Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete- · forum

ChristieBell

Joined August 2013

ChristieBell 2015-07-30T01:00:44+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Suzuno's Insane

00:05:220 (4) - This slider's appearance could be improved by curving it more, so that it can blanket nicely with the slider just before it.

00:06:720 (7) - Stack the head of this slider onto (4)'s tail entirely, it's unevenly stacked as of right now, unless you were intending this.

00:08:220 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern would look much nicer if you had a similar pattern going on at 00:09:720 (1,2,3,4) It looks sort of bland having those 4 sliders all appear the same, it would improve the aesthetics.

00:13:095 (2) - Slant this slider the other way? That way, it flows into the upcoming stream more.

00:13:470 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think this stream would look better if you have going more vertically up instead of diagonally.

00:14:595 (2) - Position this note to form a more even triangle with (1) and (3)?

00:16:095 (7) - Why not blanket this more evenly with the head of (3) in this combo? It would look more neat.

00:16:657 (9) - Personally, I don't like the positioning of where this is currently placed. Try X:96/Y:48? I think this pattern emphasizes the sudden stop of music more for the upcoming note.

00:16:657 (3,5) - Stack both of these notes on the note at 00:16:470 (8)

00:17:595 (2) - Stack the head of this at the end of (8)'s tail in this combo.

00:18:532 (6) - Tidy the curve up on this slider a bit, it forms an uneven blanket with the (4)

00:20:220 (1,2) - Make both of these sliders curve the same? This would help improve the appearance of these sliders, and it could help improve the blanket slightly.

00:20:970 (3) - Try moving this to X:232/Y:120 to improve the appearance of this star-like shape pattern you have going on here.

00:22:470 (8,9,10) - You could try doing something similar to this pattern as I have mentioned in a pattern similar to this, just to emphasize the sudden stop of music more.

00:23:595 (2) - This reverse slider needs to end so that it faces the next slider. This makes it uncomfortable to play and just doesn't play right.

00:24:345 (2) - ^

00:25:470 (3) - This note is kind of awkwardly placed here, I'd place it closer because the distance is a little bit too far.

00:26:220 (1,2) - Blanket the head of (1) more evenly with (2).

00:27:345 (5) - X:236/Y:80 looks better with this note, because it fits nicely in between the 2 notes.

00:27:532 (6) - Curve this more so it can blanket nicely with the head of (1) and (4).

00:28:657 (9) - This looks nicer at X:208/Y:156. While I'm at this pattern, I would create a more equal triangle with (8,9,10).

00:29:970 (3,4,5) - I really don't know what I can suggest here, but I think you should re-map this segment. It looks scrunched up together and is awkward to play. If you decide the re-map this segment, make sure the (5) flows nicely towards the (6).

00:32:595 (2) - Stack the head of this onto the tail at 00:33:720 (1)

00:32:970 (3) - Curve this? It would flow nicely into the (4).

00:34:657 (4) - Possibly start a new combo here? I think it would fit in.

00:36:907 (1) - Adjust this reverse sliders so that it ends facing the next note.

00:40:470 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing with these notes feels random to me, why not try making some kind of symmetrical shape out of this?

00:41:595 (2) - Curve this to flow into the next note?

00:43:095 (6) I think the appearance of this plays better at X:132/Y:40

00:45:532 (4,6) - I'd make these identical to each other since the sliders at 00:48:532 (4,6) are identical.

00:54:532 (5,6) - Stack these the same way you have this 00:53:970 (3,4) because you could have an identical pattern going on here.

00:56:220 (4) - NC?

01:02:220 (1,2,3,4) - Have all of these sliders be the exact same shape, the pattern would look much nicer and not look random.

01:03:720 (5,6,7,8) - I would slightly adjust this pattern to be more even since it is a symmetrical pattern, the (8) looks uneven with the rest of this pattern.

01:05:220 (1) - This note is awkwardly positioned away from the slider making it flow weird. I'd find a better place for it.

01:08:970 (2) - CTRL + G? I think this would create a more interesting pattern to play.

01:10:095 (2) - ^ You could possibly do something similar here.

01:12:532 (8) - Place this directly in the middle between the 2 notes for a better appearance.

01:17:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nothing wrong with this pattern, however I would adjust a few things such as the positioning because it is sort of messy how it is placed, I would place a few notes in between other notes or stack some notes on others, it would improve the appearance of this pattern.

01:20:032 (4) - I think this note plays better at X:328/Y:308

01:21:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - Adjust this star pattern to appear more even.

01:22:657 (6) - Looks nicer at X:308/Y:320

01:24:157 (4) - This looks too close to 01:24:720 (1) making the blanket look weird, I would place that note so that it looks more in between 2 notes.

01:38:595 (5) - Eh, this reverse slider feels random to me. I would just make this a stream full of hitcircles instead.

01:39:157 (7) - Angle this more towards the next note.

01:48:345 (4) - Adjust this slider a bit so that it blankets more evenly.

01:50:595 (2) - Have this reverse slider end facing the next slider.

01:51:345 (2) - ^

01:52:470 (3) - Distance of this is questionable, I think it would play better if it was closer.

01:53:595 (2) - CTRL + G? It plays nicer this way.

01:56:220 (3,4,5) - Reduce this spacing a bit, it doesn't really sound too emphasized here.

02:01:095 (2,3) - Stack these the same way as in the previous patterns before this? Adjust the upcoming notes if you do.

02:02:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This segment of the stream looks a little bland, why not make a more interesting shape out of these?

02:11:032 (9) - Maybe NC this to indicate it as being the last note of the song?
You can further improve your map by going back and adjust some patterns to look more neater, it would really help the map a lot!

Good luck with this!

ty! a lot of mod!

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-07-30T01:45:44+00:00

Nice storyboard~

After testplay, i feel the main issue is the rhythm of your Insane diff. It seems like you just spam 1/2 in it, which is quite boring for me.

Would be back soon.

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-07-30T01:49:35+00:00

dekutai wrote:
Heeey! (Sorry for late, was too busy ;w;)
From m4m queue~ p/4372147

General
Every screenshot I make are ideas that can be grasp of your way! I will in any case forces you to do the same.
Extend the kiai time 01:27:720- to 01:29:220- no reason to cut here. The idea was to reestablish new kiai because of song. Continuing it as one kiai seems less of a "punch"
End the first Kiai time at 01:39:720- it's more comfortable while the part is slow after. Yes! I'll fix that
A lot of green lines which are unused in Manul's, FreeSong's diff must be removed. (imo)
Those are for dampening sound!

Insane
While Suzuno's Insane have OD:8 try to increase something here, like AR:9.1? or HP:6.2?
00:08:595 (2)- curve it a little bit so it have a better flow with next slider (3)? Those all have equal distance, should be fine for flow wise :/
01:15:626 (1)- There's no beat at this blue tick, don't know if it is a problem, anyway reduce spacing also from this jump, 0.20x maybe. This all right, but I'll see about this if I get more complain from modders haha
01:44:313 (2)- no beat at this blue tick, remove this plz, it follow the vocal but there's an important beat at previous white tick so feel free to remove it as it's overmapping. Removed
01:51:532 (7,8,1)- stack it properly :p Wow Haha
02:10:751 (7,8)- The spacing is too BIG, just reduce it please. Try this maybe? http://puu.sh/jhWqo/d7e6f64a26.jpg Currently one looks ok!

Nice mapset in overall !
All my wish to make this ranked!
Yataiii
Thanks!!

Hey, thanks for modding my map! I'll get back to your map soon!

Last edited by Sidetail 2015-07-30T18:42:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-07-30T03:02:24+00:00

dekutai wrote:
FreeSong's Hard
00:09:720 (5)- NC maybe? Fixed (fixed all the NCs issue below as well)
00:23:220 (1)- increase spacing maybe? while previous notes has 1.20x DS I think the spacing is fine ><
00:36:907 (5)- NC here or 00:37:095 (7)- ?
00:42:720 (5)- NC?
00:45:532 (6)- ^
00:48:532 (6)- same. Well, not gonna say that over and over, just think about.
00:57:532 (5)- maybe that form? http://puu.sh/jhUy6/1bda8247ee.jpg (before last tail x:444 y:132) uhmm. I will keep mine for now
01:44:032 (6)- stack it properly. fixed!

For green lines, refer to the Manul's Normal mod and remove all green lines which is unused. These green lines are for lowering down the volume ><

Thanks for your mod!!

mew ><

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
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Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749364
BeatmapSetID:329949

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YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-07-30T07:47:44+00:00

tatoe

osu file format v14

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Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Manul's Normal
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
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CrystilonZ

1,557 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2015-07-30T15:59:08+00:00

M4M from my queue !!
Sorry for lateness To be honest, I've forgotten this; don't kill me pls

[General]
As you have SB in your map, I think a single BG is enough.
Don't whistle the slider, whistle the head and the tail separately instead, because whistling the whole slider would cause osu! to add hitsound to the sliderslide.

[Easy]
Polish all of your long sliders such as:
00:02:220 (2) -
00:05:220 (3) -
01:05:220 (1,3) -
01:17:970 (2) -
etc.
By polising I mean: symmetrise. smoothen, blanket them

[Manul's Normal]
00:24:345 (3,4) - blanket
00:35:032 (1,2) - move 2 down a little bit to improve the flow
00:36:720 (1) - DS
00:38:220 (1,2) - DS
00:40:470 (5,6,1) - DS (keep it stable at 1.00x, no need to lower them at 1/2) etc.
01:12:720 (3,4) - I believe it's a 3/4
01:56:220 (1) - blanket with 01:55:470 (4) -
01:58:470 (5,1) - blanket fix

[FreeSong's Hard]
00:12:157 (4) - nc on this one or increase the spacing on 00:12:157 (4,5) -
00:20:220 (1,3) - weird overlap
00:22:845 (9,1) - fix that blanket
00:26:970 (4,6) - stack them?
00:31:845 (9,2) - weird overlap
00:35:595 (2,4) - make the tail of 2 right on 4's track
00:54:907 (7,8,9) - why the spacing between 8 and 9 is short ?
01:17:032 (1,1) - no, this is not Insane
01:46:095 (5,6,7) - doesn't fit. Besides, this is Hard

[Suzano's Insane]
01:17:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is nice, but the overlapping isn't
00:04:845 (3,4) - blanket them?
00:11:782 (8,1) - ^
00:26:220 (1,2) - ^
00:30:532 (6) - hp bar
00:31:282 (8,9) - blanket
00:32:220 (1,2,3) - Is there's a reason that the spacing doesn't equal?
00:38:595 (2,3,4) - ^
01:08:595 (1,2,3) - this flow weirdly, rotate them anticlockwise, not clockwise
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4) - and rotate them clockwise
01:12:532 (8) - put it in another spot
01:47:970 (3,4) - blanket

The other Insane is too high

Good luck !

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-07-30T19:16:38+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
M4M from my queue !!
Sorry for lateness To be honest, I've forgotten this; don't kill me pls

[General]
As you have SB in your map, I think a single BG is enough. No, I like the current theme. Each difficulty has different picture for first picture on SB. (It transitions well) I really like this.
Don't whistle the slider, whistle the head and the tail separately instead, because whistling the whole slider would cause osu! to add hitsound to the sliderslide. I am wondering which difficulty you are talking about :l I don't think I did that for my diff D:

[Easy]
Polish all of your long sliders such as:
00:02:220 (2) - Fixed!
00:05:220 (3) - Fixed!
01:05:220 (1,3) - Fixed!
01:17:970 (2) - Fixed!
etc.
By polising I mean: symmetrise. smoothen, blanket them

The other Insane is too high
Thanks anyways for looking at my map!

Good luck !

Thanks!

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-07-31T01:03:34+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
[FreeSong's Hard]
00:12:157 (4) - nc on this one or increase the spacing on 00:12:157 (4,5) - NC added
00:20:220 (1,3) - weird overlap I like the overlap ;_;
00:22:845 (9,1) - fix that blanket fixed!!
00:26:970 (4,6) - stack them? I will keep them for now qwq
00:31:845 (9,2) - weird overlap ^
00:35:595 (2,4) - make the tail of 2 right on 4's track ^
00:54:907 (7,8,9) - why the spacing between 8 and 9 is short ? I have two groups: 00:54:720 (6,7) - and 00:55:095 (8,9) - with same spacing. I think they fit here well ;w;
01:17:032 (1,1) - no, this is not Insane qwq I feel the music is pretty hype here. Moved it a little bit closer.
01:46:095 (5,6,7) - doesn't fit. Besides, this is Hard I think they are fine ><

Thanks for your mod!

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749364
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-07-31T02:54:18+00:00

i lost my mod last night...... it contains lots of suggestions on your Insane diff. Sorry......

Insane

00:03:720 (1,2) - Just a suggestion: I prefer 1/1 slider + a circle here rather than two 1/2 sliders. This could reduce the density of the rhythm here and become more fun.
00:04:470 (3) - (if you declined the previous one) move this to (372, 344) to make the flow more smooth.
00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - For me the distance of this part is questionable. Comparing with 00:08:220 (1,2,3,4) - , you reduced the distance and open Distance Snap. Why? The rhythm of these 2 parts are totally the same...... Consider reposition all the stuffs in this part.
00:15:532 (5,1,2) - if you are following instrument, change these stuffs into 2 sliders. That would fit the instrument sound better.
00:27:532 (5,1,2) - same as above
00:17:970 (3) - What about ctrl+g?
00:39:720 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like straight flow with long distance, usually awkward....
00:55:470 (4) - ctrl+g, for me it's much nicer...
01:02:782 (3) - what about curving this slider? to create a beautiful symmetry pattern with 01:02:220 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:04:845 (5) - what about this?
SPOILER
01:15:532 (8,1) - a normal 1/1 slider would be fine since there's no sense for this pattern and would be incorrectly read as circle + 1/1 slider
01:20:220 (1) - 01:23:220 (1) - 01:26:220 (1) - 01:29:219 (1) - 01:32:220 (1) - 01:33:532 (1) - 01:53:220 (1) - 01:56:220 (1) - 01:57:532 (1) - If i was you i'll use 1/1 in most of these points to avoid 1/2 spamming.
01:25:657 (4,5) - better not stack here. flow would be a little bit juggling.
01:36:720 (1) - what about ctrl+g?
01:39:720 (1) - 01:47:970 (5) - what about curving them to make symmetry patterns?
02:00:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no need to reduce the distance here.....
00:14:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable hitsound. Keep consistency with 00:20:220 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:11:313 (1) - slience the end of this spinner (5%). Don't worry, it's rankable.

Suzuno Kamduki

00:19:282 (8) - not a good idea using a 1/1 slider here.... since the slider body covers instrument sound at 00:19:470 -
00:32:220 (1,2,3) - lol, it looks weird for me..... throw away Distance Snap and try this?
SPOILER
00:38:970 (3,4) - similar to the previous one. for this kind of pattern i prefer better sense of looking instead of some useless DS.....
02:03:720 (9) - NC
02:11:313 (1) - slience the end of this spinner (5%)
Generally it's a really nice diff, but sometimes distance snap causes some untidy pattern..... just feel free to disable it in this case.

Freesongs

01:31:470 (8,9,10,11) - do you feel it's a bit too difficult to read as a Hard diff?
02:05:313 (1,1) - what about this? since spinner end has hitsound but start doesn't.
SPOILER
Nothing much to say.

YellowManul

As a Normal diff, are you sure the distance issue is not dqable?
SPOILER
For example:
1. 00:44:032 (5) - you can try to stack this with the next slider
2. 00:45:532 (3) - Feel free to keep *1.0 distance.
Also, sv=1.2 is a bit too fast....
Other things are fine for me.

Good luck~

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-07-31T06:03:39+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
i lost my mod last night...... it contains lots of suggestions on your Insane diff. Sorry...... :SSSSSS

Insane
00:03:720 (1,2) - Just a suggestion: I prefer 1/1 slider + a circle here rather than two 1/2 sliders. This could reduce the density of the rhythm here and become more fun. Modified!
00:04:470 (3) - (if you declined the previous one) move this to (372, 344) to make the flow more smooth.
00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - For me the distance of this part is questionable. Comparing with 00:08:220 (1,2,3,4) - , you reduced the distance and open Distance Snap. Why? The rhythm of these 2 parts are totally the same...... Consider reposition all the stuffs in this part. Modified!
00:15:532 (5,1,2) - if you are following instrument, change these stuffs into 2 sliders. That would fit the instrument sound better. Modified!
00:27:532 (5,1,2) - same as above ??
00:17:970 (3) - What about ctrl+g? Modified!
00:39:720 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like straight flow with long distance, usually awkward.... This is fine!
00:55:470 (4) - ctrl+g, for me it's much nicer... Modified!
01:02:782 (3) - what about curving this slider? to create a beautiful symmetry pattern with 01:02:220 (1,2,3,4,1) - Modified!
01:04:845 (5) - what about this?
SPOILER
Modified!
01:15:532 (8,1) - a normal 1/1 slider would be fine since there's no sense for this pattern and would be incorrectly read as circle + 1/1 slider Modified!
01:20:220 (1) - 01:23:220 (1) - 01:26:220 (1) - 01:29:219 (1) - 01:32:220 (1) - 01:33:532 (1) - 01:53:220 (1) - 01:56:220 (1) - 01:57:532 (1) - If i was you i'll use 1/1 in most of these points to avoid 1/2 spamming. 1/2 seems to be better for me though :S
01:25:657 (4,5) - better not stack here. flow would be a little bit juggling.
01:36:720 (1) - what about ctrl+g? No~
01:39:720 (1) - 01:47:970 (5) - what about curving them to make symmetry patterns? Modified!
02:00:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no need to reduce the distance here..... Modified!
00:14:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - Questionable hitsound. Keep consistency with 00:20:220 (1,2,3,4,5) - Modified!
02:11:313 (1) - slience the end of this spinner (5%). Don't worry, it's rankable. Modified!

Good luck~

Thanks!

Last edited by Sidetail 2015-07-31T09:23:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-07-31T08:43:23+00:00

wings of ds

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TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
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Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-08-02T02:28:39+00:00

Easy

SPOILER

00:23:220 (1,2) - Blanket >w<
00:50:220 (1,2) - ^
01:10:845 (4) - This Slider should start here, along with the rhythm of the music 01:11:220

Manul's Normal

SPOILER

It's great!

Sorry about this little mod, but it's all I can do. Sorry!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-02T03:00:27+00:00

Hoen wrote:
Easy
SPOILER
00:23:220 (1,2) - Blanket >w< moved tiny bit
00:50:220 (1,2) - ^ moved tiny bit
01:10:845 (4) - This Slider should start here, along with the rhythm of the music 01:11:220 fixed

Manul's Normal
SPOILER
It's great! Wow YellowManul so good a mapping

Sorry about this little mod, but it's all I can do. Sorry!

Thanks!!

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-08-03T00:17:46+00:00

Adol Christin wrote:
Freesongs
01:31:470 (8,9,10,11) - do you feel it's a bit too difficult to read as a Hard diff?
02:05:313 (1,1) - what about this? since spinner end has hitsound but start doesn't.
SPOILER
Nothing much to say.

All fixed!!

Thanks for the mod!! ;w;

nyan :3

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Kawada Mami
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749364
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"SB/1003_2DJ_01000.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB/1003_2DJ_01000.jpg",320,240
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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204,68,86220,6,0,B|192:184|192:184|152:224,1,167.999994873047,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,196,86782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,196,86876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,196,86970,2,0,P|104:192|156:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,87345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
124,376,87532,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,376,87626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,376,87720,6,0,P|116:332|128:264,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,248,88095,2,0,L|320:236,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,88470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,316,88657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,384,88845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,228,89032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,228,89126,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,228,89220,6,0,P|440:164|464:136,1,83.9999974365235,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,8,89595,2,0,P|364:44|369:85,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,89970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,72,90157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,172,90345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,168,90532,2,0,B|168:124|192:68|192:68|152:52|100:80,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,156,91095,2,0,P|88:216|120:260,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,276,91470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,312,91657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,256,91845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,356,92032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,316,92220,6,0,P|360:312|428:360,1,125.999996154785,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,341,92595,1,10,0:0:0:0:
400,240,92782,2,0,B|396:196|396:196|404:136,1,83.9999974365235,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,16,93157,2,0,B|480:60|480:60|472:120,1,83.9999974365235,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,101,93532,2,0,P|376:69|492:133,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,188,94095,2,0,P|264:160|244:120,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,156,94470,2,0,P|404:208|376:264,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,360,94845,2,0,P|313:296|392:244,1,125.999996154785,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,237,95220,6,0,B|500:240,1,83.9999974365235,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,362,95595,2,0,B|356:368|356:368|312:360,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,95970,2,0,P|252:256|292:316,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,376,96345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,280,96532,2,0,B|121:249|120:232|120:232|132:176|164:156|196:144|232:156,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,97095,2,0,P|292:128|268:76,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,52,97470,2,0,P|144:112|168:164,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,244,97845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
120,208,98032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,208,98220,6,0,L|72:236,3,41.9999987182618,6|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,268,98595,2,0,L|44:328,3,41.9999987182618,10|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,360,98970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,288,99157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,372,99345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
212,244,99532,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,244,99626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,244,99720,6,0,P|268:240|328:304,1,140,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,100282,1,6,0:0:0:0:
312,144,100657,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,144,101032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,144,101220,6,0,L|412:136,1,70,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,68,101595,2,0,P|424:120|464:216,2,140,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,24,102532,2,0,B|332:56|332:56|288:48|240:72|232:108,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,103095,2,0,B|220:252|220:252|248:296,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,103470,2,0,P|200:304|96:320,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,208,104032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
67,208,104220,6,0,B|72:216|68:240|68:240|44:264|32:296|40:340,2,140,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,136,105157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,136,105344,1,10,0:0:0:0:
120,136,105532,2,0,B|164:124|164:124|188:68|160:4,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,106095,2,0,P|296:64|368:44,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,20,106470,2,0,B|444:48|444:48|464:112,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,140,106845,2,0,P|436:196|456:252,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,280,107220,6,0,B|368:288|368:288|324:320,2,140,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,200,108157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,140,108345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
444,140,108532,2,0,P|388:148|276:136,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,76,109095,2,0,P|280:56|328:56,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,152,109470,2,0,B|160:116|160:116|160:60,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,44,109845,2,0,P|60:40|0:96,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,110407,5,2,0:0:0:0:
40,208,110595,2,0,B|40:248|40:248|16:272|16:316,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,348,110970,2,0,P|92:344|132:348,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,111345,2,0,P|236:344|256:260,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,248,111720,2,0,P|240:208|248:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,124,112095,2,0,L|420:116,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,112,112470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,204,112657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,112845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,252,112938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,252,113032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,164,113220,6,0,B|316:156|280:172|280:172|252:216,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,248,113595,2,0,P|196:256|128:240,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,113970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,120,114157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,251,114345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,189,114532,2,0,P|112:186|161:251,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,264,115095,2,0,L|92:120,1,125.999996154785,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,115470,2,0,B|52:96|52:96|-8:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,52,115845,2,0,B|240:44|240:44|300:56,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,188,116220,6,0,B|316:188|316:188|340:136|328:92|280:40,1,167.999994873047,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,140,116782,2,0,P|220:200|228:236,1,83.9999974365235,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,368,117157,2,0,P|300:308|292:272,1,83.9999974365235,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,260,117532,2,0,B|152:280|192:296|192:296|231:265|271:265|296:286,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,369,118095,2,0,B|389:353|389:353|430:278,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,209,118470,2,0,B|270:242|270:242|314:316,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,118845,2,0,B|427:193|427:193|342:195,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,119220,6,0,P|208:196|188:80,2,167.999994873047,6|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,148,120157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,148,120345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,72,120532,2,0,B|248:156|248:156|220:188|184:200|152:188,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,92,121095,2,0,L|196:4,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,121470,2,0,P|92:216|112:248,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,364,121845,2,0,B|180:316|180:316|156:264,1,83.9999974365235,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,264,122220,6,0,L|85:280,3,41.9999987182618,6|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,296,122595,2,0,L|173:280,3,41.9999987182618,10|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,264,122970,2,8,L|260:280,3,41.9999987182618,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,296,123345,2,0,L|348:280,3,41.9999987182618,10|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,123720,1,6,0:0:0:0:
155,155,124282,5,2,0:0:0:0:
315,99,124657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,263,125032,2,0,L|303:303,2,35,2|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125313,12,0,131220,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131313,12,0,137220,0:0:0:0:

Sangzin

628 posts

Joined February 2013

Sangzin 2015-08-06T04:45:40+00:00

Hello! From your request!
~~스토리보드 취한다 부럽네 어떻게하심 가르쳐주셈~~

[General]

콤보컬러가 없군요? 안넣으려고 한거면 알겠습니다만......일단 콤보컬러 깜빡하신거면 넣어주세요
No combo color? If you want to......anyway, If you forget to add combo colors, Add.

[Insane]

00:01:845 (3) - Finish는 빼는게 좋을 것 같네요
00:02:782 (2) - ^
00:08:220 (1,2) - 각각 Ctrl+G?
00:13:845 (7) - ^
00:15:157 (4) - ^
00:26:595 (2,3,4) - 이렇게?
00:34:282 (3,5) - 겹친게 조금 이상해보이네요.
01:06:720 (1,2) - 각각 Ctrl+G
01:18:532 (5) - 위쪽으로 배치하는 것도 나쁘지 않을 듯?
01:28:844 (6,7,8,9,1) - 좌우반전해서 배치하는게 좋아보이네요

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:11:220 (5) - NC
00:30:157 (4,6) - Check blanket. It looks it needs a little bit of fix.
00:46:282 (6,7) - ^
01:08:595 (1,2,3) - It's sooo simple. Make a change like rotate 2,3.
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:24:720 (1,2) - switch them.
01:46:470 (9) - Down last anchor point so it looks nice.
02:11:220 Add circle!!

[FreeSongs' Hard]

00:14:970 (2,3) - weird overlap. make stack or move right (2) to make half stack
00:20:782 (2,3) - Also weird overlap. How about making a blanket?
00:26:970 (4,5,6) - Stack?

[Manul's Normal]

00:25:470 (5,6,1) - As far as I know, normal also use same DS. Sometimes they make like this, but this pattern is too many!!! Maybe it will dangerous. I prefer change these patterns.
I just tell you this problems. maybe you'll change many patterns. ~~Actually I don't know what to mod. Sorry~~

[Easy]

00:11:220 (1) - 이지에서 스피너 후에 간격은 4비트여야합니다. 00:12:720에서 끝내거나 슬라이더를 삭제해야 언랭이 안됩니다. 전차추천
00:17:595 (2,3) - 이렇게 엇박(?)으로 되어있으면 헷갈리지 않을까요?
01:06:720 (3) - 슬라이더 폼이 이상해보이네요.이런걸로 충분할 듯 하네요
01:17:970 (2) - 앵커 포인트 너무많이 쓰신 것 같네요. 그냥 하나로도 충분합니다.

~~아니 뭔 키스씬이 이렇게 많아욬ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~
GL!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-06T05:13:11+00:00

Sangzin wrote:
Hello! From your request!
~~스토리보드 취한다 부럽네 어떻게하심 가르쳐주셈~~ 처음 하는거라 쪼금 이상하네요 ㅋㅋ

[General]

콤보컬러가 없군요? 안넣으려고 한거면 알겠습니다만......일단 콤보컬러 깜빡하신거면 넣어주세요
No combo color? If you want to......anyway, If you forget to add combo colors, Add.

[Insane]

00:01:845 (3) - Finish는 빼는게 좋을 것 같네요 넵
00:02:782 (2) - ^ 넵
00:08:220 (1,2) - 각각 Ctrl+G? 디스턴스 망해짐 ;;
00:13:845 (7) - ^ 익;
00:15:157 (4) - ^ 넵
00:26:595 (2,3,4) - 이렇게? 지금께 약간 괜찮으거 같은데;; 나중에 다시 불께염!
00:34:282 (3,5) - 겹친게 조금 이상해보이네요. 넵
01:06:720 (1,2) - 각각 Ctrl+G 음;
01:18:532 (5) - 위쪽으로 배치하는 것도 나쁘지 않을 듯? 디스턴스땜에 더 내림 ㅋㅋ
01:28:844 (6,7,8,9,1) - 좌우반전해서 배치하는게 좋아보이네요 넵

[Easy]

00:11:220 (1) - 이지에서 스피너 후에 간격은 4비트여야합니다. 00:12:720에서 끝내거나 슬라이더를 삭제해야 언랭이 안됩니다. 전차추천 네, 고첬습니다!
00:17:595 (2,3) - 이렇게 엇박(?)으로 되어있으면 헷갈리지 않을까요? 아, 이런건건 괜찮아요!
01:06:720 (3) - 슬라이더 폼이 이상해보이네요.이런걸로 충분할 듯 하네요 고쳤습니다!
01:17:970 (2) - 앵커 포인트 너무많이 쓰신 것 같네요. 그냥 하나로도 충분합니다. 고쳤습니다!

~~아니 뭔 키스씬이 이렇게 많아욬ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ~~ 두개밖애 없어요!!!
GL! 고맙습니다!

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-06T06:46:44+00:00

Sangzin wrote:
[Manul's Normal]

00:25:470 (5,6,1) - As far as I know, normal also use same DS. Sometimes they make like this, but this pattern is too many!!! Maybe it will dangerous. I prefer change these patterns.
I just tell you this problems. maybe you'll change many patterns. ~~Actually I don't know what to mod. Sorry~~

I like them, if something will notice them again, i'll change, but not for now, sry. ♥

Silky

766 posts

Joined October 2014

Silky 2015-08-06T09:02:16+00:00

from my queue

Unrankable
Highly recommend
Suggestion

General

Artist:Kawada Mami

Easy

AR+1
00:24:720 (1,2) - Switch NC
01:17:970 (2) - is this clap necessary?
01:51:345 (2) - Add clap on slider's start and end? sounds better imo.
01:52:470 (3) - Same as above, Remove clap on slider's start and add clap on slider's end.
02:05:407 (1) - moves the spinner's end 02:09:720? this spinner is not suitable for Easy diff imo.

Manul's Normal

Please unify DS

AR+1 HP-1
01:12:720 (3,4) - Why use 1/3?
SPOILER
02:05:220 (1) - moves the spinner's end 02:10:845?
00:25:470 (5,6,1) - wrong DS
00:40:470 (5,6,1) -
00:43:470 (4,5,1) -
00:45:907 (4,5) -
00:47:970 (2,3) -
00:49:282 (4,5) -
00:54:720 (3,4,1) -
00:57:907 (3,4,5) -
00:59:970 (2,3) -
01:00:907 (4,5) -
01:22:845 (4,1) -
01:32:220 (1,2) -
01:38:220 (1,2) -
01:39:720 (3,4) -
01:46:470 (4,5,1) -
02:02:220 (1,2,3) -

FreeSong's Hard

HP+1
01:30:532 (6) - add NC?
01:33:532 (5) - ^
01:36:532 (5) - ^

Suzuno's Insane

音全体的に+20%くらいしませんか？小さすぎると思います
01:41:220 - duplicate green line
00:05:220 (4) - NC入れませんか？
00:19:845 (9) - 00:20:220 (1)にスタックしませんか？
00:31:845 (9) - ここも流れ的にも7に重ねず00:32:220 (1)にスタックさせたほうがいいと思うんですがどうでしょう
00:34:657 (4,5,6) - せっかくだから対称にしません？
SPOILER
00:37:282 (2,3,4,5) - ＾
00:56:220 (1) - ここも単発にしませんか？他の同じ音全部単発なので。
01:12:720 (9) - NCあってもいいと思います
02:08:782 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - リズムこうの方がいいと思います
SPOILER
02:11:220 - Add Note

Insane

00:14:220 - duplicate green line
00:38:220 - ^
00:13:001 (2) - Remove note? I feel it unnaturally.
00:35:595 (1) - is this NC necessary?
00:56:970 (5) - Add clap on slider's end?
01:10:095 (2) - Remove clap

Nがアカン
GL~

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-06T09:20:08+00:00

fuyuyu- wrote:
from my queue

Unrankable
Highly recommend
Suggestion

General
Artist:Kawada Mami It's Mami Kawada! Haha (THE SOURCE AND STUFF)

Easy
AR+1 ehh
00:24:720 (1,2) - Switch NC ok
01:17:970 (2) - is this clap necessary? yes
01:51:345 (2) - Add clap on slider's start and end? sounds better imo. ok
01:52:470 (3) - Same as above, Remove clap on slider's start and add clap on slider's end. ok
02:05:407 (1) - moves the spinner's end 02:09:720? this spinner is not suitable for Easy diff imo. ok

Insane
00:14:220 - duplicate green line ok
00:38:220 - ^ ok
00:13:001 (2) - Remove note? I feel it unnaturally. no
00:35:595 (1) - is this NC necessary? ok
00:56:970 (5) - Add clap on slider's end? ok
01:10:095 (2) - Remove clap ok

Nがアカン
GL~

THANKS!!!!!!!!

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-06T09:31:18+00:00

guys pls don't poke me about ds or i'll rekt u irl 1v1 oK?

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Manul's Normal
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
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ChristieBell

124 posts

Joined August 2013

ChristieBell 2015-08-06T12:23:18+00:00

Suzuno's Insane

音全体的に+20%くらいしませんか？小さすぎると思います
01:41:220 - duplicate green line
00:05:220 (4) - NC入れませんか？
00:19:845 (9) - 00:20:220 (1)にスタックしませんか？
00:31:845 (9) - ここも流れ的にも7に重ねず00:32:220 (1)にスタックさせたほうがいいと思うんですがどうでしょう
00:34:657 (4,5,6) - せっかくだから対称にしません？
SPOILER
00:37:282 (2,3,4,5) - ＾
00:56:220 (1) - ここも単発にしませんか？他の同じ音全部単発なので。
01:12:720 (9) - NCあってもいいと思います
02:08:782 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - リズムこうの方がいいと思います
SPOILER
02:11:220 - Add Note

all Repair was
modありがとうございます

Last edited by ChristieBell 2015-08-06T12:25:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ChristieBell

124 posts

Joined August 2013

ChristieBell 2015-08-06T12:25:11+00:00

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:11:220 (5) - NC
00:30:157 (4,6) - Check blanket. It looks it needs a little bit of fix.
00:46:282 (6,7) - ^
01:08:595 (1,2,3) - It's sooo simple. Make a change like rotate 2,3.
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:24:720 (1,2) - switch them.
01:46:470 (9) - Down last anchor point so it looks nice.
02:11:220 Add circle!!

all Repair was
Thank you mod !

Seni

713 posts

Joined August 2014

Seni 2015-08-06T22:25:54+00:00

Hi, mod from my queue.

Nothing to say about Insane. Except maybe even out 00:11:220 (1,2,3) - with distance snap.
Also, what ever this is, don't think it matters though:

Manul's Normal

00:29:220 (1) - Tidy this blanket up a bit.

There is no sound for the start of 00:36:720 (1) - and the other 2 sliders ends land on strong beats, it doesn't feel good while playing + the clap on 00:37:845 would be very well emphasized with a hit circle. Maybe try putting something like this:

00:47:220 (1) - Make this slider slightly less curved to make the blanket neater.

00:59:970 (2,3) - Here you use 3 on the red tick to emphasize that strong sound, yet here 00:56:970 (2) - you don't. Doesn't make sense to me

01:49:470 (4) - Blanket isn't straight enough, tidy it up.

Delete the unnecessary timing points since you made a new diff from insane.

Great map, gl.

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-06T23:07:47+00:00

[ Seni ] wrote:
Hi, mod from my queue.

Nothing to say about Insane. Except maybe even out 00:11:220 (1,2,3) - with distance snap. Thanks!!
Also, what ever this is, don't think it matters though:

I fixed it anyways!

Great map, gl.

Thanks for the mod!

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-07T06:41:11+00:00

SORA O KOETEEEEEEEEEE

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.800001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Manul's Normal
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749346
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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F,0,0,720,1,0
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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YellowManul

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Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-07T09:51:46+00:00

е****аный рот етоГО казино

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Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Manul's Normal
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
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Darcsol

277 posts

Joined January 2010

Darcsol 2015-08-08T06:04:28+00:00

Mod request

[General]

(UNRANKABLE) Why is Insane the only diff that uses custom colors? Please include custom colors to all diffs.
Normally I'm against different BGs in diffs, but at least they're consistent and they're used on the storyboard.

[Storyboard]

00:13:563 - This position of the BG should be the first thing you see it on 00:13:376 . Move it back so you could avoid the awkward zoom motion.
00:16:610 - I'm not sure what the purpose of this jump motion for? When you do these type of effects, it's meant to show emphasis, not just to the song but to the BG as well. Add a point of interest on the BG.
00:19:657 - The sudden transition to the girl's face is creepy. Add a transition like the others.
00:19:657 - I highly recommend editing"flashh.png" to cover the entire screen instead of the bottom.
00:22:657 - ^
00:22:891 - There's an awkward pause here. Why is the transition slower here than in 00:20:032 or 00:26:063 ?
00:25:657 - The transition to "0045_2DJ_00042.jpg" should start from the top or bottom of the screen instead of the left again.
00:35:126 - The motion on "1007_2DJ_01004.jpg" should go to the same direction 00:32:220 but a bit slower instead.
00:37:282 - The motion on "0080_2DJ_00077.jpg" to the points of interest are too fast. Add tiny pauses on 00:37:423 and 00:37:610 for clearer emphasis.
00:39:532 - The "flashh.png" effect is not necessary.
00:39:720 - The transition to "0037_2DJ_00034.jpg" should be reversed to the right instead.
00:44:407 - The point of interest to the Pocky is waaay too fast. Add a tiny pause on 00:44:384 for clearer emphasis or don't bother the Pocky at all.
00:44:829 - I think it's better to replace the "flashh.png" with a "white.jpg" instead.
00:44:970 - The motion on "0071_2DJ_00068.jpg" should be slightly faster.
00:47:407 - Avoid this motion. Go straight to the girl's face instead for better emphasis.
00:47:970 - The motion of this BG should be the same direction as before, a pan to the left instead of an awkward slow pan going down.
00:53:126 - The transition to "0028_2DJ_00025.jpg" should start on the right instead, emphasizing the girl's jump to the MC(?).
00:56:829 - The transition to "0151_2DJ_00148.jpg" should start on the left instead, emphasizing the girl's direction to the MC(?).
00:56:970 - In addition to above, the motion should also slowly zoom up to the girl's face for further emphasis.
00:59:829 - The motion on "0194_2DJ_00191.jpg" should go to the same direction as 00:59:220 .
01:08:595 - Why is there no transition here? It's too sudden and harsh on the eyes.
01:08:970 - Try to make the motion less "bouncy".
01:09:532 - ^
01:10:095 - Remove this point. The motion should not slow down.
01:12:720 - The motion must continue to the next transition.
01:12:954 - Remove the "White.jpg". It's unnecessary.
01:14:079 - A "White.jpg" can fit here.
01:16:048 - Instead of a transition-to-black, make it a transition-to-white using "White.jpg" instead.
01:31:282 - Slow down on the rotation.
01:33:485 - The motion on "0198_2DJ_00195.jpg" should be the same direction as 01:32:126 .
01:38:782 - Why the transition from the right again? Transition from the top instead.
01:39:157 - Instead of an awkward "jump" motion, the BG should not move. Instead, on 01:39:345 - have a small but sudden zoom-in to the vicinity around the girl's face.
01:44:220 - "0158_2DJ_00155.jpg" should have the same transition as 01:43:376 .
02:03:720 - Transition-to-white instead.
02:06:345 - I don't know why this transition is there. Remove it.

Honestly, I recommend adjusting the storyboard so you wouldn't have to display the epilepsy warning. There really shouldn't be strobe-inducing effects on these types of songs.

[Easy]

00:01:470 (1) - Why is the slider shaped like that? Never in the diff there is a slider like that. Clean it up.
00:02:220 (2) - ^
00:05:220 (3) - An ugly slider. Clean it up.
00:24:345 (3,4) - Are these two finish hitsounds necessary?
00:38:220 (2) - New combo?
00:57:907 (3) - Why is the slider's tail's hitsounds different from 00:45:907 (3) ?

[Manul's Normal]

00:01:470 (1) - Rotate the slider so the tail is pointing upwards for readability.
00:03:720 (3,1) - This is a major pet peeve of mine: ALL objects must be clear to read, especially in easier diffs. The player would first see on 00:05:220 (1) is the reverse arrow. This effects pacing, making it unnecessarily more difficult than it should. I recommend reversing the slider and adjusting it from there.
00:06:720 (3,1) - Again, objects must be clear to read. Adjust 00:06:720 (3) in a way so it corresponds to 00:08:220 (1) .
00:10:470 (5) - Raise the slider, preferably on x:216 y:176
00:14:220 - This is the only time when the diff speeds up. It's also too fast. Lower the slider velocity to 1.10x
00:19:470 (4) - Move the slider away slightly from the reverse arrow.
00:29:220 (1) - ^
00:53:220 (1) - ^
00:55:282 (4) - Spacing
01:04:470 (4) - Lower the slider slightly to x:188 y:152 away from the reverse arrow.
01:17:220 - If 00:14:220 gets a speed boost, why not during the kiai time?
01:26:220 (1) - Move the slider away from the reverse arrow.
01:30:720 (4) - ^
01:35:220 (1) - ^
01:29:220 - Kiai time speed boost?
01:52:470 (5) - Move the slider away from the reverse arrow.
01:53:220 (1) - Missing a whistle, clap, and finish hitsound?
01:57:720 (4) - Spacing
02:04:657 (5) - ^

[FreeSongs' Hard]

00:01:470 (1,2) - What of slider shapes are these? No where in the diff the sliders look like that. Clean them up.
00:12:532 (2) - I recommend removing the repeater, then move 00:12:813 (1) to where 00:12:813 is.
02:05:032 (3) - ^

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:48:532 (4,6) - Clean up these sliders.
02:11:313 (1) - Why is this spinner is the longest in all the diffs? Keep them consistent by reducing it to 02:17:220 .

While the diff is fine, it is the least polish of all of them. Please go over your diff and polish it up.

[Insane]

The approach rate feels artificial. Reduce it slightly to 8.5
00:23:595 (2,3) - I'm not a fan that smaller sliders goes away from the larger sliders. I recommend adjusting that, but it's an Insane diff. It's fine, but it's up to you.
01:16:095 (2) - The circle should move away from the slider a bit further.
02:05:970 (5) - The circle should be on x:224 y:120?
02:07:845 (8,9) - Is the jump necessary? There isn't a jump on 02:06:157 (6,7) .
02:11:313 (1) - This is the second longest spinner in all the diffs. Keep them consistent by reducing it to 02:17:220 .

I never thought I payed more attention to the storyboard; there were a bunch of minor stuff that bugged me.

Good luck

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-08T08:53:06+00:00

Darcsol wrote:
Mod request

[General]
(UNRANKABLE) Why is Insane the only diff that uses custom colors? Please include custom colors to all diffs. FIXED
Normally I'm against different BGs in diffs, but at least they're consistent and they're used on the storyboard.

[Storyboard]
00:13:563 - This position of the BG should be the first thing you see it on 00:13:376 . Move it back so you could avoid the awkward zoom motion. Fixed
00:16:610 - I'm not sure what the purpose of this jump motion for? When you do these type of effects, it's meant to show emphasis, not just to the song but to the BG as well. Add a point of interest on the BG. FIXED
00:19:657 - The sudden transition to the girl's face is creepy. Add a transition like the others. I like it though :c
00:19:657 - I highly recommend editing"flashh.png" to cover the entire screen instead of the bottom. No
00:22:657 - ^ No
00:22:891 - There's an awkward pause here. Why is the transition slower here than in 00:20:032 or 00:26:063 ? FIXED
00:25:657 - The transition to "0045_2DJ_00042.jpg" should start from the top or bottom of the screen instead of the left again. Look fine to me
00:35:126 - The motion on "1007_2DJ_01004.jpg" should go to the same direction 00:32:220 but a bit slower instead. same direction seem weird
00:37:282 - The motion on "0080_2DJ_00077.jpg" to the points of interest are too fast. Add tiny pauses on 00:37:423 and 00:37:610 for clearer emphasis. Current is fine
00:39:532 - The "flashh.png" effect is not necessary. I like it with it
00:39:720 - The transition to "0037_2DJ_00034.jpg" should be reversed to the right instead.
00:44:407 - The point of interest to the Pocky is waaay too fast. Add a tiny pause on 00:44:384 for clearer emphasis or don't bother the Pocky at all. FIXED
00:44:829 - I think it's better to replace the "flashh.png" with a "white.jpg" instead. dynamically better with black.
00:44:970 - The motion on "0071_2DJ_00068.jpg" should be slightly faster. Fixed
00:47:407 - Avoid this motion. Go straight to the girl's face instead for better emphasis. I like this
00:47:970 - The motion of this BG should be the same direction as before, a pan to the left instead of an awkward slow pan going down. Fixed
00:53:126 - The transition to "0028_2DJ_00025.jpg" should start on the right instead, emphasizing the girl's jump to the MC(?). current is fine, as next time i show this picture will be the way you meant!
00:56:829 - The transition to "0151_2DJ_00148.jpg" should start on the left instead, emphasizing the girl's direction to the MC(?). girl moves towards where MC is. this movement should be sufficient as your way is going opposite :s
00:56:970 - In addition to above, the motion should also slowly zoom up to the girl's face for further emphasis. Slowly zooming seems quite weird to me. I'll have to figure out what you are trying to say :l
00:59:829 - The motion on "0194_2DJ_00191.jpg" should go to the same direction as 00:59:220 . Current one matches better!
01:08:595 - Why is there no transition here? It's too sudden and harsh on the eyes. Fixed
01:08:970 - Try to make the motion less "bouncy". lessened the movements
01:09:532 - ^ lessened the movements
01:10:095 - Remove this point. The motion should not slow down. :l
01:12:720 - The motion must continue to the next transition. Fixed
01:12:954 - Remove the "White.jpg". It's unnecessary. Ehhh
01:14:079 - A "White.jpg" can fit here. Ehhh
01:16:048 - Instead of a transition-to-black, make it a transition-to-white using "White.jpg" instead. black gives more impact!
01:31:282 - Slow down on the rotation. Fixed
01:33:485 - The motion on "0198_2DJ_00195.jpg" should be the same direction as 01:32:126 . going opposite direction is much better. I tried that mod ur mod, and didn't look quite as nice x)
01:38:782 - Why the transition from the right again? Transition from the top instead. directions are reversed after vertical transition. More symmetric!
01:39:157 - Instead of an awkward "jump" motion, the BG should not move. Instead, on 01:39:345 - have a small but sudden zoom-in to the vicinity around the girl's face. I'll come back to that!
01:44:220 - "0158_2DJ_00155.jpg" should have the same transition as 01:43:376 . current one fits better, changing up too much on these kinds of scene seems weirid
02:03:720 - Transition-to-white instead. black gives more dynamic. I already used white flashes and white glow through entire map
02:06:345 - I don't know why this transition is there. Remove it. makes it more interesting though rather than just moving image for long time.

Honestly, I recommend adjusting the storyboard so you wouldn't have to display the epilepsy warning. There really shouldn't be strobe-inducing effects on these types of songs. flash gives better feel to the SB in my opinion. thus epilepsy warning has to be turned on.

[Easy]
00:01:470 (1) - Why is the slider shaped like that? Never in the diff there is a slider like that. Clean it up. LOL OKAY!
00:02:220 (2) - ^ Slightly enhanced, i like the way it looks tho
00:05:220 (3) - An ugly slider. Clean it up. I like the slider tho :l
00:24:345 (3,4) - Are these two finish hitsounds necessary? Fixed
00:38:220 (2) - New combo? applied, but I don't know if is ok
00:57:907 (3) - Why is the slider's tail's hitsounds different from 00:45:907 (3) ? Fixed

[Insane]
The approach rate feels artificial. Reduce it slightly to 8.5 Suzono's insane is AR9, it would be fine with AR9 on mine as well
00:23:595 (2,3) - I'm not a fan that smaller sliders goes away from the larger sliders. I recommend adjusting that, but it's an Insane diff. It's fine, but it's up to you. I actually fixed that with short streams
01:16:095 (2) - The circle should move away from the slider a bit further. Fixed
02:05:970 (5) - The circle should be on x:224 y:120? Fixed
02:07:845 (8,9) - Is the jump necessary? There isn't a jump on 02:06:157 (6,7) . Fixed
02:11:313 (1) - This is the second longest spinner in all the diffs. Keep them consistent by reducing it to 02:17:220 . Fixed

[Suzuno's Insane]
Applying the mod for Suzuno as he is away for more than 4 days
00:48:532 (4,6) - Clean up these sliders. Done
02:11:313 (1) - Why is this spinner is the longest in all the diffs? Keep them consistent by reducing it to 02:17:220 . Done

While the diff is fine, it is the least polish of all of them. Please go over your diff and polish it up.

I never thought I payed more attention to the storyboard; there were a bunch of minor stuff that bugged me. I really liked that you went over SB in such detail, I really appreciate it! Never thought you would actually mod the SB haha.

Good luck

Last edited by Sidetail 2015-08-10T00:54:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-08T10:18:11+00:00

o3o

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.800001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Manul's Normal
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749346
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"0041_2DJ_00038.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"0041_2DJ_00038.jpg",320,240
F,0,0,720,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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135720,-133.333333333333,4,2,3,10,0,0
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Combo3 : 0,0,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 255,255,128

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FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2015-08-08T13:07:02+00:00

fuyuyu- wrote:
FreeSong's Hard
HP+1 sure
01:30:532 (6) - add NC? fixed!
01:33:532 (5) - ^ fixed!
01:36:532 (5) - ^ fixed!

Darcsol wrote:
[FreeSongs' Hard]
00:01:470 (1,2) - What of slider shapes are these? No where in the diff the sliders look like that. Clean them up. Changed into another shape. Hope its better now ><
00:12:532 (2) - I recommend removing the repeater, then move 00:12:813 (1) to where 00:12:813 is. I kind of want the beat to be hitsounded ;w;
Since the spinner start can not give any sound, I would prefer mine
02:05:032 (3) - ^ ^

updato~

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749364
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"1003_2DJ_01000.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"1003_2DJ_01000.jpg",320,240
 M,0,0,,320,240
 F,0,0,720,1,0
 S,0,0,720,0.8952727
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
720,375,4,2,0,40,1,0
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2220,-200,4,2,2,50,0,0
8220,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
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12720,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
13282,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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ZLOdeuka-

1,442 posts

Joined June 2009

ZLOdeuka- 2015-08-09T20:47:48+00:00

heeey~ irc mod!

SPOILER

2015-08-09 13:17 BetaStar: Hello!
2015-08-09 13:18 ZLOdeuka-: hi~
2015-08-09 13:18 BetaStar: I am just curious if you are interested in modding map at the moment :O
2015-08-09 13:19 ZLOdeuka-: what?
2015-08-09 13:20 BetaStar: Are you free right now and feel like modding?
2015-08-09 13:20 BetaStar: Sorry for being so abrupt haha
2015-08-09 13:21 ZLOdeuka-: you want to ask mod for your map?
2015-08-09 13:21 BetaStar: Well more like help
2015-08-09 13:22 BetaStar: If there is any thing that you might catch
2015-08-09 13:22 ZLOdeuka-: ohm
2015-08-09 13:22 ZLOdeuka-: sure
2015-08-09 13:22 BetaStar: Yes, you can just skim through it!
2015-08-09 13:22 BetaStar: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/731428 Mami Kawada - Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-]
2015-08-09 13:22 BetaStar: Just anything that feels weird to you
2015-08-09 13:26 ZLOdeuka-: size BG - incorrect
2015-08-09 13:26 ZLOdeuka-: except Insane
2015-08-09 13:26 BetaStar: Oh
2015-08-09 13:26 BetaStar: Ah
2015-08-09 13:26 BetaStar: I'll fix that soon
2015-08-09 13:27 BetaStar: thanks!
2015-08-09 13:27 ZLOdeuka-: and
2015-08-09 13:28 ZLOdeuka-: soft-sliderslide3 not used
2015-08-09 13:28 BetaStar: Oh right!
2015-08-09 13:29 BetaStar: Fixed!
2015-08-09 13:30 ZLOdeuka-: 01:17:126 (3) - sb load can reduce?
2015-08-09 13:30 ZLOdeuka-: it exceeds the norm
2015-08-09 13:31 BetaStar: I asked about that, and they said it's all right
2015-08-09 13:31 BetaStar: :l
2015-08-09 13:31 ZLOdeuka-: okay
2015-08-09 13:31 BetaStar: Haha
2015-08-09 13:31 ZLOdeuka-: ?
2015-08-09 13:32 BetaStar: No I mean it reminded me of beatmap called Okaerinasai
2015-08-09 13:32 BetaStar: that SB goes to 9.0X
2015-08-09 13:32 BetaStar: and ranked x)
2015-08-09 13:32 ZLOdeuka-: It is not critical but it is desirable so I just gave advice
2015-08-09 13:32 BetaStar: Yes!
2015-08-09 13:32 BetaStar: I feel thankful for you doing that

2015-08-09 13:33 ZLOdeuka-: This does not mean that you need to overload SB
2015-08-09 13:33 ZLOdeuka-: not all powerful computers
2015-08-09 13:33 BetaStar: I'll see about fixing that actually
2015-08-09 13:33 BetaStar: haha
2015-08-09 13:34 ZLOdeuka-: Insane
2015-08-09 13:34 ZLOdeuka-: 00:13:282 (4) - nc. because the jumping starts here
2015-08-09 13:35 BetaStar: All right
2015-08-09 13:35 BetaStar: and I also fixed that SB load haha
2015-08-09 13:35 BetaStar: without killing anything
2015-08-09 13:35 ZLOdeuka-: :>
2015-08-09 13:36 BetaStar: Thanks for pointing that out ;D
2015-08-09 13:38 ZLOdeuka-: 02:05:032 (1) - remove nc and here 02:05:220 (2) - nc. and 02:04:282 (1,2,1) - placed at the same distance
2015-08-09 13:38 BetaStar: placed at the same distance?
2015-08-09 13:39 BetaStar: http://puu.sh/jvqtd/072e4931c3.jpg
2015-08-09 13:39 BetaStar: timeline is even though
2015-08-09 13:39 BetaStar: :O
2015-08-09 13:39 ZLOdeuka-: oh
2015-08-09 13:39 ZLOdeuka-: nono
2015-08-09 13:39 ZLOdeuka-: for
2015-08-09 13:39 ZLOdeuka-: grid
2015-08-09 13:39 ZLOdeuka-: a grid
2015-08-09 13:39 BetaStar: is it not same?
2015-08-09 13:39 BetaStar: for note placement?
2015-08-09 13:40 ZLOdeuka-: 02:04:657 (2) - located closer to 1
2015-08-09 13:41 ZLOdeuka-: than 02:05:032 (1) - to 02:04:657 (2) -
2015-08-09 13:41 BetaStar: Haha all right
2015-08-09 13:41 BetaStar: I just moved
2015-08-09 13:41 BetaStar: one grid
2015-08-09 13:41 BetaStar: ;D
2015-08-09 13:44 ZLOdeuka-: :3
2015-08-09 13:44 ZLOdeuka-: nice!
2015-08-09 13:44 BetaStar: Ya!
2015-08-09 13:44 ZLOdeuka-: I'll post this mod for forum?
2015-08-09 13:44 BetaStar: Sure!
2015-08-09 13:45 ZLOdeuka-: heck! log is not preserved x.x
2015-08-09 13:46 ZLOdeuka-: can you give me? :<

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-08-10T01:33:41+00:00

idk why i did this but i did, description box if u dont use pls!!11!!1!11!! xdd

http://puu.sh/jvIFQ/bb9a6dce0b.zip

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-10T01:59:51+00:00

Gaia wrote:
idk why i did this but i did, description box if u dont use pls!!11!!1!11!! xdd

http://puu.sh/jvIFQ/bb9a6dce0b.zip

jesus christ i thought you didn't have time to mod mine, but instead you created your whole map ._. emergawd gaia pls

i'll include it if the map is sexy (good enough) -> stop BN request and need more mods.

THANKS FOR MAKING ME DO EXTRA WORK

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2015-08-10T05:11:01+00:00

#modding queue

[General]
RIP Blanket
Please check blanket for every diff, Thanks

[Normal]

00:20:220 (1,2) - I just doubt that is the drop off flow suitable for new-players
00:28:470 (4) - stack
00:46:845 - should be sth click-able here
01:23:970 (2) - missing clap
02:02:220 (1,2) - I prefer two 1/2 beat slider
02:05:220 - add a circle here and spinner start at 02:05:313 -

[Suzuno's Insane]

00:28:845 (10) - jumping here
00:31:845 (9) - jumping (just ctrl+g 00:31:282 (8) - is still okay)
00:41:032 (4) - jumping
00:44:220 (1) - ^
00:44:220 (1,2,3) - too kind, larger ds. (similar rhythm also, just like 00:44:970 (1,2,3) - )
00:49:845 (7) - jumping
00:56:032 (11) - ^
01:01:845 (4,5,6,7) - larger ds, otherwise not quite easy to play (X)
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4) - um...

01:20:032 (4,5) - somehow not a good flow, move upward
01:20:595 (6,7) - um.. this flow..prefer this

01:30:720 (5) - jumping
01:44:220 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern I have been pointed out in another map by 2 BNs, maybe change to curve slider.
01:53:595 (2,3,4) - try this for flowing?
[img]http://puu.sh/jvToe/1818975e4f.jpg[img]
02:02:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe use 1/4 slider jump here? too many circle and quite sudden for me.
02:07:470 (3,4,5,6) - 02:08:782 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:10:470 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increase ds
02:11:220 (10) - nc

Good luck

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2015-08-10T05:45:51+00:00

hi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.800001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:Manul's Normal
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749346
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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328,220,104970,6,0,L|240:212,2,55,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,312,105720,1,10,0:0:0:0:
476,244,106095,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,152,106470,2,0,P|408:88|368:48,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,60,107032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,96,107220,6,0,P|264:156|296:228,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,107970,2,0,P|200:308|144:272,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,108720,2,0,L|188:120,2,55,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,109470,2,0,P|68:200|100:256,1,110,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,110220,6,0,L|304:300,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,110970,1,10,0:0:0:0:
276,136,111345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
204,216,111720,2,0,L|132:208,2,55,14|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,128,112470,2,0,L|76:120,2,55,14|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,60,113220,6,0,P|284:48|344:68,1,110,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,156,113970,2,0,P|284:216|328:268,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,184,114720,2,0,L|452:176,2,55,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,292,115470,2,0,L|476:284,2,55,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,348,116220,6,0,P|260:364|212:340,1,110,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,116970,1,10,0:0:0:0:
248,228,117345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
232,119,117720,2,0,P|168:111|116:131,1,110,10|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,233,118470,2,0,P|205:241|261:220,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,143,119220,6,0,P|346:199|338:263,1,110,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,193,119970,2,0,L|453:133,2,55,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,300,120720,2,0,L|484:288,2,55,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,336,121470,2,0,P|268:340|208:308,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,264,122220,6,0,L|60:252,2,55,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,216,122782,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,164,122970,2,0,P|144:104|108:56,1,110,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,52,123720,2,0,P|296:100|404:80,1,165,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,191,124657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125220,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125313,12,10,130845,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131220,12,0,137220,0:0:0:0:

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-10T11:42:39+00:00

Next time, read the rules
As you didn't do that, I'll only mod your 2 diffs
As it's a M4M I mod, otherwise you'd been ignored

[Easy]

00:11:220 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1 beat. The recovery time for the player is too low currently
00:20:220 (1,2) - The flow here is not that great. Move (2) more to top left (like 420:148) and make it like this
SPOILER

[Bravery]

00:01:470 (1,2,3,1) - Such a high spacing in an incredibly calm pat feels really out of place. Please lwoer it
00:08:220 (1,2,3) - Why does (1,2) have a lower spacing then (2,3)? It makes no sense, as they are all of same power (beats)
00:10:095 (3) - 2 circles would work better here. It feels awkward having a slider to follow the vocals, while usually circles and sliderstars (not the ends) are used for that
00:13:282 (1,2,3) - This is incredibly overdone, there is only the aaaaa~~~in the vocals, not a single thing which implies the usage of 1/4 sldierjumps. Also, the finishes feel really out of place and should be deleted
00:14:595 (2,3) - Why a stack? It feels really out of place, a jump is much better, same applies to most other 1/2 stacks (for example 00:20:595 (2,3) - ). 1/1 stacks are fine, but 1/2 are really weird
00:19:095 (2,3,4,5,6) - Such patterns usually play pretty badly
00:26:782 (3,4) - Both of these sldiers play pretty badly. These are so-called upbeat slider. They start on a red tick, and end on the following white one. As usually the strong sound is at the white tick, you need to let go at the strong sound instead of clicking which makes it feel really weird
00:30:533 (1) - ^^
00:33:532 (1,2,3) - ^^ etc. (Oh, the ones in the kiai are fine)
00:57:532 (7,1) - The distance between these 2 really implies 1/2, instead of 1/1. Please reduce the spacing to +- 0.3 so it feels more as 1/1
01:04:845 (5,3) - A rather bad overlap, please space them a little
01:07:470 (3,4,5,6) - Please even out the distance here, it feels much better
01:13:751 (6,3) - Due to this overlap, (3) is nearly unreadable. Please blanket them
02:05:032 (3) - Snap to 1/8 please

This diff needs quite more work. It needs more polishing
Also the rhythm and spacing is quite weird.
You should get more mods for this diff, your Easy is really good at least
So are Gaia's diff and FreeSongs' diff
Good luck!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-08-10T13:53:18+00:00

Hi //

General

Audio Lead In은 500으로도 충분할꺼같습니다
Gaia난이도만 콤보색상이 다른거같네요

Easy

AR + 1, HP + 1
00:11:220 (1,1) - 이지 난이도의 스피너 뒤에넌 4비트의 여유가 있어야합니다. 스피너를 00:12:720 - 여기서 끊어주셔야 될듯
00:14:220 (1) - 머리쪽은 음이 강해서 피니시를 넣으시는게 좋을꺼같아요
00:20:220 (1) - 2/1 슬라에 서클 하나는 어떤가요?
00:26:220 - 이부분 뒤로 갑자기 피니시가 많아졌는데 앞에도 같이 넣어주시는건 어떨까요
00:29:220 (1,2) - 베이스 DS가 1.0인데 1.07은 좀 많이 넓은거같네요
00:34:470 (5) - 리버스 피니시
00:35:970 (6) - 머리/꼬리 힛사 빠진거같네요
00:41:970 (1,2) - 이런식으로 짜는게 보컬이랑 잘어울릴듯합니다
SPOILER
00:45:907 (3,1) - 뒤에도 이런리듬 있던데 00:47:220 - 여기의 강한 비트가 묻혀서 좀 아쉽네요. 이런식으로 바꾸면 더 자연스러울꺼같은데....
SPOILER
00:48:907 (3,4) - 그냥 제안입니다만 이런식으로 짜는게 박자를 더 알기 쉬울꺼같네요
SPOILER
00:51:345 (2,3) - 리듬 반대로 놓는걸 추천드립니다
01:01:470 (4) - 담요 포기하고 그냥 이렇게 놓는게 더 부드럽지 않을까 싶어요
SPOILER
01:13:095 (1,2,3) - 리듬 좀 더 간단하게 1/1 리버스 슬라로 바꾸시는건..
01:22:470 (3,1) - 이것도 순서 바꿔서 슬라 - 서클 순으로 놓으시는게 낫겠네요. 01:23:220 - 여기 음이 강해서..
01:25:470 (5,6) - ^ 위와 같습니다
01:32:970 (6) - 리버스쪽 보컬이 키아이중 최고조인거같은데 피니시같은거 넣어주셔서 강조하는건 어떤가요
01:51:345 (2) - 흠..
SPOILER
01:55:470 (4,5) - 얘들도 리듬 바꿔주세요

Manul's Normal

At the first, check the DS again plz (00:03:720 (3) - , 00:27:720 (3) - , 00:29:970 (2) - , etc.)
AR + 2, OD + 1
00:07:845 - Why no note here? ;w;
00:09:720 (4) - 1/1 is better in Normal imo
00:46:845 (6) - clap
00:57:532 - add a note
01:10:470 (5,6) - change to 1/1 slider, and add a note at 01:11:032 - here
01:52:470 (5) - change to two 1/2 sliders
02:02:782 (2,3) - swap the rhythm. That is better
SPOILER
02:04:657 (5,1) - A bit hard to read this 3/2 circle gap imo. change to a slider instead?

FreeSongs' Hard

00:11:782 (3,1) - A bit hard to catch this 1/1 rhythm. Just one 1/1 slider is better imo..
00:14:782 - add a note. It's better in-playing
00:26:782 (3,4) - swap the rhythm
00:31:095 (7) - change to 1/2 slider
00:54:720 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - unsuitable jump in Hard diff
01:04:657 (6) - change to circle + 1/2 slider
01:05:220 (1,2) - weird rhythm. slider - circle is better
01:15:157 (2) - Delete the finish
01:32:220 (1,2) - 1/1 slider is better in Hard diff
01:34:845 (4) - 1/2 is better cuz of vocal
01:41:032 (4) - Delete a note? You don't follow the vocal 01:40:282 (2,3) - here, so this note is needless imo
01:46:845 (7) - This also 1/2 is better
01:51:345 (4) - 1/2 slider + circle

Gaia's Insane

00:25:470 (1,2,3,4) - Reading is no problem, but a bit hard pattern in lowest Insane imo. ( 00:25:282 (3,1) - large 1/4 jump, 00:25:470 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 anti-jumps and 00:26:032 (4,1) - large 1/4 jump again. more easier pattern plz ;w; )
00:37:657 (4,1) - Give them more DS! It's almost same as 00:37:282 (2,3) - this jump
Good diff <3

Suzu no Insane

OD - 1
00:35:220 (1) - start at 00:35:126 - and extened to 00:36:720 -
00:36:907 (1) - 1/8 is right
01:09:720 (1,2,3,4) - Make them more funny flow plz ;w;
01:34:470 (1,2) - 1/2 slider is better to me
01:39:626 - Add a note
01:39:720 (1,2) - Make a bit more large jump? It's more fun in-playing imo!
02:09:345 (7,1) - Try to avoid overlap
02:10:938 (8) - Delete this followed the clap and make three jumps?

Bravery

하위 인센이 두개있어서 판정 살짝 더 올려도 될꺼같네요
00:35:407 (2) - (1)과의 거리를 좁히고 (3)과의 거리를 늘리는게 나을꺼같네요
00:37:845 (5) - 점프중 가장 튀는 음인데 앞의 점프에 비해 너무 좁은 느낌이 들어요
00:48:345 (6,7) - 앞 점프를 너무 넓게 찍으셔서 이것도 따라 넓게 찍으시는게 나을듯..
00:54:907 (2,3) - 스택 푸는게 나을꺼같네요
01:12:720 (1) - 이 음은 점프로 두는게 더 어울리겠네요
01:13:470 (5) - 꼬리부분 휘슬 빼는게 더 자연스럽네요
01:16:470 (1,2) - (1)머리/꼬리와 (2)머리까지 힛사 없이 하는건 어떨까요
01:18:532 (5) - (271, 170). 제 취향 배치이긴 하지만...ㅋㅋ
01:23:032 - 음.. 바로 앞까지 점점 넓어지는 점프가 나와서 여기를 비우는것보단 점프 약하게 넣는게 나을꺼같아요
01:54:532 (6) - 이 피니시는 안어울리는거같습니다
02:05:032 (3) - 얘 스냅 좀 이상하네요. 1/8이 맞는거같은데..

GL!

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-08-10T18:56:58+00:00

Thanks Karia <3 fixed 2nd point, 1st point i think isnt that hard imo, i got other opinions on it too

ww

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Sidetail 2015-08-11T02:50:30+00:00

Baraatje123's mod:

Baraatje123

[Easy]

00:11:220 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1 beat. The recovery time for the player is too low currently
00:20:220 (1,2) - The flow here is not that great. Move (2) more to top left (like 420:148) and make it like this
SPOILER

[Bravery]

00:01:470 (1,2,3,1) - Such a high spacing in an incredibly calm pat feels really out of place. Please lwoer it
00:08:220 (1,2,3) - Why does (1,2) have a lower spacing then (2,3)? It makes no sense, as they are all of same power (beats)
00:10:095 (3) - 2 circles would work better here. It feels awkward having a slider to follow the vocals, while usually circles and sliderstars (not the ends) are used for that
00:13:282 (1,2,3) - This is incredibly overdone, there is only the aaaaa~~~in the vocals, not a single thing which implies the usage of 1/4 sldierjumps. Also, the finishes feel really out of place and should be deleted
00:14:595 (2,3) - Why a stack? It feels really out of place, a jump is much better, same applies to most other 1/2 stacks (for example 00:20:595 (2,3) - ). 1/1 stacks are fine, but 1/2 are really weird
00:19:095 (2,3,4,5,6) - Such patterns usually play pretty badly
00:26:782 (3,4) - Both of these sldiers play pretty badly. These are so-called upbeat slider. They start on a red tick, and end on the following white one. As usually the strong sound is at the white tick, you need to let go at the strong sound instead of clicking which makes it feel really weird
00:30:533 (1) - ^^
00:33:532 (1,2,3) - ^^ etc. (Oh, the ones in the kiai are fine)
00:57:532 (7,1) - The distance between these 2 really implies 1/2, instead of 1/1. Please reduce the spacing to +- 0.3 so it feels more as 1/1
01:04:845 (5,3) - A rather bad overlap, please space them a little
01:07:470 (3,4,5,6) - Please even out the distance here, it feels much better
01:13:751 (6,3) - Due to this overlap, (3) is nearly unreadable. Please blanket them
02:05:032 (3) - Snap to 1/8 please

Sorry about that mod! Applied all the mods.

Karia

Karia wrote:
Hi //

General
Audio Lead In은 500으로도 충분할꺼같습니다
Gaia난이도만 콤보색상이 다른거같네요

Easy
AR + 1, HP + 1
00:11:220 (1,1) - 이지 난이도의 스피너 뒤에넌 4비트의 여유가 있어야합니다. 스피너를 00:12:720 - 여기서 끊어주셔야 될듯
00:14:220 (1) - 머리쪽은 음이 강해서 피니시를 넣으시는게 좋을꺼같아요
00:20:220 (1) - 2/1 슬라에 서클 하나는 어떤가요?
00:26:220 - 이부분 뒤로 갑자기 피니시가 많아졌는데 앞에도 같이 넣어주시는건 어떨까요
00:29:220 (1,2) - 베이스 DS가 1.0인데 1.07은 좀 많이 넓은거같네요
00:34:470 (5) - 리버스 피니시
00:35:970 (6) - 머리/꼬리 힛사 빠진거같네요
00:41:970 (1,2) - 이런식으로 짜는게 보컬이랑 잘어울릴듯합니다
SPOILER
00:45:907 (3,1) - 뒤에도 이런리듬 있던데 00:47:220 - 여기의 강한 비트가 묻혀서 좀 아쉽네요. 이런식으로 바꾸면 더 자연스러울꺼같은데....
SPOILER
00:48:907 (3,4) - 그냥 제안입니다만 이런식으로 짜는게 박자를 더 알기 쉬울꺼같네요
SPOILER
00:51:345 (2,3) - 리듬 반대로 놓는걸 추천드립니다
01:01:470 (4) - 담요 포기하고 그냥 이렇게 놓는게 더 부드럽지 않을까 싶어요
SPOILER
01:13:095 (1,2,3) - 리듬 좀 더 간단하게 1/1 리버스 슬라로 바꾸시는건..
01:22:470 (3,1) - 이것도 순서 바꿔서 슬라 - 서클 순으로 놓으시는게 낫겠네요. 01:23:220 - 여기 음이 강해서..
01:25:470 (5,6) - ^ 위와 같습니다
01:32:970 (6) - 리버스쪽 보컬이 키아이중 최고조인거같은데 피니시같은거 넣어주셔서 강조하는건 어떤가요
01:51:345 (2) - 흠..
SPOILER
01:55:470 (4,5) - 얘들도 리듬 바꿔주세요

Bravery
하위 인센이 두개있어서 판정 살짝 더 올려도 될꺼같네요
00:35:407 (2) - (1)과의 거리를 좁히고 (3)과의 거리를 늘리는게 나을꺼같네요
00:37:845 (5) - 점프중 가장 튀는 음인데 앞의 점프에 비해 너무 좁은 느낌이 들어요
00:48:345 (6,7) - 앞 점프를 너무 넓게 찍으셔서 이것도 따라 넓게 찍으시는게 나을듯..
00:54:907 (2,3) - 스택 푸는게 나을꺼같네요
01:12:720 (1) - 이 음은 점프로 두는게 더 어울리겠네요
01:13:470 (5) - 꼬리부분 휘슬 빼는게 더 자연스럽네요
01:16:470 (1,2) - (1)머리/꼬리와 (2)머리까지 힛사 없이 하는건 어떨까요
01:18:532 (5) - (271, 170). 제 취향 배치이긴 하지만...ㅋㅋ
01:23:032 - 음.. 바로 앞까지 점점 넓어지는 점프가 나와서 여기를 비우는것보단 점프 약하게 넣는게 나을꺼같아요
01:54:532 (6) - 이 피니시는 안어울리는거같습니다
02:05:032 (3) - 얘 스냅 좀 이상하네요. 1/8이 맞는거같은데..

GL! 감사합니다! 거의다 바꿨어요

xDarxen

313 posts

Joined July 2014

xDarxen 2015-08-12T10:48:40+00:00

Hullo, you asked me to mod Gaia's Insane, so here it is:

[Gaia's Insane]

00:13:282 (5) - Add new combo? Because the combo goes too high compared to the rest of the map and it is kinda awkward.
01:17:032 (3) - Add new combo, as there is a slight break at that part. It should look like FreeSong's Hard if you do so.
Spacing and the map overall is pretty ok other than that.

Well, great beatmap with an amazing mapset. I hate it when I can't find anything else but one or two errors that make me post noobie mods

Good luck!

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