Muya wrote:

[General]
タグに kud を追加してください fixed
hit sound の音量の調整をしてください (Timing Setup Panelの Audio タブからできます。) 7ぐらいが妥当かと　fixed

animask wrote:

[Gomikud]

01:07:195 (4,5) - Add claps? fixed

Maybe add more hitsounds here too? sorry I think simple is the best

animask wrote:

[Easy]

00:05:157 (1,2,3,4) - Select these and move to the next full beat/white tick?　fixed
00:17:972 (2) - Add a clap on the red tick/repeat fixed
01:06:904 (2) - Clap on red tick and end of slider? fixed

Maybe add more hitsounds near the end? sorry I think simple is the best too


[Yuka+Kud]

00:34:283 (5,6) - Spacing is a little off...( select and move to the right by 1 on level 3 grid snap) fixed

vivicat wrote:

really a cute song~ ;D
i love this song~star ^ ^

[General]
·I think soft hitsound will more fix this map ~.~ The normals is a little nosiy of this map
·The song is too long.You can cut the song or finish the map.
·You can use more hitsound to vivify the rhythm ^ ^
·There isn't any kiai time?Set them where you like the song ^ ^

When editing it any further,i think noisy


[Yuka+Kud]
·The blue and green combo colors is a little same(same?oh,my poor english...but you know what i mean...ww)
·Distance spacing is a little low..0.0.. but if you want turn up ,you must replace almost all the combos.So it's up to you.
00:19:720(2) - clap　fixed
00:22::923(2) - clap.from here, you can use crap every two white line,until 00:37:195,it's up to you no. sorry
00:37:778(1) - from here turn down the rhythm a little　 no. sorry
00:43:894(7,9) - clap no. sorry
00:53:506(7,9) - clap.it's same for behind no. sorry
00:58:749(1) - from here turn up the rhythm no. sorry

[Gomikud]
00:17:098(2,3,4,5,6,7) - down 1 grid
And the advise of hitsound is same to the last diff ._. fixed


[Easy]
The hitsound is a little high.Turn down a little >w<
and the same advise of hitsound~　　fixed

Astom wrote:

Hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions
-Remove Audio from moumoon - Sunshine Girl fixed
-Resize easy.jpeg to 800x600　　fixed
-Video is too long and the song too if u are not going to full map it please cut both of them

TKiller wrote:

actually, pretty nice mapset. Maps are very relaxing and fit the song.

Personally, I think you need to use more hitsounds, they can make your map more lively. And you didn't use softwhistle, that's a pity, this hitsound is very universal and fits almost everything.

[Yuca+Kud]

Let me try to make an example for you (soft hitsounds, of course):

00:58:749 (1) - whistle

00:59:186 (3) - ^

00:59:623 (5) - ^

00:59:914 (7) - whistle on 1st hit, clap on 3rd hit

01:01:079 (1) - whistle

01:01:661 (4) - ^

01:02:244 (7) - whistle on 1st hit, clap on 3rd hit

01:03:409 (1) - whistle

01:03:846 (3) - ^

01:04:574 (6,7,8,9,10) - clap on 10 and whistle on 7 or 6,8, both ways are fine

01:05:739 (1) - whistle

01:06:176 (3) - ^

01:06:613 (5,6,7,8,9) - whistles on 5,7,9 or 5,8 or 5,8,9

01:07:487 (10) - clap

try doing the hitsounds above, I'm sure map feels better with them. If you like them, then do some more hitsounding for the rest of map.



as a side note:
01:12:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this objects are very little spaced compared to 01:11:564 (1,2,3,4), I accidantally clicked too soon because of that

All fixed!

Of course, I recommend you to do some more hitsounding to other diffs too.

Video needs to be cut, if you can't properly cut it and re-encode yourself, ask some of your friends to help you with that. Don't forget to ask to remove the audio track too.

If the video is encoded cutting it, capacity grows more than now.

Otherwise, fine by me

y u c a wrote:

If the video is encoded cutting it, capacity grows more than now.

TKiller wrote:

that means you're encoding it in a wrong way

also, at least remove the audio track from video, use http://strager.net/blag/remove-sound-video

fixed thx

Shulin wrote:

Easy:

Map to the end? fixed


Gomikud:

-- Map to the end? =/ fixed
-- Use same combo colors as the other difficulties?
-- Raise HP Drain by 1 tick?

00:59:539 (x) - Note?
01:07:112 (x) - ^


No


Yuka+Kud:

You could spread the map a little more.

00:50:219 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is weird here, maybe just use 1/2 for these notes and remove the 1/4 notes. No
00:53:131 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - Too close together. fixed
00:58:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ~ 01:05:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - The whistles here sound strange because they don't follow your hitsound pattern for the rest of the map. The clap pattern is good. fixed
01:22:258 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
01:49:199 (8) - Remove clap from the end of the slider. fixed
02:10:607 (1) - End at 02:13:520 and silence. fixed

Nice song, I think you could map to the end of the other difficulties, it's not that much further ^_^

Star.

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~

This color means is important

General;
- Everything is okk ~

Easy;
- 00:19:345 >> move 1 grid to the right fixed
- 00:19:928 >> one grid right fixed
- 00:49:636 >> one grid left fixed
- 01:03:617 >> one grid right fixed
- 01:09:442 (3)(4) >> one grid left fixed

Gomikud;
- 00:49:054 >> one grid right fixed
- 00:58:957 (1)(2) >> this would sound better with a slider that starts at (1), reverse at (2) and ends at 00:59:539 fixed

Yuka + Kud;
- Is okk ~

* Star ~

• The spinner is slightly off centered and has a lot of unused transparency. Here's a fixed one:
  
  SPOILER

  
  Video offset -130 (currently it's -500)

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Fine

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Add something like "Hard" to the difficulty name? This would help a lot.
  The chorus would be better by using some claps (even if i usually hate claps they fit good here): in fact, the choruses totally lack hitsounds and it's a shame D:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  As the previous difficulty, add something that tells the difficulty level?
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  Since the map uses a strict spacing, it's easy to see slightly misplaced beats, here are the most noticeable ones:
  01:07:403 (9) - move it one square to the left
  01:09:151 (4) - move one square to the right
  02:04:782 (3,4) - this really threw me off since the map has a totally regular spacing and the player wouldn't expect something like this at all.

kino77 wrote:

Hi~KIRAKIRA~ >w<

[Easy]
Hitsound kinda lound IMO,turn down 30%? fixed
00:59:539 (2,4,2,4) - clap here and place like that? fixed
01:47:306 (4) - Clap here and next 4? fixed
01:51:966 - Clap? fixed
02:13:374 - KIAI don't fit here,remove? i think it is happy
All spin except the last one - Extend by 1/1? fixed

[Gomikud]
Volume 50%? no sry
00:44:394 (6) - right 1 grid down 1 grid? fixed
00:44:685 (7) - Put it under 4? fixed
00:59:539 - Clap? fixed
01:00:704 - ^ fixed
01:01:869 - ^ fixed
01:03:034 - ^ fixed
01:04:199 (2,6) - ^ fixed
01:06:530 (2) - ^ fixed
01:16:432 - Fill the blank? no sry
01:26:335 - Add note? no sry
01:46:141 - Clap and hitsound pattern like before? fixed
02:13:374 - KIAI don't fit here,remove? i think it is happy

[Yuka+Kud]
00:32:452 (1) - Remove 1 repeat? no sry
00:35:073 (1) - Shorten by 1/2? fixed
00:56:627 (1) - Start 1/2 early? fixed
01:16:432 - Fill the blank? no sry
01:59:539 (1) - Put it under 1? fixed
02:13:374 - KIAI don't fit here,remove? no sry

Star~ <33333

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• The spinner is slightly off centered and has a lot of unused transparency. Here's a fixed one:
  
  SPOILER

  [attachment=0:a6b21]spinner-circle.png[/attachment:a6b21]
  
  thx~★　fixed
  
  Video offset -130 (currently it's -500)

As for it, I am not well informed
It made? >w<??


- Easy:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Fine

- Gomikud:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Add something like "Hard" to the difficulty name? This would help a lot.
  The chorus would be better by using some claps (even if i usually hate claps they fit good here): in fact, the choruses totally lack hitsounds and it's a shame D:

fixed



- Yuka+kud:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  As the previous difficulty, add something that tells the difficulty level?
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  Since the map uses a strict spacing, it's easy to see slightly misplaced beats, here are the most noticeable ones:
  01:07:403 (9) - move it one square to the left
  01:09:151 (4) - move one square to the right
  02:04:782 (3,4) - this really threw me off since the map has a totally regular spacing and the player wouldn't expect something like this at all.

fixed



Nice job and cute song ^^
Good Luck.

mrtn wrote:

fix the video offset.
I don't see the point of the kiai time at the end of the map.

[easy]
01:01:287 (1,2,3,4) - normally i don't nazi but move this 1 grid to the right. also make sure that the 1,2,3,4 are exactly diagonal because they aren't right now.
01:09:442 (3) - 1 grid to the left
01:47:889 (1,2,3,4) - make sure this is diagonal, because currently it isn't.　

fixed

[kud's hard]
get some hitsound consistency. for example: during the song, one can hear constant claps and snare drums in the music. A good idea would be to add claps to the circles on those beats.

fixed

[yukakid's insane]
the 1/4 spacing is way too tiny, make it bigger because right now it doesn't play very well and looks pretty ugly imo...
get some hitsound consistency. Same advice as @ [kud's hard].
01:12:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this sounds weird

fixed

Takuma wrote:

so cute =w=/

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Kud's Hard]

This difficulty has a different video offset, set it like other difficulties at "-100".

I guess Audio Lead-In it's for the video, right? Fix and I'll rank.