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Hey ~
I made a hitcircle...well kind of ~ I just put the chains and also a star2


* Just save the hitcircle as "hitcircle" and star2k as "star2" and/or "star"
* Hope is okk and that you like it ~
* By the way I used chains because I saw them in the BG you're using ~

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Mod

[Hard]___
- Combo problem
01:16:332 (5) - New combo
01:16:551 (1) - Remove new combo
03:46:989 (5) - New combo
03:47:427 (1) - Remove new combo
- Spacing
04:08:449 (1,2) - Is it a little bit far?

[All]
Ir is a good map.
STAR
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@lovhin456
Thank you very much! Very helpful~

al2e10 wrote:

[Hard]___
- Combo problem
01:16:332 (5) - New combo :arrow: ok
01:16:551 (1) - Remove new combo :arrow: ok
03:46:989 (5) - New combo :arrow: ok
03:47:427 (1) - Remove new combo :arrow: ok
- Spacing
04:08:449 (1,2) - Is it a little bit far? :arrow: on purpose

[All]
Ir is a good map.
STAR
Thank you very much!
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starrr :)
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H-boy wrote:

starrr :)
thanks for star : )
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[Hard]

04:09:215 (2,3,4) - this obviously goes to a red tick

nah, otherwise fine. Maps are nothing special, but fine.
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TKiller wrote:

[Hard]

04:09:215 (2,3,4) - this obviously goes to a red tick :arrow: omg. fixed

nah, otherwise fine. Maps are nothing special, but fine.
Thank you very much : )
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Hi banvi sorry for the delay

[General]
- oh boy.. I still got the osb here, check your folder and delete it if it's still there
- the chain on the hitcircle is good but the chain for the star2 is weird, probably because it's like a stick or something, change into any thing else or just use the default one
- many ranked vocaloid song put "vocaloid" as the source and the composer in the tags, you should follow it for consistency
- increase the stack leniency by 2 ticks to make it the same with hard diff
- try using the default soft-finish it'll sound good imo

[Normal]

00:35:164 (2) - whistle?
Timing section
00:45:237 - move this timing section 1/2 beat before the note, cause there's a volume change
01:16:770 - add a timing section 1/2 before this timing section but without kiai, and kiai usually have more volume than the other section cause it's the chorus, so you might want to increase the volume on kiai time
02:14:580 - same as 00:45:237
02:46:113 - same as 01:16:770
03:31:222 - now this is good, whenever there's a volume change or hitsound change you should put the timing section before the note
03:42:171 - same as 00:45:237
03:49:179 - same as 01:16:770

[Hard]
00:08:449 (3) - add finish at the start ?
00:10:201 (3) - ^
00:39:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please add hitsound on these, maybe a whistle or a clap
00:52:901 (10,11) - the stack messed up here, better unstack the 11
01:43:047 (6) - add finish?
01:48:303 (5) - ^
02:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:39:982
02:59:033 (7,8,9) - these are the only triplet stack like this kinda out of place, better spread them out or stack'em all

Timing section
The problem is almost the same as in Normal diff, Basically don't put a timing section exactly on the note if there is a change on the setup
read this for more info about timing section viewtopic.php?f=70&t=29293

That's all from me,
Solid map, the hitsound could be more spiced up but that's a matter of taste I guess :P
Ganbaree~
Star
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Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi banvi sorry for the delay

[General]
- oh boy.. I still got the osb here, check your folder and delete it if it's still there :arrow: fixed
- the chain on the hitcircle is good but the chain for the star2 is weird, probably because it's like a stick or something, change into any thing else or just use the default one :arrow: deleted star2
- many ranked vocaloid song put "vocaloid" as the source and the composer in the tags, you should follow it for consistency :arrow: ok
- increase the stack leniency by 2 ticks to make it the same with hard diff :arrow: ok
- try using the default soft-finish it'll sound good imo :arrow: ...

[Normal]

00:35:164 (2) - whistle? :arrow: ok
Timing section
00:45:237 - move this timing section 1/2 beat before the note, cause there's a volume change
01:16:770 - add a timing section 1/2 before this timing section but without kiai, and kiai usually have more volume than the other section cause it's the chorus, so you might want to increase the volume on kiai time
02:14:580 - same as 00:45:237
02:46:113 - same as 01:16:770
03:31:222 - now this is good, whenever there's a volume change or hitsound change you should put the timing section before the note
03:42:171 - same as 00:45:237
03:49:179 - same as 01:16:770 :arrow: okok

[Hard]
00:08:449 (3) - add finish at the start ? :arrow: ok
00:10:201 (3) - ^
00:39:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - please add hitsound on these, maybe a whistle or a clap :arrow: added more
00:52:901 (10,11) - the stack messed up here, better unstack the 11 :arrow: ok
01:43:047 (6) - add finish? :arrow: ok
01:48:303 (5) - ^
02:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:39:982 :arrow: added more
02:59:033 (7,8,9) - these are the only triplet stack like this kinda out of place, better spread them out or stack'em all :arrow: umm I wanna keep this...
Timing section
The problem is almost the same as in Normal diff, Basically don't put a timing section exactly on the note if there is a change on the setup
read this for more info about timing section viewtopic.php?f=70&t=29293
:arrow: ok
That's all from me,
Solid map :arrow: probably I like kind of this.
, the hitsound could be more spiced up but that's a matter of taste I guess :P:arrow: I have no idea...
Ganbaree~
Star
Thank you very much! :):)
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changed the default soft-finish
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STAR
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sveta-insane wrote:

STAR
Thanks for star : )
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custom clap volume is abit low..

normal-hitnormal sounds good in this song but w/e

hard:
vocal from the start uses 3/4 beat
00:01:441 (3) - snap at 00:01:770 if youre following the vocals, same at 00:03:193 (3) and other things like this IF youre following the vocal
no problems whatsoever to my eyes though.

normal:
perfect.
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wow , thank you very much^^
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offset 997 sounds better to me (-7ms to all of your timing lines and resnap all notes)

<Hard>
02:44:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - jump like this is relly bad i can read and hit but this pattern is really confising
can you make your jump more easy to read (when you mix 1/2 and full divisors in the same combo)
03:47:646 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5) !!!!!
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Alace wrote:

offset 997 sounds better to me (-7ms to all of your timing lines and resnap all notes) :arrow: fixed

<Hard>
02:44:580 (1,2,3,4,5) - jump like this is relly bad i can read and hit but this pattern is really confising
can you make your jump more easy to read (when you mix 1/2 and full divisors in the same combo)
:arrow: omg... spacing miss. fixed & changed pattern
03:47:646 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5) !!!!! :shock::shock: added new combo like 01:15:230 (1,2,3,4,1) ??
Thank you very much. :oops:
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GOOD!
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hard:
02:59:026 (7,8,9) - patterns like this doesnt fit well, please change it along with other patterns like this
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fixed : )
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;)
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