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00:13:416 - ~ 00:39:795 - some patterns in this part are a bit awkward mostly
that factors like overemphasize e.g 00:16:209 - 00:17:036 - 00:22:829 - should be don to avoid overemphasis and monotone pattern usage for these
00:26:553 - 00:26:657 - swap this to emphasize the drum and avoid the monotone rhythm from the pattern, I saw many dk used in this part so its
00:33:174 - intense sound some here, add don
00:34:416 - same reason on 2nd point
00:37:105 - intense beat, kat
00:37:416 - 00:38:760 - recommended to add notes, this part seems awkward if spots that Ive pointed out are empty
00:40:105 - 00:40:726 - these has sounds but it looks overdone if compared with the sound level from the song, im fine with the part that start from 00:41:553 - here.
00:41:553 - ~ 00:46:002 - overemphasized colors in this part
suggestion for colors of patterns
00:41:553 - ddddk ddddk
00:43:209 - kdddk dkddk 00:44:864 - and same from here, 00:45:795 - and why this empty. should be added for consistency structures.
01:10:726 - could be don since its a weak sound if compaed with 01:07:416 - this
01:25:209 - theres alteration sound, kat this
01:34:519 - 01:36:174 - 01:37:829 - and 01:41:140 - 01:42:795 - ( 01:44:450 - except this, leave it as don will fine with the beat drum ) too avoid monotones, fix these with the point above
02:02:450 - 02:09:071 - change to kat, these points has high intense on guitar and on alteration vocals
02:14:450 - 02:17:760 - 02:21:071 - should be kddk, 2nd 4plet 1/6 as variation are enough imo. seems random if 1st 4plet 1/6 were varied
02:18:312 - kat this instead to have a kkkd in this 1/6 part
02:24:381 - 02:24:795 - the rests are just vocal and they sounded 1/4, so change these 4plet 1/6 to 3plet 1/4
03:28:519 - overemphasized and blocked up the alteration sounds, change it to don
04:18:381 - ~ 04:31:622 - in this part 04:19:002 - you can delete it and other similar notes, since its a weak sound level. so you can start full 2plet from 04:31:622 - here
04:45:795 - move to 04:45:691 - here and for similar notes, bcus thats important beat
04:50:450 - swap with 04:50:243 - , i dont see the reason if 04:50:450 - this kat and it breaks the consistency with previous similar notes
optional here 04:58:105 - change the sv to 1.1 yeah because
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9298881 at the next barlines
05:13:622 - don it since theres no something intense sound and its to make a difference with 05:12:381 - this stream
05:26:036 - don, the reason same as above
05:39:381 - 05:39:484 - swap, 05:41:036 - kat, to avoid monotones
05:52:519 - 05:52:622 - swap, I dont think something colors such kdkdk could be works at overall 2nd kiai bcus somehow it seems monotones
05:54:278 - 05:54:381 - same as above
06:04:312 - ~ 06:30:795 - undermapped? I'd say its a bit, could be improved more if you applied stuctures pattern e.g from 06:04:726 - here d k ddk d d then 06:06:174 - delete this and idk what suggestion more for this part, but well try to make a long 1/2 pattern. 06:17:553 - the 2nd part already fine but 06:18:381 - 06:19:209 - example these spots has beat and the melody you didnt mapped here, seems awkward to let them empty.
06:30:588 - delete, seems weird at 06:30:795 - the alteration part if kept that notes
06:30:795 - ~ 06:44:036 - somehow it looks really random sometimes, I assume if you follow the background stream sounds but well the structures 06:31:622 - ~ 06:33:898 - example and colors pattern at some longstreams are overemphasized or awkward at some places imo e.g 06:36:381 - ~ 06:37:622 - , 06:40:726 - ~ 06:42:588 -
I think its not ready yet, my points are like normal suggestion but its important imo especially at some last points. I pointed these all due the overall quality such strucutres, overemphasized, and monotones. I would to see this map get modded mores and need a bit reworking
you can call fruko back to recheck it if this map has been improved, find modders and do selfmod if possible, good luck