can you make them different, either by reducing the spacing a 1/6s (which I prefer( or adding more spacing to the 1/4s- fixed
9. 05:02:084 (3,6) - stack them so the pattern looks cleaner? also almost the full mapset use stacking.. fixed
10. 05:03:751 (3,1) - 05:10:626 (4,1) - same as above fixed

let me know

1. 00:57:709 (4) - a 1/4 slider would sounds better with the hold vocal sound, also is a bit weird that you ignored the beat at 00:57:917 - (if you do then pls add a hitsound o 00:57:917 -)
2. 02:18:542 (4,1) - the overlap looks so ugly and let's be honest guys this map is so clean stuff like this doesn't fit the map IMO

1. 01:12:501 (4,5) - a slider would fit the music better, since you guys are following mostly vocals, that's why 5 sounds outplace atm

Yuii- wrote:

03:14:584 (1) - 03:57:917 (1) - 04:04:584 (1) - 05:07:917 (1) - add hitsound done
03:54:167 (5,6) - would use slider instead because song doesn't really support both clickables done
04:16:251 (1,2) - spacing looks really, really low for a 1/2 pattern, can easily be misread i think it's fine because here is a silence part. using low space at a silence part would be fine
04:29:584 (1) - would have loved to see a jump here http://i.imgur.com/eFJ6VeP.jpg done
04:51:980 (4) - this is so overmapped lol i am sure that there are sounds that is supposed to be mapped.

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