Good song and map
Artist(romanised): Goose house (H -> h)this song is not used to anime, just coupling with opening song.
Title: 冬のエピローグ
Romanised Title: Fuyu no Epilogue
Source: x
Recommended Tags: Hikaru nara, 四月は君の嘘, 君嘘, shigatsu wa kimi no uso, kimiuso, your lie in april, Winter's Epilogue
좋은 의견 감사합니다Beomsan wrote:
강제 m4m
[General][땡큐포유어밀리터리써비스미스터키아이]
- Unused hitsounds:
soft-slidertick2.wav (00:20:417 - 00:59:584 - 00:21:251 - 01:27:084 - 선이 세워진건 맞는데 전부 틱이 없음)
drum-slidertick2.wav :
drum-slidertick5.wav :
drum-slidertick6.wav :
normal-slidertick.wav (위랑 비슷한 경우고 전부다 틱이 없기 때문에 사용되는 선인지 전부 점검바람)
soft-slidertick5.wav (S:C5가 전부 다 Hitobject에만 적용돼있고 틱에는 하나도 없음) unused hitsounds 문제는 bpm이 반토막 나면서 틱이 다 사라져서 그랬던건데, 틱 늘려서 해결했습니다.- sb에 BG.png가 사용되는 파일인지 확인바람.
다른 스토리보드 osb 뜯어보니 본 BG를 넣을 이유가 없어보임.
맵 osb 열어봐도 BG.png 사용되는 구간 안보이고 SB 폴더 안에 있는 BG.png가 확실히 사용되지 않고 있는 것 같아서 삭제했습니다.- Advanced things
Enable Countdown 체크 해제
Epilepsy warning 체크 수정 완료
Enon이렇게 스냅을 잘 파악해야하고 박자가 자주 변하는 곡에서 이 정도 인원으로 콜랍을 해버리니 각 파트마다 리듬 활용도쪽에서 너무나 확연한 차이가 느껴짐...
- 04:17:917 - 일단 제일 처음 발견했고 스냅때문에 제일 문제가 되는 곳.
일단 1/12, 1/16으로 봐도 04:18:698 (3) - 이 슬라이더와 더불어 언스냅.
04:18:751 - 04:19:167 - 이런 클릭은 정박으로 쓰되 슬라이더 테일을 04:19:029 - 04:19:445 - 1/12자리에 두는게 지금 현상유지 최대한 하면서 제대로 수정하는 방법같다고 생각됨. http://puu.sh/sbWjo/26b84fd66f.png 이 부분은 콜랍 멤버분들과 상의해서 최대한 적절하게 수정해봤습니다.- 00:45:417 - 여기부터 보컬 따라가려면 스냅 충분히 주의해야한다고 봄. 보컬이 애매하게 끌려서 정박으로 둬도 이게 맞는건지 틀린건지 충분히 의아해 질 수 있음. 예를 들면 1/16으로 설정된 상태에서 00:45:470 (2,3,1) - 이 세개를 딱 한 틱만 옮기면 사람에 따라서 더 잘 맞다고 생각할 수 있다는 것. 보컬음이라는 게 사람이 내는 소리인 만큼 기계가 내는 것만큼 일정하게 소리를 내는 건 사실 불가능하죠. 보컬을 따라간다고는 하나, 그와 가장 가까운 정박에 노트를 배치한 것이라 지금이 적절하다고 봅니다.
- 04:23:751 - (startrick 01:40:417 - ) 저는 지금처럼 보컬 따라가는 게 더 괜찮게 느껴졌네요. 달라진 거라면 unused hitsounds 부분 고치면서 틱 사운드가 생겼다는 점?
- 04:26:042 (4,1) - 맵 초반에는 피니쉬마다 거리를 벌려주는 모습이 보였는데 여긴 무브먼트에서조차 임팩트가 없으니 아쉬운 부분 저도 그렇게 생각해서 04:26:042 (4) - 이걸 살짝 옮겨서 점프를 만들어 봤습니다.
이걸 어떻게 합의점을 찾아서 개선할 시도라도 있으면 발전에 굉장히 좋을 것 같지만 현실성 없다는거도 알고 앙기무띠
그리고 이건 랭크 진행하면서 주의해야 할 점인데, 이 정도로 복잡한 히트사운딩이 돼있는 맵에서 키아이님이 지금 안계시니까 일단 크리에이터가 어떤 규칙인지 파악해놓을 필요가 있고 뭔가 수정되면 바로바로 체크해줘야함 아니면 구멍 송송 날 듯 파트 하나하나 수정할 때마다 콜랍 멤버들끼리 모여서 의견 주고 받으면서 고치는 걸로 했습니다. 힛사 부분도..
모딩감사합니다!Beomsan wrote:
강제 m4m
Curi
- 05:08:647 - (04:51:980 - Leaf) 리프님과 합의하에 3연타로 고쳤습니다
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모딩 감사합니다.Gloria Guard wrote:
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■ 01:06:251 보컬이 잘 흘러다가 뚝 끊긴 느낌인데, 여기를 넣지 않고 끊은 이유가 있나요? 보컬이 끊어져있지 않고 길-게 끄는 부분이 존재 하는데. 굳이 박자를 한박자 쉬고 점프로 뒀어야 했나라는 의문이 들어요. 여기는 패턴 중시보단, 자연스러운 박자감각을 살리는게 더 좋다고 생각하네요. 이 부분은 스타트릭님 파트네요.
■ 01:22:917 (1,2) 일단 첫번째로 1번의 점프 동선 방향이나, 거리가 좁아요. 이전의 2,4번의 거리 변화가 있었다면 (1)번 노트도 똑같이 거리를 벌리고 모양을 제대로 갖춰서 만들으셨다면 어땟을까 생각해봅니다. 그리고 (2) 왜 박자를 끊으셨는지 이해가 안되는 부분이네요. 매핑에서 가장 중요한 것에 속하는 박자가 전혀 자연스럽지가 않아요. 그리고 보컬이 01:23:334 여기서 끊기는게 아니라 끝나는게 좀 더 길구요. 범산님 모딩에서도 답변했지만, 보컬음이라는 게 사람이 내는 소리다보니까 기계로 만들어 낸 소리처럼 일정하고 확실하게 끊기지 않아서, 오스 에디터 내 스냅으로 완벽하게 잡아내기엔 무리가 있습니다. 그래서 그나마 확실하고, 적절하다고 생각되는 부분을 끊는 걸로 한 것입니다. 흐름 부분은.. 글로리아님이 무슨 말씀을 하시는 지 제가 정확히 이해를 하지 못했지만, 아는 매퍼분과 얘기를 해보면서 제가 만족할 수 있는 선 안에서 고치는 걸로 했습니다.
간격이나, 박자쪽에서 끊으신 부분이나, 1/2로 넣으신 부분을 다시한번 보시면서 박자 개선좀 하시는게 어떨가 싶네요. 힛사를 넣었다고 한들 기본적으로 넣으신 박자는 변화가 없으니까요. 그리고 간간히 몇분들 파트마다 보이는게 노트 간격을 의도해서 치기 불편하게끔 만든게 보이는데. 예를들어 https://puu.sh/seiPJ/9479befbcc.png 이런거라던가.. 노트사이의 간격은 일정하게 하거나, 혹은 모양을 만들어서 만드시는게 좋을 듯해보여요, 이건 스타일성이라고 하기엔 플레이쪽에 있어서 굉장히 리딩하기에 애매하고 힘들게끔 하는 것이니까요. 박자를 강조하는게 아닌이상 일관성을 고려하여 만드시는게 좋아보입니다. 파트가 상당히 많고, 그걸 만드는 사람도 상당히 많았다보니 그런 부분들이 다 한결같지 못한 건 인정합니다. 그래도 최소한 다른 파트와 너무 동떨어지는 패턴은 지향하려고 노력했고, 이 완성본이 저희가 내놓을 수 있는 최선의 결과물이였다고 생각합니다. 모딩을 받으면서 콜랍 멤버 모두와 피드백을 공유하면서 맵을 개선해나가는 방식을 취하도록 하겠습니다.
good luck.
and, Here is my answer.Miryle wrote:
Calm song.~ From queue and stuff.
Enon
- 00:49:376 (5,1) – No blanket?
- 02:49:376 (4,1,2) – 4 and 1 are off definitely, but check 4 and 2.
Cellina- 01:51:876 (4,5) – oi spacing m8
- 02:02:084 (2) – You sure you want this sound on a slider end? I’d make a ½ slider then circle for the finish.
- 02:05:626 (3,1) – Blanket.
C u r i- 02:26:042 (4,4) – ;w; Can’t you move these around so it could look like so: https://puu.sh/sgQbj/29f54c6a3b.png ?
- 03:05:001 (2,5) – Eww they’re touching.
- 03:09:584 (1,2) – asdasdsd, try this instead?: https://puu.sh/sgQnc/f79008805a.png
- 03:13:751 (3,1) - ^ same
- 05:10:626 (4,1) - ^
- 05:11:876 (2,3) – Make this straight.
Leaf- 02:56:042 (4) – Just pointing out you’re skipping drums at 02:56:251 -
- 02:57:917 (4,5) – Nazi blanket.
- 02:58:334 (5,6) – Legit blanket.
- 04:55:417 (3,1) – No stack?
Reol- 03:19:376 (4,1) – aaaaaaaaaaaaa overlap ;w;
- 03:27:917 (1,2) – u wot this blanket m8
K i A i- 03:30:209 (2,3,4) – Spacing? D:
- 03:30:834 (1) – WHERE DID THE EMPHASIS GO ASDASD try: https://puu.sh/sgQrV/12e5cd3df5.png
- 03:31:876 (4,5,6,1) – holy mother of overlaps im crying internally pls
- 03:33:542 (2) – Ctrl+G cuz people won’t realize they have to move the cursor to hit 3 and bam sliderbreak.
- 03:34:167 (4) – could NC here to avoid an 11 note combo.
- 05:20:417 (2,3) – Again blanket. 05:22:084 (4) – too.
Moa- 04:02:917 (1,3) – aaaaaa overlap isn’t good ;w; Could try https://puu.sh/sgQzu/4e706aa967.png but that 04:03:542 (2) – is close as hell. Idk about this part tbh
- 04:05:417 (3,4,5,6) – um pls why circles? 04:05:417 (3,5) – sliders on these would fit waaaay better.
- 04:40:417 (2,3) – nazi blanket, head is too far ;w;
- 04:42:501 (4,5,1) – HOYL BLANKETS OMG ASDSADSd
thank you!Miryle wrote:
Enon
- 00:49:376 (5,1) – No blanket? Absolutely, I didn't aim blanket it.
- 02:49:376 (4,1,2) – 4 and 1 are off definitely, but check 4 and 2. Sorry. but, I couldn't understand what you want to say.
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UndeadCapulet wrote:
Epilogue
The spacing between the "Thank you for playing!" letters in the sb is really poorly done, I think you should remake that image. fixed
K i A i:Enon:
- 00:06:251 (1,2,3) - I think this rhythm isn't too hard for playing and fits how you map the vocals for the rest of this part better. i'm not k i a i, but current one is fine for me.
- 03:30:209 (2) - Maybe stack under the previous slidertail for a nice stop motion, I think it breaks up 03:29:584 (1,2) - and 03:30:417 (3,4,1) - better. i'm not k i a i, but current way is fits to the song more for me.
- 00:55:348 (2) - This is closer to 1/16 than 1/12, but since it's mostly just a string of grace notes you can probably just put it on the white tick for easier playing. i changed it to 1/16
- 00:55:834 (3,4) - Maybe turn these into 1/4 slider since even the stronger 00:42:501 (3) - vocals were like that. done
- 01:34:584 (1,2) - Lowering SV back to .5x here would fit really well with both the song and your sb. current way is enough fits to the song. and there is no lowering SV at all of part before every kiai
Thank you.appleeaterx wrote:
[General][Epilogue]
- Intro has some doubtful snapping at 00:03:751 (2) - . With a quick MP3 fix this could be solved, as red lines wouldn't make this part much better for playing. KuroKami suggested me moving it 00:03:803 - here would works. so, I did.
- Overall, the timing and snapping of objects sounds doubtful at times. Perhaps you could keep the current timing for simplicity as the song is pretty stable most of the times, but I strongly recommend you to look for more opinions whether this extra step is needed. // 04:44:584 (1,2) - 00:55:348 (2) - 00:03:751 (2) - 04:57:084 (3) - I have some talk with KuroKami and we decided how i will do. Of course, I will call someone for getting more opinions.
- Can see where UndeadCapulet's concern comes from. The "Thank you for playing!" message does look a little bit squished in. Bumping up the character spacing would look better imo. Done
K i A iEnon
- 00:07:084 (2) - I can't hear anything here, pretty sure this is overmapped. Just like 00:08:751 (4) - , there's only a vocal note on the 1/4 tick. there is vocal o..........."........." <- like this. it's really small though.
- 00:14:584 (1,2) - (HS) Inaudible. increase volum a bit. but, I'm not sure whether it's fine
- 03:33:542 (2,3) - It's pretty hard to read or predict whether (3) starts on (2)'s or (3)'s end. Would use some form of custom stack to make this more obvious, because this is pretty deceiving. I have asked someone to play it and they're played it very well. It's fine to me.
Reol
- 00:47:605 (2,3) - Doubt players can catch this snapping change at all... slider may seem more player-friendly. changed to slider.
- 00:55:348 (2) - Sounds pretty early still. Actually, 1/16 would fit better here, but that still doesn't sound the closest. Get someone (preferably a QAT) to consult you on whether to have strange snapping like these, or have an edited MP3 instead. As have talked with KuroKami, I chagned it 1/16. but, Will getting more opinions.
- 03:45:417 (3) - 1/8? Changed
- 03:46:251 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Seems so hard for a calm part + how the song is so strictly DS mapped orz... love what you did with the spacing decrease though later on this. I really think it's nice way to express the section. the song is lowering the tension, and still can hear strong sounds at where every 1/2. It's also fine to me.
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[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:11 PM
Nice song.
[*]Enon - Today at 12:13 PM
I agree :smiley:
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:15 PM
00:55:365 (2) - well, for this 1/16 tick works. /o/
[*]Enon - Today at 12:16 PM
that part doesnt required changing mp3?(edited)
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:16 PM
Why?
[*]Enon - Today at 12:16 PM
oh
nevermind
:smiley:
i just changed that to 1/16
how about other parts apple mentioned?
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:18 PM
i'm checking that.
04:44:584 (1,2) - what are you trying to follow here?
Because the snapping depends on that
[*]Enon - Today at 12:22 PM
we're followed vocals mainly, and mapped something strong instrument
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:22 PM
Hm
[*]Enon - Today at 12:23 PM
i guess moa thought just putting at white tick is the solution to map that part easily?
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:23 PM
Yea, I thought that too
But the violin or I dunno what is that is just right before it by 1/16 and its strong as well. :c
[*]Enon - Today at 12:24 PM
you meant 04:44:532 - here?
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:24 PM
Yap
[*]Enon - Today at 12:25 PM
then moving the head of the slider at there would make it better?
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:25 PM
Tried that and nope
[*]Enon - Today at 12:25 PM
:frowning:
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:25 PM
The drum is not covered that way and sounds bad as well. lol
[img]http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/WIkE6tdS[/img]
I made this but its optional tbh
[*]Enon - Today at 12:26 PM
that seems fine
if moa change like that
it would be fixed?(edited)
solved*
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:27 PM
Its in the kiai so it can be a little bit harder.
But it definitely sounds better that way
Anyway, lets see the next one
[*]Enon - Today at 12:28 PM
ok
adding a circle at 04:44:532 - here wouldn't make sense?
because it seems fine for me
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:29 PM
That works as well
[*]Enon - Today at 12:29 PM
ok
i will tell it and you suggested moa
just wating the next one ~_~
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:30 PM
00:03:803 (2) - move this to the next 1/16 tick
Where my timestamp is.
00:01:251 (1,2) - I would move these 1/16 later as well
I managed 1ms that way. lol
But it really hard to guess the right timing for those
[*]Enon - Today at 12:35 PM
D:
[img]https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6629937[/img]
btw is it you meant ?
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:35 PM
Yap
[*]Enon - Today at 12:36 PM
00:02:084 (3,4) - these were fine?
oh
nvm
XDXDXDDX
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:37 PM
4 could be moved but sounds much better this way
[*]Enon - Today at 12:37 PM
current one is better? or
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:37 PM
Yap
Don't move
[*]Enon - Today at 12:37 PM
LOL ok.
that's all i guess
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:39 PM
04:57:084 (3) - As for this the repeat not quite works(edited)
[*]Enon - Today at 12:39 PM
oh
yeah
that was left
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:40 PM
Yea, but ends on nothing. :c
[img]http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/XXEVBmqj[/img]
Again optional
[*]Enon - Today at 12:42 PM
1/16 streams are evil tbh
xd
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:43 PM
They are just 1/4s on ~240(edited)
And on that they are fine? :D
Ok, nvm
I can't 300 them
[*]Enon - Today at 12:45 PM
zzzzzzzzzz
[img]https://puu.sh/sqFEd/310eb01516.png[/img]
how about this
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:45 PM
Move the second slider's tail 1/16 back and that is how I did. :P
Grey tick has stronger sound(edited)
[*]Enon - Today at 12:46 PM
i see
[*]Kurokami - Today at 12:46 PM
I will kill the artist
or composer
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I don't get the bolded sentence at all. It is out of context and irrelevant. Timing matters no matter which mode you play. Just quessing which tick was intented is not a wise choice because everyone hear those sounds differently. One might go for white-red ticks while someone else might want to play them as grey. One of them will end up with some frustrating 100. Well, its up to you guys.Bonsai wrote:
There is only one diff in this set, and those notes are mapped as a circle, meaning that what the player hears depends entirely on when they click it, not what it's snapped to (we don't care about converts bc converts are ew).
Kurokami wrote:
One might go for white-red ticks while someone else might want to play them as grey.
The reason why I mentioned converts is that in Standard, as I wrote, the auditive feedback you get from a clickable note ( -> circles and sliderheads) depends entirely on the player's input, and I do not believe that any player is able to visually recognize and read that a note is snapped 1/16 later than usual in a song with constant BPM, and even after having heard the song you wouldn't notice on full speed that it's 1/16 off as long as there is no auditive feedback of how the note is snapped, which you would only get from either slidertails or CtB-converts.I wrote:
a difference of 1/16 isn't visually noticable/readable at all
BeomsanGloria Guard
04:42:917 (1) - 음... 그냥 제대로 쓰자는 말이 하고싶네요 - 블랭킷 수정했습니다Mir
04:02:709 (4) 간격 에러. - 강조를 위해 일부러 간격을 두었습니다.
04:02:917 (1,3) ? aaaaaa overlap isn’t good ;w; Could try https://puu.sh/sgQzu/4e706aa967.png but that 04:03:542 (2) ? is close as hell. Idk about this part tbh - i don't want fix it because i love overlaped like that sry
04:05:417 (3,4,5,6) ? um pls why circles? 04:05:417 (3,5) ? sliders on these would fit waaaay better. - i fixed it circles 3,4 changed slider
04:40:417 (2,3) ? nazi blanket, head is too far ;w; - in my eyes that blanket is right
04:42:501 (4,5,1) ? HOYL BLANKETS OMG ASDSADSd - fixed it thx!
thanksBonsai wrote:
I'm sure the composer of this song didn't think "ah and here the vocalist sings a 1/16-note!" ^^ LOL, it was really impressive.
- 01:05:209 (2,3) - When the map is built around following vocals so strongly all the time, leaving out strong holding vocals like the one between these two objects feels very to me. Musically, the whole previous line builds up to the note at 01:06:042 or 01:06:251 - (to me it sounds like the vocalist actually changes pitch there), but the start of the note is not emphasized at all by landing on the tail of a reverse-slider, and the holding note itself isn't mapped at all either 04:22:501 - It's also applied on my part. I fixed that is same to startrick's part.
- 01:29:167 - Why is this note skipped? It would make sense to me if it were to transition to a rhythm that focuses less on vocals and more on instrumentals, like at 01:27:501 (3,1) -, but all following objects are 100% following the vocals why leaving out instrumentals along the way, so that doesn't make much sense to me ok, i changed the first slider to 1/2 so, 01:29:167 - here isn't ignored more.
i don't think that's necessary to do.Kibbleru wrote:
i think the easier fix is just to get somebody to edit your mp3. as long as u can pinpoint the problems, it should be easy for whoever can do it (meyrink, pishifat, monstrata)
Yuii- wrote:
hold if bonsai doesn't bubble
Bonsai wrote:
I'm just listing a few examples here as I haven't looked through the entire map / don't plan on checking it
03:53:751 (3,4,5,6) - too many clickable notes when this is super calm, would consider something different, pace of the song is ruined by all these notes
- I think that pattern is have not problem cause i want emphasis vocal sound and i used many circles only in there and 03:56:251 (1,2,3) - there
if i use slider in there it become to boring rhythm
04:38:334 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm seems weird during these section. personally i wouldn't omit something so important like 04:38:751 - nor
mapping 04:38:542 (3,4) - as simiar objects (same slider shapes) when they are completely different (or should be) according to the music,
what about http://i.imgur.com/HJz1auV.jpg instead?
- i changed that rhythm thx!
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thank youYuii- wrote:
hello! i've been clearing other reqs :d sorry sorry sorry
hi enon!
K i A i
00:01:251 - 00:15:834 - hitsounds are completely inaudible here, you'll have to bump the volume a little bit to make it rankable i increased volume overall
03:33:542 (2,3) - i'm not entirely sure if it's unrankable, but it does look pretty bad if you ask me, could you ctlr+g the placement of (2)? i also not sure if it's unrankable. but i would keep it if it isn't since the flow is really nice to follow the song.
Reol
00:19:376 (3,1) - 00:22:709 (4,1) - any reason for them to be so inconsistent? they are litearlly the same that seem different thing for me though.. because 00:22:709 (4,1) - here is like starting a new part? but, 00:19:376 (3,1) - here is just like contiune the current part... i don't know how to explain this.
00:28:334 (2) - would be nice if you would move this further in order to achieve a special effect with the sliderpoints. current pattern has only 1 point from 00:27:084 (1) - to (2), so moving it to x100 y296 would be nice: http://i.imgur.com/VfXrkQr.jpg
i would also probably add hitsounds to 00:27:084 (1,2,3,4) - because the violin is p audible right there, and there's no kind of feedback right now ok i added some whistle and clap there.
03:16:251 (1) - perfect case to make a jump and you placed it on 03:16:459 (2) - that's sad well there are many way to emphasize song, not making jump there is also make sense imo.. 01:49:584 (1) - also didn't try to make jump
03:20:209 (2) - correct me if i'm wrong, but isn't this the only note stacked under a slider? if yes, then consider unstack could i hear the reason? because it's absolutely fine for me.
03:22:501 (4,5,1) - vs 03:24:167 (2,3,1) - w, what are you talking about...?
03:50:417 (1,2,1,2) - there's no feedback here, unfortunately, you'll have to add some more volume as i answered at above, overall voulum was increased.
Enon
00:47:605 (2) - p sure this should be snapped to 1/6 instead of the current placement. also extending it until 00:47:917 - would make more sense because vocals are there still aaaand there is a very audible hit fixed
02:44:584 (4) - soft-whistle here too? or a hitsound, something to add there please!! added!
C u r i
02:26:251 (1) - wouldn't a soft-whistle be more appropriate for the piano hit instead of the clap? yeah, i think so.
02:34:584 (1) - how come there's no hitosund at all here? ooops
Leaf
04:57:084 (3) - sohuld be 1/6 and 04:57:501 (4) - 1/32... although 1/32 isn't a thing in the editor, so you'll probably have to finish it on the 1/6 as well for consistency with the previous slider fixed