Ogura Yui - Honey Come!! (TV size) · forum

From your own modding queue

General:
Use the same kiai time on every difficulty. Talking to you, Celsius and elNess.

Insane:
00:15:596(7,8) - Stack with 00:14:944(5)
00:39:401(5,6) - I think ctrl+g would make it flow better.
00:48:147(5) - I see you're trying to blanket the note in the middle but it doesnt look that good atm. But move it down to x:348 y:272 and blanket. Looks better ^^
01:07:770(5,6,7) - Maybe I'm just nazi now but wouldn't it be better if you increased the spacing? It is kiai time after all.

Celsius Hard:
AR8?
00:23:096(3) - Copy and paste 00:23:423(2) and ctrl+h ctrl+g and move it to place.
01:21:466(1) - You could've done something nice with this slider like you did to 01:22:607(2)

Cant really mod normal or easy. xD
Overall the difficulties are well made and I expect a bubble soon enough. ^^

Tenseki

803 posts

Joined November 2013

Tenseki 2015-07-04T14:15:33+00:00

hi~ m4m~

[General]
Make a same KIAI timing and Check Widescreen Support on Design toggles with ALL diffs

[Easy]
First, im not good at Easy mod but i try
00:20:162 (3,1) - not recommend overlapping on Easy diff

Should fix please
00:36:466 (2,3) - ^
01:08:423 (1,3) - ^
01:14:944 (4,1) -

[eINess' Normal]
Fine

[Celsus's Hard]
00:49:836 (4) - looks little odd shape with flow
everythings are fine for me except for which

[Insane]
00:10:705 - add one cirlce cuz i can hear sound
00:12:010 (6,1) - i feel strange about patterns. how about this?

SPOILER

00:14:781 (4,5) - ^, ctrl+g for pattern?
00:43:966 (4) - nc for highlight
01:04:754 (3,4) - i think this patterns should be changed to 1/2 of two circles
01:19:999 (5) - nc for consistence
01:22:118 (3) - overlap is not fit as well on this time
01:26:357 - add one slider? i can hear guitar sound

[wkyik's insane]
00:07:770 (2) - nc for distinction
00:17:064 (2,3) - ctrl+g for feeling jumpy like this 00:17:553 (1,2,3) -
00:20:732 (3) - i can hear emphasize thing like drum-kick. so add whislte?
00:26:031 (4) - add whislte on head? and i can hear 00:26:194 (5) 's head too
00:31:086 (3) - ctrl+g? for flow
01:06:466 (3) - blanket?
01:18:042 (3) - swap nc 01:18:857 (1) with 01:19:183 (2) cuz rhythms change on 01:19:020

That's all. I hope these helpful
GL~

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-04T14:49:26+00:00

Thanks for the mod guys, Fixed everything on my insane, I really think the overlaps on easy are fine imo o.o/

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2015-07-04T15:07:44+00:00

Pending already? o.o
That was fast lol XD

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-07-04T15:32:43+00:00

DavidEd wrote:
From your own modding queue

General:
Use the same kiai time on every difficulty. Talking to you, Celsius and elNess. I want to keep kiai on my diff because it reallt fit the song there imo , inconsistent kiai between gd is k

Celsius Hard:
AR8? maybe ? let me think about it
00:23:096(3) - Copy and paste 00:23:423(2) and ctrl+h ctrl+g and move it to place. nah , current pattern pretty much fit the song
01:21:466(1) - You could've done something nice with this slider like you did to 01:22:607(2) circular flow looks cool for this part xD

Cant really mod normal or easy. xD
Overall the difficulties are well made and I expect a bubble soon enough. ^^

Tenseki wrote:
[notice]hi~ m4m~

[General]
Make a same KIAI timing and Check Widescreen Support on Design toggles with ALL diffs inconsistent kiai betwwen gd is fine

[Celsus's Hard]
00:49:836 (4) - looks little odd shape with flow mmm this beat kinda fit upward flow , I don't want to use straight tho since it make pattern a bit not instresting so curve is best option here
everythings are fine for me except for which

That's all. I hope these helpful
GL~

thanks for the mods

didn't fix anything.......orz

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-07-04T17:27:44+00:00

Tenseki wrote:
[wkyik's insane]
00:07:770 (2) - nc for distinction i think it's fine
00:17:064 (2,3) - ctrl+g for feeling jumpy like this 00:17:553 (1,2,3) - i want this flow
00:20:732 (3) - i can hear emphasize thing like drum-kick. so add whislte? add drum-clap
00:26:031 (4) - add whislte on head? and i can hear 00:26:194 (5) 's head too
00:31:086 (3) - ctrl+g? for flow flow is fine imo
01:06:466 (3) - blanket?
01:18:042 (3) - swap nc 01:18:857 (1) with 01:19:183 (2) cuz rhythms change on 01:19:020 i think fine too[/notice]

That's all. I hope these helpful
GL~

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Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-04T17:34:40+00:00

updated and fixed the hp drain on my diff =3=/

Exa

445 posts

Joined January 2015

Exa 2015-07-04T18:42:36+00:00

[Easy]

00:09:727 (5) - You can easily map the beat which you are skipping. Make this into Slider + Note.
00:20:162 (3,1) - Not a big issue but try finding a way to avoid the overlap.
00:43:477 - End the slider here. It's end is mapping nothing.
00:45:596 (2,3) - These 2 are not perfectly symmetrical.
00:56:683 (3,1) - It will relatively easy to find a way around this overlap.
01:05:814 (1,2) - The fake blanket is imperfect.

[eINess' Normal]

- I feel like the SV is a bit high.
00:05:162 (2,3,1) - This might be too confusing for new players. It looks too cramped.
00:39:727 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same especially when this happens 2 times in a row. It gets too hard too quickly.
00:51:466 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,1) - These are not perfectly symmetrical.
01:15:107 - Map this. It's a strong vocalic beat.
01:16:738- Maybe try mapping this too.
01:17:716 - And this.
01:23:423 (2,3,1) - I seriously suggest you find another pattern.

[Celsius' Hard]

00:09:075 (3,4) - You can blanket those.
00:38:912 (3,4,5) - Try making using a symmetrical pattern here, use (3,4) as reference for how (5) should be.
01:19:020 - Start spinner here?

[Insane]

00:02:879 (8,1) - I find this to be to big of a jump which should not be included in the introductory flow. I suggest moving (8) somewhere around (288,280).
00:07:770 (7,1) - There is an audio sample that can be heard between these 2 objects, keeping the cursor still during that seems awkward.
00:24:564 (2,3,4,5) - I can see readability problems popping up here.
00:34:183 (3,3) - Try forming a fake blanket.
00:49:836 (8,9,1) - I like how you dealt with this though.
01:02:879 (4) - I would move that on the right instead of left in order to increase tension for the upcoming beat.
01:11:031 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
01:21:466 (1,3) - Y u overlap. It doesn't look bad, but it's unnecessary.

[wkyik's Insane]

00:03:531 (2) - I would move that around (284,140). But they way it's mapped right now seems fitting too.
00:33:042 (4,1) - Don't stack those, move the 1/4 slider a bit up. (Aesthetics)
00:55:053 (2,3,1) - Try making the note flow symmetrical to the slider.
00:58:477 (3,4) - Too big, doesn't play comfortably nice for someone of this map's level.
01:00:270 (7,1) - Bad looking overlap.
01:06:303 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket.
01:26:031 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket.
01:27:988 (1) - Handicapped slider XD.

[General]

- Check tags on all diffs and make sure they are the same.
- Moar combo colors?
- Why am I loving wkyik's Insane?

Last edited by Exa 2015-07-05T13:39:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Suimya

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Suimya 2015-07-04T18:55:45+00:00

Thanks for modding Exa, fixed mostly everything on easy.

and only fixed the nazi stuff on my Insane since, i meant to those stuff on my insane

so yeah i'll just keep it as it for now =w=

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-07-04T19:17:02+00:00

Exa wrote:
[eINess' Normal]

- I feel like the SV is a bit high.
00:05:162 (2,3,1) - This might be too confusing for new players. It looks too cramped. // but how make better here? idk what's better then now.
00:39:727 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same especially when this happens 2 times in a row. It gets too hard too quickly. // save above
00:51:466 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,1) - These are not perfectly symmetrical.
01:15:107 - Map this. It's a strong vocalic beat. // looks good enough
01:16:738- Maybe try mapping this too. // ^
01:17:716 - And this. // ^
01:23:423 (2,3,1) - I seriously suggest you find another pattern. // have any idea?

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thanks mod~

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-04T19:19:47+00:00

updated <3

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-07-04T21:31:40+00:00

hiya :3/

[Easy]

01:16:249 (1,2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/iNhgb/a8ebb51b84.png so you'll avoid the 3/2 gap and make the downbeat clickable :3
01:26:683 (1) - you forgot the finish, baka

[eINess' Normal]

00:07:118 (3) - NC to keep consistency

[Celsius' Hard]

00:14:292 (3) - remove finish
00:14:781 (1) - finish on head
00:33:694 (2) - normal whistle on purpose?

everything else is cool :3

good luck o/

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2015-07-04T22:17:22+00:00

M4M from your queue (?) :

wkyik's Insane

00:07:770 (2) - NC here to be consistent with the NC placements of 00:05:814 (1) - and 00:06:466 (1) - ?
00:11:031 (1,2,3,4) - I think it looks weird, 4 is stacking but 3 isn't.
00:47:064 (6) - NC to be consistent with 00:44:455 (1) - .
00:57:499 (5) - Break into two circles, and NC?
01:16:738 (4) - I don't see why this is a 1/4 slider.
01:18:042 (3,4,5) - This is weird, starting the "honey come" on a slidertail, when you didn't do that anywhere else.
01:26:031 (2) - NC, similar to earlier reason?

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Insane

00:12:010 (6) - I'd like it if the vocal verse wasn't starting on a slidertail.
00:14:781 (4) - NC
00:20:651 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/iNobh/f3ed4f29e3.jpg looks nicer imo
00:22:607 (4,1) - Swap NC
00:22:770 (1,2,3,4) - The flow is a lot harsher here than normal. I think something like this would be better.
00:25:053 (5) - Again, not a fan of the vocal starting on a slidertail.
00:39:401 (5) - Off-centered.
00:41:031 (1,2,3,4) - Wouldn't it be better if this pattern were rearranged to be closer to 00:40:705 (4) - ?
00:50:488 (2) - ctrl+g, gives a nicer motion through 00:49:836 (8,9,1,2) - .
01:19:183 (2,3,4) - Seems like too large of a jump.

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Easy

00:35:814 (1,3) - Swap NC
00:38:423 (1,3) - Swap NC
01:12:336 (1,3) - Swap NC
01:21:466 (4) - NC?

Everything else seemed fine.
Good luck!

Suimya

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Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-04T23:00:40+00:00

Thanks for modding guys fixed mostly everything <3

but my Insane looks okay as it is, i don't think there any problem with jumps though, since it's Insane diff after all o.o

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-07-05T02:09:47+00:00

Exa wrote:
[Celsius' Hard]

00:09:075 (3,4) - You can blanket those. no, thanks I don't really feel like blanket
00:38:912 (3,4,5) - Try making using a symmetrical pattern here, use (3,4) as reference for how (5) should be. current pattern fit the song tho
01:19:020 - Start spinner here? start spinner on blue tick is fine xD

pkhg wrote:
[Celsius' Hard]

00:14:292 (3) - remove finish no , it sound good with the beat here
00:14:781 (1) - finish on head the beat not really that much sound like cymbal on something so I think finish might sound a bit weird
00:33:694 (2) - normal whistle on purpose? yea xD

everything else is cool :3

good luck o/

thanks for the mods guys

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-07-05T03:09:19+00:00

add NC thanks~

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-05T03:14:03+00:00

updated and added a video thanks to Meyrink =w=

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2015-07-05T10:23:29+00:00

fix hitsound and add Kiai time

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 44455
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Honey Come!! (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Honey♥Come!! (TV size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Kanto's Insane
Source:城下町のダンデライオン
Tags:Castle Town Dandelion Joukamachi no Dandelion TVsize ending Sekai Kawaiwkyik eINess CelsiusLK KantoKun
BeatmapID:732756
BeatmapSetID:330175

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-07-05T12:57:49+00:00

fixed all blanket and nc

5432543

osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Honey Come!! (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Honey♥Come!! (TV size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:城下町のダンデライオン
Tags:Castle Town Dandelion Joukamachi no Dandelion TVsize ending Sekai Kawaiwkyik eINess CelsiusLK KantoKun
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Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,912 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2015-07-05T13:23:36+00:00

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[general]

uhh you could like use more combocolors than 2, the bg you use has a nice variety of colors but for some reason i don't understand you only use 2
according to your source 大森祥子 (Oomori Shouko (?)) wrote the lyrics so u could credit them
blahblah 俊龍 (Shunryu (?)) composed it
blahblah 大久保薫 (Ookuba Kaoru (?)) did the editing
ya u could credit these people
also your bg contains uhhh numbers and i can't help but asking myself why is it like a character guess game or something, if they annoy you there's always a chance ringating could help you get rid of those on a background other than white

[Insane]
interesting symmetry based style

00:03:205 (1) - this is like the only more complex slidershape in the whole diff making me doubt your motives with it if everything else is the same shapes and rather simple i'm askinig myself what makes this point so special to deserve the only distinctly different slidershape in the whole map
00:37:444 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - it's a bit weird that these patterns are used to represent the exact same thing but one uses significantly higher spacing than the other one uhhh i have no idea how to address this though, if you think it's worth changing then you'll have to come up with something on your own
01:21:466 (1,2,3,4,1) - all i know is that this felt a bit faaar especially from 01:22:607 (4,1) - for a calmer part
01:05:162 (5) - uhh having the first syllable of the Honey Come in 01:05:325 - on a sliderend is a bit weird considering how it's an object one can click in basically all other instances, would consider to replace this slider with 2 circles
yea idk how to mod symmetries l0l
00:34:183 (3,1,2) - is 1/3 from 00:34:183 - to 00:34:510 - , i don't think mapping a 1/4 triplet actually fits

[Easy]

The only thing that really bugs me are repeat sliders like 00:20:162 (3) - 01:01:901 (3) - 01:13:640 (1) - because there you got the most obvious sounds on white ticks instead on 3/2 rhythms and the 3/2 sliders feel like you want to force variety or something into there but honestly there are several different choices that follow the song much better for
for 00:20:162 (3) - 2x 1/1 sliders would follow vocals better instead of the 3/2 repeat
01:01:901 (3) - a 2/1 slider and a circle would probably still be better, i can see you placed this one in order to avoid spamming a lot of 1/1 sliders after 01:00:596 (1,2) -
01:13:640 (1) - ok nvm this one follows vocals a derp on my end lol
00:22:770 (3) - 00:12:336 (3) - are weird for a different reason, your intention off following vocals is clear but this time 00:12:988 - vocals like this one 00:13:314 - and this one are stronger than the vocal on the red tick and you choose to ignore them in other places so i believe a 2/1 slider and a circle fit a bit better than the 3/2 slider in both cases
00:09:401 (4,1) - dunno this is not that noticeable ingame but it also seems very easy to avoid so why not avoid it
00:36:466 (5,1) - contrary to most things in this diff the movement you have to do in order to get from one slider to the other is not that smooth and that thing felt awkward when playing it, dunno you could try to not overlap them like this for the sake of a smoother movement or something
00:46:249 (3) - man this is not parallel with the previous 2 sliders also if you follow (2) all the way to the end the movement from 2 to 3 can really throw people off, if they don't they have figured out your map beforehand, but i will jsut go ahead and assume they don't since it threw me off a bit on my first play so they could also throw other people off, also the change to following vocals can be a bit deceiving here and you don't do it in 00:56:683 ya sorry no edit links because transparent
00:55:053 (4,2) - looked kinda weird to have the object reload in the same place but i guess since they have a different color it's less confusing so
01:08:423 (1) - oh my god my blanket ocd

[wkyik]
^what the fuck did i miss a meme

00:20:977 (5,6,7,8) - i wouldn't have split up this stream, but i guess what you have works
00:42:336 (1,2) - consider spacing these out because they are the most intense thing in that entire combo and having them stacked takes away a lot of pressure you could create in order to accentuate these sounds
00:57:499 (5,6) - would consider using 3 circles instead because you do that like every other time this vocal appears
00:34:346 (4) - since music here is 1/3 the thing that should have a whistle is actually in 00:34:401 - but since there's a sound on this 1/2 thing you can surely map it like this, just not with the whistle?

[CelsiusLK]
nice meme i think AR 7.5 fits the object density in this diff a bit better than AR 7.
you also have 4 normal-hitwhistle sounds in this whole diff in 00:33:694 (2) - 00:55:053 (3) - 01:05:488 (3) - 01:18:531 (3) - and considering the other hitsounds in all the sections they really sound out of place (i got a dq over hitsounds not fitting a song yesterday so u h h hm)

00:01:249 (3,4) - rhythm choice is a bit weird, since 00:00:597 (1,2) - follow the melody and there's a hold in it in 00:01:249 (3) - so i think doing http://puu.sh/iNRq9/ad358b927e.jpg would fit better
00:23:749 (4) - could be spaced a bit further because 00:23:423 (3) - is a jump already so going from jump to completely normalised spacing is less weird or something
00:24:727 (3,4) - 00:29:944 (2,3) - would crtl+g rhythm because vocals are like 00:22:118 (3,4) - and red tick slider felt weird there
00:31:901 (1) - i would tone down the sv of this in 2 steps instead of one because right now this one isn't that much longer than 00:31:575 (4) - so it might feel weird or be easy to misread, something like http://puu.sh/iNRFZ/d495cedde7.jpg would be more clear in that aspect i think
00:43:477 (1) - i think this would be a bit less forced if this slider ends on the red tick, there's also a weak sound there and i see no real point in extending it, if you have one, pls explain
nothing much to say about the kiai (and some parts of pre kiai) except that your jump usage seems really random and you should probably recheck it to make them a bit more consistent to give off a feeling of consistent spacing or something (i also got a dq for this thing once so i'll mention it)
01:22:607 (2) - i don't really understand what this slider follows but it doesn't play weirdly, just saying that it doesn't seem to make that much sense and may be pointed out multiple times until you're annoyed enough to change it

[eINess]

Your comboing looks really short how about halving the amount of ncs so you go with two measure combos, they will still make sense musically and not give you 2 object combos
00:06:466 (2,1,2,1) - shouldn't these also have finishes on their heads, i think they sound better that way
00:36:466 (2,3) - these 2 things overlapping each over briefly can easily be avoided so i see no reason why you shouldnt as it doesn't really look that nice
00:39:075 (2) - this feels very weird because 00:37:281 (2,3,1) - followed vocals and this one just ignores them, doing something like http://puu.sh/iNQXN/5ed78049be.jpg is easier to expect
00:59:781 (2,3) - i think doing http://puu.sh/iNR2i/ce1604dec7.jpg this rhythm will follow vocals better, seeing how you mostly follow vocals anyway you might want to actually do this dunno

[KantoKun]
HP+1, OD+.5 would be easily possible given how the other insane is HP6.5 and WKYIK's is also hp7
Not having Kiai seems a bit odd since all other diffs have itl so i'd encourage you to set one as well since the song clearly has a chorus but that's your choice and noone except the qat can force you to set one

00:00:923 (2) - i think this would be a bit smoother to play if spacing between those 3 objects was a bit more even and the easiest way to do that is moving 2 a bit down and to the right or something
00:15:270 (2) - i think spacing here should be bigger because 00:14:292 (3,4) - spacing there was used to accentuate that snare and this one is also a snare just after so you'd expect it to have some sort of jump as well idk
00:33:694 (2) - i don't get why this one is extended, you could just follow the vocal like most of the rest of this section does and end it in 00:34:020 - .-.
00:34:999 (2) - dunno could have a whistle also lol everything i mentioned up until now was a 2 (might check if you missed any other whistles in this section or if you want to add more, i think the song allows for it)
00:38:423 (1) - 00:39:727 (1) - at points like this spacing could be bigger in order to accentuate the finishes better, probably applies to other stuff in the diff as well but mentioning every instance is useless if you don't want to change this, so if you want to go over this whole diff again and look for strong cymbals with low spacing and maybe increase it there
00:45:433 (2,3,4) - i don't really get this rhythm choice because most of the other stuff is following instruments and the instruments here are dominant on white ticks and not on red ones, also the vocals are dominant on 00:45:923 - this one so i don't really get the sliderend here so probably http://puu.sh/iNSPb/1817452cba.jpg would fit better 00:58:477 (2,3,4) - something like this works as well
01:28:477 (2) - i think placing this a bit more to the bottom and left like http://puu.sh/iNSVw/8ad3f06dc1.jpg would make for a better dropoff but that may just be me

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-05T14:19:45+00:00

Thanks for the mod Oko <3

Fixed everything on it on my diffs and updated both diffs as well =w=/

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-07-05T14:38:56+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
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[CelsiusLK]
nice meme i think AR 7.5 fits the object density in this diff a bit better than AR 7. sound good kk
you also have 4 normal-hitwhistle sounds in this whole diff in 00:33:694 (2) - 00:55:053 (3) - 01:05:488 (3) - 01:18:531 (3) - and considering the other hitsounds in all the sections they really sound out of place (i got a dq over hitsounds not fitting a song yesterday so u h h hm) yea I have been thinking about that for a bit and come to conclusion that I should change it
00:01:249 (3,4) - rhythm choice is a bit weird, since 00:00:597 (1,2) - follow the melody and there's a hold in it in 00:01:249 (3) - so i think doing http://puu.sh/iNRq9/ad358b927e.jpg would fit better I want to emphasis the beat here 00:01:412 - tho so I prefer my current rhythm
00:23:749 (4) - could be spaced a bit further because 00:23:423 (3) - is a jump already so going from jump to completely normalised spacing is less weird or something ye
00:24:727 (3,4) - 00:29:944 (2,3) - would crtl+g rhythm because vocals are like 00:22:118 (3,4) - and red tick slider felt weird there ok
00:31:901 (1) - i would tone down the sv of this in 2 steps instead of one because right now this one isn't that much longer than 00:31:575 (4) - so it might feel weird or be easy to misread, something like http://puu.sh/iNRFZ/d495cedde7.jpg would be more clear in that aspect i think o tru kk
00:43:477 (1) - i think this would be a bit less forced if this slider ends on the red tick, there's also a weak sound there and i see no real point in extending it, if you have one, pls explain the extending slider there is used to emphasis the crash on white tick next to it I can still hear a little beat on 1/4 tho but I can change this if it really need to change lol
nothing much to say about the kiai (and some parts of pre kiai) except that your jump usage seems really random and you should probably recheck it to make them a bit more consistent to give off a feeling of consistent spacing or something (i also got a dq for this thing once so i'll mention it) uhh I have been making hard like this for some times tho but w/e I will try to fix some jumps lol
01:22:607 (2) - i don't really understand what this slider follows but it doesn't play weirdly, just saying that it doesn't seem to make that much sense and may be pointed out multiple times until you're annoyed enough to change it I want the rhythm thing here to be pretty simple so I just use one long slider here lol also I feel the beat here pretty feel good with the holding effect so yea,start at white tick sound better too
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thanks for the mod oko!

sr+0.2 , gh

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~~@sekai-nyan if you fix the general thing fix it for my diff again ;w; becuase ^ this one doesn't have the general thing fixed lolololol~~ nvm I see you just added tags so ok lol

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-07-05T16:49:25+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
[wkyik]
^what the fuck did i miss a meme lol
00:20:977 (5,6,7,8) - i wouldn't have split up this stream, but i guess what you have works becuase i think three triple will more good for play
00:42:336 (1,2) - consider spacing these out because they are the most intense thing in that entire combo and having them stacked takes away a lot of pressure you could create in order to accentuate these sounds imo stack will more fun
00:57:499 (5,6) - would consider using 3 circles instead because you do that like every other time this vocal appears
00:34:346 (4) - since music here is 1/3 the thing that should have a whistle is actually in 00:34:401 - but since there's a sound on this 1/2 thing you can surely map it like this, just not with the whistle? delete that note

thanks for mod!
http://puu.sh/iO3BX/e6a2f32e70.rar
add a new hitnormal

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-05T16:52:07+00:00

updated!

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-07-05T17:09:57+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
u
wanted

[eINess]
Your comboing looks really short how about halving the amount of ncs so you go with two measure combos, they will still make sense musically and not give you 2 object combos // no, I want keep 4/4 combo coz I don't want to over 4 combo. that's make hard to drain HP.
00:06:466 (2,1,2,1) - shouldn't these also have finishes on their heads, i think they sound better that way
00:36:466 (2,3) - these 2 things overlapping each over briefly can easily be avoided so i see no reason why you shouldnt as it doesn't really look that nice
00:39:075 (2) - this feels very weird because 00:37:281 (2,3,1) - followed vocals and this one just ignores them, doing something like http://puu.sh/iNQXN/5ed78049be.jpg is easier to expect // use NC so It will be able to see change parttern. and your rhythem is awkward to me Q^Q
00:59:781 (2,3) - i think doing http://puu.sh/iNR2i/ce1604dec7.jpg this rhythm will follow vocals better, seeing how you mostly follow vocals anyway you might want to actually do this dunno // I want to follow electronic sound

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thanks mod~

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-05T17:25:43+00:00

updated eINess' diff o3o/

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-07-05T19:38:27+00:00

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Hi! Your map is pretty neat and clean. I don't have anything to complain about you. Keep mapping. Kudosu please. okno. xDDD

Easy

00:09:401 (4) NC, because NC consistency... or were you following the vocals here?
00:53:749 (2) Move this a bit to up because it almost overlap this slider 00:51:466 (3) o3o
00:56:683 (3,1) This overlap doesn't look that bad, but I'd rather suggest to make the (3) more lineal. o.o
01:04:183 (2,4) I don't know... shouldn't these note be in the same X axis? Like Ctrl+H this 01:04:183 (2) ?
01:24:075 (1) Make it more symmetric, I guess? o.o

eINess' Normal

I didn't find anything wrong with this diff. Just take care of the tags same as hard

Sorry for not modding the harder diffs. I just suck at it.

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Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

Suimya 2015-07-05T20:44:02+00:00

Thanks for modding :3

Fixed most of the stuff on easy =w=/

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2015-07-06T08:06:46+00:00

omfg sekai so fast =3=/

where'd you watch this show? i can't find english subs anywhere!!

KantoKun

1,114 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2015-07-06T12:44:52+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
[KantoKun]
HP+1, OD+.5 would be easily possible given how the other insane is HP6.5 and WKYIK's is also hp7 OK
Not having Kiai seems a bit odd since all other diffs have itl so i'd encourage you to set one as well since the song clearly has a chorus but that's your choice and noone except the qat can force you to set one i have fixed this already
00:00:923 (2) - i think this would be a bit smoother to play if spacing between those 3 objects was a bit more even and the easiest way to do that is moving 2 a bit down and to the right or something OK
00:15:270 (2) - i think spacing here should be bigger because 00:14:292 (3,4) - spacing there was used to accentuate that snare and this one is also a snare just after so you'd expect it to have some sort of jump as well idk idk how to fix it too!! , i just want to make triangle pattern with 00:15:270 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
00:33:694 (2) - i don't get why this one is extended, you could just follow the vocal like most of the rest of this section does and end it in 00:34:020 -.- OK haha.
00:34:999 (2) - dunno could have a whistle also lol everything i mentioned up until now was a 2 (might check if you missed any other whistles in this section or if you want to add more, i think the song allows for it) OK , ad more , many more www
00:38:423 (1) - 00:39:727 (1) - at points like this spacing could be bigger in order to accentuate the finishes better, probably applies to other stuff in the diff as well but mentioning every instance is useless if you don't want to change this, so if you want to go over this whole diff again and look for strong cymbals with low spacing and maybe increase it there k don't fix this, idk what pattern it could be if i change
00:45:433 (2,3,4) - i don't really get this rhythm choice because most of the other stuff is following instruments and the instruments here are dominant on white ticks and not on red ones, also the vocals are dominant on 00:45:923 - this one so i don't really get the sliderend here so probably http://puu.sh/iNSPb/1817452cba.jpg would fit better 00:58:477 (2,3,4) - something like this works as well okay fixed
01:28:477 (2) - i think placing this a bit more to the bottom and left like http://puu.sh/iNSVw/8ad3f06dc1.jpg would make for a better dropoff but that may just be me i want to take it in the center of triangle

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Suimya

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Suimya 2015-07-06T13:30:40+00:00

updated, Kanto's Insane =w=/

@Desu Gun: I totally thought the subs are out, but it seems only raws are out, maybe watch it raw? it's only way xD

Meyrink

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Meyrink 2015-07-06T21:12:27+00:00

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General

Tags in Easy diff are diffirent from other diffs ! also remove "TVsize " and "sekai" you don't need them since they're already in song title and creator's username
Then add ハニカム to tags, it's "honey come" in japanese ! album title http://puu.sh/iPbMW/8ed01e627f.png
try to add some moe combo colors ;w;

Easy

00:20:814 (4) - imo u can move this sliiightly left keeping DS ! it's almost touching 00:20:162 (3) -
00:22:444 (2,1) - Stack better ?
00:31:901 (1,2) - Blan.... , orz i can't say it
00:34:510 (3) - NC ? the previous 2 sliders are pretty 2 measures ! so it's better to nc here
00:47:064 (4) - idk why this rhytm feels wierd lol ! imo would be better if you did 00:46:249 (3) - reversed ! so it will end at 00:47:227 - then you can map 00:47:553 - ! like http://puu.sh/iPwDS/28513cfdd7.png for example
01:11:031 (1,2) - imo better if you CTRL+G rhythm here ! so like that the slider will follow vocals
Other thing got my attention is 00:12:336 (3,3) - ! idk about them they don't feel in place ! feels kinda off

eINess' Normal

Combos are really short ! would be much better if you do NC every measure or 2 in case of slow part ! this for example ! 00:22:607 (1) - an NC at red Tick is wrong ! but in other side there's these ! 00:17:553 (1,1) - they looks good with NC ! ! so just try to remove any nc u did in red tick imo
00:52:770 (1,2) - blankuu can be better :v
01:14:944 (1) - ! instead of this curve ! try to do same as 01:17:553 (1) - ! or u can just copy it and CTRL H & J
01:20:162 (1) - slider head ! Remove Finish , keep just whistle !
01:22:770 (1) - ^ ! cuz that part is basically like 00:01:901 - and there's no cymbal in the song that allows soft finish usage

Celsius' Hard

00:01:412 (4) - this slider starts on nothing but continuous sound ! i suggest to turn that to extended slide start from 00:01:249 - to 00:01:738 - ! Or CTRL+G Rhythm ! Slider First then Circle ! i think it's better
00:10:053 (2) - CTRL + G ? idk looks good
00:21:385 - can u map this ? ;_; ! that sound there is co ool
00:43:477 - the low sv imo should start 00:43:966 - not 00:43:477 -
Then 00:43:477 (1,2) - Switch nc ! remove nc 00:43:477 (1) - and add 00:43:966 (2) -
01:27:988 (1,2) - Stack those ww

Insane

maybe for better spread u'll have to reduce AR a bit ! HOW ABOUT AR 8.9
00:10:705 - Why not mapped ? ;_;
00:52:770 (1) - Fix Stack plsssss ...
01:27:988 (8) - imo this one should be nc ! and remove from 01:28:477 (2) - ?
intresting style ! just be carefull from some 1/4 overmapped circles

Kanto's Insane

00:16:901 - & 00:18:205 - rip that sound in white tick !
00:18:531 (4) - this is kinda wierd for me since strong beat is in the end of slider ! , when it's a strong beat like that would be better if it's the start for slider or circle ! something clickable for emphasis just like 00:17:553 (1) - 00:20:162 (1) - .. ! so imo better to remake that one
00:42:336 (1,2) - isn't this so close ? that's a strong beat tho ! need to be more spaced i think
01:27:988 (1,2) - STACK 1!1!1!&!!! ?

wkyik's Insane

looks good or just me went lazy xD

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2015-07-07T01:16:02+00:00

Have a pantsu...umm...mean a mod *runs* o3o
[General]

EDIT: Meyrink already ninja'd me in most of the suggestions already XD
Just an observation, but you have many hitsound files that sounds the same. Only soft-hitclap2 and soft-hitclap5 plays differently. I'm guessing because you don't want to confuse the guest mappers. Regardless, it's still rankable as they all all used in the mapset o3o
soft-hitclap89 and soft-hitclap99 plays the same sound.
soft-hitwhistle5, soft-hitwhistle15, and soft-hitwhistle99 plays the same sound.
soft-hitclap and soft-hitclap15 plays the same sound.
What's with the troll patterns at the end of Celsius' Hard and Kanto's Insane difficulties? LMAO!
Also, what's with the huge AR boost between Normal - Hard - Insane? I mean, there's 6 difficulties lol. You could increase them more gradually like 5 -> 7 -> 8.5 -> 9 and so on o3o.

[Easy]

00:05:814 (1,2) - I'll probably make these sliders the same shape since both sliders are following the same beat o3o. In addition, I would remove reverse at 2 and rearrange the whole pattern similar to this. It helps capture the music better imo o3o:
SPOILER
00:26:683 (1) - I'll probably consider a different slider shape to improve flow here o3o. How about this one (see spoiler box). You could also use this slider shape at other parts of the map such as 00:46:249 (3) and so on (I swear this slider shape is like a flow life saver XD).
Image/Code
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220,312,26683,6,0,B|164:312|164:312|132:344|132:344|72:344,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:45:596 (2) - Maye filp this slider 90 degrees CCW for increased linear flow? o3o
SPOILER

[eINess' Normal]

No suggestions. Meyrink already point them out already LMAO. Excellent difficulty.

[Celsius' Hard]

00:00:597 (1) - 00:03:205 (1) - Why not add soft-finishes at the head of these sliders? There's a cymbal crash playing here o3o
00:05:080 (3) - Does this blue tick note even follow anything? XD
00:59:537 (2) - Same as 00:05:080 (3).
01:00:596 (1,2,3,4) - I would make the spacing even (preferably 1.3x) here for smoother flow o3o. I would also make the sliders at 01:01:249 (3,4) the same shape, but curved at the same fashion as the current pattern.

[Insane]

Nice flow patterns. I believe this is one of your best Insane diffs yet. Nya Nya~ ♥ The only thing at threw me off was the slider end stack triples such as 00:15:841 (5,6) and so on lol. Also, I prefer using AR 8.5 *runs* o3o

[Kanto's Insane]

Good map, but why CS4.3? It seems...kinda random lol. Plus, it's not even the hardest difficulty on the mapset. Also, disable Wide-screen Support o3o
00:38:423 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well....there was this pattern that threw me off. Whatever >.<

[wkyik's Insane]

Sadly, I can't pass this difficulty so I won't be able to judge this map correctly. Sorry!

That's all I got. Good luck to Sekai <3

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